清明节英语作文高一年级（精品20篇）

Spring are not always the same.In some years,April bursts upon Virginia hills in one prodigious leap-and all the stage is filled at once,whole choruses of tulips,arabesques of forsythia,cadenzas of flowering plum.The trees grow leaves overnight.

春天并不总是相同的。在一些年，四月爆发在弗吉尼亚的小山丘一个健步跨越所有的阶段，顿时，满山遍野的郁金香，连翘，榆叶梅华彩。一夜之间叶成林。

In other years,spring tiptoes in.It pauses,overcome by shyness,like my grandchild at the door,peeping in,ducking out of sight,giggling in the hallway."I know you are out there,"I cry."Come in”And April slips into our arms.

在其他年份，春天踮着脚。它停了下来，克服羞怯，喜欢在家门口，我的孙子在偷窥，避开视线，在走廊里咯咯地笑。“我知道你在那里，我哭了。“进来”和四月潜入我们的武器。

The dogwood bud, pale green,is inlaid with russet markings.Within the perfect cup a score of clustered seeds are nestled.One examines the bud in awe:Where were those seeds a month ago?The apples display their milliners scraps of ivory silk,rose-tinged.All the sleeping things wake it,feel it, crumble April in your hands.

山茱萸的花蕾，淡绿色，镶着赤褐色的斑纹。在完美的杯偎依着一丛种子。不禁要惊羡地问一句：一个月前，这些种子还在哪儿呢?苹果显示器的女帽乳白色丝缎，rose-tinged.all沉睡的东西唤醒它，感受它，在手中赏玩四月。

Look to the rue anemone,if you will,or the pea patch,or to the stubborn weed that thrusts its shoulders through a city street.This is how it was,is now,and ever shall be, the world without end.In the serene certainty of spring recurring,who fear the distant fall?

看看白头翁花，如果你愿意，或豌豆畦，或是那倔强地在城市的街道上。这是怎么回事，现在是，并且永远都是，没有结束的世界。春去春又来，谁害怕遥远的秋天呢?

高一英语作文100字篇一：Buying

this morning i got up early and went to the market to buy some vegetables instead my mother for the first time.

the market was very crowded and busy with nearly all kinds of goods on display. some sellers were shouting at the top of their voice to attract the attention of the people. housewives were picking out vegetables and bargaining with the sellers. a man was selling fresh fish, which were swimming in a big basin, and a lot of buyers crowded around it and chose what they wanted. one fruit seller, standing behind piles of fresh fruit, greeted me warmly, trying to persuade me to buy some. he felt a little disappointed when i shook my head.

高一英语作文100字篇二：The future I will work

Time always passes quickly. In the blink of an eye it has to end. Now the burden is more and more big, the pressure will continue to increase. With one family expectations. I don’t want to let the family expectations become disappointed. So I’m trying. Now in order to their future happiness is struggling. I want to own a substantial future, give yourself a perfect life. Just don’t want to let myself down, leave regret memories. Some people always said to me: life is their own, happiness can only rely on their own efforts, do not always think what things are so simple. I think that makes sense, it has become my motto.

高一英语作文100字篇三：I Can’t Forget

There are too many things that I can’t forget. When I came to the high school I faced too much new faces at first day. I feel very excited.

My classmate was the first one talking with me in the high school. I never forget his face. He is friendly and funny. He is very black. He asked me where I came from. I answered him quickly and asked him the same question. Then we talked with other interesting things. Say you. Say me. We spoken all night. So we became the best friend in our class.

I can’t forget the first centens he spoken to me. I can’t forget my best friend-my classmate

高一英语作文100字篇四：Cultural tourism

With the development of living standards, going out to have a tourism is becoming a part of our life. But at the same time, uncivilized behaviors in tourism are frequently happening. So cultural tourism has became a hot topic in the society.

Especially in vacations, phenomena of uncivilized behavior in parks or museums everywhere. Even in foreign countries, our Chinese citizens still do naturally, it seriously affected our country’s image. Of course, it has caused bad loss in ancient buildings and antiquities and our environments. So it’s urgent to advocate to have a cultural tourism.

Firstly, we should keep in mind the sense of protecting the environment. And when we have a tourism, we had better watch out the warning words carefully and then obey the rules. For the sake of ourselves and our country, let’s do some meaningful things for cultural tourism.

