英语写作介绍家乡【汇总20篇】

Good morning/afternoon, my name is yanghaiyan ,you can call me yanzi. I like the feeling flying in the sky like a swallow.

It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today.

now i will introduce myself briefly.i am 20 years old,born in shandong province.i grow up in a sweet family,composed of my dad,mom,brother and myself.i am an optimistic and confident girl.i have full confidence in a bright future,and i believe i can do well in caac.punctuality and diligence are crucial to most future careers,i will try my best. altough i just graduated from school, i have confidence to venture my funture.

scoaring in the sky as an airhostess has been a dream for me since childhood.this is why im longing for a job on a plane, and this is why im standing here for this interview.i hope my application will be granted ,so that i will delive my best servies throughout the world as a airhostess member of caac and my dream can come ture. thats all.nice talking to you .thanks.

I have a little white rabbit. It is snow and white, really like a mass of white cotton. Eyes are very beautiful, like two rubies inlaid in the white face. Ears are very long, put up is particularly clever. It signed the front legs short and small, hind legs are fat and strong, so can only jump, can not run. Tail is also very small, almost can not see. It stands like a man.

I remember one time I pulled a radish from the yard, it did not even jump with me in front of me, while I do not pay attention to the mud with the mud to Diao away. I always do not want to let it eat unclean things, this time and as usual, we have done a fierce "struggle", of course I will win, when I put the clean radish in front of it, it thought me Throw in the towel, they triumphantly eat radish.

My little rabbit is so cute!

日月如梭、光阴似箭，每一天，家乡都在不知不觉中发生着日新月异的变化，我来跟你讲一讲吧！

以前，家乡的小路坑坑洼洼，凹凸不平，到处是尘土飞扬;破旧土屋在下雨天甚至漏雨;在那时，家有一台黑白电视，别的家人就都来聚在一起看电视;如果出门就只有一种交通工具，那就是脚，有一辆自行车就算是首富了;而且只有生活富裕的人家在那个时代，逢年过节才能吃上一顿肉;就算是买一个毛巾都要走好远才能看见一个商店;在远处的河上漂浮着一堆垃圾，难闻死了;如果要渡河只能人工划船，费时又费力。那时的经济状况只能用一个词形容：贫穷落后。

现在，乡下到处都是水泥铺的地面;一座座洋楼拔地而起，代替了破旧的土屋;而且每家每户都有手机，电脑，电视等高科技产品，每家都有一辆摩托车甚至是轿车，行动方便了许多;每天都吃的大鱼大肉，可丰盛了;乡下有了好几家超市，大人小孩买东西方便多了，你瞧，小孩们玩着从商店里面买的玩具多开心呀！就连河面都干净了许多，鹅在河上自由的游着;许多小孩也在桥上高兴的嬉戏，骑着滑板车，别提有多高兴了;而且乡下的人们都变富了，乡下的人们不再贫穷了，这是多好的事呀！

看到家乡的变化，我满心的欢喜、满怀的愉快。家乡的路、家乡的楼房、家乡的人们在夕阳的余辉照耀下闪闪发光，而我的心里不禁地想：“家乡，您真美丽！”

My hometown is a prosperous and beautiful city, it is located in the south of the motherland, hot and cool guangxi province, it is also a small city - jingxi.

It is rich in fruit, and many of the fruits in wuhan, such as durian and shanzhu, may cost more than 50 yuan in wuhan, while in jingxi, it may be only 25 yuan.

The scenery there was beautiful too. Once, we went to a place called tongling grand canyon. When we reached our destination, the night was already deep, and we soon fell asleep.

In the morning, the veil of light mist over the city, we went out.

The scenery here really startled me. The ancient trees were so beautiful that we walked in. The flowery pavilion is gorgeous in our sight.

The grand canyon was big, and we walked for a long time to reach the waterfall. When the water comes down, it stirs a thousand waves.

We went back to the secret road. It was a natural air-conditioner!

After coming home, I had been thinking about the grand canyon for a long time, unable to sleep.

