英语初三即将毕业作文带翻译推荐20篇

Serious Floods

The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And its important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.

Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children cant go to school as usual .Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too. In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.

Though we cant help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.

严重的水灾

长江是中国最长的河流。它对我们中国人十分重要。但现在长江给我们带来了严重的水灾。

许多村庄被洪水冲毁于。洪水使成千上万的人失去了家园，亲戚和朋友。许多孩子不能与平常——样去学校了。现在洪水引起了全球的注意。国外的人也给予了援助。在中国，上百万的战士忙于与洪水搏斗。他们努力工作，许多人在救村民时献出了自己的生命。

尽管我们不能帮助他们抗洪，但我们可以帮他们重建家园。我们可以捐出零花钱和衣服。我相信在不久的将来大多数人会回到家乡。

再见，我的初三生活。

时间像飞一样，就这样，我要和我的初三说：再见。

经历了两次班主任的更替，我的初三更加富有戏剧性，但是令我最难忘记与不舍的，还是70个迥异的面孔和五彩缤纷的1000多天，因为，我还不能忘记好多事情……

不能忘记郑铎的擦鼻涕；

不能忘记和刘洁一起在课间玩游戏；

不能忘记魏爷独特的笑；

不能忘记王璐独特的画；

不能忘记朱亚茹不想被我超越；

不能忘记张瑞我们在笑你在哭……

一切看似平常的小事在即将离别的时候越发珍贵，一切看似平常的举动都会留下深深的烙印。

我会永远记得你们，因为是你们在我生命中陪了我三年，使我从幼稚变得成熟。

我固执的认为上天把我们这些性格迥异的人安排在一起三年，我们就有责任去互相铭记，互相珍惜，互相祝福。

I woke up at two oclock in the afternoon today. There was nothing to eat

in the house so I went outside.

I wanted to go to a cheap restaurant and find some food to eat. When I got

to the restaurant, I realized that I forgot to bring money, so I went back

home.

Then I realized that I forgot my keys also, so I waited outside for my mom

to come home and starved the rest of the day.

参考翻译

我今天下午二点醒来。屋子里没东西吃，所以我出去了。

我想去一家便宜的餐馆找些吃的。当我到餐厅的时候，我意识到我忘记带钱了，所以我就回家了。

然后我意识到我也忘了带钥匙，所以我在外面等我妈妈回家，并在之后的时间里一直饿着。

三年的初中生活使每个同学都成熟了，重新认识了自我，在学习上有了自己的一套方法，在生活有了一定能力，我们师生间也得到了相互了解。在这分别的时刻，作为以前的老师，以后的朋友，我仍有许多叮嘱，仅当毕业留言和对今后学习生活的一点点参考。

三年的艰苦学习生活使同学们产生了不同的“成果”，得到了不同“层次”的学习机会。有的走进了重点高中，有的将到一些职高、技校学习一技之长，不管是哪一种情况，都没有高低贵贱之分，老师眼中的你是独一无二的，只要坚持继续努力学习都有成材的机会。所以，毕业后的你要勇敢面对脚下的未走完的路，你们又处在同一“零起跑线”了，不要停下来。在以后日子你仍要面临以下诸多问题：

一、关于学习。记得上初中的第一天，老师给同学们讲关于学习方法的阐述已经比较全面了，在高中的学习中，一周复习法，归纳总结法，卡片记忆法等是同样适用的。有所不同的是，高中知识更深些，涉及面更广些，你要自己思考的东西更多些。但是，我们完全不用惧怕，只要每天认真完成学习计划，做好每周一次归纳，最后一定会取得成功。另外对各科学习本身要有“求知若渴”的态度，不应有“应付”、“排斥”、甚至“厌恶”的心理，即使对某一科有不喜爱的感觉也要在最短时间里调整过来，渐渐减弱这种排斥和厌恶情绪，多了解一下该学科的好处和有趣之处，更不要根据对老师的喜恶来产生偏科学习的情况。这一点在初中的学习中有些同学已经得到了惨痛而深刻的教训。

