关于大学军训意义的英语作文(热门20篇)

I am glad that winter holiday is coming,I have set for itself a vacation plan,First of all I would like to seriously work to complete holiday.Then read some interesting books;Then adhere to a daily physical exercise.Last I necessary to help my parents do some housework,because they are very busy and they have to work very late.

This is my winter vacation plan

I habe a dream. It’s that that I want to be a soldier in the future.

Yesterday, we started the training. I feel very excited. Bacauce this is the first training in my life ,and it is the first step to my dream.

In order to be the No.1 at the end of the rtaining and make my dream can come true soon.I will train well and more careful.

I like the training very much .What about you ?

3月29日，我们学校组织五年级学生去珠海实践基地军训。

第一天，我们参观了孙中山故居，回到基地玩了有趣的游戏。晚饭过后，我们举行了精彩的团辅晚会。

第二天上午，我们去体验真正的军训。一听说那里没有洗手间，也不能装水，我的心就开始往上跳——不能上厕所，又不能装水，那不明摆着军训时不能休息吗?

来到操场，只见一座楼房上嵌者八个大字：“严格要求，严格训练”。我心想：那位军官对我们的要求一定十分严格。我们将面临着一次严酷的训练。

果真如此!这位军官板着脸，说话的声音也十分洪亮。如果谁不听他的指令，就大声地批评对方，眉头就紧皱着。

无情的阳光射在我们的身上，大家一个个都汗流浃背。那时正在站军姿，我们连动都不敢动，生怕被军官处罚。这时，何展鸿动来动去，被军官发现了，于是就“光荣地”做了“大都督”。军官伸出手，指着何展鸿，怒吼道：“你，出来!”

何展鸿只好站出列。

“趴下!”军官喊。

何展鸿一脸疑惑地看着军官。

“趴下!”军官喊，“难道你不会做俯卧撑吗?!”

何展鸿只好趴下了。

我的热汗全都变作冷汗出了。

不一会儿，雨淅淅沥沥地下了起来。我心暗喜：这下应该可以休息了吧!可是军官没有丝毫反应，仍旧时不时纠正同学的姿势。我把眼斜了过去，吴文忻的脸都涨红了，手臂也在微微颤抖着。这个时候，有几个同学觉得不舒服了，就去休息了。

过了好一阵子，雨愈下愈大，有些同学甚至都哭出了声，但都被军官喝住了。

又煎熬了一阵子，军官让我们齐步走，进去遮雨处休息。大家终于松了一口气，议论纷纷。几分钟后，军官叫了声“起立!”，大家都“嗖”的一声站了起来。军官把我们带到了一处空旷地，，让我们右脚往后一点，脚尖点地，蹲了下来，膝盖不能碰地，双手放在双膝上。大约过了三十多分钟，我的双腿和双手都不停地颤抖着。好不容易可以休息了，我一躺，便躺在了地上。

最后，我们还得盘腿坐，双手放在双膝上，挺直腰。有几位同学的动作不到位，就趴着。

难熬的两个小时过去了，训练终于结束了。下午，我们回到了广州。

严格要求，严格训练。是啊，只有严格对待自己，才会成功。

and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

How to adapt youself to college life

There are obvious differences between high school life and college life. First,college students will live in the dormitory with classmates who come from various places, and who may have different living habits. Second,college teachers ,instead of explaning in detail how to solve every problem, might only tell different approaches to the problem, and leave students to study and solve problems independently. Finally, in college,there is more free time for students to spend on.

However how should the college freshman adapt himself to these differeces. First of all, he should learn to be tolerant and consider more for others,which is necessary for group living. Moreover he should take active part in collective activities and make more communication with classmates and teachers. It will help he be smoothly integrated with your new environment. Besides,as to study,he should develop a good habit of self-teaching and learn to arrange study independently. Of course,it may take a freshman some while to become accustomed to the study and life in college. However, we all have to accept constant challenges of new things in our life. To conclude,college students should try to adapt himself to college life as soon as possible, so as to take full advantages of their precious college time.

this is not only the city where I was born, but also the only place Ive never been able to leave. 5 years ago, I moved from here to another city to begin my college life. The day I left ## I felt as a fish out of water.

this is the only place where Ive walked past a schoolyard and pictured a future son or daughter of mine playing balls.

