手机改变了我的生活英语(精选20篇)

现在的世界，几乎都离不开电脑了，而电脑，也成了人们每天的“必修课”。

又是一个星期六，我匆匆跑到外婆家，马上奔上二楼，打开电脑，开始上QQ玩游戏。

这是我每周的“必修课”，一到放假，立马去外婆家，投入手机世界。

说实话，当外婆家买了台电脑的时候，我的这门“必修课”就开始了。进入了虚幻的手机世界之后，我总会觉得很开心，因为在那里，没有人认识我，我也不认识别人。很轻松，很自在，但这一切也只不过是虚幻的。

由于我“酷爱”电脑，家人们对我的行为也已经见怪不怪了。外公外婆也不管我，我就理解为他们在“放纵”我了。直到有一天。就就把电脑搬去他们家了。我一想到没电脑玩了，非常愤怒，抑制不住对他们说：“哼，这里都没电脑玩了，我不来了！”然后，我骑着自行车，飞快的回家。

然后我就真的好几个星期没有去外婆家，虽然我心里也不好受，但我还是不肯低头，直到那一天外婆来找我。外婆告诉我，但闹已经搬回来了，你可以去玩了。说完，他就一拐一拐的回去了。望着外婆步履蹒跚的背影，我第一次意识到，外公外婆已经老了，他们需要我的关爱，而我……

我赶紧跑过去扶着外婆，陪她一起回家。这段路说长不长，说短也不短，而我和外婆花了将近一个小时才到家。那是第一次，在外婆家买了电脑后的第一次，我到了那儿之后没有立刻去玩电脑；第一次，正正经经地和他们一起吃饭、闲谈；第一次那么关心他们。

夏夜，偶尔有几声虫声外，很安静。外公外婆并排坐在院子里乘凉，我站在二楼的窗户前，静静的凝望着。也许就是从那时起，我开始改变，我的人声，也应此改变。

别让电脑占据了你的世界！当你沉浸在手机世界的时候，你应该回头看看，不要遗忘了在真实世界里的亲人们，别忘了你应该还给他们一份真诚的、纯洁的爱！

千万别让电脑占据了你的世界，不要成为手机的奴隶！

充分利用好电脑的好处，充分分配好学习时间，加油！

Hello! I am Yulan， a sunshine girl! I’m a student in ClaTwo Grade Seven. My school lifeis so wonderful! Classes begin at 8:10 a.m. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in thafternoon. My favorite subject is math, because it ’s easy and interesting!

Do you like math，can you tell me? I usually have lunch at school, then, I have rest. After school, I often climb hills with my classmates on the playground. It,’s my favorite outdoor activities I like it very much! What do you think?

My schoool life is busy and fantastic. First, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have to get to school before 7:30 because we have a morning class. Second, I like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful.

We also have lots of after-school activies. Third, our school environment is very beautiful, the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive. So I like my school life very much.

在广州从事房地产营销工作的徐龙告诉记者，他这几天准备抽空去香港给母亲买一个名牌手提包，再购置一些上档次的生活用品。

他说，这次他准备用一到两个月工资给父母买些贴身用品，老人家用的东西从来都是很普通的，他想通过自己送的礼物来让父母关注生活品质。

记者从某全国性体检连锁机构的陕西分中心了解到，每年春节期间都会有很多年轻人陪父母来做体检。

他告诉记者，随着人们生活水平的提高，很多人对父母的健康也越来越重视，父母的体检结果出来以后，经常会有子女打电话咨询父母的身体状况和注意事项。

在北京从事金融工作的胡婷早早为父母相中了两双慢跑鞋，她说：“我觉得老人家年纪大了更应该动起来，为了选一双好的鞋子，我基本把各跑步论坛逛了个遍。”

随着互联网科技的迅猛发展，智能手机、平板电脑等电子产品在成为当今年轻人生活必备品的同时，还成了他们送给父母过年礼物的首选。

在上海工作的陈先生告诉记者，他今年过年准备给父母买一个ipad，再在家里安装一个无线路由器。他说：“自己工作地点离家较远，很难有时间陪伴父母，让父母学会使用电子产品既可以帮他们解闷，还可以和自己进行视频交流。”