If you come here, will you go to the grand canyon? Its so beautiful, so spectacular, I think you cant miss it.

There are many beautiful and magnificent scenery in my hometown. Welcome to visit here!

I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome.

I am proud of myself. Because I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner. I said to my mum, let me look after this little thing. My mum said, Are you sure you can?  Yes ,believe me I can. I answered. Then mum went to the kitchen. I went towards my baby brother.  Oh baby, dont cry. I will sing a song for you I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy.

This is my first time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself.

我的家乡在连云港，近几年发生了很大的变化。就拿我家来说吧。

去年，我们家买了空调。以前，在冬天没有空调，起床穿衣服，我总藏在被窝里。现在有了空调，起来穿衣服就不会感冒了。在夏天没有空调时，能把人热得发闷，不想活动。现在，在夏天有了空调，无论在什么时候，只要一开空调，调成冷风，会觉的非常凉爽，像置身于凉爽的森林一样。

今年夏天，我们家还添了电冰箱。以前，夏天的东西经常会坏，坏了就扔了，多可惜。现在电冰箱可以冷藏食品，食品放在冰箱里不会坏。它可以给我制作冰块。我补课回来，我就冷冻一个冰块让我解渴。冰箱给我家带来了方便。 爸爸还买了电脑。我总在电脑上帮妈妈打文章。我自己还用文件夹，存了动画片、日记、作文等。我还用它看文学名著。用它学英语、装软件，打游戏……妈妈就用它制卷子、打词语。电脑给我家带来了许多方便。

最近，大部分家里人的电脑都上了因特网。以前，没有互联网，现在想投稿或有事只要发一个伊妹儿，就可以把作文投上去，把信寄了出去。妈妈还在网上买很多物美价廉的东西。互联网也给我们带来了方便。

啊！我的家乡变化真大呀！

Name: Melvin

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: May, 1982

Citizenship: Junan county, Linyi, Shandong

Major: English (B.A)

⊿ Objective

Assistant of your office or the manager; Interpreter of company or organization which concerns international business; College or vocational university‘s teacher.

⊿ Education Background

September 2002 to July 2006, Shandong University of Architecture ⊿ Main Skills

About English

Have past the Test for English Major -4; fluent oral English, and good pronunciation.

Major target: ESP of technology, esp. architecture and real estate, and also international business.

About GermanAbout Chinese

Have got the Certificate of Chinese, the score is 86.2

About Computer

Have a good command of computer, knowing the basic maintain of hardware and software;

Good sense of Visual Foxpro language.Intersted in web page design, and had mastered the MACROMEDIA, which including Dreamweaver,Flash and Firework.

Skilled in Microsoft Office, including FrontPage.

⊿ Work Experience

Have part time job in Shanghai Yaru Consulting Co.Ltd during 2004 and 2005 summer holiday.

Did the market research for Shandong Shiguang Boiler Co.Ltd (shanghai branch) in shanghai.

Experiences on be a tutor of junior, senior middle school students and college students.

Many times of doing promotion sales for stores during the campus life.

⊿ ActivitiesFrom 2004 to 2005, be the minister of the Network Department and Publicity Department of the Students Union.

⊿ Awards & Honors

In the year of 2004, awarded the "Model student stuff "prize of our school.

In the year of 2004, won the third level scholarship of our school.

In the year of 2003, won the "Excellent Student" prize of our school.

⊿ Interests

Have intensive interest in traveling, photographing; Reading,esp.on business, economy and computer.

⊿ Self-Evaluation

Strong sense of responsibility, good spirit of teamwork. Can learn new things well in short time.

My hometown used to be a backwardplace, because it was deep in the mountains, where there were no nice buildingsand the roads were so narrow and dirty. People lived a poor life.