I love this city. She’s small and quiet. Every day I live here, I could have the safety feeling which I got when my mother held me in her arms.

I love this city. She is very beautiful and lovely. Everywhere you can see the flowers, grass and trees. The shops are full of all kinds of goods. When you walk in the street, you can feel the gentle wind touching your face and breathe the fresh air.

I love this city. The climate here is very warm which is very suitable for people to do some outdoors activities.

I love this city. She is where I have lived for ____ years with my parents, my good friends, and my teachers who have supported me. She has almost all my memories.

I love the night of ##. People sit in the gardens of their houses or in the small restaurants, chatting, drinking and enjoying the delicious seafood which is abundant in our city.

I love the sunrise of ##. When I was still a little girl, my parents and I used to climb up the hill in the morning to see the sunrise. When the beautiful sun went up, the gentle breeze brought us the fragrance of the flowers, the golden sunshine made our hair shimmer, and my heart would be filled with hope and happiness!

Maybe someday I will have to leave this city, but no matter where I would go I will never forget this city, its people, its trees and its sunrise. Yes, everything that it gave me could be given by other places, but my love won’t be changed, because it is my home town.

不但是我出生的城市，也是我无法离开的唯一地方，我的家乡。5年以前，我离开这里到另外一个城市开始我的大学生活。离开##的那天，我感觉自己像是一条离开了水的鱼儿。

当我走过一座校园，想象我未来的儿子或女儿能在这里玩耍。##，就是唯一一个让我有这种想法的地方。

[大学英语作文：我的家乡

My campus life is rich and colorful.

The university life different secondary school life.And it is a problem that how should I adapt to college life.

I go to attend claeveryday morning excluding weekend .In the class I just listening to lectures, and my teachers and classmates discuss the problem.After  class, ofen i go to play basketball or badminton with my friends.

In the evening,i have two hours for study by oneself in scheduled time, and then go back to my dormitory and surf on the internet.At the weekend,i take part in some part-time jobs and go to the Einglish Corner sometimes.

All in all,life in the University is beatiful and substantial for me.And I believe I will achieve my self-value through  the university life .

说到大学后的这次军训，无论是军训之前或是军训已经开始的前几天，我的内心都是极不愿意的。因为初一、高一的两次军训已经是绝对的刻骨铭心，刻骨铭心的艰辛疲惫，而大一的军训早就耳闻其无聊至极。因此，我是不抱有任何期待开始本次军训的，态度也并非百分百的认真。

但是军训的第一天，特别是站军姿，就改变了我之前的想法。尽管前两次都学过站军姿，但此次站军姿，我的动作依然不标准，依然坚持不久。一连几天站军姿，依然还得教官不断纠正：右边肩膀后面一点，高一点，左边肩膀往前一点。每天每次如此，时至今日，我每天最害怕的还是站军姿……

站军姿是最基本的，是其它一切动作的基础。教官说道。但是这最基本的站军姿，对我来说，却是最难的。由此我清楚自己必须纠正自己的态度，用端正的认真的态度来面对军训，并从军训中提升自己，无论是站军姿、队列训练还是锻炼耐心、意志、坚忍、团队精神等，用学习的积极的态度认真参与军训的每一项训练。

军训开始后才发现，其实军训并非如师兄师姐们所说那么轻松或无聊，虽然没有像初中、高中军训时那样站在烈日下曝晒，没有那么大的训练量，虽然练习的动作都很简单，但要让那么多人行动要像一个人一样的确定是件不易的事。一天军训下来，还是挺累的，特别是夏日炎炎，太阳好像要用全部的光和热融化这个世界，整个场地好像一个蒸笼，我们在这样的环境下纹丝不动站军姿，不厌其烦练枯燥而烦琐的动作，汗水像决堤的洪流，顺势直下，怎一个挥汗如雨了得!我们的衣服湿了又干，干了又湿，留下一圈又一圈的痕迹。汗水沿着脸颊一滴又一滴地滑下，热气充斥着我们的鼻翼。军姿已站了三十分钟了吧，脖子好酸，脚的刺痛感越来越清晰，教官说还有60秒，可是我数了好几次60了，为什么还不到时间，似乎一秒就有一个世纪那么长……但是值得欣慰的是，每一天站军姿都可以感觉到自己的进步，似乎可以坚持更长了……

