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二十年后的我英文作文(合集20篇)

简爱讲述一位从小变成孤儿的英国女子在各种磨难中不断追求自由与尊严,坚持自我,最终获得幸福的故事。下面是有关简爱的英文读后感范文,希望对你有帮助。

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我的假期生活英文作文

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20XX this summer vacation in the past month,this month i and my parents went to Vancouver to visit my friends.

We lodged at a friendss house.

Arrived in Vancouver on the first day,is already in the afternoon, so good friends mother decided to let our two people together to do a dinner .His mother cook the pizza. Hanburger, my mother and i do . In addition, the father is responsible for to buy drinks.

My brother and sister are in charge of eating.

After dinner, i and my friends and his younger brother ang sister to the courtyard behind the big swimming pool, especially fun.

Well, Im waiting for my second days diary.

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篇1:高一英文作文:anunforgettableday!

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Person’s life is made up of countless days, while some days may be boring, some are precious and unforgettable memories.

July 15,XX, the day I’ll never forget. It was a sunny day, but I was anxious, nervous and meanwhile, a little excited, for I was waiting for the arrival of my university admission notice. It was not until 3 pm that I finally waited the arrival of a green mail car full of hope. Only when I got the admission notice, did I believe that I was really admitted to my dream university—…university. It not only meant my past efforts and persistence not in vain, but also meant that I would say goodbye to the dull high school life, and step into the colorful university life. I was so happy and immediately called my parents to tell them the good news, and then teachers and classmates.

What an unforgettable day!

[高一英文作文:an unforgettable day!

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篇2:二十年后的我英文

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I want to be a doctor twenty years later, to help people.Even when not a doctor, I want to be an astronaut to space exploration. If you can be a doctor to do a good doctorfamous. There are a lot of good doctor, for example, can help oneself. There are advantages to do an astronaut, for example, can have a look at the space is how, can help mankind to prove that the world there are aliens. But dothese two jobs are not easy, also very dangerous, such asthe doctor may have infectious diseases, do astronautsrocket launching and landing could explode. It is not easy to do so this two job.

我想二十年以后当一名医生,帮助人们。即使当不了医生,我也想当一名宇航员去太空探险。如果能当一名医生就要做一位有名的好医生。做医生有很多好处,比如能帮自己治病。做一名宇航员也有好处,比如能看一看太空是怎样的,能帮助人类证明世界上有没有外星人。但是要做这两份工作是不容易的,还很危险的,比如做医生有可能感染传染病,做宇航员火箭发射和降落时有可能会爆炸。所以做这两份工作都是不容易的。

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篇3:初中英文

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When asked about work preference, different people will give different

answers. Some people like working with people. However, others prefer jobs which

mainly involve objects or machines.

Those people who have the first preference believe working with people

usually makes one feel interesting and efficient. In addition, they maintain

people can be inspired to bring forward new ideas by communicating or consulting

with those around them. However, still others have different preferences. In

their opinions, working with objects or machines can make one enjoy more peace

and quiet. Besides, they argue, under such peaceful conditions, one can do more

practical work, improve his skill and make technical renovations.

Weighing up these two kinds of work, I prefer working with people. For one

thing, I like to cooperate with others and work in a team. For another, although

there are competition and rivalry, we can learn something from other people.

Considering these, I think, working with people is beneficial to our career

development.

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篇4:最好的朋友英文Mybestfriend

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Who is your best friend? I dont have one. You dont have a best friend? Do you have a very good friend? Yeah. What qualities does he have? Hes funny, hes nice, and hes just a good friend. Hes always there if I need him. Er, probably have to say all things considered my girlfriend. She puts up with me! My best friend is Raz. I went to school with him since when I was eleven. And we went to the same university together and we lived in the same houses together. Whenever bad things happen we laugh about it and help each other out.

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篇5:万圣节着装英文作文

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Halloween is known to be trick-or-treating. But do you know what kind of clothes children wear when they go to beg for sugar? If you think youre wearing your clothes to ask for sugar, youre mistaken.

