高考后的暑假计划英语作文【推荐20篇】

People would like to ask the kids who they like betterbetween their parents, they maybe make fun of thekids, while for the kids, they will considerate thequestion very seriously and cant decide who isbetter.

人们喜欢问孩子在父母当中会比较喜欢谁，也许他们只是跟孩子开个玩笑，然而对于孩子来说，他们会很认真地思考这个问题，无法决定谁是最好的。

I never figure out who is better, because in my heart, both of my parents are good.

我永远都说不来哪个比较好，因为在我的心里，父母都很好。

My mother takes care of me all the time, she takes responsibility of my daily things, though myfather is busy, I know he works so hard to raise my family.

我的妈妈一种照顾着我，她负责我的日常事务，虽然爸爸很忙，但是我知道他是那么努力的地工作，养活家人。

I love them in the same way, what they do is for my better future.

我对他们的爱是一样的，他们所做的都是为了我能有更好的将来。

I am so thankful to them, so I must study hard, for the purpose of returning their love.

我很感激他们，因此我一定要努力学习，这样才能回报他们的爱。

[父母的爱高考满分英语作文

Summer holiday is coming. I have made a wonderful plan for the holiday.

First of all, I am going to Shenyang with my father to visit my grandparents. They have been ill in bed for about two years. I am always worried about them. I will stay there for 20 days.

After I return home, I will spend some time studying math, because I am not good at it. I am sure I will do better in it.

Next, I will of course do some housework, such as cooking meals and cleaning the rooms.

I will have a good time during the holiday.

【参考译文】

暑假就要到了。我已经做了一个很好的假期计划。

首先，我要和爸爸去沈阳看爷爷奶奶。他们生病卧床不起已经两年了。我很担心他们，我要在那里呆20天。

回家以后，我要用一些时间来学习数学，因为我数学不太好。我相信我会学的好一些。

再有，我当然要做一些家务，如：做饭，打扫房间。

假期我会过得很愉快。

We have asked some people about what they think of having classes in holidays. Some teachers who think we shouldn’t have classes in holidays hold the idea that teachers and students are tired and students should have more time and space to do their own things. While Parents think students should have classes in holidays. They think learning more knowledge is better.

But 60% of students who disagree with it think that they should have some relaxation. On the contrary, other students hold the idea that they can learn more if they have classes in holidays.

I think it’s not very good to have classes in holidays. We should plan our holidays by ourselves. After all, it’s more helpful to combine learning and rest.

[英语作文：假期计划

1、学校的中央有一座教学楼。

There is a teaching building in the middle of the school.

2、楼的南边有一个游泳池。

As wimming pool lies to the south of the building.

3、楼的后面有许多树。

There are many trees behind the building.

4、楼的前边有一个小花园。

In front of the building lies a small garden.

5、楼的对面是宿舍。

Opposite the building is a dorm.

6、宿舍的旁边是食堂。

Beside the dorm stands the dining hall.

7、厨房和客厅挨着。

The kitchen stands next to the living room.

8、墙上挂着一张世界地图。

A map of the world hangs on the wall.

9、桌子下面有一只可爱的小狗。

There is a lovely dog under the table .

10、屋子的后面有一个书架。

At the back of the room is a bookshelf.

Think about it, the summer vacation is also almost, in retrospect, this

summer over the full and happy, busy and comfortable grace, really some

reluctant to these happy days ah!

This summer vacation in July and in previous years, in different corners of

the city shuttle. The morning wore no temperature but still dazzling sun out of

the house, accompanied by me there is a book full of books, books, pens, big

bag, I hummed my familiar tone to catch the bus, with the also Work adults

walking together on the road. Get out of the car at the familiar station, go to

the class with the familiar teacher, and take the bus from the familiar bus! At

this time the sun is already so sinister, the air outside the window floating

hay flavor. This tastes coupled with the shaking of the car makes me sleepy,

immediately fell asleep when the car on the station! Wait until I get home,

sleep no, casually eat some things, then out of the family. Hot waves ah! The

back of the piano will be more and more heavy, my clothes have been sweat

soaked. And then practice two hours of erhu, I am not too hot. Has five points,

I dragged his tired body back home again. Every day in July is so busy and full

of harvest!