高一英语作文100字篇五：Application letter

Headmaster:

Hello,

My name is LiHong. I heard of our school will hold a activity about welcoming exchange students from Canada. I want to let one exchange student come to my home.

I want to know the culture about Canada. I think they are very happy to tell me their culture. And I can introduce our culture to them. My parents want to talk with a person who comes from Canada. It’s a good chance for them. So I hope I can invite an exchange student to come to my home.

Maybe you will ask me if I have ability to talk with them. I can speak English very well. And my family is rich, so I can make them fell comfortable.

I can make school be proud of me!

LiHong

高一英语作文100字篇六：My dream

The dream blooming flower Everyone has a dream, a beautiful dream. Different environment, different life background, experience of things different, everyone’s dream is also different. Some people want to become national leaders, some people want to be a scientist, and some people want to become a businessman. The dream I just want to be an ordinary person. Do the people useful things in ordinary post. For example, when a teacher, to impart knowledge to the next generation; when a doctor, save dead trauma; when a gardener, contribute to the greening of the environment. The dream is beautiful, but to achieve the dream, no words can, in the dreams of the road, will encounter difficulties, setbacks, resistance, if did not have the courage, will, you will be very difficult to realize his dreams. The dream cannot do without knowledge, so I think the first step to realize my dream is to accumulate knowledge, we now need to do is to Study hard, overcome the difficulties in learning, grasp more knowledge, to lay the foundation for the realization of dreams. Let us brave to face life

导语：每个人都有自己的书包，你能给我们介绍你的书包吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I have a good friend. Her name is school bag. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. It’s a picture of a lovely girl. She wears a red coat. There are some books, some copybooks and a pencil case in her tummy. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

【参考翻译】

我有一个好朋友。她的名字叫书包。她是一个非常美丽的女孩。看!她脸上有一幅画。这是一个可爱的女孩的照片。她穿着一件红色的外套。有一些书，一些字帖和一个铅笔盒在她的肚子里。从周一到周五，我和她一起去学校。她帮助我很多，我非常喜欢她。

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The Qingming (Pure Brightness) Festival is one of the 24 solar terms in

China, falling on April 4-6 each year. After the festival, the temperature will

rise up and rainfall increase. It is the high time for spring plowing and

sowing. In the past, the Qingming Festival was called “Arbor Day”, but since

1979, “Arbor Day” was settled on March 12 according to the Gregorian

calendar.

But the Qingming Festival is not only a solar term to guide farm work, it

is more a festival of commemoration. It sees a combination of sadness and

happiness. This is the most important day of sacrifice. Both the Han and

minority ethnic groups at this time offer sacrifices to their ancestors and

sweep the tombs of the diseased. On each Qingming Festival, all cemeteries are

crowded with people who come to sweep tombs and offer sacrifices, but the

customs have been greatly simplified today. After slightly sweeping the tombs,

people offer food, flowers, then burn incense and ghost money. In short, it’s a

time to cherish the memory of our ancestors and show our respect to them. Also,

it’s a time for family gathering.

I like my school life very much,it is very interesting.I usually reach school at half past seven.Then we do morning exercises at eight oclock.We have eight lessons every day.

我非常喜欢我的学校生活，这是非常有趣的。我通常点半到达学校七。然后我们做早操八点clock.we每天有八节课。

The lesson begin at a quarter past eight.My favourite subject is English.I can get a lot of English knowledge from our teacher.Our teacher are very good-natured.They are always kind to us.I also like our outdoor activities.When we have outdoor activities,everyone in the playground is active and lively.

八点十五分开始上课。我最喜欢的科目是英语。我可以得到很多的英语知识从我们的老师。我们的老师都很good-natured.they总是善待我们。我也喜欢我们的户外活动。当我们有户外活动，每个人都在操场上积极活泼。

How happy we are in our beautiful school!I love the life in my school!

我们在我们美丽的学校是多么幸福!我爱我的学校生活!

Hello, everyone. This is my English teacher. His name is Wang Nengmin. His English name is Frank. He is a very good English teacher. He speaks English very well. Hes full of humor, too. Hes over 30 years old. He has two small eyes and a small mouth. He is near sighted so he wears glasses. He likes playing computer games and swimming. He also loves reading. He usually reads newspapers after school. His lesson is very interesting. We always learn a lot of things in his lessons. We all like him very much, although he is very strict with us.

16 April 2006

Dear Sir,

I am working on a new project which is called A Survey of New Industry in the Maywood District. According to the design of our district, we need information about firms that have recently moved into this area. Your firm is one of the largest of these, so I shall be very grateful if you can spare the time to help me.

