关于疫情英语中考作文范文10篇汇总20篇

一、素材

言语类

(一)名人名言

1.愚蠢的人，从远处寻找幸福;聪慧的人，从脚下根植幸福。——詹姆斯?奥本海姆

2.拥有未来幸福的最好办法，就是尽可能地享受今天的幸福。——查尔斯?W?埃利奥特

3.幸福是一种习惯，培养它。——埃尔伯特?哈伯德

4.幸福不在于你拥有什么或者你是什么人，而在于你正在做什么。

——莉莲?艾克勒?沃森【美】

5.每个人都是自己幸福的缔造者。——艾普斯?克劳迪厄斯【美】

6.幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于成功的喜悦和创造的激情。——富兰克林?D?罗斯福【美】

7.一只脚跟踩扁了紫罗兰，而它却把香味留在那脚跟上，这就是宽容。

——安德鲁 马修斯

8.所谓幸福，是在于认清一个人的限度而安于这个限度。——罗曼?罗兰

9.一个知足的人生活才能美满。——狄更斯

(二)妙语集锦

23.就算是天气转凉了，我要送我的朋友们一件外套：口袋叫温暖;领子叫关怀;袖子叫体贴;扣子叫思念;让这件外套紧紧伴着朋友渡过每一分每一秒，一定要幸福喔!——手机短信

24.这是心的呼唤，这是爱的奉献;这是人间的春风，这是生命的源泉;再没有心的沙漠，再没有爱的荒原;死神也望而却步，幸福之花处处开遍;啊---只要人人都献出一点爱，世界将变成美好的人间……——韦唯《爱的奉献》 25.成长的路上，总有许多相识不相识的人带给你情感的滋润、难忘的教益，不管什么时候想起，总有一份感动、一缕甜蜜溢满心田……

26.有一位社会调查员，在调查幸福是什么时，有人回答说：“能关爱他人。”能关爱一个人，是一种幸福，这种幸福不仅仅是帮助别人，了解别人，更是一种拓宽心胸之后的畅快。送人玫瑰，手留余香。

27.一个整天想着去算计别人的人，即使他成功了，可他能感到极致的快乐与幸福吗?不会，因为狭窄的心胸把他的灵魂捆得太紧。学会关爱一个人，是放开心胸的开始，是幸福的开始。日子久了，容纳的东西多了，幸福便洋溢在身边。

28.关爱他人，你能提高自己的修养;关爱他人，你能感到幸福天天存在。关爱他人，你能发现生活的乐趣与美;关爱他人——你的心会更宽广，眼更明亮!

事例类

寓言故事

给幸福画一条底线

作家史铁生曾写道：“生病的经验是一步步懂得满足。发烧了，才知道不发烧的日子多么清爽。咳嗽了，才体会不咳嗽的嗓子多么安详。刚坐上轮椅时，我老想，不能直立行走岂不把人的特点搞丢了?便觉天昏地暗，等又生出褥疮，一连数日只能歪七扭八地躺着，才看见端坐的日子其实多么晴朗。后来又患尿毒症，经常昏昏然不能思想，就更加怀恋起往日时光。终于醒悟：其实每时每刻我们都是幸运的，任何灾难前面都可能再加上一个‘更’字。”

从心底说出这话的人，一定吃尽了“疾病”或“便宜”的苦头，所以才把自己的“幸福底线”定得如此之低。但当他们意识到什么是真正幸福的时候，生命留给他们享受幸福的时间已经少得不能再少。许多人一生在茫茫红尘中奔走，陷在名与利的泥潭里不能自拔，蓦然回首，才发现真正的幸福恰恰就在出发的原点，而当初他们却坚信它在更远的地方。

所以，从今天起，我们应该给自己的幸福画一条最浅的底线，去学会从最平常的日子、最琐碎的事情里品尝幸福的滋味。

[点拨]不错，每时每刻我们都是幸运的，应该把“幸福的底线”定的很低，才可以感受到生活的美好和幸福。名利是身外之物，我们应该学会从“最平常的日子、最琐碎的事情里品尝幸福的滋味”。

