我的英语老师作文15篇 作文怎么写【20篇】

December 27th, 2009

Dear Mr Pan:

It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.

Its my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didnt mean you are old, youre young at heart.) Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. Youve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.

Ive got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, Id like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

Happy new year.

With every good wish.

Yours sincerely Dali Wang

[给英语老师的一封信,英文作文

敬爱的殷老师：

您好!

您在我人生道路上，是至关重要的一员，如果没有您，那我可能已经对英语绝望了，不是你的出现，我也不会充满了希望。如果我没有遇见你，我一定已经没了信心。

您还记得吗?有次我在课堂上被点名读课文，而那篇课文我还没学过，所以我没有勇气读。可突然有个人对我说：“别怕，没有事，不会的单词问我。”我抬头一看原来是老师，我又充满了斗志，充满了信心。我终于把课文读完了。

您还记得吗?有一次虽然我们没考好，但您依旧带我们去外面放松放松心情，我们知道您这是想我们下回考好。我们一定不会辜负您的，我们一定加油，一定会拼尽全力。有一次，我在办公室门口看到有的老师上QQ，有的看电视，有的打游戏，有的玩电脑，而您却在桌子前改作业。别的班的老师都让组长改，而您都是自己改。

您还记得吗?有一次我们不听话，你罚我们到外头罚站。而我们也心甘情愿，因为您这是为了我们好!

老师，我们永远不会忘了您的。

祝您

工作顺利。

写信人：

日期：

On the face has a pair of black eyes, the size of grapes high bridge of the nose, mouth, chin, round, with long hair. This is more than the head teacher of our class, the teacher, she is cheerful and lively, is concerned about and strict to us, our classmates all like her, not letter, I will tell you what.

More than a teacher to us is very concerned about. Last semester, I havent chosen the class cadre campaign, was sad, more than a teacher to comfort me say: "dont be sad, it doesnt matter, this was not chosen, try again next time, not to go up for?" I listened to the teachers words, immediately, not uncomfortable, the in the mind secretly swear: next time I must be on the campaign. Unexpectedly, this time I really get it, Im so happy! Another time, I accidentally fell down the stairs, hands and legs hurt, more than the teacher knew, right away, hold me, send me to the infirmary. More than I should have a good thank you teacher!

The teacher is very strict with us. Especially sketching characters which on the one hand, more than our teacher is earnest, carefully, and wrong must be showed more than a teacher to write the new words, the good, to be copied again! The word "grave" I often write wrong, thanks to the teacher give me point out, also let me rewrite, and after the dictation "grave", I wont write wrong! Under more than the teachers strict requirements, I slowly get rid of carelessness. I really want to thank you more than a teacher!

This is more than the head teacher of our class, the teacher, she like a mother caring, nurturing the us grow.

脸上有一双黑葡萄大小的眼睛，鼻梁高高的，嘴巴大大的，下巴圆圆的，梳着很长的头发。这就是我们班的班主任——余老师，她开朗活泼，对我们既关心又严格，我们班的同学都很喜欢她，不信，我就给你们说说。

余老师对我们很关心。上学期，我竞选班干部没选上，很伤心，余老师就安慰我说：“别难过了，没关系，这次没选上，下次再努力，争取竞选上不就行了吗?”我听了余老师的话，立刻就不难受了，心里暗暗发誓：下次我一定要竞选上。没想到，这次我真的如愿以偿，我真开心!还有一次，我一不小心就从楼梯上摔了下来，手和腿都蹭伤了，余老师知道了，马上赶来，扶着我，把我送进了医务室。我真应该好好谢谢余老师!

余老师对我们很严格。特别是写生字这一方面，余老师改的格外认真、仔细，而且错了的必须要给余老师看了才可以写新的生字，打了良的，还要重抄一遍呢!“肃”这个字我经常写错，多亏了余老师给我指出来，还让我重写，以后听写“肃”的时候，我再也不会写错了!在余老师的严格要求下，我慢慢改掉了粗心的毛病。我真要谢谢余老师!

这就是我们班的班主任——余老师，她像妈妈一样关心、哺育着我们成长。

My teacher is surnamed Chen, she very much attractively. She has on the face which that becomes emaciated always to hang the smiling face, the bright and intelligent big eye shines, nose fine tall and graceful, a cherry small mouth. Mr./Mrs. Chen hair long, is very mild-mannered. is what kind, likes me teacher?

