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654反思三:九年级英语写作教学反思
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+ 加入清单我校九年级学生,有80%完全不会写作文,即除了“My name is XXX.”“I will. do,” 一个正确的句子都写不出来,剩下的5%也在以下方面存在一些常见的错误:
1、没有理解英语的基本句子成分是“主语”+“谓语”
学生经常出现主语跟谓语不一致,包括句子的谓语用得不恰当,谓语用词跟主语不搭配,一个句子没有主语,或多个句子杂在一起。
比如:学生想说“我母亲总是不让我看电视”,写出来的是“my mother always not be allowed I watch TV.”根本就是直接从汉语逐字翻译成英文的。
出现这样的问题,显然是由于句子的基本结构没有弄清楚。看来在今后教学中还要继续强调,并配合造例句练习。
2、动词短语搭配不准确
比如:“I’m not allowed watch TV.”正确的短语“被允许做某事”应该是“be allowed to do…”。
3、丛句语序和连接词问题
很不理解,为什么强调了那么多次,学生在写作文时,丛句语序还会写错?后者连接词和引导词也老师出错。对于连接词,我在讲的时候也感觉到学生没有理解。我讲解的方法就是把课文里面的丛句拿出来分析其语序和联系词,然后再讲相关语法点,最后举例子让学生造句。语序问题,我还会在将来碰到一次强调一次,相信会有效果。但是联系词我就不知道该怎么让孩子听懂了。
比如:“I don’t know that what should I do”“Could you please tell me should I do?”正确的句子应该是“I don’t know what I should do.”“ Could you please tell me what I should do?”.
以上这些问题让我对如何增强学生作文表达能力有了一个不全面的思考。我觉得,提高学生作文能力必须从七年级入手(小学重点在听说,只需知道what 和 how,不需求甚解;到中学阶段就必须知道why了)。
4、句子使用的句型单一
例如;在一次模拟考试当中英语的考试题目就是如果我当选了班长我会怎么做,做哪些事情,九年级五班的英语课代表张雅就一直用一个句型来写“I will do”,虽然全文当中没有一个错误,但因为句型单一所以值得8分,因此在老师教课的过程中还要不断的给学生讲 作文序加以变换句型且需对语句加以润色。
针对以上问题我以后在讲课文和精读篇阅读理解试题时,要注意以下两点:
1、利用课文逐句帮助学生分析理解英文句子的基本结构,即“主语+谓语”;
2、要求学生把有用的动词短语、名词短语以及插入语记牢记清楚。
3、每单元的语言目标,一定要理解并记忆。
4、是学生学会句子的变换使用,有必要时做些句型转换练习。
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篇1:坚持八条英语作文的写作守则
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+ 加入清单1、organize your thoughts before writing: brainstorm、make an outline、etc。 下笔前整合思绪:脑力激荡,写出纲要等。
2、write clearly。 be concise。 avoid wordiness。写作清晰,务必精简,避免赘言。
3、use good grammar and write complete sentences。 使用好的文法,写出完整句子。
4、write simple sentences。 avoid a fancy style。 尝试简单句,避免花俏的句法。
5、avoid slang、cliche and informal words。 避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字。
6、avoid use of the first person (i。e。 i/me/my) unless necessary to specific piece。除非必要,避免使用第一人称:如“我/我的”。
7、writing naturally。 read it aloud。 does it sound natural? does it flow? 自然挥洒,大声朗诵。整篇文章听起来自然吗?通顺吗?
8、move logically from one idea to the next。 dont skip steps。 上下句意要合乎逻辑。别毫无章法乱跳。
篇2:关于应用文写作的写作基础
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+ 加入清单既然要写好应用文,那就是要把应用文的一切了解清楚。下面是小编为大家搜集整理出来的有关于应用文写作的写作基础,希望可以帮助到大家!
一、结构的含义和作用
1.掌握结构的含义应用文的结构,是运用材料以表现主题的有序安排,是客观事物条理性在文章中的反映,为文章的组织形式和内部构造。文章的结构具有两重含义:一是宏观结构,即文章的总体构思、大体框架;二是微观结构,即对文章的层次、段落、开头、结尾、过渡、照应和主次的具体设计。 2.了解结构的作用结构好比文章的骨架,是安排文章的具体形式,是将材料化为文章的手段之二。结构是表现主题的手段,是准确表达主题的必由之路,也是引导读者领会文章思想内容的向导。写文章只有找到恰当完美的结构形式,才能把主题和材料组合在一起,形成一个完美有机的整体。其作用具体表现在:
(1)使文章言之有体。应用文大多有较固定的结构形态,它是人们在长期写作实践中经过选择,逐步找到的最适合表现某种内容的最佳形式,也称之为“程式”。如简报、书信和行政公文类文书,具有相当固定的惯用格式。
(2)使文章言之有序。合理安排文章结构,就是根据一定的思路,将零散的材料组织起来,使之眉目清楚地成为一个有机的整体。
(3)使文章言之有文。精心安排文章结构,可以增加文章的文采,从而增强其可读性。
二、安排结构的条件
1.了解思路的含义及思路与结构的关系
在文章结构的两重含义中,总体构思是具体设计的前提和基础。总体构思也就是人们常说的“言有序”,是指对材料的安排要有次序,这体现了作者的思路。思路是安排结构的条件。
1、思路的含义
思路是作者思维活动的路线,是作者在头脑中梳理、组织内容材料的过程和结果。它是作者对客观事物自身条理性的观察、理解。
作者思路清晰,结构必然有条不紊;作者思路不清晰,结构必然紊乱。经过选择的材料,只有经过合理的组织安排,使之条理化、系统化,组成一个有机的整体,才能准确鲜明地表现既定的主题。
2、思路与结构的关系
在写作构思阶段,作者的思维活动异常活跃。确立主题,选择好材料,并进而考虑如何表达主题和如何安排材料,由此逐渐形成一条清晰、连贯、独到的思维活动路线——思路。此时,文章的大体框架已在作者的头脑中“闪现”出来。等到作者用书面语言把思路表达出来时,文章的结构也就具体安排好了。因此,作者思路与文章结构的关系极为密切。具体表现为以下三点:
(1)思路是形成结构的基础和内核。结构是文章最主要的表现形式。要使结构完整、严谨、匀称,动笔前,就需要作者匠心独运,形成清晰、连贯并具独创性的思路,进而“外化”成纲目清晰、严谨周密的结构。但是,文章反映客观事物,决不是对其原始形态的简单搬抄和复制,而是在符合客观事物发展规律基础上的主观创造。因此,不同的作者。不同的文体有不同的思路。思路开阔而有创见,文章的结构就新颖独特;思路狭窄而落俗,会使文章的结构板滞僵死;思路紊乱,文章的条理就必然不清;思路松散,文章的结构就不可能严密紧凑。
(2)结构是思路的体现和反映。结构是思路的外显形式和文字载体。思路严密清晰,文章结构才能完整、严谨、清晰,主题才能得以准确地表达;思路紊乱、疏漏和闭塞,文章则会逻辑混乱、言而无序、首尾不能圆合
