四年级英语作文评分标准精选20篇

once upon a time. there was a house. beside the house there was a bird cage. one day a cat went to eat the bird, so the cat jumped and hit the bird cage.

the bird cage fell down to the ground knocking the bird cages door open. the bird then flew away. so the cat started to chase the bird and the dog chased the cat. however the bird flew on top of the tree. so the cat started to climb the tree and the dog barked at the cat. before the cat could reach the bird, the bird flew away. this caused the cat to fall out of the tree.

the dog then ran away, the bird quickly flew back into his cage and the man from the house carried him safely home.

I have a room.Its not big,but its really tidy.You can see a map of China on the wall.There is a big bed in my room.My quilt and pillows are on the bed.I have a bookcase is next to my bed.It is red.My books are on the bookcase.Some keys are on my desk.My computer is on my desk,too.Under my chair you can see a soccer ball ,and the chair is under the desk.This is my room.I like it very much.Do you like it?

My mother is the most beautiful in my eyes. She is not tall, plunge into a ponytail. Her little mouth, the nose is not high not low, eyes in the dark, dark, bright, seems to be god.

My mothers temper very urgent. If I have the wrong, my mother got angry. On one occasion, my math oral one fault, mother was severely criticized me. Another time, I play with my brother, dont be careful the younger brother cry, mother also criticized me, also let me apologize to him.

Mom is very concerned about me. The last time I was ill that day, while I was sleeping in the evening, mother also get up to me to take medicine, temperature. I want to use my good grades to repay my mother.

Mother is a hard life, work all day and night. At home doing the housework, kindergarten to teach children, goes to school themselves. Its busy and busy not to come. But learning is not for me to relax, to give every day I check my homework and signature.

Mother doesnt like pets, also do not watching TV. Whenever you have a second reading, every other week, will take me to the library once.

Mother likes to eat fish, I said she is a little cat; Mother likes to chew bones, I said she is a little black dog; Mother likes to eat pork, I said she is a little tiger. Mother not picky about food, I want to learn from her.

I think mom is very good. I like it very much, mom.

我的妈妈在我眼里是最漂亮的。她的个子不高，扎了一个马尾辨。她的嘴巴小小的，鼻子不高不低，眼睛黑黑的、亮亮的，看上去有神。

妈妈的脾气很急。如果我有错，妈妈就发火。有一次，我数学口算错一题，妈妈就严厉批评我。还有一次，我跟弟弟玩，不小心把弟弟弄哭了，妈妈也批评我，还让我向他道歉。

妈妈很关心我。上次我生病的那天，在晚上我睡觉的时候，妈妈还起床给我吃药，量体温。我要用我的好成绩来报答妈妈。

妈妈是个劳碌命，一天到晚都做事。家里做家务，幼儿园里教小孩，自己还要去读书。真是忙也忙不来。但对我的学习一点也不放松，每天要给我检查作业和签名。

妈妈不爱养宠物，也不爱看电视。一有空就看书，每隔一个星期，就要带我去一次图书馆。

妈妈喜欢吃鱼类，我说她属小猫咪;妈妈喜欢啃骨头，我说她是小黑狗;妈妈喜欢吃猪肉，我说她是小老虎。妈妈不挑食，我要向她学习。

我觉得妈妈很不错，我很喜欢妈妈。

I have a good friend, he is my neighbor, name is ZhangJian.

His strong he has dark skin and long, shorter than me, but looks very strong, very healthy appearance, his appearance and his name is also really pretty.

He in qingyuan primary school grade three, and Im the same age, even birthday only then a few days, he is very love learning, always take an examination of the top three of the class, that I how also can not compare with him. He is very clever, remember once young aunt give me with my English, I cant keep up with the problem, but he did answer up, young aunt straight quart he, make me embarrassed.

He is a rope skipping, have a jump rope game with my mother, he also narrowly won my mother a happy day. He is running very severe, I lost to him every time!

