初三英语中考作文范文10篇(热门20篇)

Since the childhood, I would cultivate the good habit of reading. The good habits can help me to increase knowledge, make I am not a tunnel vision.

The so-called "reading is the key to knowledge". While reading, if you have any new words, I will be looking for "teacher" dont talk to me to solve problem, so I know the increasingly rich vocabulary.

Old saying: a scholar need not leave his home to know whats going on in the world. In spare time, I also read newspapers. Reading newspapers can not only let me know what happened at home and abroad, can also be vigilant about everything around them. Newspaper has a "student is in the heavens and the earth" to let the students write. I can earn money not only can read the article written by other students, so as to improve their writing ability, so why not?

In addition, I also read some illustrated books. These books can bring me entertainment, can let me temporarily put the heavy homework and all troubles were thrown to the outside of the cloud nine. It can make me happy, easily absorb knowledge.

Because I have the habit of reading, parents often buy all kinds of books for me. Whenever my birthday, because friends know my hobbies, so receive gifts, for the most part, are books. Over time, my collection of books, in the study almost doesnt even have the location of the station! The family called my study "little library".

The book was my companion! My friends, let us to cultivate the good habit of reading. It will specific will benefit you.

从小，我就培养了阅读的好习惯。这好习惯能帮助我增加知识，使我不至于成为井底之蛙。

所谓“阅读就是开启知识宝库的钥匙”。在阅读时，要是遇到任何的生字新词，我便会找“不说话的老师”为我解决难题，所以我认识的词汇日益丰富。

俗语说:秀才不出门，能知天下事。在空闲时，我也会阅读报章。阅读报章不但能让我知道国内外所发生的事，也能对周遭的事情提高警惕。报章里头设有’’学生天地’’让学生们投稿。我不但能从中赚取稿费也能阅读其他学生所写的文章，从而提高自己的写作能力，何乐而不为呢?

此外，我也会阅读一些图文并茂的图书。这些图书能带给我娱乐，能让我暂时把繁重的功课及一切烦恼都被抛到九霄云外。它的却能让我快乐地，轻松地吸取知识。

由于我有阅读的习惯，因此父母常买各式各样的书籍给我。每当我生日时，由于朋友都知道我的爱好，所以收到的礼物绝大部分都是书籍。久而久之，我的藏书汗牛充栋，书房里几乎连站的位置都没有了!家人都称我的书房为“小小图书馆”。

书本真是我的良伴!朋友们，且让我们一去培养阅读的好习惯吧!它肯特定会使你受益无穷。

We were sitting in the classroom quietly, waiting for the invigilator. We

were anxious to get the examination paper and see whether it was easy or

difficult.

The invigilator came into the classroom. He first looked around.

Then he counted the papers. We could only hear the papersfricative. I had a

look at my watch. We would be examined in eight minutes. I felt a bit nervous. I

thought to myself,"Will the exam be easy or difficult? Will the last question be

very hard for me to work out?"The invigilator began to deliver us the papers. I

had been ready. As soon as I got the paper, I began to write quickly. At this,

the invigilator said loudly,"You cant write until the bell rings".I felt sorry

for that. I watched the hands of the clock and thought hard. I counted

quietly,"four minutes, three minutes, two minutes,thirty seconds, twenty-five

seconds""Ding" The bell rang. We picked up our pens and began to write

quietly.

What a long time we had been waiting!

Maybe many people know the universe is very big. Some scientists thought the universe seems to be rapidly expanding its component galaxies moving ever farther apart. So it’s very big. There are many heavenly bodies in the universe. If you stand in space, you will see many beautiful stars, like sun and other planets.

And then, let’s recognize our solar system. There are eight planets in our solar system. They’re Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. The Sun is very hot. Its surface has 5600℃. Its gravitation is very strong. So the Earth goes around Sun. And the Earth is our home. We’re living on the Earth, and it is the most beautiful in the solar system. It has lots of water and plants. And the moon is the Earth’s partner. It goes around the Earth. And other planets are very far from the Earth. So the people can’t reach them and none of them has an environment with air. The people also can’t live in them.

Finally, let’s see in the sky in the night. There is much beautiful and magic view in the universe.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：AbouttheUniverse

"XX school student collective food poisoning", "XX place bleak look-out collapse", "XX place again there was a traffic accident"... Life, always hear or see some strange, let person sigh of accident, one after another tragedy always constantly in front of us.