说起咱们英语老师呀，那可是天下第一狠人。不仅教书狠，其它的也都一样狠。讲课、批改、检测、考评，在这平淡的生活中，还真上演了一部扣人心弦的英语老师“演义”呢！

第一回：名字风波

想当年，初中第N次英语课上，我们的英语老师——朱老师，闹了一个笑话。想听的话，且听我慢慢道来。

老师正在台上讲课，同学们都在专心致志地听。突然，老师用手一指说：“那个谁，你站起来，怎么能上课睡觉？还有那个谁，你下课后帮我把那个谁叫到办公室去。”搞到最后，连朱老师自己也弄不清了，小声嘀咕说：“到底是谁？”

声音虽小，但还是被同学们听见了。同学们一个个都笑得前仰后合。当时，我很想问一下：朱老师，您是不是得了间歇性失忆呀？

第二回：麻辣老师

经过半个学期，我发现朱老师总是一副满血状态，时刻燃烧着自己的小宇宙。她不仅能够激发学生的斗志，而且能够一针见血地指出学生存在的不足。可不是吗？听！朱老师又在“大开杀戒”了。

“24、25、26……31！整整31个同学没有达到我规定的要求，你们是怎么回事？”朱老师怒吼一声，整个教室鸦雀无声，她手里拿着一沓英语试卷，接着说：“从现在起，如果你们再敢上课随意开小差，考试故意拖后腿，哦，还有那些翘我课的，赖我作业的，那你就死——定——了！”

此时的朱老师已从阴天转为闪电、狂风加暴雨了。“别忘了，我还有方案一，方案二，方案三……你们的爸爸妈妈一定会被我请去‘喝茶’的！”朱老师边说边用教鞭敲打着讲台，脸都涨红了。

当时，我动都不敢动一下，只是咽了咽口水，在心里想，老师，满清十大酷刑是您穿越回去发明的吧！

不知谁小声来了一句“不愧是灭绝师太啊！”我听了之后，很反感。为什么要这么说老师呢？老师也有好的一面呀。还是把“灭绝师太”换成“麻辣老师”比较好！

第三回：三公分阳光

期中考试之后，我的英语成绩有所下降。不仅是走在大街上没有脸面，在家里也觉得对不起亲人。不时，有一些话飘进我的耳朵里：“看，就是她，还教师子女呢！成绩不知道差到哪里去了！”

其实，我当时很想骂她们几句，可是话到了嘴边，却又说不出来。因为我没有勇气，因为我成绩差啊！

朱老师似乎看透了我的心思，便说了一句：“做好自己，才是根本。”是啊，我干吗要听那些打击我自尊心、自信心的话呢？我是教师子女又怎样？我不是又怎样？我就是我自己，不是任何人的影子，也不需要背负任何人的“债”，我是张承媛，不是别人。于是，我便快速的找回了自信，步入了正轨。我想，朱老师的那一句话，虽然不能比作照亮长空的太阳，但至少也能算三公分的阳光吧。

怎么样，咱们的英语老师够狠、够辣、够温婉吧！我想，到我毕业，朱老师一定会成为教师“模特”。

[英语老师演义1000字作文

Dear Teacher:

I am just writing to say thank you.thank you for teaching us things we need

to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for

your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love youve shown to

us.

I am lucky to have a teacher like you. and no matter what kind of person i

will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to

study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you I learned what kind of

person i want to be and what should i get from life. this means everything to

me.

My dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my

heart and i will remember what i have learned from you and carry the knowleges

through my life!

yours，

____

亲爱的老师：

你好!

曾记得在月光皎洁的夜晚，漫步您的窗前，屋内是您那徘徊的身影。您苦苦地思索着，只为一个个难题。那整齐的书桌上是盏困倦的灯，发出吱吱的微响。风儿不经意翻开您的教案，映在窗上是行行密密麻麻的字。

这就是您在教学路上留下的印记;这就是您在挥划未来蓝图的神圣的每一笔;这就是您在无私奉献的铁据!

漫漫的求学路，每一次都记载着您给予的感动;曲折的人生路，每一步都有您真心的叮咛和呵护。您用知识的全部浇灌一颗颗含苞待放的心，您用毕生的爱，温暖一颗颗曾经冷落寂寞的心

;您用天下最美的语言，将一个个心结打开，您用美丽的彩虹横跨我们彼此的心田。

在您的帮助下，一颗颗童心日益成熟，仰天长望，有着腾飞的欲望;临渊俯鱼，有着遨游的梦想。您给予我们奋斗前进的动力，您的谆谆教诲，您的知识精髓在我们内心深处筑起财富的雕塑。