His self-esteem is particularly strong, the final exam, his exam results is less than his elder brother and younger sister, he is not happy, also sad cry, his mother told him to eat, he refused to eat, just to please me to comfort him. I comforted him a while, but also lend it to him for his favorite book, he didnt smile through tears, to have a meal.

This is my friend ZhangJian, a healthy, active, love of learning, aggressive boy.

我有一个好朋友，他是我的邻居，名字叫章健。

他有着黑黑的皮肤，长的壮壮的，个子比我矮一大截，但看起来很结实，很健康的样子，他的外表和他的名字还真的是挺吻合的。

他在清远小学上三年级，和我同岁，就连生日也只差了那么几天，他很爱学习，总是考全班的前三名，这一点我怎么也比不上他。他很聪明，记得有一次小姨给我补习英语，我老跟不上问题，可他却对答如流，小姨直夸他，弄的我好难为情。

他是一个跳绳高手，有一次和我的妈妈跳绳比赛，他还侥幸赢了我的妈妈一次，开心的不得了。他跑步也很厉害，我每次都输给他!

他的自尊心特别的强，这次期末考试，他的考试成绩比他的哥哥和妹妹都要差一些，他就很不开心，还伤心的哭了，他的妈妈叫他吃饭他都不肯吃，只好来请我去安慰他。我安慰了他好一会，还借给他好几本他喜欢的书，他才破涕为笑，去吃饭了。

这就是我的朋友章健，一个健康、好动、爱学习、好胜的男孩。

Our classroom is bright and clean. But it is not big. There are twenty-three desks and chairs in it. They are new. Theres a big desk in front of the classroom. Its for our teachers.There are five pictures on the right wall. Theres a map of the world and a map of China on the left wall.

Beside the window theres a bookshelf. There are many books on it. Our classroom is very nice. We have lessons here. We like our classroom.

为了改变考试作文评分的随意性，规范作文评改，达到激励学生，客观公正评价老师教学效果的目的，特拟定如下作文评分标准。

小学生作文应注重写真实的内容，抒真挚的情感，语句通顺，条理清楚，标点正确，不写错别字，鼓励创新，写出个性，尽量减少模仿。作文评价应以激励为主，不吝啬分数。

作文内容分数值比例：

思想健康，中心明确(30%)(附标题可占5%)

内容与题目相符，叙述具体(20%)

条理清楚，段落分明(20%)

语句通顺(20%)

会用标点，错别字少(10%)

评分参考：(以总分30分为例)

一类文(27—30)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容具体，层次清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面清洁。

二类文(20—27)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容比较具体，层次较清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面整洁。

三类文(12—20)：基本切题，思想健康，中心基本明确，内容欠具体，层次不够清楚，语句基本通顺，标点使用大体正确，错别字多。

四类文(0—12)：不合题意，中心不明确，内容很不具体，语句表达很差，层次不清，语句不通，标点错误和错别字多。

评分时还可规定，错别字每个扣0.5分，扣足5分为止;标点错误每个扣0.5分，扣足3分为止;卷面太乱，字迹潦草酌扣1—2分。

My grandfather is a famous professor. He is over sixty now, but he is in good health, and his hair is still black. He is tall and hand some, and looks like a gentleman. Believe it or not, he began to learn to drive last year, and now he drives his white Nissan every day.

My grand father has taught English for about 35 years, and he has been to many countries, such as America, France and Canada. Now he is on holiday in Europe with my grandmother.

He is very kind to me.

2013高考英语作文评分标准

1 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。

4 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。

5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

各档次的给分范围和要求

Ⅰ. 第五档(很好)；(21-25分)：

完全完成了试题规定的任务

⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点

⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，

⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力，

⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ， 完全达到了预期的写作目的 Ⅱ. 第四档(好)：(16-20分)

完全完成了试题规定的任务

⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容

⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的

Ⅲ. 第三档(适当)：(11-15分)

基本完成了试题规定的任务

⑴虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容

⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解

⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差)：(6-10分)

未恰当完成试题规定的任务

⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容

⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解

⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者

Ⅴ. 第一档(差)：(1-5分)

未完成试题规定的任务

⑴明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求

⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。

Ⅵ. 不得分：（0分） ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要

求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)

词汇多样性

语法复杂性

文章连贯性

书面表达的五项秘诀：

审题，遣词，造句，润色，谋篇

既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀，我们要如何从这些方面入手呢审题的概念

拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。

如何审要点要做到以下两个方面：

总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!

