关于介绍姐姐的英语作文精彩20篇

人们常常采用"自我画像"的形式向别人作自我介绍,这种"自我画像"比自传的写法更为自由,内容可多可少,语言大都含蓄幽默,风趣诙谐......同学们在生活中也常需要向别人作"自我介绍"。

英语范文自我介绍第1篇：

MynameisYinXiaomeng.Aheardthisname,entaryschool,mymottois:tuitionthanthesomebodyelsetopayless,scoresmorenotinferiortoothers!So,mygradeshavebeentopclass.Mymotherhasbeenregardedasherhope,herpride.Igrewupinthispieceofitabout.Probablybecausemyarrogant,gradually,mygradesslippedtomedium.Themoresevere,grade3gradethanwasonceapoor.Butmyfamilyandmyteacherdidntgiveup.TheythinkIllcatchup.Therearefewnow,aboutmystory.Ithink,inafewyearstowritemyautobiographywillbemorewonderful.

我叫尹晓萌。一听到这个名字，您是否感以有长不大的意思?是啊，在父母眼里，我永远也长不大，婧婧是我的小名，翻开字典查这个"婧"字，是女子有才能的意思。不好意思，真有点儿对不起这个名字，其实我挺差的。我还给自己起了个笔名——雪娆。是根据毛主席《沁园春·雪》一词中的诗句起的，我觉得这个名字很美。

今年我十六岁了。十六岁的花季，应该是快快乐乐的，十六岁的女孩更应该是快快乐乐的，而我却相反。我的性格注定我要在花季流泪。我动辄就哭哭啼啼。难怪妈妈说我像多愁善感的林黛玉。不过，我也蛮喜欢这样的性格，她使我走向爱好文学的道路，并且得到了老师的赏识。我特别喜爱文学，尤其是散文和诗。我常常把自己的快乐和忧愁融入一首首小诗和一篇篇散文里。

我四岁半开始上幼儿园，六岁上学前班，八岁上小学。在小学，我的座右铭是：学费不比人家交得少，成绩更不能比别人差!所以，我的成绩一直是班级的前几名。妈妈也一直把我视为她的希望，她的自豪。我就在这一片赞扬声中长大了。大概因为我的骄傲自大吧，渐渐地，我的成绩滑到了中等。到了初三更严重，成绩竟一次比一次差。不过家人和老师没有放弃我。他们认为我一定会赶上去的。

现在，关于我的故事还不多。我想，过几年再写我的自传时会更精彩。

英语范文自我介绍第2篇：

Helloeveryone,mynameisya-nanzhang.Ithisyeartwelveyearsold,myhobbyisreading,listeningtomusic,playbadminton,becauseofreading,Ifellinlovewithoneoftheworldstoptenliterarygiantofluxun,heisalsomyfavoritecelebrity.Mymottois:"aslongasitisnotover,willgoallout!"Therefore,untilnow,Idothingsmorepersistent.

Iamoptimistic,cheerful,lively,good,butalsobecomeashorttempersometimes,unabletocontrolhistemper.

Tellmeaboutmynamebelow,dadcalledme"yanan"butthereisasmallstory!Wasgrandpasgrandmotherhasagoodnameforme,waitingfortheregisteredpermanentresidence,canbeinthatday,daddidntsaythename"hong-yuzhang",becausehethoughtthenamelikethenameoftheboy,butIwasagirl!Butalsocantthinkofanygoodnameatthemoment,Iheardthat,onaccountofthemoment,myfatherthinkoftheword"nan",sohecalledthe"nan"thistwoword,lateralsoismygrandpahadafierce!Themeaningofthefatherisafilialson,fewaregrandmaandgrandpa,butthistime,butformethislittlelife,andmadeaforgrandmaandgrandpa.

But,moreover,fillinhukoubook,dontlettakethenameoftwowords,thatwhatshouldItake?A"elegant"wordsuddenlyappearedinfrontofdads,sohewillblurtout,willbe"ya-nanzhang"!Ihavemyownname.