My August is much easier, in the morning I can sleep nine, ten oclock, eat

breakfast together, and then finished homework, and finally on the 2 to 3 hours

network, watching TV, also to 5 oclock The Ha ha. After dinner, my mom and aunt

will go to the badminton hall to play an hour of the ball, or go to the swimming

pool swimming, after the sport can be in the night stalls stunned meal. Summer

cool wind, cool bean paste, how pleasant life ah!

Holiday, please you more violent it!

New year is coming.Spring festival is the most important festival in China.Besides celebrating it,Id like to make some new year resolutions.

First,I need to improve my English in 2009,especially to practice speaking.Maybe I can ask my English teacher to help with my oral English.

Also,I want to work hard at computer science.Because I am interestd in computer.And if I want to be a computer programmer in the future,I need to devote more time on it.

In the end,I will do more exercise this new year to keep healthy.I like basketball very much,so I can play basketball with my friends to become healthier.

winter vacation plan

How time flies(时间过得真快)，unconsciously(不知不觉地) the next winter vacation (寒假)will soon come.In order to improve(提高) myself as well as enjoy a happy holiday，I made the winter vacation plan.

时间过得真快，不知不觉得下一个寒假就要到了，为了提高我自己同时快乐的度过假期，我制定了寒假计划。

Firstly i want to continue with my study，i think study is a life process，so no matter what the situation I am in，i will look for chances to continue it.I have bought several new books ，including those books on my major(专业)and some novels ，I will try to finish reading them in the holiday and write notes.

首先，我会继续学习，我认为学习是一种终身的过程，所以不管我处在那种情况之下，我都会寻找机会学习。我已经买了一些新书，这些书有的跟我的专业有关，也包括一些小说。我将努力读完他们并写下读书笔记。

Secondly，since it is the holiday，I will share it with my family and friends .You know the spring festival will soon come， I believe I would chatting and play games with my friends and family .I think I will enjoy the vacation.

其次，既然是放假，我将和我的家人朋友一起度过，你知道春节就要来临了，届时我会和我的家人朋友一起聊天啊，玩游戏啊等等，我相信我定会度过一个快乐的假期。

[英语作文之我的寒假学习计划

_住在农村，山清水秀空气好。愉快的暑假到了，父母不在家，为了使自己的假期生活过的健康充实，欢乐而有意义，_特别邀请阳老师，帮助_制定了暑假生活计划。计划大概分为两个方面：学习计划、生活计划。

第一，学习计划：

1、争取7月3日至7月23日完成语、数、英三门暑假作业。计划大概每天完成6面暑假作业。

2、预习语文六年级上册的古诗词，文言文，日积月累等等。并有重点的选择背诵。

3、预习六年级上册数学相关内容。

4、预习六年级上册英语的课程，默写有关单词，听磁带。

5、每天看课外书，报纸，还可以看看动画片，上网学习，但时间不能太长。

6、写暑假日记一本，作文10篇，练好钢笔字一本。

7、_要写一些校园小短文，发在网上和阳光姐姐学习交流。

第二，生活计划：

1、培养个人的生活能力，比如：做饭、洗衣服。帮爷爷奶奶干一些力所能及的家务活，扫扫地，给爷爷奶奶捶捶背，帮爷爷奶奶洗碗、喂猪、喂鸡、买点东西等等。

2、要注意个人安全方面的问题，不私自下河游泳，不能私自外出，不做危险违法的事。

3、要每天锻炼身体，坚持跑步，每个星期天去爬一次山。每个星期六去河里游泳一次(有大人陪着)。每天还要早起，不睡懒觉。如果爷爷奶奶不在家，不能给陌生人开门，不跟陌生人讲话。见人要有礼貌。

4、每天晚饭后，_会和朋友一起聊天，或者看电视，之后刷牙、洗澡，睡觉。

这就是_的暑假计划，_相信只要认真执行这些计划，_就一定能过一个美好，愉快的暑假!

