高中有关中秋节的英语作文(优秀20篇)

高中英语作文一次不愉快的旅行

一次不愉快的旅行

I went to Changsha for my holiday by train on the night of July 15th,2012. It was so hot in the carriage that many passengers wanted something to drink. Just then, a young man came to deliver water with a water jug in hand. "Water, water. Free water. "shouted the young man.

A middle-aged woman asked for a glass of water and was very grateful to the young man. But after a while, two tall and strong men came to charge her five yuan for that glass of water. The middle-aged woman looked at them and took out a five-yuan note from one of her pockets slowly. Without a word, she handed the note to one of them, her eyes being filled with anger.

The carriage was silent. The two men went away without any sense of shame. "Robbers!" someone said in a low voice.

This was really an unpleasant trip I have ever had!

2012年7月15日晚，我乘火车去长沙度假。由于天气很热，车厢里有很多乘客都想喝水。正好，一个年轻人提着水壶来送水。"水，水，免费供水。"年轻人大声嚷着。

一位中年妇女喝了一杯水，非常感激他。可过了一会儿，来了两个又高又壮的人向她要5元水钱。中年妇女看着他们，慢慢地从兜里掏出了5元纸币给其中一个人。她什么也没说，眼里充满了愤怒。

车厢里一片寂静。那两个人毫无愧色地走了。"强盗!"有人小声说道。

这是我经历过的一次不愉快的旅行。

On the night of July 15th,2012,I went to Changsha for my holiday on a train. It was very hot. The temperature went up to 38 centigrade. It was stuffy and crowded in the carriage, so many passengers wanted something to drink, Just then, a young man came to deliver water with a water jug in hand. "Water, water. Free water. "The young man shouted while walking.

A middle-aged woman asked for a glass of water and was very thankful to the young man. But after a while, two tall and strong men came to charge her 5 yuan for that glass of water. The woman looked at them for a while,then she took out a 5-yuan note from one of her pockets and handed it to one of them. Though she said nothing, her eyes were full of anger. The two men went away without any sense of shame.

This was the most unpleasant trip I have ever had.

2012年7月15日晚，我乘火车去长沙度假。天气很热，气温高达38摄氏度。车厢里又闷又挤，因此许多乘客都想喝水。正在这时，一个年轻人提着水壶来送水。"水，水。免费供水。"年轻人一边走一边大声嚷着。

一位中年妇女喝了一杯水，非常感谢他。可是过了一会儿，来了两个又高又壮的人向她要5元水钱。她看了他们一会儿，从口袋里掏出5元纸币给了其中一个人。尽管她什么也没说，可是她眼里充满了愤怒。那两个人毫无愧色地走了。

这是我经历过的最不愉快的一次旅行。

每当中秋节，家家户户都会做月饼，我们家只要做好月饼，妈妈总会让我先给村里的长辈们送一些去。妈妈是一个非常善良的人，只要做了好吃的总会送给邻居长辈们一些，让他们也尝尝。

妈妈曾经给出国留学网讲过这样一个她亲身经历的故事：“那时候，家家都很穷，过年很多人家别说吃饺子，就连吃上一口好面馍都不容易。我拿着刚刚织好的一块布，准备过年做件新衣服。当我拿着布让你大娘帮我裁剪的时候，路过我们邻居强家，我听到了小孩的哭声。于是就跑到他们家去看看，结果看到他们家四个孩子都在被窝里，抱着被子在哭呢?你们哭什么呢?怎么不起床出去玩呢?“呜呜呜……我们没有衣服穿……呜呜呜……”孩子们说着又哭了起来。我一看四个孩子都光着腿，没有衣服穿。这时候他妈妈从外面回来了，哭着对我说，孩子们的衣裤都穿得烂得不能要了，没有布给他们做衣服，他们只好躲在被窝里不能出门。这时候妈妈就把自己手中的一块布送给了他们，让他妈妈给他们做衣服，虽然是杯水车薪解决不了太大的困难，但是对他们来说也是雪中送炭一样的温暖。后来他们家的孩子都长大了，都考上学出去参加工作了，他们家也搬去贵州了。但是这件事他们依然都还记得，每次回老家来都会来我们家坐坐，也会说起这件事。当时我只觉得自己少穿一件衣服，让孩子们高高兴兴过个年，没想到他们却记在心理了。所以当能帮人一把的时候，尽量伸出手帮一把，哪怕是自己少吃点，少穿点，也不能看着邻居挨饿受冻。”这就是善良的妈妈。

