关于朋友的英语作文初一【汇总20篇】

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived，and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

在我们班，同学们都叫我“小翻译”。其实，我以前的英语成绩是一塌糊涂。

记得那一次，我的英语测试只考了58分。卷子发下来后，老师要求拿回家让父母签阅。不用说，父母看了少不了一顿打哭。没办法，我只好去求外公了。

“外公，我知道您最疼薇薇了，求您帮我签个字，好吗？”

外公接过卷子一看，眉头皱了起来。“薇薇，外公可以帮你签这个字，不过外公有一个要求。”

“没问题，只要您能签字，十个要求我也答应您。”

“从今天开始，外公和你一起学英语，谁要是没学好，就由对方处罚。”

“好呀，一言为定。” 我满口答应了外公的要求。心想：一个老头子了，我就不信你还能记得住ABC！？

然而，我错了，真的错了。

那是一个夏天，正值高温季节。白天，火辣辣的太阳把大地烤得像个火炉。直到晚上，也没有一丝儿风，我们坐在阳台上边摇着蒲扇边谈话。唯独外公一个人聚精会神地坐在书桌前学习英语。豆大的汗珠从他的额头上滚落下来，但他顾不得这些，仍然埋头奋笔疾书。

突然，外公的眉毛紧锁起来，啊，原来他有一个单词背不出,急得汗一个劲地流下来。我走上前去用关切的口吻说：“外公，先歇歇吧！”“不，”外公说，“你先去吧，我写完再来！”就这样，外公翻呀查呀，渐渐地夜深了，我们都入睡了。

半夜里，我醒了，蒙胧中看见灯还亮着，书桌前有个背影，不停地写着什么，汗水已经湿透了背心。我定睛一看，啊，是外公，他怎么还没唾？我看了一眼挂钟，已经深夜12点多了。外公的旁边还放着只脸盆，里面盛着冷水，一条毛巾，啊，这是外公用冷毛巾来降温呢！

外公的学习精神深深感染了我。我暗自下决心，一定要发奋学好英语，绝不辜负外公对我的一片苦心。从这以后，我的课余时间就和ABC交上了“朋友”。在往返学校的路上，在课间休息的时间里，在完成家庭作业之后……我把所学的英语单词，一个又一个背记在心里。这一招，还是外公教我的，他说，学好英语的基础，首先就是熟记单词。一天又一天过去了，我对英语越来越感兴趣了，还时常用英语和外公进行简单的对话，英语成绩自然上了一个新台阶。

现在我不在害怕英语考试了，每次考试之后，老师都会在班上点名表扬我。看着同学们那羡慕的眼神，其实我心里比谁都清楚，我今天的成绩，全都是因为我有一个好外公！

[初一作文：我和外公学英语

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班。他是一个男孩。我们俩都擅长英语，因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后，我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得那么快，我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生。他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐和古典音乐。

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.

他家有三口人，他是独生子。他父亲是医生，母亲是北京歌剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕，他通常只穿。他有一个梦想，就是成为一名律师。

Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

这就是我的朋友，一个聪明、友好的男孩。他是由教师和学生的高度赞扬。

This holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, computer and word and I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, but my mother said to me:“go on, you must belive that you can do it.” So I have to try. Now my English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me. Practices makes perfect.

It s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It s easier to make friends when you have similar interests. Don r be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the thing

It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.

Don’r be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best.

Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.

Be a good listner. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.

Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.

[英语作文如何交朋友

Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the

beautiful city of Rizhao.

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject

is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I

believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im

kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good

friends!

OK. This is me .A sunny girl.

My best friends name is Mary.Shes a beautiful girl.She lives in Xu Zhou,but she isnt a Xu Zhous girl,shes a Shang Hais girl.Mary is only ten years old,shes not tall but very strong.She has two big and black eyes , and she has some long hairs.Mary is a student of Wang Chang Primary School, shes a good student, everyone like her.She is good at English and Maths and she does well in PE.She is a good football player.She swims faster than the some of the students in her class.

There are three people in her family.Her mother is an English,she works in Mary’s school.Her father is an engineer,he works at the Overseas Engineering Compny.

Mary likes listening to music and making clothes,her mother likes them,too.But her father doesn’t like it,he likes seeing a play and going on an outing with my family.

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dreamEvery one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save peoples lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

After entering junior high school, everything changed. Environment better, homework more, even friends also changed. In this completely unfamiliar environment, I made a new friend, wang.

I met with him in the first day of school, when he was sitting in front of me, because I want to ask him a question, he turned his head, I see his appearance, pianpian head, a little fat face, healthy wheat color skin and tall. Well, look good, you can make a friend with him. I thought at that time. So, I make the junior high school of the first friends.

With the deepening of our friendship, I to his influence is also getting better and better. But I sit up and take notice, or another thing.

