介绍家乡高考英语作文模板（经典20篇）

杨建超同学：

你好！

三年级上学期，我和你在炉桥第一小学相识了。并成为了好朋友。今年寒假，我想请你到我的家乡做客。

我的家乡没有什么特别，是在大树底下河头村大圩子。这里绿树成荫，空气清新，风景如画，是个好地方。我们这里住着辛勤的村民，他们在这里种田、栽树、建果园……每天清晨，很多人都会到菜市场去赶集。走在我们村的林子里，麻雀、黄鹂、喜鹊在林子里尽情歌唱。会感到心情舒畅，精神愉快。

我们这里如果要过什么节日或者生日都会大摆宴席，尽情吃、喝。

听了我的介绍，你心动了吧？来吧，到我的家乡来吧！

祝你生活愉快！

你的好朋友刘鹏程

环境保护

随着中国经济的发展，环境问题也越来越突出。保护环境，成了我们重要的职责。如果我们再让状况如此下去的话，留给我们后代的恐怕就不是一个健康的地球了。这给我们敲响了一个警钟，那就是要尽快实施环境保护的一些措施。最近，很多问题越来越明显的出此刻公众的眼中。食品安全问题、酸雨问题、水资源缺乏问题、气候问题，all of all，归根结底都是环境的问题。社会的发展就应成为环境保护的基石，我们就应用不断产生的新技术来保护环境。同时，环境的保护就应成为社会发展的一个重要的部分。综上所述，我认为环境的保护就应从两个方面来实施。On the one hand， 相应的法律就应被制定by政府。On the other hand， 环保意识就应在公众中间进行广泛的宣传。我相信如果我们始终把环保问题放在发展的第一位，我们的社会将更快更健康的发展。

As the developing of Chinese economy， the problem of protecting environment is being more and more important。 It is a crucial responsibility for us。 If we let this situation go as it is， it would be almost not a health earth for our offspring。 It sounds an alarm to us that we should execute the steps of protecting environment quickly。 Recently， a large number of problems appeared obviously， the security of food， the acid rain， the lack of water， the worse weather， all of all， it is the problem of environment in the final analysis。 The development of society should be the basic of protecting environment， we ought to protect environment by newer technology。 Meanwhile， the protecting environment should play an important role in the development of society。 Accordingly， I argue that we should protect environment in two aspects。 On the one hand， the related laws should be established by government。 On the other hand， the consciousness of protecting environment ought to be publicized in public。 I have an unshakable believe that if we put the problem of protecting environment be the first place， our society would have been developing fast and healthily。

My name  . I am from . There are people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He  a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She  also a busy woman. I have a older ster and a younger brother. My ster  a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in Englh. My brother  an elementary school student. He  8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wh I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that  why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me  introduce myself. My name is ,24. I come from Nanchang,the capital  of Jiangxi Province. I graduated from the ****** department of *****University  in July ,2001.In the past two years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate  examination while I have been teaching *****in NO.****middle School and I was a  head-teacher of a class in junior grade two.Now all my hard work has got a  result since I have a chance to be interview by you.

I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare  time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books,  especially those about ****.Frequently I exchange with other people by making  comments in the forum on line.In addition ,during my college years,I was once a  Net-bar technician.So, I have a comparative good command of network  application.I am able to operate the computer well.I am skillful in searching  for information in Internet.I am a football fan for years.Italian team is my  favorite.Anyway,I feel great pity for our countrys team.

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on  learning .Of course, if I am given a chance to study ****** in this famous  University,I will spare no effort to master a good command of advance  ******.

i"ll tell you an experience of myself happened last week. last thursday our school was tackling something about woking fou study. i wanted to have a try even though i knew the salary was so low and i had little chance,because the students who had the certificate were always thought to have priority to get the job. fortunately i was called at noon and a teacher said to me that she wanted me to work for her and asked if i could change my mind.

at that moment i was so excited that immediately i accepted her idea. but later on,she found me that i"m not a student,so i had little chance and suggest me to get one. then an idea occurred to me that i could call my father and ask him to send me the letter. at the same time i was told that i was admitted to the job and don"t need the certificate.

that time i forgot to remind my father,until the next day he called me that he had posted it and it would arrive in just one day. at that moment i was moved, and even moved into tears, because i knew my father was injured not long before,the process of helping me with the affairs was not so convenient for him.

but he tried his best to help me. sometimes we may complain about unsatisfying things around us,and blame them on our parents,sometimes they"ll be angry with us, and sometimes we can"t quite understand what they are thinking about. but on balance, almost every parent is selfless to his or her child. they are ready to offer everything to us when we are in bad situation. we used to sharing sorrow with them,but do not forget to share our happiness with them, perhaps they will be much happier than we are. so from now on, let"s care more about our parents and do not leave pity to them. that"s what i want to tell you today. thank you!