有时候看到这些好看又稀罕的月饼，我都想吃，不想送给人家，但是妈妈不愿意。总是对我说：“你先去给爷爷奶奶们送去，家里我给你留着，等你回来再吃。”于是我就会飞快地跑到邻居爷爷奶奶家，把妈妈准备好的月饼一家一家地送去。他们也会说：“尝尝我们家的月饼。”但是我总会飞快地跑回家，因为妈妈不让我随便吃人家的东西，总是告诉我说：“放下东西就走，人家给东西也不能要，要早点回来。”于是就这样我跑完一家又一家，送了好多人家，累得我气喘吁吁才算完成任务。

后来我长大了，但中秋节送月饼的传统依然在继续，这时候弟弟也长大了，总是我们两个人分头行动，这样就送得比较快一点。随着岁月的增长，一些年龄的大的爷爷奶妈们都相继去世了，能送的人家也越来越少了。这几年妈妈也很少回老家去了，爷爷奶奶都相继去世了，老家的长辈们也都不在了。中秋节的时候，拿起月饼才想起来已经无家可送了。

是呀!岁月催人老，不知不觉，妈妈也成老人了，我和弟弟都已经是中年人了。现在的中秋节都是弟弟开着车回家给叔叔家送月饼，爷爷辈的老人都已不在了。每当这个时候，我总会想起小时候，给他们送月饼，他们亲切地抚摸着我的头，夸我说：“一年不见，你看有长高了，也懂事了。”他们都是那么慈祥善良，每年的端午节，他们都会往我书包里塞鸡蛋，而且还嘱咐我说：“到学校别忘了把鸡蛋吃了，好好学习，将来能考一百分。”我就是在这些爷爷奶奶的祝福声中长大的。

过节了，这些难忘的往事又涌上了心头，虽然已经时过境迁，人已不再，但是这份情，这份关爱，却时时刻刻温暖着我!

It was Mother’s Day. Sun Zheng thought he should do something for his mother.

He decided to help his mother do some housework. After school he went to a shop

to buy some food on his way home.

When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn’t

do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was

very happy.

When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes

which weren’t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His

mother said, "Thank you,my child!"

我的脑海就像一片沙滩，而一件事就像一粒沙子;我的脑海就像一片星空，而一件事就像一颗星星;我的脑海就像一片大海，而一件事就像一滴水。我在“沙滩”、“星空”、“大海”中找出了那件难忘的事。

那件难忘的事就是中秋节。

中秋节的前一个星期，各大商店、超市就开始售卖各式各样的月饼。

中秋节的晚上，天边的那轮明月十分的圆，就像一个圆溜溜的月饼一样。

许多人都会在中秋节的那天晚上，带上月饼，和自己的家人一同去爬山，在山顶一边赏月，一边吃着美味的月饼。

还记得，在很久以前的一次中秋节的早晨有这样一件事：

在早上，我刚刚起床，就听见了妈妈的说话声：“今天晚上我们家准备举行登山赏月的活动，请各位带好月饼和水瓶，准备好一切物品，我们就出发!”听完，我一蹦三尺高，十分兴奋。

到了晚上，我们带好月饼和水，就出发了。在路上，我还看见了许多和我们有一样想去爬山的人，他们也各自带着自己的家人和必须物品。

“呼!终于到了!”我在山脚下说，“啊!这山也太高了吧”我抬头看了看山说。忽然，我听到了一个熟悉的声音，是同学，他说：“---X，你不会嫌这个山太高了，所以不想爬吧!嘻嘻。”“才不是呢，我现在就爬给你看!”我嘟着嘴说。“来，我们比一比吧!”“好哇!谁怕谁!”