您就是如此伟大，您培育了一个个精英，时代俊杰。您用自任的渺小塑造伟大，您用自觉的平凡点缀美丽;您用弯曲的脊背创造神话。

流水匆匆，秋风吹落您年轻的容颜;岁月无情，夏月晒弯您健朗的脊背;冬雪 皎皎，覆盖了您那黑发。但您“教书育人”的精神依旧抖擞焕发，不减当年。

斗转星移，世道万变;但不变的是那份闪着金光的师生情，那颗饱含复杂感情的感恩之心。

那是恩，是教育之恩，是启蒙之恩，是滴水当以涌泉相报的师恩。

它是情，是师生之情，亦是朋友情，也是那“非授之以肌肤，但传之以智慧”的“父母情”。

这是一份经得起时间考验，承受得住空间局限的恩情。

即使在黑夜，也永远忘不了在黑夜中摸索的手;即使是在人生腾达、立群峰以俯瞰天下的神圣时刻，也忘不了您在落泪时送来的片片春语;即使在为学业不顺而苦恼之日，也忘不了您那希冀的目光、鼓励的微笑。

您的每一次问候，每一次帮助，每一次关怀，都深深铭刻在我们的记忆里。

即使是暴雨来袭，即使是黄沙卷起，也带不走那颗感恩的心，那份真诚的、肃穆的敬意!

老师您是否看到那摇上树梢的月儿，它带着我的一片感恩之心和我最真挚的祝福：愿您天天有鲜花相伴，夜夜有星辰共随，也愿您在人生的大道上平平安安、快快乐乐!

此致

敬礼!

您的学生

Niel是我在Lion的英语老师，他是一个特别有趣的人。怎么个有趣法呢？先来看看他的长相：他长得就很有趣，高高的个子，挺挺的鼻梁，方方的脸蛋，胖胖的肚子，滑稽的发型，活脱脱一个放大版的“憨豆先生”。每次看见他表情丰富、努力搞怪的样子，我们都忍不住哈哈大笑。

Niel讲话也很有趣。每一次我们发音不到位的时候，他总会怪腔怪调地模仿我们的发音，让我们自己发现错误，然后认真改正。每一次，我们说BIGCHINESE的时候，Niel总会两手一摊，肩膀一耸，用很不标准的中文说：“听不懂，听不懂，我实在是听不懂。”我们全体马上闭上嘴巴，用支支吾吾的鼻音来相互交流，看着Niel上蹿下跳拿我们没办法。总之，每一次Niel开口讲话，都会给我们带来无尽的欢乐，我们都喜欢和他呆在一起，他是我们的“开心果”。

和Niel一起上课，更是一件有趣的事儿。英语课上，Niel会和我们一起玩各种各样的游戏，比如：掷骰子，扔飞镖，小组比赛，每一次他都很热心地教我们英语，每一次他都很热情地参加我们的活动，同时用尽他搞怪的本领，把游戏的气氛推向高潮。英语课上，我们故意读错单词搞破坏时，Niel会装着恶狠狠的样子，抡起一根“大棒子”朝我们挥舞。我们一改口，他又变回那个笑眯眯的样子，继续扭动他胖胖的身子，朝我们竖起大拇指。

因为有趣的Niel，我很喜欢上他有趣的英语课；因为有趣的Niel，我越来越爱说有趣的English，这真是一件好事情呢！

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours,

Bella

My English teacher, Mr. Jones, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses above his nose. We all like his classes, for he is always very active and has many ways to make his lessons lively and interesting. After class, he often plays table tennis with us. And at night, he usually works late and prepares the lessons carefully.

When we told him that we had passed the entrance examination of senior middle school, he Was so happy that he jumped like a child.

We all get along well with him. All of us still miss him very much after we have left the junior middle school.

Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher. She oomes from New Zealand. She is thirty-one years old. She has fair hair, white skin and gray eyes. She is tall and slim. She looks very kind. And in fact, she is kind indeed.

Ms Jerry is a good teacher. Although she only comes to our school twice a week, yet she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. Once. she was ill, but she went on giving us lessons. When we learned this, we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.

Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm:" Eaoh lesson she Will bring us new pictures, new stories, new games and new songs. Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.

Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.

the new semesterhas begun. every thing seems the same as before, except one thing. that is ourclass has a new english teacher. his name is yang yang, but we always call his englishname, robert. he is a young and sunshine. he just graduated from university. hispronunciation is very good and i like his spoken english. robert is humorousand his class is interesting and lively. except for the textbook, he finds manyother articles for class teaching, such as songs, movies and cartoons. he saysthat we can learn more from what we are interested in. i like this new teacher.

