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中考英语命题作文指导

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命题作文是依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。写命题作文通常要注意以下几点:

一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是跑题作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。

二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发

展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。

三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。

四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。

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篇1:中考:建设和谐社会英语作文

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中考将至,想必同学们的心情一定是紧张的。小编整理了一篇关于建设和谐社会英语作文,希望能帮到你。

中考英语作文范文 建设和谐社会500字

假设你是李晓平,是黄冈中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题,根据下面所给出的提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。

1.人与社会:祖国、家乡、学校,热爱关心;

2.人与人:家人、师长、同学,诚信互助;

3.人与自然:能源、环境、动植物,爱惜保护;

4.你的态度:内容由考生自己拟定。

[范文]

Build a Harmonious Society

Dear fellow students,

Our government is going to build a "harmonious society". I think it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

As high school students, what should we do ?

First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities.

Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Mostimportant of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.

Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.

As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.

Dear fellow students, lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day,every hour, and every minute!

Li Xiaoping

From Huanggang High School

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篇2:2024中考英语写作指导:作文为什么被扣分

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中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同,一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。

一:先看一下扣分点:

1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

2.字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5.

二:加分点

除了这些扣分点,还有一些得分点:比如说作文的组织结构分,就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

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篇3:2024中考英语作文:常用多变句式

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2015中考将至,目前距2015 中考仅有几个月,因此现在是复习的关键时刻,在此YJBYS为了让考生们了解更多的中考试题,以为今年的中考取得更好的成绩。

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“i think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,2008年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, lin haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:being saved from the earthquake, two of linhao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with lin hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

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篇4:中考英语作文写作技巧

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英语作文是最考察同学们英语功底的一类题型,也是在英语考试中所占分值很大的一类题型。所以在写英语作文的时候要掌握中考英语作文写作技巧才能够在中考的时候写出一篇优秀的英语作文。

初中英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和平时的积累,但是在面临中考的紧要关头,要想在短时间内提高英语写作水平不是一件容易的事情,这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。

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篇5:2024中考英语作文指导:关于解决方法题型

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2015中考将至,目前距2015 中考仅有几个月,因此现在是复习的关键时刻,在此YJBYS为了让考生们了解更多的中考试题,以为今年的中考取得更好的成绩。YJBYS的小编为考生们收集了2015中考英语作文关于【解决方法题型】写作,具体内容请各位考生及时查看如下,尽请关注!

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

in recent days, we have to face i problem-----a, which is becoming more and more serious. first, ------------(说明a的现状).second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

confronted with a, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. for one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). for another -------------(解决方法二). finally, --------------(解决方法三).

personally, i believe that -------------(我的解决方法). consequently, im confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

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篇6:Christmasday中考英语作文

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On Christmas morning, the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock, and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents , and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon, the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

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篇7:中考英语作文:学生与手机

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导语:现如今几乎每个学生都有一部手机,你觉得这种现象有利于学生的学习吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also,they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we dont need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones,because we meet them every day. And mobile phones may influence our study。

In my opinion,its not wrong to follow the fashion,but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way。

【参考译文】

如今手机在中学生中越来越受欢迎。一些学生认为使用它们与家长和同学保持联系很容易,也可以用来听音乐或拍照。但是其他人认为我们不需要和父母和同学用手机交谈,因为我们每天都会遇到他们。和手机可能会影响我们的研究。

在我看来,遵循时尚并不是错,但最重要的是如何正确使用手机。

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篇8:中考英语作文:网购的利弊

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参考范文:

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ,for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue.

However, some students disagreed with them. We cant see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

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篇9:成长的烦恼中考英语作文

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Long so big, lived a fairy carefree life, many people think we are very happy, in fact, we also have some trouble, such as I had a long is not high.

I this year 13 years old, is also and 10 years old children metre almost 4 a few, but not that I dont, just grow slowly, only a few centimeters a year, I mother worry dead, I am also very worry, hope I hurry up taller, because of the high long not too much trouble.

First, let me no face very much, the students often that I joke, such as once, Lin Qizhe and I went to the toilet, standing next to a four young children, he found a little bit taller than me. Yu Shilin kai zhe shame asked him: "kid, what grade are you?" "The fourth grade." And then he laughed at me said: "the fourth grade is higher than yours." I felt no face very much.

At another time, I went to the supermarket shopping and Lin Qizhe is originally very happy one thing, but when I came to the checkout counter, that aunt asked Lin Qizhe with smile: "the kid is your younger brother!" I nearly fainted on the spot, Lin smiled and explained the penguin, walk out the door he added opportunity to laugh at me, I think should make friends with him. This is a let me remember, I want to find a chance to even the score

Second, let me always sports than others, however, is not tall certainly sports is not good, especially what I run theres no way.

And one more thing is I in the morning exercises team is always the first, for six years, never change, once again, under the national flag, the front of the host is to find the nearest answer this question, I was just recently, he asked me, I didnt know, where is she reminded me that I didnt understand, let me very embarrassing, couldnt find a disappear. The back of the natural dont have to worry about finding yourself.