于是，我们就开始爬山了。

在刚开始爬的时候，我还在想：这山也不难爬呀，挺轻松的呀!可是，当我爬到了山腰上时，我已经气喘吁吁了，我就想放弃了，可当我想起，刚刚看到的那一幕：许许多多的老奶奶和老爷爷也在爬山。于是，我立马摆脱了这种放弃的想法，并立马鼓起劲来，迅速的往山顶上爬。

……

“终于到山顶了!”我气喘吁吁的说。我和家人打开月饼一边看着圆滚滚的明月，一边吃着月饼，看着看着，我不禁想起一句古诗”今夜月明人尽望，不知秋思落谁家”。

中秋节，这个在我脑海中的“一粒沙子”、“一颗星星”、“一滴水”，可真令人难忘!

导语：寒假来了，身为高中生，当然不能闲着，要想学好英语，先从写作开始。下面为大家带来一篇寒假英语作文。

Chinese New Years day, we at home the next day to discuss where to go. Because these days the weather is clear, sunny, cloudless, and we unanimously decided to go to picnic in the mountains. So, we have informed Yidie Aunt them, ready to picnic the next day when the dumpling skin, meat, condiments and bowls, chopsticks, pots and so on. The next day, we are mighty walked to the hill.

After a lengthy one hour, we finally boarded the summit. Then, we started the division of labor: Yidie had to base lesions, aunts dumplings, some of our kids went to the collection of firewood. A moment later, a good stove base, and great people to immediately lift the pan up, doped Sheung Shui. This is, Chai has Picking is running out, we started to light a fire. Fire is getting bigger wang, the boil was the dark. 3 Yidie saw, and said humorously: "with a small double (my nickname) is the same as black." Listening to other people, have a laugh. Moment, dumplings have been wrapped, and five aunt carrying his dumplings to the pot was about to fall, the three Yidie looking dumplings, and shook his head and said: "The package was too fat, and nothing like the small pairs only skinny monkey." Once again, other people laugh, I laugh again and good gas, not help then added: "with the same glowing three-Yi Die." Other people laugh even more fiercely.

I do not know how long before, dumplings cooked in. We are holding a bowl of Wai in the pot next to desperately grab dumplings. I finally grabbed one, is to eat, they were snatched his brother.

After eating dumplings, we discovered that the sky late and had to leave here, reluctantly go to the house to the direction。

Today is sunday. i got up very early in the morning. after breakfast i went to the bookstore. i wanted to buy a book robinson crusoe. i looked for the book for quite some time but couldn‘t find it. the shop assistant then came to help me. i was very glad that i got the book at last.

in the afternoon i called on my friend wang lin. he just came back from beijing. we talked a lot.

in the evening i watched an interesting play on tv. i enjoyed it very much. i had a winderful time.

《我的星期日》

今天是星期日，早上我起得很早。早饭后我去书店，我想买一本《鲁滨逊漂流记》。我找了很长时间也没 有发现，店员过来帮我，我很高兴终于找到了那本书。

下午我去了我的朋友王林家，他刚从北京回来，我们谈了很多。

晚上我在电视上看了一个非常有趣的电视剧，我非常喜欢它。我过得很愉快。

Many traditional arts are losing nowadays, because some of them have been replaced by the new machines and the scientific products.

I feel so sorry about the losing arts, in my opinion, they are so classic and their charm will never fade away.

Take my grandma for example. She is good at paper-cut which was inherited from her mother.

But when comes to my mother’s generation, paper-cut seems to be kicked out, there are less people need it, so my mother doesn’t learn this skill. The paper-cut art is losing in my family. When I found my grandma had this skill, I was so surprised and curious about it. I asked my grandma to teach me this skill. During the process, I found this art was so great, I was attracted by it. Some traditional arts like paper-cup should be kept.

如今很多传统艺术正在消失,因为一些传统已经被新的机器和科学的产品所替代。对于正在消失的艺术，我感到抱歉,在我看来,他们是如此经典和有魅力,将永远不会消失。以我奶奶为例。

她擅长剪纸，继承了她母亲。

但是当到我母亲这一代,剪纸似乎被淘汰了,越来越少的人需要它,所以我的母亲不学习这个技能。

剪纸艺术在我家中逐渐失去。当我发现我奶奶有这个技能的时候,我是如此的惊讶和好奇。我叫奶奶教我这个技能。在这个过程中,我发现这门艺术是如此之大,我被它吸引住了。一些传统艺术像剪纸应该被保持。

[高中英语作文：剪纸艺术

The Mid-Autumn festival has many customs, such as eating mooncakes, but do you know the origin of the Mid-Autumn festival?