尽管有点辛苦有点枯燥有点累有点烦，但每天还是过得挺开心的。在训练过程中，总有同学闹笑话，大家笑成一团。一到休息时间，同学们一起聊天、开玩笑、唱歌，或者教官跟我们谈起他的军营生活，这些都是我们的快乐时光。其实，我们的教官人很幽默，他不仅讲笑话给我们听，玩脑筋急转弯，而且还教我们唱歌，这使军训生活变得丰富精彩。教官不会那他的身份压我们，感觉还是挺可亲可爱可敬的!教官身上的好奇心、好学心也是值得我们学习的，总会好奇的摆弄单反相机，这些时候总会觉得他离我们很近，感觉不到一点架子。很庆幸也很感谢，谭教官挑了我们这个连并带领我们一起渡过15天的军训，谢谢!

通过军训，我们同学之间的友情更加深厚了，以前没有很多机会大家一起接触相处，在这个军训期间，我们分享身边的趣事，分享喜欢的书、电影，分享烦恼，分享各自的家乡话，一起吵吵闹闹，好像回到了少年时代。 尽管每天还是会数着军训还剩多少天，每天还是会想今天不用军训该多好，但是每天还是会认认真真地训练，过好军训的每一天。希望接下来军训的日子，大家都过得好好的，训练得像个兵似的，等待柳暗花明又一村的惊喜……

大学军训，我收获了友情，体验了艰苦，挥洒了汗水，值得!

“The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstance they want, and if they cannot find them, make them.” Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people. I’m very glad to receive college education and i reached the conclusion that i have come to college not for one single reason, but for many.

“这世上的成功之士，是那些奋力寻觅自己想要得到机遇的人们。倘使找不着机会，他们就自己创造机会。”这句名言是一个伟大的作家萧伯纳写的。被原来越多的人分享着。我很高兴能够接受大学教育，我总结出我想上大学不单单是为了一个原因，而是很多个。

First, university is such an ideal place to broaden my horizon and make more friends. The youth of 21stcentury should be open-minded, instead of being a person with a tunnel vision. I’m ready to meet more challenges and make more friends during the four years.

第一，大学是能开阔我眼界和结交更多朋友的理想之地。作为21世纪的年轻人，我们应该开拓思维，而不是目光狭隘。我已经做好在这四年内接受挑战和认识更多朋友的准备了。

Second, I’m unwilling to step into the society straight after high school. I’m afraid I’m not fully prepared for the working environment: complicated interpersonal problems, jockeying for position, a tremendous amount of pressure and etc. I have to face various kinds of major conflicts as well as trivial things. I seem to be over-pessimistic, but that actually accounts for part of my choice.

第二，我不愿意在高中之后就直接进入社会。我害怕我没有完全做好踏入工作环境的准备：复杂的人际问题，用手段谋取职位，巨大的压力等等。我必须面对各种重大冲突还有琐碎事情。我也许是过度悲观了，但是事实上这也是我做出选择的一个原因。

Finally, thanks to the all-out support from my parents, i am able to further my study in university. I’ll spare no efforts to live up to their expectation on me to be a well-trained and well-rounded person.

最后，幸好有我父母的全力支持，我才得以在大学继续我的学业。我会不留余力地满足他们的期望成为一个训练有素全面发展的人。

I will learn experience and challenge myself in my college life and be an outstanding person of future.

我会在大学生涯中学习，经历和挑战我自己，在未来成为一个佼佼者。

My View on Helping Others in Need

In modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help others out, not to mention helping a stranger; offering a helping hand seems to be out of accord with the times。

Then what’s wrong with our society? Some people may say that facing skyrocketing housing prices, expensive medical expenditure

and soaring commodity prices, they have no choice but to struggle to make a living, and thus it would be impossible to spare a hand to help others because it may bring them into trouble. Therefore, standing by indifferently is their only choice。

However, is it necessary to be selfish in order to survive, or in order to ensure that people do not take advantage of you? In my opinion, helping others brings a strong sense of accomplishment. What’s more, the evaluation criteria

for judging one individual’s success should be modified so that offering a helping hand to people in need is encouraged and welcomed in our society all the time。

Since I was at school, I have heard a lot about college. A boy near my

house is in college now, every time I meet him, I will ask him how he feels

about campus life, he smiles and tells me many funny things.The ideal college

has been built in my mind. There is beautiful trees and flours, boys and girls

talk and walk happily, they share things together, students and teachers discuss

course. In the lake, some students talk to foreigners, what an enjoyable

situation. In order to go to my ideal college, I must work hard.