Three points are specially important to the project. The first one is the training schemes for school leavers. The second one is about the transport arrangements to overcome poor road and rail links in this district. The third is the plans for expansion.

Any other information will be useful, but those points are the ones with which I most need your help.

I am enclosing an information form for you to fill in. I hope you can post it to us as soon as possible. I apologize for adding to your work with this request, but I do hope that you will feel able to assist me.

I would be most grateful for your favorable consideration of this request.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Spencer

When it comes to haze, I believe many people hate it to the bone and sigh

when talking about it. No, just a few sunny days, Monday morning gave us a big

"surprise".

In the morning, as soon as I stepped out of the door, I was stunned by the

scene in front of me: the sky seemed to be covered by a gray cloth, and the

pedestrians, roadside plants and cars on the road were also dyed gray.

Everything is covered with a layer of ash. Walking on the street, the visibility

is less than 100 meters. Under the influence of haze, the original clear scene

becomes extremely blurred. Even the bright colors of the traffic lights seem to

be in a trance.

At school, the situation has not changed, and low temperature is of no use.

The red flag is flying in the middle of the air. The soft and beautiful

movements are slightly slow due to the influence of the dust around. Because in

haze days, many small particles will be inhaled, and the oxygen content in the

air will be reduced, which is not suitable for sports, so the physical education

class in the morning has also been cancelled. I dont know if I should be happy

or worried.

Haze days, its really annoying!

In some provinces of China people use different activities to commemorate this day for instance spring-outing swinging tree planting and making special food. One special food is Ay Tsao rice balls. It looks like Tang-yuan but its colour is green. Mix the ay tsao juice with the rice powder then make it into small balls. The Ay Tsao rice ball is done. People believe that eating ay tsao rice balls can get rid of the bad luck and everything will go smoothly. Other activities such as spring outing tree planting are the other ways to commemorate the forbears. For one thing it is a sign that people should look into the future and embrace the hope; for another thing we do hope our ancestor rest in peace.

在中国的某些省份人们通过举行不同的活动来纪念清明节。例如春游、荡秋千、植树以及做特殊的食物。其中一种特别的小吃叫艾粑粑。艾粑粑看起来像汤圆但它的颜色的是绿色的。把艾草汁和糯米粉混合在一起搓成小球艾粑粑就做好了。人们认为吃艾粑粑能祛除邪气让诸事顺利。其余的活动例如春游、植树都是纪念先人的方式之一。一方面这些活动告诉人们要展望未来拥抱希望;另一方面我们希望先人能安息。

[清明节踏青英文作文

我的假期

I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship。

then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

[初中一年级英语上册作文

Many years ago, when the first computer came into being, many people

predicted the age of computer has come. Now only two decades passed, here comes

the new age of cellphone. Lets look at how people depend on the phone. They use

cellphone to work and to communicate with families and friends. With the

development of technology, online payment is popular and people just need a

cellphone to pay all the bills. How convenient it is. We are lucky to live in

the age of technology. But at the same time, if we dont control ourselves, we

will lose in the technology world, such as some children overuse cellphone and

learn nothing at all.

我们大家应该都知道保护环境人人有责!

We should all know that protecting the environment is everyones responsibility!

我们生活的地球是很脆弱的，地球上的自然资源也是有限的，如果我们从现在开始保护环境和地球的话，我们生活的地球一定会变的更美好!

The world we live in is very fragile, the earths natural resources are limited, if we start from now on the protection of the environment and the earth, our earth will become more beautiful!

保护环境从我做起从我们大家身边的小事做起吧!

Protect environment begin from me to start from the US side of the little things!

保护环境就是保护地球还是间接的保护我们人类自己，如果环境被破坏的话，那么我们赖以生存的家园就很有可能被沙漠吞噬 !

Protect environment is to protect the earth or indirectly protect ourselves, if the environment is destroyed, so the survival of our homes will likely be the desert!

我在这里向全世界的人们呼吁 保护环境人人有责 ! 如果我们还在这样的破坏环境的话，我们的家园即将遭到崩溃 。 那时我们便没有去处了， 保护环境人人有责 ， 从小事开始作起吧，

I am here to call for the protection of the environment is everyones responsibility to people all over the world! If the damage to the environment we are such words, our home will breakdown. Then we will have no place Protect environment is everyones responsibility, from the minor matter, starts,

如我们不乱扔垃圾， 随地吐痰等。

If we do not littering, spitting etc..