Legend before hou yi to the mountains to find friends to visit, to see the queen passing by here, is to the west to a pack of undead medicine. Hou yi came home to sow wife chang e, was temporarily handed the elixir to chang e. But this is a good disciple loose Mongolia saw, loose Mongolia is the salt of the earth.

Once hou yi to go hunting with a disciple, loose Mongolia pretended to be sick, stayed. Hou yi, loose Mongolia took their forced chang e to hand over medicine, nod to break into the room, the goddess of the moon there is no way, she suddenly brainwave, take medicine, gulps it down. Because of the goddess of the moon in the heart of caring husband, so become a fairy chang e flew to the nearest the moon.

Hou yi returned, he found the goddess of the moon in the sky and said to him: "tonight the moon will be round, what do you do in the evening in the northeast corner of room, a piece of dough until midnight we couple reunion." Hou yi do as the goddess of the moon said, in the middle of the night, the couple finally reunited. The goddess of the moon when two people part of hou yi said: "August 15 this day of year, you have to make the dough, until midnight to walk again after I come back." Come back every year, make the dough, waiting for the goddess of the moon. Later, this custom was inherited, developed into now the Mid-Autumn festival, the Mid-Autumn festival to eat moon cakes also became a custom.

I really like this myth, also loved the Mid-Autumn festival.

中秋节有许多习俗，比如吃月饼，但是你知道中秋节的由来吗?

传说以前后羿到山里去寻友访道，看见西王母路过此地，就向西王母求到一包不死药。回到家后，后羿舍不得撒下妻子嫦娥，就暂时把不死药交给嫦娥保管。但这正好被徒弟蓬蒙看到了，蓬蒙就起了坏心眼。

有一次后羿带着徒弟去打猎，蓬蒙假装生病，留了下来。后羿一走，蓬蒙就拿着宝刀闯进房间里逼嫦娥交出不死药，嫦娥没有办法，突然她灵机一动，把不死药一口吞了下去。因为嫦娥心里牵挂着丈夫，所以嫦娥飞到最近的月亮上成了仙。

后羿回来后，发现嫦娥在天上对他说：“今天晚上月亮会变圆，你晚上做一块面团在屋子东北角，等到午夜时我们夫妻二人就团圆了。”后羿按照嫦娥说的做，到了午夜，夫妻二人终于团圆了。两人离别时嫦娥对后羿说：“每年的8月15这天，你都要做好面团，等到午夜时分我回来了之后再走。”每年都做好面团，等着嫦娥回来。后来，这个习俗被大家继承下来，发展成为现在的中秋节，中秋节吃月饼也就成了习俗。

我非常喜欢这个神话，也非常喜爱中秋节。

[英语作文过中秋节

今天是中秋节，早上还真看不出来中秋的热闹，那平常不过的天却在晚上奇迹的出现那融烈的烟花，花儿是欢迎我似得笑灿了脸，转瞬又换成了下一个，还有那从邻居家传出的骰子声，“铛铛”响。

我呢?当然是跑到超市里买今天的奖品，食品区那里正可谓是超市里的一道风景线，都可以像骨牌那样推到一个全军覆没!我站在那真的有种想暴走的感觉，但事实是我紧咬着牙，忍着被挤的可能冲进去买，还好比较熟悉那里，三下五除，我就把想买的那一大袋抱在怀里，屁颠屁颠地走着。

当回到家时，迎面而来的是姐姐，把我的东西全捧进客厅的桌子上，当骰子和碗放在桌子上时，就决定了“博饼大赛”的开始啦!

轮回着，前几盘，姐姐运气超好，相反的哥哥的运气却超烂，其他人都满平稳的，姐姐那一笑啊，真要咧到耳朵根边上了，这次又轮到我了，我一把抓起骰子，使劲一掷， 骰子 “叮叮当当”的掉在碗中，砰发出清脆悦耳的声音。 骰子又像一只调皮的小猴子，在碗中打起转来。我口中虽然念叨着“胜败乃兵家常事”，可心理却没有大的把握。 骰子终于原地不动了，我小心翼翼地点着数：“一，二，三，四，五，六 是对堂，哈哈!” 我高兴的喊叫着……

家里荡漾着一片温馨的海洋，中秋的月亮现在看起来真的好圆好圆，好亮好亮……

Long-awaited winter vacation life is about to start, in order to have a perfect and happy summer vacation, Ive set a plan for the winter vacation, for their content is as follows:

A teacher winter vacation homework, do every day 10 pages each, for within three days to complete winter vacation homework.

