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In our country, there are plenty of delicious foods. They are popular among

Chinese people. I like eating very much. There are many food I like, such as

chicken, fish, beef, tofu, noodle and so on. Among them, fish and tofu are the

food I like most. Fish is delicious as well asrich in nutrition. Its good to

our health. There are various cooking methods and I think the simplest way is

the best one. Tofu is my favorite as well. It can be cooked with many other

dishes. Different tastes combine with each other to make the food more

delicious.

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篇1:英语日记带翻译

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I would rather suffer hardships than fail。 In other words, to achieve

success is my only desire。 We all know that there are many factors of success。

Now let me write down the most important ones in the following。

Diligence—Foolish as a person is, he can succeed in his work if he works

hard。 That does not admit of any doubt。

Perseverance—When you fail, don’t lose heart。 Keep on working until you

acplish your aim。

Honesty—If you tell lies or does not keep your words, no one will rely on

you。 I would rather be scolded than cheat (others)。

我宁愿受苦难不愿失败。换句话说,获致成功是我唯一的愿望。我们大家明白成功要素很多。此刻让我们把它们最重要的写在下方。

勤勉――一个人虽然不大聪明,但是他地能做成他的工作,如果他苦干的话。那是不容置疑的。

毅力――当你失败的时候,不要灰心。要继续工作,直到你到达目的为止。

诚实――如果你说谎或不守信,没有人会信赖你。我宁愿挨骂不愿欺骗人。

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篇2:别样除夕英语日记

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The end of the year, on New Years eve is the reunion night, every household is decorated, celebrate the end of a year of peace, a good start in the New Year.

On New Years eve, every family is busy to stick couplets on the Spring Festival, our family is no exception, and each year couplet still  stick by me at home.Actually this stick couplet learning also pretty big, when you last as long as a look at this couplet you will know the family in the New Years hope and plan, also know that in the past year what has happened to the family home wedding, you look at the couplet is not god.

On this day the most happy or children, they cried to early adult years, because after taking the year can fireworks.Fireworks, several children beside, hopping, forget about the overjoyed when, even adults were infected with the following.After the fireworks family around the table to eat the family reunion dinner, the most interesting is to eat dumplings, and it can eat dumplings eat money, who eat money the luck in the New Year will be the best, so everyone scrambled to eat, who also rob to that rich of dumplings, but whether to eat or not to eat, the atmosphere of rob to eat the dumpling is the most unforgettable.

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篇3:一个英语系毕业生的求职经历日记

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人 物:武汉大学英语系2004届毕业生刘冕

年 龄:22岁

自身条件:专业八级、计算机三级、两次“院三好学生”和两次二等奖学金。

求职经历:出版社编辑、英文报纸编辑、企业策划、中学外语教师

11月20日 星期四 晴

很多天以前我们就得到消息,省外一家外文出版社今天要到本系招2名英文编辑。一打听,要求还挺高,不但学习成绩进入全系前二十名,还要在英文刊物上发表过文章。仔细掂量了一下自己的实力,我的成绩是全系第十五,这个条件我符合;至于在英文刊物上发表文章,这个条件就有点难了,整个专业也许没几个吧。去还是不去呢?思虑再三,还是去试试。

招聘会在语音室进行。前来应聘的人数不是很多,也就十多人吧。大概是学习成绩这个条件让很多人望而生畏。面试开始了,应聘者依次拿着自己的简历和面试老师面对面坐着交谈。时间大概是3分钟。在我前面的几名同学,和面试老师的交谈了不到一分钟,就灰溜溜地走了,连简历也没有留下。很显然,他们都被淘汰了。

该我上场了。果然,面试老师一得知我没有发表文章的经历,连我的简历也没有看,客气地对我说了声“抱歉”。然后就招呼下一位了。

睡前总结:也许是第一次参加应聘吧,感觉很失败。毕业求职时发现自己学到的东西并不太多。对没有工作经验的我来说,平时的经验就是很好的积累。我很后悔大学前三年没有好好练笔写些稿子。

