一篇介绍长城的英语作文和翻译(汇集20篇)
圣诞节最重要的意义是讲「饶恕」与「和好」,它是西方一个重大节日,那么如何一写关于圣诞节的英语作文呢?。以下是小编收集的关于《圣诞节英语作文》,仅供大家阅读参考!
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1000英语作文:介绍自己
全文共 481 字
+ 加入清单Hello! my chinese name is Yin Xiaoyan and English name is Anna.Im a happy girl. Im 13 years old. Jly 22th is my birthday.
Our school is very nice.Im in class 3 ,Grade 6.Im go to school by bus. I have many teachers. I love them.
I have many habbies.I like swimming,reading and listening to music.my favourite food is rice, my favourite fruit is apple and my favourite colour is blue. The dog is my favourite animal.Why? Because dog are very lovely!
This is me! A happy and lovely girl!
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篇1:小学英语作文60字翻译
全文共 396 字
+ 加入清单I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.
我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。
篇2:初二寒假英语日记带翻译
全文共 335 字
+ 加入清单I made a decision today. Becuase I often lose my confidence, I decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. I believe this will make me confident. Thus, I can do things I want bravely. Now, I will say, ‘Keep going’.
今天,我做了一个决定,有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样,我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在,我要说一句:加油!
篇3:年夜饭英语作文带翻译
全文共 3701 字
+ 加入清单今天是一年一度的除夕。中国人的传统习俗一般都是在这天晚上只吃饺子,我家却年年做“年夜大餐”。看,今年的年夜饭多么丰盛呀!
Today is the annual New Years Eve. The traditional Chinese custom is usually only to eat dumplings on this night, but my family is doing &ldquo every year; the big meal ” Look, what a great meal this year!
下午四点多,我们全家便开始忙碌的工作起来。第一种食物当然还是饺子,它毕竟是传统食物,给它个排老一的机会。和面、拌馅、包饺子我们分工细致,这饺子香不香可就在这和面、拌馅上。馅儿拌好了吃起来香,面和好了薄皮大馅儿更是让人舍不得放嘴呀。当然这包饺子也很重要哟!如果包的不美观谁都不爱吃哟,所以包饺子也是一门学问滴。爸妈把面、馅儿都准备好了,该我大显身手了。我左手捏一个,右手拿一个 ,一会儿,一个个小贝壳似的饺子就呈现在我眼前。第一道工序做完,该到下一步了——做满汉全席。
More than four in the afternoon, our family began to work in a busy way. The first kind of food, of course, is a dumpling. Its a traditional food after all, giving it an opportunity to get older. With the noodles, the stuffing and the dumplings, we have a fine division of labor. The dumplings are not fragrant on the noodles and the stuffing. The stuffing mix good tastes fragrant, a large stuffing thin surface and good people are more reluctant to put his mouth. Of course, this bag of dumplings is also very important! If the package is not beautiful, everyone does not love to eat, so it is also a school of learning. The parents in the face, with all ready, I the display skills to the full. I pinched one in my left hand and one in the right hand. In a moment, a small shell like dumpling was present in my eyes. Finish the first step, the next step of — — do manhanquanxi.
妈妈准备了近十几种菜———鸡鸭鱼肉样样齐全,还有各种青菜。快看,我家的烹饪大师——“李大厨”(本人的妈妈)来了。只见她右手拿着炒锅,左手拿着勺子,走进了厨房。先炒蒜苔,后炒木耳,最后炒银耳。顿时,厨房里传出噼噼啪啪的爆炒声,同时也飘散出了炒菜了清香。屋外也想起了噼里啪啦的鞭炮声,空气里弥漫上了火药的气息。屋里屋外这热闹的景象混合在一起,真有一番过年的景象。妈妈把各种各样的肉变着花样做出各种各样的菜。我还给这些凉菜、热菜分别取了好听的名字:百花争艳、芙蓉水上漂、莲子鸡汤、水果沙拉……光听这些名字你肯定也早就口水流了三千尺吧!
