关于朋友的英语作文初一（热门20篇）

In the last century, the government carried out the policy of family

planning to control the increasing population. So most families have only one

child, but recently, a new policy has been announced and people can have the

second child. It sounds like the good news for the family, as the only child can

have a sibling to company. While for some parents, they seem to be not the

qualified parents. A boy complained that his parents’ second child was the smart

phone, because they lowed down their heads all the time. Many parents did not

realize the lack of communication with their children. If they want another

child, they’d better learn to communicate their kids first.

I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven years old. He comes from Beijing.

我有几个朋友。王麟是我最好的朋友。他十一岁。他是从北京来的。

Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.

王麟三年前来到这里。他与他的父母。他父亲是一名工程师，母亲是中学教师。他没有兄弟姐妹。他是父母唯一的孩子。

We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made GREat proGREss in our studies.

我们是同班同学，所以我们看到对方。他很喜欢英语，我擅长数学。我们总是互相帮助。我们都在学习上取得了很大的进步。

I like to make friends, I can share my happiness and sorrow with friends.

Friends are very important part of our lives, without them, I will be very

lonely. I learn it when I was very small. It was Friday, I went to school to

join the English contest, before I went into the classroom, I found I did not

bring the admission card, I felt so worried, without admission card, I could not

walk into the classroom. My friend Li looked at me and asked me what happened, I

told him the truth, then he asked me to stay here and he rushed to our

classroom. Ten minutes later, he came back with my admission card. I was so

thankful, friends are very important.

Hello everyone! My name is Zhang Li, I am twelve years old, and I am in Class four, Grade one. I like playing football, running, swimming and drawing. Yang Hua is my friend, he is my desk mate. He is taller than me. We have the same hobbies. We often play football or go swimming together after school. This is me and my friend. We would like to be your friends too.

在我成长的过程中，我认识了许多朋友，其中有一个和我形影不离的好朋友--曾姿怡。她长得很漂亮，中等个子，有一头乌黑浓密的秀发，圆圆的脸盘上有一双水灵灵的大眼睛，长长的睫毛，高挺的鼻梁和一双能说会道的嘴。

她是个乐于助人的人。在暑假中，我和她一起坐公交车出去，在等车的时候，我们看到了一辆大巴车上有一位四五十岁的人正从车上下来，他的皮肤被太阳晒得黑黝黝的，只穿了一个背心和一条短裤，手里拿着几根长长的木棍，一个好像很重的油漆桶和几个刷子，可能是来打工的吧。因为东西太多，所以他下车后，在过马路的时候先把木棍拿了过来，而把油漆桶留在了原地，我去叫曾姿怡。

可她却完全不理会我，飞一般地冲到马路中央，吃力地把那个人的油漆桶搬了过来，一辆车飞快地从那条路驶过，那个人也忙向曾姿怡道谢，但就在这时，公交车也过去了，我并不怪她，因为她既帮助了那个人，又避免了一次不必要的车祸的发生，我真想为她点赞、喝彩!

她还是个乐于助人的人。有一次，我和她约好了一起做作业，但她临时有事出去了，我本以为她不会来和我一起写作业了，没想到，不到十分钟她就回来了，我疑惑不解地问：“你不是出去了吗，这么快就回来了?”她说：“我本来是要出去地，可是一想到和你有约在先，我就回来了。”我开心地说：“你真是一个讲信用的人啊，我要向你学习!”

她在学习上十分认真。七年级的一次数学课上，老师在黑板上写了一道特别难的奥数题，老师提问了很多好学生都没能回答上来，老师的目光不时向下方望去，不想错过每个举手的人，只见曾姿怡眉头微蹙，绞尽脑汁地冥思苦想，还不时在纸上演算着……

终于，她长长地舒了一口气，把手举的高高的，老师示意她站起来回答，她便把每个步骤的意思和分析的过程说的清清楚楚、一字不差，老师的脸上露出了笑容，同学们也都微微点头，老师表扬了曾姿怡，同学们还给她鼓了掌，曾姿怡只是谦虚地笑了笑，坐下了。

她还有许多好品质：拾金不昧、关心班集体……值得我学习。我为有这样的好朋友而感到骄傲、自豪!