"Elegant"iselegant,noble,beautifulandgenerous,"nan"issolid,preciousmaterials,dadthisnameishopeIquiet,elegant,andhopefullyIcanbeintheplastic,butIfailedtoliveuptomydadsaafterallexpectations.NowImischievousactive,studentsareoftenaroundmethewholecup.Ihavetoworkhard,ah,toshortenmywithelegantfardistance.

Andtheword"nan"butdontknowwhetherIdeservetogoup,afterall,doyouhaveanytalent,alsoneedtimetoadjusttosee!

Iwillmaintaingoodmentalityandfriends,classmates,positiveanduplifting,helpingeachother,respecteachother,letyoudeeplyrememberme!

大家好，我的名字是张雅楠。我今年十二岁了，我的爱好是读书，听音乐，打羽毛球，因为读书的缘故，我迷上了世界十大文豪之一的鲁迅先生，他也是我最喜欢的名人。我的座右铭是"只要还未结束，就要全力以赴!"因此，直到现在，我做什么事都比较执着。我乐观，开朗，活泼，善良，却也有时成为一个急性子，控制不住自己的脾气。

下面说说我的名字吧，爸爸为我取名"雅楠"可是有一个小故事呢!本来爷爷奶奶已经为我取好了名字，就等着报户口了，可就在那天，爸爸却没有说"张宏宇"这个名字，因为他认为这个名字很像男孩子的名字，可我是个女孩子!但一时也想不出来什么好名字，听说，就在报户口的那一刹那，爸爸想起了"楠"这个字，于是便报了"张楠"这两个字，回去以后还被爷爷凶了一顿呢!爸爸是个孝子，很少忤逆爷爷奶奶的意思，可这次，却为了我这个小小的生命，和爷爷奶奶做了一次对。

但是，一波三折，填写户口本的时候，不让取两个字的名字，那取什么好呢?一个"雅"字突然浮现在爸爸的眼前，于是他便脱口而出，就要"张雅楠"!我便有了自己的名字。"雅"是文雅，高尚不俗，美好大方的意思，"楠"是坚固，贵重的建筑材料，爸爸取这个名字是希望我文静，雅致，同时有希望我可以成为可塑之才，但我终究还是辜负了爸爸的一片期望。现在的我调皮好动，周围的同学经常被我整盅。我呀，还得好好努力，才

能缩短我与文雅的十万八千里距离。

而"楠"这个字我却不知能否配上，毕竟，有没有才华，还需要时间的磨合才可以看出来嘛!

我还会保持着良好心态和朋友、同学相处，积极向上，互帮互助，彼此尊重，让你深深的记住我!

英语范文自我介绍第3篇：

A12-year-oldgirl,height1meter6more.Slightlydarkerskin,theeyeischaracteristic,lookatordinarytimesisnotsmall,butasmileisnarroweddownaseam,embeddedontheroundface.Mymouthisnotbeautiful,especiallywhentalkingtocanalwaysletnotaccuratelyonthe"decent"teeth"appearance".Nose,inadditiontothebridgeofthenoselowsome,abit"flatjiangchuan"imposingmanner,theotherisso-so.-thisisflatlylightme.

Dontknowwhy,risethefirstdayofjuniorhighschool,Iwascuriousabouteverythingtodowiththecampus,suchasIusedtositatthesametable,hernameiscuiaccumulate,accumulatethenamecuicaughtmyfancy,soIwillanalysisaboutit.Cuiaggregateswithbrightandbrightisdescribethestarrysky,thestarsisreferstotheuniverse,theuniversewouldhavemanymeteorites,twometeoritecollisiontogether,wouldexplode,andexplosionmakesmeteoritesjiggledrotten,destroybadmeteoritesslowlyaccumulateandtogetheragain.So,hernameisofprofoundsignificance.-thatswhatIlovefantasy.Iama"happyfruit",betweenfriendsandrelativescaneasilymakingotherslaugh,othersalsocaneasilyIlllaugh.

Ononeoccasion,mybrotheronebreatheatthreesteamedstuffedbun,youknow,dadamealtoeattwosteamedstuffedbun.Isaidtohim:"dearahdi,youwanttosticktoit,everymealeatthreesteamedstuffedbun,Ibelieveinthenearfuture,youcangotounfoldsumo,willhavetochampion..."Imnotdoneyet,momanddadlaughed,brotherredface,embarrassedloweredhishead.-thisismyhumor.

