介绍动物园的英语小短文（实用20篇）

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

Hello, Everybody! I am very glad to stand here to give you my introduction. I am from Liangbing Middle School. I am studying in Class 1,Grade 7. I love my hometown Liangbing because it’s a very beautiful town.

I have many hobbies, such as reading books, listening to music, surfing the Internet and traveling. But listening to music is my favorite. I like pop music best. My idol are Jay. I am a lively girl. I like making friends and chatting with them. I can play the Chinese Kungfu. I passed all ten levels when I was in Grade 5.However, because of the busy study, I don’t have any free time to practise it. What a pity!I am good at Math and English and I like English better. In my opinion, it’s very easy and fun to learn and use English and this contest is a great chance for me to learn English from others. My saying is god help those who help themselves and I will never give up during my course of learning.

Now, after listening to my introduction, do you know me well?

That’s all. Thank you!

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of living in the country, while others prefer living in the city. In my opinion, I prefer the city life, though it has advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, city life is very colorful. City is the center of the surrounding area. So, it is also the most booming place having the best things. There are many great things and wonderful activities in the city, while there isn’t in the country. For example, there are KFC, wonderful shopping mall, delicious food from various places, dancing club, different kinds of activities and so on. We can also learn the culture from all the countries. Despite city life is so wonderful, it still has many disadvantages. Nowadays, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people have more cars and more people come to city, and then the city becomes more and more crowd. As a result, traffic jam emerges, which makes great inconvenience for people to go out. What’s worse, the air pollution becomes serious day by day, which is bad for people’s health.

To sum up, every coin has two sides. Living in the city also has good side and bad aspect. Whether like living in city or not depends on individual thinking. As myself, I like living in city though I know the disadvantage of living in city.

Respected business leaders:

Hello!

Thank you for your first start reading, giving me the opportunity to you goes to my cover letter.

I Jiangxi Vocational College of Economics an d Management Department of Logistics Management 2010 graduates with the same number of our students, graduate an d harvest in sight, waiting for the test of the community an d look forward to your choice.

I was born in rural areas, studying in the city, so honest an d generous Chinese farmers an d urban people”s traditional virtues of a strong confident personality in me to get the perfect combination, which I have good social adaptation. University for three years to hone more I experience the significant increase in overall capacity strengthening, personal qualities to be a qualitative leap.

Bao Jianfeng from sharpening out, plum blossom from the bitter cold, looking back, slowly an d study hard more than a dozen set, I split the air waves in the vast Xuehai cut, to seek the knowledge of the mountain. To pursue their studies of the exquisite, the pursuit of ambitions to achieve, manifestation of the pursuit of personal values, learning career, I have sought all-round development in physical an d moral. I sweat pour out of fruitful results. college three years, I have every year are very outstan ding professional achievements, an d received third-class scholarship. Not only that, but also repeatedly been assessed "outstan ding cadres” college, many times the individual literary works in the College of Competition award.

Knowledge while at the same time I did not forget to shape their own character, honesty, unity an d good to my usual style, aggressive, hard work is my unique personality. To accompany raising their overall quality, I have actively participated in school a variety of meaningful activities outside; addition to specialized courses, I was the other after-school elective courses, including literature, psychology, acCounting, management, etc., in order to broaden their knowledge. usually either studying or living, I have to deman ding their own, I will put this character to the work which, strive to improve their ability to work, make their businesses grow gradually with the growth.

"Decade of sword, frost edge never try ”, I sincerely hope to become a member of your organization, I will, with enthusiasm an d tenacity of character to work hard an d cooperate with colleagues, contribute to savings for many years as a unit wisdom an d skill. urge acceptance letter, is hope, I await your good news! I believe my ability, but I believe you are the right choice! give me a chance, I will have you a miracle!

Sincerely,

Salute!

I am xxxxx. I was born in Changsha. I graduate from senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.

In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.

I think language is very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge.

Hi, everybody! Today, I would like to introduce myself!

My name is ChengZiYing, 9 years old this year, I am a lovely little girl. I have a pair of watery eyes, a pair of big ears, a straight nose, a plausible mouth, a tender little face, have a black long hair on his head. Oh, regardless of appearance! Tell me about my hobby, advantage!