我在想，什么是科技呢?也许，科技就是——

昨日的你凿壁偷光、囊萤映雪，今日的你火树银花、漫天灯光……;昨日的你遥望明月，苦思家乡而终不得，今日的你天涯咫尺，手机、电话、电脑，微博、微信、腾讯……;昨日的你，下棋品茗、闲话琐事，今日的你，可谓是坐地日观八万里……

科学，是指利用有关研究客观事物存在及其相关规律的学说能为自己所用，为大家所用的知识。

在很小的时候，有一个小孩子拿着新买的尺子在头发上乱蹭 ，蹭了几下后，他拿着尺子举在一小堆撕碎的纸片上，凌乱的纸片犹似迷路的孩子被大人找回，一个个都紧紧的依附在尺子上。在后来，很多的小孩子都喜欢聚在一起玩这个游戏，因为大家当时都觉得这真的很神奇。也许，如今的我们早已知道了为什么碎纸片会被尺子吸住，是摩擦起电的原理，对不对呢?是的。摩擦起电，通过摩擦的方式使得物体带上电荷。也许，我们对他的认知与喜好仅止于此。但是，你们又知不知道，摩擦起电会对我们的生活产生什么样的便利之处呢?在生活中，你肯定免不了要去复印一些资料，免不了新买的一些金属器具会腐蚀，你也一定看过报纸吧等等……这些其实都是人们利用了摩擦起电所带来的便利。这，就是科技。

为纪念中国人民抗日战争暨世界反法西斯战争胜利70周年，中华人民共和国于2015年9月3日在北京举行大阅兵，此次阅兵所有军事武器均为国产。此次大阅兵是一个国家科技的体现，科技的象征。一个国家，科技水品越高，他军事实力越强，国际影响力越大，他的国际地位就会越高。科技，决定了实力。

因为科技，我们的生活更加便利;因为科技，我们通行更为方便;因为科技，我们可以足不出户的遍知天下事;因为科技，我们才知道了汶川，众志成城，汶川得以凤凰涅槃、浴火重生;因为科技，我们才了解了远方的远处，有很多人的孩子上不起学，希望工程，他们重返校园，再沐知识之浴;因为科技，我们治愈了很多年前无法治愈的疾病枯萎的生命得以延续。科技，影响他们，改变了我们。

科技，改变生活。生活因改变而愈加精彩。

People will be become more and more richer in the future.Everything will change.For example: we didnt go to schoool for study, we only stay at home to teach ourselves with computer. No matter where we want to go, we only have a thought.We can go to other plannets without anyones help. If we want to buy something,we only press a key,a robbet will help us.I think our life in the future will be more interesting and wonderful.

在未来，人们会越来越富有，每件事都会改变。例如：我们不必再去学校学习，我们可以呆在家里用电脑学习。无论我们想去那，只需要一个想法，我们不需要任何人的帮助便可以去别的星球。如果我们想买些东西，我们只需要一个按纽，机器人便会帮助我们。我想我们未来的生活是多么的有趣和精彩。

n my understanding, if we refer to an ideal college life as a formal western dinner, then a high GPA, that is, Grade Point Average, should be the main course, while an active part in activities, together with associations, means the appetizer. Some romances, of course, play the role as desserts. They are the 3 key elements for an ideal college life.

Those, however, are not what college life is all about. As we all know, college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood, but also the ivory tower to the real society. Therefore, the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally, and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.

Under this circumstance, I never expect my college life to be too ideal, or you can call it too perfect. It is not realistic to make all things on my own way, with everyone liking me, winning the first prize all the time, and so on. Of course, I’d like to lead a carefree life. However, this does little good to my future. What really helps is hardships like failure, betrayal, and unjust treatment. Only after experiencing those can I know what society is like, and what life is like.

To conclude my speech, I wanna say, some positive experiences are surely part of the ideal college life. But, I should not forget about the negative sides. They are not less necessary.

Nowadays,more and more people feel like emigrating to foreign countries,such as America, England and Canada. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.And peopie have diffrent opinions to these emigrants.