了解锻炼思路的基本要求及锻炼思路的方法
(1)注意思路的条理性和逻辑性,使之清晰、周密、连贯。清晰,指展开思路要有顺序、有层次,同时对材料要加以区分和归类。周密,指思路要周到、严密,没有疏漏和缺损,不要顾此失彼,自相矛盾。连贯,指思维活动过程及其表达不仅要注意外在的次序,而且要处理好各个意思之间存在的衔接、并列、转折、因果、总分等内在联系,做到气脉贯通、流畅。
(2)注意思路的灵活性、独创性,使之活跃、开阔、敏捷。活跃与开阔,是指思路的开展要打破思维定势,进行多向探索,使之灵活、新颖而富有个性。敏捷是指思路的展开、梳理直至成型这一过程应该灵敏、迅速,使文章结构紧凑、气势流转而顺畅。
(3)养成良好的思维习惯。一是养成有序思考问题的习惯,由浅入深、由表及里、由此及彼。二是加强逻辑思维能力的训练。应用写作主要靠逻辑思维,要遵循“提出问题——分析问题——解决问题”这一认识规律。
(4)写作前要通盘思考,立足于写作意图、目的和所用文体特点,确定如何起笔,主体分几个部分展开,怎样收尾。
篇3:2024年高考英语写作素材:劳动节祝福
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+ 加入清单五一劳动节,旅游不停歇,领略风光好,提升新境界,亲朋遥相聚,说笑不分离,身体虽疲惫,心里自然美,人间情珍贵。节日虽忙碌,没忘送祝福:劳动节快乐!
Labor Day, travel non-stop, enjoy the scenery, to enhance the new realm, relatives and friends. Together, talking and laughing are not isolated, is physically tired heart, the beauty of nature, the world precious love. The holiday is busy, dont forget to send blessings: a happy labor day!
五一到,扛一筐快乐,背一袋开心,真心送你送顺心;顶一卷如意,举一群幸福,真诚送你送温馨;揽一堆安康,扒一块吉祥,真情送你送舒心,愿你笑容绽放每一秒,五一劳动节快乐!
Five one to carry a basket, happy, happy heart to send back a bag, send you my best; each volume, for a group of happy, sincerely give you send a bunch of warm embrace; Ankang, with a piece of luck, love to send you to comfort, wish you smile every second, Labor Day happy!
编一个短信送给你,写份祝福送给你。五一来临之际,为您送上一份衷心的祈祷与祝福,诚祝您与您的家人度过一个愉快的劳动节!
Write a message to you, write a blessing to you. Five one approaching, to pray and bless you a heartfelt, sincere wish you have a nice day with your family!
携着一缕缕阳光心情妙,伴着一春浓浓芬芳笑容爽,发一段长长祝福万事吉,添一段甜甜回忆情意浓,道一声幸福悠长体安康,愿你五一劳动节生活美满,幸福常。
With the sun continuously wonderful mood, with a thick fragrant spring smile bright, send a blessing all long Ji, add a sweet memories of affective thick, say happiness long body of Ankang, I wish you a happy life Labor Day, happiness always.
劳动虽光荣,心情要放松,平常工作忙,身体好辛苦,五一假期到,外面风光好,快乐和健康,朋友要享到,愿君少烦恼,幸福粘你跑。
Labor is glorious, the mood to relax the body, usually busy with work, good work, five one holidays to the outside scenery, good, healthy and happy, to enjoy friends, wish you happy worry, stick you run.
平时工作太劳累,假期可以按时睡;清除烦恼忘琐碎,开心乐观不后退;真挚友谊诚可贵,短信祝福真实惠;劳动节里心情美,快乐和你永相随。
I work too hard, the holidays can sleep; clear trouble forget the trivial, happy dont retreat; sincere friendship is precious, SMS blessing real benefits; labor day in the mood beauty, happiness and you forever.
又是今年五一到,平安吉祥没烦恼:骑上顺利的单车,背起开心的背包,走上自在的小路,闻着甜蜜的花香,给自己身心一个放松的旅行,自然会得到生命更美好的记忆!五一提醒:必须开心,必须放松!
This year is the five one, peace auspicious not worry: ride smooth bicycle, carrying happy backpack, to ease road, smelling the sweet fragrance of flowers, give yourself a relaxing trip, will naturally be more beautiful memories of life! Five one reminder: must be happy, must be relaxed!
五月微风好春光,槐花栀子竟飘香,五一劳动节又来临,短信祝福送给你,外出旅游要小心,爱护文物和古迹,悠闲自得莫疲惫,健康排在第一位,饮酒千万别开车,平平安安才是真,祝朋友劳动节快乐!
In May a good spring, flower fragrance of Gardenia unexpectedly, Labor Day comes again, SMS blessing you, travel, be careful, protect cultural relics and historical sites, leisurely not tired, health in the first row, dont drink and drive, peace is the true friend, I wish a happy labor day!
平常忙,难游玩,工作多,好疲惫,五一到,假期来,爬爬山,观观海,赏赏花,陪陪家,远烦恼,多欢乐,心情愉,身体健,好朋友,常挂心,送祝福,万事顺。
Usually busy, difficult to play, work, good tired, five one, holidays, mountain climbing, sea view, appreciation of flowers, spend time with family, far more joy, worry, feel good, good health, good friends, often worry, send blessings, maestro.