So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group。

Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don’t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal。

As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better。

高考录取过后，准大学生们即将迎来大学新生第一课——军训。高分网与大家分享大一新生军训自我鉴定一篇：

进入大学上的第一门课就是军训，怀之新奇有激动的心情，我们全身心的投入到真正的军队生活中。很快半个多月的军训生活结束了，经过教官的严格要求、刻苦训练和同学们的不怕困难，不怕挫折的精神

，圆满的完成这次军训任务。以下是我对本次军训的自我评价。

只有经历过了风雨，才会看见彩虹，有过了磨砺才能成长。短短的军训日子，使我洗涤去许多的酸甜苦辣，却是我最难忘的记忆，它牢牢的占据了我的心。军训的日子虽苦，却像苦咖啡一样可以品尝出浓浓的滋味，军训是新生入学的第一课，也是一堂综合素质的提高课。这一次的军训有着更特殊的意义，通过军训，进一步的让我增强了爱国热情。军训就像一条鞭子，时刻鞭策着我们前进;军训又像一把尺子，时刻规范着我们的行为;军训更像一盆火炬，时刻照耀着我们的前方。军训，让同学们普遍增强了体质，磨练了意志，培养了团结协作的精神，形成了良好的纪律观念。十五天的军训虽然结束了，但留给我们的是永远美好的回忆，是严格的组织纪律性和不怕苦不怕累的作风，、经过十五天的训练，我们相信，这十五天必将在我们人生的里程中留下难以磨灭的记忆，是挥之不去的，我一定会把在军训中形成的良好习惯，学习到的好思想、好作风，继续发扬下去，贯彻到我的整个人生。

通过军训，我懂得了自制、自爱、自理和自强，而不让父母扶着走。我要让我所走过的每条路，都留下我自己的足迹。我已经长大了，有必要去经受风雨的洗礼，在实实在在的生活和学习中，认识自己，提高自己，完善自己。这样我的路才会越走越远，眼前才会展现出壮美的未来，只有这样我们才会充实，才会感受到幸福。

短短的十五天军训，不知不觉中竟已到了尾声。回眸十五天中的我，似乎每一天都在蜕变，每一天都在成长……看着今天被阳光烤得炙热的跑道上一个个整齐的方阵，所有人都可以骄傲的说：这是由我们的努力换来的!尽管大家的皮肤是一天比一天黑，尽管身上的衣服被汗水湿透了一遍又一遍，尽管操场上的蚊虫总是肆意地围绕着大家转，尽管……可没有一个人放弃!每一个人为了不因自己而拖累整个集体都不敢有半点偷懒，尽管军训内容确实乏味，可为了这个“家”，即使再苦再累，也要熬下去，就让挥洒的汗水在阳光的照射下显现出充满青春团结的光芒!

经过这次军队化训练，不但是我们身体更加的强壮，是我们更加的能吃苦耐劳，而且使我们真正了解到人们子弟兵的艰辛与伟大的奉献精神，同时也认识国家国防建设的必要性。她让我懂得了，面对困难，只要你自己相信你能行，你就一定行。接下来的大学日子，我将更加的努力，严格要求自己，将来更好的报答祖国!

通过军训，可以使大学生吃苦耐劳的精神和坚强的毅力得到磨练，增强组织纪律性，熟悉相应的战斗动作，提高整体技战术水平。查字典范文大全特意为大家整理了关于20xx大学军训心得体会范文的相关材料，希望对您的工作和生活有帮助。

时间就这样悄无声息的从我们身边流逝，但这段美好的时光将永远铭刻在我们每个人心中新的学期意味着新的开始，但大学却意味着我们人生道路的一次转折.我们来自五湖四海，为了一个共同的目标而相约在此，一个对我们来说陌生的校园.每一张面孔都未曾相识，每一种声音都各有特色，我们对校园的一切和彼此之间都充满了新奇，因为我们未曾了解对方.我感谢学校给我们一次锻炼自己考验自己的机会，也给我们新生之间相互了解的环境.