Halloween costumes originated from pranks, and adults took their children out of the house (usually the adults were driving on the side of the road, and the child said, "trick or treat." The adults ask the child to only go to the door at the door to have the festive decorations and lights of the family, otherwise dont disturb. In addition, you must always stand at the gate and wait in front of the gate. You must not enter the house, but you must also give it to an adult to check the sugar. The people who receive the children also ask not to make their own food, or to the unpacked food.

Halloween costumes, millions of phases, not just the drab big ghost. Make the simplest ghost suit with a white sheet top on the head, pick two holes to leave the eyes; To play the magician, put on black pants and a black hat, and hide a fluffy rabbit between the top of the hat and the top of the head. The child put on white pants, and then tied a flashlight behind his back to dress up as a little angel; There are parents who dress up their children as their favorite cartoon characters.

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篇6:我们的习惯OurHobbies为题的英文作文

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我们的习惯(Our Hobbies)

My friends have got many hobbies. Collecting dolls is her hobby. She has got lots of beautiful dolls. One is from Australia and two are from France. This is from America and these are from China. She can make lots of clothes for her dolls. Reading is Sam’s hobby. He’s got lots of books from China. There is a picture book from Japan. Riding bikes is Amy’s hobby. She has a new bike. And she has got lots of pictures of bikes. They are very beautiful. Flying kites is Jim’s hobby. He’s got lots of kites. He makes a dragon kite for his cousin. Yesterday, he flew kites in the park. We like our hobbies very much.

[我们的习惯(Our Hobbies)为题的英文作文

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篇7:元旦节英文作文

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Our class is going to have a new years day. Eight in the morning, we came to the classroom, the classroom windows with snow sprays various beautiful patterns in the classroom, hung ribbons and riotous with colour balloons, written on the blackboard are enjoying the new years day “ ” four characters. I entered the classroom as if I had entered a happy paradise. I put things down and sat in my seat when the party started.

The teacher gave the oranges, peanuts and melon seeds to everyone, and then the students performed the show. Some students tell stories, some singing, some dancing, some magic, and the riddle. The most ridiculous show is the magic of Wang Zhexin, the magic of which is to mess up the poker and take the first poker, and say what this poker is called. Wang Zhexin had said yes for the first three times, but for the fourth time, he turned the spade 7 into plum blossom 7 and fifth times. He also made Meihua ten a spade ten. I think he did not divide the spades and clubs. Wang Zhexin a blushing to step down, then the class teacher Li also even set the whole room roaring with laughter, happy smile. Time flies, in an instant, the party came to an end, in the last time, Miss Li to “ three good student ” the certificates and prizes, the teacher read aloud a three good student name, third read to me, I am happy to receive certificates and prizes, and then give you a gong ju.

Go back to your seat. The party ended in the laughter and laughter, and I walked on the road home with joy. Today, I had a great time.

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篇8:关于寒假趣事英文作文

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My Winter Holiday Plans Well,winter holiday is coming. So what I am going go do? I am going go read English books,surf the Internet,play badmingoon every day.And first I am going go finish my homework.In addition,I am going go leave Shangou for Xiamen with my family and we are going go stay there for ten days.And after we are getting there, we are going go eat delicious food,climb the mountains in the Jin Bang Park.That must be a lot more fun and we will very excited.How about you?What are you going go do when the Winter Holiday is coming?

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篇9:初中英文

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Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I

always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will

try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights

when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And

even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I

suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend

much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment,

I believe the earth will be a better place.

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篇10:父亲节英文日记

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Father, how great words; The father love, how beautiful melody. Dear dad,

when busy, can you find such a festival of fathers day?

Today, is my dads first holiday, I carefully prepared a card, then tape

posted a petal in the upper left corner. It with the aromatic, with my feelings,

as the wind blows gently, the beautiful kind hearts float into dad.

The father loves the warmth in June and Thanksgiving. When I was in

elaborate greeting card, write the handwriting which asm, I hand in trembling,

my heart in the jump, the sincere words from time to time pull at my heart!

In fact, fathers love is gentle, father use it rough hands stroked my head;

Dad with his warm words of comfort me; When he humorous language make me

laugh... At that time, I really realized the father loves the also gentle.

Dad is the pillar of the family, when his broad shoulders to assume the

burden of the family; When I found a piece of white silk on his head; When I

find the wrinkles on his face. My heart is with sour.