导语：小编为你整理，每年全国各地的高考英语满分作文，说不定其中就有你不知如何下笔的类型。拿起你的笔记来记录吧，为你的英语作文添亮点，让英语成绩更出色。

【全国卷】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫苏琳和她的母亲白云。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、 自我介绍; 2、祝贺苏琳生日; 3、感谢工作人员; 4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Dear Friend Thank You For your Love

Dear friend Lucy， thank you for your love。 We get on well with each other in day-to-day lives。 As for my friend， you always help me with my study。 When I have a few difficulties， you always encourage me to get over difficulties。

Do you remember? Last semester， I forgot to do my homework。 So the next day， I wanted to copy your homework。 Because I really didn’t want to be criticized。 But you said you couldn’t lend your homework to me， it was very bad solution。 Even if I said I would never do it except this time。 Please lent me your homework。 But you still said maybe it would start a bad habit。 I should do my own homework。 So I was pretty angry。 I said I wouldn’t become your friend anymore。 A few days later， I thought I was sorry。 So I told you to forgot this thing。 I wanted to make friends with you。 And I was happy you said OK。

Now I ‘m certain you are my best friend。 Dear friend Lucy， thank you for your love。

[暑假生活英语优秀作文

As the time by, I finished my vacation and returned the school. I know it is the time that I should say goodbye to my vacation life and adapt myself to school life. There is no doubt that I enjoy my vacation very much not only because in the vacation I could relax but also I can do what I would like to do keeping away from the pressure of the lesson and examination. I like travel very much so I spent about three days going for a trip with my sister and my good friends. We went to a beautiful small island named NanAo, which is near my hometown.

I almost could not control my excitement and happiness when Ifirst caught sight of the islandsurrounded by the cleanly blue-black water of the sea and where you can see the white and soft beach from a far distance. I thought maybe it was becauseI had not seen the sea for a long time that I felt so excited and happy when I dipped my feet in the cool seawater. I remembered I did not leave the beach until I was so hungry that I had to go for a dinner with my sister. We enjoyed our time very much. Finally we were reluctant to leave Nanao and were determined to visit there again next holiday.

When my teacher told me to prepare for this competition I restated, hesitated.Everybody in my class knows that. I never learned English in my primary school.I couldnt speak English one year ago, but now, could I take part in this competition? No, I cant. Is aid to myself? Im afraid of making mistakes before so many learned professors and before my classmates and teachers.Suddenly!

A voice came to my ears.“Everybody will make mistakes. Even the very famous American president George Bush” My English teacher said in my class.When I heard that, I think I can. I run into my teachers office happily. “I will do it.” I said. So I stand here today. In front of you.

Hi, I’m He Zhizhou. I’m going to have a happy weekend! On Saturday, I’m going to the zoo by bus. I want to see the monkeys. Then, I’m going to go home and play computer for one hour. On Sunday morning, I’m going to the supermarket with my mother. Then, I’m going to the cinema. In the afternoon, I’m going to the bookstore and buy some books. Then, I’m going to read the new books at home. It will be very interesting!

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy. Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

暑假的时候，我总是会回到老家跟爷爷奶奶在一起。我喜欢那里的生活，它是如此的简单和快乐。住在乡下，我心里感受到了平静。在这里的日子似乎变得更长一些。早上，我听到公鸡的声音，好像是在唱歌，之后我就醒过来了。有时我会跑到山上去，可以听到一些鸟儿唱歌。我喜欢它们的声音。我是如此的接近大自然。我爱大自然带来的一切。绿色的树，五彩缤纷的花朵，干净的水甚至是新鲜的空气。我找到了它的美。

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提推荐，解决自行车存放问题的过程。

注意： 1。 词数不少于 60。

2。 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

范文：

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school， I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked。 So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report。 Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him。 He accepted our suggfestions。 Soon afterwards， a second entrance was opened to the parking place。 Now it is easy to park our bikes there。

导语：做一个诚实可靠的人会让别人相信你，这会给你带来很多好处，给你机会，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we were little kids. What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest. However, therere lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.

Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example. After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health. To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.

Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get. Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you. In a sense, if life is a longjourney, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.

Lets pick up our "backpack" -- honesty, and start the wonderful journey!