Some people think migrate to some foreign countries with a view to making their children receive good education there.Others just want to experience a different culture they like.Although it may be exciting to drop their family in a totally unfamiliar place.They desire to meet new things ,new people,and new worlds.All in all,the most important things is they must have enough money and time.All these above factors contribute to their choice to migrate to another country. As far as I am concerned,I prefer to live in my country for long rather than migrate to other foreign countries. For one thing, I don’t like to live far from my friends and relatives. For another, I can’t bear to speak and listen to a foreign language from day to night. In a word, everyone has his right to decide where to live, and everyone’s choice should be respected.

这个小雨沙沙的星期六，我和爸爸妈妈一起去参观了文博会。一路上秋风和小雨点儿亲密的向我们身上使劲的贴了贴，不一会儿，我的身上就布满了小雨点的“脚印”。哦，到黄龙体育中心了，我们又乘着公交车向目的地驶去，经过一小时的等待，终于到达了白马湖生态创意城广场。

这时杭州青少年活动中心举办的儿童艺术节，里面的活动可多了，有奇迹积木、吸管搭建、气球创意、电子积木等等十几个项目。要数我最喜欢，印象最深的要数：3D绘画和3D打印机。先说说3D绘画吧，首先工作人员会给你一支特殊的“笔”，也可以说那是一个小机器，你拿着那支“笔”按动第一个按钮，机器就会吐出橙色，细细的“颜料”，你就照着设计好画纸的小动物慢慢描，等你画好了就按第2个按钮，机器就停止了，这时你就会发现，纸上的小动物已经干了，你已经可以把它拿下来了。我做了个扎着蝴蝶结的小兔，做完后展现在我眼前的就是一个漂亮的小兔轮廓，非常的漂亮。

3D绘画很奇特，3D打印机更奇特了，它只用你设计好图形，就可以用3D打印机打出来，我目不转睛地看着打印机，里面正在打印我设计的一串手链，这时我发现了3D打印机和3D绘画有一个相同点和一个不同点：3D打印机和3D绘画一样都是用那支“奇特的笔”做出来的，而不同点的就是一个是用手操作的，另一个却是全部用机器打印出来的。

后来，我们还去了A馆和B馆，里面有许多好玩、奇特、创意、环保的东西，我都很喜欢，真希望这些东西渐渐扩大，成为人们生活必不可少的东西，方便和美化我们的生活。

[创意改变生活作文

书,是人类文化遗传的瑰宝,是我们生活和学习中必不可缺的精神食粮.它像一位和蔼可亲的老人,引领我通往知识的殿堂；又似一杯清香四溢的绿茶,沁人心脾,给我带来种种美妙的享受和无穷的回味.古人曾说“书中自有黄金屋,书中自有颜如玉”,的确不错,我从书籍中汲取了丰富的营养,充实了自己,丰富了课余生活.

我是一个对书痴迷的女孩,从小就和书结下了不解之缘.记得三、四岁的时候,我特别喜欢哭闹.有一次,我不知为什么又大发脾气,号啕大哭,妈妈实在不耐烦了,便随手扔了一本连环画给我.谁知我竟破涕为笑,津津有味地翻看着.从此,我便对连环画产生了浓厚的兴趣,一幅幅精彩的连环画让我爱不释手.当书中的主人公开心时,我会高兴得手舞足蹈；当书中的主人公烦恼时,我会绞尽脑汁为他出谋划策；当书中的主人公……一转眼,我开始了小学生涯,学了拼音,认识了字宝宝,我已经不再满足于只有图片的连环画了.一年级时,妈妈送给我一本注音版的《格林童话》,虽然看书很费劲,字要一个一个地拼读,然而,我并没有因此而放弃看书,相反更激发我读书的欲望,对书如痴如醉.从书中,我了解到了什么是真假、善恶、美丑.随着年龄的增长,我开始接触中外文学名著.我为《西游记》中机智勇敢的孙悟空喝彩,为《红楼梦》中才貌双全的林黛玉感到惋惜,钦佩《三国演义》中胆识过人、神机妙算的诸葛亮,为《水浒传》中的梁山好汉们拍案叫好……

“宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来”,凭着对文学创作的执着和酷爱,我在《人民文学》主办的中国校园文学 “新人杯”全国作文大赛和第二届全国中小学生“新课堂”创新作文大赛中脱颖而出,在学校组织的各类作文比赛中屡次夺冠,并有多篇文章、诗歌刊登在《雏鹰》校刊上,诗歌《春天到》还发表在《慈溪日报》上.我喜欢在文学的土地上耕耘,相信我的文学之花一定会更加灿烂辉煌!