I often help my mother do housework at home, I also can play the piano! Ill play the song: "Mr. Red rope", "river bank Mongolia folk song", "dream wedding", "the moon represents my heart". Sometimes, when I was at home all right, will create their songs to play, and the lyrics!

I am very obedient at home, this is me, do you understand me? If you still dont understand, that is quick to make friends with me!

[初中英语作文：自我介绍

Hello! my chinese name is Yin Xiaoyan and English name is Anna.Im a happy girl. Im 13 years old. Jly 22th is my birthday.

Our school is very nice.Im in class 3 ,Grade 6.Im go to school by bus. I have many teachers. I love them.

I have many habbies.I like swimming,reading and listening to music.my favourite food is rice, my favourite fruit is apple and my favourite colour is blue. The dog is my favourite animal.Why? Because dog are very lovely!

This is me! A happy and lovely girl!

each examiner：

i call/**， come from shandong province。this year is 21 years old， ， is a student who will soon graduate。

passes the foundation knowledge that the teachers guidance controled a calculator with personal effort firmly in the school。mainly studied c language at the software aspect。 c#。 java etc。 plait the distance language， the data structure， vf。 access etc。 database is applied， calculator operate system。studied the dreamweaver web page manufacture and the asp network to weave a distance also。studied the calculator network at the hardware aspect， the calculator construction with www。oh100。combine many times to attend to pack machine， set the fulfillment of the net operation lesson， make me control the work principle of the calculator and the set of the calculator network net process。

in addition， i attend various activities of the school organization to come to the oneself of 锻炼 actively and do various part—time to increase social experience。the teacher is divided into the group to us in the experiment and practice of the lesson remaining to complete mission， make we the deep comprehension arrive the importance of the team。the and the rise time acquires the school scholarship during the period of school， three staffs。

however necessarily limited at the knowledge that the school learn， therefore i would ready to take advice study in the later work， the backlog working experience， the exaltation work ability。hope your company to give me a displays an own opportunity！

this with the result that。

salute

My name is __________ . I am from ______________ . There are _______________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He is a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She is also a busy woman. I have a older sister and a younger brother. My sister is a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in English. My brother is an elementary school student. He is 8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wish I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that is why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

It’s my honor to introduce myself. My name is XXX, I am fromXXCountyXXProvince, December XXXX I was born in a poor family, and my parents are farmers, I love and respect them very much. We were delight with my becoming a fresh man in September 1997. Luckily, I was permitted to be a graduate student after 4 years colorful life on campus. I received my Bachelor degree2001 inXX Institute of Science and Technology, then a Master degree2004 inXX University of Science and Technology. For those 7 years my major was Die Design. Before I received my Master degree, I had done the subject of XXXXXXXXXXX. For the past 3 years, I have been inXXXXXXCollege, where I have been and still am a teacher. I teach students Machine Design etc. I have published more than 10 first-author papers.

That’s all, thanks!

Good morning !Everyone! /Hello, everyone!

Id like to thank you first for giving me this opportunity!

Appreciations for your consideration on me as your future colleague/comrade! I sincerely wish you will be persuaded by my good background and excellent capability to take the position of XXXX!

Im a Ph.D holder from XXXX medical school. My research interest is about XXXX. Thanks to the kindness of my supervisor, Prof.XX, I’ve built up a rich experience in the field of XXXX in my past 6 years study as a post-graduated student in XXXX hospital.

Now, I’m going to give a brief introduction to my past. It consists of three parts: my research work, my medical training, and my in-situ career record.

The first one is about the successful application of a National Science Foundation project in 2005/2006, which is about XXXX. I was asked to prepare the kernel part of our manuscript because of my good understanding and attractive ideas in the latest development of XXXX. I played an important role in our team, and by our endless efforts, we succeeded in obtaining the financial support from NSF.

My research is supported by this project, and I’m going to get my diploma in 2008. Moreover, I’ve published X papers in the past 3 years, mainly on the well-known publications.

The second part is about the medical training in diagnosis and operation skills. In my past 6 years, usually I spent more than half of my time in the hospital and sickrooms. A rich experience has been built up in the field of XXXX. For example, I successfully handled a difficult XXXX case in 2006/early this year/recently. If you feel like to, I would be very happy to explain the detail a little bit later.