篇4:英语读后感写作技巧
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+ 加入清单What can I say about Pixar? Amazing?? Perfect?? Got to see this at the Cannes Film Festival in France (went>【扩展阅读篇】
所谓“感”
可以是从书中领悟出来的道理或精湛的思想,可以是受书中的内容启发而引起的思考与联想,可以是因读书而激发的决心和理想,也可以是因读书而引起的对社会上某些丑恶现象的抨击、讽刺。读后感的表达方式灵活多样,基本属于议论范畴,但写法不同于一般议论文,因为它必须是在读后的基础上发感想。要写好有体验、有见解、有感情、有新意的读后感,必须注意以下几点:
首先,要读好原文
“读后感[1]”的“感”是因“读”而引起的。“读”是“感”的基础。走马观花地读,可能连原作讲的什么都没有了解,哪能有“感”?读得肤浅,当然也感得不深。只有读得认真,才能有所感,并感得深刻。如果要读的是议论文,要弄清它的论点(见解和主张),或者批判了什么错误观点,想一想你受到哪些启发,还要弄清论据和结论是什么。如果是记叙文,就要弄清它的主要情节,有几个人物,他们之间是什么关系,以及故事发生在哪年哪月。作品涉及的社会背景,还要弄清楚作品通过记人叙事,揭示了人物什么样的精神品质,反映了什么样的社会现象,表达了作者什么思想感情,作品的哪些章节使人受感动,为什么这样感动等等。
其次,排好感点
只要认真读好原作,一篇文章可以写成读后感的方面很多。如对原文中心感受得深可以写成读后感,对原作其他内容感受得深也可以写成读后感,对个别句子有感受也可以写成读后感。总之,只要是原作品的内容,只要你对它有感受,都可能写成读后感,你需要把你所知道的都表示出来,这样才能写好读后感。
第三、选准感点
一篇文章,可以排出许多感点,但在一篇读后感里只能论述一个中心,切不可面面俱到,所以紧接着便是对这些众多的感点进行筛选比较,找出自己感受最深、角度最新,现实针对性最强、自己写来又觉得顺畅的一个感点,作为读后感的中心,然后加以论证成文。
第四、叙述要简
既然读后感是由读产生感,那么在文章里就要叙述引起“感”的那些事实,有时还要叙述自己联想到的一些事例。一句话,读后感中少不了“叙”。但是它不同于记叙文中“叙”的要求。记叙文中的“叙”讲究具体、形象、生动,而读后感中的“叙”却讲究简单扼要,它不要求“感人”,只要求能引出事理。初学写读后感引述原文,一般毛病是叙述不简要,实际上变成复述了。这主要是因为作者还不能把握所要引述部分的精神、要点,所以才简明不了。简明,不是文字越少越好,简还要明。
第五,联想要注意形式
联想的形式有相同联想(联想的事物之间具有相同性)、相反联想(联想的事物之间具有相反性)、相关联想(联想的事物之间具有相关性)、相承联想(联想的事物之间具有相承性)、相似联想(联想的事物之间具有相似性)等多种。写读后感尤其要注意相同联想与相似联想这两种联想形式的运用。
编辑本段如何写读后感
格式
一、格式和写法
读后感通常有三种写法:一种是缩写内容提纲,一种是写阅读后的体会感想,一种是摘录好的句子和段落。题目可以用《读后感》;还可以用自己的感受(一两个词语)做题目,下一行是——《读有感》,第一行是主标题,第二行是副标题。
二、要选择自己感受最深的东西去写,这是写好读后感的关键。
三、要密切联系实际,这是读后感的重要内容。
四、要处理好“读”与“感”的关系,做到议论,叙述,抒情三结合。
五、叙原文不要过多,要体现出一个“简”字。
六、要审清题目。
在写作时,要分辨什么是主要的,什么是次要的,力求做到“读”能抓住重点,“感”能写出体会。
七、要选择材料。
读是写的基础,只有读得认真仔细,才能深入理解文章内容,从而抓住重点,把握文章的思想感情,才能有所感受,有所体会;只有认真读书才能找到读感之间的联系点来,这个点就是文章的中心思想,就是文中点明中心思想的句子。对一篇作品,写体会时不能面面俱到,应写自己读后在思想上、行动上的变化。
八、写读后感应以所读作品的内容简介开头,然后,再写体会。
原文内容往往用3~4句话概括为宜。结尾也大多再回到所读的作品上来。要把重点放在“感”字上,切记要联系自己的生活实际。
九、要符合情理、写出真情实感。
写读后感的注意事项
①写读后感绝不是对原文的抄录或简单地复述,不能脱离原文任意发挥,应以写“体会”为主。
②要写得有真情实感。应是发自内心深处的感受,绝非“检讨书”或“保证书”。
③要写出独特的新鲜感受,力求有新意的见解来吸引读者或感染读者。
④禁止写成流水账!
编辑本段要写关于学习的读后感应该读什么有感
(1)引——围绕感点 引述材料。简述原文有关内容。
(2)概——概括本文的主要内容 ,要简练,而且要把重点写出来。
(3)议——分析材料,提练感点。亮明基本观点。在引出“读”的内容后,要对“读”进行一番评析。既可就事论事对所“引”的内容作一番分析;也可以由现象到本质,由个别到一般的作一番挖掘;对寓意深的材料更要作一番分析,然后水到渠成地“亮”出自己的感点。要选择感受最深的一点,用一个简洁的句子明确表述出来。这样的句子可称为"观点句"。这个观点句表述的,就是这篇文章的中心论点。"观点句"在文中的位置是可以灵活的,可以在篇首,也可以在篇末或篇中。初学写作的同学,最好采用开门见山的方法,把观点写在篇首。
(4) 联——联系实际,纵横拓展。围绕基本观点摆事实讲道理。写读后感最忌的是就事论事和泛泛而谈。就事论事撒不开,感不能深入,文章就过于肤浅。泛泛而谈,往往使读后感缺乏针对性,不能给人以震撼。联,就是要紧密联系实际,既可以由此及彼地联系现实生活中相类似的现象,也可以由古及今联系现实生活中的相反的种种问题。既可以从大处着眼,也可以从小处入手。当然在联系实际分析论证时,还要注意时时回扣或呼应“引”部,使“联”与“引””藕”断而“丝”连这部分就是议论文的本论部分,是对基本观点(即中心论点)的阐述,通过摆事实讲道理证明观点的正确性,使论点更加突出,更有说服力。这个过程应注意的是,所摆事实,所讲道理都必须紧紧围绕基本观点,为基本观点服务。
篇5:高三英语作文传统文化100词
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+ 加入清单If the most beautiful season of the year is spring, for me, the most
interesting festival of the year is the new years Eve! On that day, we should
not only eat family reunion dinner, but also staying-up late on new years
eve.
Remember that the day to eat reunion dinner, people began to play cards,
chat, play mahjong, our children, began playing the fun of firecrackers, there
are all kinds of varieties, "this" and "Scud", "delta ray" and so on, we played
awfully.
