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关于朋友的英语作文初一(通用20篇)

漫游语文世界让我感受到了语文的无穷魅力,也感受到了语文的博大精深,想对而言,我们学到的语文知识真是太少太少了。下文是小编整理的关于朋友的英语作文初一,欢迎阅读参考!

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我的好朋友英语作文

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When I look at the old photo, I cant help thinking of my best friend, Wang Ying. At the age of five, I made friends with her. She lived next door to me, and was then seventeen years old. The twelve years gap in age didnt hinder our growing fondness for each other. She treated me as a younger sister of her own.

In school, Wang Ying was a 3-A student. She did well in every subject. But she never seemed to be proud of her achievements. She was hard-working and good-natured to younger students. I remember the little incident that took place two years ago. One day I caught a bad cold and had a high fever. I had to stay in bed. This prevented me from going to school. I was very anxious for missing so many classes when suddenly the door opened. In came Wang Ying.

“Hello, Tong-tong. How are you feeling today?” she said to me with a friendly smile. “Dont worry about your lessons. Now let me make them up for you.” Before I could say anything, she had taken the English textbook out of her schoolbag. I was so moved that I couldnt keep back my tears.

Wang Ying was a kind-hearted girl. Though she was the only child of her parents, she was not spoiled. She was polite to teachers and students, generous to her friends, and kind to the poor. She was always ready to give her pocket money she had saved to those in need without hesitation.

One day last year, on her way home, Wang Ying saw a little boy slipping into a pond. The boy was struggling desperately in the water. Seeing this, Wang Ying quickly ran to the pond while shouting for help. She jumped into the cold water to save the boy. With the help of some workers, the boy was finally rescued. However, our little hero, like Luo Shengjiao, lost her own life.

People were sad over her death. I felt something was missing in my life. For the happiness of the boys family, Wang Ying sacrificed herself. Her death is a glorious death weightier than Mount Tai.

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篇1:2024初一暑假英语作文:暑期难忘的一件事

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An unforgettable thing during Summer vacation

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

【中文翻译】

暑期难忘的一件事

今天天气不错,太阳天.当我早上醒来,我决定去看看爷爷奶奶,所以我乘巴士中午到了那里,爷爷奶奶看到我很开心,而且我也很开心。

下午爸爸叫我帮他给植物浇水,看到那些在风中微笑的花儿我很开心。

总的说来,今天是难忘的一天.因为我去看了亲戚也帮助了他人。

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篇2:初一英语周记

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.It was the first day of our summer holiday.All of us were very happy.Why?Because we have one month to do things we love to do.We are free.Although we have some homework.But we can finish them in several days.And the rest time we can make good use of.We have been very tired after hard studying.I will have a good rest.

那是我们暑假的第一天,我们每个人都非常高兴,为什么呢?因为我们拥有一个月的时间来做我们想做的事情,我们自由了.尽管我们有一些作业,但我们可以在几天之内完成它们,并且我们可以充分利用剩余的时间,我们在艰苦的学习之后感到非常累,我会好好休息一下的.

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篇3:假期生活初一英语MyVacation

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Im going to the sun for my holiday. I will go there by spaceship. I will pilot a big blue spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super shirt.

In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight oclock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes.

Then I do my homework in my little red room at a small blue table. After my homework, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. All the things are red.

Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. Ill pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

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篇4:我的朋友英语

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John is my good friend.

John is my good friend. He is twelve. He is English. We are in the same (同一个) school. We are not in the same class. His father Mr Black is a cook. He is forty-five. His mother is not a cook. She is a nurse. She is forty-two. John has a sister. Her name is Alice. She is twenty-one. She is a new teacher at our school.