保护环境人人有责!

Protect environment is everyones responsibility!

Today, is the traditional Chinese festival - Lantern Festival. Eating

yuanxiao, the meaning of the lanterns is tuan tuan yuan yuan, harmony and

beauty. After dinner, my mother and I went to the square to see the lantern

show.

Come to the square, ho, people many ah, really lively! These lights are

vivid and lifelike, with 12 zodiac lanterns, corn lights, jack-o-lanterns, lotus

lanterns, lei yue lanterns... Its beautiful. There was a lamp that impressed me

the most, it was the moon, and there were some lovely twinkling stars.

I hope the next Lantern Festival will come soon.

Guangzhou is the capital of guangdong. it is the biggest city in south china. and it is one of the most important cities in guangdong.

The population of guangzhou is more than 700 million. just like many cities， there are a lot of cars， buses and trucks. so the air in the city is not clean. guangzhou is a noisy and crowded city. but i like it best. because guangzhou is my home.

Everybody has his or her interest， and interests differ widely from person

to person because of age， sex health and education. To some extent， interest

also reflects ones ability or wish. Interest plays an important part in our

daily life. As a middle school student interest is of great importance in study.

If you want to learn something well， you have to show interest in it， which is

quite possible. Once you have found your way into the subject， you may have also

found a world of curiosities.

In our times， interest may not only result in skill and knowledge but also

lead to great inventions and discoveries. To be a successful person in the world

one should develop ones interest.

星期天一大早，姥爷和姥姥到街上购物上，家里只留下我（当时上二年级）和妹妹。呆着真没意思，干点什么呢？我望着姥爷那只小黄鹂出神。突然，我像发现了什么，拉着妹妹指着小鸟说：“这只黄鹂身上脏兮兮的，咱们给它洗个澡吧！”妹妹拍手叫好！“哥哥，用水管子洗太费水了，不如用喷水枪和针管吧！”我听这个主意好，连忙吩咐：“你去准备‘武器’，我准备‘药’。”说完，我搬来了一盆水，准备“战斗”。

随着我的一声枪响，给鸟洗澡的战斗打响了。可是黄鹂太机灵，一躲，没打着。我接着又打了一枪，还是不中。这回妹妹抢了先，没等黄鹂站稳，开了一枪，结果打中了，她高兴地喊：“打中了，哥，你真笨！”

我不服气，心里想着计策，目光移到了针管上，连忙把针管灌满了水，在笼子四周架起来。我先朝小鸟虚打一枪，让它进入我的一根针管的射程里，然后随着一道光亮的水线射出，小黄鹂终于被射中了。就在这一瞬间，我又扣动喷水枪的板机，小黄鹂又挨了一枪。

一盆水用完了，小黄鹂成了“落汤鸡”，全身发抖地蹲在笼子底下，一动也不动。“快，用吹风机把它吹干。”妹妹真机灵，我赶紧拿出吹风机，插上电源，这一下，小黄鹂成了“小

刺猬”了。

就在这时，姥爷回来了。他赶紧对小黄鹂进行“抢救”。事后，姥爷哭笑不得地教训我们：“有你们这样做好事的吗？真拿你们没办法，鸟儿不能这样洗澡！以后可不许胡闹了！”“这是胡闹吗？”妹妹还在不解地问，我和姥姥、姥爷都笑了。

点评

童年的生活是充满遐想，令人回味无穷的。童年的我们也一定是幼稚、可笑的。小作者的童年虽比不上童年捕猎的闰土那样充满神奇，然而小作者与他妹妹的行动足以让人忍俊不禁。

这件趣事的确很有意思。小兄妹俩本想做件好事，但终因年幼无知而事与愿违。事情紧张而有趣，作者开门见山，直插事情发生的时间，以“准备——给鸟洗澡——给鸟吹风——大人抢救”的事情发展顺序，有条理地描述了事情的来龙去脉。仿佛两位天真、勇敢的“小战土”就在我们面前。

小作者克服了写“童年生活”经常以“那是发生在我××时的事情”为开头的写法，而结尾也戛然而止，给人以整洁、流畅的感觉，使得一对纯情少年形象较为突出的跃然纸上。

[初一年级作文童年趣事

A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior middle school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

When I began my senior middle school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation.I could not get high marks and grammar was not right at all.Afraid of being lanughed at,I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class.When Miss Li found out my situation,she encouraged me and lent me a hand,which rapidly improved my English.With her help,I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.

p>Miss Li,like a shining star,shines in my path of success.