Furthermore, I’m not so simple a medical student from school to school. I had one year’s practical experience working as a doctor in XXXX hospital. In 2004, I got my certification. I was an in-situ doctor in the SARS crisis in 2004. Thanks to this period, I learned how to communicate with so many kinds of patients and how to handle difficult situations.

In the end, I sincerely wish, you may be persuaded by my excellent background and capability! Thank you again for your kindness!

I promise that I will be a good doctor here in your hospital and I will do my best!

人们常常采用"自我画像"的形式向别人作自我介绍,这种"自我画像"比自传的写法更为自由,内容可多可少,语言大都含蓄幽默,风趣诙谐......同学们在生活中也常需要向别人作"自我介绍"。

英语范文自我介绍第1篇：

MynameisYinXiaomeng.Aheardthisname,entaryschool,mymottois:tuitionthanthesomebodyelsetopayless,scoresmorenotinferiortoothers!So,mygradeshavebeentopclass.Mymotherhasbeenregardedasherhope,herpride.Igrewupinthispieceofitabout.Probablybecausemyarrogant,gradually,mygradesslippedtomedium.Themoresevere,grade3gradethanwasonceapoor.Butmyfamilyandmyteacherdidntgiveup.TheythinkIllcatchup.Therearefewnow,aboutmystory.Ithink,inafewyearstowritemyautobiographywillbemorewonderful.

我叫尹晓萌。一听到这个名字，您是否感以有长不大的意思?是啊，在父母眼里，我永远也长不大，婧婧是我的小名，翻开字典查这个"婧"字，是女子有才能的意思。不好意思，真有点儿对不起这个名字，其实我挺差的。我还给自己起了个笔名——雪娆。是根据毛主席《沁园春·雪》一词中的诗句起的，我觉得这个名字很美。

今年我十六岁了。十六岁的花季，应该是快快乐乐的，十六岁的女孩更应该是快快乐乐的，而我却相反。我的性格注定我要在花季流泪。我动辄就哭哭啼啼。难怪妈妈说我像多愁善感的林黛玉。不过，我也蛮喜欢这样的性格，她使我走向爱好文学的道路，并且得到了老师的赏识。我特别喜爱文学，尤其是散文和诗。我常常把自己的快乐和忧愁融入一首首小诗和一篇篇散文里。

我四岁半开始上幼儿园，六岁上学前班，八岁上小学。在小学，我的座右铭是：学费不比人家交得少，成绩更不能比别人差!所以，我的成绩一直是班级的前几名。妈妈也一直把我视为她的希望，她的自豪。我就在这一片赞扬声中长大了。大概因为我的骄傲自大吧，渐渐地，我的成绩滑到了中等。到了初三更严重，成绩竟一次比一次差。不过家人和老师没有放弃我。他们认为我一定会赶上去的。

现在，关于我的故事还不多。我想，过几年再写我的自传时会更精彩。

英语范文自我介绍第2篇：

Helloeveryone,mynameisya-nanzhang.Ithisyeartwelveyearsold,myhobbyisreading,listeningtomusic,playbadminton,becauseofreading,Ifellinlovewithoneoftheworldstoptenliterarygiantofluxun,heisalsomyfavoritecelebrity.Mymottois:"aslongasitisnotover,willgoallout!"Therefore,untilnow,Idothingsmorepersistent.

Iamoptimistic,cheerful,lively,good,butalsobecomeashorttempersometimes,unabletocontrolhistemper.

Tellmeaboutmynamebelow,dadcalledme"yanan"butthereisasmallstory!Wasgrandpasgrandmotherhasagoodnameforme,waitingfortheregisteredpermanentresidence,canbeinthatday,daddidntsaythename"hong-yuzhang",becausehethoughtthenamelikethenameoftheboy,butIwasagirl!Butalsocantthinkofanygoodnameatthemoment,Iheardthat,onaccountofthemoment,myfatherthinkoftheword"nan",sohecalledthe"nan"thistwoword,lateralsoismygrandpahadafierce!Themeaningofthefatherisafilialson,fewaregrandmaandgrandpa,butthistime,butformethislittlelife,andmadeaforgrandmaandgrandpa.

But,moreover,fillinhukoubook,dontlettakethenameoftwowords,thatwhatshouldItake?A"elegant"wordsuddenlyappearedinfrontofdads,sohewillblurtout,willbe"ya-nanzhang"!Ihavemyownname.