It was over a weekend, many classmates and I went to a strange place to play, including wang, playing to a half, I suddenly found that I lost my wallet, I immediately have no interest in playing, anxious to think: how to do? Wheres my wallet? If I went back for it, the students will surely leave me a person, and I dont, how to do? I immediately like ants on a hot pan - around.

Aside wang saw my anxious, what was asked. I lost my wallet told the students, the students no response, is blunt I said: "you lost the wallet will go to bai, we not to accompany you, bye bye!" Alas, worry about a thing was happened, they were abandoned me, alas! Sighing in my heart.

All of a sudden, wang stood out in silence, he patted his chest, ambitious to say: "dont be afraid, I accompany you to!"

The words that I already hurt my heart, nice to get up: this is a true friend, a time of crisis, to help a friend obligatory, this is a true friend! I sighed with emotion.

Afterwards, I couldnt find my wallet, but compared to harvest a real friendship, compared to the wallet again calculate what? Xiao wang, is my true friend!

进入初中后，一切都变了。环境变好了、作业变多了、连朋友也换了。就在这完全陌生的环境中，我结交了一位新朋友——小王。

我和他的相识是在开学的第一天，那时他正坐在我前面，因为一个问题我想向他请教，他转过头来时，我看清楚了他的长相，扁扁的头、稍微有点胖的脸、健康的小麦色的肌肤与高高的个子。嗯，长得不错，可以和他交一下朋友。那时我心里想着。于是，我结交了初中的第一个朋友。

随着我们友谊的加深，我对他的影响也越来越好。但令我对他刮目相看的，还是另一件事。

那是在一个周末，我和很多同学一起去一个陌生的地方玩，其中也包括小王，玩到一半，我突然发现我的钱包不见了，我立刻没有了玩的兴趣，焦急的想：怎么办啊?钱包去哪了?如果我回去找，同学们肯定会丢下我一个人的，我又不识路，怎么办啊?我顿时像一只热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。

一旁的小王看出了我的焦急，忙问什么事。我把我钱包丢了的事告诉了同学们，同学们没什么反应，都冲我说：“你钱包丢了就会去找呗，我们不陪你了，拜拜!”唉，担心的事情果然发生了，他们果然丢下了我，唉!我在心里叹着气。

突然，在一旁沉默不语的小王站了出来，他拍拍胸脯，豪言万丈地说：“不用怕，我陪你去!”

这句话令我本来已经伤了的心又好了起来：这就是真正的朋友啊，危急时刻不离不弃，帮朋友的忙义不容辞，这就是真正的朋友啊!我在心里感叹着。

后来，我还是没有找到钱包，但是比起收获了一段真正的友情相比，钱包又算得了什么呢?小王，是我真正的朋友!

dear zhang,

my name is liming.guo dehao you recently?

thanks your help i was only able to enter high school,im happy.i am very delicious new environment singular,and new school is very beatiful.here the new teachers and new classmates very good relations,so i in the new environment of very happy.i do not worry, i will study hard to repay your exs education.

finally, the teacher you want a happy blessing fortunately, good health.

best wish for you!

your student,

liming

Behind every great achievement in anyones life lies perseverance. We see

this in every human endeavor. Outstanding sportsmen spend all their time

practising. Their endurance is beyond imagination.

The same is true of businessmen who build up fortunes. What we usually see

are their achievements, but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they

have put in a lot of continual steady efforts. We all have read of great

musicians, writers and inventors who have created or discovered breakthroughs in

human achievement. Invariably they have said that they owe all their success to

perseverance. As to college students, quite a big number of then, have become

successful language learners through perseverance, however, a certain group of

them, just stop half way and their previous efforts turn out to be

fruitless.

Of all the countless examples the saga of Colonel Saunders is perhaps one

of the most outstanding. The 65-year-old man from Kentucky had a dream to start

a chain of fried chicken restaurants all over the world. To realize his dream,

he knew that he needed a restaurant owner to go into partnership with him to

open the first restaurant and to fry chicken according to the secret recipe he

had. Colonel Saunders had knocked on 1008 doors before he finally found his

partner. It is doubtful whether many of us would have had the perseverance to

knock even a hundred doors.

From the above discussion we can draw a conclusion that success comes to

anyone who keeps working perseveringly and lack of perseverance can only result

in frustration and failure.

Her father is a business man. He goes to work by car. He has got a big company. He is great! Her mother is an accountant in her father’s company. She goes to work with her father. She gets up at 8:30. Sometimes they go to work early, so Angel must cook breakfast for her grandma. She cooks well. Angel says she is going to visit me this weekend. I cannot wait!

Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people. So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.

It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.

Why do you think it was a good present?