11月22日 星期六 阴

前天那场招聘会,被隔壁班的两位英语高人给抢走了,听说待遇还不错。签就签了吧,至少少了两个竞争对手,好单位还多着呢。

在武汉科技会展中心,今天有场“武汉8校联合招聘会”,我早早地买了门票,攥着几天前就准备好的6份简历进了场。其中4份是准备应聘翻译的,另外两份应聘英文报刊编辑。其实我的“硬件”还算过得去——专业八级,计算机三级,还有两次“院三好学生”和两次二等奖学金。找个翻译的工作,胜算应该比较大吧。

会场人很多,我绕场转了两圈,仅发现两家英文报刊在招广告策划,想想和自己的专业沾了点边,我毫不犹豫地把简历递了过去。

对方仔细看我的简历,问了一句:“你是学广告策划的吗?”

他刚才不是看了吗?怎么还问我?我说:“不是,我是英语专业的。我对你们的工作岗位……”“对不起,我们不要其他专业的!”还没说完,对方就很不耐烦地打断了我的话。

睡前总结:今天的收获几乎为零。宿舍小文总结我的失败之处在于跨专业求职。想来也对,跨专业求职对普通学生难度太大,除非事前有很好的准备。今天的失败应该在于没考虑自己的专业因素吧。

11月27日 星期四 阴

谢天谢地,终于迎来第一场针对本专业的招聘会。宿舍的几位姐妹都起床忙于梳妆打扮。我早早地起来,又把自己的简历看了一遍,按求职意向分门别类整理了一下自己的思路。挤进会场后,我先绕场一周了解大致情况,然后有针对性地把我的简历投了出去。

我们专业不过500来人,而整个会场人数足足有一两千。我甚至还瞥见有位同学来自广东省的中山大学。

到底是针对英语专业,让我感觉自己能胜任在场的所有职位。上午我去一家外贸公司应聘高级翻译。面试老师用英语问起了一些有关我家庭成员和籍贯的问题,虽然谈不上对答如流,却也算是表达清晰。后来又和我聊起了今年年初流行的SARS病的相关问题知识,我的语句就开始不通畅了。最后我感觉对方有点落井下石,竟问起了今年诺贝尔化学奖的得主来自哪个国家。我支吾了半天,只好“SORRY”。

还是再试试另一家报社的英文编辑吧。

展位前的椅子上已经坐了好多前来应聘的人。我刚要找个地方坐下,中间一位老师就站起来宣布面试开始。接着发给大家每人一张试卷。要求在半个小时内完成。

我瞅了瞅周围的人,他们看上去相当认真。题目是十个选择填空题和一篇作文改错。几个选择题似乎很简单,几分钟我就完成了。那篇作文是有关神州5号飞船升空的,反复看了好几遍,才找到一处语法错误。眼看时间快到了,我胡乱地改了几处单词。然后把试卷交了上去。

那位戴眼镜的老编辑花了几分钟看完了我们的试卷,当场宣布5人进入下一轮面试,其余的人全部淘汰。原因是只有这5人记得神州5号升空的日子。

为什么平时不多看看报纸呢。这么重要的错误也没发现?下次还是小心点吧。

睡前总结:两个这么好的工作就被我这样给糟蹋了。我发现虽然自己专业已经是八级,但口语什么的好象还不太够用,而要命的是我平时除了集中学习专业知识,对外界的关心太少了。 翻译和编辑两种工作都需要大量的社会知识积累。我败在了平时。

12月1日 星期一 阴

连续两天,华中科技大学和武汉科技会展中心召开了两场招聘会。天很冷,但依然高兴,因为两天的奔波换来了三个面试机会。

一是本市一家进出口贸易公司,我应聘副总经理秘书,二是一家企业缺个策划,再就是市中心一所重点高中的英语教师。我根据自己的优势和硬件,集中对英语教师进行了精心准备。想到面试时多半会要求我上台试讲,我还特地请教了我们的英语老师,让他为我作了特别辅导。