Mother prepared more than a dozen kinds of vegetables — — — chicken and duck fish meat samples complete, and all kinds of green vegetables. Look, my master culinary master — — “ chef Lee ” (my mother) come. She saw her right hand with a frying pan, a spoon in her left hand, and she walked into the kitchen. First fried garlic, stir fry after, finally fried tremella. Suddenly heard the sound of crackling, stir in the kitchen, but also have a cooking fragrance. The house was also reminded of the crackling sound of firecrackers, the air was the smell of gunpowder. The bustling scene outside the house was mixed, and there was a real picture of the new year. Mama made all kinds of dishes by changing all kinds of meat. I returned to the cold and hot dishes are a good name: floating on the water, a hundred flowers contend in beauty and the lotus lotus seed soup, Fresh Fruit Salad … … listen to these names you must also have three thousand feet of it flow slobber!
终于等到了开饭,一盘盘色香味俱全、香喷喷的饭菜端上桌来,我看得眼花缭乱。开饭喽!我狼吞虎咽的把这美味佳肴直往嘴里塞,吃了一个圆溜溜的小肚子。妈妈把果汁和红酒拿出来,倒在高脚杯里。这是我们每年必备的一个节目———新年祝愿(每年的年夜饭前我们都要把自己认为最好的祝愿送给家人)。今年还是我第一个上场,我端起酒杯祝愿爸爸和妈妈———寿比南山,笑口常开,工作顺利。爸爸妈妈也把他们的祝愿送给了我,祝我身体健康天天好心情。然后我们端起酒杯,“干杯”!我们的家真是一个温馨和睦的家庭,我爱我家。
Wait until the last dinner, a few color aroma and taste, delicious food on the table, I see dazzling. Dinner! I wolfed down the food it straight into his mouth, eat a round belly. Mom take out the fruit juice and wine, pour in the goblet. This is our annual program — — — new years greetings. We must give our best wishes to our families before the annual meal. This is my first play, I wish mom and Dad took up his glass of — — — longevity, happiness, work smoothly. Mom and dad gave me their wishes, and I wish me good health every day. Then we put up a glass, “ ”! Our home is really a warm and harmonious family, and I love my family.
我家不仅年夜大餐丰盛,家庭也那么幸福,我既为有一个会做美食的的妈妈感到骄傲,也为有一个美满的家庭感到骄傲。
My family is not only a big meal, but also a happy family. I am proud of having a mother who can cook delicious food, and I am proud of having a happy family.
篇4:关于公共安全的英语作文带翻译
全文共 752 字
+ 加入清单叮叮叮,马路上响起了刺耳的响声
Jingling,
jingling, there is a sharp noise on the road
大家争先恐后地在马路上行驶。
Everyone
was scrambling on the road.
一遇到红灯,大家就排起了长队。
As
soon as we met the red light, we formed a long line.
一遇到绿灯,大家就又比赛了起来。
As
soon as we meet the green light, we will play again.
路上的赛跑真有趣。
The
race on the road is really interesting.
红灯停,绿灯行,黄灯亮了停一停。
Stop
at the red light, go at the green light, stop at the yellow light.
大家要铭记在心,不然出了大事可就麻烦了。
You
should keep it in mind, or you will be in trouble if something important
happens.
为了家人,为了自己,
For
my family, for myself,
要时刻记住这句话。
Always
remember this sentence.
马路上堵住我不怕,大家不急也不慌,
Im
not afraid to block the road. Everyone is not in a hurry or panic,
慢慢等待。不超,也不急
Wait
slowly. No, no hurry
安全在我心中,大家都铭记。
Security
is in my heart, and everyone remembers it.
篇5:高三英语口语自我介绍
全文共 1183 字
+ 加入清单自我介绍是向别人展示你自我介绍好不好,甚至直接关系到你给别人的第一印象的好坏及以后交往的顺利与否。下面就是小编整理的高三英语口语自我介绍,一起来看一下吧。 大学英语口语自我介绍范文篇一:
Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.
Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.
I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!
OK. This is me .A sunny girl. 大学英语口语自我介绍范文篇三:
Good morning/afternoon/evening, my name is . It is really a great honor to have this opportunity/chance to introduce myself. I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today.