【参考翻译】

几乎所有的人都听过这个故事：“狼来了”，当我们小的时候。我们可以从这个故事中得到的东西是我们必须诚实。然而，现在有很多不诚实的现象。

不诚实不仅对别人有害，而且对你自己也有很大的危害。以假奶粉为例。喝了这种牛奶后，婴儿的腿和胳膊仍然很瘦，他们的健康状况很差，他们的健康状况很严重。我们的杰出的救济，生产者有指责和受到惩罚的结束所有的严重后果。

做一个诚实可靠的人会让别人相信你，这会给你带来很多好处，给你机会。诚实，你会发现很容易与他人合作，人们会对你友好和支持你。从某种意义上说，如果人生是长途旅行，诚实将要采取的路上背包。

让我们拿起我们的“背包”-诚实，并开始精彩旅程!

相关标签: 真诚Sincere 重要Important

夏日炎炎，暑假就快到了，我的心充满了期待，在漫长的两个月当中，充实的人生，不过是一个个一连串的小小计划、一个个小小的目标达成，但是过多的目标，往往会一事无成，过大的目标和太多的计划，只会徒然增加挫折感。

烈日当空，鼓吹鸣蛙，虫鸣鸟叫，在这骄阳如火的日子，正是玩水的好时机，而且我想藉由这次的暑假“计划”和“执行”，最想达成的目标就是学会“蛙式”。以前我是一只旱鸭子，对水有一种莫名的恐惧。好几次在闭气时，水都不听使唤的跑进鼻子裏面，连漂浮动作都因为身体僵硬而一直沉下去，让我的心情简直 是坠到谷底，曾经有想要放弃的念头。后来遇到了一位好老师，她不厌其烦的耐心教导我，后来我抓住了诀窍反复练习，终于让我学会了自由式和仰式，享受着玩水 的乐趣，现在我订下了目标，希望可以学会蛙式。

而在这暑假期间，适度的玩乐无可厚非，但漫长的两个月不可能天天都在玩。要想想，如何让自己度过一个充实的暑假，如何在暑假提升自己更是重要！在暑假 期间建立自己正确的读书方法为主轴，强调启发自我的读书自主思考与理解能力，让自己彻底改变过去读书上的各种坏习惯，在未来任何一个阶段都可以真正将方法 应用到平时读书上。所谓“工欲善其事，必先利其器。”确保学到的方法成为自己未来读书的利器，减轻未来读书的压力，成为一辈子的学习技能。

今年的夏日虽然暑气蒸人，但相信只要照着预订计划，暑假生活一定过的非常充实而且多采多姿，必定让我获益匪浅，收获满行囊。

[暑假学游泳的计划作文

Dear Mr. John,

How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you. You tutored me in my spoken English before you went to Beijing. With your help I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city. My achievement is owed to your help. Thank you very much.

I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school. I am very glad at the news. In that case we can see each other again. I am looking forward to your coming. I am sending you a telescope as a small gift. I hope you will like it.

All the best.

Yours,

Liu Jie

亲爱的约翰先生：

您在北京过得怎么样?

我写信向您表达我的谢意。去北京前您辅导我的英语口语。在您的帮助下我很快取得进步，所以能在市里举办的英语口语比赛中取得第一名。我的成绩应该归功于您的帮助。非常感谢。

我听说您和您的夫人要来我们学校访问。听到这个消息我非常高兴。那样的话我们就又可以见面了。期盼着您的到来。我给您寄去一件小礼物“望远镜”。希望您喜欢。

万事如意。

您的朋友 刘杰

Dear Mr. John,

How are you getting on in Beijing?

I am writing to tell you a piece of good news. I am the champion of the Spoken English Competition held in the city. The success is owed to your help. Before you went to Beijing you spent much time on my spoken English so that I made great progress in it. As a result I got the first place in the competition. Thanks a lot.

I heard that you and your wife would visit my school. I am very happy and expect to see you soon. I am sending you a telescope as a small gift. I hope you will like it.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Liu Jie

亲爱的约翰先生：

您在北京过得怎么样?