书,是一把金钥匙,呼唤我用一颗真挚的心去开启知识殿堂的大门；书,是一叶扁舟,承载着我搏击在浩淼的知识海洋中,让我领略学习的趣味.书,是我的形影不离的好朋友.是它,陪伴我度过了一个又一个春华秋实的美好岁月；是它,给我带来了智慧和力量；是它,在我苦恼徘徊的时候给我点亮前进的航标……是的,书给予了我太多太多,“我爱书,爱着书,就像老鼠爱大米.我是一条小书虫,每天钻在书堆里……”也许,这就是我读书历程最好的写照.我爱书,它就像我青梅竹马的儿时玩伴,与我心心相通,息息相连,因为它已完全融入我的身体,成为我生命中永远跳动的细胞.

书,是一杯刚泡好的西湖龙井,细细品味,一股醇香正入喉中.我和书之间的不解之缘让我对它产生依恋,对书的那份痴情更让我深深地爱上了它……

[读书改变生活作文

Low-carbon Life

Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment，I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides，I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it‘s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment，I believe the earth will be a better place.

导语：作为一名学生，你可以跟我们介绍一下校园生活吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

How time flies!My colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

When I was six years old, I started school. Since I became a student, I have been studying very hard. My parents are quite proud of me.

Now, I study at Wucun Middle School, which is not only modern but also beautiful. The teachers in my school are so kind and hardworking that I love them very much. All the teachers regard us students as their own children. Also they are strict with us and strict in their work. I am getting along very well with my classmates. Whenever we have difficulties in our study, we help each other. I have many interests such as dancing, singing, reading books and playing sports, and I especially enjoy basketball, which makes me smarter and helps me learn faster and better. So I’ve improved my life in this way.

My school life is full of happiness and fun. Although we have some new challenges every day, I’ll try my best to meet them.

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时光飞逝!我的丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束。我很高兴告诉你我的学校生活。

当我六岁的时候，我就开始学了。自从我成为一个学生，我一直在努力学习。我的父母为我感到骄傲。

现在，我在梧村中学读书，这不仅是现代的，而且还很漂亮。我的学校里的老师是那样的善良和勤劳，我非常爱他们。所有的老师都把我们学生当作自己的孩子。他们也对我们严格要求，对他们的工作要求严格。我和我的同学相处得很好。每当我们学习困难时，我们互相帮助。我有很多兴趣爱好，如跳舞、唱歌、看书和运动，我特别喜欢篮球，这让我更聪明，帮助我更快和更好的学习。所以我已经用这种方式改善了我的生活。

我的学校生活充满快乐和乐趣。虽然我们每天都有新的挑战，我会尽我最大的努力去满足他们。

假期生活Life In Vacation

It was a sun day of the summer holiday. The weather was hot. My little brother and I decided to go to the resrvoir to swim by bike. It took us half an hour when we got there, many people were swimming. Then we dived into the water……

About an hour later, suddenly somebody called: “help! help!” We were surprised to see a boy struggling in the deep water. As quickly as possible. We swam towards him and pulled him to the shore. He lost his consciousness. We sent him to the nearest hospital at once luckily, he was saved.

In the end, we were worn out, but felt happy. That day was meaningful. We did a good deed!