关于英语的学习，几乎所有在学习中“过来的人”都知道学好英语的重要性，无论是目前的考学还是以后的应用，求职，英语水平一直是一个人成功的重要砝码。在初中，我们学到的英语知识并不多，对于基础差的同学现在开始补起完全来得及，高中三年是可以把外语赶上来的，对于以前基础比较好的同学，精益求精，坚持不懈地学习英语是很有必要的，每天应该养成有固定时间听和说的习惯。只要坚持下来，那么这将是一种“长期投资”，将来一定会有收获的。

二、关于时间。在初三后半年，有些同学后悔当初浪费了二年多的学习时间，那么高一的时候是否应该继续抓紧时间学习呢？当然，否则没到高三的后半年，你同样会悔之晚矣。所以，要抓紧时间学习，在知识的“海洋”中同样可以“放松”和“娱乐”。而有些同学除了正常文体娱乐之外，用学习时间做与学习无关的事是得不偿失的。在高中时期，电视还是不要看了，网吧不能去的，中考过后的你们在时间上仍旧是没有多少“自由”的，而这种没“自由”正是为了将来“更自由”。

三、关于上网。在网上有时碰上高中生，甚至初中生。有的同学是借助网络在学校老师或家长的指导下进行远程学习或查找学习资料。而实际上，大部分同学却不是这样的，他(她)们进聊天室火热聊天，去BBS论坛大桶大桶灌水，更甚者是痴迷网络游戏或者浏览不健康内容。网络是广袤无垠的，网页信息的限制水平很有限，有许多同学上网的出发点是好的，奔着学习和放松娱乐去的，但是不经意的一个连接，一个网友，一个图片，一段文字就会改变你的思想，你会发现，你的上网计划和内容悄悄地变化了，你的上网时间控制不住了，你上瘾了。影响不到学习吗？不可能！有的同学能说他（她）学习很好，上网也不影响学习，实际上，这只是他（她）的借口。这些负面影响是更大的，所以，是不是干脆我们就不要上网了？可以，不上网，集中精力学习三年是不错的选择。但是，现在的教育发展趋势却把学生推向了网络教育。那么，我们一定要有良好的自控能力,上网无罪，但不要聊天，认识不相识的网友就多一份牵挂和思考，干扰学习和记忆；不要去BBS论坛灌水，即使在那里树立了一个有威信的网名又能怎么样？实际的收获很少，学习耽误了；不要玩网络游戏，这个象吸毒一样，容易上瘾，想戒就难了；不要看不健康内容，这个是犯罪的导火索。学习方面的在学校教师指导下，家长监督下还是可以“开阔眼界”的。

Today is Christmas Eve once a year. We have three at home. We burn delicious hot pot in the kitchen for mom, dad and I are in the sitting room decorate the Christmas tree together.

First of all, my father and I put the branches stretching, then put the tree is installed on a tripod.

Finally, my father and I put the small bells, Musical Instruments, gifts, fawn, Santa Claus, bowknot, five-pointed star and snowflake decorations hanging in the branches. Also has a long string of colorful lights around the branch.

A: wow! A beautiful Christmas tree appeared in front of our eyes, just like that. The mother of hot pot also burn well. The three of us to sit down and eating hot pot, hot side sing Christmas songs, was quite happy!

今天是一年一次的圣诞平安夜。我们一家三口开开心心地在家里。妈妈在厨房为我们烧美味可口的火锅，我和爸爸在客厅一起装饰圣诞树。

首先，我和爸爸把树枝舒展开来，然后把树安装在一个三角架上。最后，我和爸爸把一个个铃铛、乐器、礼物、小鹿、圣诞老人、蝴蝶结、五角星、雪花的装饰用品挂在树枝上。还把一长串五彩缤纷的彩灯绕在树枝上。

哇!一棵美丽的圣诞树就这样出现在我们的眼前。这时妈妈的火锅也烧好了。我们三人坐下来一边吃着热腾腾的火锅，一边唱着圣诞节的歌曲，真是太开心了!

My Friend-我的朋友

John is the most diligent student in our class.He is one of my friends.As a matter of fact,he gets along with his classmates.He might spend just five to ten minutes talking to you once in a long while,but he talks with enthusiasm and energy,and he likes to share his thinking and ideas with you.He is honest; he does not like to waste his time and energy.He never appears sleepy and tired in the classroom.He always hands in homework on time and also does well in his examinations,yet he has time practicing playing football and his violin skill.I admire him.I hope I can be as diligent as he is; John is persistent,attentive,and energetic.