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer.I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I’ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I’ll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I’ll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.

家在岩坦，是一个美丽的山村。家门后就是一座小山，山上长满了树木，是个如诗如画的地方。

春姑娘踏着轻柔的脚步悄悄地在小山居住了下来，小山也从美梦中苏醒。清泉从山顶翻滚了下来，一路跑，一路叮咚、叮咚地唱着歌，好像是在欢迎春姑娘的到来呢！在这个时候，小青蛙准时地告别睡意，忙着去捉害虫。映山红也一群群地绽放出了笑脸，阳光撒下的光辉给映山红小姐们创造了露天阳光舞台，只要风儿拂过，她们便翩翩起舞。不但迷人，还充满了诗情画意。从远处望去，山上绿色泛滥，而那夺目的映山红给无边的绿色添了许多光彩！

夏婆婆生气了，就让大地热得像一个大火炉，而小山上却凉爽极了。如果爬到山顶的一棵松树下睡觉，凉爽的风儿就会轻轻地从你身边走过，你准会觉得像吃了一大块冰一样舒服。我经常和姐姐一起到小山上乘凉、玩耍呢！

秋姐姐来了，落叶便跟大树告别，飞落在大地妈妈的怀抱里，渐渐地睡着了，同时，给大地铺上了一层金色的被子，每当我走在落叶铺成的小路上，都觉得，我是秋天的保护神，来给小山献上了迷人的秋景。

冬天，冬爷爷吹来一阵阵寒流，山上的小溪、小池、泉水都被冻住了，小青蛙告别了好朋友，冬眠去了。小鸟儿飞到温暖的地方过冬去了。庄家躲在雪被子下面踏踏实实地睡着了。

这就是我那如诗如画的老家的小山。

My name is XXX, i wish to be your member one day, your english club is fomous for your amazing english. and i know your club also help people to learn english. do you hear the saying: never too old to learn? it means a person should learn knowlege till he /she is old . i have a warm heart to learn english since i touch it . please , let me be one of helpful members in your club. i am happy to hear from you.

我对我的家乡印象非常深刻，最让我记的清晰的是家乡四季的橙子树。

春天，橙子树开始发新芽，这些嫩绿的小叶芽调皮地从树枝里钻出来，一眼望见了这美丽的世界，它们欢乐地向我们招手，跳跃，一會儿又晃动着它们的小脑袋，好象在向我们赞美自己：“我又穿上一件新衣服了，瞧，我多漂亮呀!”春雨沙沙地下着，从这些调皮的小绿叶中冒出一个个白胖胖的小花蕾，花蕾长得很快，不几天就开花了。花儿一开，清白的花瓣就在绿叶的衬托下，显得格外美丽，那浓郁的花香不时招来几只小蜜蜂，它们在忙碌的传粉，采蜜。一阵微风拂过，花瓣片片落下，好象大雪纷飞，又象鹅毛飘扬。慢慢的，在花朵的底部，露出一个个小玻璃球那样大小的浅绿色的果实，这就是小橙子。

夏天到了，嫩叶渐渐长大，颜色逐渐变成深绿。叶子越长越多，一片一片地增加着，密密层层地挤在一起，几乎看不到树枝。小橙子不甘落后，也慢慢长大了，一个个圆溜溜，皮青青的，高高地挂在枝头。

转眼夏去秋来，橙子已经熟透了，那一个个橘红色的橙子夹在树叶里，十分耀眼，很远也能看见它。摘一个尝一尝，酸酸甜甜，好吃极了。

不知不觉，冬天来到了，西北风呼呼地吹，许多树木落光了叶子，但是家乡的橙子树却象苍翠的松柏，永不失风色。它顽强地与风雪搏斗，保持常青的绿色。

我爱我的家乡，更爱家乡的橙子树。

It still enjoys great reputation for culture. There are not only rich varieties of modern entertainment facilities, but also some special entertainment items only for Changchun, such as Yangge Dance and Errenzhuan, which is a song-and-dance duet in the Northeast of China. If you have the opportunity of doing some sightseeing in Changchun, I recommend you to taste my hometown’s specialties. There are two kinds of famous dishes in Northeast China: Stewed young chicken with mushroom and Stewed Pork with Vermicelli.