[初一暑假英语作文：A Present For Mother’s Birthday

My friend and I are good friends.she is  shy and I am outgoing.she likes studying English but I like studying math.she has long straight blak hair and I have short curly blak hair.she likes playing volleball but Ilike playingbasketball.we are still friends.

She is always studys home but I always study at shool because it is very investsting.I like watching action moves but she likes watching the TV show she has big eyes and she likes wearing jeans but I like wearing shirt.she usually helps me in my study

Today my parents took me to my grandfather’s house.I played with my cousin.Suddenly my cousin suggested going to the park and having a rest.“that’s a good idea.” I said.Then we prepared for the traveling.After lunch,the sky turned dark.After that ,it rained heavily.It meant our plan is impossible.What a pity day!

今天我父母带我去了外公家,我和唐/表,兄/弟/姐/妹一起玩.突然,我我和唐/表,兄/弟/姐/妹建议去公园玩,顺便休息一下.“那是一个好主意”我说到.然后我们为旅行准备着.午饭后,天变得昏暗,接着下起了大雨.那意味着我们的计划不可能实行了,多遗憾的一天哪!(圣诞节作文)

English is widely used throughout the world. So many people speak it as a second language. ()n line, youll find lots of information in English. If you dont understand English, how can you know more about the world, how can you get more knowledge. At international conferences, English is also used as the official language. Without good English, you cannot express your ideas well at such conferences, neither can you introduce China to the outside world.

smile, how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy. and this happiness is from the bottom of heart.

it’s not like enthusiastic laughter, but just warm, makes your heart warm.

mother’s smile is like a spring wind, so gentle when you are sad, it can make you happy again; when you fail, it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up, it can make you try your best again…

smile, so easy, but also so useful.

| so, let’s learn to smile. everyone needs others’ smile. when we give others a smile, we will feel happy, too. and maybe next time, when you need a smile, the person who received your smile will give it to you.

let’s learn to smile often, i believe it can even make the whole warm. living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.

导语：如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

在11月英语节中，你校举行了一次英语辩论会，主题是“微信朋友圈是否要屏蔽父母”。作为学校通讯员，请你为学校的微信公众平台推送一篇英文简讯，报道这次的活动，内容包括：

活动的时间：11月12日

正方的观点：

1.可以保护隐私

2.......

反方的观点：

1.父母有权利了解孩子

2.......

本次活动的意义

注意：

1.词数100-120

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.标题已为你写好

参考词汇 隐私 privacy 微信朋友圈 WeChat Moments

Should adolescents block their parents in WeChat Moments?

On Nov. 12th, a heated debate was conducted in the school lecture hall. Its topic is whether teenagers should blacklist their parents in Moments.

Some students believe it’s quite necessary for an independent individual to have privacy and block their parents. Besides, the negative comments or complaints they carelessly share on WeChat are bound to worry their parents, which is not what they intend. However, their opponents argue that parents shouldn’t be excluded. For one thing, parents have rights to know what their kids are doing. For another, the roles of parents keep changing. Adolescents should adapt to the changes and befriend their parents.

This successful activity has inspired youngsters’ second thought about the relationship with their parents. (123 words) ​

【参考译文】

微信朋友圈是否要屏蔽父母?

11月12日，学校演讲厅进行了激烈的辩论。它的主题是青少年微信朋友圈是否要屏蔽父母。

一些学生认为一个独立的人有隐私和阻止他们的父母是非常必要的。此外，负面的评论或抱怨他们不小心分享微信一定会担心自己的父母，这不是他们的意愿。然而，他们的反对者认为父母不应该被排除在外。一方面，父母有权知道他们的孩子在做什么。另一方面，父母的角色不断变化。青少年应该适应变化和帮助他们的父母。

这个成功的活动激发了年轻人对父母关系的第二次思考。(123字)

初一五一英语作文1

These days the May Day holiday, my mother is going to take me to play in the public ecological garden.

Because unfamiliar terrain, white ran a lot of road, only "ah-ha!" to the ecological garden of the masses.

Ecological YuanHou bought tickets and went into the masses, a look, really a lot of people, there are a lot of fun projects dont money, make me happy from ear to ear.

Walk, see a pond, fishing, I can be happy, because has always been very love fishing, can be approached a look, just know to rent cost ten dollars, but I managed to persuade his mother, rent the fishing rod.

Started fishing, there is a group of fish came up, but only in the next to look, not biting. I saw big fishes swim by, but I sat uncomfortable, move the fish all fled away.

I summarized the reasons for the failure of the last time, after waiting for fish to, did not move, do not emit sound, eyes also unchanged, finally, a big carp bite the hook, but immediately loosened, ate half of the bait, when I was frustrated, I saw it with a bite, I quickly put the hook, the fish really big trouble ah, just pull the lever to bad, I have a hard, give it up, and in this way, we can eat the grilled fish at noon today.