上午好/下午好/晚上好!我的名字叫……。今天有机会进行自我介绍深感荣幸。我乐意回答
你们所提出来的任何问题。我希望我今天能表现的非常出色。 大学英语口语自我介绍范文篇二:
I am years old, born in province/Beijing, northeast/southeast/southwest…… of china, and I am currently a freshman(大一新生)/sophomore(大二学生)/junior(大三学生)/senior(大四学生) student at Capital Institute of Physical Education.
我今年……岁,出生在……省/北京,它位于中国的东北/东南/西南……等部。我目前是首都体育学院大一/大二/大三/大四的学生。
篇6:短篇英语日记带翻译
全文共 361 字
+ 加入清单I went out to have dinner with father today. I should make toast during the
dinner but there was no juice availabe. So I had a bottle of beer. My face
turned red but I was not drunk. I dont think beer tastes bad but I wont like
have it too much because I am only a student.
今天和爸爸一起出去吃饭。吃饭的时候要敬酒。那里没有果汁。我就拿了一瓶啤酒开始到处敬酒。喝了一瓶酒后,我的脸红了,但没有醉。我认为啤酒并不难喝,但我还是要少喝酒。因为我还只是一个学生。
篇7:介绍动物的英语
全文共 336 字
+ 加入清单I have a white dog.Its name is Bobo.She is a female dog.She comes from Beijing,China.She has two big eyes and a small month.She wears white clothes.
She often walks around at home.It has nothing to do.She likes eating ice-cream so much,So do I.When I eat ice-cream,she will look at the ice-cream carefully.So I will give her some to eat.
篇8:短篇英语日记带翻译
全文共 433 字
+ 加入清单Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I
decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and
become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase
you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I
make a decision to be a good girl.
今天,我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得,人老了真不好。不但身体不会好,而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定,以后一定要做个乖孩子。
篇9:关于我的夏天英语作文带翻译
全文共 597 字
+ 加入清单It was the first day of our summer holiday.All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have two months to do things we love to do.We are free.Although we have some homework.But we can finish them in several days.And the rest time we can make good use of.My god! We have been very tired after hard studying.In summer holidays,I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least,I will have a good rest.
译文
这是我们暑假的第一天。我们所有的人都很快乐。为什么?因为我们有两个月的时间去做我们喜欢做的事情。我们都是免费的。虽然我们有一些功课。但是我们可以在几天内完成它们。和其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们一直努力学习后很累。在暑假,我想有充分的睡眠和吃好的食物,以补充自己。最后,我将好好休息一下。
篇10::介绍小兔子的英语作文
全文共 1143 字
+ 加入清单In my home, is holding a lovely little rabbit.
My little rabbit is a black and white panda rabbit, feels fluffy, a pair of shiny black pearl-like eyes always flashing light, long ears thin and large, the above accidentally can see the bloodshot, Three petals are always in a one to move together, as if always eat.
Its legs are long before and after the long, is conducive to running, but at first it was very afraid of me, so it does not often run. Wait until the little rabbit and I am familiar with, it also shows that its naughty character.
Once again, it went to the lobby of the sofa and said nothing at all. In order to catch it, I was very sweating, and finally with the "food to lure" to seize it. I was so angry that I could see the little rabbit that lovely look, the gas was eliminated.
And once again, how the little rabbit does not eat, I picked it up angrily, just put the carrot into its mouth, but when I see the little rabbit that sharp teeth, immediately scared to put a small rabbit The ground, the heart is still kept talking about: how so like the mouse teeth?
Listen to my story, you are not like me on this little rabbit it?
篇11:春节英语作文带翻译
全文共 977 字
+ 加入清单There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival
most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because
it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family
gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they
are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit
together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to
have some fun.
On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone
they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we
will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a
time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.