理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。

构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。

遣词的注意点

不出现语言错误

词语和短语搭配

适度使用加分词汇

避免词语重复

注意词语和短语搭配使用

可以适度的使用加分词句：高级词、同义词、短语等替代

造句的原则

表达意思要清楚无误。

多种表达方式表达相同含义

避免句式单调(简单句，并列句，复合句等适度调整)

表达意思清楚无误：具体化，细节化

可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维比如说你朗读的“很好听”，用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)

谋篇的攻略

注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯

行文时多用关联词、引导词，把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来，达到起承转合，运用自如的目的，从而获取高分。

具体的连接关系有：并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。

2015年高考英语全国I卷

写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例

——领会高考阅卷要求，有效指导学生高考写作备考

【作文题】假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1.栏目介绍;

2. 稿件内容;

3. 稿件长度：约 400 词;

4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。

注意： 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2015年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准

评分总则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。

6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则：

优秀（22--25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。

I want to be a model student. What shall I do?

I should be polite. I should study hard. I should capful and helpful. I should walk in the corridors. I should throw rubbish in the bin. I should be quiet in the library. I shouldn’t walk and run on the grass. I shouldn’t throw rubbish on the floor. I shouldn’t run in the corridors. I shouldn’t fight. I shouldn’t be noisy in the library.

一天下午，天空下起了大雨，这一天，班长小丽正好约了同学去小红家开生日聚会，可是大雨阻挡着小丽的脚步。

One day in the afternoon, the sky began to rain, the day, the students go to the red Mary just about a birthday party, but the heavy rain prevented Marys footsteps.

爸爸过来了，劝她别去，说：“等下淋出病来了。”

My father came and advised her not to go, said: "the next leaching to the disease."

小丽说：“这个生日聚会我一定要去，因为以前他们请我去你总是不让我去说，太远了，怕出危险，所以，我就一直没去。我已经答应他们这次不管怎样都一定去了!”说完，小丽冒着大雨匆匆跑去小红家，当她跑到一半时，发觉礼物快湿了，于是，她把自己的外套脱下来，盖到礼物上面，在看看时间，呀!时间快到了，小丽以自己最快的熟速度跑去小红家。

Mary said: "I must go to the birthday party, because they asked me to you always let me not to say before, too far away, afraid of danger, so, I did not go. I have promised them that no matter how must go!" Mary said, heavy rain rushed to the red house, when she went to half of that gift, wet, so she put her coat off, cover to the present, to look at the time, yeah! The time is coming, Mary cooked in the fastest speed to run the red house.

当小丽到的时候，同学们全都来齐了，当同学们知道小丽为何那么晚来，纷纷赞赏她是个讲诚信的好班长，好带头。

When Mary to the students, all come together, when students know Mary why so late, she is a good monitor have appreciated the honesty, good lead.

从此以后，同学们只要有困难，就去找小丽。

From then on, the students as long as there are difficulties, went to mary.

诚信真是一个好品质，诚信可以给你带来快乐，可以让别人对你非常信任，让你的生活充满别人的信任。

Honesty is a good quality, good faith can bring happiness to you, can let others trust you, let your life full of confidence.

当我们生病卧床不起时，是父母在无微不至地照顾着我们;当我们考试考差了，是父母的鼓励着我们;当我们犯了错误，是父母的教育着我们改正错误......

When we are ill be completely bedridden, parents care in every possible way to us; when we poor exams, parents encourage us; when we make a mistake, parents teach us to correct our mistakes......