Danger is in our each persons side, sometimes is so near to us. "Lucky" I experienced this once. That, I come home from school, saw this scene: a child was playing in the road, no attention paid to the coming danger, a large truck coming toward her. Others shouted, looking back, the childrens truck, immediately panic, his face pale, legs a soft, straight down to the ground, big trucks the emergency brake, but it was too late, the boy has been under pressure in the car. People suddenly gave a shout, some with burying his face in his hands, did not dare to look down, some by the sudden scene scared silly, just stand in situ. "Another child forever left the world", is really sad. However, when people return to absolute being, has found that children had miraculously stood up, not a little damage.

Many risks ah, had a narrow escape. Thanks to the girl in the middle of front, thanks to the cars chassis is high, if a little partial, if the body again a little bit low, the consequence is unimaginable.

Security, is inseparable from a topic, we will never pay attention to safety, is we all know the truth. But safety accidents happen every day, and constantly increasing, every day in the heartbreaking tragedy. Safety first, with safety, we floral life to blossom. With safety, we can happily spend the youth, life for everyone only once, lost, will not come back. Whenever we up and down the stairs, a little light, quiet a little. Whenever we cross the road, look around first, then walked briskly, whenever we school, want to go home as soon as possible, dont play on the side of the road.

Life is great, but it is fragile. We should cherish life, safety first!

“XX学校学生集体食物中毒”，“XX地方煤井塌陷”，“XX地方又发生了交通事故”……生活中，总会听到或看到这样一些令人惊心，让人叹息的事故发生，一个又一个地悲剧总会在我们面前不断地上演。

危险就在我们每个人的身边，有时离我们是那么近。我“有幸”经历了这么一次。那次，我放学回家，看到了这样一幕：一个孩子正在马路中央玩耍，丝毫没有注意到即将到来的危险，一辆大卡车朝她驶来。旁人高喊一声，那个孩子回头一看，是卡车，顿时惊恐万分，脸色发白，腿一软，人直直地倒在地上，大卡车紧急刹车，可是，已经迟了，那个孩子已被压在车下。人群顿时发出一阵惊呼，有的用双手捂住脸，不敢往下看，有的被突如其来的场面吓傻了，呆呆地立在原地。“又一个孩子永远地离开了这个世界”，真是悲哀。可是，当人们回过神来后，却发现小孩奇迹般地站了起来，没有受到一点伤害。

多险呀，真是死里逃生。幸亏了那女孩倒在了车前的正中间，幸亏了那车的底盘高，如果再偏一点，如果车身再低一点，那后果不堪设想。

安全，是我们永远离不开的一个话题，注意安全，是我们每个人都懂的道理。但是安全事故还是每天都在发生，而且不断地增多，天天都在上演那令人心碎的悲剧。安全第一呀，有了安全，我们如花般的生命才能绽放。有了安全，我们才能开开心心地度过青春年华，生命对每个人来说只有一次，失去了，就永远回不来了。每当我们上下楼梯，轻一点儿，静一点儿。每当我们横穿马路，先左右看一下，再轻快地走过，每当我们放学时，要尽快回家，不要在路边玩耍。

生命是伟大的，但又是脆弱的。我们要珍惜生命，安全第一!

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：

1. 衣着整洁;

2. 保持环境卫生;

3. 待人有礼，乐于助人;

4. 遵守交通规则;

5. ……

要求：

1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

3. 词数：80词左右。

范文

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

Its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Dont throw litter or spit about. Its good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

[中考英语作文热门欣赏

1. It rained cats and dogs last night. 昨晚雨下得很大。

Rain cats and dogs是一句非常受欢迎的俚语，几乎每个学英语的学生都懂得用 rain cats and dogs 来形容雨下得很大。

当然如果你不想用俚语的讲法，你可以说："Its raining really hard.(雨下得很大)"或是"Were having a heavy rain."同样也是“雨下得很大”。

那“雨下得很大，我被淋成了落汤鸡”这整句话要怎么讲?“落汤鸡”在英文里常用"I am soaked."(我湿透了)来形容。因此，我们可以说：Its raining cats and dogs out there so Im soaked.

2. We had a downpour. 我们刚遇到了一场倾盆大雨。

中文里常形容下雨像是用“倒”的一样，这在英文里也有同样对等的字眼喔!英文里用的是 downpour 这个词。所以“下雨像是用倒的”我们可以说："We had a downpour."