[适用话题]这个个素材可以用在“珍惜、幸福、生活”为主题的作文中。

10.越是别人都羡慕我的幸福，我就觉得这幸福更有滋味。——巴尔扎克

11.承担更大的责任，他们就更加幸福。——雨果

12.巨大的幸福压弯了腰。他感觉他的四肢软弱无力;在他的胜利面前，这人从来没有被危险动摇过

的人，开始战栗起来。——雨果

13.因为真正的幸福就是：成为完全客观，从而体现自己的抱负。——罗曼?罗兰

14.世界上没有幸福，但有自由和宁静。——普希金

15.我们的幸福与否，决不能凭借我们获得了或者丧失了什么，而只能在于我们自身怎样。——罗曼?罗兰

16.哪里有生活，哪里就有幸福。越往前去，它就越多，越多。——罗曼?罗兰

17.幸福并不存在于外在的因素，而是以我们对外界原因的态度为转移，一个吃苦耐劳惯了的人就不可能不幸福。——托尔斯泰

18.我一生中，还从未尝到一滴没有掺和毒汁的幸福。——高尔基

19.太阳是幸福的，因为它光芒四射;海也是幸福的，因为它反射着太阳欢乐的光芒。——高尔基

20.幸福只不过是一种期待。——高尔基

21.幸福这东西就像星星一样，黑暗是遮不住它们的，总会有空隙可寻。我们在人生的历程中，不管犯了多少过错，产生过多少误解，然而，在过错和误解的空隙之中，不正闪烁着幸福之光吗?——泰戈尔

22.要使孩子们从小就懂得和领会到：他的每一步、每一个行动都会在他身边的人——同志、父母、教师和“陌生者”的精神生活引起反响。只有当他不给别人带来灾难，不欺负和扰乱别人时，才能成为一个生活得平静而又幸福的人。——苏霍姆林斯基

英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚；

关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；

组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；

字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

《我的暑假》

I love holidays,because during holidays ,I can do everything I like,and study something new.Now the summer holidays is coming,Im going to do something meaningful.

I like English,I spell words well,but I can not speak English very well.So I want to improve my English in the holiday.I will read English every moring,and then I think my English must be improved.

I will also learn to swim.I think it is very helpful.

There are too many things to do,I believe in myself can do them well!

My summer holiday must be a good one !

[中考优秀英语作文大全

E-Books Are Good

It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.

Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.

In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.

最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

组员 理想职业 原因

mary 时装设计师(fashion designer) 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画

kate 园艺工(gardener) 喜爱植物，想让城市更美

mike 作家 愿意与别人分享精彩故事

tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物

你 ? ?

注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

……

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

★ 范文

recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, and she wants to make the cities better. mike would like to be a writer. he’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. tom would like to be a cook. he’d like to cook delicious food for others. i would like to be a policeman. i want to protect the people safe.

hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.

Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：

When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)

How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)

What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)

中考英语满分作文：

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

As we all know，the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places，we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping，and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment ，there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

twenty-five hundred years ago life in china was very hard. most of the people were hopelessly poor. into these times one of china’s great leaders was born. he was confucius. confucius came from a noble family, but his parents were poor. his father died when confucius was only three years old. the boy was a good and obedient son to his mother.

he grew up to be quiet, thoughtful, and studious. as confucius watched the people around him, he became eager to help them. at last he left his family and started out his students to be honest and kind, and to honor their parents. he taught them that a good man never lets himself get angry. many of his savings were gathered together and written down. one of his famous savings is “do not do to others what you do not wish others to do to you. “ for years he wandered from province to province spreading his ideas to all who would listen to him.

以下是小编整理的2015中考英语写作素材:名言警句类，希望能帮的到您。

01. Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧.

02. Time is money.

时间就是金钱

03. Easier said than done.

说来容易做来难

04. Where there is a will, there is a way.

有志者事竟成.

05. Look before you leap.

三思而后行.

06. Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量

07. God helps those who help themselves.

自助者天助.

08. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

心之所愿，无事不成

09. It’s never too old to learn.

活到老，学到老

10. No pains, no gains.

不劳无获

11. Once in a blue moon.

千载难逢

12. To make the impossible possible.

将不可能变为可能

13. Failure is the mother of success.

失败乃成功之母

14. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

患难见真情

15. First things first.

先做重要之事

16. Great minds think alike.

英雄所见略同

17. Rome was not built in a day.

成功并非一朝一夕的事

18. All that glitters is not gold.

闪光的未必都是金子

19. East or west, home is the best.

金窝银窝不如自家草窝

20. Time and tide wait for no man.

时间不等人

21. There is but a secret to success—Never give up!

成功只有一个秘诀—永不放弃!

22. Where there is life, there is hope.

有生命必有希望

23. Beauty will buy no beef.

漂亮不能当饭吃

24. Better late than never.

迟做总比不做好

25. Every little helps.

点滴都有用;积少成多

26. The shortest answer is doing.

最简短的回答就是行动

27. No news is good news.

没消息，就是好消息

28. Well begun, half done.

好的开始是成功的一半

29. All for one, one for all.

人人为我，我为人人

30. One false step will make a great difference.

失之毫厘，谬以千里

31. Facts speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩

32. As the tree, so the fruit.

种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆

33. To live is to learn; to learn is to better live.

活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着

34. Like and like make good friends.

趣味相投

35. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.

1. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …

随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …

例：With the rapid development of Taiwans economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.