Ihaveahobbyofreading,thereisalsoasportshobbies,thereisinterestinMusicalInstruments,suchas,sparetimeIllpullaviolinorqualitiesaflutesong.Thoughnotjing,butalsoenoughtocultivatemysentiment.-thisismyhobbyiswidespread.

Plain,lovefantasy,thehobbyiswidespread,thisiswhatI--ZhaoYu.Wouldyouliketomakefriendswithme?Imlookingforwardtoyou.

一个十二岁的女孩，身高1米6多。皮肤略黑，眼睛很有特点，平时看起来还不算小，可一笑起来就眯成了一条缝，嵌在圆圆的脸庞上。我的嘴巴并不美，特别是说话时总是能准确地让不"体面"的上排牙齿"闪亮登场"。鼻子呢，除了鼻梁低一些，有点"平坦江川"的气势，其他的都是一般般。——这就是平平淡淡的我。

不知道为什么，升初中的第一天，我就对校园里的一切很好奇，如我以前的同桌，她叫崔蕴，崔蕴这个名字引起了我的遐想，于是我就把它分析了一下。崔蕴同璀璨，而璀璨就是形容星空的，星空就是指宇宙，宇宙里就会有许多陨石，两个陨石在一起相撞，就会爆炸，而爆炸就会使陨石摧烂，摧烂的陨石又慢慢的蕴和在一起。所以，她的名字有着深刻的意义。——这就是爱幻想的我。

我是亲朋好友之间的"开心果"，既能容易把别人逗笑，别人也能容易把我逗笑。

有一次，弟弟一口气吃了三个包子，要知道，爸爸一顿饭才吃两个包子。我就对他说：

"亲爱的阿弟，你要坚持下去呀，每顿饭都吃上三个包子，我相信不久的将来，你就可以去日本学相扑了，一定会得冠军的......"我还没说完，爸爸妈妈就哈哈大笑，弟弟红着脸，不好意思的低下了头。——这就是幽默的我。

我有读书的爱好，也有体育运动的爱好，还有对乐器的爱好，如，空闲的时候我会拉上一首小提琴曲或吹上一首笛子曲。虽说不精，但也足以陶冶了我的情操。——这就是爱好广泛的我。

平平淡淡、爱幻想、爱好广泛，这就是我——赵雨。愿意和我交朋友吗?我期待你们。

I love my home in Jilin City, Jilin City is a surrounded by mountains, the famous Chuanliubuxi the Songhua River in the town of the beautiful city. Here the mountains of water beauty more beautiful.

The mountains of Jilin City: It is located in the urban areas in the two famous (Beishan) (Longtan Mountain), located in the suburbs (Mopanshan) (Suzaku Hill). First, "(Beishan) there is the religious holy places, the mountains there are many temples, the annual temple fair and Jidian, when many of the visitors to this Tour." Saying that "(the Longtan Hill) mountains ancient architecture lush trees air Fresh, so people become a good place for morning exercises. "Saying that" (Mopanshan) is a famous mountain temple "Lingyansi", where incense heyday. "Saying that" (Suzaku Hill) is a forest park, the mountains A horseback archery skiing, and other entertainment projects, many of the day to attract visitors. "

Jilin City in the waters: the famous Songhua Hu of Jilin City in the suburbs, where there are rich water resources, there are delicious Songhua Hu wild fish, is a tourist resort in the Holy Land. Is also available in the Songhua River from the city Chuanliubuxi.

Jilin City of the United States: Jilin City has many, many lovely people, the special police in Jilin City is a model for studying the police, special police in Jilin City for the safety of their bloody sweat, you can say that they are also the most lovable person. Jilin City cab drivers, they are the example. Jilin City in a lot of unexpected events, they always冲在最前面also played an important role, for example: the scene rescue Jianyiyongwei Shijinbumei, etc. in their possession of the obvious.

Jilin City, my home and I love my praise in Jilin City of Jilin City.

Hello, my name is_______. Iam_______years old. Now I amstudying in_______Primary School. I am inGrade_______, Class_______.

I live in_______. Thereare_______members in myfamily—father, mother and me. My father isa/an_______； my motherisa/an_______. I lo(）ve both ofthem.