I couldnt get taller, but instead, I had to laugh at themselves: "concentration is the essence." "Im not a dwarf, but is not obvious." But I still want to grow taller.

长这么大,无忧无虑的过着神仙般的生活,好多人认为我们很快乐,其实我们也有一些烦恼,比如说我就有一个长不高的烦恼。

我今年13岁了,个子还和10岁孩子差不多高一米四几,但我不是不张,只是长得慢,一年只长几厘米,害得我妈着急死了,我也很着急,希望我快点长高,因为长不高太麻烦了。

第一:让我很没面子,同学们经常那我开玩笑,比如有一次,我和林启哲上厕所,旁边站了一个四年纪小朋友,他发现比我高一点点。于是林启哲不知耻的问他:“小朋友,你几年级啊?”“四年级啊。”,然后他嘲笑我说:“四年级的都比你高。”我当时觉得很没面子。

还有一次,我和林启哲去超市shopping,本来是很开心的一件事,可当我来到收银台时,那个阿姨笑着问林启哲:“那个小朋友是你的弟弟啊!”我当场差点晕了,林企鹅笑着解释完,走出门他又接着机会嘲笑我,我想是不是应该和他做朋友了。这是一只让我记忆犹新,我想找个机会报复一下

第二,让我体育总是比不过别人,个子不高肯定体育不好,尤其是什么跑步不行啊。

还有一点是我在早操队中是永远的第一个,已经六年了,从来没变过,又一次,国旗下表演,前排的主持人都是找最近的回答问题,刚好我是最近的,他问我,我没想到,她在哪里提醒我才明白,让我一下很难堪,恨不得找个地缝钻进去。后排的自然不用担心找到自己了。

我恨不得快点长高,但事与愿违,我只好自嘲:“浓缩就是精华。”“我不是矮,只是高的不明显。”但我依旧是想长高的。

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篇10:有关交通问题的中考英语作文

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导语:越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含:

(1)遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。

(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。

参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道、zebra-crossing 斑马线

注:第一段已给出,不计入总数

关于交通问题的中考英语作文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Dont play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【参考译文】

随着越来越多的汽车走进我们的家庭,我们很高兴它大大改善了我们的生活。但不幸的是,它也带来了许多问题,如交通拥挤和交通事故。

交通安全人人有责。我们必须遵守规定!例如,我们必须走在一边,当我们过斑马线,停下来,看左,右,然后跨越快速。不要在马路上踢足球,我们可以告诉父母开车前不要喝酒,不要闯红灯,开车时不要说话和笑。

我们可以说汽车正在进入我们的生活,但只有当每个人都认为交通安全是每个人的业务,我们可以安全驾驶道路和人行道上行走。

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篇11:中考英语作文:低碳生活

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现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语:be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

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Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.

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篇12:预测2024中考英语作文:代沟

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The 21st century, the thought of the teenagers, we and our beloved one generation, will never be able to melt together, seems to have no why, I do not know why. Adults like to impose their ideas in a new generation of us, and we, must also accept the ideology of "unreasonable", if not accept, perhaps, in the eyes of an adult, our behavior is what is called a rebellious, not sensible, wings hard, but, you never know what we carry in our hearts, can only silently bear all this, buried our own thoughts, not move to the attraction.

We are the -- the future of The Times. We have our own dreams, we have our own in the future, we have our own life to live, all this, go to our own, you can never be with us life, the way back, but also to go on our own. Please let go of your generous hand, let us fly yourself.

Times are changing, the life also is changing. Different time, different people, have their own way. Dear, father, mother, we grow up, learn to walk, bumpy road ahead, lets face it alone, raising more than ten years, we wont forget, you also should have a rest.

二十一世纪,我们这些青少年的思想,与我们所敬爱的上一辈人,永远无法融在一起,似乎没有为什么,也不知道为什么。大人们喜欢把他们的思想强加在我们新一辈人的身上,而我们,也必须接受这种“无理”的思想,如若不接受,也许,在大人的眼睛里,我们的行为就是所谓的叛逆、不懂事、翅膀硬了,可是,你们永远不会知道我们心中所想的一切,只能默默地承受这一切,埋藏我们自己的思想,不动生色。

我们是这个时代的——未来。我们有自己的梦想,我们有自己的未来,我们有我们自己的生活要过,这一切,要我们自己去承担,你们永远不能陪伴我们一生,往后的路,还要靠我们自己去走。请你们放开你们那宽厚的手,让我们自己飞翔吧。

时代在变,生活也在变。不同的时代,不同的人,有自己的路。亲爱的——爸爸,妈妈,我们长大了,学会走路了,前面坎坷的路,让我们独自面对吧,十几年的养育之恩,我们不会忘记,你们也该休息休息了。

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篇13:英语中考作文:诚信

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请你以 “To Be an Honest Man”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括:1.说说你对诚实的认识。2.谈谈你做过或听过的不诚实的事例以及带来的危害。3.倡议同学们做个诚实的人。

提示词:traditional virtue(传统美德), wolves(狼), tell lies(撒谎)

To Be an Honest Man

As we know, honesty is one of the Chinese traditional virtues, so I think it is necessary for everyone to be an honest man.