I also went to the house to see from time to time and funny TV comic sketch
"Spring Festival Gala" performance, I and my buddy will laugh and laugh, see
magic in those big magician performing magic show, we were amazed.
Time flies, blink of an eye to 11:45, suddenly rang out a loud bursts of
firecrackers, we are e--cited to join them, just open the door, I saw the
fireworks are riotous with colour dark sky dancers.
At 11:50, we cant wait to just wrapped dumplings into the boiling water,
mom and dad put a cover on the pot, cook for a while, 12 oclock, finally boil
the dumplings, grandma and grandpa a sung, I smell from afar dumplings
fragrance, went straight to the kitchen, when the taste delicious dumplings,
happy in the heart.
One year spent similar, each year is different, when the new years Eve, it
means spring is coming, the new year has begun!
篇6:2024高考英语写作素材:万能句子带翻译
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+ 加入清单英语写作的开头结尾是写作的重点。下面语文迷为大家带来了经典的句型,供大家阅读参考。
一.开头句型
1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻,...
3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......
4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,
5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到,...
6.Its generally recognized that... 它普遍认为...
7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为...
8.Its hardly that... 这是很难的......
9.Its hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that... 更重要的是…
二.衔接句型
1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...
2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...
3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
5.But its a pity that... 但遗憾的是…
6.For all that...对于这一切...... In spite of the fact that...尽管事实......
7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外,我们坚持认为,...
8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而,困难在于…
9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样,我们要注意...
10.not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是
11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势
12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…
13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说
14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 …
三.结尾句型
1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…
2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此,我们有理由相信…
3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......
4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此,在我看来,更可取的是…
5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论…
6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是,....
7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论
8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好
篇7:2024高考英语写作高分技巧
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+ 加入清单下面是由语文迷网小编精心为大家整理的英语写作高分技巧,供大家阅读参考。
一、要善于模仿
一些同学的办法往往是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,真正的模仿重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在高考(课程)写作中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行:“The bicycle is very popular in China for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”。如果要表示“总是能够”的概念,很多同学提笔就会写can always,但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定,用never fail to。
二、要灵活变通
在批改过上万份同学们英语(课程)作文中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“What is it made of”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“It is made of Miss Hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
四、要心有全局
英文写作如果结构意识良好,应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了,适当地填入观点、素材,文章就自然而然立起来了。
篇8:高三年级英语作文范例:我的梦想
全文共 2128 字
+ 加入清单Since I was young, I have a special liking to draw, can bring a good painting has always been my dream. On paper the beautiful color is so wonderful! Today, well go to see a look 2015 childrens creative painting series.
Since said originality, so cant simply draw on the paper. The teacher asked us to take some white hats, t-shirts, fan, box and so on to painting. Its not, some people take the paper plates, there are those who take the bottle!
After the excellent performances of the opening and the address of the host, were going to lead! I cant wait to get out the fan and a pen and ready to start painting.
I according to the traditional Chinese painting book, a pen to draw a dash a grown very lush willow. I paint is a landscape painting, because spring is coming, willow sprout, green green, symbol of spring. Classical poetry said good: "jasper makeup into a tree height, ten thousand lop green silk sash." I think that everyone should have a favorable to willow. Several willow tree alongside the somebody else, at the time, or a thatched house. Beside a small river, the river have a clump of reeds and fisherman in driving the boat... When I silence in my painting, on the edge of a classmate has been finished, I look down all eyes, oh, she draw is really good! On the curved crescent sat a little girl, can let a person quiet in the daydream of happiness.
Finished, we will put the pictures on the Internet. Each one beautiful works came into my eyes. Is really colorful!
Results released, though I didnt win, but I realized the joy of painting. With this dream, let us work to achieve your dream, let the dream fly!
我从小就对画画情有独钟,能把画画好一直以来都是我的梦想。在纸上涂出美丽的颜色是多么奇妙啊!今天,我们就一起去2015年少儿创意绘画大赛中看一看吧。
既然说创意,那么就不能单纯在纸上画画了。老师要求我们带一些白色的帽子、体恤衫、扇子、盒子等等来绘画。这不,有人带了纸盘子,还有人带了酒瓶呢!
在精彩的开场表演和主持人的致辞后,我们就要大显身手了!我迫不及待地拿出扇子和笔,准备开始绘画。
我照着国画书,一笔一划地画出了一个长得很茂盛的柳树。我画的是风景画,因为春天来了,柳树发芽了,嫩绿嫩绿的,象征春天。古诗里说的好:“碧玉妆成一树高,万条垂下绿丝绦。”我想,大家应该都对柳树有好感吧。几棵柳树的旁边还有人家,当时,还是茅草屋。旁边还有一条小河,河里有一丛芦苇,还有渔人在驾驶着小船……当我沉寂在我的画中时,边上的一位同学已经画好了,我顺着大家的目光看去,哦,她画得真不错!弯弯的月牙上坐着一个小女孩,能让人沉寂在了幸福的遐想里。
画完了,我们就把画挂在网上。一个个美丽的作品映入了我的眼帘。真是五彩缤纷!
结果公布了,虽然我没有得奖,但我却体会到了绘画的快乐。有了这个梦想,就让我们去努力实现梦想,让梦想飞起来!
篇9:写作训练
全文共 689 字
+ 加入清单1.在写作“坚守”为题的作文时,王小跳想采用意象组合法来构思,但遇到了困难,请你帮他完成下面的构思。
王小跳想运用三个品格高洁、才华横溢、立志报国,但理想总不得施展的“落魄”却始终坚守自己的信念和节操的爱国文人的例子。请你帮助他先根据文人事迹列出三个小标题,再附上名字:
[温情提示]联系学过的诗文来考虑,如范仲淹的《岳阳楼记》、辛弃疾的《破阵子?为陈同甫赋壮词以寄之》等。
2.这么多年的校园生活,你一定见过不少有趣的老师、有趣的同学,耳闻目睹过不少有趣的故事。请以“校园趣事”为话题写一篇文章。
(1)自拟一个题目《》
(2)分别设计一个精彩的开头和结尾。
开头:
结尾:
(3)主体部分采用意象组合的方式,选取几件校园趣事组合在一起。试写其中一件事,并拟一个小标题。
[温情提示]题目和小标题要有特色,注意从“趣”上入手,语言生动些、幽默些最好。
3.陆游的名句“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”既是现实景物的形象再现,又是人生哲理的精辟反映。珠贝历经痛苦才能孕育出光彩耀眼的珍珠,乌铁经过千锤百炼才能变成锋芒四射的宝剑。非但古往今来的风流人物有这样刻骨铭心的体验,在学习和生活中,我们时常也会有相似的境遇和感悟。
请以“终于柳暗花明了”为题写一篇不少于600字的作文,可以叙写经历,可以抒发情感,也可以阐明观点,还可以编织故事,但一定要使用意象组合的方法写作。
[温情提示]注意“终于”表明是长久的期待和漫长的过程,“柳暗花明”既是转化的结果也是曲折的过程,“了”则说明了最后的喜剧性结尾。采用意象组合法构思,可以把所写的曲折的经历或情节分成三至四个层次,每个层次设一个小标题或场景转换的标志。
篇10:2024中考英语写作指导:核心句型
全文共 2842 字
+ 加入清单导语:写英语作文是有规律可循的,你记住了一些英语句型,就可以直接套用。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
1.welcometosp欢迎到某地
Eg.WelcometoChina。
2.What’sthematterwithsb./sth?