我的家乡过去是一个落后的地方，因为它在深山里面，那里没有漂亮的建筑物，公路也是又小又脏的。人们的生活都很贫苦。

While in recent years, with thedevelopment of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. Now the roads aregetting much wider. There are many different cars and buses running on theroads. Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads. They canprovide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutants. So the sky becomescleaner and brighter. Whats more, you can see many modern and beautifulbuildings everywhere, and the living conditions are improving. People areenjoying a comfortable life now.

近年来，随着社会的发展，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。现在的路是越来越大了。有许多不同的汽车和公交车在道路上运行。道路两边种满了树木和鲜花。他们可以为我们提供氧气，与污染物抗争。现在天空变得更清洁、更明亮。更重要的是，你随处可见到许多现代和美丽的建筑，人们的生活条件也得到了改善。现在人们在享受舒适的生活。

Every year on the fourth ThursDayof November is Thanksgiving Day. It’s a festival for American and Canadian with the purpose of thanks for harvest. While canadians celebrate on the second Monday of October. I have a penfriend in America. He wrote to me his Thanksgiving Day last year. He told me that it was a time for family reunion. Families would come back home to celebrate the festival together. Most of the time it was his mother who prepared the dinner. Turkey is must for the festival. It looks like huge chicken. His mother also made pumpkin pie and many other delicious food for them. After the dinner, they talked with each other with the old thing or the future plan. He said sometimes they would invite some friends to share the happiness of Thanksgiving Day. In a word, he had a great time on Thanksgiving Day.

每年十一月的第四个星期四是感恩节。这是美国和加拿大为了感谢丰收的节日。但是加拿大人却是在十月的第二个星期一庆祝。我在美国有一个笔友。他写信告诉我他去年感恩节的情况。他告诉我那是家庭团聚的时间。家人们都会回家庆祝节日。大多数时候，是他的母亲准备晚餐。火鸡是节日的必需品。它看起来像一只巨型鸡。他的母亲也做了南瓜派和许多其他美味的食物给他们。晚饭过后，他们会互相谈论过去的事或未来计划。他说有时候他们也会邀请一些朋友来一起分享感恩节快乐。总之，他在感恩节过得很开心。

Hello，everyone！

My name is Winnie.Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Ganzhou.

Im an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.

I also sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.

Im kind-hearted. If you need help，please come to me .

I hope we can be good friends！

OK.This is me .A sunny girl.

大家好！

我的名字是温妮。我是一个15岁的女孩。我生活在美丽的城市赣州。

我是一个活泼，可爱和聪明的女孩。在学校，我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为很难学好的。但我喜欢它。我相信，如果你尽力，什么都可以做得很好。

我还很运动，比如跑步，排球等。

我善良。如果你需要帮助，请来到我的。

我希望我们能成为好朋友！

好吧，这是我，一个阳光灿烂的女孩。

My name is Xia Shunyao. Im eight years old, grade two in primary school. I have a round face, big black eyes, big ears. My hair is black and bright, also please. In fact, I want to keep a long braid, but mother is not let me stay, I do not agree, but there is no way, had to leave a short hair.

My mother told me that my name was very meaningful. Because of the Xia Dynasty is the first dynasty Chinese, Emperor Yao and shun China is the earliest and most kind-hearted monarch, mom and dad gave me this name, is the hope that Ill do.

I am a good student in my class. I can finish my homework every day on time. I can check it after I finish it. In class, I can speak actively and help the students, so the teacher chose me as her little assistant.

At home I often help my mother do the housework, such as tow the floor, wipe the table, help my mother to buy food. When my parents are out of work, I can also go to the canteen to eat.

You see, am I great? Would you like to be a friend with me?

我叫夏舜尧，今年八岁，上小学二年级。我有一张圆圆的脸，乌黑的大眼睛，大大的招风耳。我的头发又黑又亮，还有点卷。其实，我很想留长辫子，可是妈妈就是不让我留，我不同意，但也没办法，只好留了个短发。

妈妈告诉我，我的名字很有意义。因为夏朝是中国第一个朝代，尧帝和舜帝是中国最早的最善良的君主，爸爸妈妈给我取这个名字，是希望我将来大有作为。

我在班上是个好学生，每天的作业都能按时完成，做完后也能自己检查。上课时能积极发言，爱帮助同学，所以老师才选我当她的小助手。

在家里我经常帮妈妈干家务，比如拖地板、抹桌子，帮妈妈买菜。爸妈没下班的时候，我还能自己到食堂打饭吃呢。

你看，我是不是很棒?你愿意和我做朋友吗?