In my spare time, Ilike_______, and my favoritecolour is_______. I also love__________very much,such as________________.

I hope I can learn English well,because I think it very important. But_______ is favorite subject,because it is very interesting.

I wish I can become a_______in the future.

Good morning, my name is xx, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in september. Now i will introduce myself briefly,i am 21 years old,born in heilongjiang province ,northeast of china,and i am curruently a senior student at beijing XX uni.my major is packaging engineering.and i will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in june.in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4/6 with a ease. and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. besides, i have attend Several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, i have taken a tour to some big factory and company. through these i have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry. compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkard. but i have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still. i guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life, i would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,i like my major packaging and i wont give up,if i can pursue my master degree here i will combine law with my former education. i will work hard in thesefields ,patent ,trademark, copyright, on the base of my years study in department of p&p, my character?I cannot describe it well, but i know i am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is valleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,i learn how to balance between study and entertainment. by the way, i was a actor of our amazing drama club. i had a few glorious memory on stage. that is my pride.

My station in university campus inch territory, breathes and feels a here freshness. The university life like this started. The life four years time already the picture got down certainly has run the line, you along this path endless long journey, the university time will say regarding me will be fresh, the biography first time was far away the hometown, trod studies the road. I to the university life am fuzzy, after investigates many times, everybody is two characters ----- is bored to the university life feeling, perhaps has that a reason! Three years high school life is such intense stimulates. Recollected also a little is afraid, facing high schools intense sprint, diligently was admitted to a school dream of the university, everybody is the like this struggle, assaults the dream. At the present, steps into the university campus, studies the life has had the bored feeling.

I have a sister. She is daughter of my uncle, a good friend of my father. I have a good relationship with my sister. She is six months older than me. We are in the same grade. We dont meet each other often, but we often make telephone calls or chat in the Internet. She works very hard in her study and she does well in all her subjects. Besides, she is tall and looks beautiful. Her classmates and friends like to be with her. I am so happy to have such a great sister.

我有一位姐姐。她是我叔叔的女儿，叔叔是我爸爸好朋友。我和姐姐的关系很好。她比我大六个月，我们在同一个年级。虽然我们不经常见面，但是我们经常打电话或者在网上聊天。她学习很努力而且各科成绩都很好。而且她很高，看上去很漂亮。她的同学和朋友都喜欢跟她在一起，我也很高兴有这样一位好姐姐。

Often see on TV low-carbon living four word. We did it that low carbon life?

Im in the neighbourhood of low carbon life made a social investigation. The survey found that the survival of our environment around the carbon footprint: streets, go throw cigarette butts, plastic bags and paper towels; Restaurants in the dining hall, one by one with white foam lunch box and disposable chopsticks; Flowing along the river basin, the bright, domestic sewage and industrial wastewater... So big polluted ecological environment. Within the family, also inadvertently leave carbon footprints. In a family, for example: electricity, gas, water, self-drive... I made a record in you travel way

Low carbon life represents a more healthy, more natural, more secure life, at the same time is also a kind of low cost, low cost way of life. Low carbon is not only the enterprise behavior, for the rest of us, is a kind of attitude to life. We should actively advocate and to practice low-carbon life, pay attention to energy saving, solar terms, an hour to go to bed... Starts from the intravenous drip.

People enjoy at the same time, also made the survival of the killer - carbon. Therefore, it is very urgent to advocate low carbon life.

在电视上经常看到低碳生活四个字。那低碳生活我们做到了吗。

我在小区里对低碳生活作了一次社会调查。调查发现，我们的生存环境遍布碳的足迹：大街小巷，烟头、塑料袋和纸巾到处乱扔;餐馆饭堂里，堆满一个个白色泡沫饭盒和一次性筷子;沿河流域中，流淌着黑得发亮的生活污水和工业污水……生态环境因此大受污染。在家庭内部，也不经意地留下碳的足迹。以一个家庭为例：用电、用气、用水、自驾车……我以大家出行方式做了记录

低碳生活代表着更健康、更自然、更安全的生活，同时也是一种低成本、低代价的生活方式。低碳不仅是企业行为，对于我们这些普通人来说，就是一种生活态度。我们应该积极提倡并去实践低碳生活，要注意节电、节气、熄灯一小时……从这些点滴做起。

人们在尽情享受的同时，也制造了生存的杀手---碳。因此，提倡低碳生活刻不容缓。

My mom and dad may not be the best, but love me; my mom and dad may not be the best, but in my heart is the most beautiful of the most handsome. Because one thing makes me know my mom and dad is the best. Do not lose someone elses mom and dad.