另外有一个十分口语的讲法就是"Its really coming down out there."，也是形容雨下得很大，像是用“倒”的一样。

3. Its just sprinkling. 只是在下毛毛雨而已。

在英文里不管下“毛毛雨”或是“毛毛雪”我们都可以用 drizzle 和 sprinkle 这两个动词来表示。

Drizzle 这个词就是气象术语“下毛毛雨”的意思，而sprinkle 则是一个动词表示“撒”，但也常被用来形容毛毛雨。

常听到的用法就是："Its drizzling." 或是 "Its sprinkling."另外还有一个词叫 scattered rain，指的则是“零零星星地降雨”。

例如：We have to cancel the track and field contest because of the scattered rain.因为零星的降雨所以我们必须取消田径赛。

例1：

National Day is coming,and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.Its a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.Were visiting Tianya Haijiao,Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think well have a good time there.

国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。

例2：

National Day Holidays

I went to my cousins house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant;She said shes worrying about getting fat,but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that hell educate his child in a severe way,with a future fathers matureness.Im happy for them.:)

Yesterday,our research schools soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half,but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half,so,we lost the game.

Half of the National Day holidays have passed by...life still goes with good and bad times.

国庆假期

我去表哥家在第一天的假期和有一条好消息，他的妻子怀孕了；她说她的担心发胖，但她脸上有掩饰不住的怀孕的喜悦。我表哥告诉我他将教育他的孩子在一场严重的方式，用未来的父亲的口吻。我为他们高兴。：）

昨天，我们的研究学校的足球队有比赛与国际商务系的研究生。这几乎是一场势均力敌的比赛的上半场，但我们似乎缺乏活力，在下半年，但是，我们失去了游戏。

有一半的国庆假期已经过了……生活仍然持续好与不好的时光。

How to get happyness 如何获得快乐

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。

一、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely/totally/entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way/respect/aspect.

3. A and B differ in…

4. A differs from B in…

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in…

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B…

7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B…

8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B…

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B…However, A…; on the other hand, B…

11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…

二、演绎法常用的句型

1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5.The reasons are as follows.

三、因果推理法常用句型

1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

3. We read the book; as a result/therefore/thus/hence/consequently/for this reason/because of this, we’ve learned a lot.

4. As a result of/Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for overweight is eating too much.

6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.

7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.

8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

四、举例法常用句型

1. Here is one more example.

2. Take … for example.

3. The same is true of…

4. This offers a typical instance of…

5. We may quote a common example of…

6. Just think of…

春天又到了!

柳枝染上了嫩绿，在春风里尽情摇摆。清晨，我踏着缥缈的薄雾，来到了田野。田野里，到处长着碧绿的小草，显得安详宁静。四月的春天就应该有这样的绿。忽然，我看见草丛中有一点嫩绿在阳光的照耀下，闪闪发光。我便好奇地走了过去，看看它究竟是什么?当我走近它时，它便从我眼前消失了!眨眼间，它又出现在另一边的草丛里，这次，我没有惊动它，而是悄悄的靠近它。走进了，也便看清了!哦，原来是一只绿色的蜻蜓，安静的落在草丛中，也在享受这美好的春光。

河边，一棵棵墨绿的柳树就如小姑娘那乌黑的头发一般，在风中显得素雅恬静，又略带几份妩媚。一棵柳树是一种感情，万棵柳树就是万种风情。柳树旁边，一群钓鱼的老人坐在河边正在垂钓。看，有一位老人钓到了一条大鱼，旁边的老人们看见了，仿佛也想钓到那么大的鱼，便集中注意力，尽力去钓到大鱼。在春天里，钓鱼不但是一种休闲，更是一种安逸的享受。

花园里，一朵朵粉红色的郁金香正开得欣欣向荣，娇艳欲滴。真是：等闲识得春风面，万紫千红总是春啊!北国的春天又是另一番景象。高高的山峦上，一层层白雪盖住了它，就像一个白色的花园一般。这雪，就是被称为北国春天使者的春雪。在黑龙江，那里的雪花非常有名。每年初春，那里的人们都会举行冰雕展。一个个五彩斑斓的冰雕展现在广场上，给黑龙江的春天点缀上了美丽的一笔。在黑龙江，那里的人们称春雪为碧空之仙女、苍穹之公主、宇宙之天使。可知，春雪在黑龙江人眼里是多么的美。