感谢父母在我受到挫折时，鼓励我、安慰我、给我勇气，让我树立自信勇敢地去面对困难。记得一次数学测验，我只考了八十多分。我垂头丧气地回到家，作业也做不好，饭吃不香。妈妈看见我的反常，坐在我的身边和蔼地问我原因。我一五一十把考试的实情告诉了妈妈，令我没想到的是妈妈不但没有批评我，反而安慰我说：“好孩子，一次失败不等于自己就不优秀了，你要好好地分析原因，知道错误到哪里，这就是进步。”听了妈妈的话，我的心情一下子轻松多了。

Thank the parents in my frustration, encourage me, comfort me, give me courage, let me brave to face the difficulties to establish confidence. I remember a math test, I only got more than 80%. I become dejected and despondent home, homework is not done well, eat not sweet. My mother saw me freak, sit beside me kindly ask me why. I had to tell the truth to the examination of the mother, so I did not expect is the mother not only did not criticize me, but comfort me to say: "good boy, a failure does not mean that he is not good, you have to analyze the reasons, know where this is progress." After listening to my mother, my mood suddenly relaxed.

有一句话说得好“谁言寸草心，报得三春晖”。因此，为了报答辛苦养育我的父母，我现在一定要好好学习，长大后，找一个好的工作，让父母安享晚年。父母为我付出的，我将十倍、百倍的感谢、回报他们，让他们的付出有价值。

There is a saying that goes "who grass inch heart, reported in the apartments". Therefore, in order to hard rearing repay my parents, I must now learn, grow up, find a good job, let parents live. My parents gave me, I will be ten times, a hundred times thanks, return them, let them give valuable.

Jane is an English girl. She and her parents are live in Nanjing now. Today is Friday. Jane and her parents are planning for their weekends. Janes father likes Beijing Opera very much, so he is going to see a Beijing Opera with his Chinese friends on Saturday morning. Janes mother is going to a concert, because she likes music. The concert is on Saturday night. Jane does not want to join her parents, because she is going to have a picnic with her classmates this Saturday. Oh, on Sunday, Jane and her parents are going to climb the hill together. I think it will be a nice weekend.

简是一个英国女孩。她和她的父母现在住在南京。今天是星期五。简和她的父母正在为他们的周末制定计划。简的爸爸非常喜欢京剧，所以他打算和他的中国朋友在星期六早上去听京剧。简的妈妈打算去听音乐会，因为她喜欢音乐。音乐会是在星期六晚上。简不想加入她的父母，因为她打算这个星期六和同学们去野餐。噢，简打算在星期天和她的父母一起去爬山。我觉得这将是一个愉快的周末。

I had a very happy winter vacation,I went to the west lake of Hangzhou with my father and grandpa,I also went to the house of Lu Xun with my family.

During the spring festival, we set off firecrackers and ate the new years eve, the rice cake,We also set off firecrackersAnd cherry blossoms. I stayed at home for the rest of the time, my winter vacation. I had a great time in this winter vacation！What about your winter vacation？

对于我们的中考中的评分的准则是什么想，下面是小编整理的语文作文评分标准，欢迎阅读。

类别

内容 A.内容 B.语言 C.篇章 评分细则

一类卷

切合题意 思想健康 中心突出 内容充实 感情真切 语言顺畅 没有语病 结构完整 条理清楚

①具备ABC三项条件的，评一类下(43-45分)。

②立意深、构思巧、语言生动形象的，评满分;具备其中两项条件的，评一类上(48-49分);具备其中一项条件的，评一类中(46-47分)。

二类卷(35-42分)

切合题意 思想健康 中心明确 内容具体 感情真实 语言通顺 偶有语病 结构完整

条理较清楚 以38分为基准分，适当浮动：

①具备B项和另一项条件，其余一项达到三类卷标准的，获得基准分;

②具备ABC三项条件的，酌情加分;或材料新鲜，或立意新颖，或结构新巧，可评为二类上;

③具备B项条件，而另两项只达到三类卷标准的，酌情减分。

三类卷(27-34分)