[高一学生英语作文：A Shining Star

22 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I understand your well-respected college offers a number of places to overseas students every year, and I am writing to enquire about the application procedure.

I am at present a student at Mary High School, Hong Kong, where I have been studying for the past five years. I passed the Hong Kong Certificate of Education Examination last year with distinctions in English and History, and credits in Economics and English Literature. My advanced-level subjects are History, Economics and English Literature. In addition to these subjects, "Use of English" is also a compulsory subject because a pass in English is a minimum requirement for admission to most faculties of the University of Hong Kong.

Apart from academic work, I have been actively involved in extra-curricular activities. I am Chairman of the English Club and I have represented my school in many inter-school contests.

On the advice of my friends, I have decided to further my studies in England because I wish to widen my horizons and benefit from the scholarly heritage of your country.

I wish to continue to study the above-mentioned subjects at your college in the 2006/7 academic year before I sit the Advanced-level Examinations in England.

As regards my character, Mrs. Chen, my Principal, and Mr. Huang, my English master, have agreed to act as my references.

As I come from a family of fairly limited means, I would like to know if there is any financial assistance available for overseas students.

Attached is a summary of my qualifications for your reference.

I should be grateful if you would kindly consider my application and notify me of the result at your earliest convenience.

Should you require any further information, please feel free to contact me or my references.

Yours faithfully,

Lily Chen

清明节那天，下着毛毛细雨，天空灰暗暗的，人也觉得很没有精神。我们全家睡了一个“自然醒的觉”。我们没有出远门，因为我们在深圳没有长辈亲戚，因此也就没有扫墓的活动。

The day of the festival, the drizzle, the sky dark gray, people feel very spirit. My family had a "natural wake up sleep". We do not have to go out, because we have no elder relatives in Shenzhen, so there is no grave activities.

这一天，我在家接待了我的一个朋友，他叫浩浩，他的爷爷前不久突然心肌梗塞，住进了医院，他的爸爸妈妈很忙，没有时间照顾他，所以把他托付到我们家生活一天。早上十点多，浩浩来了，我们欢迎他，我和他同岁，但是他上学迟一年，所以还在上幼儿园大班。

That day, I received a friend of mine at home, he asked his grandpa is vast, shortly before the sudden myocardial infarction, admitted to the hospital, his father and mother is busy, no time to take care of him, so he entrusted to our home life one day. More than ten oclock in the morning, to the vast, we welcome him, he and I are the same age, but he went to school a year later, it was still in kindergarten.

我们在一起聊天、唱歌、玩游戏、看电视，很开心。中午爸爸妈妈带着我和浩浩去宝能太古城吃必胜客的披萨，我们一人点了一个套餐，浩浩吃得干干净净，我要向他学习。下午我们一起玩侦探游戏，也很开心。

We chat together, sing, play games, watch TV, very happy. At noon, mom and Dad took me and vast to Baoneng Taikoo city to eat Pizza Hut pizza, we point a package, the eat clean, I should learn from him. We play games in the afternoon the detective, was also very happy.

天黑了，浩浩的妈妈张阿姨来接他了，我很舍不得他回去。这就是我清明节的活动，很平凡，但这是我第一次在家里接待小朋友，所以很有体验和收获，我懂得了礼让和待客。

It was dark, the mother Zhang aunt came to pick him up, I could not bear him back. This is the I Ching Ming Festival activities, very ordinary, but this is the first time I received the kids at home, so it is the experience and the harvest, I know the courtesy and hospitality.

作文是衡量学生语文素质的重要尺度,是现代社会进行交际的重要手段,作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分。下面是小编为大家整理的初一年级作文教学实录，欢迎阅读。

一、引言

初中语文教学中，令人最苦恼的莫过于学生的作文教学，这是一个我执教的差班，共有21名学生，各科成绩普遍很差，这些学生平时写作文字数总在四百字左右，所写内容单调乏味，不会综合运用多种表达方式，平铺直叙较为简单的生活、学习事件。为了激发他们的写作兴趣，使他们感受到作文并不是一件困难的事，我设计了一堂作文课，从学生的角度出发，为增强学生的信心，力求拓展学生作文的思路，引导学生自由写作，表达自己对社会、自然、人生的独特感受和真切体验。