Generation of letters, mostly because their children mother selfless and

moved, so for the selfless love left countless love. And for the whole family

outside the hustle and bustle of the father? Nothing left.

Here, I want to sing loudly fathers love is great!

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篇11:旅游的经历英文作文

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There has been a long time since I came back from Hainan―wowhainan is such a wonderful place that I will never forget it .It‘s really a good place where gave me a rather good impression. I feel so wonderful during the journey as I have experienced a lot of things for the first time.

In January 7th ---the first day of my journey the fluttering snowflakes diffused over Changzhou. I first took the train to shanghai then took the plane to Hainan in Pudong airport. Although it’s my second time to take plane I felt even more excited than the first time. When flying I found that I was flying over the cloud of different types and colors. The sky is also brighter and clearer than that I had ever seen. Soon we arrived in Meilan airport in Haikou the climate is totally different from that in Changzhou It was warm there and we could see coconut trees everywhere.

After 3 days competition I went to BoAo where is famous for its forum. It was my first time to experience the sea and the beach in the sunshine. When sitting on the cruise I could clearly see the ocean waves pushing the windows of the cruise. It seemed that I was surrounded by the waves and the crystal water. I felt as if a fish which had been living in the sea happily. Then we land on the beach. The sand on the beach was so soft that it was cosy to lie on the beach. I tried searching for the shells on the beach but failed. The beach was totally different from what I heard before as there was nothing except footsteps on the beach. In the afternoon I played football on beach and scored a goal with my new friends from all around China. It was really interesting and challenging.

The next day I went to Haikou. I first visited the tomb of Hairui an officer in Qing dynasty who was famous for rectitude. I think he should be the role model of every person. In the afternoon I went to the geological park of volcano. A lot of stones of different shapes came into views. When arriving the top of the park it seemed that the while city was under my view. Also I had seen plenty of interesting and rare types of the plants. I also got into a small hole in the park it is said that the hold was exactly the original hole where maqma came from. But the volcano had stopped from erupting for thousands of years.

I can’t forget this trip not only does it give me a lot of joy knowledge and good memory but also it give me a chance to make friends with people from different fart in China. By enjoying the excellent scenery I think I have fallen in love with this beautiful city. I will cherish this experience.

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篇12:关于春节的英文谚语

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导语:谚语是广泛流传于民间的言简意赅的短语,多数反映了劳动人民的生活实践经验,而且一般都是经过口头传下来的。它多是口语形式的通俗易懂的短句或韵语。以下是小编整理关于春节英文谚语的资料,欢迎阅读参考。

1, spring to three minutes warm.

2. Spring has been frosted, when spring will rot.

3, the spring equinox has rain patient sparse.

4. Spring rush.

5It is easy to plow the fields in spring.

6After the beginning of spring, tidal currents increased.

7If it rains, it will rain until the morning. It is not rain, especially thunder.

8The vernal equinox day is twelve hours each day.

9. The rainy day of spring, wet and wet to clear.

10, the rain spring cattle head, seventy-seven forty-nine days of sorrow.

11A years plan is in spring.

12. Spring exposure, summer fog to make big water.

13. Spring thunder, ten piglets nine empty.

14Spring east wind, rain ancestors, summer east wind, an empty: spring if blowing east wind, it will be spring rain; If the wind blows in the summer, there will be a shortage of rain, which will bring harm to the growth of crops.

15. Spring sunshine, rain all.

16, the twelfth lunar month spring water early, the first month of spring water late.

17, the spring sunshine, the rain all.

18. Early spring evening.

19. Mother noodles after spring.

20In spring, when the temperature is low, it will be rainy. In winter, there will be less rain.

21One day in the spring, the ploughing is easy.

22, February 2nd thunder, rice heavier hammer.

23. After the spring, all vientiane spring, paddy fields, ponds and other water began to evaporate, express the world spring has come.

24, in the year of double spring rain water, the year of spring good farming.

25The spring equinox peony, to the old do not blossom: peony flowers in summer, the spring equinox is too slow.

26Spring cold rain if spring, winter and cold rain scattered.

27Fat is not the spring rain, but the autumn frost.

28In the spring, there is a lot of land, and in the fall there is a great stone valley.