Second, is to do good, in advocate for propaganda.

Third, learn to play jump ball.

Four, learn to write c font, strive for to write beautiful calligraphy.

Five, a classmate party, eat delicious, go out to play one day, but in play at the same time to pay attention to safety.

Six, the national flag, learn personal character and social learning lays the foundation for the next semester.

On the morning of the Mid Autumn Festival, our whole family went to the hotel for morning tea. We finished. My sister took me to buy clothes. We bought slippers, cloth shoes and two sets of clothes. My sister and I went to drink pearl milk tea and ate some fish eggs. In this way, my morning passed.

At noon, my brother and I were painting family pictures. My brother said how to draw. I wanted to teach him. Our mother came up and told us to go down and eat moon cakes. When we finished, we continued to draw the family portrait. When we finished, we showed it to the adults. The adults said we painted well. In the evening, my cousin went to buy lanterns for our children. When my cousin came back, we each took lanterns. My sister and my classmates went for a walk. My little sister Tang and my cousin also took lanterns for a walk. Little sister Tang took out her mobile phone and took pictures for us. Its barbecue time! Adults help everyone roast a sheep. And our children also bake for everyone. The most "funny" time was when I was roasting the old fish. I was concentrating on roasting. Suddenly I wanted to pee. I didnt have time to ask someone to watch the old fish being roasted for me. When I came back, it was already burnt.

Here, I wish you a Happy Mid Autumn Festival!

高中英语高分作文：春节

I like The Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and is when all family members get together， just like Christmas in the West. All people living aw

ay from home go back， becoming the busiest time for transportation systems of about half a month from the Spring Festival. Airports， railway stations and long-distance bus stations are crowded with home returnees.

During Spring Festival， the most improtant days are Spring Festival Eve and the first three days.Many customs accompany the Spring Festival.During Spring Festival time， you can see kinds of decorations.you can go to temple fairs and enjoy superb performances of the dances， stilt-walking and amazing acrobatic shows.

so i like it .

导语：2017端午节即将到来，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的有关端午节的作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

whats your plan for dragon boat festival?

As a chinese, I was really ashamed of having a little knowledge of dragon boat festival. Perhaps I was born in northern city, though my city is nearby sea, it has been built a U port which I can only see cargo ships and cant see the sweeping ocean. So I have never see the dragon boat contest since I was born. So the dragon boat festival is just a holiday for eating Zong Zi. My mother made Zong Zi when I was a child. Because there was no supermarket, we couldnt buy finished product from market. However, now, we can buy anything in supermarket, so my mother didnt make them anymore. The boat festival began to fade out my mind.

In reality, young people began to have a bug to celebrate foreign festivals, such as Christams, Saint Valentines day, April Fools Day, some people also celebrate Easter in church. Talk about Dragon boat festival, its the same as some foreign conventional festivals, such as Witchs Day in Czech. People burned the witchs puppet so as to welcome spring. Some people are willing to celebrate foreign festivals because they like alien culture. And vice versa, foreigners who like China also concern about Chinese traditional culture.

After new holiday regulation, we have three holidays during the dragon boat festival. So many people will choose this time to travel. People who lived in Xiamen are able to visit Xiapu or Wu Yi mountain, these tourist attractions are in Fujian province,which is suit a short tirp. but Id like to stay at home for my decorate painting. I decide to draw two canvases about Christmas, its really a big project. Then Ill hang them on the new house wall. I must start it now, or I cant finish them before Christmas eve. But I preceive its a little difficult to draw them in such a hot season. ​

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你的端午节计划是什么?