新学期已经开始了。除了一件事以外，每一件事看起来都和原来一样。那就是我们班来了个新的英语老师。他的名字叫杨阳，但是我们经常叫他的英文名robert。他年轻阳光，刚刚从大学毕业。他的发音很标准，我很喜欢他的口语。robert很幽默，他的课堂生动有趣。除开课本，他还找了很多文章进行课堂教学，比如歌曲，电影和卡通。他说我们可以从我们感兴趣的东西学到更多。我喜欢这位新老师。

亲爱的张后宇老师：

一转眼，我在这个陌生的学校生活了十三天，从刚来这里的不情愿瞬间变成了依依不舍，我发现了原来这个学校有太多太多值得我留恋的地方，这里的老师十分和蔼，这里的同学幽默有趣，我打心底里喜欢上了这个著名的杭州外国语学校了。

刚迈进学校大门时，我的心里一直在想：“这里的老师会不会很严厉?老师会体罚学生吗?当我们不听话时老师会请家长吗?这种种猜想在我脑海里一遍又一遍地重复着。当我上完一天的课程后，我顿时觉得一切似乎是神圣的，老师一点也不凶，反而像我们的朋友一样对待我们。我特别喜欢上您的课，因为我觉得您上的课就像在听别人讲故事一样，生动有趣，有声有色，现在离回家还有几天时间，我真希望时间可以倒流，让我再回到7月10日那天，那么，我还有十五天在这里生活，如果有机会，我一定还要来杭外参加夏令营，我永远不会忘记我在这里的美好回忆，更不会忘记曾经教过我的老师，那句句叮咛，那声声嘱咐，一直在我的耳边回响，张老师，希望你别忘记您有这么一个学生，曾经把您当作自己偶像的学生，我也会像您说的那样好好学习，我也不会您失望的，我会给您写信，也会在QQ上与您聊天，我们可以这样保持联系吗?教过我的所有老师，我真的特别特别特别特别(无数个特别)为什么会这么迷恋您呢?也许是因为您年轻，也许是因为您像姐姐，反正不管怎么样我就是喜欢您，别人不能阻拦我!否则我要他们好玩。(嘻嘻，张老师我就是这样有一点点野蛮的性格，请别见怪哦!)

亲爱的张老师，如果您可以当我姐姐的话，那我就高兴得疯掉了!!!现在是白天吗?哦，那我就是白日做梦了!bye bye，张老师!眼睛酸了吧，呵呵!

写信人：

日期：

Dear Ms.XXX,

I write this letter because I want to talk to you about thepunishment of copying the sentences on the English book.

I don’t think this punishment is fair.

Firstly, I am quite sure that I did complete my homework before. Itis a weekend assignment.  Li Peiqi goes to myhouse every Friday. We do our homework together. She can prove thatI did it exactly.

Secondly, I remembered that I handed in the paper.

Thirdly, I don’t know the rule of punishment before. Besides, Idon’t know my paper disappear.

Last, I still like you so much while I would like you to know thetruth.

Love,

Dora

20**-6-11

Our new English teacher is Mr. Smith.

He wears a pair of thick glasses. He is very serious and strict to us.

I never saw him smile until the Teachers’ Day. On the Teachers’ Day, my classmates and I planned to give him a special gift——a smile. So the naughty John pretended to have passed out in the classroom.

When Mr. Smith came in, he was so scared that he held John in his arms right away. On the way to the hospital, John burst into laughter suddenly, which made the teacher confused. After we told him that it was only a joke, Mr. Smith laughed too.

We were all pleased to see him smiling at last.

[我们的老师英语作文

Miss Hou is my English teacher, she is 28, we all like her. My English is really bad at first, I am afraid of having Miss Hou’s class, when she finds this, she doesn’t blame me, she tells me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English, she asks me to watch English movie, it works. Miss Hou is my favorite teacher.

候老师是我的英语老师，她28岁，我们都很喜欢她。我的英语一开始真的很不好，我怕上候老师的课，当她发现了，她并没有责备我，她告诉我唯一能学好英语的方法就是喜欢上英语，她叫我去看英语电影，这起作用了。候老师是我最喜欢的老师。

If ask me who my favorite teacher is, I will no doubt answer you that Miss Hou is my favorite teacher. She is an English teacher, she is kind to everyone, she is not like other teachers who are so strict to students. As Miss Hou is so popular among students, students learn English with high enthusiasm, that is what they return to her. Miss Hou is a good teacher.