关于家乡长春的英文介绍长春也是一座文化名城，她不但拥有丰富的现代化娱乐设施，还拥有许多具有地方特色的娱乐项目，比如东北大秧歌和东北二人转。如果你有机会来我的家乡长春旅游的话，我愿意向你推荐我的两道家乡名菜：小鸡炖蘑菇和猪肉炖粉条。

I think reading as the most rewarding entertainment activities in my spare time.

Not only does reading provide me with a wide range of knowledge, it also broaden my mind towards the world. Different sorts of books contain various thoughts of life, work, relationships and cultures. When reading a novel, I can experience joys and tears of the characters through one story after another. When it comes to a biography ,I can even speak to the great person as if he stood towards me. Don’t always regard reading as tools to prepare for exams or show off how knowledgeable the person is.

A true reader is the person who shows knowledge naturally while communicate with others. Reading indeed has an important impact on people’s behavior, which is the reason why I will never give it up.

假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

注意：

1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours,

Li Hua

尊敬的先生/女士，

我写的更多的信息，在伦敦的一日游。

作为牛津大学的一名学生，我想知道你是否对学生有特殊的价格。至于你所收取的钱，它是否包括了所列地方的入场费？午饭怎么样？是否包括？还是我需要带上我自己的食物？

巡演将持续多久？既然我需要准备第二天的功课，我想知道的时间可以返回。再说，还有没有时间去购物？我真的很想看看伦敦的大商店。

你的，

李华

[高考英语满分作文：伦敦一日游

淄博位于山东中部鲁中山区与鲁北平原的交接地带，区位优势独特，南连泰山，北靠黄河，东临潍坊，西接泉城济南。淄博是山东省重要的交通枢纽城市，铁路贯通，公路纵横，交通方便，是国务院批准的山东半岛经济开放区城市。

淄博市是一座独具特色的组群式城市，现下辖张店区、淄川区、博山区、周村区、临淄区五个市辖区和桓台、高青、沂源三个县以及1个国家级高新技术产业开发区和1个省级文昌湖旅游度假区。“淄博”一词最初是“淄川”和“博山”两地的合称，后泛指作为城市名称。春秋战国时期，淄博曾是当时世界最大的城市；现今在省内仅次于济南、青岛，为山东第三大城市。淄博是中国五大陶瓷产地之一

2006年，山东省淄博市申报的“孟姜女传说”，入选第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录

2006年，山东省淄博市申报的“聊斋俚曲”，入选第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录

2006年，山东省淄博市申报的“五音戏”，入选第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录

2006年，山东省淄博市申报的“蹴鞠”，入选第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录

2008年，山东省淄博市申报的“牛郎织女传说”，入选第二批国家级非物质文化遗产名录

2008年，山东省淄博市申报的“周村烧饼制作技艺”，入选第二批国家级非物质文化遗产名录 2011年，山东省淄博市申报的“淄博陶瓷烧制技艺”，入选第三批国家级非物质文化遗产名录 张店: 荣宝斋原名“松竹斋”，约1672年开设于清代初期的北京，清光绪二十年（1894年）始名荣宝斋，前后延续有三百多年的历史。荣宝斋专注于文化事业，广罗文房珍玩，精藏名家巨作，发展民族艺术，广交文化名流，有“一斋珍品，百年风雅”的惊世美名，在海内外艺术收藏界颇有声誉。荣宝斋淄博分店与北京总店一脉相承，承袭了荣宝斋“珍稀为本，品位至上”的价值哲学和“保真、保退、保换”的信誉。这既满足了展示、鉴赏、购买、交流、拍卖等一站式经营，又充分发挥了荣宝斋市场龙头作用，形成了规模效应和品牌效应，成为山东省规模最大、档次最高、影响范围最广的文化、艺术交流中心。

临淄： 东部临淄区作为春秋五霸之首的齐国国都长达800年之久，是国家历史文化名城，也是齐文化旅游区，这里文物古迹浩繁，有“地下博物馆”之称，齐国历史博物馆、中国古车博物馆、东周殉马坑、田齐王陵、稷下学宫、孔子闻韶处、桓公台等景区（景点）蜚声中外。