作为一个中国人，我对端午节有点了解真是惭愧。也许我出生在北方城市，虽然我的城市在附近的海，它已经建立了一个U端口，我只能看到货船和无法看到席卷大海。所以我从出生起就再也没有见过龙舟比赛。所以端午节只是吃粽子的节日。当我还是个孩子的时候，我妈妈就做了粽子。因为没有超市，我们不能从市场上买到成品。然而，现在，我们可以买任何东西在超市，所以我的母亲没有让他们了。端午节开始淡出我的脑海。

在现实中，年轻人开始有了庆祝外国节日，如圣诞节、情人节、四月愚人节，也有些人庆祝复活节教堂。谈端午节，它同国外的一些传统节日，如巫婆的一天在捷克。人们焚烧巫婆木偶以迎接春天。有些人愿意庆祝外国节日，因为他们喜欢异族文化。反之亦然，外国人喜欢中国也关注中国传统文化。

经过新的假期规定，端午节期间我们有三个假期。所以很多人会选择这次旅行。住在厦门的人们都能够访问霞浦或吴仪山，这些旅游景点都在福建省，这是适合短期旅行。但我想呆在家里做我的装饰画。我决定画关于圣诞节的两画布，它真是一个大项目。然后我把它们挂在新房子的墙上。我必须现在开始，否则我不能在圣诞节前夕完成它们。但我认为其借鉴他们在这样一个炎热的季节，有点困难。

Mothers Day Mother’s Day is a holiday when children honor their mothers with

cards, gifts and flowers. In many countries, such as Denmark, Finland, Italy,

Turkey, Australia and the US, people cel lebrate Mother’s Day on the second

Sunday in May while many other countries of the world celebrate their own

Mother’s day at different times through out the year.

One of the best ways to celebrate Mother’s Day is to give your mom the day

off. Let her relax with the rest of the family doing all the housework. Usually,

dad and the kids will let mom sleep late that morning as they go into the

kitchen to prepare her favourite breakfast. Never forget to place a vase with a

single flower on the table beside the food. The kids can pick up the flower from

the garden or buy one from the shop. Arrange everything nicely before mom wakes

up. Some families will carry the food and mom’s favourite sections from the

newspaper to her bedroom so that mom can have breakfast in bed. Presents and

cards from the kids can be handed to mom by themselves or just placed on the

dining table.

After breakfast, go anywhere mom likes to go. Shopping, swimming or going on

a picnic in the garden. Make a special Mother’s Day dinner or take mom out for a

great meal in a famous restaurant she loves most.

Anyway ,let mom enjoy the whole day and feel your love, and then the Mother’s

Day can be a good one. As Mother’s Day is around the corner, it’s time to take

actions!

Today, as the economy develops fast, people can buy what they need, the

producers provide them all the new things, so the factory produce many products,

in order to make the biggest profit, they don’t deal with the pollution. Water

gets polluted, it does harm to people’s health, we drink water everyday, the

government controls the producers to figure out some ways to deal with the water

pollution.

The Mid-Autumn Festival has all interesting history. Long ago in one of the

dynasties of China there was a king who was very cruel to the people and did not

manage the country well. The people were so angry that some brave ones suggested

killing the king. So they wrote notes telling about the meeting place and time

and put them into cakes.

On the 15th day of the 8th lunar month every person was told to buy the

cakes. When they ate them they discovered the notes. So they gathered together

to make a sudden attack on the king. From then on the Chinese people celebrate

on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month and eat moon cakes in memory of that

important event.

When the Mid-Autumn Festival is near, shop windows are beautifully

decorated. Many moon cakes are displayed for people to buy. People send presents

such aswine, fruits and moon cakes to their friends and relatives. In the

evening of the day, they have a feast. After the feast, they go out to the

garden to look at the moon. The children run and laugh on the streets.

It is believed that the moon is at her brightest on this night. Many poems

have been written about it, and poets are never tired of reading and writing

such poems. In Chinese literature, the moon of the Mid Autumn Festival has been

compared to a looking-glass, a jade rabbit, and so on. It seems that Chinese

literature takes far more interest in the moon than in the sun.

为丰富中学生的环保知识，培养防护意识，学校英语社针对我国雾霾天气频现，危害严重的现状，决定在学生中举行英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。

1．雾霾天气的危害：

2．雾霾产生的原因；

3．自我防护的方法。

参考词汇：尾气排放：exhaust emission

雾霾天气：hazy weather

注意：1．词数：120_-150；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Nowadays, the hazy weather frequently appears in our country. It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation. Terrible accidents happen every now and then, some highways have to be shut down because of the low visibility.