我的家乡在舟山，这里风景优美，风光独特，空气也很新鲜。

今年寒假时，我要求父母带我去外面看看自己的家乡，父母答应了我，并准备带我去定海公园玩，我们一路上是乘车去的。

车开到沈家门滨港路时，我扭头一看，看见了海水一波又一波的滚来又滚去，可是海水却浑浊不清。我叹了口气说：“海水怎么那么浑浊呀？”爸爸对我说：“以前的海水是很清的，可是现在海水被污染了，所以就变浑浊了。”

我还看到了渔港里的船停着可真多呀，船也都那么大。爸爸告诉我船以前都是小舢板船，现在都是机帆船了，所以看起来都很大。

车开的很快，马上就要到定海公园了。一路上我看到马路上的房子现在都是高楼大厦了，听妈妈说：“以前房子都是平房、旧房，现在可不一样了。”我还看到马路上有很多汽车，我又听妈妈说：“以前汽车是很少的，现在人们富裕了，都买了汽车开。”我又看到路两旁的树木树叶茂盛，生机勃勃，听妈妈说：“以前没有人栽树木，现在树木栽的可好了，还专门有人来养护，所以现在的绿化搞的很好。”

通过这一次我陪父母看家乡，让我知道了家乡有很大的变化，我爱我的家乡。

二十年前的深圳，是一片农家景象。那时，我十岁。二十年后的现在，我回到了故乡。一看，咦?密密麻麻的高粱变成了高耸入云的大厦。一眼无望绿油油的草地变成了一片片水泥路。这得从三十年前说起。

小时候，母亲常常跟我一起坐在椅子上，一遍又一遍地读着《唐诗三百首》。每当读到“独在异乡成异客，每逢佳节倍思亲。”“春草明年绿，王孙归不归。”“自在飞花轻似梦，无边丝雨细如愁”……之类的句子时，总会陷入沉思。母亲的家乡在汕头，虽然全家搬到深圳，但是乡情难却啊。现在想起我问母亲原因时，她总是说：“你还小，不懂。”现在历经周折，终于能回故乡，千思万绪涌上心头……

家中有许多盆景，我以前去玩耍，母亲也不甚在意。唯独那一盆仙人掌，家人碰也碰不得。有一次，我去玩，不小心打破了仙人掌花盆;母亲一向是慈祥的，但这一次，她沉着脸，闷闷不乐了好久。当时，我不明白，一盆仙人掌，有什么稀奇的?

后来，我们不得不离别了。那一天早上，母亲递给我一张雪白的布，上面绣着一盆血色的仙人掌。她说：“我一生对植物不感兴趣，唯独对这生命力很强的仙人掌情有独钟。因为仙人掌可以两三年不用浇水也不会干枯，放在干砂里不会枯萎。作为万物之灵的人类，也应拥有仙人掌的秉性才好。”

现在，我知道，这不只是盆栽，还是一位老人的一颗思乡的心。

Good afternoon everyone, my name is XXX, I’m 29 years old, and I’m from Beijing.

I’d like to introduce myself through the next points:

About working: There are three main aspects of my daily work:

The first, I teach courses such as basic laws and politics. I can feel the strong responsibilities on a teacher, because I have to not only teach knowledge well, but also let students know how to be a good person.

The second, I’m responsible for some administrative work, such as students recruiting and employment. The main majors in our college are urban metro, car repairing, transportation management, logistics and so on.

I think the students recruiting and employment are very important to our college as well as to students and their parents, the serious working attitude and consciousness are highly required.