I remember when I was four years old, I came back from the kindergarten, finished homework on the outside and the children play games ----- turn. I called my mother bought me a product of orange Shuang, is a glass bottle to do, I and the children turn when the halo, it fell to the ground, the glass bottle to scratch my face, out of a lot of blood Well, left a deep mark, when I touch my face, I am very sad, Mom and Dad also tears.

Blink of an eye I was twelve years old, on the sixth grade.

Now I read the sixth grade, see my mother and dad for my little early test is good, busy busy busy, almost every day I will flow a tear, my mother sitting on the sofa, I saw my mothers white hair and more; to the father of tea Daddy has lost a lot. See my mom and dad so worried about me, I have no reason not to learn, I have no reason in such a good environment do not seriously study, I have no reason not to listen to my mothers father. Mom and Dad do not have to worry about me, why do they worry about me, because I do not listen, do not study hard. So I went to junior high school, I must change their own, I want to become obedient, good learning good boy. Mom and Dad often say where it does not matter, as long as the attitude, hard to learn, so good test a good high school, so I should attitude to positive, good learning.

Mom and Dad, so I am in junior high school, and I will become more sensible, I want for you, for me, for my grandfather grandmother, good study. Will not let you worry.

I come from Enshi, Hubei Province, a small developing town. I like to watch

the scenery, walk, chat on the Internet and play games.

In sports, I occasionally play basketball, football, soldier ball and

badminton.

For the coming college life, my expectation is to learn English well, adapt

to college life as soon as possible,

and also hope to know more friends. Wonderful four years of University.

In addition, I am professional and solid, reading is my greatest enjoyment,

and studying computer makes me feel happy.

Im practical in my work, and Ill finish no matter how small I am.

I can repair the computer, manage the network, network operation and online

sales.

Whats important is that I have a kind of spirit of persevering in

research, a kind of neck that will never stop until I understand.

hello everyone.

now let me talk about myself.

my name is _____.i was born in _____.there are _____people in my family, my father is a _____, my mother is a _______.and as everyone know,im a student.everyone has his own interests.as for me,i like reading books,playing basketball,listening to the music and so on.now today we are in the same class,i hope we will get on well with each other.thanks.

My name is liu * *, for the sake of the name, I used to call themselves the Internet the queen of the "star". Do not think I am too mad, because the stars themselves both ordinary and flash, so I like them. One of the numerous stars, of course, also want to be. If one day, you met online a girl named "star dance", it must be me - 11 years old, monkey, virgo to choose a suitable text book

Of course, I have like stars very ordinary appearance: small eyes - but very bright. Neither tall nor short nose; Not big not too small mouth. Fair skin, a long or a short horsetail plait, stuck high in my brain, flash flash, very naughty to choose a suitable text book, but I have my hair cut short now, mother to)

My hobby is widespread, such as: music, microcomputer, aoshu, choose a suitable text book of English ha ha, there is a you sure cant think of! To tell you the truth, that is, space exploration, such as: Stonehenge, crop circles, alien to choose a suitable text book in a word, I like all of the unknown things. I like music, especially since 6 years old I began to play the piano, less than nine years old, I was out of the piano level 6. Whenever I bounce

Mendelssohns "boat song of Venice, I as if place oneself in a ripple on the boat on the water, the surrounding silence, moonlight, like mercury, scattered on the surface of the flash, good beautiful, choose a suitable text book

I also love the guitar, just learned two lessons, I began to play the chords. Now I have learned many years ago, "walk" "red river valley" "childhood", etc.

A lot of beautiful sounds of music to choose a suitable text book

You have to ask why I love this music, in fact, I dont know. But, when I am in the rhythm of the music, I felt a great deal of enjoyment.