Obviously, air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather. At the same time, smoke from burning coal and all kinds of dust are also important factors. Besides, exhaust emission from cars and buses has made the situation even worse.

So proper measures should be adopted to deal with the serious problem. To students, opportunities for outdoor sports activities should be decreased, washing faces and hands with running water after each outing is also important, and do not forget to wear a good-quality mask to protect yourself while going out.

I hope we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon.

[高中英语作文：雾霾

噢耶！过年喽！吃年夜饭了！”我高兴地到处嚷嚷。

除夕之夜是一家人团聚的时刻，俗话说得好：“有钱没钱，回家过年。”这一天是中华民族团聚欢乐的好时光。

我家也不例外，妈妈和姥姥做年夜饭，爸爸和姥爷贴春联，我呢在楼下和小伙伴玩鞭炮，大家都忙得不亦乐乎。

随着“久经菜场”的妈妈一声大喊：“上菜了……”拉开了年夜饭的序幕。望着这一桌热气腾腾的年夜饭，我馋得口水直往肚子里流。妈妈指着一盘红烧鲤鱼说：“这是‘年年有余’！”姥姥指着红烧鸡说：“这是‘吉祥如意’！”爸爸与姥爷碰杯进酒：“祝您老福如东海，寿比南山！”并夹起青菜对二老说：“这是长庚菜，祝您二老长命百岁。”姥爷捋捋胡须，夹起用玉米粉做起的龙须饼说：“这是‘双龙戏珠’该外孙吃，争取考双百！”我开玩笑地回答：“考试有四门呢！”“哦，那就再夹两个！”姥爷乐呵呵地又往我的碗里夹了两个，“那就考两个双百!”“好，好!”我狼吞虎咽地吃了起来……

这时，姥爷笑咪咪地说：“我来给大家发红包，前提是每人必须回答一个问题。”大家顿时安静了下来。“老婆子，请听题：“长长一串，一爆赛过红豆子。”姥姥稍思片刻说：“爆竹。”“中奖！”姥爷乐呵呵得将红包递给了姥姥。

后来姥爷又对爸爸说：“小小一个本，计算是第一。”爸爸脱口而出：“是计算机。”爸爸笑嘻嘻地接过了红包。

“外孙，该你了。我来考考你的数学，5×6×3.14等于多少？”我思考了一下：“等于94.2。”“正确！”我也赢得了一个红包。

“女儿，你是家庭主妇，我问你，什么东西越洗越小？”“肥皂。”妈妈也顺理成章地得到了一个大红包。

屋内笑声阵阵，屋外鞭炮声声，这也正应了门外那副春联：四海为春春不老，九州同乐乐无穷。

Mid-autumn Festival is a popular and important lunar harvest festival celebrated by Chinese people。 The festival is held on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese calendar。 There are some traditions in this holiday。 For example， people would have a big dinner with there families。 After dinner， they often enjoy the full moon which is round and bright。 The other tradition of mid-autumn festival is eating moon cake。 Moon cake is the essential of that day， which means reunion。 As time goes by， there are various kinds of moon cakes， but they are much more expensive than before。 I like mid-autumn festival because my families will get together and have a big dinner on that day。