在我国,一年有很多节日,在这些节日中,我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日,更因为它是新一年的开始,给人们带来新的希望,也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方,人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。
通常,我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐,之后家人团座一起,分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一,人们通常会早起,会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里,人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之,春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。
篇12:我的理想高中英语作文带翻译
全文共 1048 字
+ 加入清单Everyone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to become wealthy overnight; some people want to become well-known in the world overnight.I have a lot of dreams, too.When I was a girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogeng one day.But I know, plum flower. So I studied hard and hard for my dream when I was in high school and college.
After graduating from college, I became a teacher. Although I was busy every day, I didnt forget my dream. I still kepIn the knowledge on the road constantly groping forward, and. Now, I have made great achievements, and many of my research papers have been published, and the research results also have a very high application value.I am so happy。 Although the goal of becoming a scientist is far from it, I am still moving forward.
【翻译】
每个人都会有许多梦想。有的人想变得富有,一夜暴富;有的人想一夜成,名扬四海。我也有许多的梦想。当我还是一个女孩的时候,我就梦想着,有朝一日成为一名像华罗庚那样的科学家。但是我知道,梅花香自苦寒来。所以,我在中学和大学时为我实现我的梦想而认真刻苦的学习。
大学毕业后,我成为了一名老师,虽然我每天都很忙碌,但是我没忘记过我的梦想,我仍然不断坚持学习。在求知的道路上不断摸索前进,废寝忘食。现在,我已经小有成就了,我的多篇研究论文相继发表,研究成果也有着极高的应用价值。我很快乐。虽然,成为一名科学家目标还很远,毕竟我还是在不断向前迈进。
篇13:简单口语英语自我介绍
全文共 341 字
+ 加入清单Hello,everyone!My name is XX.I live in/at XX.I have a lot of hobbies,just like reading books,listening to the songs,surfing the Internet and so on.I major in XX.Some of my friends say I am outgoing,lovely and friendly.So,I like making friends in many ways.At home,I often help my parents do the housework,and they think they have a good kid.
篇14:关于自我介绍的英语作文
全文共 770 字
+ 加入清单I am . I was born in . I graduate from senior high school and major in Englh. I started learning Englh since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking Englh.
In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to Englh such as ltening to Englh songs, watching Englh movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some Englh clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term Englh study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life Englh and saw a lot of different things.
I think language very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wh I could study and read more Englh literatures and enlarge my knowledge.
篇15:介绍我喜欢的小动物英语
全文共 797 字
+ 加入清单My favorite little animal is a chicken.
Just, my house downstairs 307 to raise a few chicks. Every day when we pass by, these chicks are leaning on the head to see us miles.
The chicks are full of hairy and cute. A golden feather like a golden dress. The chicks have a pair of pointed mouths. Round eyes to see people when it is quite spirit of it
I did not see their ears, but chicks could not have ears. If there is no ears, then we walked over, how they will be wiped out toward our head look at us?
Mother said, just hatched chicks can only eat small grains, can not eat millet or corn, but also often give them water. If there are small insects to eat them, they will grow more air.
I like these lovely chicks too much But Mom and Dad said that now can not raise, do not raise well, they will die.
篇16:英语日记带翻译
全文共 907 字
+ 加入清单Tree and Ax
Ilike to tell you a story today ,it is Tree and Ax:A woodman came into a
forest to ask the trees to give him a handle for Ax.It seemed so modest a
request that the principal tree at once agreed to it,and it was settled among
them that the plain,homely Ash should finish what was wanted.No sooner had the
woodman fitted the staff to his purpose,than he began laying about him on all
side.Felling the whole matter too late,whishpered to the Cedar:“the fist
concession has lost all;if we has not a sacrificed our humble neighbor,we might
have yet stood for ages ourselves”The story was a satire on ungrateful
people,and it also shows us that giving alms to the enemy is cruelty to
yourself
参考翻译
树和斧子
今天我要给你讲个故事,就是“树和斧子”:有一个樵夫到森林里,要求树给他一把斧柄,看来他的请求非常谦虚,立刻得到了树的首领的同意。他们决定由平凡而朴素的白杨树来提供所需要的东西。樵夫刚按好斧柄,就开始到处乱砍,森林里最高的树都被砍到了,森林现在察觉大势已去,就小声对杉树说:“第一次的让步已经失去了一切。如果我们不牺牲我们的小小邻居,我们还可以活无数年呢。”这故事讽刺了忘恩负义的人,也告诉我们对敌人的施舍就是对自己的残忍。
篇17:会计求职英语自我介绍模板
全文共 636 字
+ 加入清单My name am Wang Li, this year big four, my specialty was the Accounting, the undergraduate course school record, university four years I already is smooth through the English four levels of tests, has obtained accountant the computerization and accountant is employed the credentials, studied diligently about financial each discipline, could utilize the computer skilled, in university period participated in the student association, had the strong communication ability and the power of expression, the work is diligently earnest, also strong learning capability and compatibility, positive enterprising, strove to get the upper hand.