二、教学设计说明

面对这些基础并不好的学生，如果只是简单地告诉他们这次作文的要求，读几篇范文，然后叫他们写作，这样效果肯定不好，因此在设计时必须抓住学生感兴趣的内容，让他们即兴说、想说爱说，让他们通过畅所欲言萌发写作的信心，进而产生写作的欲望，于是我就选取了“兴趣”这个话题。

三、教学进程

作文课上，当我走进教室正准备上课时，突然有两个学生在下面窃窃私语，打打闹闹。我站在讲台上，平静地望着他们，直到教室完全安静下来，我便微笑着说：“初三即将毕业，老师以前对你们关心不够，没有过多地与你们交流沟通，今天想跟同学们聊聊天，好吗？”学生听了我的话，开心地笑了（对他们来说由于基础差，上课是一种折磨）。于是，我提出第一个问题：“你们平时最喜欢干什么？”“一石激起千层浪”，学生都在下面说了起来，这时我要求学生一个个清楚地告诉我。

“最喜欢打篮球、最喜欢看NBA；最喜欢踢足球；最喜欢看电视；最喜欢上网；最喜欢看小说；最喜欢逛街……”也许是找到了学生说话的兴奋点，学生们在下面显得格外起劲。看到这种情景，我又欲擒故纵，“大家说了这么多喜欢的事，能告诉我你为什么喜欢”话刚完，下面学生安静下来了，没过多久，学生又开始“动作”了，我抓住这一时机，叫了一个平时不爱学习的学生，那学生平时非常喜欢打篮球，一起来，那学生语出惊人：“打篮球给我自信，使我快乐，所以篮球是我的最爱”，说得好，我立即鼓掌叫好，下面同学也拍手叫好。由于开了一个好头和对学生的鼓励，接下来学生都积极配合，思维活跃，说话热情高涨。

“足球是男人的运动，踢足球可显示一个人的风采，足球使我找到感觉”，“逛街，让我边散步边欣赏风景，让我没钱的人能大饱眼福。”“上网，能让我一网情深，使我跟人聊天玩游戏听音乐，上网查各种有用的资料。”“读书，使我不出家门了解天下，使我感受书中有无穷无尽的知识和乐趣……”

这些即兴的发言使我一下子惊呆了，也使学生对自己的出色表现感到兴奋，于是我因势利导，抛出早已准备好的话题作文——以兴趣为话题写一篇作文，“以上我们每个同学谈了自己的兴趣爱好，说得非常精彩，只要我们每个同学把刚才说的话整理好，说具体，就可以写成一篇较好的作文；其实，写兴趣，第一步要告诉别人你的兴趣是什么，第二步需要介绍你是如何拥有这个兴趣的，如何保持这个兴趣的；第三步，最关键要写出你对这个兴趣的体验，对你的学习生活有什么帮助等。就举我们同学刚才的例子，如“篮球”这个话题，其实大家只要写清楚你从什么时候就喜欢打球、看篮球，篮球怎么成了你学习生活中重要的一块，同时还要写从打球中学到哪些对人生有益的知识，获得哪些人生的感悟，如……”这时我又发问了，“喜欢打篮球的同学，请你说说，从打球中获得了哪些有价值的东西，你有哪些独到的感受？”话一完，学生就低头思考起来。过了一会儿开始举手发言了：“打球讲究的是配合，我们同学在平时也应相互支持鼓励，不要因为我们是差班学生而看不起自己。”“打球最需要顽强的毅力和永不言败的精神，在我们的人生中也会遇到困难挫折，打球使我懂得如何对付这些困难挫折。” ……“说了这么多，我们要对“兴趣”这个话题拟个题目，先看老师的，《我的兴趣爱好》，大家说好不好？”

“不好，这个题目太一般，不能吸引人。”

“不好，这个题目不能体现自己的个性。”

“不好，这个题目太笼统，不能突出自己的哪个兴趣爱好。”

“不好，不如改为《噢，我的篮球！》”

“可改为《音乐，让我与你相伴》”

“《生活因篮球而精彩！》”…………当学生说出《生活因篮球而精彩！》时所有学生都拍手叫好，如果不是亲耳听见，确实很难相信这个题目出自这个差班学生之口，有了这个好题目，作文就已完成了一半。