John是我们班上最勤奋的学生.他也是我的一个朋友.实际上,他和班上的同学相处的都很融洽.也许过好长时间他才只是花5分钟或10分钟和你聊天,但是他的谈话充满了活力和热情,而且他喜欢和你分享他的思想和想法.他是诚实的,他不会无谓的浪费他的时间和精力.在教室里,他从没有显得困倦或是疲惫.他常常会按时交作业,考试中也会取得好成绩,然而他仍会有时间踢足球和练小提琴.我羡慕他,我希望自己能象他那样勤奋.John是个执着、专注、充满活力的人

[题目是我的朋友的英语作文及翻译

我的家庭

Hello, everyone, welcome to my home. Ma Chi I am positive and optimistic, I am a boy, I was nine years old and a half. My birthday is November 26, so I can eat delicious cake soon. There are five people in my family: look, my grandfather, my grandmother, my father mother and I. Although I dont have a brother and sister, but I live also very happy. Our house is very spacious, there are two bedrooms, a living room and a new study.My grandma and grandpa are nomads, but its already retired, they look very young, I hope they healthy forever.My father is a very good driver, hes tall and strong and has a kind heart. My mother is a particularly good secretary, shes hard-working and ingenuity.I am a lively and active fifth-grade elementary school students, but we like to play volleyball, table tennis, also enjoy doing manual, rollerblading. I love to eat pineapple, sweet and sour, it is very delicious. There are many books in our house, I also love reading all the more, every weekend I would forget all about eating and sleeping.My mom and dad love me very much, I also love them very much. Dad at leisure, sometimes will take our family of five to foreign travel, mountain climbing, climbing in the desert. As long as you are a free and I will give them to tell jokes, let them relax. Grandma and grandpa kua I am a sensible child, every time at this moment, my heart joy bloom.I hope everyone has such a harmonious family.

大家好，欢迎来我家做客。我就是积极乐观的马驰，我是一个男孩，我已经九岁半了。我的生日是十一月二十六日，所以我马上就可以吃到美味可口的蛋糕了。我们家有五口人：瞧，我的爷爷、我的奶奶、我的爸爸妈妈和我。虽然我没有哥哥和姐姐，但我生活得也很快乐。我们家非常宽敞，有两个卧室、一个客厅和一个新书房。我的爷爷奶奶都是牧民，不过已经退休了，他们看上去很年轻，我希望他们永远健康。我爸爸是一名非常棒的司机，他又高又壮而且心地善良。我妈妈是一个特别优秀的秘书，她勤快而且心灵手巧。我是一位活泼好动的五年级小学生，我们但喜欢打排球、乒乓球，还喜欢做手工、滑旱冰。我最爱吃菠萝，它又酸又甜，非常好吃。我们家有许多书，我也格外爱看书，一到周末我就看得废寝忘食。我的爸爸妈妈非常爱我，我也非常爱他们。有时爸爸清闲了，就会带我们一家五口去外地旅游、登山、爬沙漠。而我只要一有空就会给他们讲笑话，让他们轻松一下。爷爷奶奶夸我是个懂事的孩子，每当这时，我的心里乐开了花。我希望每个人都有这么和睦的家庭。

[我的家庭英语作文中英文翻译

My classroom is nice and big . There are fort desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What colour are the fans ? They are blue. At the coner, there is a shelf , many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much.

This is my classroom , it is very nice. I like m classroom very much . Do you have a nice classroom, too ?

我的教室是非常大。堡有课桌和椅子在教室里。有两块黑板在墙上。有两张图片。我的教室有11盏灯和12个风扇。风扇是什么颜色的?他们是蓝色的。锥形筒子络筒机,有一个书架,许多书在书架上。我非常喜欢那些书。

这是我的教室,它很漂亮。我非常喜欢m教室。你有一个漂亮的教室吗?