约翰是我的好朋友

参考译文:约翰是我的好朋友。他12岁,我们在同一个学校。我们不在一个班级。他的爸爸布莱克先生是一位厨师。他今年45岁。他的吗吗不是厨师。是一位护士。她今年四十二岁。约翰还有一个姐姐。她的名字叫做丽丝。她今年21岁。她是一个新老师,在我们学校。

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篇5:高考英语作文:给美国朋友的信

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假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文,唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。

比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台

注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛—talent show

Dear Peter,

I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you‘ U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

从整体上说,书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实,要点囊括齐全,结构完整。的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用,最后两句话,采用了if引导的让步状语从句,结合将来时使用。

[高考英语作文:给美国朋友的信

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篇6:英语作文我的朋友

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hello! everyone。 i’ll introduce my best friend to you。 her name is zhou xun。 her english name is zoe。 i like her english name better。 zoe likes it, too。

zoe is a lovely girl。 she is not tall。 she is very thin。 she has a round face and two small eyes。 her hair is short。 she often wears a pink dress, because pink is her favorite color。 she always has a smiling face, so everyone likes her very much。

zoe is a clever girl。 she’s our monitor。 she works hard at school everyday。 she likes to ask and answer the questions。 her copybooks are clean and tidy。 her handwriting is very beautiful。 she is good at english and math。 she is a top student in our class。

zoe is a versatile girl。 she can play the piano。 she can draw pictures。 she can tango。 she can swim。 she can do everything very well。

zoe has a big dog。 its name is xiao xiong。 they are good friends。 i like it, too。

do you like my best friend, zoe

[我的朋友50字英语作文

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篇7:邀请朋友生日聚会英语

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Dear Li Hua,

I had a birthday party at my home last month .I invited some of my classmates to the party . The party began at 8a.m .on Sunday . All my classmateswere not be late. I was very happy. We ate some western food.Theywere very nice.Some of my classmates brought their own food. They shared their food with us. Because they are very friendly.

We also played games. It was very interesting. All my classmates were very happy. I danced with my best friends. And all my classmates danced very beautifully! They sang a song Happy Birthday to me. And then they gave me a lot of presents. I was very thankful. All of us had a good time on that day!

Do you have free time? I want to visit you next year?

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篇8:关于写我的好朋友英语

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lue jeans and he is very friendly to people。

我有一个好朋友名叫杰克。他比我高半头。他喜欢穿蓝色牛仔服,对人十分友好。

Once I was ill at home。 He lived far away from my house but he came and helped me with my study。

有一次我生病在家。他家离我家很远,但他放学之后帮忙我学习。

He always says, "A life without a friend is a life without sunshine。" My friend has done the same as he says。 Im happy to have such a friend。 If he is in trouble, Ill try my best to help him。

他常说:“一个人没有朋友,就像生活没有阳光。”我的朋友这么说,也这么做了。有这样的朋友我真的很高兴(作文地带也推荐翻译为“自豪”)。假如他遇上麻烦,我必须会尽力帮忙他。

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篇9:描写朋友、自己或家人的喜好的英语作文

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Dear friend,

My name is Sally. I am from China. I want a pen pal in Australia. I am 14 years old. I have no brothers or sisters in my family. MY favorite subject in school is science, because I think it’s very interesting. I like playing the piano and playing basketball on weekends. How about you? Can you write and tell me something about yourself?

Yours,

Sally

[描写朋友自己家人喜好英语作文

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篇10:介绍我的朋友英语Myfriend

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Today I want to tell you something about my classmate. He is a boy of l7 years old. He is tall and strong. He likes reading books very much. He likes sports, such as skating and playing basketball. Sometimes when he if free, he enjoys listening to music. He is kind. I am not good at math and he often helps me with my math. I want to say :"Thank you so much ." I am quite happy that I have such a good friend.

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篇11:初一年级英语作文:My weekend

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I think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.

On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.

On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.

On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I love my weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.

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篇12:我的好朋友英语

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____ She is my good friend. She is a lovely little girl. Her eyes are big

and bright, like shining stars; She has a round face and a pair of lovely

dimples when she smiles. LAN LAN is very optimistic and always smiles. Whenever

I see her smiling face, I feel happy.

After school, LAN LAN and I often exercise on the playground. We like

running very much and often have running competitions. In a running race, I

accidentally fell down and couldnt help crying. Lan Lan hurriedly ran over to

help me and encouraged me to carry on the game to the end. I clenched my teeth

and tried to rush to the finish line. LAN LAN is waiting for me at the end.

Cheer for me!

This is my good friend, a kind little girl. She always gives roses and

shares happiness with others.