这是暑假阳光灿烂的一天，非常热，我决定和弟弟骑车去水库游泳。我们花了半个多小时才到达，很多人在游泳，于是我们也跳入水中。

约一小时后，突然有人叫：“救命啊!救命啊!“我们惊讶地看到一个男孩在深水里挣扎，我们游向他尽快将他拉到岸边。他失去了知觉，我们立刻把他送到最近的医院，幸运的是，他得救了。

最后，我们都很疲惫，但觉得很开心。这是有意义的一天，我们做了件好事。

[小学英语作文译文：假期生活 Life In Vacation

Although the winter vacation, I will continue my learning, in the morning,

is a good time to read, with the early morning, our family to read with relish,

three people has become a bookworm. Dad read the literary works such as crazy,

my mother read prose leisurely affectionate, for me, I read catchy childrens

poetry. A book, lets open horizon, increase knowledge. Reading good books is

like and wise in the communication, the author of often we read happy place,

could not help but laugh; Read moving place, can flow was moved to tears... . A

good book, often make us forget all about eating and sleeping, really achieve

"reading a good book, three days and I do not know meat".

Winter vacation, there is a Spring Festival, this is my most happy moment.

The New Year, my father came back from the street to buy a dozen small red

lanterns, and string them into 2 series, dad smiled and said: "the twelve red

lanterns indicates our whole family, in the New Year, twelve months are

prosperous". Mother, busy preparing for dinner, but rich, seafood, vegetables,

beef, little of course not a fish, in the traditional Chinese Spring Festival,

eat fish means "more than" year after year, good luck. I have not been idle, and

come back to the supermarket to buy necessities such as orange juice and

beer.

Winter vacation, I could have just like all the children have a blast, but

my eyesight is bad, only looking at the computer to buy, occasionally WangSha

several renju experience, very good!

Happy and short winter vacation life, really want to keep the pace of time,

has been living in the winter vacation.

From 20xx to 20xx, I spent my college life in Hunan First Normal College. Reminding my college life, I think it was of great significance.

When I was in college, I studied very hard. As a major of English, I often practiced my oral English. Every time, I could think in English. After thinking and expressed my thoughts to others in English. Although sometimes I couldnt speak English so freely, other people still appreciated me, because of my confidence.

In English class, I was always the first one to open my mouth, so my teachers always praised me for my good pronunciation, and my classmates also admired me for my courage. It seemed as if I were on top of the world.

However, I have few chances to speak English now, because my job has nothing to do with English. What a great pity! How I wish to work with foreigners, so that I can use my great English.

You should write a short essay on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.

写作导航

1.指出宿舍生活未必和谐;

2.简要阐述和谐的宿合生活带来的好处;

3.从生活方式、处理矛盾等方面阐述如何创造和保持和谐的宿舍生活;

4.进行总结。

范文与译文

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory can be disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, you can have a good rest and put your heart into study. On the other hand, you will have a good mood and enjoy being together.

There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your lifestyle and try to get rid of your bad habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, youll just have to learn to tolerate each other and coexist. Thirdly, youll have to share with each other and make good friends.

In conclusion, you should make every effort to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

和谐的宿舍生活

宿合生活是大学生活中不可缺少的一部分。但有时宿舍的和谐会以这样或那样的方式所打破。

众所周知，和谐的宿舍生活对大学生很重要，会让所有成员受益。在一方面，你能够休息好，全身心投入学习。在另一方面，你也会心情好，彼此相处愉快。

有几种方法可以用来创造和保持和谐的大学生活。首先，你需要评估你的生活方式，如果有不良习惯的话要改掉。其次，当不愉快的状况出现时，你要学会容忍彼此，和平共处。第三，你要与彼此分享，成为好朋友。

总之，为了好好学习和美好的生活，你应该努力打造一个和谐的宿合生活。

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You should write a short essay on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.

写作导航

1.指出宿舍生活未必和谐;

2.简要阐述和谐的宿合生活带来的好处;

3.从生活方式、处理矛盾等方面阐述如何创造和保持和谐的宿舍生活;

4.进行总结。

范文与译文

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory can be disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, you can have a good rest and put your heart into study. On the other hand, you will have a good mood and enjoy being together.

There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your lifestyle and try to get rid of your bad habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, youll just have to learn to tolerate each other and coexist. Thirdly, youll have to share with each other and make good friends.