随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

2. ……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that …

…… 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that …

…… 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …

……是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

3. 就我的看法……;我认为……

In my opinion, …

= To my mind, …

= As far as I am concerned, …

= I am of the opinion that …

例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 不用说…… It goes without saying that … = (It is) needless to say (that) …

= It is obvious that …

例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

5. 在各种……之中，…… Among various kinds of …， … /= Of all the …， …

例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。

Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

6. 花费 spend … on sth. / doing sth. …

例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。

We shouldnt spend too much time on something we arent interested in.

7. how 引导的感叹句

例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。

At least it will prove how honest you are.

8. 状语从句

A)如果你不……，你就会…… If you dont …， youll …

例︰If you dont keep working hard, youll lose the chance.

如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。

B) 如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.

当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。

9. 宾语从句

我认为，…… / 我认为……不 I think / I dont think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

例：He doesnt think I should stop him joining the club.

他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + S + 过去式， S + 现在完成式。

例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。

Dear parents，

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset，you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help，I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours，

Zhang hua

我们在过年，他们却在过关，在这病毒肆虐的惴惴不安里，他们一路上披荆斩棘，无所畏惧。

在新型冠状病毒面前，是他们冲到了一线，是他们，不畏艰难。他们，就是来自各个省市的白衣天使，是抗病毒路上的逆行者。

耄耋之年的钟南山爷爷，本来可以避开病毒的危险，安度晚年，但是他在人民最需要他的时候，站了出来，就跟__年前，SARS病毒爆发的时候一样。__年前，他曾坚定的说：“把病人都送到我这里来!”这斩钉截铁的话语，带给全世界无比的震撼。1年来，这颗为人民服务的心，始终未改，为人民的安全逆行的志，始终不变。

还有许多医生与护士，在大年三十，当我们吃着团圆饭，阖家欢乐的时候，他们却义无反顾地离开家人，踏上去武汉的战场。这些逆行者在医院战地中，为人民安全而战。

致敬逆行者，敬畏自然，守护生命。是他们用执着和坚守诠释着“爱的奉献”，诠释着“大医精诚”。我们由衷的向他们致敬。让我们众志成城一起战胜这场没有硝烟的战争，期待着他们早日归来阖家团圆，一起走上街头，繁花与共!

I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also good for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends in the swimming pool. After swimming,I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more,Ican put more energy into my study. SoLet’s do sports,and we will become stronger and stronger.

How tokeep healthy /fit?

All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second，we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally，we should be happy everyday. Because smile will make us younger。

That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

2.卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 (1)保持健康的重要性;(2)保持健康的方法;(3)保持健康的结论;(4)你的看法。

How to keep healthy /fit?

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy/fit. As a middle shool student. first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games ，running， swimming and jumping ropes(绳子)。Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too much meat or suger，but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

1、Wuhan

just had a disease, the motherland and we still love it!

武汉只是生了一场病，祖国和我们依然爱它！

2、With

so many people sticking it out, why wouldnt we try.

有这么多人都在坚守，我们有什么理由不去努力。

3、No

party this year, double love next year.

今年不聚会，来年双倍情。

4、All

over China is waiting for you to recover. We will meet you in spring to watch

the cherry blossoms!

全中国等你痊愈，我们相约春天观赏樱花！

5、Having

a meal together will not break the family relationship; eating together will add

chaos to society.

少聚一顿饭，亲情不会断；聚一起吃饭，给社会添乱。

文章摘要：1. 遇见你的那一刻，世界轰然倒塌；两人抬起头有点不相信的盯着我。英语如何写出中考高分作文儿子出院那天，已经夕阳西下了，他笑了笑对儿子说：乖啊，不怕，有爸爸呢，我还有办法。关于事业:没有什么高低贵贱之分,人人为我我为人人,只要合法,能干什么就干什么,口袋没钱最丢人,死要面子活受罪的事千万别干.！

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so...that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true......等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest ...

趁现在，没有孩子，没有牵绊，我也不贪图他什么，该是离婚最好的时机吧；他还能自己走路，朋友却已经站不起来了。英语如何写出中考高分作文12、诚实是上策。他们用钱去做坏事!多么痛的领悟，你曾是我的全部，只愿你挣脱情的枷锁 ，爱的束缚，任意追逐，别再为爱受苦。最后只能采取自愿加班的方式。

My Hometown

My hometown is beautiful place It stands near a wide river at the foot of low GREen hills. It has many tall buildings and wide streets. There are trees and flowers everywhere.

But it has not always been like that. In the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. Landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. For the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. Nearly everyone was poor and many had no work.

Everything has changed since liberation. The people, led by the Party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. They have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. They have an assembly hall and a hospital. Along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. A lot of factories have sprung up. On the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. They carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country.

I love my hometown, and I love its people. They also have changed. Healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.