接下来，进行作文开头结尾辅导，我给他们作了两组示范：1、开头：“阳光、空气、水是人类生存的三元素，在我每天的生活中，也有一样少不了，那就是篮球，它陪伴我每一天，给我莫大的快乐和幸福，在此，让我慢慢告诉你。”

结尾：感谢你，是你给了我信心和勇气；是你给了我快乐和幸福；是你使我从幼稚走向成熟，从软弱走向坚强；感谢你，篮球，你是我一生的最爱！

2、开头：“音乐一直是我的挚爱，我是一个不折不扣的乐迷。音乐已融入我的生活，我实在无法想像要是没有音乐，我的生活会成什么样。我经常光顾音像店，那些美妙的声音从而陆续流进了我的家、流进了我的心中。”

结尾：生活，成长，在音乐中，我觉得自己在音乐中永远是一个孩子，一直跟着它一起哭、笑，感受生命的存在与灿烂。听音乐时，闭上眼睛，放飞心灵吧！

即兴开了两组开头结尾，是让学生明白，对自己喜爱的事物一定要把这种强烈的感受抒发出来，尽可能打动读者，产生共鸣，尽管要求过高，但要让每一个同学相信自己有这个能力，尝试着去写，相信会有奇迹发生。

围绕“兴趣”写一篇作文，采用开门见山、“先情夺人”的开头方式，使学生有一种创作的新奇感；中间的叙事也做到了选材于生活，真实生动感人，在叙事中表现这个兴趣所带来的启示或感悟；结尾采用抒情式结尾，亦显得感情浓烈，得以升华。在学生已充分理解作文目的的基础上，学生们开始写下刚才说的话，写得认真快速。

四、教学反思

通过这样一堂课，作文的火花在每一个学生心中点亮，就连平时写作文最差的学生也写出了400字左右。由此可见，差生的作文是可以写好的，只要是触动了学生的感情神经，选材得当，命题新颖，相信作文自然会绽放其独有的光芒，也会让差生自主地发挥主观能动性，变厌写为乐写，变白话为含蓄，变浅层为深刻，使学生在琢磨中悟道，在坚持中获得乐趣。

作文教学是一个循序渐进、不断积累发展的过程，仅仅通过一堂课，其实很难断定学生已对作文有了浓厚的兴趣，并能坚持写作。要全面提高学生的写作水平，功在课外。但通过这堂课，使我对这些学生有了新的认识，也感觉到新课标新教学理念学习实践的重要性。这堂课我认为有几点是成功的：

1、树立学生的主体意识，发挥差生说话写作的主观能动性，让学生活动起来，对自己感兴趣的话题能畅所欲言。

2、找准切入点，让学生找到生活与写作的桥梁。每个学生都有自己感兴趣的事物，即使再差的学生，他也有自己的“一技之长”，作为教师一定要善于发现并利用学生的这些“亮点”，从而有效点燃写作兴趣之火。特别是学生所表达的有关活动的感受，言语自然有味，确实体现了学生的个性。

3、实践“跳摘”理论，化解作文难度，使学生稍微一跳便能摘到“果子”。课堂上与学生聊天说话，消除学生对作文的紧张恐惧心理，让他们轻松进入写作状态，调动学生学习生活中的知识积累，使作文有话可说。从学生拟写的作文题目来分析，远远超出平时的水平，若不是采用这种方式，很难让这些学生有这种水平发挥。

但这节课也存在一些不足，未能采用灵活多样的方法，使学生自主探究，如条件允许，可在学生叙说的同时，播放有关NBA篮球赛、世界杯足球赛的画面，把学生的情感推向高潮，更有利于激发差生的写作热情。另外由于学生基础水平的局限，写作思维仍旧单一，未能进行较好的想象联想，在文本中呈现的语句表达仍旧直露，不含蓄，未能综合运用多种表达方式和修辞方法。

因而我认为，在写作教学中尽可能为学生创设自主探究的“境”，即提供自主的机遇，设计自主探究的情境，创设自主探究的氛围，来有效激发学生的写作兴趣。教师应善于营造平等、民主、和谐、轻松的课堂气氛，使用最佳的教学艺术，为学生自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少束缚，使学生易于动笔，乐于表达，思维灵动，笔下生辉。写的文章自然就富有创新，富有真情实感和情趣

在写作教学中，应注重培养观察、思考、表现、评价的能力。要求学生说真话、实话、心里话，不说假话、空话、套话，使作文朝自然、生活、哲理的方向迈进，真正做到“让写作快乐起来”！

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