In conclusion, you should make every effort to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

和谐的宿舍生活

宿合生活是大学生活中不可缺少的一部分。但有时宿舍的和谐会以这样或那样的方式所打破。

众所周知，和谐的宿舍生活对大学生很重要，会让所有成员受益。在一方面，你能够休息好，全身心投入学习。在另一方面，你也会心情好，彼此相处愉快。

有几种方法可以用来创造和保持和谐的大学生活。首先，你需要评估你的生活方式，如果有不良习惯的话要改掉。其次，当不愉快的状况出现时，你要学会容忍彼此，和平共处。第三，你要与彼此分享，成为好朋友。

总之，为了好好学习和美好的生活，你应该努力打造一个和谐的宿合生活。

四级英语写作指导：

一、审题

我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题(如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。)那末审题要审什麽呢?

1.体裁(议论文，说明文，描述文)

审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢?它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如：Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topicTrying to Be A Good University Student .You should write at least 100 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below :

1)做合格大学生的必要性

2)做合格大学生的必备条件(可以从德智体方面谈)

3)我计划这样做

很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写"...必要性"，这说明本段体裁是议论文;第二段要求写"

...必备条件"，这说明本段要求写说明文;儿地三段要求写"...这样做"，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。

2.根据不同体裁确定写作方法

我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式： 议论文;要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎末样(这是从正面论述);不能做合格的大学生，会怎末样(从反面论述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结了论)。

说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就上作文而言，可以从方面(德智体)来说明合格大学生的必要性。

描述文：一"人"为中心描述一个"做"的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与第二段相互应进行描述。 二 确定主题句

通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述三段主题句分别为：

1)It is very necessary to be a good university student . (议论体的主题句)

2)There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student .(说明体的主题句)

3)What I will do in the future is the following .(描述体主题句)

如果要求句是英语就可以把它变成主题句，例如这样一篇作文：

标题：Good Health

1)Importance of good health

2)Ways to keep fit

3)My own practice

这样的作文的要求句就可以扩充成主题句。扩充后三段的主题句分别为：

1)It is very important to have good health .(将名词importance变成形容词important)

2)There are four ways to keep fit for me .(用there be 句型)

3)My own practices are the following .(采用原词)

二、条理清楚

保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good health 来说，第一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写：正面(With good health ,we can...)，反面(Without good health ,we cando nothing .We cant do...)

为了使文章更具有条理性，我们可以用first(ly) second(ly) third(ly)等副词，他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，想得告分就必须引起老师的主意，老师的时间很短(每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完)，所以我们在列调试最好不用: To be with,... after that ,...And then, ... The next , ... Thefollowing , ... As last ... 。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。

三、保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法

考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。

我们知道，四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全片在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-150个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。

No classical work could pervade every cubic centimeter of air with such cultural fragrance but she.

No judicious sage could merge various elements as a magnificent poem but she.

No green tree could consist of vivid cells arousing every hearts anxiety for being young forever but she.

She is my university Fudan University.

The first time I entered the campus as a freshman, I was deeply attracted by her cultural atmosphere and historical connotation. Fudan is a graceful lady who is accustomed to serenity but meanwhile each action of hers outpours her innermost tern perament. Apparently it is worth every effort to probe into her world for the sake of both physical and mental enrichment. Her humanistic spirit inspires me to care for everything around, even the most trivial one.

On the other hand, catching up with the times, Fudan is modern and smart. You see, the many age-old buildings here are actually great libraries and labs. Scientific and technological developrnent is easily smelt in the air,because she never lags behind the world.

Fabulously, such a historical and scientific school is far more than an operational mechanism. Her everlasting youth and vigor beam through every corner of the campus and the young in school vivify every piece of concrete and wood here. What makes me happy and strong is that it perpetuates me with unfading energy. And it is definitely beneficial for me to be granted enthusi。

导语：夏天的校园是什么样的呢?以下是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的高二英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Prospective students can get a taste of campus life during the summer months by spending a day or evening at Penn State New Kensington.

During the Spend a Summer Day and Spend a Summer Evening events in June, July, and August, participants can meet staff and current students, and find out all they need to know about admissions, financial aid and student life. Opportunities to tour the campus are available and a free lunch and entertainment are provided. The first Spend a Summer Day program is a weekend event slated from 9:30 a.m. to 12:30 p.m. on Saturday, June 20. Adult learners who cant make it during the day due to work commitments may spend a summer evening on campus from 6:30-9:00 p.m. on Thursday, July 30.