I also like the Olympic math, because it can develop my intelligence, makes me on the head turn, turn. Difficult as past castle, although it is difficult to overcome, but as long as I use your head, you can feel the joy of success. Of course, there must be less than America and China, my shortcomings is very sloppy, every day to find things at home, watch on today, tomorrow to find, everything all over the place. Alas! The family and I cant, dont look at me in the life is very careless, but I dont careless, to solve the problem. I can check each question carefully. , however, and the occasional careless like that I do, because not serious topic, papers clearly demand reduction ratio, I have made for ratio! Worse, dizzy, abbreviation! Just because of this, the teacher gave me a buckle 4 points. After this lesson several times, I must be in the future to correct this bad habit, sloppy bull is not blown oh! Believe me!

Paint bottom like me? In the future there will be three years of time to test and verify. I really really want to do the north star - the brightest the star sky, of course, this need me to pay a huge effort.

The above is my personal introduction, hope in the next three years, the teacher and the students get along well, and the teacher the students were rushed through the difficulties!

[大学新生入学英语自我介绍

Jinan is in locate northern latitudes 36 degrees 40 cent, east longitude 117 degree. Jinan is in South of Mount Taishan and North of Yellow River.there is belonging to warm temperate zone greatly six sex monsoon weather area,clear all the year round,sunshine full in Jinan. The year average air temperature is 14 Celsius degrees, the year average rainfall is 650-700 millimeters.

Jinan is called "Quan Cheng（泉城）"and is coast in Chinese the east economic big province-Shandong the provincial capital of the province.Jinan is a whole province politics, economy, culture, science and technology, education and banking center.Jinan is also a national approval of the coast open city and vice- province class city.The benefit goes down south to govern six areas, one County class City, the total area is 8227 square kilometers, population 5,960,000, among them downtown population 2,600,000.Helping the south is one of the city of"national city comprehensive real strenght 50 strong" and"whole country invest hard environment 40 excellent.

I live in Jinan.Itvery beautiful.Its famous for the springs.Its said that there is 72 springs in Jinan.On the other side,there are many mountains here.The most beautiful mountain is Qianfo Mountain .It lies in the south of Jinan.Daming Lake is other sineary .In Daming Lake Park,swillows are here and there.Air is fresh.Fish is swimming

freely.When you come here,youll be fancinated by it. Quancheng Sguare which is in the middle of the city is a mordern work.

You are welcome to Jinan.

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

Home of the most round moon, home of the most tea, home of the most alcohol, home food, the most impressive.

I was a Hakka. I left my hometown Meizhou from my childhood. I followed my parents to this strange land and opened up our new home. As I grew up in this new environment, the impression of my hometown was gradually blurred. But in my mind, it cant forget the hometown dish of my childhood taste buds.

Many home dishes are famous far and near, and those special flavors have attracted a lot of people. One of the most famous dishes is "Mei Cai Braised Pork", my dad is a generation old Hakka love. Although it sounds like this dish seems to be difficult to get in good taste, but this dish is representative of Hakka peoples diligence and frugality quality.

My father said, "our hometown is Mei Mei Cai Braised Pork" single dishes there are many complicated steps. When the farming harvest, the farmers harvest the mustard, then put it in the sun to matured, and then take the food to the ground, arrange it, and sprinkle a lot of salt on it. According to my father, when they were young, they were trampling the dishes with clean feet after the salt was sprinkled. After the tread, put it in a vessel to a degree, then take the steam, then take the sun... So the three steamed three sun, the earthly plum dried vegetables!

"Mei Cai Braised Pork" another character is meat, meat to choose "pork fat pork". Making this dish, put the Mei food dry cleaning, cut thin pieces, the fat basin under the streaky pork belly pieces, Mei dish, steamed for a long time, fat oil seeping into the plum dried vegetables, plum dried vegetables fragrance dipped into fat, opened a pot. Hot, delicious food Braised Pork pan mei! A pot of delicious food Braised Pork Mei can eat for a long time, because the salty, not perishable. A small pinch to the bowl, the fragrance of the four spilled, can pick up a few rice, that taste, to taste to understand. Such a dish reflects the diligence and frugality of the Hakka people, which is the favorite of the Hakka people.