军训虽说只有短短的八天，但这八天似乎如同一年，因为在这八天里我们感受到冬天那刺骨的寒风，也体味到那秋雨的凉意，也挑战了夏日里火红火红的太阳，也迎接了春日的清晨训练时的教官像老师一样严格要求我们的每一个动作，只有细心的教导没有严厉的指责.休息时却像一位姐姐关心我们每一个人.告述我们“天冷了!多穿些衣服.预防感冒.”但最让我们铭刻在心的却是教官那句“我穿上这身衣服我是你们的教官，脱下来我就是你们的学姐，以后有什么事可以来找我.”简单的话语却让我们每次想起来心中都会有振振暖流.雨我们都会怨恨雨下的太小，当细雨浸透我们的衣衫一振振寒风吹来时，我们又渴望太阳冲破乌云，但当烈日真的高挂晴空时，我们却又开始讨厌太阳的火热，反而喜欢那乌云密布的阴雨天来，最起码我们会想不可能像现在这样晒的很黑，

总而言之这八天来我们的心情如同天气一样反复无常，也是在埋怨中渡过的.但我们的教官不也是和我们一样经历着考验吗?但却未曾听到过一句怨言，每当训练时我们总会以教官为榜样，在心中暗暗对自己说;“教官和我们一样都是学生为什么我们不能做好呢?有时也希望自己来年军训的时候还会出现我们的身影，但不是学员，而要做教官.

军训的生活是丰富多彩的，我们不仅仅学会了关于站立和行走的知识，我们还懂得了如何让我们的内务更加整洁.也学会了许多军歌，让我们更加体会到军人的气息，嘹亮歌声展现了军人豪放的气魄，每当会唱军歌时就会从心底涌出一种力量.因此我认为在世界上唯有军歌不需任何乐器的演奏而听起来却是那样自然纯正军训不仅让我们懂得了如何去遵守规则制度，而且也增进了同学之间的相互认识，也养了团结互助的精神，和明白了什么叫”迁一发而动全身‘我们是一个集体，集体中的没一个成员都是不可缺少的，只有互相配合相互照顾我们的方队从整体上是齐的.即便是一个做的不好，他也无法代替这个集体.无论是今后的学习，生活还是工作之中，我们都应该发扬集体主义精神，认真负责的做好没一件事情。

We all come to the world, but why do some of us make great achievements known forever and why are they remembered forever even though they leave the world? And why do some leave the world without anything valuable to his generation and the people? Every one of us will hope to have a significant and valuable life. But what kind of life is both significant and valuable? Answers to the questions are ... "If you cherish your value of your own life, you will create something valuable for the world." Johann Goth said. "The life value should be judged from his contribution rather than his profession." Einstein said. Lei Feng, a communist soldier, said, "one lives to make others a more beautiful life."

为期5天的军训生活快要结束了，我们都从一个个懵懂无知的少年，褪下了青涩的外壳。

这几天的时光，我们感到既漫长，又短暂，既充满艰辛，又充满了快乐，此时军训生活即将过去，我忽然发现，我感受更多的是留恋与不舍。

在来了这次军训之后，我才深深体会到解放军的辛苦。回想一下，我们站军姿时脚上磨出的泡，我们练习正步时踢麻的腿，整个练习过程中因全身紧绷而酸胀发抖的肌肉。这些都会让我生出放弃的念头，但是当我用眼角余光观察我的同学们时，我发现他们都在紧咬牙关坚持着！我又为什么要放弃呢？想到这，我也会咬咬牙，挺过去。我认为，在我们军训时受到的苦与累，都是一种收获，一种让我们终身受益的收获，我们收获的是坚毅，是勇敢，是不屈，更是团结的精神。无论今后我们做什么，想到今天的辛苦与收获，一切艰难险阻都变得渺小了。我想这就是学校让我们来军训的目的吧。