The third part of my daily work is to be a head teacher, there is an idea I respect very much: there is no bad students, but only bad teachers. If a family is a component of our society, then the class is a component of the school.

When we judge a class good or bad, the key ruler is the organization and management ability of a head teacher, as well as the good working attitude and teaching methods. A head teacher is the pathfinder on the way of students growing, as a young teacher, I’ll try my best to be an excellent head teacher.

About daily life: I have a wide range of hobbies, especially sports and reading.

Sport: We have very good sports facilities in our college, I play badminton every Tuesday, and play basketball every Friday. I think that sports is the best flavor of our life, it can release the pressure and relax our mood.

Reading: I have good reading habits since I was a child, I like the famous four classic very much, and I’m also interested in some biography and news commentaries. I think books can help people being mature, they affect me gradually.

And of course, I have the confused moment, but I think the difficulties can help me grow. Thank you.

"Ah! My hometown has changed! "I cried with joy.

The change in my hometown is really big in these years! It used to be dirty and smelly, and there was a lot of junk in it. There were no trees on the hillside, only one tree stump. Around us there are some factory chimneys discharge smoke, gas, disorderly discharge, even lead to the surrounding trees, flowers and plants, all become withered yellow, often stink in the river, some fish died, rarely see the figure of a bird. Because of the bad environment, the air is seriously polluted and people often get sick.

With the improvement of peoples living standards, the awareness of the environment has improved greatly. Now people no longer throw garbage, factory construction also becomes a green plant, factory around trees and flowers in full bloom, the air becomes pure and fresh, the river water becomes clear gone, the water is very little fishes. Every year on March 12, people will plant trees with shovels and saplings, and now the trees are thick and the birds often sing on the branches. The environment is better, and peoples mood is better and healthier.

The changes in my hometown made me love my hometown more and helped me to study harder and work harder for a better home.

Hi，boys and girls, good morning, it is my pleasure to take this change to introduce myself, my name is Leo, I am 10 years old. About my family, there are 4 people in my family, father, mother, brother and me, my father and mother are all very kind, welcome you to visit my family if you have time!

嗨，男孩女孩们，大家上午好，很荣幸能有这个机会来介绍我自己，我叫力欧，今年10岁。关于我的家庭，我家有四口人，爸爸妈妈，哥哥，还有我，我的爸爸妈妈都是很友善的人，如果你有时间欢迎来我家玩。

I ’m a very outgoing boy(girl), I like reading、playing games and listening to music, of course, I also like to make friends with all the people in the school, I hope I will be your best friends in the school life.

我是一个很外向的男孩（女孩），我喜欢阅读，玩游戏，听音乐，当然，我也喜欢与学校里所有的人交朋友，希望在以后的学校生活中，我能成为你们最好的朋友。

我的家乡在信阳，位于河南南部，与湖北交界。是个物产丰富，气候宜人，风景优美的地方。

信阳的茶叶——“毛尖”最为出名。春天是采茶的季节。漫山的茶树绿油油的，呈阶梯形状，茶农们正忙着采茶。远远望去像一块绿地毯，十分美丽。我的家乡还有许多特产，如板栗、石凉粉、糍粑等，听起来让人口馋。

信阳有那么多特产，是因为那里气候宜人，四季分明。春季天气多变，阴雨连绵。夏季阳光充足，秋季凉爽，冬季寒冷。

我的家乡不但物产丰富，气候宜人，而且是一个旅游胜地。有全国著名的四大避暑胜地之一鸡公山，有全国独一无二的僧尼同寺的灵山寺，还有天然温泉疗养胜地汤泉池。有精忠报国、孝敬父母的将军——许世友之墓等。

进入信阳可以说是车在山间走，人在画中游。真是人间仙境啊！朋友们，听了我的介绍，你是不是也想去看看呢？

记忆中有一缕清香，那是思念的味道。

心中对家乡菜的挂念深极了，也曾多次尝试过烹制，可终究模拟不出那种味道啊！多年的异地生活似乎已有几分淡忘，但也更增加了几分怀念。朦胧中，那股熟悉的味道又彷佛萦绕在心头。