果然不出我所料,那位老校长要我上讲台授课,4位老师临时充当我的学生。好在我提前做了准备,一上讲台,我就着那本高中英语课本绘声绘色地讲了起来。加上我们高中学过那篇课文,我发挥比较出色。20分钟后,老校长叫停,而后就和几位老师开始了讨论。

说实话,虽然紧张,但我对自己的发挥还是比较满意。果然,老校长对我说:“刘小姐,你已经通过了我们的面试,如果你是真诚喜欢这个职位的话,请随时拨打我的电话,我等你的好消息。”说完,递过来一张名片。

睡前总结:那一刻,我几乎要高兴得喊出来。为了工作,我已经整整奔波了10 天了。今天终于尝到了被录用的甜头。嘿嘿。

[一个英语系毕业生的求职经历日记

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篇4:初三英语作文:SeriousFloods

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The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And it s important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.

Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children can t go to school as usual .

Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too.

In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.

Though we can t help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.

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篇5:英语日记带翻译

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Today we visited Red Star Farm.

Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together.

About two hours later, we arrived. On arriving there, we were given a warm

welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm.

We were very glad to see the crops and vegetables growing so well. At noon, we

had a picnic happily.

After the picnic, we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine. We listened to

music, dancing and singing. Some were talking happily and even two of our

classmates played chess. How time flies! It was time for us to leave though we

didnt want to. It was really an unforgettable visit for us.

今天我们参观了红星农场。

一大早,我们就在校门口,走到一起了。大约两个小时后,我们到达。一到那里,我们是由农场工人的热烈欢迎。然后其中一名工人向我们展示了农场周围。我们很高兴地看到庄稼和蔬菜长势那么好。中午的时候,我们有一个愉快的野餐。

野餐后,我们喜欢自己在阳光下。我们听音乐,跳舞和唱歌。有些人愉快地交谈,并有两位还下起了象棋。时间过得真快!现在是时候让我们离开,虽然我们不希望。这真是一个令人难忘的参观啊。

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篇6:初1英语日记

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Today, I came to the breakfast. See the lads with chopsticks busy busy. So I took a seat, a young man walked to nete over and ask me to eat something, so I had a bowl of beef noodles peppers. Soon, a noodles. I take chopsticks, soon finished eating. On the way to school, I also think that bowl noodles

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篇7:初中英语日记

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January 21

It was cooler than yesterday. One of my father’s friends invited me to eat red bayberries. You must know it is unusual. Because we will climb the hill to eat red bayberries. There is no chance to eat red bayberries in the hill for the people who don’t live in Beijing. On the hill, you can breathe the fresh air, you can listen birds singing and you can eat red bayberries. It was enjoyable. It is said there are wild pigs in the hill. What a beautiful natural.

January 22

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

January 23

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me. Finally, I was ill.

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篇8:寒假英语日记例文

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It was the first day of our winter vacation. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter vacations, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

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篇9:英语日记带翻译

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Environment protection

Today,I went to the park with my mother,when we walking along the lake,I

saw a couple was siting on the bench at the edge of lake, eating snacks and

casting the packaging into the lake.I was so anger to see that!I think their

behavir is very shameful.The park is a place for all citicens to enjoy beautiful

scenery ,not a place for them to cast rubbish casually.All of us should take

actions to protect our environment,only in this way can we have a clean and

beautiful world.

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保护环境

今天,我和我妈妈逛公园,当我们沿湖边散步的时候,我看到一对夫妻正坐在湖边的长椅上,一边吃零食,一边把零食包装往湖里扔。看到这种情况我非常生气。我认为他们的行为非常可耻。公园是一个提供公民欣赏美丽风景的地方,而不是一个他们可以随意扔垃圾的地方。我们每个人都应该采取行动去保护我们共同的环境,只有这样我们才能拥有一个干净美丽的世界。

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篇10:平安夜的英语日记100词

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Mom said today is Christmas Eve, no homework, great! I went out to dinner

with my parents and saw that the Catholic church was very crowded. Mom and dad

asked me what gift I want, I said no, Santa Claus will give me a gift, I as long

as a safe and happy family together.