出什么毛病了?
Eg.What’sthematterwithyourwatch?
3.bedifferentfrom与---不同
Eg.TheweatherinBeijingisdifferentfromthatofNanjing。
4.bethesameas与……相同
Eg.Histrousersarethesameasmine。
5.befriendlytosb。对某人友好
Eg.Mr.Wangisveryfriendlytous。
6.wanttodosth。想做某事
Eg.Iwanttogotoschool。
7.wantsb.todosth。想让某人做某事
Eg.Iwantmysontogotoschool。
8.whattodo做什么
Eg.Wedon’tknowwhattodonext。
9.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事
Eg.Lethimentertheroom。
10.letsb.notdosth。让某人不做某人
Eg.Lethimnotstandintherain。
11.whydon’tyoudosth?
怎么不做某事呢?=
Eg.Whydon’tyouplayfootballwithus?
12.whynotdosth.?怎么不做某事呢?
Eg.Whynotplayfootballwithus?
13.makesb.sth。为某人制造某物=
Eg.Myfathermademeakite。
14.makesthforsb。为某人制造某物
Eg.Myfathermadeakiteforme。
15.What…meanby…?
做……是什么意思?
Eg.Whatdoyoumeanbydoingthat?
16.likedoingsth。喜爱做某事
Eg.Jimlikesswimming。
17.liketodosth。喜爱做某事
Eg.Hedoesn’tliketoswimnow。
18.feellikedoingsth。想做某事
Eg.Ifeellikeeatingbananas。
19.wouldliketodosth。愿意做某事
Eg.Wouldyouliketogorowingwithme?
20.wouldlikesb.todosth。愿意某人做某事
Eg.I’dlikeyoutostaywithmetonight。
21.makesb.dosth。逼使某人做某事
Eg.Hisbrotheroftenmakeshimstayinthesun。
22.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事
Eg.Letmesingasongforyou。
23.havesb.dosth。使某人做某事
Eg.Youshouldn’thavethestudentsworksohard。
24.befarfromsp离某地远
Eg.Hisschoolisfarfromhishome。
25.beneartosp离某地近
Eg.Thehospitalisneartothepostoffice。
26.begoodatsth./doingsth。
擅长某事/做某事
Eg.WearegoodatEnglish。
Theyaregoodatboating。
27.Ittakessb.sometimetodosth。
某人花多少时间做某事
Eg.Ittookmemorethanayeartolearntodrawabeautifulhorseinfiveminutes。
28.sb.spendssometime/money(in)doingsth。
某人花多少时间做某事
Eg.Ispenttwentyyearsinwritingthenovel。
29.sb.spendssometime/moneyonsth。
某事花了某人多少时间/金钱
Eg.Jimspent1000yuanonthebike。
30.sth.costssb.somemoney。
某物花了某人多少钱
Eg.ThebikecostJim1000yuan。
31.sb.payssomemoneyforsth。
某人为某物付了多少钱
Eg.Jimpaid1000yuanforthebike。
32.begin/startwithsth。开始做某事
Eg.Thestartedthemeetingwithasong。
33.begoingtodosth。打算做某事
Eg.WearegoingtostudyinJapan。
34.callAB叫AB
Eg.TheycalledthevillageGumtree。
35.thanksb.forsth./doingsth。
感谢某人做某事
Eg.Thankyouforyourhelp。
Thankyouforhelpingme。
36.What……for?为什么
Eg.WhatdoyoulearnEnglishfor?
37.How/whataboutdoingsth.?
做某事怎么样?
Eg.Howaboutgoingfishing?
38.S+be+the+最高级+of/in短语=
Eg.Lucyisthetallestinherclass。
39.S+be+比较级+thananyother+n。
Eg.Lucyistallerthananyotherstudentinherclass。
40.havetodosth。不得不做某事
Eg.Ihavetogohomenow。
41.hadbetterdosth。最好做某事
Eg.You’dbetterstudyhardatEnglish。
42.hadbetternotdosth。最好别做某事
Eg.You’dbetternotstayup。
43.helpsb.todosth。帮助某人做某事
Eg.LucyoftenhelpsLilytowashherclothes。
44.helpsb.dosth。帮助某人做某事
Eg.HeusuallyhelpsmelearnEnglish。
45.helpsb.withsth。帮助某人做某事
Eg.Isometimeshelpmymotherwiththehousework。
46.makeit+时间把时间定在几点
Eg.Let’smakeit8:30.
47.takesb.tosp带某人到某地
Eg.Mr.WangwilltakeustotheSummerPalacenextSunday。
49.havenothingtodo(withsb)
与某人没有关系
Eg.Thathasnothingtodowithme。
50.主语+don’tthink+从句
认为……不……
Eg.Idon’tthinkitwillraintomorrow。
篇11:高三关于环境污染英语作文带翻译
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+ 加入清单In the 21st century, humans science economic development has reached a very high level. But I want to ask: do you have any aware of human activities on the environment will be what kind of impact?
The deforestation of the forest is not a serious problem? According to the survey the world forest area is in at an annual rate of millions of hectares of disappear. Caused a lot of water and soil loss, make many areas become desert. Scope of human activities in the declining, its not scary?
What human besides destroying forests, dont damage the environment problems? It is not. Now, we should see the seriousness of water pollution. At present, 60% of the country in the world face the shortage of water, 20% of the population is difficult to get clean water, 51% of the people do not have access to sanitary water. This is caused by what? Is, that we are causing ourselves now factories and sewage in our life, not by processing is out. This is not proof of that? According to research, each 1 cubic meter of sewage discharge, 14 cubic meters of natural water pollution. Think of it, this is what a terrible number?