In addition to these, I also played a lot of things, and now that I think about it, really want to play again!

初一五一英语作文2

Today is May Day, I follow mom to dinghai haisan park by bus.

Here people mountain people sea, there are a lot of children accompanied by mom and dad to play there. Some playing with kites, some are playing gyro, some in fishing.

I quickly came to the goldfish. Theres water on the bottom, the goldfish have greatly small, colors: red, orange and purple! I saw many people in the fishing, and also bought a fishing pole gaps.

Soon, my fish bait was snapped, quickly pull up the fishing pole, in line with your hands, I catch a frisky goldfish was came up, I carefully put the fish into the basin, the heart is extremely happy! But the goldfish is too small, I also want to hook to larger goldfish. But in the next few minutes, always dont take the bait fish, or fish ate fish bait, but has not been pulled, I was so angry, I stared straight the way of just overjoyed when already flew to the cloud nine, clamouring to go back home. Mother told me at this moment, fishing to calm down, take your time, not impatient. Listen to the mother, and I put down the fishing pole, patiently caught up, indeed as expected and caught 3, and a than a big. So, I take 4 goldfish went home happily.

Along the way, my heart never know how much excited, because I not only hook into the big goldfish, also understand such a truth: do not impatient, be patient, itll be successful!

初一五一英语作文3

May 1st is the international labor day, is the world labor peoples freedom anniversary, for we students, is a long-awaited festival, is also in our winter vacation the again after the holidays, have a three-day holiday. Given that we can open again, happy, happily free sent time, space and dominate their own!

In the labor day holiday, I was going to with dad to Olympic sports center to do some sports like playing basketball, table tennis, some exercises. However, because of my father and an empress have never been to hainan, want to go to hainan play, so Ill just have to reassure the idea, stay at home to play. I turned on my computer as usual, but, but online is different from usual, I suddenly reminded us in the 21st century is the age of information technology, many people celebrate May Day on the Internet.

I also have their own space on the Internet, many know uncle aunt, play games on the Internet know school friends and classmates will come to my QQ space, in their different ways to celebrate with me "51" international labor day! Not only in my QQ space, in baidu post bar has a lot of brother elder sister also uncles and aunts blessing each other together the happiness during the holidays, we like the family happy, happy, I think network not only, and our warm home!

This years "51" section, and we all had a good time. Through the "51" section, the real from different sides showed the new achievements in the construction of spiritual civilization, also showed the fundamental role of everything for the masses, in the interests of the masses. I think next years "51" international labor day will have a more pleasant and beautiful!

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

1、a bosorn friend after brings distant land near 海内存知己,天涯若比邻.

2、A brother may not be a friend, but a friend will always be a brother. 兄弟未必是朋友，而朋友总是兄弟。 ——Benjamin Franklin

3、A father is a treasure, a brother is a comfort, but a friend is both. 父亲是财富，兄弟是安慰，朋友兼而有之。

4、A friend exaggerates a man’s virtue, an enemy his crimes. 朋友宣扬人的美德，敌人夸大人的罪过

5、Without confidence there is no friendship. 没有信任，就没有友谊。——Epicurus

6、A friend indeed is a friend in need.患难见真情和患难之交才是真正的朋友.

7、A friend is a second self. 朋友是第二个自我。

8、A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难，失朋友易。

9、A friend is never known till a man has need.需要之时方知友。

10、A friend that you buy with presents will be bought from you.

11、A friend without faults will be found.没有十全十美的朋友。

12、A hedge between keeps friendship green.君子之交淡如水(字面：朋友之间有所界限 才能让友谊之树长青)。

13、A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生没有了朋友就犹如失去了阳光。

14、Without words, in friendship, all thoughts, all desires, all expectations, are silent joy and sharing.在友谊里，不用言语，一切的思想，一切的愿望，一切的希冀，都在无声的欢乐中发生而共享了。 --(黎)纪伯伦

15、A man should keep his friendship in constant repair. 只有经常“浇灌”，方能保持友谊天长地久。

16.a life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。

17.a near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman. 远亲不如近邻。

18.a ready way to lose friend is to lend him money. 失友皆从借钱起。

19.a thousand friends are few, one enemy is too many. 朋友千人尚觉少，仇敌一人犹嫌多。

20.a true friend is known in the day of adversity. 疾风知劲草，患难见真情。

21.admonish your friends in private, praise them in public. 在私底下要忠告你的朋友，在公开场合又表扬你的朋友。

22.an empty purse frightens many friends. 囊中无分文，亲友不上门。

23.be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. 选择朋友要审慎，摒弃更要审又慎。

24.better lose a jest than a friend. 宁可不说一句俏皮话，以免得罪朋友们。

25.choose an author as you choose a friend. 选书如择友。