A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生，有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友，将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了，和我俩个好友的交往也会少了，所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧：一晃俩年过去了，我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初，你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清，你时常问我，我也耐心的告诉你，就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过，一起哭过，吵过架生过气，还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴，我永远也不回忘记。

易媱：在我的印象中你的脾气很好，也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉，我就会跑过去捏你的脸，你总是温柔的一笑，这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴，没有朋友就没有今天的我，真的感谢朋友分支持，也许我们会分开，但是缘分。

小学英语作文:我的朋友(My friend)

I have a friend. Her name s Xuke. She has two black eyes, her hair is not so long, she s not tall and not short. She is a teacher. She likes many colors, such as white, pink, purple, blue, yellow and so on.And she also likes pets very much. She has a lovely little dog, its name s Janny. It has white hair and always smile to me.

[描写朋友的英语作文200

At college, i missed my parents a lot. as the term was drawing to an end, i eagerly looked forward to going home. and i planned to do a thousand and one things during the vacation. above all, i wanted to help my mother with housework. i also wished to read many hooks which my teachers had recommended. however, at home, my mother would never let me do anything. she completely deprived me of sharing her work. as soon as i opened a book to read,she would sit down beside me and ask me about all kinds of things at the college. to please her,i told her one thing after another,and soon i forgot all about books. even when i was actually reading,she would, now and then,insist that i should eat an egg or drink a cup of tea. when i left home at the end of the vacation, not a thing in my plan had been carried out. but i felt very happy. i believed much more deeply than before in the old saying: home, sweet home. there’s no place like home!

The clouds of heaven is more and more close, it is becoming more and more dark. As a "bang" sound ray, a flash of lightning ripped the sky, the rain going underground.

I lie prone on the windowsill, looking at rain on the window glass "PaPa". Suddenly, there was a young song; "Going to rain, I see you are running, looked at day, he reluctantly TanTanQi shook his head." Heard this song, reminds me of a good friend, can be easily. She is a smart, lovely, kind girl. She especially loves singing and dancing. In the rain "emphasizes" is her favorite song. Previously, the two of us together to play, when it rains, she loves to hum the song. I often smile, she asked her why she always sing the same song. She told me that she was born on a rainy day, when I was a child, her mother always sing this song before she sleep, so she have special feelings for the song, and so every rainy day, always involuntarily hum the song. She also told me some funny stories about her childhood.

Childhood home keep a dog, her name is called "jia jia". Jia jia is a golden retriever collie from Britain. On one occasion, their whole family go out to play, forgot to close jia jia. When I come home at night, see home by jia jia at sixes and sevens. Easy to return to his room, he found the bed has a bubble shit, she suddenly received. Upon hearing this, I couldnt help to laugh.

As soon as I smile, I wake up from the memory. Can be easily transferred to other schools already has more than a year, I really miss her! Dont know when to see her again.

天上的乌云越来越密，天也越来越黑。随着“轰”一声响雷，一道闪电撕裂了天空，雨哗啦啦地下了起来。

我趴在窗台前，看着雨水打在窗户的玻璃上“叭叭”直响。突然，传来一阵稚嫩的歌声;“哗啦啦下雨了，我看见大家么都在跑，无奈何看着天，叹叹气把头摇。”听到了这首歌，让我想起了一位要好的朋友——易可。她是一个聪明、可爱、善良的小姑娘。她特别爱唱歌、跳舞。《雨中即景》是她最喜欢的一首歌。以前，我们俩在一起玩，每当下雨的时候，她总爱哼这首歌。我还经常笑她，问她为什么老爱唱同一首歌。她告诉我，她是在下雨天出生的，小时候，她妈妈总是唱这首歌哄她睡觉，所以她对这首歌特别有感情，因此每到下雨天的时候，总不由自主地哼出这首歌。她还告诉我关于她小时候的一些有趣的故事。