____是我的好朋友,她是个可爱的小姑娘。她的眼睛大大的,亮亮的,就像闪亮的星光;脸蛋圆圆的,笑起来有一对可爱的小酒窝。兰兰非常乐观,总是面带微笑,每当我看到她的笑脸,也跟着快乐起来。

放学以后,我和兰兰经常在操场上锻炼身体。我们很喜欢跑步,经常进行跑步比赛。在一次跑步比赛中,我不小心摔倒了,眼泪忍不住流下来。兰兰连忙跑过来扶我,还鼓励我要将比赛进行到底。我咬咬牙,努力冲向终点。兰兰在终点等我呢,为我欢呼加油!

这就是我的好朋友,一个善良的小姑娘。她总是予人玫瑰,与人分享快乐。

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篇13:关于朋友英语年级

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When we have something annoy us, we will naturally to find someone to talk

about it, the first choice is friend. We will not talk about it in front of our

parents, because we don’t want them to worry about us. Friend is so important in

our life, we have many friends, we will share our happiness and sorrow with

them, we hang out together, in a word, friends are part of our life. What will

happened if someone have no friend? We hear from the news that the crime people

are isolated by others, most of them have no friends, their view point about the

world is distorted. Without friends, people have no where to relieve their

emotion, the long time’s depression of the emotion distract people from the

normal life. So friends are very important, we can’t live without friends.

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篇14:我的好朋友英语

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I have many friend.do you know who they are?are they my pet?no.are they my classmates?no. let me tell you:they are my favourit book.

I like books very much.i like reading science book,cartoonbook so on.not only let me know how wonderful the word is but also teach me how to be a good person in the society,they give me great pleasure.

I love books!

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篇15:初一我的梦想英语作文

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I have had a dream since my boyhood. I want very much to be a doctor.

I want to be a doctor because doctors can cure patients and thus make people healthy and happy. Doctors can offer their help to the poor people so that more people can get medical help.

If I were a doctor, the more patients I cured, the happier I will feel. That is the very reason I want to become a doctor.

I will study hard so that my dream can come true in the future.

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篇16:初一英语作文:MYFAMILY

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Look,this is my family .Its a small family .There are three people in my family,they are my father my mother and I.

My father is a engineer,he likes playing football and reading news paper.

My mother is a college teacher.She likes playing computer games and watching TV.She likes eating apples and pears.

Im a student in

a middle school.I am 13.I like playing tabletennis and reading books.I like eating ice-cream.My favourite colour is pink.

I have a dog. Its name is Mary.It is very lovely.I like it.

I have a very happy family.

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篇17:我的假期初一英语Myholiday

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National Day is coming.I am going to Beijing with my mother and father.I want to do something interesting. I am going to the Great Wall.Well I  am also going to Tiananmen Square. After that I am visiting to the Palace Museum.Its a good vacation. I cant wait.

[我的假期初一英语作文

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篇18:的朋友英语词六:Myfriend

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My maternal grandmothers house dog lele is a good friend of mine. Every time I went to my grandmothers house to play, lele is shaking big tail to meet me.

Whenever I give lele eat, grandmother always stop me. Said: "dont give her disorderly eat." But I always secretly to lele eat his favorite sweets. Because she is my good friend. She gave me the can be friendly. Lele also has a YuanLiuLiu eyes, glistening yellow fur adorable. My grandmother said lele another few months will be a pup. I wish lele when the mother is still a good friend of mine. I prefer to have more babies, so that more and more friends to play with me.

I like the dog lele, because she is my best friend.

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篇19:有关交流英语初一

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Recently, I was so shocked by the news that a young boy died of violence

after his parents sent him to a private school. The slogan of the private school

was to help parents correct kids bad behaviors. A lot of parents choose to send

their kids here after they giving up educating their kids. The public blamed the

parents for not educating their children in the right way. There is no doubt

that the root of kids problems come from family. Many parents always force the

children to do what they want and ignore the kids feelings, so they will go

against the elders thoughts. Finally, the parents lose temper. The elder should

show respect to the kids. Communication can solve the problem. When the children

receive love and understanding from parents, they will be nice persons.

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篇20:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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