战国时期，齐国成立的稷下学宫称世界东方第一所高等研究学府，囊括了百家争鸣的所有学派的代表人物，淄博市临淄区的稷下学宫，中国唯一一次百家争鸣的发生地

著名特产：淄博陶瓷、蹴鞠、临淄花边、陶瓷刀、博山琉璃、博山内画瓶、淄砚、周村丝绸、四官撑凳、临淄王牌马扎、扳倒井、蒲公酒、清真酱牛肉、周村烧饼、煮锅、卤汁羊肉、西河煎饼、马踏湖金丝鸭蛋、马踏湖白莲藕、宫家山药、博山酥锅、道口咸菜、黄河大米、王村醋、豆腐箱子、南韩豆腐干世界足球起源地【淄博市临淄区】

西部周村区是"古商城"旅游区，素有“金周村”、“旱码头”之誉，明清时代风格的古商城旧址被专家誉为展现中国民族商业发展的博物馆群。

中部淄川区是聊斋旅游区，既有"世界短篇小说之王"蒲松龄的故居，也有建造独特新颖的聊斋园。  南部博山区和沂源县是自然景观旅游区，山、水、林、泉、洞天然生成，自然资源特别是溶岩资源之丰富在我国北方罕见。

北部桓台、高青是湖泊民俗旅游区，这里碧水环绕，民风淳朴，一派“江北水乡”、“北国江南”之景象。

good morning, my admirable professors and my dear fellows. it’s my great honor to be here to introduce myself to all of you. my name is xing heng and i’m in my eighteen years old. i come fromxiamen, which is a famous and beautiful city. i strongly suggest you visiting there and i can be your guide if it’s convenient. after three years’ hard work, i am so excited that i am finally enrolled by my dreaming school,sichuanuniversityand be one of you. i am outgoing and i have many interests, such as playing basketball, football, and swimming, but i am only good at basketball.

i hope we can always play together in the next four years. computer science and technology is my favorite subject and i am sure that it’s also a promising area in the future, with the great development of computer science and our society. i am glad to be a classmate of you and i hope we can study and make progress together in the future. i greatly expect my life to be with you in the coming four years.

亲爱的李天佑同学：

你好！

以前，我们在ET思维训练营相遇，我们恰好在一个学校，你六年级了，还有一年我们就不能见面了。今年寒假，我欢迎你来我的家乡做客。

我的家乡就是景色美丽的鱼米之乡南京。这里有很多美好的景点，我家楼下就是漂亮的莫愁湖。一年四季美景依旧：春天，樱花和海棠开了，樱花白色的、嫩嫩的花儿落下来，在地面上如同几堆白雪。夏天，荷花开了，它们在荷叶这个大圆盘之间竞相开放，争奇斗艳。正所谓“接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红”。秋天，菊花开了，“飒飒西风满院栽，蕊寒香冷蝶难来”。菊花在这时散发出自己迷人的香味。冬天，腊梅开了，不惧寒冷的它们在冬天迸发出自己的色彩。“墙角数枝梅，凌寒独自开。遥知不是雪，为有暗香来。”

哦，对了，端午时，莫愁湖还会举行赛龙舟呢。每到这时，我总会贴在窗台上，看选手们各就各位，争先恐后地划着。每当冠军产生，我就在窗台上为他们祝贺，等待下一轮比赛。

南京还有很多小吃，小笼包就是一大特色。咬一小口，一吸，汤汁涌入口中，十分鲜美。再咬一口馅肉，一定让你赞不绝口！

听了我的介绍，你一定很想来吧！来吧，来我的家乡，我会热烈地欢迎你！

祝你生活愉快！

你的好朋友张墨言

我的家乡jius名副其实的建筑物圣地，有闻名世界的古建筑，也有漂亮、实用的现代建筑，许多靠人们勤劳的双手创造出的伟大的奇观，数不胜数，让人看得眼花缭乱。

那古碉有上千年的历史，风吹雨打，日晒雪飘，使它那原本坚硬，锋利的石块已成了如今饱经苍桑的面貌。历史可以见证，它极奇坚固，极奇珍贵，它的精神，永远值得我们学习。很久以前，古碉房jius土司们居住的房屋，打仗时就在古碉里射击。更令人意想不到的jius在那连拖拉机也没有的年代竟出现了这样伟大的奇迹，这也jius众人都称好的原因吧。古建筑里还有许多名胜，民间藏房、嘉绒藏寨……家乡的古碉名扬四海，一年来观赏它的游客成千上万。

说起丹巴的现代建筑，比不上华丽的都市里的高楼大厦，但我以为，已经jius很好了，不仅舒适、漂亮，还具有冬暖夏凉的特点。比如农村里的房屋吧，春天不冷不热，夏天又凉快又清爽，秋天可以晒粮食，做农活，堆积稻草，冬天关起门来也很暖和。

家乡的建筑千奇百怪，雄伟壮观，我家我的家乡，我为有这样的故乡而感到骄傲。

1. To cherish the enviroment is to love ourselves.

爱护环境就是爱护我们自己。

2.Water is the source of ourlives

水是生命之源。

3.I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation

我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状。

4.Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution.