"Elegant"iselegant,noble,beautifulandgenerous,"nan"issolid,preciousmaterials,dadthisnameishopeIquiet,elegant,andhopefullyIcanbeintheplastic,butIfailedtoliveuptomydadsaafterallexpectations.NowImischievousactive,studentsareoftenaroundmethewholecup.Ihavetoworkhard,ah,toshortenmywithelegantfardistance.

Andtheword"nan"butdontknowwhetherIdeservetogoup,afterall,doyouhaveanytalent,alsoneedtimetoadjusttosee!

Iwillmaintaingoodmentalityandfriends,classmates,positiveanduplifting,helpingeachother,respecteachother,letyoudeeplyrememberme!

大家好，我的名字是张雅楠。我今年十二岁了，我的爱好是读书，听音乐，打羽毛球，因为读书的缘故，我迷上了世界十大文豪之一的鲁迅先生，他也是我最喜欢的名人。我的座右铭是"只要还未结束，就要全力以赴!"因此，直到现在，我做什么事都比较执着。我乐观，开朗，活泼，善良，却也有时成为一个急性子，控制不住自己的脾气。

下面说说我的名字吧，爸爸为我取名"雅楠"可是有一个小故事呢!本来爷爷奶奶已经为我取好了名字，就等着报户口了，可就在那天，爸爸却没有说"张宏宇"这个名字，因为他认为这个名字很像男孩子的名字，可我是个女孩子!但一时也想不出来什么好名字，听说，就在报户口的那一刹那，爸爸想起了"楠"这个字，于是便报了"张楠"这两个字，回去以后还被爷爷凶了一顿呢!爸爸是个孝子，很少忤逆爷爷奶奶的意思，可这次，却为了我这个小小的生命，和爷爷奶奶做了一次对。

但是，一波三折，填写户口本的时候，不让取两个字的名字，那取什么好呢?一个"雅"字突然浮现在爸爸的眼前，于是他便脱口而出，就要"张雅楠"!我便有了自己的名字。"雅"是文雅，高尚不俗，美好大方的意思，"楠"是坚固，贵重的建筑材料，爸爸取这个名字是希望我文静，雅致，同时有希望我可以成为可塑之才，但我终究还是辜负了爸爸的一片期望。现在的我调皮好动，周围的同学经常被我整盅。我呀，还得好好努力，才

能缩短我与文雅的十万八千里距离。

而"楠"这个字我却不知能否配上，毕竟，有没有才华，还需要时间的磨合才可以看出来嘛!

我还会保持着良好心态和朋友、同学相处，积极向上，互帮互助，彼此尊重，让你深深的记住我!

英语范文自我介绍第3篇：

A12-year-oldgirl,height1meter6more.Slightlydarkerskin,theeyeischaracteristic,lookatordinarytimesisnotsmall,butasmileisnarroweddownaseam,embeddedontheroundface.Mymouthisnotbeautiful,especiallywhentalkingtocanalwaysletnotaccuratelyonthe"decent"teeth"appearance".Nose,inadditiontothebridgeofthenoselowsome,abit"flatjiangchuan"imposingmanner,theotherisso-so.-thisisflatlylightme.

Dontknowwhy,risethefirstdayofjuniorhighschool,Iwascuriousabouteverythingtodowiththecampus,suchasIusedtositatthesametable,hernameiscuiaccumulate,accumulatethenamecuicaughtmyfancy,soIwillanalysisaboutit.Cuiaggregateswithbrightandbrightisdescribethestarrysky,thestarsisreferstotheuniverse,theuniversewouldhavemanymeteorites,twometeoritecollisiontogether,wouldexplode,andexplosionmakesmeteoritesjiggledrotten,destroybadmeteoritesslowlyaccumulateandtogetheragain.So,hernameisofprofoundsignificance.-thatswhatIlovefantasy.Iama"happyfruit",betweenfriendsandrelativescaneasilymakingotherslaugh,othersalsocaneasilyIlllaugh.

Ononeoccasion,mybrotheronebreatheatthreesteamedstuffedbun,youknow,dadamealtoeattwosteamedstuffedbun.Isaidtohim:"dearahdi,youwanttosticktoit,everymealeatthreesteamedstuffedbun,Ibelieveinthenearfuture,youcangotounfoldsumo,willhavetochampion..."Imnotdoneyet,momanddadlaughed,brotherredface,embarrassedloweredhishead.-thisismyhumor.