春来了!我要好好地看看这春的水、春的风、春的树、春的草、春的花。我还要听听柳哨的鸣唱，我更要闭上眼睛，去感受春的爱抚。因为，那是春意，也是春的声音，更是春天来临的气息。

关于中学生使用手机

赞成意见：

1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。

2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。

3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。

4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。

反对意见：

1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。

2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。

3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

参考作文：

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also，they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we dont need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones，because we meet them every day. And mobile phones may influence our study。

In my opinion，its not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way。

这是04年某省的中考题目：根据美国朋友Bob来信的内容写一篇英文回信。

Dear friend,

亲爱的朋友，

Hello, Im your new friend. My name is [ename]Bob[/ename]. Im fifteen. Im American. I live in New York.

你好，我是你的新朋友。我的名字叫鲍勃，我十五岁，是美国人，我住在纽约。

I am a middle school student. Im good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together.

我是一个初中生，我擅长数学，它很有趣。我最喜欢的运动是篮球，我不仅仅是一个篮球迷，也是一个很好的选手。我喜欢音乐，我经常跟我的朋友一起唱流行歌曲。

After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.

放学之后，我喜欢上网，通过网络，我了解了很多关于中国的事情，现在我在学汉语，我希望有一天能去你的国家游览。

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

请给我回信说说你的生活吧，我期待着你的来信。

[关于初三英语作文的范例：英语书信

[适用话题]“财富”“我有一个梦”“慈善”“奉献”等。

Money Everything?(金钱就是一切吗?)

At present some people think that money is everything. They say that you can do everything if you have money. You can live in a beautiful house, keep a luxurious ear and have all sorts of delicious food.

I dont think so. Indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. But there are many, many wonderful things in the world that cannot be bough/; with money.

For example, knowledge cannot be bought with money. One cannot be rich in knowledge unless he studies hard. Time cannot be bought with money, either. Who can buy even a second with money?

There are still many other things that cannot be bought with money: health,life, happiness,friendship, love and so on. Just think, if a person hasnt these things at all, is the money still useful?

Now, do you think money is everything?

金钱就是一切吗?

近来，有些人认为钱就是一切，他们说，要是有了钱，你就可以做任何事情，你可以住舒适的房子，坐豪华的轿车，吃可口的饭菜，

我不这么认为。的确，钱可以买到我们需要的许多东西，但是，世界上还有许多美丽的东西用钱是买不到的。

例如，知识是买不来的，一个人要想获得丰富的知识，只有通过艰苦的学习。时间用钱也是

Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us. At home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it?

A poem:

Water has no taste at all.

Water has no color.

Water’s in the waterfall.

The pump.

The tap.

The well.

Water is everywhere around us.

Water is in the rain.

In the stream.

In the pond.

And in the river.

And in the sea again.

There isn’t much water on the earth. we must to save it. It is not inexhaustible.

It is very valuable.

Weekly Diary(across the road)

Time flys. A week has been gone. This week I have nothing sepecial except helping an old lady across the road. I left home for school in a hurry on Monday morning, because I had flag-raising ceremony on that morning. When I was nearly arrived at school, I saw an old lady whose hair is all white and she seemed didn’t move smoothly. I worried about that she would have accidents without help. So I help her to go through the road. As a result, I was late for school, but I was very happy.

时间飞逝。一个星期就这么过了。这周我和平时一样除了帮助一老奶奶过马路。星期一早上我匆匆忙忙的就出门去上学了，因为那天早上有升旗仪式。在我快到学校的时候，我看到一个头发全白的老奶奶，而且她行动似乎不是很方便。我担心没有别人的帮助她会出事。所以我帮助她过马路。结果我上学迟到了，但是我很高兴。

I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as Im concerned, hes very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present.

我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫菲利普。我觉得他是非常善良和慷慨的。当我在高中的时候，他对我很友好、很真诚。我高兴的时候，他也和我一起开心。当我难过时，他总是安慰我。当我失败时，他总是鼓励我。当我迷茫时，他总是拉我一把。尽管有时候我们会吵架，我们关系仍然很好。争吵之后我们可以更好的了解对方。我生日的时候，他总是送我一份特别的礼物。

Hes very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.

他非常勤劳也很聪明。在学校他总是很努力学习。由于他的努力，他总是能在考试中取得好成绩。他的英语口语比我好。大多数时候他都愿意用英语和我聊天。由于他的帮助，我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步。

1、最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。

Recently， the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.

2、互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。

Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-daylife. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems aswell.