[英语作文我的教室翻译

July 9 2009

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常渴望。

[小学生英语日记带翻译

初中三年，说短也短，说长也长。初一我们各自载着梦想，聚在一起。毕业之后，我们也许会分散各处，放飞梦想。

还记得xx年的金秋，我带着紧张的心情来到这片校园。还记得当初与同学欢声笑语的样子，记得我们集体冲向饭堂的雄伟场面，记得我们在球场上的奋勇拼搏……

XX发来信息给我说，虽然以前大家在一起，大小矛盾都有过，可是更看重的是更多时刻的欢笑声，大家那纯纯的友谊。其实以前的矛盾早已抛到了九霄云外，回想即将过去的初中时代，即将结束，实在不舍。

可是要知道，我们并未分离，我们的友谊是另一个新的开始，我们不是还发着短信，在QQ上聊天，我们的友谊也从未断过啊！

下一刻，我们会有新的环境，慢慢的，我们也会变得更加成熟起来。无论时事如何变迁，无论是电话还是短信，无论学习工作如何繁忙，无论在天涯还是咫尺，让友谊常在。

聚也不是开始，散也不是结束，同窗数载凝成无数美好瞬间，将永远珍藏在我们的记忆之中。伴着这些珍贵的记忆，我们就不会分离！

导语：再过不久我们就要毕业了，毕业之际你有什么想说的吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

在高中即将毕业之际，用英语给自己的学弟学妹们写一封信。信中应包括以下内容：一、高中三年的收获。二、在此期间你的不足之处或遗憾。三、大学生活即将面临的挑战。四、对高一高二学弟学妹们的建议。注意词数150左右，开头与结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

Dear schoolmates,

As I am graduating, Id like to write this letter to express my feelings before leaving school. As for me, it is the school life that colors my daily life. During the three years, I had a good time with teachers and classmates who were in favor of me. Besides, there is no doubt that I achieved lots of knowledge and skills which are good for my future study.

Nevertheless, there are also some things that I regret about. For instance, wasting too much time playing computers, I spent a little time in studying. Moreover, I regret arguing with my friends when I was in a low spirit.

Gone are the days when I studied in high school. Needless to say, there are many challenges in university where I will start my new life. Therefore, I should make every effort to study in university.

Here is some advice for you to take. Under no circumstances should you waste time doing things that arent linked with study. Apart from this, its high time that you should spare no effort to get good marks at school.

Good luck to all of you!

Yours

【参考译文】

亲爱的同学们，

在我毕业的时候，我想写这封信来表达我在离开学校之前的感受。对于我来说，正是学校生活给我的生活带来了色彩。在这三年里，我和老师和同学们相处得很愉快，他们都支持我。此外，毫无疑问，我获得了许多知识和技能，这对我以后的学习很有好处。

不过，也有一些事情，我很遗憾。例如，浪费太多时间玩电脑，我花了一点时间学习。而且，我很后悔和我的朋友在我情绪低落的时候吵架。

我在高中学习的日子一去不复返了。不用说，在大学里有许多挑战，我将开始我的新生活。因此，我应该尽一切努力在大学学习。

这里有一些建议给你。在任何情况下你都不应该浪费时间去做与学习无关的事情。除此之外，到了你应该不遗余力地在学校取得好成绩的时候了。

祝你们好运!

你的XXX

In march in the wet air spring, I always imagine a picture: garden outside on the grass with small yellow and purple, the middle of the courtyard of the cherry tree tree tree full of flowers to bloom in a warm southerly breeze slowly, in the replacement of the four seasons of green fruit with wide bilge painful expression, from shiny branches grow out of it. Six in the middle of the night of spring, the old cat cant sleep all night, under the tree stamping, swan couples, bark, and the ducks who teams in pairs to fly to the moon.

And I always wake up in the middle of the night, look at the moon rose down-stairs branches long painting on the pebbles, which are covered with buds of green, please.

In the middle of the night I heard the spring is static. Lingering in the ear, there is a special sound short, and want to pour a spoonful of sugar into the tea when the sound, it should be a light rain slapping on to the leaves on the trees. They are reminiscent of the day the road leading to the village.

"Sand sand sand......", in the darkness, forming a slow rhythm.

Slow is composed in B minor. Followed the path of the night and smooth.

On the grass in the spring, filled with fluffy dandelion, with a light yellow colour and lustre, clusters into a cluster to hide.

Like the raindrops in the air.