When I heard my Dad talking about his hometown dishes, dad was fun, innocent, and rich in homesickness. In my fathers age, and cant eat "Mei Cai Braised Pork", to wait until the new year will kill pigs, so have a good heart is also waiting for Spring Festival to eat.

In my opinion, McDonalds and Kentucky fast food are far more infatuated than this dish. Maybe it is because I have not experienced the father of that era, cannot understand a dish not easily won; perhaps because there is no contact with the home, can not understand the charm of home cooking; perhaps because now no children of that age as difficult as father, do not know how precious home cooking. But from my fathers love for home food, I read the charm of my hometown cuisine, and I also fell in love with home food.

Home of the most round moon, home of the most tea, home wine is the most alcohol, home food is the most lingering.

Today is Christmas Eve, Christmas Eve that eating apple a day is also a kind of custom. On Christmas Eve to eat the apple, because apple has a cavity, in peace. On this day, on Christmas Eve Santa Claus will sit sleigh, presents for the children. The next day, the children were present, will be very happy, I am really looking forward to Santa Claus gave me a gift!

今天是平安夜，平安夜这一天吃苹果也是一种习俗。之所以在平安夜吃苹果，是因为苹果里有一个苹字，代表平平安安。平安夜这一天，圣诞老人会坐着雪橇，给孩子们分发礼物。第二天孩子们受到礼物，就会很高兴，我也很盼望圣诞老人给我送一个礼物呀！

“各位先生、女士们，大家好!我姓关名羽潇，是红星闪闪旅行社的一位导游。首先预祝大家旅途愉快!好，现在大家看我身后的那扇朱红的大门就是故宫的正门了。故宫处在北京市城区中心是明清两代的皇宫，也是当今世界现存规模最大、建筑最雄伟、保存最完整的古代皇家宫殿，好了现在已经到了停车场，先介绍到这儿请大家下车吧!”

各位请看!这便是故宫的正大门午门。它建成于1420年，它的名字是用来斩头的吗?其实它还有一个作用就是在士兵出征之前，军官们也就是现在的‘领导’在这儿诸如鼓舞士气并下达命令之类的……，好!那我们就到故宫里面吧。

各位朋友，在我们眼前的就是闻名中外的三大殿：太和殿、中和殿、保和殿。先来看看太和殿，它高有33米，从东至西长有64米，从南至北宽有33米，面积为2377平方米。太和殿是在皇帝上早朝和举行盛大典礼的地方，它的规模为紫禁城内大殿第一，正背上的吻兽的体积也是我国目前最大的。总而言之，处处显示它的“第一”的思想体现。看完了太和殿让我们一起去中和殿。中和殿是皇帝在大典前等待吉时、稍事休息的地方。下面请朋友们自由参观一下当时的国宴厅保和殿。

Fast, please come with me, this is the entrance to the Forbidden City, also is the meridian gate, the most is the one door in the middle of the emperor, it is the two sides of the door left court officials, the two on the side of the door is local bureaucrats, bachelors and the people go.

Now we come to the hall of supreme harmony, you can see the blue gold plaque, inscribed with "the hall of supreme harmony" three words. The hall of supreme harmony is the palace of a larger house, taihe palace, zhonghe palace and Baohe Palace is from "6" to the qing dynasty, has great historical value, there is no lack of ancient flavor. You can see and channel the rail of the temple and the hall of supreme harmony, there are many stone carving of a lion, you know what is it used for? Tell you, it is used for drainage. Rain flow low-lying place, on top of the wall flow into the holes of the earth, after a pipeline dredge, can be shipped to port. Actually, zhonghe palace and the overall structure of the hall of supreme harmony, just a little small. The composition

Now appears in front of our eyes is Baohe Palace, who knows what is it? Oh, how clever the foreign visitors, even Chinas scenic spots and historical sites all understand clearly. By the way, this is the place where emperors used to worship the gods, the door of the red-crowned cranes and big censer is also do this. Having said that, I want to bring two small problems: red-crowned crane is what kind of moulds, large incense burner is made of what, you think, please. Great, Im no longer the suspense, red-crowned crane is made of cast iron, and large incense burner is made of copper. You can never touch them, they are already aging, if you to touch them, they will be damaged.