我写信告诉您一个好消息。我在市里举办的英语口语比赛中取得第一名。我，的成功归功于您的帮助。您花了很长时间辅导我英语口语，我因此取得很大进步并且获得比赛的第一名。多谢。

我听说您和您的夫人要来我们学校访问。我非常高兴并期望很快见到您。我给您寄去一件小礼物“望远镜”。希望您喜欢。

一切顺利。

您的朋友 刘杰

2013高考英语作文评分标准

1 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。

4 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。

5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

各档次的给分范围和要求

Ⅰ. 第五档(很好)；(21-25分)：

完全完成了试题规定的任务

⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点

⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，

⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力，

⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ， 完全达到了预期的写作目的 Ⅱ. 第四档(好)：(16-20分)

完全完成了试题规定的任务

⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容

⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的

Ⅲ. 第三档(适当)：(11-15分)

基本完成了试题规定的任务

⑴虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容

⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解

⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差)：(6-10分)

未恰当完成试题规定的任务

⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容

⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解

⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者

Ⅴ. 第一档(差)：(1-5分)

未完成试题规定的任务

⑴明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求

⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。

Ⅵ. 不得分：（0分） ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要

求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)

词汇多样性

语法复杂性

文章连贯性

书面表达的五项秘诀：

审题，遣词，造句，润色，谋篇

既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀，我们要如何从这些方面入手呢审题的概念

拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。

如何审要点要做到以下两个方面：

总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!

理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。

构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。

遣词的注意点

不出现语言错误

词语和短语搭配

适度使用加分词汇

避免词语重复

注意词语和短语搭配使用

可以适度的使用加分词句：高级词、同义词、短语等替代

造句的原则

表达意思要清楚无误。

多种表达方式表达相同含义

避免句式单调(简单句，并列句，复合句等适度调整)

表达意思清楚无误：具体化，细节化

可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维比如说你朗读的“很好听”，用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)

谋篇的攻略

注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯

行文时多用关联词、引导词，把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来，达到起承转合，运用自如的目的，从而获取高分。

具体的连接关系有：并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。

2015年高考英语全国I卷

写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例

——领会高考阅卷要求，有效指导学生高考写作备考

【作文题】假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1.栏目介绍;

2. 稿件内容;

3. 稿件长度：约 400 词;

4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。

注意： 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2015年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准

评分总则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。

6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则：

优秀（22--25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。

Day, night, and finally ushered in the long-awaited summer vacation. In

these two months, can"t play games every day! Besides, even if I think so, mom

and dad are certainly can"t promise. Only done to make them more satisfied, my

freedom is a bit more, this summer vacation will have a more pleasant. Combined

with the requirements of the teacher and I wish mom and dad, have a preliminary

arrangement.

放假的一天，我与弟弟没有事情做。就看着炎热的天空，心想应该玩点什么?好，打水仗。我们俩异口同声的说了出来。

好，就是打水仗了，我们在玩具箱找出水枪，装好水，就开始选地点，一人有三条命，被水枪扫上就算死。我和弟弟商议好之后，就找各自的安全位置，我占据高处地形，不信搞不死他，弟弟小心翼翼的跑向远处，像是猜到了我会上房一样，躲的远远的。我看他不在我的射击范围内，只能放弃了，下了楼。看见弟弟藏身的地方，我就绕道而行，刚想绕道去击毙弟弟，就觉得后背一湿，我想是他感觉到了什么吧，啊!不好，被弟弟得逞了，第一局竟然是我输了。

我一个哥哥竟然被弟弟给杀了。看来下局得好好玩了，只剩两条命了，我回到了起点复活，我这次得改变一下思路了，我又绕道而行，哈哈，我射中了弟弟，我怎么没想到呢，一比一了，下局我该放手了。

我藏在房子里，等着弟弟来，好!一枪击毙他，可是等了好一会都没有见他过来，我刚出门想看个究竟，可是刚一出门，就被带着诡异笑容的弟弟打中了，我就又藏进房子，在窗口等着，果然一道鬼鬼祟祟的身影就出现在我的面前，我已经被打中，就剩一局了，得好好玩了，我们都不去寻找对方。

不行，我的主动出击。我要去找弟弟，我走呀走，忽然觉得不对劲，就一闪，幸亏没射中，我又拿起水枪还击着，怎么就是打不上呀，我生气了，使出全身力气。不好，没水了，弟弟也说没水了，平局，回到家，我们一个紧挨一个，弟弟说：是我赢了。我也说：是我赢了。

欢欢乐乐的一天就这样轰轰烈烈的以平局收场，太开心了，玩的真好。