她小时候家里养过一条小狗，名字叫“佳佳”。佳佳是一条来自英国的金毛牧羊犬。有一次，她们全家出去玩，忘记了把佳佳关好。晚上回家的时候，看到家里被佳佳弄得乱七八糟。易可回到自己的房间一看，床上有一大泡狗屎，她一下子蒙了。我听后，不由得捧腹大笑。

我一笑，就从回忆中清醒过来。易可转学到别的学校已经有一年多了，我可真想念她啊!不知道什么时候才能再见到她。

She, her name is Li _. She is my good friend.

Her hair is black and has a braid. Her red face glowed like a ripe apple in

September; There are also a pair of childish eyes decorated with long eyelashes

on his face, like two crystal grapes. Look, when she smiles, her white teeth

show up!

We often play a game called "horse riding". This game can be played by 4-8

people. At this time, Yu Hanyu and Hu Shuxiang also want to play. Of course, we

are very welcome! The first is grouping. Li zhangchi and I are in a group, and

they are in a group. I am a galloping "fine horse", running with her.

Originally, they were ahead. I found that Li zhangchi didnt hold on. I said to

her, "hold on, Im going to rush." I fired like an "arrow" and pursued them

closely. At the critical moment, we caught up with them and shouted happily, "we

win!"

Its nice to have a little partner!

她，她叫李__。她是我的好朋友。

她的头发乌黑乌黑的，还扎了一条辫子。她红嘟嘟的脸蛋闪着红光，就像九月里熟透了的苹果;脸上还有一双带有稚气的，被长长的睫毛装饰起来的眼睛，就像两颗水晶葡萄。瞧，她笑起来洁白的牙齿就露了出来!

我们经常玩一个游戏，叫做“骑马”。这个游戏是4-8人可以玩的。这时，正好余翰宇和胡舒翔也想玩，我们当然十分欢迎啦!首先是分组，我和李张弛一组，他们俩一组。我是一匹奔驰的“骏马”，带着她飞奔。本来，他们领先，我发现李张弛没抓紧，我对她说：“抓紧，我要冲了。”我就“箭”一样地发射了过去，紧追不舍，在关键时刻，我们追上了他们，欢呼雀跃地喊道：“我们赢啦!”

有小伙伴的感觉真好啊!

朋友是人人不可缺乏的人生交际大事，每一个都有一个好朋友，没有朋友的人会很孤单，我也不例外。

我有一个十分要好的朋友，他的名字叫吴超，是我的同班同学，以前还是小学同学，只不过那时还不认识。到了中学，遇见了他，和他一聊，才知道什么叫相见恨晚。吴超长得很精神，高高的鼻梁，炯炯有神的大眼睛。我和他上学同路，所以彼此就会更了解对方。我们经常会和沈炜麟、曹元成、郑宇辉、陈翔等人打篮球。

令我对吴超印象最深的一件事是：有一次，我们几个聚在一起打篮球，我和吴超、曹元成一队，PK另外三个人，他用飞一般的速度来了一个三步上篮，陈翔冲了上来，撞在了他身上。对方却大声地说：“你犯规啦、你犯规啦。”我们便和他争吵了起来“明明是你自己撞上来的，怎么是我犯规呀，你怎么这样?”就这样，我们便吵了半天。接下来，吴超出面说：“不就是一个罚球吗?就给他们吧。”陈翔罚号球后，比赛继续进行。最后就差那么一分，我们输了。这时，吴超说由于我的缘故，我们输了。”我们谁都没说话，可都在心里佩服吴超的做法。