“奶奶，再给我尝一口，还有没有？”“怎么不多弄一些呢？”这是儿时逢年过节时最熟悉不过的生活镜头。几个孩子围着奶奶手中的那碗鱼糕转，目不转睛的盯着又吵着嚷着让奶奶塞一口在自己嘴里。每逢喜宴上这也成了宴席上的主菜，无论大人小孩对此都情有独钟，百吃不厌。鱼糕是家乡盛行的一道菜，无论是色香味都是无可挑剔的。它的主要材料来源与新鲜的鱼肉，奶奶说过：“鱼肉的精华成就了鱼糕的鲜美。”可见的选材的谨慎性。这炖的火候可也是一门高深的学问，“鲜美之本可就靠这火候了！”这也是奶奶多年制作的老经验了。

如今，奶奶依然硬朗，制作鱼糕的技术更是不在话下。逢年过节，她老人家总是亲手做鱼糕，甚至堆满整个保鲜箱，就盼望着哪天在外地工作的儿女回来能马上尝尝家乡菜，过足食瘾。奶奶是上个世纪走过来的人，经历了社会的动荡局面，对于每次的烹饪食肴的机会总是倍加珍惜，这也许是来源于老人家那不寻常的经历吧！

随着家人在异地生活多年，却依然无法忘却这道家乡菜，纵使再多的美味佳肴也比不上它，也许源于内心深处那份独特的情感。所以每一有机会回老家时就总会抓紧吃的机会，即使只是短短的几周，也依然乐在其中，美在心里。今年春节爸爸回老家了，来时奶奶硬是将家乡小菜塞满了三个大包，足有百斤，但爸爸依然是鼓足劲儿把它们带了过来，心里洋溢着一种温暖。吃着新鲜的鱼糕，心里美滋滋的，“在异地依然能尝上家乡菜是一种福气”这是我最深的感慨，心中那几分幸福的暖意在血液中奔腾，在鲜美的鱼糕中彷佛看到了老人那一颗欣慰而又满足的心。

香味缭绕的空气中，弥漫着一股奇特的味道，那叫思念。

introduce myself

my name is ningruoyan。i’m a china girl。i’m ten 。i’m from zhengzhou，china。do you know zhengzhou？it’s in the middle of china。our shool is a good school in zhengzhou。i’m in class4 grade4。there are 83 students in our class。i like our shool ，teachers and classmates。

i like listening to music，i hope everyone likes music as i do。music can bring you a lot of joy and happiness。

i like reading，too。in my room，there are many books。i often go to the library to read books。sometimes，i borrow some bookes from the library。

swimming is my favorite sport。if you swim in the water，you will look like a lovely fish。if you smim ，you’ll be strong。

i like myself very much！do you like？

自我介绍

我的名字叫宁若岩。我是一名中国女孩。我10岁。我来自中国郑州，你知道郑州吗？它位于中国的中部。我们的学校是郑州的一所好学校。我在四年级四班。我们班有84名学生。我爱我们的学校，老师和同学。

我喜欢听音乐，我希望每个人都像我一样喜欢音乐。音乐能给你带来很多喜悦和幸福。

我也喜欢读书。在我的房间有许多书。我经常去图书馆看书。有时还从图书馆借阅书籍。

游泳是我最喜爱的运动。如果你在水里游泳，你看起来就像一条可爱的鱼。如果你经常游泳，你会变得强壮。

我非常喜欢自己！你们呢?

[自我介绍英语作文及翻译

【导语】英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。提高中考写作水平，需要有效的训练。下面关于英语作文的写作方法，一起来阅读下文吧!