我们政府正努力制定措施与污染作斗争。

5.We are sure that well win the battle.

我们坚信我们能赢得战斗。

6.Its high time that we should protect our enviroment from being polluted.

是时候我们应该防止环境污染了。

7. Keep our mountains green，the wate clean，and the sky blue.

使我们山更绿，水更清，天更蓝。

8.However，natural resources are not inexhaustible.some reserves are already on the brink of exhaustion.

然而自然资源并不是无穷无尽的，一些储量已经到了穷尽的边缘。

9.If we do something with no thought for the furture . The later generation would be in danger.

如果我们不为将来考虑，后代就会受到威胁。

10.Our earths days are numbered without urgent help.

没有及时的帮助我们的地球就屈指可数了。

11(Sth.)are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blink eye to them.

如果我们继续睁一只眼闭一只眼的话，……一定会有恶劣的后果。

Home of the most round moon, home of the most tea, home of the most alcohol, home food, the most impressive.

I was a Hakka. I left my hometown Meizhou from my childhood. I followed my parents to this strange land and opened up our new home. As I grew up in this new environment, the impression of my hometown was gradually blurred. But in my mind, it cant forget the hometown dish of my childhood taste buds.

Many home dishes are famous far and near, and those special flavors have attracted a lot of people. One of the most famous dishes is "Mei Cai Braised Pork", my dad is a generation old Hakka love. Although it sounds like this dish seems to be difficult to get in good taste, but this dish is representative of Hakka peoples diligence and frugality quality.

My father said, "our hometown is Mei Mei Cai Braised Pork" single dishes there are many complicated steps. When the farming harvest, the farmers harvest the mustard, then put it in the sun to matured, and then take the food to the ground, arrange it, and sprinkle a lot of salt on it. According to my father, when they were young, they were trampling the dishes with clean feet after the salt was sprinkled. After the tread, put it in a vessel to a degree, then take the steam, then take the sun... So the three steamed three sun, the earthly plum dried vegetables!

"Mei Cai Braised Pork" another character is meat, meat to choose "pork fat pork". Making this dish, put the Mei food dry cleaning, cut thin pieces, the fat basin under the streaky pork belly pieces, Mei dish, steamed for a long time, fat oil seeping into the plum dried vegetables, plum dried vegetables fragrance dipped into fat, opened a pot. Hot, delicious food Braised Pork pan mei! A pot of delicious food Braised Pork Mei can eat for a long time, because the salty, not perishable. A small pinch to the bowl, the fragrance of the four spilled, can pick up a few rice, that taste, to taste to understand. Such a dish reflects the diligence and frugality of the Hakka people, which is the favorite of the Hakka people.

When I heard my Dad talking about his hometown dishes, dad was fun, innocent, and rich in homesickness. In my fathers age, and cant eat "Mei Cai Braised Pork", to wait until the new year will kill pigs, so have a good heart is also waiting for Spring Festival to eat.

In my opinion, McDonalds and Kentucky fast food are far more infatuated than this dish. Maybe it is because I have not experienced the father of that era, cannot understand a dish not easily won; perhaps because there is no contact with the home, can not understand the charm of home cooking; perhaps because now no children of that age as difficult as father, do not know how precious home cooking. But from my fathers love for home food, I read the charm of my hometown cuisine, and I also fell in love with home food.

Home of the most round moon, home of the most tea, home wine is the most alcohol, home food is the most lingering.

good morning, ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls. now ,it"s my turn. my name is edgar, a high school student. i am very honored to be here to give you a speech. also it"s a good chance for me to improve my english. i hope i can make a good performance today. the topic of my speech is "after studying here".

before i came here,i can never imagine that i can learn so much knowledge about other countries, which can"t be got from my books in school. three months ago, i took my first class. unfortunately, i felt so embarrassed, because i even can"t speak any words, though i know i really love english .

after that, i took some of my tutor"s advice and previewed the lesson that i’ll learn. what’s more, in every class, i just try my best to say as much as possible. now,i can only remember it"s a really hard time. what’s worse, i had to go to my high school and went there at the same time.