The final Spend a Summer Day is a weekday event, set from 9:30 a.m. to 12:30 p.m. on Thursday, Aug. 6.

【翻译】

未来的学生可以通过在宾夕法尼亚州立大学的新肯辛顿度过一天或一晚来品尝夏季校园生活。

在暑假期间，在六月，七月和八月期间，参加一个暑期活动，参加者可以会见工作人员和现在的学生，了解他们需要知道的关于招生，经济援助和学生生活的知识。提供参观校园的机会，提供免费的午餐和娱乐。第一次花一个夏天的计划是一个周末活动定于上午9:30至12:30星期六，6月20日。成人学习者不能在一天的工作承诺将度过一个夏天的晚上在校园里从星期四下午6:30-9:00，7月30日。

最后一个夏天的一天是一个周日活动，从上午9:30到星期四下午12:30，8月6日。

我们知道，很多人认为大学生活是自由、舒适的，但我想说这不是真的。事实上，我的大学生活是如此的忙碌，以至于我都不知道我的能量是否足够。下面是小编帮大家整理的大学生活感触英语作文，希望大家喜欢。

As we know, many people favor theidea that the college life is free and comfortable, but I’d like to say it’snot true. As a matter of fact, my life in university is so busy that I wonderif my energy is enough. As to my college life, I divide it into four parts,including study, student activities, library and the others.

Firstly, I want to talk about thestudy. In my opinion, study is the priority in college. When I received theletter of admission in summer, I knew clearly that what I should do. So I makeup my mind to study hard and pursue learning as much as possible. I’m greatlyconvinced that knowledge can change my life. Therefore, I often go to the quietstudy room where many people study there. By working so hard, I get good gradesin the exams.

Secondly, student activities playan important role in our college life. To be honest, the student Union is agood place where one can develop social skills, get his abilities trained. Itake part in many student activities. For example, I’ m a volunteer, teachingthe kids to learn to dance and write. I think it’s meaningful for everyone togive a hand to others. I can also do some jobs in the Student Union, includingreceiving and sending fast mail, selling papers and magazines. I think they’re unforgettableand worthwhile experiences for me.

Thirdly, I also visit the libraryconstantly. It’s said that “shelves of books, oceans of knowledge”, so I readbooks that I’m interested in. In this way, I can share stories with my new friendsand it also changes my horizons .When I’m sad, lost or in trrouble, staying thelibrary makes me quiet and comfortable. After all, every life has bad momentsas well as good ones, and the library for me is a support in bad moments. So it’s wise choice for me to stay in thelibrary.

Finally, I often do other thingsin my spare time. In order to alleviate parents’ burden, I often do somepart-time jobs and write some articles to earn money. It helps me to beindependent and improve my social skills.

In short, mylife in university is busy but valuable. You can see that study brings me knowledge,student activities improve myself, library changes my horizons, the othersthings make me independent. They get all my abilities trained. And I see thatthe chance will come only if you have a prepared mind, so I’m sure that I canachieve my dreams in college life.

以前我最讨厌看书了，一打开书，就是密密麻麻的文字，我总觉得看书是一件非常痛苦的事情，觉得密密麻麻的字让人看得头晕。看书的时间去玩耍多好啊!小时候的我想法很天真，心里只有想玩的念头。尽管老师常常苦口婆心地叫我们多看些书，告诉我们看书有多少好处，我还是对书一点也不感兴趣，不愿走进书里去享受书趣。不听老师言，吃亏在眼前呀!

正因为我不爱看书，作文水平当然就没有提高。写作文的时候，成了我发愁的时候，一个字一个字地拼凑，想尽量完成老师的作业。父母看到我写作文时总是咬着笔头发呆，心里当然着急啊!但无论他们怎么劝我多看书，我都从不看书。后来写作文，我就只能拿着作文书翻来翻去，希望找到一篇符合老师要求的作文来仿写。但这是不管用的，毕竟那些作文是别人所作，我的作文水平一直没有提高。直到我终于发现，书是多么有趣。现在我喜欢看书了，写作文再也不用发呆了，语句通顺了许多。以前听到“书”这个字，我的两眼目光呆滞;现在我听到“书”这个字，两眼立刻放光。我去书城的次数越来越频繁，也不像以前那样在书城待不住了，我会静下心来慢慢品读，走进书的世界!