我爱我的同学们，就算分开了，我也不会忘记他们的。

Hi!大家好！现在给你们介绍我的朋友。我有很多朋友。学语文时，我有个朋友叫玛丽。学数学时，我有个朋友叫杰克。学英语时，我也有个好朋友。她是我最好的朋友，我非常喜欢她。她每天帮我学习英语，教我怎样读英语，怎样写英语，怎样说英语……如果我有问题，我就问她，她会认真回答我。有时她教我一些句子，这些句子通常告诉我怎样做个好学生。有时她告诉我关于世界的知识。现在你知道谁是我最好的朋友了吗？对了，她就是《英语辅导报》。

Hi,everyone! I introduce my friend to you now. I have a lot of friends. In my Chinese lesson, I have a friend called Mary. In my maths lesson, I have a friend called Jack. In my English lesson, I have a good friend,too. She is my best friend. I like her very much. She helps me study English every day. She tells me how to read English, how to write English, how to speak English If I have some questions, I will ask her and she will answer me carefully.

Sometimes,I will ask her and she will answer me carefully. Sometimes,she tells me something about the world. Now, do you know who my best friend is? Right,she is English Coaching Paper!

我有一个朋友。她叫刘畅：她是一个快乐的女孩，今年12岁。

我们在同二个班。

刘畅高而且漂亮。她有一双黑色的大眼睛和一张小嘴。她看起来像一个可爱的娃娃。

她最喜欢蓝色。她的衣服大部分是蓝色的。她说：“海和天是蓝色的，它们很干净”。她很喜欢游泳，而且游得很好。

她一周有许多事情要做。从星期一到星期五她必须去上学。

周末，她帮妈妈做家务。她是个好女孩。

刘畅有许多朋友。我是其中之一，我们在学校互相帮助。她帮我做功课，我教她打篮球。我们课下经常在一起做游戏。

我喜欢我的朋友。

I have a friend. Her name is Liu Chang. She is a happy girl. She is twelve years old. We are in the same class.

Liu Chang is tall and beautiful. She has two big black eyes and a small mouth. She looks like a lovely doll.

She likes blue best. Most of her clothes are blue. She says, “The sea and the sky are blue. They are very clean. ” She likes swimming,and she can swim very well.

She has many things to do in a week. From Monday to Friday she must go to school. At weekends she helps her mother with the housework. She is a good girl.

Liu Chang has many friends. Im one of them,and we help each other at school. She helps me with my lessons and I help her with playing basketball. We often play games together after class.

I like my friend.

[英语作文翻译我的好朋友

I have a good friend.Her name is Huang Jiayan .She was twelve years

old.She is very polite and helpful.She has two big eyes,a small nose and long hair .Her hobby is singing ,dancing,read books and surfing the internet.

This is my good friend.

Mom was always right in my eyes before. This is what mom implanted into my mind. Every sentence she said to me was correct. So I got used to following her words. Then there came one thing lately, which made mom herself admit that she was wrong. The fact goes like this. Although mom loves me, she doesn’t like girls. So she wanted all along to have a boy.

But what she did violated the birth control policy of China. She was seriously condemned. It seemed that mom’s dream of having a boy had come to nothing. Mom, I really thought you were right at the beginning, but I was wrong.

[I Thought You Were Always Right初一英语作文

In this chapter of the novel，Jane met her new friend-Helen。What Helen said really impressed me a lot，driving me think deeply。

“Life is too short to hate other people。We all have faults，but when we die，only the pure flame of the spirt will be left。Thats why I never think of revenge，I never consider life unfair。I live in calm，looking forward to the end。"

Honesly speaking，I plained about my life or people around me now and again，wodering why it was always unfair to me。However，think it over，I shouldt have been so mean。Time flies。We need to expand the width of life instead of wasting time to think about something meaningless。

My Friend(我的朋友)

Zhang Dong is my best friend。 He entered our class last semester。 He is a

boy。 Both of us are good at English， so we often have a chat in English in our

spare time。 After school， we often play football together on the playground。 He

runs so fast that I can not catch up with him。 He is an excellent student。 He

not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest。 He

loves popular songs and also classical music。

There are three people in his family and he is the only child。 His father

is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress。 Though Zhang Dongs

family is wealthy， he is usually simply dressed。 He has a dream which is to be a

lawyer。

Such is my friend， a clever and kind boy。 He is highly praised by the

teachers and students。

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班的，他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时光用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得个性快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生，他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐，也喜欢古典音乐。