In the discharge of smoke in the factory, we dont know the smoke is atmospheric pollution? Scientists have found that there are at least 100 species of air pollutants produced great harm to the environment, directly affect peoples health.
Do we want to live in such an environment? Certainly dont want to; Then let us use action to prove it! We can start from me, start from now, start from the side. Love nature, the consciousness of environment protection! To do propaganda environmental protection angel! Lets take action to protect the environment
在21世纪的今天,人类的科学经济发展已经达到了很高的水平。然而我想问:你们有没有意识到人类的活动对环境会造成怎样的影响呢?
森林的乱砍滥伐不就是一个严峻的问题吗?据调查全世界森林面积正以每年上千万公顷的速度在消失。造成大量的水土流失,使许多地区成为沙漠。人类的活动范围在不断减少,这不可怕吗?
人类除了破坏森林之外,难道就没有什么破坏环境的问题了吗?不是这样的。现在我们应该看到水污染的严重性,目前世界上60%的地区面临供水不足,已有20%的人口难以得到清洁水,51%的人无法得到卫生用水。这是什么造成的呢?是我们人类自己造成的,现在的工厂及我们生活中的污水,没有通过处理就排出去。这不是最好的证明吗?据研究,每排放1立方米污水,就污染14立方米天然水。想一想,这是多么可怕的数字?
在工厂排出的浓烟里,我们不知道浓烟是污染大气的吗?科学家发现,至少有100种大气污染物对环境产生极大危害,直接影响人们的健康。
难道我们想在这种环境中生活吗?当然不想;那让我们用行动来证明吧!我们可以从我做起,从现在做起,从身边做起。树立爱自然、爱护环境的意识吧!来做宣传环保的使者!让我们一起为保护环境行动起来吧
篇12:高三年级英语作文:A Snowy Winter Morning
全文共 1930 字
+ 加入清单The wind gently murmured,puffed and sometimes sighed like a summer breeze lifting the leaves along the livelong night.The cat was curling up quiet in her bed.The mouse was sleeping carefree in his gallery.The dog was lying swwet on the sofa.Even the earth itself was sleeping in tranquility,exept that some house door faintly creaked upon its hinge,telling us a remote inward warmth.Nature was at her midnight work with feathery flakes whirling down in the wind,as if she was showering her silvery seeds over the fields.
Finally I woke up.The floor creaked under my feet as I moved towards the window.The snow as warm as cotton was lying calmly upon the window sill and the stillness of the morning was extremely impressive.
The roofs were standing under their snow caps,while the eaves were wearing their glittering ornaments.The trees raised white arms to the sky on every side,and where there was a wall,there were some fantastic forms of snow stretching exhilarated in the dim landscape,as if Nature had carved her fresh desighs by night as models for mans art.
Silently,I opened the door and stepped outside to face the cutting air.The moon had already lost some of its glow and the land was bathed in a dull mist.A lurid light in the east proclaimed the approach of day while the weatern landscape was bleak with some spooky stillness like a wizard kingdom.What you could only hear was the creepy sounds,seemingly out of the hell----the barking of dogs,the hammering of blacksmith,the lowing of cows and the crying of pigs under the butchers knife.
Gradually,the lurid light darkened and spread across the west.Every flower,every tree and
every weed were bathed in the sunshine.Suddenly,it turned out that all the sounds were not for any melancholy they suggested,but for their twilight bustle which was too solemn and mysterious for me.
I moved om,treading briskly along the road,the dry and crisped snow crunching under my feet.
篇13:2024英语写作必背经典句型集锦
全文共 4233 字
+ 加入清单英语写作少不了积累句型。以下是小编带来的2017英语写作必背经典句型【集锦】,希望对你有帮助。
the + 形容词最高级 + n. + (that) + S(主语) + have ever seen / known / heard / had / read, etc
例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
(海伦是我见过的最美丽的女孩。)
Nothing is + 形容词比较级 + than to + V(谓语)
例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.
(没有比接受教育更重要的事。)
S cannot emphasize the importance of sth. too much:再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
(我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。)
There is no doubt + that + 句子:毫无疑问,……
例句:There is no doubt that the economy is recovering.
(毫无疑问,经济已经逐渐复苏。)
It pays to + V + O(宾语):……是值得的。
例句:It pays to help others.
(帮助别人是值得的。)
An advantage of + 名词结构+ is that + 句子:……的优点是……
例句:An advantage of using solar energy is that it wont create any pollution.
(使用太阳能的优点是它不会产生任何污染。)
There is no denying that + 句子:不可否认……
例句:There is no denying that the quality of our life has gone from good to better.
(不可否认,我们的生活质量日益改善。)
On no account can we + V:我们绝对不能……
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
(我们绝不能无视知识的价值。)
It is universally acknowledged that + 句子:全世界都知道……
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable[不可或缺的] to us.
(全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。)
The reason why + 句子 + is that + 句子:……的原因是……
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
(我们必须种树的原因是它们能给我们提供新鲜空气。)
be closely related to sth.:与……息息相关
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health.
(做运动与健康息息相关。)
So + 形容词 + be + S + that + 句子:如此……以致于……
例句:So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.
(时间是如此珍贵,它经不起我们浪费。)
It is time + S + 动词过去式:该是……的时候了。
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
(有关当局是时候采取适当措施解决交通问题了。)
S + enable + O + to + V:……使……能够……
例句:Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.
(听音乐使我们获得放松。)
be + forced / obliged / compelled + to + V:不得不……
例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
(既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。)
a. + as + S + be, S + V + O:虽然……, 但是……
例句:Rich as our country is, the quality of our life is by no means satisfactory.
(虽然我们的国家富有,但我们的生活质量仍差强人意。)
It is conceivable / obvious / apparent that + 句子:可想而知/明显/显然……
例句:It is apparent that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
(显然,知识在我们人生中扮演着重要角色。)
The + 形容词比较级 + S + V, the + 形容词比较级 + S + V:……愈……,……愈……
例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make.
(愈努力,愈进步。)
Since + S + 动词过去式,S + 现在完成式: 自从……,……一直……
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
(自从上了高中,他一直很用功。)
By + V-ing, S can V:通过……,……能够……
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
(通过做运动,我们能够保持健康。)
be based on sth.:以.……为基础
例句:Progress in society is based on harmony.
(社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。)
That is the reason why +句子:那就是……的原因
例句:Summer is sultry[闷热的]. That is the reason why I dont like it.