书，已经在慢慢改变我单一的生活!

With the development of technology, today we live in the world with high technology. People seem to cant live without computer and smart phone, once they dont have smart phone at hand for a while, the seem to be lost and feel something miss in their life. When I talk to my friends at table, I find them always play smart phones or check on the text all the time. Though we sit face to face, the distance between us is so far. The high technology brings isolation between people. Some people dont often visit their parents and friends, for they believe that a call can solve all the things. Communication in face to face is far more important than a call. It is time for some people to put down their smart phones for a while when they are communicating to others.

最美的不是下雨天，是和你一起躲雨的屋檐。--题记

【题记是我后加上去的，化用了歌词，点明了文章的主要内容，而且颇具意境美感。】

窗外，冰冷的雨点敲打着玻璃窗，划过长长的痕迹，最后汇集在一起，室内却温暖如春。望着窗外的雨，我不禁想起了那天的场景，温暖在心中慢慢蔓延开来。

那是一个阴雨天气，学校刚刚开完运动会，我因为没有带雨具，只能在屋檐下焦急地等待着雨停的时刻。阵阵寒风刮过，透过单薄的衣服，我感到了刻骨的凉意，不由得反复摩擦着双手，希望能给自己带来一些温暖。

这时，身后忽然传来熟悉的声音：“怎么在这里站着，还没走吗？”我转头一看，是我最好的朋友，此刻她正披着雨衣，颜色是橘黄色，淡淡的暖色调仿佛能给人带来温暖似的。【此句虚实结合，描写的很好，但建议放到后面去写，此处改为人物的神态描写。改：她身披着橘黄色的雨衣，略到笑意朝我走来，关切的问道。】“我忘带雨伞了，只能等雨停了再回去。”我答道。她抬头看了看仍在下着的大雨，说道：“这雨怕是还停不了了呢，不如咱们一起走吧。”我有些犹豫：“可是你还有多余的雨衣吗？”她同我一起站到屋檐下，脱下身上的雨衣，把一端递给我：“咱们一起披着跑到地铁站吧！”见她脸上满溢这真诚的笑容，我心中不由得涌出一丝温暖，点了点头。【此处最打动人，所以建议将前文的“雨衣”一句加到这里。改：说着，她的脸上洋溢着真诚的笑容。我的心不由得涌出一丝温暖，点了点头，接过雨衣的一角，轻披在身上，这淡淡的橘色调仿佛有魔力一般，融化了冰凉的雨雾。】

于是我们披着雨衣走出了运动场的大门，虽然有雨衣的保护，可雨水还是不可避免的打湿了我们半边的衣服。眼看着雨越下越大，再不快些走，衣服就要被全部浸湿了。这时，我们很有默契的相视一笑，同时在雨里飞速奔跑起来，地面上溅起的水花浸湿了我们的裤脚，皮肤触碰到丝丝冰凉，可我们却丝毫没有察觉，因为心中充斥着友情带了的欢乐与温暖。雨声中，两个奔跑着的年轻女孩的笑声引得路人不由得回头……

就这样，我们一路奔跑着到了地铁站，大口大口的喘着气，【两句之间缺少衔接。加一句：望着彼此被雨水打湿的面庞，我们都笑了。】浓郁的友情洋溢在雨衣下，洋溢在我们心中。

正是这样的友谊，改变了我原本平淡的生活，正是这样的时光，停留在我无比珍惜的回忆里。

点评：总的来看，小作者文笔优美，语言生动、流畅，感情真挚，写出了一篇不错的文章。但是文章在扣题上做的稍显生硬，如果在行文过程中以及结尾处加上一句“友情，改变了雨天的温度，改变了我的生活”，就显得更加贴切些。

[高一叙事作文：友情改变了我的生活