他家有三口人，他是独生子。父亲是个医生，母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他有一个梦想，就是将来当个律师。

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。老师和同学们都喜欢他。

导语：理想的朋友存在于人们的心中。他们应该勤奋，成功和忠诚。当你需要帮助的时候，他们会站在你身边，很高兴伸出援助之手。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Friends can be classified into two kinds, good friends and evil friends. Evil friends lead us astray and may destroy our life, while good ones drive us towards the right and make our life successful.

Two of them exist in our daily life. However, ideal friends exist in people s mind. They should be diligent, successful and loyal. When you need help, they will stand beside you and be delighted to give you a hand. Also you can share your happiness and sorrow together.

In my opinion, friends can share something but they also should keep their own secrets. So I wish my friends wouldn t interfere in my privacy too much. On the other hand, my friends should have Something in common with me, at the same time something special. In this way we can attract each other and learn from each other.

参考翻译

朋友可以分为两种，好朋友和坏朋友。邪恶的朋友会引导我们误入歧途，并可能摧毁我们的生活，而善良的人驱使我们走向正确，使我们的生活成功。

其中两个存在于我们的日常生活中。然而，理想的朋友存在于人们的心中。他们应该勤奋，成功和忠诚。当你需要帮助的时候，他们会站在你身边，很高兴伸出援助之手。你也可以一起分享你的快乐和悲伤。

在我看来，朋友可以分享一些东西，但他们也应该保持自己的秘密。所以我希望我的朋友不会干涉我的隐私太多。另一方面，我的朋友应该和我有一些共同点，同时也有一些特别的东西。这样我们才能互相吸引，互相学习。

【篇一】

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing.

She is a clever girl. she likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much..

我有一个好朋友。她是一个美丽的女孩。她有又长又黑的头发,两个黑色的大眼睛和一个红色的嘴巴。她的声音是更好的。她擅长唱歌。

她是一个聪明的女孩。她喜欢读书,玩电脑游戏和象棋。她还好。她经常帮助我们。我们班的同学非常喜欢她.

【篇二】

My best friend is very beautiful.She has long staight hair.She is tall and thin.She doesnt like others girl.She likes wearing jeans best.I never look her wearing dresses and high-heeled shoes.We know when we in the senior middle school.We are all like to go to the movies and listen to muisc.We go shopping together when we have the time.

Thats my best friend!

我最好的朋友非常漂亮,她有一头乌黑亮丽的直发(长的),很高很瘦,和其他女孩子不一样,她喜欢穿牛仔裤而不是裙子,我从没见过她穿裙子和高跟鞋,我们高中时认识,爱好一样，都喜欢看电影和听音乐。当我们有时间时，我们就会一起去逛街.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

My friend is Chen Haotian. Although he and I cant say what is iron man, but the relationship is good.

He looks thin, looking elegant, is a gentleman. He read a lot, belong to our class reading celebrity.

His favorite rubber war games. Every day at noon to eat a meal, we can play with rubber. Rubber war is everyone to fight with his rubber, whose rubber fell to the ground first, who even loses. This game is divided into two modes: fighting mode and monsters. Fighting modes are fighting each other, and monsters mode is a few people together to kill a giant rubber. Because Chen Haotian rubber is a little small, so, every time he lost soon, but he still loves the game.

Day at noon, we again as usual, eat a meal together play, rubber war play today is monsters model - a giant city in ruins. Results play a mess, noisy. Ze-yu wang to rock the boat at this moment, is always crowded, I said: "dont play with you, would you please go away." He also ignore, also said to Chen Haotian: "look, this is the bomb, who touch me, who is dead!" Chen Haotian and he said to him: "please go away!" Ze-yu wang cheekily said: "this is a meteor shower, who hit, who died." Chen Haotian finally fire, said: "dont play!" So, we have to take our different things away. You see, he devoured are very gentleman poise yo.