(夏天很闷热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。)
There is no one but + V + O:没有人不……
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.
(没有人不渴望上大学。)
Due to / Owing to / Thanks to + sth. / V-ing:因为/ 多亏……
例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
(因为他的鼓励,我终于实现了梦想。)
For the past + 时间, S + 现在完成式: 过去的……来,……一直……
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
(过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。)
What a + a. + n. + S + V!= How + a. + a + n. + V!:多么……!
例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise! / How important a thing it is to keep our promise! (遵守诺言是多么重要的事!)
get into the habit of + V-ing = make it a rule to + V:养成……的习惯
例句:We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
(我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。)
leave much to be desired:令人不满意
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
(我们的交通状况令人不太满意。)
Those who + V + O:那些……的人
例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
(违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。)
have a great influence on sth.:对……有很大影响
例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.
(抽烟对我们的健康有很大影响。)
spare no effort to + V:不遗余力地……
例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
(我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。)
do good / harm to sth.:对……有益/有害
例句:Reading does good to our mind.
(读书对心灵有益。)
pose a great threat to sth.:对……造成很大威胁
例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
(污染对我们的生存造成很大威胁。)
bring home to + S + O:让……明白……
例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
(我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。)
do ones utmost to + V = do ones best to + V:尽全力去……
例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
(我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。)
篇14:2024小升初英语作文写作指导
全文共 697 字
+ 加入清单一:用介词短语替代从句,例:
原句:While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
修改后:During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
原句:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
修改后:At the second traffic light turn left.
二:删除诸如"who is"或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语,例:
句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
注:把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉,这只会引起最少的变动。
三:剔除你不需要的单词,例:
Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. 写完这样的句子后,你自己再读一遍,挑出单词"joint"和"telephone",注意删去不必要的词。
篇15:高三关于复活节英语作文Easter
全文共 1771 字
+ 加入清单In the United States in the early nineteenth century, Dolly Madison, the wife of the fourth American President, organized an egg roll in Washington, D.C. She had been told that Egyptian children used to roll eggs against the pyramids so she invited the children of Washington to roll hard-boiled eggs down the hilly lawn of the new Capitol building! The custom continued, except for the years during the Civil War. In 1880, the First Lady invited children to the White House for the Egg Roll because officials had complained that they were ruining the Capitol lawn. It has been held there ever since then, only canceled during times of war. The event has grown, and todayEasterMonday is the only day of the year when tourists are allowed to wander over the White House lawn. The wife of the President sponsors it for the children of the entire country. The egg rolling event is open to children twelve years old and under. Adults are allowed only when accompanied by children!
在美国,在第十九世纪,早期的多莉麦迪逊,第四位美国总统的妻子,组织了一个鸡蛋卷在华盛顿哥伦比亚特区已经告诉她,埃及的孩子们在金字塔前滚鸡蛋,所以她邀请华盛顿的孩子滚鸡蛋煮熟了的新首都大厦的丘陵草坪!持续的习惯,除了年内战期间。1880,第一夫人邀请到白宫儿童鸡蛋卷因为官员抱怨他们毁了国会大厦草坪。一直以来就有过,只是取消了在战争时期。该事件已经发展壮大,今天星期一复活节是一年中唯一的一天允许游客在白宫的草坪上。孩子的整个国家总统夫人的赞助商这。的滚彩蛋活动是开放给十二岁以下儿童。只允许成年人陪同孩子的时候!
Traditionally, many celebrants (司仪神父) bought new clothes for Easter which they wore to church. After church services, everyone went for a walk around the town. This led to the American custom of Easter parades all over the country. Perhaps the most famous is along Fifth Avenue in New York City.
传统上,很多人(司仪神父)买了复活节他们穿着新衣服去教堂。在教会服务,每个人都在镇上到处走走。本LED美国复活节游行全国各地的风俗。也许最有名的是在纽约市第五大道。
Good Friday is a federal holiday in 16 states and many schools and businesses throughout the U.S. are closed on this Friday.
星期五是一个联邦假日在16个州和许多学校和企业在整个美国都在星期五关闭。
篇16:高三年级英语作文:火灾原因带翻译
全文共 1267 字
+ 加入清单The Cause of fire
As we all know, fire is one of the most terrible killers in our modern society.We know that fire is mainly caused by smokers, followed by defective insulations and children playing with matches.In 2002 ,thousands of fire happened all over the country, of which 50 percent was caused by smokers who left cigarette-ends everywhere.Those who smoke should make sure that the cigarettes are stubbed out before being thrown away.Also, smoking should not be allowed in public places.30 percent of fire was caused by defective insulation. Workers should know the importance of good insulation for people’s lives.At homes we must pay special attention to electric wires and make sure that they are safe.20 percent of fire are caused by children playing with matches. We should warn children of the danger of playing with matches.
No matter what type of the reason it was, there was one thing in common:carelessness.So if everyone in the country is careful enough, more fire could be avoided.
我们都知道火灾是现代社会最可怕的杀手之一。火灾主要是由吸烟者、绝缘不良和孩子玩火柴引起的。在2002年,全国发生了成千上万起火灾,其中50%是由于吸烟者随便扔烟头引起的。那些吸烟者应该在扔烟头前确保烟头已经被掐灭。而且,公共场所应该禁止吸烟。30%的火灾是由于绝缘不良引起的,工作人员应该懂得绝缘对人们的重要性。在家里时我们应该尤其注意电线,要确保它们的安全性。20%的火灾是由于孩子玩火柴引起的,我们应该警告孩子玩火柴的危险性。
不管是哪种类型的原因,它们都有一个共同点:粗心。因此如果国家中每个人都足够细心,那么更多的火灾是可以避免的。
篇17:高三关于食品安全的英语作文FoodSafety
全文共 1019 字
+ 加入清单Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have popped up. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for this issue.
目前,有关食品安全的许多问题都出现了。至于我,在这个问题上至少有三个因素的相信我。
First, I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expense of consumers’ health. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has resulted in the degradation of food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health hazard for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profit. As a result, people’s health has been seriously disturbed.
首先,我观察到许多食品生产商的利润驱动做非法的事情。他们的目标是赢得更多的钱在消费者的健康为代价。第二,农药的过度使用,导致食品质量下降。过量农药熊健康危害巨大。此外,一些食品生产商注入国内动物激素,使他们成长得更快,因此他们可以将更多的利润。因此,人们的健康受到了严重干扰。
All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should do establish laws and implement them effectively to avoid producing toxic foods.