I am ****. usually a lot of my hobbies, such as skating, playing 356 didesmococcus feather, draw, watch extra-curricular book, watch tv and so on, so my life is very rich extra-curricular. ago is a more introverted person, i have very few words, only and i am very good friends to so many before, but after school at the time of my personality to change slowly, and not, as

previously like very few words, and students are also very harmonious relationship.

in fact, since childhood i dare not interested in english, so my english very poor, then let us hear english, introduce myself, i really do not know how to do, nervous for some time, so i think in the future of english class can have more understanding of english can have more interest in english. families are. usually a lot of my hobbies, such as skating, playing 356 didesmococcus feather, draw, watch extra-curricular book, watch tv and so on, so my life is very rich extra-curricular. ago is a more introverted person, i have very few words, only and i am very good friends to so many before, but

after school at the time of my personality to change slowly, and not, as previously like very few words, and students are also very harmonious relationship.

i think noting is difficult if you put your heart into it,so i can say will make my english be nice in future. thank you!

Father, how great words; The father love, how beautiful melody. Dear dad, when busy, can you find such a festival of fathers day?

Today, is my dads first holiday, I carefully prepared a card, then tape posted a petal in the upper left corner. It with the aromatic, with my feelings, as the wind blows gently, the beautiful kind hearts float into dad.

The father loves the warmth in June and Thanksgiving. When I was in elaborate greeting card, write the handwriting which asm, I hand in trembling, my heart in the jump, the sincere words from time to time pull at my heart!

In fact, fathers love is gentle, father use it rough hands stroked my head; Dad with his warm words of comfort me; When he humorous language make me laugh... At that time, I really realized the father loves the also gentle.

Dad is the pillar of the family, when his broad shoulders to assume the burden of the family; When I found a piece of white silk on his head; When I find the wrinkles on his face. My heart is with sour.

Generation of letters, mostly because their children mother selfless and moved, so for the selfless love left countless love. And for the whole family outside the hustle and bustle of the father? Nothing left.

Here, I want to sing loudly fathers love is great!

Hello，everyone!

My name is Winnie.Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Ganzhou.

Im an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.

I also sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.

Im kind-hearted. If you need help，please come to me .

I hope we can be good friends!

OK.This is me .A sunny girl.

我的姐姐是一个聪明、爱帮助别人，善良、诚实、勇敢的小女孩。虽然她现在已经读初一了，但她还是像小时候那样漂亮、活泼可爱。

我的姐姐有一双黑溜溜的大眼睛，像两颗玻璃球；矮矮的小鼻子，像一座小山。本来是一张漂漂亮亮的脸，就是有一点不好，左脸有一个斑纹，那是小时候我哥哥不小心拿剪刀在姐姐脸上戳了一下，从此以后，姐姐的脸上就有了一个斑纹就。我想，那个斑纹可能一直会留在姐姐的脸上，像一个会说话的嘴巴。

我姐姐属猪。所以她吃饭吃得很快。我觉得姐姐无论吃什么都快。即使晚上下大雨，也吵不醒姐姐，姐姐喜欢浅紫色、深红色、金黄色、浅绿色、天蓝色、粉红色。其中她最喜欢紫色，和我一样。

姐姐很关心我，而且她聪明、诚实。

有一次，我中午吃的火锅。火锅太辣了，我只吃了一点点。到了下午四时，我的肚子就饿了，我连忙对姐姐说我饿了，然后姐姐用自己的零花钱帮我买了一瓶牛奶、一个面包。我吃得津津有味的。姐姐真关心我。

我的姐姐非常聪明，她的成绩很好，全班第二名，全年级十三名。有一次，我问姐姐几个脑筋急转弯的问题，姐姐居然全都回答正确了。你说我姐姐聪明吗？

有一次，姐姐把我妈妈买的一个美丽的花瓶打碎了。妈妈一回家，姐姐就主动给妈妈认错，并且保证要用自己的压岁钱重新买一个。妈妈说：“秀秀你以后不要这么做了，我原谅你。”你说我的姐姐诚实吗？

你们喜欢我的姐姐吗？

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