我的家乡

我的家乡是个美丽的地方。它座落在一座不高的绿色山脚下，一条宽阔的河流边。有许多高耸的大楼和宽阔的街道。树木和花草随处可见。

但是它并不是一直如此。在旧社会，它是一个凄凉、肮脏的小镇。地主和商人住在几栋漂亮的房子里。劳动人民只能住在破旧、黑暗、不卫生的房子里或是狭窄、泥泞街道旁的茅屋里。几乎所有人都贫困，许多人没有工作。

[我的家乡中考英语作文

母亲节起源于美国。1906年5月9日，美国费城的安娜·贾薇丝的母亲不幸去世，她悲痛万分。在次年母亲逝世周年忌日，安娜小姐组织了追思母亲的活动，并鼓励他人也以类似方式来表达对各自慈母的感激之情。此后，她到处游说并向社会各界呼吁，号召设立母亲节。她的呼吁获得热烈响应。1913年5月10日，美国参众两院通过决议案，由威尔逊总统签署公告，决定每年5月的第二个星期日为母亲节。这一举措引起世界各国纷纷仿效，至1948年安娜谢世时，已有43个国家设立了母亲节。

Mothers Day originated in the United States. In May 9, 1906, American Philadelphia Anna Jia Wei silks mother died, her grief. In the next year Mothers death anniversary, miss Anna mother organized a memorial service, and encourage others to express their gratitude to the mother in a similar manner. Since then, her lobbying and appeal to all walks of life, calls for the establishment of mothers day. Her appeal to get a warm response. In May 10, 1913, American house and Senate passed a resolution, signed by President Wilson announcement, decided each year the second Sunday in May as mothers day. The move by all the countries in the world have to follow, to 1948 xieshishi Anna, 43 countries have established the mothers day.

母亲节在我国最早是港澳台地区有此节日。改革开放后，母亲节也为内地所接受。广东省于1988年开始，杭州等城市于1989年开始，都由各级妇联组织母亲节的庆祝活动，并把评选"好母亲"作为节日的内容之一。

Mothers day in China is the first Hong Kong and Macao have this festival. After the reform and opening up, mothers Day is also accepted for the mainland. Guangdong Province, beginning in 1988, Hangzhou city began in 1989, the womens federations at all levels have mothers Day celebration, and the selection "good mother" as part of the festival.

在母亲节许多人将康乃馨赠给母亲，这是源于1934年5月美国首次发行母亲节纪念邮票。邮票上一位慈祥的母亲，双手放在膝上，欣喜地看着前面的花瓶中一束鲜艳美丽的康乃馨。随着邮票的传播，在许多人的心目中把母亲节与康乃馨联系起来，康乃馨便成了象征母爱之花，受到人们的敬重。康乃馨与母亲节便联系在一起了。人们把思念母亲、孝敬母亲的感情，寄托于康乃馨上，康乃馨也成为了赠送母亲不可缺少的珍贵礼品。

On Mothers Day carnations to the mothers for many people, this is from 1934 May America issued the first mothers Day commemorative stamps. Stamp a kind mother, hands on knees, delighted to see the vase in front of a bunch of bright beautiful carnations. With the spread of the stamps, linked the mothers Day carnations in many peoples minds, carnations became the symbol of motherly love flowers, respected by people. Mothers Day carnations and he relates in together. People miss mother, your mothers feelings, hopes in the carnation, carnations has become the indispensable precious gifts mother gifts.

请你阅读你的加拿大网友tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.

dear li lei,

i havent heard from you for a long time. im glad to tell you that ill visit beijing this summer vacation. it is said that beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 olympic games. i would like to know something about beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

yours,

tommy

★ 范文

dear tommy,

im glad to know you will come to beijing.

beijing, the capital of china, is one of the largest cities in the world. there are many places of interest, such as the summer palace, the forbidden city and the great wall. all of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. great changes have taken place in beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic games.

now, people pay more attention to the environment. more trees and flowers have been planted. for the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. if you come to beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. whats more, a lot of people can speak english. beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.

im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

yours,

li lei

导语：英语写作中运用一些谚语或者名言会给人眼前一亮的效果哦，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文谚语句子，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩?

2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友?

3. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半?

4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成?

5. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马?

6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难?

7. Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快?

8. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点?

9. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母?

10. Look before you leap. 三思而后行?

11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人?

12. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳?

13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难?

14. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪?

15. As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆?

16. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力?

17. Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事莫推明天?

18. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧?

19. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里?

20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本?

21. 表因果的过渡语:for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, thus, so, as a result (of)等?

22. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, unlike, although, otherwise,nevertheless, in spite of, after all等?

23. 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, that is, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等?

24. 表推进的过渡语:what’s more, on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, furthermore, moreover等?

25. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, on the whole等?