29Ray hit the Spring Festival, the sting of the rain.

30The spring equinox peony, to the old do not blossom.

31In spring, the weather is sunny and the Pepsi crop is good.

32People get up early in spring, and the people in the autumn are full.

33Three days of spring is fine.

34, the spring equinox has rain patients thin: vernal equinox day if it rains, fewer patients.

35Spring is the first year of the year.

36The fog will clear up in the spring, and the fog will flood in the summer.

37, water in spring, farmers worry.

38It is like the mud of a sting.

39Time and tide wait for no man.

40The spring day, as in December, is called early spring. If the sowing is not too early, it is too late to do it by season.

41No one is old enough to have a spring in one day.

42Before the spring equinox, there is a good harvest of beans: this is the agricultural phenomenon in northern Taiwan, and the south is relatively early.

43Spring rain is as expensive as oil.

44Spring has frost, when spring will rot.

45After spring, the climate is very changeable.

46The lunar New Year spring.

47The rain is poured on a lamp, and the sun is shining.

48. The six animals are uneasy.

49The spring equinox before the good cloth field, after the spring equinox good beans.

50, spring rain to qingming.

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篇13:春节晚会英文作文

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On the thirty night, we ate the dinner on New Years Eve, I cant wait to turn on the TV to see the Spring Festival evening party, and finally to eight points, the Spring Festival evening party started, there are a lot of wonderful programs inside! Have a beautiful dance, melodious songs, funny comedy and humor of crosstalk.

I love the performance of Louis Liu... Magic, magic! Because one of the magic tricks he performed was that he passed a coin straight through a piece of solid glass, and his hands were worn out of the glass.

Its amazing! I was so stunned that I could hardly believe my eyes. Unwittingly, the party was over. The wonderful show made us have an unforgettable New Years Eve.

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篇14:我的朋友英文作文

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I met a sister older than me in the cram school. She had a round face, a pair of Crystal Grape eyes. With long hair, my sister put on black clothes, especially beautiful.

On one occasion, when my sister came to school, she saw me playing in the middle of the road, and quickly said, "&ldquo, come here, come here, there is danger.". &rdquo, my sister immediately took hold of my hand. I said, "&ldquo, sister, thank you.". ”

My sister and I went to school together hand in hand

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篇15:我的房间英文作文

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I have a lovely bedroom. It is small but clean and beautiful. The wall is light green and the floor is white. There is a bed in my bedroom, it is really comfortable. I sleep with it every night. And there is a small sofa near my bed, I always read books on it. There is also a desk in my room, I do my homework on it every evening. Near the desk, there is a shelf. There are many books on the shelf. You can borrow books from me if you like reading.

My bedroom is so good that I like it very much.

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篇16:中国旅游高考英文满分作文

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【范文】

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban resits travel regularly, and 28% rural resits also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tency, we can&’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people&’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What&’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

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中国旅游

最近几年,在中国的趋势,旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为,约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行,28%的农村居民,也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示,更多的人在旅游有兴趣,并会在将来加入军队。

面对这一趋势,我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方,随着改革开放政策,对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高,因此,他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是,它相信,人们现在更积极的态度,旅游业,把它作为一种生活方式。此外,旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如,交通运输发展迅速,许多景点都已经上市。

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篇17:关于春节英文作文

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The annual Spring Festival is coming again.

Spring Festival, the lunar new year, commonly known as the Chinese new year, usually refers to the new years Eve and the first of the first month. But in private, the Spring Festival is a traditional sense from the beginning of the eight month of the la la festival or the twelfth lunar month twenty-three or twenty-four people, until the fifteen, with new years Eve and is at the beginning of the month for a climax. The Spring Festival has a long history, originated in the Shang period of the first activities of the ritual worship. During the Spring Festival, the Han and many ethnic groups in China have to hold various activities to celebrate. These activities are to worship deities, worshiping ancestors, Fu Ying Hei then, pray for a good harvest as the main content. The activities are rich and colorful, with a strong national characteristics.