After dinner we went home and the family started decorating the Christmas

tree and made a Santa out of silly putty. This Christmas Eve had a good

time!

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篇11:我的决心初三英语作文

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For the young people, it is very important to have ambition, they need the motivation to move on. But most of them are just talking about the ambition and never take the action. The action is as important as the ambition. On the one hand, ambition sets up the goal for a person to fight. Without ambition, no one can be successful, ambition is just like the light in the dark, it leads people to see the bright future.

On the other hand, action helps people to realize their dreams. Sometimes, action even is more important than the ambition. Everyone has the ambition, but the action makes them different. The one who just keeps thinking and not to take action will never be successful. As the saying that no pain, no gain, it reminds people to take action. So we need to have both ambition and action.

对于年轻人来说,有雄心壮志是很重要的,他们需要动力来前进。但是他们大部分人只是嘴上说说,从来不行动。行动和决心一样重要。一方面,决心为人定下目标去奋斗。没有决心,没有人能够成功,决心就如黑暗中的灯光,引导着人们来看光明的未来。

另一方面,行动帮助人们实现他们的梦想。有时候,行动比决心更加重要。每个人都有决心,但是行动才会有所作为。谁只是想想而不采取行动的话,是不会成功的。正如有句话说没有付出,就没有收获,这告诉人们要采取行动。因此我们既需要决心,也需要行动。

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篇12:平安夜的英语日记100词

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Tomorrow is Christmas day, today is Christmas Eve.

We began to dress up the Christmas tree at night, have a lot of gift

packages, and a snowman, and bells and so on, it’s beautiful. We had a Christmas

party at home. A party with my host, and performances. My sister and me a lot of

toys are blouses sit, waiting for the host performance report shows. Sister and

I together singing, dancing, poems and mother singing performance, dad would

listen, we’re having a good time.

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篇13:小学英语日记

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我一天的学习生活 My School Day

I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.

After a quick breakfast, I go to school in my mothers car. It takes us more

than half an hour to get there.

我早晨六点起床,然后我洗脸、刷牙。匆匆吃完早饭,我坐妈妈的车上学。我们要用半个多小时才能到达学校。

We have four hour classes in the morning. I have lunch at my grandparents,

because their home is nearer to my school.

我们上午上四节课。我在爷爷奶奶家吃午饭,因为他们家离学校更近些。

After two classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our

classroom.

下午上两节课后就放学了,然后我们打扫教室。

I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I

do my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can watch TV for half an hour.

I go to bed at half past nine or ten.

我大约五点半到家。我们七点吃晚饭。晚饭后我做作业。如果我完成作业早一些,我可以看半小时电视。我九点半或十点睡觉。

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篇14:小学生英语日记格式

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我们写日记的时候要注意格式,下面是关于小学英语日记格式,希望对您有帮助~

1. 日记写作格式

英语日记的格式与中文日记大体一样。英语日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文。

英语日记的第一行,要写明年、月、日与星期,然后要写明当天的气候状况,日期通常顶格写,后面是星期,天气状况写在右上角。如果是游记,还要写明地点。

Sunny, clear 晴 shower 阵雨

Cloudy 多云 heavy rain 大雨

Light rain 小雨 drizzle 毛毛雨

Overcast 阴 cold 冷天

2. 英语日记的写作文体

英语日记正文可以是叙事、描述、说明、议论等各种形式。其实,由于日记是非常随便的,因此上述文体常常结合在一起使用。英语日记内容取自生活,可长可短,有时无事可记,一两句也可以。写日记贵在坚持,不可断断续续地几天写一篇,那样起不到学习英语的效果。另外,英语日记也应该尽可能讲究一些文采,切忌写成流水账。初学者只要能写出完整并符合语法要求的句子就很难得,所以文采要求是次要的。而对于高中及其以上程度的英语学习者来说,就要求不单要语法正确,而且对句法、选词、谋篇布局等都有较高的要求。