after several weeks, i began to get used to the atmosphere in web .at least i"m not afraid to speak in front of my tutor and foreign teachers.

during web’s period,i found i had improved a lot, both physically and mentally. for example, how to be a confident person, how to plan for my future. and the most important is that i have learnt how to communicate with others, which is a necessary skill. nowadays studying is not the only thing that we high school students should do, there are some more important things we have ignored.

first, i am grateful for my parents. they have spent so much money for me, but never ask for anything in return. i really know how hard it is to work on such living conditions.

now it"s time to introduce my tutor sally. it was she that led me to the right studying here. it was she that helped me deal with all kinds of annoying things. also there are some other teachers that i appreciate, especially laura and anita. of course, i like to take foreign teachers" classes. anyway, thanks all of you!

i know i am young; there is a long way in my life. i have to face the difficulties and solve them by myself. but i know i must keep on my dream, i agree that if you put your mind to, you can accomplish anything.

i know i"m not the best ,but i"m the most diligent one。i hope you can remember me ,an ordinary boy.

假设你是李华，你的英国网友Peter希望了解一下我国高考英语试卷（NMET）中的“短

文改错”（Error Correction）题型的情况。请你写一封回复邮件。并特别强调自己某一次因为没有严格按照要求答题被扣掉了本可得到的7分。

注意：1．词数100左右

2．内容请参照本卷该大题内容。

3．生词：（打）勾：tick 分：point 逻辑（的）：logic

Hi, Peter:

Thanks for your e-mail. Here I’m going to tell you what you asked about.

Error Correction, as the 1st section of Written Part of NMET, mainly tests the mastery of the use of words and grammar of English. The understanding of the given text is course important to the performance.

There are 10 numbered lines, each of which may have one mistake. You have to decide firstly whether there is a mistake or not. If not, put a tick in the numbered blank. If there is a mistake, you may have to add a word, cross out a word, or change word. You have to find out the mistakes in the use of words and/or grammar. Sometimes there may be a logic problem, which would be the most difficult.

Last time I got 7 points less than expected. Why? I didn’t put the answers strictly following the rule, although I did know how to do it.

Anything still unclear? Just write to me.

嗨，彼得：

谢谢你的邮件。在这里我要告诉你，你问。

误差校正，作为高考英语笔试部分第一部分，主要测试词汇和语法的掌握英语的使用。对文本的理解是很重要的。

一共有10株，其中可能有一个错误。首先你要确定是否有错误。如果没有，空格的空白。如果有一个错误，你可以添加一个词，划掉一个字，或改变的话。你要找到的词语或语法错误使用。有时可能会有一个逻辑问题，这将是最困难的。

上次我得了7分，比预期的少。为什么？我没有把答案的严格规则，虽然我不知道如何去做。

还不清楚什么呢？就给我写信。

Having a good nights sleep at grandmas house is definitely the best time to

get up in the morning. I opened my sleep mengs eyes, big had a stretch, casual

to took a glance outside the window, but I felt very comfortable: see, the green

fields like wool blankets, seem very soft. There are dozens of muddy paths in

the field, separated by large peanut leaves.

There are several apricot trees along the edge of the field, and the yellow

apricot trees are full of trees. The morning dew sticks to the apricot, which

makes it look lovely and inviting. From time to time, a few fat sparrows were

coming, and standing in the trees, chirping and whispering to each other; Or one

or two big black birds, "woah, wow," and fly to the distance; Because of several

nearby streams and ponds, also often have egrets pass by, so they are flapping

wing of the white clean, gracefully and rest a while in the field, or fly

directly to the side of the stream of fish to eat.

What a beautiful view! I kicked my slippers and walked slowly up to the

field. The smell of incense came to me, I was intoxicated, I can not help

holding a side of the MM and JJ, dancing. We whirled around in the field like a

tornado, and the mud was whirling around and we were surrounded by mud...

In the afternoon, I first saw the sunset glow. Oh, that was a masterpiece

of nature! The exotic glow of the glow of the earth, the cunning cloud, stole

the suns gold gauze, triumphantly rode in the wind driven carriage, into the

sunset clouds to show off their charm. The bright sunset clouds, like the red

rose with crystal clear dew, open with enthusiasm; Like a girls bashful face,

full of blush; Like a girls clothes, light and floating... It has red, yellow

and purple colors, and sometimes it is a lovely red scarf, and sometimes it is a

red mane horse with sprinted feet.

Beautiful home, beautiful green field, I - love - you.