篇18:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译
全文共 1434 字
+ 加入清单The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on
the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. This
festival is to commemorate the death of QU Yuan, an upright and honest poet and
statesman who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a
river.
The most important activity of this festival is the Dragon Boat races. It
symbolizes people‘s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. In the current period, these
races also demonstrate the virtues of cooperation and teamwork.
Besides, the festival has also been marked by eating zong zi (glutinous
rice). Zongzi is made of glutinous rice stuffed with different fillings and
wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves. People who mourned the death of Qu threw Zong
zi into the river to feed his ghost every year.
With the changes of the times, the memorial turns to be a time for
protection from evil and disease for the rest of year. People will hang healthy
herbs on the front door to clear the bad luck of the house. Although the
significance of the festival might be different with the past, it still gives
the observer an opportunity to glimpse a part of the rich Chinese cultural
heritage.
端午节,又称为端午节,定在第五个月的第五天据中国日历。这个节日是为了纪念屈原的死,一个忠厚老实的诗人和政治家据说在河流溺水自杀。
这个节日最重要的活动是龙舟竞赛。它象征着人们的努力救屈原。在当前时期,这些比赛也证明合作和团队合作的优点。
此外,节日还被吃的粽子(糯米)。粽子是糯米做的塞满了不同的馅料包在竹叶或芦苇叶。人哀悼屈原的死亡把粽子扔进河里喂他的鬼魂。
随着时代的变化,纪念转向防止邪恶和疾病是一个时间的。人们会把健康的草药挂在前门清理房子的坏运气。虽然这个节日的意义可能与过去不同,它仍然使观察者看到的机会丰富的中国文化遗产的一部分。
篇19:留学生英语自我介绍
全文共 1780 字
+ 加入清单I harbored feelings reluctantly and quietly left the school.
Today, I would like to re-examination by the aspirations of the rostrum is so urgent! My family a total of three sisters, two sisters who work, in order to take care of the elderly parents, I have to stay around them. I have held a shop, first operational craft, then garments. But no matter how the business is handy, when a teacher is always glorious people yearn for and I would like to make every effort to pursue life-long career. I have to take the test several times, but for various reasons are unable to realize their dreams, but I secretly determined, given the chance, I have been test continue until the ideal realized.
Today, I am, after the test of life, compared to my competitors in terms of age I no longer have an advantage, but Im more than a child they love, patience and sense of responsibility, more of a mature and self-confidence. The teaching profession is sacred and great, he asked teachers not only must be knowledgeable, but also a noble sentiment. Therefore, when reading normal, I paid great attention to their overall development, to train its own extensive interests, and learned a trade, be good at painting and calligraphy than outside, but also sing, say, will speak. "High school only as a teacher, inspires them for the Fan" in the knowledge-learning and I also paid attention to develop their own high moral character, consciously abide by the law, abide by social morality, no bad habits and behavior. I think these are an educator should have the minimum literacy.
If, I passed the interview, Chengweizhongduo Teacher Groups in 成员 I shall keep Nuli study and work hard, my hometown of Jiao Yu force ourselves to the cause, never let down, "the human soul," a major title.
Thank you!
篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译
全文共 3240 字
+ 加入清单My Father
There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.
Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.
Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.
We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.
我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.
作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。
父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。
父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。
父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.
评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。