3. 时态

写日记的时间一般是在下午或晚上,有时也有在第二天补记。所记叙的事情通常发生在过去,所以常用一般过去时。但如果要记叙天气、描写景色、展望未来、议论某事或对话引语等,可以使用一般现在时或一般将来时,以生动再现当时的情景。

4. 养成积累词语的习惯

日记是对生活中方方面面的事情的描述和感想的表达,所以写日记要用到单词面很广,这就要求英语学习者在平时要养成积累单词的好习惯,而把记忆的单词运用到日记中更是起到温故作用。值得注意的是,在写日记时,我们都会遇到很多不会写的单词。这时千万不要就此止步,而要先空出来,或者用拼音代替,等一篇日记写完了再查词典不上所缺的单词,并且重点记忆这些单词。这是通过这样的方式,我们才能更快地积累单词和提高英语水平。

5. 英语日记中的缩写与省略

英语写作中经常会有缩略语,比如:Nov. / November. Apr. / April

eg / For example 等各种形式的缩略语。

建议初学者不要用这些缩略语,因为初学者对单词的熟悉程度还不是很高,要不断的应用学过的单词才能记得牢,记得准。

最后需要一提的是,英语日记习惯一年一本,因此日期不必写年份,而只是在每年一本的日记本封面上或者在日记的第一页和最后一页加以注明即可。

6.范文:

May 30, xxxx Friday Sunny

In our class, every student has a big kettle (水壶). But sometimes there is no water in some kettles. My friend Mike and I often fill1 them with water.

Every day at lunchtime, we take lots of kettles downstairs. We run from the sixth floor to the first floor. The kettles are heavy. But we are happy. It’s fun to help others. At the same time, we get closer with our classmates by helping each other.

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篇15:英语日记

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Monday, August 2nd, Sunny

It was sunny and hot today。 I got up early at half past six。 I read English and then had breakfast。 I helped my mother washed the dishes。 Then I did my homework and cleaned my room。 I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon。 Then I played table tennis with my friends。 In the evening I watched TV and read a book。 I really had a busy and interesting day。

今天天气晴朗,热。 我在6:30很早就起了床。我读英语然后吃早饭。我帮助母亲洗碗。然后做作业打扫房间。下午我和母亲去买东西。然后和朋友们打乒乓球。晚上我看电视、看书。我今天的确很忙、过得很有趣。

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篇16:英语日记

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Hello,everyone,Myname is Tom.I have a new english teacher.his name is Miss

LI . She comes from BeiJing,She is thin and tall.She has long black hair and she

is young and beautiful looks strict but kind.She often goes to work by bike. And

sometimes she likes piaying Table tennis,listening to music,diving and

dancing.Usualli she likes reading book.I like my English teacher very much.What

about you?

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篇17:六年级英语日记格式

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英文日记和汉语日记一样,是用来记叙一天中所发生的有意义的事情或对将来的打算等。下面小编为大家带来了六年级英语日记格式,希望对大家有所帮助。

记事型是用英语记述当天自己生活学习中发生的事情。

议论型是对生活中的某一事情或情况现象谈自己的看法,发表议论。

描写型或抒情型,则是对某人物事物的特征做细致的描述,或针对某事物抒发自己的感情。

1、格式:

一般是在左上角记上当天日期,星期,时间的排列法与书信一致,星期写在日期之后;右上角写上当天的天气情况,表示天气情况的词一般是形容词,如:fine (晴朗的),cold (寒冷的),snowy(下雪),sunny(阳光充足的),rainy(下雨的),cloudy(阴天的)等。日记的小标题写在下一行,也可省略不写。

2、时态:

写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上,有时也可以在第二天补写。因此,日记中所记述的事情通常是发生在过去,所以常用一般过去时;但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时,可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。写法大致和写汉语日记相同,都是在正文之前有日期、星期几及当天的天气情况。注意内容表达要清楚连贯、准确。

下面是一篇关于英语日记范文。

January 24, 20xx Friday Sunny

I am free now as I am spending my winter holiday.