Dont disturb them. Heavy sleep sleep. Gentle wind rustled gradually forming the flowers. In the gentle spring.

"But you and I as a life hasnt been crying, and gets a long sleep time."

Its just my fantasy. Can you see?

"-- - I can see it."

在三月春天濡湿的空气里，我总想象着一幅画面：花园外面的草地上开满了黄色和紫色的小花，院子当中的樱桃树树上满树的花都从熏风里缓慢地绽放，在四季的更替里青色的果子带着张大的胀痛表情，从发亮的枝条里长出来。春天的深夜六，老猫整夜不能安睡，在树下跺着步，天鹅夫妇发出叫声，而野鸭子们成队成对地向月亮飞去。

而我总在深夜醒来，看月亮把楼下的蔷薇的枝条长长地画在卵石上，那上面长满了青请的花苞。

我在深夜里，听见了春天的静。萦绕在耳边的，有一种声音特别短促，想一勺糖倒进红茶时发出的声音一样，那应该是小雨拍打到树上的叶子的声音。它们让人想起了白天那些引领着道路通向小区的梧桐树。

“沙……沙……沙”，在夜幕里，形成一段缓慢的旋律。

缓慢是沉稳的B小调。循着夜的轨迹滑着。

在春天的草地上，长满了毛茸茸的蒲公英，带着一种淡黄的色泽，成簇成簇拥挤地隐藏着。

像是空气中的雨滴。

没有惊扰。沉沉眠眠。温柔的风拂过逐渐成形的花海。在温和的春里。

“而你我如同尚未啼哭的生命，时光切不断绵长的沉眠。”

这一切只是我的幻想。你看得见么?

“―――我看得见。”

I came back to school after the summer vacation. As soon as I settled down, I made a phone call to my mother. When I talked to her, I could not hold back my tears. “After all,” I said, “You’re my mother.”

During the vacation, mother and I had a quarrel. After that we were unwilling to talk with each other. She thought I was her sweet daughter and I believed that she did not respect me. Then after few days, I left home. My mother gave me a full package of home-make food and she said to me, “I cook this morning, take this then you can have it on the train.” However, I refuse to take it. I just turned away and slam the door without saying goodbye to my mother. I was still angry about her. “You’re still my good girl.” My mother said in a low voice chocked with sob.

On the train I could not eat anything, I felt terrible. How I wish I had said sorry to my mother before I left. Now all I want to say is, will you forgive me, my dear mother?

暑假结束后，我回到了学校。我一稳定下来，我就立刻打电话给我的母亲。当我和她说话时，眼睛止不住流了下来。我对她说，“毕竟，你是我的母亲。”

在假期的时候，我和妈妈吵了一架。从那以后我们都不愿意和对方说话了。她认为我不再是那个甜美可爱的女孩了。几天后，我就离开了家。走之前，妈妈给了我一大包自己做的食品，她对我说：“我今早煮的，你拿着在火车上吃吧。”然后，我拒绝了妈妈的一片好心。然后我转过身狠狠的摔上门走了。也没有对她说再见。我还在生她的气。“你依旧是我的好女儿。”她用低沉的声音抽泣着说。

在火车上我吃不下任何东西，我感觉很内疚。我真希望在离家之前对我妈妈说声抱歉啊。现在我只想说：我最亲爱的母亲，你愿意原谅我么？

[我的母亲英语作文以及翻译

how are you, i call xx.this year is 22 years old.graduate from xxxx college.the profession is a calculator multimedia.i am one is bright, optimism, there is the person of responsibility.a fondness for plays basketball, computer, listen to music, etc..thankful your company gives me this the opportunity of the personal interview!

中文版：你好，我叫xx。今年22岁。毕业于xxxx学院。专业是计算机多媒体。我是一个开朗，乐观，有责任心的人。爱好打篮球，电脑，听音乐，等。感谢贵公司给我这次面试的机会!

As a middle school student,I dont have much free time,but I still have a lot of things to do.

I like listening to music and reading,so in my free time,I always listening to music and search the Internet for about half-hour.Its a good way to relax myself.I always do some reading before go to bed.Besides,I always go to swimming after school.Exercises help me to keep healthy and do good to my study.As the same as other students,I often watch TV in the evening,but I have to finish my homework first.