I have heard of the story “Wolves are coming”. The little boy lost all his sheep at last because he told lies to the villagers twice. From the story, I know that if someone is not honest, he or she will lost good friends.

Remember that honesty is invaluable. Each of us should try to be an honest man not only in our study but also in our daily life from now on.

[英语中考作文:诚信

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篇14:中考英语作文范文春节见闻

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中考英语作文范文春节见闻

Things Happened in Spring Festival Today, I went shopping with my parents, grandparents, aunts, uncles, and cousins. It was a rare

occasion because we hardly only get together few times in a year as a big family. On the way to the shopping mall, we watched the lion dance. Overall, we had an unforgettable day.

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篇15:中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析

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俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功,必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动,偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊,所以出现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致,包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识,他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要。例:

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累,所以考生应该从平时练习出发,每天坚持写英语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析

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篇16:2024年中考英语作文结尾句式精选

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1.Above all ( things ), S + V...最重要地,…

2.According to the aforementioned, S + V...综观上述所云,…

3.As a result ( consequence ), S + V...结果,…

4.As long as S1+ V1, S2 + V2...只要…,…

5.As we know from the above, S + V...由上述我们可知,…

6.At any rate ( cost ), we should V...无论如何,我们应该…

7.Because of this, we can find that S + V...因为如此,我们可以知道…

8.For this reason, S + V...基于此因 ,…

9.From the ... point of view, ...从…的观点来看,…

10.If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that S + V...假如我们能做到以上所提者,无疑地…

11.In a word, S + V...一言以蔽之,…

12.In any case, we should V 无论如何,我们应该…

13.In short ( brief ), S + V...简而言之 ,…

14.In conclusion, we should V 总而言之,我们应该…

15.Judging from the above, S + V...从以上来判断 ,…

16.Last but not least, S + V...最后还有一件重要的事就是…

17.Only by this can we V...只有以此我们才能…

18.On the whole, S + V...整体而论 ,…

19.On this ground, S + V...基于此种原因

20.Owing to this fact we can find that S + V...因此我们可以知道…

21.The long and the short of it, S + V...总之 ,…

22.To be short ( brief ), S + V...简而言之 ,…

23.To sum up ( conclude ), S + V...总之 ,…

24.Thus, this is the reason why S + V...因此,这就是为什么…的原因

25.Under no circumstances should we V...无论如何我们绝不…

26.What we must do is to V...我们只要…就可以了

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篇17:初三中考英语

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My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

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篇18:中考英语作文范文我的朋友

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中考英语作文范文 我的朋友

标签: 范文 / 作文 / 英语

I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it.

He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

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篇19:中考英语作文MyfavoriteplaceatSchool

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导语:相信大家对于学校都很熟悉,说说哪个地方给你留下了美好的回忆,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以”My favorite place at School”为题征文,请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并请说明原因。提示词语:Classroom, reading-room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve My favorite place at school

【参考范文】

My favorite place at school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of useful books, newspapers and magazines there.

I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.

I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to. Reading helps me forget all my troubles.

For me, the reading room is the place I like best.

【参考译文】

我在学校最喜欢的地方是阅览室。它是非常大和明亮。那里有许多有用的书、报纸和杂志。

我喜欢在那里读书和杂志,因为他们不仅给我提供了许多知识,而且还帮助我了解了世界各地正在发生的事情。有时我甚至觉得我可以和书中的人交谈。

我也可以在和平的环境中放松自己。当我感到疲倦和不开心时,阅览室是最好的地方。阅读帮助我忘记所有烦恼。

对我来说,阅览室是我最喜欢的地方。

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篇20:优秀中考英语步骤

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导语:写作练习对于英语能力的综合提高,特别是对高阶学习者而言有重要意义,不管做什么都需要技巧,写英语作文有什么技巧呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语写作指导,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

如何写好一篇60字的作文,争取18分的最大值,显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字“练”。目标有了,最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。

60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。

60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分这样五个层次:

1)开始句

2)向主体过度句

3)主体叙述

4)向结尾过度

5)结尾。

第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右(每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整),最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。

说到这里我们只解决了层次清晰、符合字数要求的问题。其次注意没有把握的句子不写,拼写要准确,叙述中没有语法错误,时态要符合背景。我们学了含不同从句的复合句。所以作文中应该适当地出现复合句。一定要注意词汇上的不必要重复和句式的单一。巧妙地插入平时积累的格言警句,使作文生辉。设法满足“词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如;文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达方式。”同时注意大小写、标点正确。

再次,一定注意作文的题内要求,往往是以问题形式出现为多,千万不可丢掉任何一个。

最后提醒大家注意的就是一定要打草稿,避免在卷面上涂抹。

以上这几点做到了,离满分作文也不远了。

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