3、如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。

Nowadays，(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

4、随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…

With the development of science and technology， more and more people believe that…

5、任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages anddisadvantages.

6、关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。

7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and moreserious.

8、……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on theirway.

9、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-daylife.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problemsas well.

10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bargraph/line/graph，it can be seenthat______while. Obviously，______，but why?

11、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that____。

12、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct inmany cases eventoday.

13、现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……更为糟糕的是……

Today， ____， which have brought a lot of harms inour daily life. First， ____Second，____。 What makesthings worse is that______。

14、现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……

Nowadays，it is common to______。

Many people like ______because ______。 Besides，______。

每年的英语中考都有写作这一考查的内容，所以同学们要重视写作的方法，消除畏惧心理，排除心理障碍。纵观近几年中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面简单介绍一下中考英语写作六个要素：审题清，要点明，列提纲，全文顺，无病句，打草稿。

一、审题要清

看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、要点明确

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。

三、列出提纲

为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

四、写顺全文

写短文时要做到五个方面：

1.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。

2.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。

3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法，例如：It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写，例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。

4.描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：外形：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，pretty等;颜色：red,yel-low，blue，white，green，brown，black等;心情：glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interest-ed等;情感：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等。

5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：并列关系：and,as well as,or…;转折关系：but,yet,how-ever…;时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系：so，there-fore，asaresult…;目的：in order to，in order that，so as to,so that…;列举：for example ,such as…;总结性：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…

五、没有病句

中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)看字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。

(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。

(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。

(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。

(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。

六、先打草稿

考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。

The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And it s important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.

Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children can t go to school as usual .

Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too.

In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.

Though we can t help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.

i will be graduating from middle school in the coming days. i have a lot of feelings that i want to express. first, i want to thank all the teachers. you have been working hard to teach us. i would also like to thank my classmates. you have been offering great help to me.

i am so happy today. this will be an end to my middle school life, and soon we will begin the new life in high school. dear teachers, dear classmates, i will always remember you.

i would like to thank you for all the help you gave me during this past semester. you were alway so patient when i asked you questions. you listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. you showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. i felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking english. you made the excercise so interesting that i was always very eager to participate and practice. my english has improved so much. how could i thank you enough?! i cannot wait to take your class next semester and keep working on my english.

这位老师是我初三时的英语老师，至今，我几乎每天都会不由自主地想起他的话，虽已过了两年，但每次回想，似乎前一天还是他的学生，还在上他那个性化的课堂。

我们班是学校历史上最乱的班，初一、初二的英语课就像一张大大白纸上的斑斑点点，零碎得近乎空白。初三伊始，学校大扫除，我们班只有几个人在打扫，大多都溜去玩了。我和同桌在走廊上游荡着，突然被一位老师叫住：“喂，你们两个来，你来倒茶水，你来倒垃圾桶。”“不要，不干。”我说。他喊道：“Go，I’myourEnglishteacher。”这就是我们所等待的英语老师？那天下午我们班里议论纷纷：这个英语老师能管住我们吗？我们初三的英语课还会是空白吗？

答案是我们初三的英语课是满满的五彩斑斓，没有斑点的空白。我们全级有9个班，我们班的英语成绩一直稳居第9名。而这位英语老师一接手，第一次考试时我们就考了个中等，第一次脱掉了第9名的帽子。

我们英语每天总是穿得整整齐齐的，头发丝毫不乱，着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。他总是最后到校，最早离开，戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车匆匆来、匆匆去。走路时也是忽忽匆匆的，昂头直腰，大步直迈。