At the weekends,I will help my mother with the housework,such as clean the house,do some washing.

作为一个中学生,我没有太多的时间,但我仍然有很多事情要做。

我喜欢听音乐和读书,所以在我的空闲时间,我总是听音乐和上网大约半个小时。这是一个放松自己的好方法。上床睡觉前我总是做一些阅读。此外,放学后我经常去游泳。运动帮助我保持健康,善待我的学习。和其他学生一样,我经常在晚上看电视,但我必须先完成我的家庭作业。

在周末,我将帮助我的妈妈做家务,如打扫房子,洗衣服。

[我的空余时间 My Free Time初一英语作文带翻译

Go to an Academy

Date:Sun.，Mar.12 Waether:Cloudy

I do badly in math.

So I decided to go to the ABC academy.

I took an extracurricular lesson in math there.

It was hard for me to follow the lesson.

I wish I could do well in math.

参加补习班

日期：3月12日 星期日 天气：多云

我数学很差。

所以我决定参加ABC补习班。

我在那里上数学补习课。

我很难跟上课程。

我希望自己能学好数学。

[小学英语日记附翻译

My fathers name is ____. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old. My father is a worker. Heworks in a factory. He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms. He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn a lot English from the program Outlook English at that channel.

English is my fathers good friend. I am my father?s friend, too.

【参考翻译】

我的父亲叫__。他有一个英文名字,杰克。他今年38岁，是一个工人。他工作在一个工厂。他有两个大眼睛和两个大耳朵。他有短的头发。我的父亲是非常瘦。他只有50公斤。他非常喜欢学习英语。他每天都学英语。我的父亲喜欢看电视。他最喜欢的电视频道是CCTV-10,因为他可以学到很多英语的项目前景的英语频道。

英语是我父亲的好朋友。我也是我父亲的好朋友。

Looking For MUM

Diddy - Dirty Money

She says looking for love

All the girls in the club know wussup

She said she undercover though

and this is what she want

t me higher in this mother fucker

t me flying in this mother fucker

Ready to die up in this mother fucker

t damn, she badder than a mother fucker.

make a movie!

Two superstars,

To big body coupes,

avatars

[英语毕业优秀作文精选

以下是英文写作翻译频道为大家整理的《简单英语作文翻译：关于运动会的谈话》，供大家参考。

Hi,Jack,we’re going to have our school sports meeting on the playground next week.It will last three days from Thursday to Saturday.We have many competitions in running,such as 100-metre race,200-metre race,400-metre race and the .Please be on time,wear your sports shoes and take a bottle of water. Good luck to you!

嗨，杰克，我们要有我们学校的运动会在操场上下周。它将从星期四持续到星期六三天。我们在跑步比赛，如100米跑，200米跑，400米跑和接力赛。我们也有跳远，跳高等等。我知道你很擅长跑步。请参加男子400米的比赛， 星期五上午10:30，请准时，穿上你的运动鞋，带上一瓶水。祝你好运！

Im Li Xin. Haiyan wrote a letter to his friend asking him not to write for

a long time, but I still miss him very much, because we are good friends. You

went to Yanan a few weeks ago and stayed there for a few days.

You visited ancient tombs, pagoda mountain, scenic spots, and climbed

mountains. According to many photos, Haiyan picked up pebbles and happily told

his friend Haiyan that my English teacher was very good, but She was ill for two

weeks, and a teacher took her place. Cui Cuis teachers were very young, but

they had a good class.

They also had to participate in the teaching game with us. I will study

harder. I believe that relying on hard work, I will get excellent results and

reply quickly.

中文翻译：

我是李昕，海燕给朋友写了一封信，问海燕，告诉他不要写很久了，但还是非常想念他，因为我们是好朋友，几周前你去延安旅游，并在那里呆了几天，游览了古墓、宝塔山、景点，还爬山，根据很多照片，捡起鹅卵石，高兴地告诉朋友海燕我的英语老师很好，但她生病两个星期，由一位老师代她上课，崔翠的老师都很年轻，但上课很好，还要和我们一起参与教学的游戏我会更加努力地学习，我相信，依靠努力一定会取得优异的成绩，快速回复。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。