Although we have some homework, we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later, we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and got new life. We haven’t enough time to play, to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go, we will get the real life which belongs to us.

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篇18:英语日记格式

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I went to the home for the aged with my friends on July 30th. As soon as

the eldly people saw us, they were all happy. 1.We sang songs and danced for

them. Then we helped the worker clean the rooms and washes the clothes. They

praized us a lot and said that we were good boys. Although we felt tired, we had

a good time.

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篇19:写雨的初三日记

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你听滴答滴,滴答滴,是在下,是一首大自然的乐曲,朴实而又无华,简单而大方。

--题记

淋着秋雨,去观赏桂林的山水,秋雨绵绵不断,它缓慢而又柔软,同时,与大自然鬼斧神工的桂林山水相融合,犹如仙境。被雨淋湿的眼眸,看着船前方的河,随着秋雨的增多,河水也在不断的上涨,浪一朵接一朵的拍打着水面,天也逐渐沉下了“脸”,同时还不停的发出响声,露出极快的光芒,好像与这山水有什么仇?一道道劈了下去,好像一位暴躁的老人,而河水也像一只凶猛的野兽,随时想把我们吞没掉,而这绵绵的秋雨更像是一位小女孩,懵懂而又无知,时间一点一点的推移。

乌云也随着风飘散,秋雨更加柔软了,正如诗人李商隐的“君问归期未有期,巴山夜雨涨秋池”的缠绵之情,桂林山水淋着秋雨,也更加生动而又形象了,好似一幅水墨画,就与好似一位婀娜多姿的少女,给整个秋天带来柔情,又给桂林山水带来了“灵气”,使桂林山水不能局限于口头所表达的美。正是秋雨的缠绵,所以大多数游客都喜欢来桂林观雨,秋雨看似是自然现象,它其实是大自然对我们的馈赠,嘀嗒嘀嗒的像一首自然音乐,曲子柔和而又温顺,不像春雨的翩翩然,夏雨的急促而有力。她带着一种缠绵之情,像孩子对母亲有着缠绵之情。

秋雨,是秋的使者,它不急不躁的冲刷了丰收过后的田地,冲刷了我们所带的烦恼,它柔和而又慈祥的宽慰着我们。秋雨似“雨”而非“雨”,它是大自然馈赠给我们的乐曲,使大自然宽慰我们的使者,秋雨,更是我心中说不出的情。

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篇20:初三英语作文-whetherteenshouldmaketheir

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whether teen should make their own decision

Whether teen should make their own decisions?I think we can talk about this question from two ways. On the one hand ,Although teen are young ,they have to make many important choices by themselves .such like making fiends ,wearing what kinds of clothes…… ,Teen should learn to plan things for themselves ,they need some skills to make a living in the future.many parents care about their children too much. This gives their children a lot of pressure .that is not good for teen. One the other hand ,although teen can make their decisions by them selves,but as for some serous things ,teen should also accept advice from their parents .because parents have more experience and they can tell you what is right and wrong.

点评:文章观点明确,能通过一分为二的辩证的观点看问题,非常好。思路清晰,句子前后连贯,过渡自然,句子结构正确,能够使用一些重要的短语和句型,简单句和复合句的并用增强了文章的色彩,提高了文章的档次。文章写得非常成功!继续努力哦!

美中不足: 只要注意一下个别单词的使用和字母的大小写就可以了。

[初三英语作文-whether teen should make their

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