总之,食品安全是这样一个伟大的关注,我们都应该建立法律和执行有效的避免产生有毒的食物。
篇18:2024年中考看图英语作文写作指导
全文共 2549 字
+ 加入清单最近几年的中考英语当中,很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式,采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如,去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文,应用文-写假条,加上一个大作文,汉语提示作文构成。今年,北京中考英语作文也将是两个,一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲,我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。
看图作文要求考生按照所给图画,通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于,它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力,还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。
写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示,正确理解图意。一般情况下,看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示,我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意,得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。
写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节,就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节,就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。
(三)例题分析(例题)
同学们,看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后,你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。
要求:
⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述,不可多选或少选。
⒉ 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;
⒊ 词数 80 ~ 100。
参考词汇: 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.
气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
这道看图作文题,主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说,虽是看图,实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点,选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面:
1、认真读题。注意,题目虽然给了四幅图,但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。
2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。
3、结合所给的提示。提示中,对每种污染都进行了阐述,考生可以这些描述进行写作。
4、注意字数,语法,拼写等,避免错误。
下面是两个例文,大家可以参考一下。
One possible version:
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.
Another possible version:
The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.
The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.
下面,我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说,各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准,实际上也就是我们写作的目标。
评分标准:
1. 内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分;
2. 内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分;
3. 内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分;
4. 只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云,给0-2分。
看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点,并积累词汇。
篇19:网络综合-英文写作翻译英语作文
全文共 793 字
+ 加入清单It was sunny that day. Our parents were out, so there were only my brother and me at home. We were bored. So we decided to go boating. We played happily. But when we went to the middle of the river, the weather changed. It rained suddenly. We didn t bring umbrella and our boat was bamboo raft. As the rain was more and heavier, we were afraid to sink in the river. We tried our best to make our boat in shore. But our bamboo raft had more water on it. I was afraid to die. My brother was also very anxious. At that time, my mother came and she pulled us back to the ground. It was thrilling.
那是一个晴天。我们的父母都出去了,所以只有我和哥哥在家。我们很无聊。所以我们决定去划船。我们玩的很开心。但当我们走到河中央时,天气变了。突然下起雨来。我们没带伞,而且我们的船还竹排。由于雨越来越大,我们担心会沉到河里去。我们尽力使我们的船靠岸。但是竹筏上的水越来越多。我害怕死了。我哥哥也很着急。那时,我妈妈来了来了,她把我们拉回到地面。真的惊心动魄啊。
篇20:英语考研作文命题依据及写作技巧
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+ 加入清单导语:小编提醒大家,要想把作文写好,要想在考研写作中得高分,平时一定得多阅读优秀的范文,特别是一些漂亮精彩的句型。同时也有必要掌握一些写作模式和技巧,不断地模仿练习,最后才能真正打造出高分作文。
考研话题牵涉面广,包罗万象,变幻莫测。但从历年考研真题研究中可以发现写作基本上可粗略地划分为两大类话题:永恒话题(everlastingtopic)和热点话题(hotissue)。所谓永恒话题,是指那些不以时间和空间的转移为转移的话题。这类话题一般都是一些宏观的大话题,没有明显的时代印痕。如有关社会道德范畴的话题。另一大类是热点话题,即近几年或某一年特殊的社会现象, 媒体普遍报道过或公众普遍谈论的话题。如AdvertisementonTV(93),温室的花朵经不起风雨(2003)等,所以,平时在生活和学习中留意类似话题的英文素材预以备战不妨是个好的办法。
二、写作技巧
1.精心构造全文的引言段
考研作文阅卷老师每天工作量很大,工作时间也较长,因此长时间批改水平参差不齐、质量高下不一的作文难免感到疲劳,厌倦,甚至气恼。据测试统计,一口气读完12 篇后才走神的人极少,定力惊人。因此,在考研写作三段制中,第一段最能吸引他们的目光和注意力,因为考研作文采用的是总体评分法(GlobalScoring),作文评卷老师往往主要凭借第一段的总体印象打分。有人把文章的第一段说成是黄金段落,说老师就是在这一段中不断地“淘金”。这一说法是很有道理的,因此,作文要想得高分,一定要精心构造全文的第一段,最大限度地满足阅卷老师的期待心理,力争给他留下良好的第一印象。经验告诉我们,阅卷老师在看完文章的第一段后就已基本上给文章定了分数档次,即使在第二,第三段中发现文章中的其他一些美中不足之处,他也只是微调几分,总体分数还是比先定的档次低的文章要好得多。总之,引言段在全文三段中的重要性再怎么强调也不过分。如果要按重要性依次递减的顺序来排的话,那么应是引言在先,其次是结尾段,再次是拓展段。
2.制造语言的闪光点
“言之无文,行而不远”,同理语言干瘪平淡,让人看之面目可憎,读后味如嚼蜡。要想攫住阅卷老师匆匆的一瞥,留住他们的兴奋点,就非得在语言上猛下功夫,多制造些表达上的闪光点。语言是思维的外壳,语言的好坏直接影响到实际作文分数的高低。语言表达的亮点体现在小到一个词,短语大到一个句子中。高分作文往往是“锱铢必较”,几乎字字计较。很多人作文分数很低往往是因为用词面太窄。当然,词汇的积累是有个过程的。可惜的是,很多同学只能认词,却不能再现,更不用说写作时运用了。
3.避免中国式英语
母语为非英语的人学习英语时往往会将母语的思维和表达方式直接迁移到英语表达当中。中国人学英语时往往会受母语根深蒂固的影响,最易造出中国腔的英语。有人把“价格便宜”直接写成“The price is cheap”,把“这件事小菜一碟”说成“This is a small dish”,让人看后苦笑不得。因此要尽量摆脱中国试英语,方法看来只有一条:多看外国人写的文章,多多阅读。不难想象,阅卷老师如果在短短的二百字文章中到处看到Chinglish,他无法使自己对你文章的印象好起来。
4.尽量有路标词
路标词(signalword)又称衔接词(connectives)就像灯塔为在茫茫大海中航行的船只指引方向一样,它能突出文章的层次性和逻辑性。英语文章讲究启承转合。“启”就是开启观点:“承”就是接着话茬进一步发展论证或补充:“转”就是讲相反或对立的观点:“合”就是总结概括。一篇文章若没有路标词便会杂乱无章的乱堆在一起,给人凌乱没有条理的感觉。标志词或衔接词的作用绝对不可小觑。
此外,多种句型的交替使用,文章脉络层次的分明,论据的合理充分等在写作中都应引起足够的重视。