Today is New Years Eve morning， firecrackers sounding snap snap away. As long as you take a look at the outside， red firecrackers everywhere， come together to form a Red Sea. The family have their own homes going up in the beautiful， it seems like in the match. My family is no exception， sweeping， glass， cabinets， such as rubbing. Prepare the arrival of the New Year. 今天是除夕，上午，鞭炮声劈啪劈啪的响个不停。只要你向外面看一看，到处都是红红的鞭炮，汇成了一条红海。各家人都把自己家打扮的漂漂亮亮的，好像在比美似的。我家也不例外，扫地、擦玻璃、擦柜子等。准备新年的到来。 Afternoon， we posted in accordance with the custom of the Chinese New Year couplets， father and a good paste， and then said to me： "I paste you posted， I looked at the high level you say rich， said that if the lower rising good you "， I asked my father why? Dad said： "The plan is a lucky，" "Oh， I understand，" We posted on the Alliance are： evil Hongfu family happy is： wang gas people to come into everything. 下午，我们就按过年的习俗贴春联，爸爸和好浆糊，然后对我说：“我贴你看着高低我贴高了你就说‘发财’，如果低了就说‘高升’好吗”，我问爸爸为什么呢?爸爸说：“就是图个吉祥”，“噢我懂了”我们贴的上联是：家有宏福千般喜，下联是：人来 旺气万事成。 End paste New Year， we began dumplings. Good luck to Tim， we are still a dumpling in a bag of coins. Dinner， my folder， a Dumpling， one to eat， "cough，" the voice of a coin吃出for my whole family applauded， and say that I am lucky this year. After dumplings， we saw the Chinese New Year Festival， my favorite essay nd "yellow soybeans." Liu Qian first a one-dollar coins into the cup， then into the host egg rings. "Bean yellow" in a person to "take off clouds" that they "Li Xiangyun" really funny. No wonder people say： "Spring Festival Evening Show" is a cultural feast. 贴完春联，我们就开始包饺子。为了添吉祥，我们还在一个饺子里包了一个硬币。吃晚饭时，我夹了一个饺子，一吃 “咯”的一声，吃出一个硬币全家人都为我鼓掌，说我今年有福气。吃完饺子，我们又

山西省原平市山西省原平市实验中学0516班黄浦东晋北大地的八月，秋高气爽，在艳阳高照下，瓦蓝瓦蓝的天空像洗过一样明净，棉花团似的云朵就像绣在蓝色绒毯上的大花。瑟瑟的秋风吹熟了田里的庄稼，大白杨的叶子变黄了，爬山虎的叶子已经变红，小草，不像夏天那样精神抖擞，果树上那累累果实由青变黄，由青变红，渐渐从叶子中间显露出来，散发出一阵阵清香。成熟的气息荡漾在秋天的空间，丰收的喜悦流淌在人们的心田里。

此刻，中华民族的古老而传统的节日中秋节也迈着轻盈的脚步向我们走来，它给我们带来了温馨，带来了希望。

中秋节也叫仲秋节或团圆节，每到这个时候，出门在外的人们都要回家过节，人们有院子的，把家里的桌子搬到院子里，摆放上贡品，有香蕉，苹果，红提，马奶提，梨，当然最主要的还是月饼。妈妈还在桌前摆上香炉，里面插上了三根香。我心血来潮，把我所有的赛车从盒子里拿了出来，摆到了桌子的下层，我边笑边说"哇哈哈，看吧，我的赛车多酷！"我把其中唯一的一辆带车灯的车打开开关。哇！我的车灯比蜡烛还亮！

这时，妈妈出来了，对我说:"你在忙活什么呢？"我笑嘻嘻地对妈妈说:"妈妈，你看，这是我的杰作！"妈妈仔细一看，下面摆的全部是赛车，妈妈让我别摆，我说:"不要嘛，再说了，我也要让月亮公公，不，是月亮婆婆，让月亮婆婆看看我们地球孩子玩儿的是什么，也让她给星星孩子们买点好玩儿的嘛！"妈妈也只能让我摆着了。过了一会儿，妈妈对我说:"孩子，爸爸要响花炮呢。"我赶紧进了家，跑到了二楼，看着那一个个烟火直射云宵，我用望远镜看着天上的月亮，边看边想，你说这嫦娥也真是的，为什么要偷吃后羿的仙丹呢？如果这个故事是真的，那么嫦娥现在一定在广寒宫里眺望着人间美丽的烟火。

我已经置身于那美丽的月宫。

之后，我的爸爸把桌子搬回了家，这时，联欢晚会已经开始了，我们一家人边吃月饼边看电视，直到晚会完毕，这时，外面又是一片炮声，我想到了香港，澳门回归祖国，还想到七子之歌里的第三首---

台湾，我们是东海捧出的珍珠一串，

琉球是我的群弟，

我便是台湾，……

这一年的中秋节真令人幸福，难忘啊！

简评：文章既抒发了对秋日美景的赞美,又将小孩子的纯真表达的淋漓尽致,还由中秋联想到祖国统一,是一篇很好的习作。