其实，从军训中我们也感受到很多快乐。从大家整齐的脚步声，高昂的口号声中，我体会到了团结的快乐，感受到了集体的温暖，更发现自己潜力无限。在这里，我们大声欢笑，在这里，我们大声欢呼，在这里我们留下了我们青春的足迹，留下了十分美好的回忆。

我们的教官们，喉咙早已沙哑，但他们的指令还是那么地响亮，在我们的耳边回荡，震撼着我们的心灵。我们的老师全程陪同着我们，记录着我们军训中的点点滴滴，关心着我们的健康，鼓励着我们的斗志。(wWw.t262.com)

今天我们就要离开这里，我们将我们青春的足迹留在了这里，但我们要带走很多，我们将带着我们的坚强回去，带着我们的毅力回去，带着我们对未来挑战的信心回去！有它们的陪伴，我坚信我们的高中生活也将辉煌无比。

在军训的日子里(During the Days of Military Training)

The day we were looking forward to came at last--a weeks military training began.

During the training, each of us did his (her) part in earnest. We drilled more than six hours a day, though it was very hot at the time.

In the blazing① sun, we always tried to measure up to the high standards which were demanded . Sweat streamed down and we wouldnt wipe it off. Olny three days later our faces were tanned.② We felt happy and proud of it .

Our platoon③ officer was a young PLA man, about twenty years old. He was very strict with us during the training and very kind to us afterwards. By talking with him, we came to know not only more information about army life, but also about military affairs.

The military training gave us good discipline. It brought us great happiness, too. Well never forget it.

【示例一】

①Judging from the pictures, we can clearly infer that the drawer’s intention is ________(主题句).② ________(扩展句).③For one thing/First of all/Firstly, ________(第一个层面). ④For another/Besides/Moreover/In addition/Secondly, ________(第二个层面). ⑤Thus/As a result/Therefore/Finally, ________(总结句).

【示例二】

①To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that ________(主题句),yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously. ② ________(扩展句)is naturally associated with, to be specific ________(第一个层面). ③Besides/Moreover/In addition, ________(第二个层面)。④As a result/Therefore, ________(总结句).

Where possible, reduce the use of "which," "who" "that" "whom" "whether... or not" etc.

少用关系代词

学会运用关系代词是你学习英文过程中的一个重要的阶段。学会少用它们则表明你取得了更大的进步。在校对你的作品时，仔细检查一下所有的which’s, who’s that’s和whom’s是否必要。删除不必要的关系代词会使你的文章更精彩。

Example:

Unnecessary: It is a truth that is universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

(用两个 that’s，读起来很别扭)

Better: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

-- Jane Austin

注：被动语态修饰的名词通常不须用关系代词。

Unnecessary: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, which was built with American assistance.

Improved: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, built with American assistance.

Unnecessary: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation which was undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Improved: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Unnecessary: Justice theories have a long tradition, which goes back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.

Improved: Justice theories have a long tradition, going back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.

Unnecessary: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million that she made by tap dancing which made her famous in the movies.

Improved: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million she made tap dancing her way to fame in the movies.

Unnecessary: We told them they were the victims who deserved sympathy the most.

Improved: We told them they were the victims, most deserving of sympathy.

Unnecessary: Only a person who is oblivious* to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.

Better: Only a person oblivious to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.

Unnecessary: Not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea, whether it contains caffeine or not.

Better: With or without caffeine, not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea.

Unnecessary: Usually the Washington family married people who were socially better off than themselves, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.

Better: Usually the Washingtons married their social betters, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.

Unnecessary: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach the person to whom the letter is addressed.

Better: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach its intended receiver.

With time goes by， it becomes a bit hard for me to remember everything about myself at the first day of my college life。 However， there was one thing for sure that I did feel quite excited and curious about my university。 There is no doubt that students like me have struggled for a long time so that can be permitted to enter the university。

随着时间的流逝，记得在我的第一天大学生活对我来说变得有点困难了。然而，有一点是肯定的，我对大学真的感到很兴奋很好奇。毫无疑问，很多像我这样努力了很长时间才可以进入大学的学生。

As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colorful and convenientlife. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting

relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.

As far as I am concerned, I don’t approve of uestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”