Ihaveahobbyofreading,thereisalsoasportshobbies,thereisinterestinMusicalInstruments,suchas,sparetimeIllpullaviolinorqualitiesaflutesong.Thoughnotjing,butalsoenoughtocultivatemysentiment.-thisismyhobbyiswidespread.

Plain,lovefantasy,thehobbyiswidespread,thisiswhatI--ZhaoYu.Wouldyouliketomakefriendswithme?Imlookingforwardtoyou.

一个十二岁的女孩，身高1米6多。皮肤略黑，眼睛很有特点，平时看起来还不算小，可一笑起来就眯成了一条缝，嵌在圆圆的脸庞上。我的嘴巴并不美，特别是说话时总是能准确地让不"体面"的上排牙齿"闪亮登场"。鼻子呢，除了鼻梁低一些，有点"平坦江川"的气势，其他的都是一般般。——这就是平平淡淡的我。

不知道为什么，升初中的第一天，我就对校园里的一切很好奇，如我以前的同桌，她叫崔蕴，崔蕴这个名字引起了我的遐想，于是我就把它分析了一下。崔蕴同璀璨，而璀璨就是形容星空的，星空就是指宇宙，宇宙里就会有许多陨石，两个陨石在一起相撞，就会爆炸，而爆炸就会使陨石摧烂，摧烂的陨石又慢慢的蕴和在一起。所以，她的名字有着深刻的意义。——这就是爱幻想的我。

我是亲朋好友之间的"开心果"，既能容易把别人逗笑，别人也能容易把我逗笑。

有一次，弟弟一口气吃了三个包子，要知道，爸爸一顿饭才吃两个包子。我就对他说：

"亲爱的阿弟，你要坚持下去呀，每顿饭都吃上三个包子，我相信不久的将来，你就可以去日本学相扑了，一定会得冠军的......"我还没说完，爸爸妈妈就哈哈大笑，弟弟红着脸，不好意思的低下了头。——这就是幽默的我。

我有读书的爱好，也有体育运动的爱好，还有对乐器的爱好，如，空闲的时候我会拉上一首小提琴曲或吹上一首笛子曲。虽说不精，但也足以陶冶了我的情操。——这就是爱好广泛的我。

平平淡淡、爱幻想、爱好广泛，这就是我——赵雨。愿意和我交朋友吗?我期待你们。

中考英语作文是一大难点，怎么样让自己的作文更加的高分呢?下面请看语文迷网为大家整理的技巧。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident ”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，” “to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”;又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but ”“not only...but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

注意事项：

最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。

4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

英语写作水平的提高是一个渐进的过程，只要同学们在平时多加训练，多读文章，做一个有心人，就能在中考作文中取得理想的成绩。

Teachers Day

The Teachers Day will come soon.At first,I want to extend my greeting and best wishes to my dear teachers.

I still remember the year when I failed the collage entrance exmination.Iwas feeling lost,and no idea about what my life is going to be.My teachet came to me,and she said she understand how I felt inside now.She also told me its very common that students who are like me will go though a hard time. She told me that failure was a part of life, which was not the end but a new beginning. And she encouraged me to go back to the school to start a new. I was convinced in the end and decided to give another try.

Now Ive graduated from collage and got a very good job.I know all my success owns to my kind teacher. Ill work harder and never give up again.

I am a lovely little girl, although I am 9 years old, but the understanding of the animal makes you cant believe a ferocious tiger, strange Chinese sturgeon, a giant pandas, a naughty dolphins, with the lion king of the forest, a sly fox, and clever monkey in these animals, my favorite animal is the white rabbit, the rabbit is a common animal, but I saw a small white rabbit remembered in the snow in the joy! Because I like rabbits, so I know it very well!

小白兔长得很普通，雪白雪白的毛儿，非常漂亮，要是下雪，动物们一定以为白兔是雪中小精灵。长长的耳朵，像黑宝石的眼睛，还有一张三瓣嘴，宛如听了什么笑话，笑得嘴都裂开了。

The rabbit is very common, white hair, very beautiful, if it were to snow white, animal must think snow elves. Long ears, black stones like the eyes, and a three valve mouth, like to listen to what a joke, grin cracked.