Another time, we play rubber wars, Chen Haotian remembered the last time rowdy scenes, he said to you: "please turn the volume to 1-3 degrees, and my voice now." His sense of humor, to present the students laughed.

This is my good friend Chen Haotian - a very gentleman poise, and funny boy. Hope I can more deep friendship with him!

我的朋友是陈昊天。我和他虽然说不上是什么铁哥们，但关系还是不错的。

他长得瘦瘦的，看起来文质彬彬，很是绅士。他读书很多，属于我们班的读书名人。

他最喜欢玩橡皮大战游戏。每天中午吃过饭，我们就一起玩橡皮大战。橡皮大战就是每个人用自己的橡皮来斗，谁的橡皮先掉在地上，谁就算输。这种比赛分成两种模式：打斗模式和杀怪模式。打斗模式是互相打斗，而杀怪模式是几个人一起杀一个巨大的橡皮。因为陈昊天的橡皮有点小，所以，每次他都很快败下阵来，但他仍然十分喜爱这个游戏。

一天中午，我们又像往常一样，吃过饭一起玩橡皮大战，今天玩的是杀怪模式——巨人城废墟。结果玩得乱七八糟，闹哄哄的。这时王泽宇来捣乱，老是挤我，我说：“没和你玩，请你走开。”他理也不理，又对陈昊天说：“看，这个是炸弹，谁碰我，谁就死!”陈昊天又对他说：“请你走开!”王泽宇嬉皮笑脸地说道：“这是流星雨，砸到谁，谁就死。”陈昊天终于火了，说：“不玩了!”于是，我们只好各拿各的东西走了。你瞧，他发火都很有绅士风度哟。

还有一次，我们玩橡皮大战，陈昊天想起了上次闹哄哄的场景，就对大家说：“请各位把音量调到1——3度，和我现在说话的声音一样。”他的幽默，令在场的同学都哈哈大笑了起来。

这就是我的好朋友陈昊天——一个很有绅士风度，又很幽默的男孩。希望我和他的友谊能越加深厚!

At the beginning of the summer vacation, our family of three returned to my

hometown, Shehong.

Back in Shehong, we stayed at my grandmothers house. One Friday morning,

my brother and I made an appointment to catch cicadas in the bushes downstairs

at their house because they have a lot of cicadas there. Before night, I rushed

over and saw that my brother was already there waiting for me, with a prepared

pocket in his hand.

We walked cautiously into the bushes, for fear that our every move would

disturb the cicadas on the trees. At this time, the cicada was screaming

"knowing" and "knowing", as if they were holding a wonderful concert. I walked

very carefully under a big tree and found a cicada lying in the middle of the

tree pole, screaming happily! I grabbed it after thinking about it, and covered

it with my hands. I wasnt nervous before, but at this time I was extremely

nervous, and my heart was jumping like a little rabbit, for fear that the cicada

would fly away all of a sudden. As a result, as soon as my hand touched the

branch, the cicada flapped its wings and flew away nimbly. The elder brother

said: "Look at me! I can definitely catch the cicada." While talking, the elder

brother found another cicada on the tree. He raised his hand high, moved his arm

gently, and when he was about a decimeter from the cicada, his brother suddenly

covered it, and suddenly he covered the cicada in the palm of his hand and put

it in a bag. Next, my brother caught five cicadas in the same way. I really envy

my brothers ability to catch cicadas.

Watching my brother catch so many cicadas, can I not feel itchy? So I said

to my brother: "Brother, you can rest for a while, Ill catch it." I handed the

bag to my brother and learned his method. After a while, I caught one. Before

long, we had more than twenty cicadas in our bags.

Watching these cicadas stay in the bag obediently, my brother and I both

laughed happily, and the cheerful laughter echoed in the trees for a long

time.