基本合题意 中心尚明确 内容尚具体 感受尚真实 语言尚通顺 语病不多 条理尚清楚 能分段

以30分为基准分，适当浮动：

①基本具备ABC三项条件的，获得基准分;，

②其中B项较好的，酌情加分;

③另有某些缺点的，酌情减分。

四类卷(18-26分)

偏离题意 中心欠明确 内容不具体 语言不通顺 语病较多 条理不清楚

以22分为基准分，适当浮动：

①凡属ABC三项之一者，评为四类卷，获得基准分;

②另两项较好的，酌情加分;

③兼有ABC两项以上情况的，酌情减分。

五类卷(0-17分)

文不对题 不知所云 语病严重 文理不通 结构混乱 不能完篇

以13分为基准分，适当浮动：

①凡属ABC三项之一者，评为五类卷，获得基准分;②其他两项尚好，酌情加分;

③兼有ABC两项以上情况的，酌情减分。

说明：

1.漏写题目扣1分。

2.错别字每3个扣1分，重现不计，最多扣2分。

3.字迹工整的加1─2分;字迹潦草，难以辨认的酌情扣1—3分。

4.字数不足550字，每少50字扣1分;不足400字，降一等。

5.凡认为有严重错误的答卷，评卷领导小组研究处理。

导语：你长大后想干什么呢？下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的My dream job英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My dream job(约80字)

When I grow up, Im going to do what I want to do. Im going to move somewhere interesting. Paris sounds like a city that I could that enjoy. There are lots of art exhibitions there. I want to be an artist . So how am I going to do it? First, Imgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some money. Then Im going to be a student at an art school in Paris.

翻译

我梦想中的工作

当我长大后，我要做我想做的事。我要搬到一个有趣的地方。巴黎听起来像是一个我可以享受的城市。那里有许多艺术展览。我想成为一名艺术家。那么我该怎么做呢?首先，我打算找一份兼职工作一两年，存一些钱。然后我将成为巴黎一所艺术学校的学生。

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班。他是一个男孩。我们俩都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得那么快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生。他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐和古典音乐。

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.

他家有三口人，他是独生子。他父亲是医生，母亲是北京歌剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，他通常只穿。他有一个梦想，就是成为一名律师。

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。他是由教师和学生的高度赞扬。

I love my bedroom

I have a bedroom .It is not big , but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedroom . A yellow dog is on the bed .Every night,I sleep with it . Next to the bed, there is a desk. A bear lamp is on the desk .I like the bear lamp. Its cute. I like to do homework under the lamp every evening. I have a new computer in my bedroom .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall.

I like my bedroom. Do you like it?

Winter comes again, this is my fifth winter vacation since elementary school. Holiday that day, the teacher a lot of homework on the blackboard. Due to the winter vacation homework more, need reasonable arrange time to complete, so I made a plan for the winter vacation to learn.

Im going to put the winter vacation homework math and Chinese winter vacation homework do three surfaces. And in the winter vacation reading a good book, "we good word", "detective conan" and the "the practical abstract upper and lower edition watch. About a day at about 20 minutes. Finished winter vacation homework in the morning and after reading the rest of the time free activities. This is I use my mothers mouth. His work is. To sleep for an hour at noon, afternoon to learn Kim seng. Learned after a hour to go to school in the computer computer application knowledge, reading a an article "love education", and say what comments after reading this article, what is the feeling, what to do in the future, and so on.

Before sleeping to delve into a really, read an English composition, ha ha, this is "language, number and the three-no" by mistake!

The above is my study plan, winter vacation? My winter vacation plan is good! Oh, by the way, I also want to help my parents do some housework, because in this way can make mom happy. After listening to my plan, is you happy?