我猜白兔长得不特别是因为它吃得不好，吃一些萝卜或者青菜，我就搞不懂它为什么不吃肉呀?如果我是白兔，我就吃肉，不吃萝卜。

I guess the rabbit isnt particularly because it is not good to eat, eat some carrots or cabbage, I do not know why it does not eat meat? If I was a rabbit, I eat meat, do not eat radish.

我很喜欢兔子，所以小时候妈妈给我买了一只可爱的小白兔，可惜它在我家只过了一天就死了，还记得那天中午，妈妈买了青菜，我就拼命地把菜往小白兔的笼子里塞，白兔狼吞虎咽地大吃起来，好像一个星期没吃饭似的。就这样我让它吃了很多青菜，结果它被吃撑死了呀!唉!我真希望兔子像千年老龟一样活那么长时间呀!

I like the rabbit, so when my mother bought me a cute little rabbit, but it in my home, only one died, remember that day at noon, my mother bought vegetables, I tried to put food into the small rabbit rabbit cage plug, eat like wolves and tigers to eat, If hadnt eaten for a week. So I let it eat a lot of vegetables, it is eat dead! Oh! I really hope that the rabbit like a thousand year old turtle live so long time!

听了我的介绍，你喜欢兔子吗?

After listening to my introduction, you like rabbits?

To introduce myself(介绍我自己)

Hello,every one!(大家好)

My name is **** . (我叫****)

Im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改)

I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.(我住在美丽的Rizhao城)(你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)

Im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)

In the school , my favourite subject is maths . (在学校，我最喜欢数学)

Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)

But I like it.(但我喜欢他)

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)

I also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)

Such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等)

Im kind-hearted.(我很热心)

If you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助，就来找我)

I hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友)

OK.This is me .A sunny boy.(好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩)

We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever．

Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it.In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said,"Today is my birthday,dont forget it!"At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of fun.But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home.When I open the door,there wasnt anybody in the house.There was only a note that said,"Coming home late tonight,mum and dad."I try to call them but there was no answer.I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I couldnt eat anything.I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely.It was about time for dinner,my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house.When I got there I couldnt believed my eyes.Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends and even my classmates.There was so many gifts and a big cake.What a surprising birthday party!

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I canmake a good performance today. Im confident that I can succeed. Now I willintroduce myself briefly. I am 26 years old, born in Shandong province. Igraduated from Qingdao University. My major is electronics. And I got mybachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2003. I spent most of mytime on study, and I’ve passed CET-6 during my university. And I’ve acquiredbasic knowledge of my major. It is my long cherished dream to be an engineer andI am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability.

After completing my military service, I have been looking for a challenging goal for me to achieve. And I found that the Intermediate of General English Proficiency Test fits my new achievement properly.I graduated from Taipei Commercial Junior College, majored in business administration. Instead of spending much time in playing, I devoted myself to my studies and paid attention to all meaningful things happened in daily life. By the way, I learned a lot from Mr. Wang, the professor of my business class. He is my good friend till now an often gives some appropriate suggestions toward my problem confusion.My father is, in the same way, a good consultant to me. As he said: I am in poor education, little for you; to clarify, what he have given is far beyond his words, I do think so. I was born in a country of Ping Tung Country, farming is our career of generations. There are four people in my family, Mother is housewife and my brother is a student of an Agriculture CollegeI am optimistic and active, and I am confident that I can pass the test. Thank you for your precious to read my autobiography.

My name  . I am from . There are people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He  a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She  also a busy woman. I have a older ster and a younger brother. My ster  a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in Englh. My brother  an elementary school student. He  8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wh I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that  why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

Sam is a little fish. He lives in the sea. He is very lonely. He wants to have a friend. The friend looks like him. Sam sees an ink fish. The ink fish has eight legs. He doesn’t look like Sam. So Sam goes away.

Sam meets a shark. He wants to say hello to the shark. The shark opens his big mouth. Sam runs away quickly.

Sam is tired and hungry. He wants to have a rest. Then he sees a round fish. She says to him. “Hello! Would you like to be my friend?”

Sam answers: “Of course! But you are round. I am flat.” The round fish days: “But we are both fishes.”

Sam thinks and says, “You are right. Let’s be friends.” They become good friends.