如果你问我我最喜欢的老师是谁，我会毫无疑问回答你候老师是我最喜欢的老师。她是一位英语老师，对每个人都很好，她不想其他的老师那样对学生很严格。候老师很受学生的欢迎，学生怀着很高的热情学习英语，这是他们所能回报她的。候老师是一位好老师。

I remember the first time I see Miss Hou, she walks in class, and then talks with students about small things. She doesn’t talk about English in the first class, everyone feels Miss Hou is so amiable, we like her so much. Miss Hou is good at teaching us, she explain the question very patiently, when we understand, she will be move to the next topic, Miss Hou is a good teacher.

我记得我第一次见到候老师，她走进教室，然后和学生讨论一些小事情。她在第一次课上并不讲英语，大家都觉得候老师很和蔼，我们很喜欢她。候老师很擅长教我们，她很耐心地解释问题，当我们明白了，她才会讲下一个题目，候老师是一名好老师。

1)结构2)内容要点 3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。 三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏 知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。

1 “三段”(三个段落)——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。 中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，(SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考)。 我们管这样的文章叫做HamburgerWriting(汉堡写作)

顾名思义，就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章，都可以通用。简单解释如下：

我的英语老师姓陈，因为教的是英语，而且又是女生，所以我们都叫她MISS陈。她有着大大的眼睛、卷卷的头发，平时爱穿花衣服、穿黑色的皮鞋，这样使得她年轻又靓丽。并且她还被我们冠上一个外号“幽默大师”，在她的课堂上经常会爆出震耳欲聋的笑声，想知道她怎么幽默吗？听我细细道来。

同学们应该知道上英语课都有报听写的环节，即枯燥又乏味，而我们陈老师有一次在报听写的时候，竟然把单词用戏曲的声调报出来，起初同学们感到莫名其妙，静了一会儿后，就发出阵阵笑声，呆板的报听写也立马变的有趣起来，从这以后，每次同学们的听写成绩都很好呢！

最精彩的一次我记得是陈老师布置了一篇周记，要求50个单词以上，这时有几个“懒鬼”抱怨开了：“作文怎么要写这么多单词？”还有几个装着一副可怜兮兮的样子乞求说：“伟大的陈老师呀，减少一点吧！”我心想：这怎么可能呢？别做白日梦啦。结果出乎我的意料，陈老师竟然说：“可以。”话未说完，那几个“懒鬼”就欢呼雀跃起来，正当高兴之时，陈老师接着说：“我尊重你们的意见，你们说减少一点，我就减少一点，减到49个单词。”顿时教室里爆出一阵哄笑声，那几个“懒鬼”也惭愧地低下了头......这时，李智同学开始卖乖了：“老师，我很爱学习的，给我加点单词吧！”“好！51个单词”哈哈哈，教室里传出了阵阵笑声。

怎么样？我们的陈老师幽默吧！就因为她独特的教学方式，我们班的英语成绩在全年级可是位列前矛哟！我们喜欢她的人，更喜欢她的陈氏幽默。

or every student, meeting a good teacher is very important, it will change their lives. I am so lucky that I met a good teacher and she opened the new chapter of my life. I will never forget the things she taught me.

对于每一个学生来说, 遇到一个好老师是非常重要的,它将改变他们的生活。我很幸运,我遇到了一个好老师,她打开了我人生的新篇章。我永远不会忘记她教给我的东西。

When I was in high school, I felt so bored about the English class, because I did not understand it. Miss Li was my English teacher, she found my attitude to her class. One day, when the class was over, she asked me to her office. She did not blame me for sleeping in her class, instead, she smiled and asked me the opinion about her class. I said her class was a little  boring and I thought she would be angry. Miss Li smiled and agreed with me. She asked me to give some opinion. I was so surprised that she was so kind. Miss Li improved her class and I became very active.

当我在高中的时候,对于英语课,我感到很无聊，因为我听不懂。李老师是我的英语老师,她发现我对她课的态度。有一天,在下课的时候,她叫我去她的办公室。她没有怪我在她的课上睡觉,相反,她笑了笑,问我对她课的意见。我说她的课有点无聊,我以为她会生气。李老师笑着赞同我。她叫我给一些意见。我很惊讶,她是如此的友善。李老师改善她的课,我变得非常活跃。

Though I enter  the college, I will never forget Miss Li’s class and the things she taught me. She respects me and makes me important. I am so thankful to her.

虽然我进入了大学,我将永远不会忘记李老师的课和她教给我的东西。她尊重我,让我变得重要。我很感谢她。

I would like to thank you for all the help you gave me during this past semester. You were alway so patient when I asked you questions. You listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. You showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English. You made the excercise so interesting that I was always very eager to participate and practice. My English has improved so much. How could I thank you enough?! I cannot wait to take your class next semester and keep working on my English.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。