The Spring Festival festival, commonly known as “ ” the Chinese nation is the most ceremonious traditional festival. From the beginning the first year of emperor, in summer (lunar calendar) is at the beginning of the month for a &ldquo at the beginning of the year; (“ ” ”), the date of the festival this year, so far, fixed, called &ldquos ”. In 1911, after the revolution of 1911, the Gregorian calendar began to be counted. It was called the Gregorian calendar January 1st. It was “ new years day ” it was called the 1th day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar &ldquo, and the Spring Festival &rdquo. At the age of festivals, it is also known as "&ldquo"; traditional festivals ” they have a long history and spread widely, and have great popularity, mass and even national characteristics. The festival is the day, although the festival in the 1th day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar, but new years activities are more than a month at the beginning of the day Yu Zheng. From the twelfth lunar month twenty-three (or twenty-four) of small festivals, people began to busy year “ ” houses, shampoo and bath, preparing for the festival appliances and so on, all of these activities, there is a common theme, namely “ new ”. People greet the new year and greet the spring with great rites and enthusiasm.

Chinese lunar new year known as the spring festival. It is the most solemn traditional festival of the Chinese people, and it is also a symbol of unity, prosperity and new hopes for the future. It is recorded that the Chinese people have had a history of more than 4000 years in the Spring Festival. There are many theories about the origin of the Spring Festival, but the public generally accepted the argument is that the rise of Chinese New Year by. On one day of 2000 BC, Shun, the son of heaven, led the subordinates and worshiped the heaven and earth. Since then, people put on this day as the beginning of the year. It is said that this is the origin of the lunar new year, and then it is called the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is also called the new years day. The month of the Spring Festival is called the lunar month.

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篇18:写给蔡英文的一封信500字

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新任的台湾地区领导人蔡英文

您好!

话说您在选举时,便声称“要独立”,台湾人民大部分反映的都很响!果不其然,在马英九退位后,您直接同日本、美国交好,决心脱离大陆。

但“台独”对您和台湾有什么好处呢?

在您胜任之前,台湾人民与大陆交往甚好,不少大陆人飞往台湾欣赏美景,也有不少台湾人在大陆落地生根安居乐业,您为何要打破这种平静美好呢?

当然,您会觉得您不是大陆人,而是台湾人,但是你不能连累整个台湾岛。

您难道没有发现美国、日本虽然和你有来往,但他们却没有和您走的太近吗?在他们眼中,您和台湾就一棋子,台湾根本不是大陆的对手。

没错,台湾是后来才回归大陆的,你们虽然一直不认为自己是中国人,要独立,但大陆却一直把你们当做自己人呐。

你再想想,台湾如果真的独立了,中国身为“世界第二大经济体”,你们的日子会好过吗?

但如果您和台湾回归大陆,大陆必定以礼相待。虽然在短时间内台湾民众会产生怨念,说你“骗了他们”,但日子长了,他们就会感受到这样做带来的好处。

两岸的关系更进一步,是台湾和大陆都希望看到的。

大陆和台湾就像兄弟一样,之间不应该有缝隙。

大陆和台湾就像母子一样,大陆张开双臂,如台湾想回到母亲的怀抱,大陆会立刻送上火热的胸怀,迎接台湾这个浪子迷途知返,扑入母亲怀中。

回来吧,台湾,蔡英文,你想想。

此致

敬礼!

大陆的一名小学生:葛蕗萌

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篇19:诚信简单英文作文

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it is true that most of us value honesty highly. however, nowadays we often confront  confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on. i think that we  should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others  and the whole society. the reasons can be listed as follows.firstly, only honest people can  be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.

secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the chinese people, can make our life  easier and more harmonious. thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable. a case in  point is that singapore, a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity, has a  comparatively low criminal rate.

responsbility can be understood in many ways. for the parents , they have had the  responsibility for caring for and fostering their children since the birth of their baby.for  teachers,both in kindergartens and colleges,they also should be responsible for the study and  life of their students,that is to say,teahers are the second parents of children somewhile.

for us,as a friend of others,it is our responsibility to help our friends when they are in  trouble or faced with difficulties. each one has the different responsibily based on their  roles but we must take it for granted that we are responsible for the society.

[诚信简单英文作文

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篇20:怎样写出正确的英文好句

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每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一:整体性

句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二:连贯性

句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三:准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四:重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五:语法正确,句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。

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