开学不久，我跟同桌想请他帮我们补习。第一次英语考试我们考了八、九名，我们连连说这个成绩好――若是考差了，他会不补；若是了，又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后，他竟说：“不要，我从来都不帮人补习，我最讨厌补习这玩意了，不要！”我和同桌纳闷了好久：这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知，更纳闷的还在后头，他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了，有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布：“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题，我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生，我最讨厌这些，上课有听就够了，不要再来问我。”话音未落，我们面面相觑，半张着嘴巴，都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的，他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实，这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人，一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前，我们英语站在讲台上，仰头望着风扇，皱着眉头，手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿，他把朝向他的窗都打开了，但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声，他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会，只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇，一手抓着一把大交椅，身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼，不时地听到有人在说：“这……这是老师吗？怎么会有这么个性的老师？”然后呢，我们英语就坐在大交椅上，吹着大风扇，喝着柠檬茶，心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处，他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟，好，”他说，“你们6班就是鬼灵精，一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来，那7班，我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这不补；若是了，又会说不用补。我们找他谈了以后，他竟说：“不要，我从来都不帮人补习，我最讨厌补习这玩意了，不要！”我和同桌纳闷了好久：这样强劲优秀的英语老师竟然没帮人补习过。殊不知，更纳闷的还在后头，他很不喜欢学生课后问他问题。被学生缠得没法了，有一次他干脆在课堂上宣布：“你们不要老是来问我一些乱七八糟的问题，我最讨厌这个了。别的老师都喜欢屁股后面跟着一大串学生，我最讨厌这些，上课有听就够了，不要再来问我。”话音未落，我们面面相觑，半张着嘴巴，都愣住了。而最后证明我们英语是对的，他的课堂足以让我们不用问问题。

确实，这是一个极具个性的英语老师。

九月的课堂闷热得吓人，一到下午那就更难难熬了。一天下午上课前，我们英语站在讲台上，仰头望着风扇，皱着眉头，手还在不断地扇凉。过了会儿，他把朝向他的窗都打开了，但眉头依然皱着。忽的一声，他又匆匆地不见了人影。一会，只见他一手提着一把立地大风扇，一手抓着一把大交椅，身后还叫个学生帮他捧着一杯柠檬茶。我们全班都傻了眼，不时地听到有人在说：“这……这是老师吗？怎么会有这么个性的老师？”然后呢，我们英语就坐在大交椅上，吹着大风扇，喝着柠檬茶，心满意足地讲起课来。

讲课讲到重点处，他就敲敲黑板提醒我们。“哎哟，好，”他说，“你们6班就是鬼灵精，一听我敲黑板就都窜起身来，那7班，我敲个半死他们还是木头般地坐着。学英语就得这好，不用考汕头卷。汕头那些家伙出卷呢，就是四个人关在一间房子里，整天坐着椅子转啊转啊，就转出一张试卷来，专考些难题怪题，正经的又不考。汕头的试卷啊，哎哟哟，那真是害死万万生灵哦。”

学生自然是很尊重他的，其他的老师也是，他说什么就是什么，就连我们那让人不寒而栗的杨校也得让他三分。他跟好的学生没啥话谈，倒是跟那些调皮捣蛋的很谈得来。哪一班谁谁谁捣蛋了，他就找谁谁谁去喝茶聊天。他总是站在理字上，也不得不尊重他。有一次录音机坏了，他气得半死，说公物怎能破坏，东西怎能不打紧，越说越气，最后竟然把书一摔，说：“不上课了，学什么书，学做人好了。”后来有一次他看见粉笔头乱七八糟地散在地上，也气得摔书不上课。

我们英语人有个性，课也有个性。课前唱歌的时候，他竟点起歌来，说：“停停停，别唱这个，唱刘欢的什么‘心不在’，什么‘重头再来’那首来我听。”我们不会唱，他皱了眉说：“哎哟，那么好听的歌怎么不会呢？”接着指着指挥员说：“你，下课去7班学唱这首歌，以后我来了你们就唱给我听。”过后有的老师听说了这事，禁不住大笑起来说：“哈……王老师就是这样，真性情！”

到了复习期间，他大步迈上讲台，把手在半空中一挥，喊道：“来，我们的口号是……”全班一起大喊：“用声音唤起记忆！”感觉，就像在上幸运52一样。

初三即将结束时，他不经意间说起：“老师扮小丑，拼命逗笑，只为了让你们记得更深。”我当时低着头，红了眼圈。在每一次笑声的背后，我们学到了很多，而老师付出了很多很多。他说：“我自认对得起我的教学，你们想想，老师什么时候在课堂上讲错一个字。”真的没有，他从来没有口误，从没说错过一个字，那，精神该多么集中啊。

上学期，有一次我早早地回家，遇见了他，没变，我们英语还是穿得整整齐齐，头发丝毫不乱，着哩水喷得满头油亮油亮的。戴着一副墨镜忽忽地开着摩托车。我惊喜地大叫：“啊，老师！”他一忽而过，也来不及听见。

后来，我梦到了他，也没变，还是在上那么个性的课堂，我还是他的学生，幸福地听着“哎哟哟，这是个黑面鬼，得注意咯……学英语呢，就得这样，我们不但要有激情，还要有表情……来，我们的口号是……”

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