寒假又来了，这是我上小学以来的第五个寒假。放假那天，老师在黑板上布置了许多作业。由于寒假作业比较多，需要合理的安排时间才能完成，所以我制订了一个寒假学习计划。

我准备把《数学寒假作业》和《语文寒假作业》各做3面。并在寒假里看一本好书，《好词好句大全》、《名侦探柯南》和那本《实用文摘上、下版》看完。大约一天看20分钟左右。上午做完寒假作业和课外阅读后剩下的时间自由活动。这可是我在妈妈的嘴里使用了我的“大舌头功”才争取来的。中午睡觉一个小时，下午去学金声。学完之后在电脑上学一个小时的电脑应用知识，读一篇《爱的教育》的一篇文章，并说说读完这篇文章有什么心得体会，有什么感受，今后应该怎么做等等。

睡觉前再钻研一道奥数题，读一篇英语作文，哈哈，这真是“语、数、英三不误”啊!

以上就是我的寒假学习计划，怎么样?我的寒假计划不错吧!哦，对了，我还要帮爸爸妈妈做一些家务，因为这样才能让妈妈开心。听完我的计划，你们是不是很开心呢?

I have a good sister. She has short hair, small eyes, big ears and a big nose. Shes quiet and cute. She speaks Chinese well. She likes music and painting. Can you guess whats her name?

我有一个好姐姐。她有短头发,小眼睛,大耳朵,一个大鼻子。她很安静和可爱。她说中国好。她喜欢音乐和绘画。你能猜出她叫什么名字吗?

小学四年级英语作文 ：我的狗狗(My Dog)

I have a dog. Its name is Doggy. I like it.

Doggy has two big eyes, two small ears, a big nose and a small mouth. Its black and white. It has a short tail. Its cute and lovely.

Doggy is strong. It likes bones, rice and meat very much. My dog is lazy. It can catch a ball. I love my dog very much.

我有一只狗。它的名字叫狗狗。我喜欢它。

狗狗有两只大大的眼睛，两只小小的耳朵，一个大鼻子和小嘴巴。它是黑色和白色。它有一个短尾巴。它很可爱和可爱。

狗是强大的。它喜欢骨头，米饭和肉。我的狗很懒。它可以接球。我非常爱我的狗。

篇1

An old woman has a cat。 The cat is now very old。 She cannot run fast， and she cannot bite。 One day the old cat sees a mouse。 she jumps and catches the mouse。 But she cannot bite it。 So the mouse gets out of her mouth and runs away。Then the old woman is very angry because the cat cannot kill the mouse。 She begins to beat the cat。 The cat says to her， "Dont beat me。 Be friendly to me。 When I was young， I did good work for you。"

篇2

A dog has a large piece of meat in his mouth。 Near the water he looks down and sees himself in the water。 He thinks it is another dog。 That dog has also a large piece of meat in his mouth。 He says to himself， "I want to get his meat。 Then I can have two pieces。" He opens his mouth to bark and his meat goes down into the water。

篇3

This is our school。 There are many classrooms in it。There are eight hundred students and sixty—nine teachers in our school。 There are many trees and flowers in it。 All the teachers and students like our school very much。

We come to school at seven。 We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon。

Our classroom is big and clean。 We have lessons here。 We do our homework at home。

All the students study hard。

篇4

Its fine today。 Tom and his family are at a park。 The man in white is his father。 He is standing by the lake and looking at the boats。 The woman in blue is his mother。 She is sitting on the grass。 Beside his mother is Alice， his sister。 She is eating cake。 The park is big， and there are many trees and flowers in it。 They are having a good time。

篇5

This is my bed room。 There are two windows in it。 Near the window there are some red flowers。 A map of China is on the wall。 You can see four shoes and a basketball under my bed。 There are trousers and a coat on the bed。 Many schoolbooks are on my desk。 And there are three lights in my bedroom。 One is on my desk， and the other two are near my bed。

We often hear the saying"Time is money."But I think time is much more precious than money.Because If we lost time, we cant find it.But We can try to woke harder to get more money.No matter whatever you do ,you can not get lost time back.

"Time flies.time and tides wait for no men".You can see how important time is.Lunxun had said"I spent the time on my work while others are havig coffee."We must make good use of our time,especially for our students,we shouldnt waste time in playing games and the like.