学生写作时，如果语句平平，只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词，那么，这样写出来的文章根本没有可阅读行，就像是一碗没有油盐酱醋面条一样，让人提不起一点精神和看下去的欲望，呆板、单调，没有可读性。如果一篇文章要让读者有可读性、有深度，同学们更应该掌握一些高级点词和语句来装饰你的文章，突出这篇文章的彩头，使文章增添文采，给读者以不一样的感受。具体方法可以参照下面的语句：

1. 画龙点睛，一篇文章的开头很重要。

在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”，即主语一般都会在谓语前面。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如在文章的开始的时候写一些倒状语句或以状语为起始语句的开头，这样子的文章更具表现力和感染力。如：

(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.

→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.

在小山顶上有一座古庙。

(2) You can do it well only in this way.

→ Only in this way can you do it well.

只有这样你才能把它做好。

(3) A young woman sat by the window.

→ By the window sat a young woman.

窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。

2. 避免重复使用同一词语

为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如：

I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。

3. 合理使用省略句

合理恰当地使用省略句，不仅可以使文章精练、简洁，而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如：

(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?

→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?

(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.

→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了。

(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.

→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。

4. 适当运用非谓语结构

非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如：

(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.

→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。

(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

他出生农民家庭，只上过两年学。

5. 结合使用长句与短句

在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。如：

At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.

→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。

6. 适当使用短语代替单词

(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.

→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.

他已决定长大了当老师。

(2) He doesnt like music.

→ He doesnt care much for music.

他不大喜欢音乐。

(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.

→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.

他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。

7. 恰当套用某些固定表达

(1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.

→ He was too tired to walk any farther.

他太累了，不能再往前走了。

(2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.

→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。

(3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now.

→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

8. 尽量使句子带点“洋味”

(1) Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.

→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.

别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

(2) Thank you for playing with us.

→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

谢谢你陪我玩。

9. 综合使用各类所谓的“高级”结构

(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.

→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.

现在人人都知道这消息了，我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。

(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

我们所能做的只是站在那儿，设法抓住违章者。

(3) If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.

→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话，至少也不会比她老师的差。

10. 适当使用名言警句点缀

在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章，不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧，而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。如：

(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.

(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.

(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”

我一下愣住了，我被一个月亮吓住了，它是那样的大，那样的皎洁，就像一朵怒放的白莲花，挂在晴朗的夜空中。

我坐在外婆门前的田野上，静静望着这一望无际的天空。每当我们一家人吃过晚饭，我们便会坐在门口乘凉，大家谈笑风生，其乐融融，十分温馨。

我总是爱把眼睛眯成一条缝，自己轻轻地哼着小曲儿，想着当天的趣事，在这里没有城市的喧嚣，是那样宁静，那样美好。

天又黑了些，月亮显得更加皎洁明亮，田野上布满了一层薄薄的雾气，在月光的照耀下，像给大地铺上了一层银色的轻纱，我用手一摸，凉丝丝的，忍不住去尝一尝，细细品味，竟有一点甜。

小河里有一只小船经过，发出“呜呜”的声响，水平如镜的小河立刻变得波光粼粼，闪烁着银光。小船经过的河面转眼间变成了一幅抽象画，柳树的影子，繁星的影子，月亮的影子混合在一起，形成的景象总是能引起我许多幻想，我幻想水中有一个勇往直前的登山者，眼前就真的出现了一座山，而那轮明月就是那伟大的登山者；我幻想它是一幅世界地图，就真的有一张世界地图，这一堆影子是亚洲，那一堆影子是非洲，中间空白的地方是太平洋……对了，对了，那一个皎白的月亮，就是灯火通明的中国。

可这时，月亮却突然不见了，它哪去了呢？估计是在和我捉迷藏吧？渐渐的，它俏皮地露出了半边脸，忽而又害羞似的躲了起来，好不可爱。终于，它玩儿腻了，不躲不闪地站在当空。不知不觉中，我突然发现月亮从东边走到了我头顶上，月亮这家伙还真是有本事啊！

午夜来了，我摘下月亮，拥它入怀，于是我静静地睡着了。梦中，家乡的月亮长了翅膀，带着我飞呀飞呀，尽情地翱翔。