初三这个冬天很温暖的作文实用2篇 作文英语（推荐20篇）

There are four seasons in a year, each season has different view, and I like winter best the grandeur of the snow. In winter, people like snowing came to a quiet and tastefully laid out and quiet realm, came to a glistening thoroughly tick fairy tale world. The scent of pine, the ice snow sweet, give a person a kind of cold sky of comfort. Everything is in filtration, everything in the sublimation, even my heart also in purification, become pure and good.

Dusk snow, deep cut of, seem to have emotions, like the sea surging again, can drown all, there was a uncover CangTouLouWei sense of nudity. Snowflakes all forms, were shining brilliantly, like war fighter, covered with silver armor, and like the pieces of white sails on the voyage...

So that the snow scenery magnificent, between heaven and earths a uniform color, can only see a piece of silver, as if the whole world is decorated with silver.

The continuous snow shoveling, decorated with the world, China jade leaf, pink outfit build by laying bricks or stones jade, white color, is really a snow did good gratifying spectacle.

I love snow, I love snow, I love winter more. Winter is the rings of the mind. Winter, although very cold, but it has incomparable warmth and hope.

一年有四个季节，每个季节都有不同的景色，而我最喜欢冬天下雪时的壮丽景色。冬天，大雪纷飞人们好象来到了一个幽雅恬静的境界，来到了一个晶莹透剔的童话般的世界。松的那清香，白雪的那冰香，给人一种凉莹莹的抚慰。一切都在过滤，一切都在升华，连我的心灵也在净化，变得纯洁而又美好。

黄昏的雪，深切切的，好象有千丝万缕的情绪似的，又像海水一般汹涌，能够淹没一切，还有一丝揭开藏头露尾般的裸露感。雪花形态万千、晶莹透亮，好象出征的战士，披着银色的盔甲，又像是一片片白色的战帆在远航……

雪中的景色壮丽无比，天地之间浑然一色，只能看见一片银色，好象整个世界都是用银子来装饰而成的。

雪后，那绵绵的白雪装饰着世界，琼枝玉叶，粉装玉砌，皓然一色，真是一派瑞雪丰年的喜人景象。

我爱白雪，我爱雪景，我更爱冬天。冬天是心灵的年轮。冬天，虽然十分寒冷，但是它有着无可比拟的温馨和希望。

母爱是一种无私的力量，它像春天的甘霖，滋润我们这些懵懂的少年;它像坚硬的石头，为我们遮风挡雨;它像冬天的火把，让我们感到温暖。

那个冬天的夜，我因穿少了衣服而发烧，妈妈来不急穿棉衣就背着我往楼下跑，由于到了深夜，街上没有的士，妈妈只好背着我，迎着刺骨的寒风，向医院跑去，我看着妈妈单薄的身体，想：妈妈那么瘦，能承受得起我的重量吗?于是，我对妈妈说：“妈妈，你把我放下来，我能走!”“不要紧，妈妈背得起。”“我要自己走，这么大了还要背，丑死啦!”“不行，你要听妈妈的话。”我拗不过她，只好作罢。妈妈背着我又向医院跑去。

我感到妈妈的脚步越来越沉，速度也越来越慢。

终于到医院了，现在虽然是寒冬，可妈妈脸上挂满了豆大的汗珠，但她坚持把我送进注射室，医生把针刺进我的皮肤后，她才坐在椅子上休息。我吊点滴的时候，妈妈给我讲故事，从她的声音中，我听出她感冒了。不知不觉，两大品药水已经打完了。疲惫的妈妈又背我回家。

回到家，妈妈给我脱鞋，帮我洗手洗脸，又把我抱到床上，用手抚摸我的头，在妈妈的呵护下，我很快进入了梦乡……

啊!母爱，如果你是一片海，我就是你的一滴水;如果你是一片草原，我就是你的一棵小草;如果你是一片天，我就是你的一朵白云。

妈妈，我爱您!

一米阳光，那么暖，温柔地牵着我走向远方。——题记

温暖，使我的心不再孤寂;温暖，使人生路上有了陪伴;温暖，使我不怕前方有黑暗，感受温暖，心中，充满光明的力量……

犹记孩提时，我和妈妈漫步于一片花海之中。我的小手牵着妈妈的大手，阳光牵着花香，一齐向深处走去。我稚嫩的小脸望向妈妈，她和煦的笑容如一米阳光。我们的笑声，一路轻扬。

我采下几朵花来，踮着脚尖高举着淡粉浅紫，妈妈会意一笑，嘴角微微上扬，轻轻蹲下，任我插于她的发间。然后突然跑到一丛花后面，等待妈妈来找到我后，继续跑。整个天空与整片花海，在这一刻，只是幸福与快乐的背景而已。

我奔跑着，笑着;妈妈追赶着，笑着。笑脸与笑脸之间，勾勒出彼此在一起，温暖的时光。那花的香，竟透过时光，萦绕在鼻间。是我在迎面的寒风之中仍然能嗅到花香中的暖意。花香，牵着与妈妈在一起的共同时光。有了妈妈，我便有了依靠，有了温暖。

在轻松与愉悦中，童年的脚步渐行渐远。我开始不再牵着妈妈的手过街，可以独来独往了。

那天依旧打算自己回家。我收拾好书包，像往常一样漫不经心地走下楼来。却见秋雨肆意地冲刷着大地。妈妈去加班了，不会来接我，我知道。

天地沉沉地的压在心上，雨打在手上，滑进袖管，刺骨的冰凉漫延开来。车轮飞快的划过，溅起我对妈妈的盼望。我不甘心地眺望远方，还在盼着妈妈开车会来。

雨势不减，我犹豫着迈下台阶。这时，车的灯光打在了我的身上，是妈妈!是我心里呼唤千万遍的妈妈啊!

车中的温度，使我的眼镜起了雾，也正包围着我的心。

“多喝点热水吧。”眼前又见妈妈如一米阳光般和煦的笑容。有一颗融入温暖的心，在冷雨里，散发着它的温度，驱逐着寒冷。

一米阳光的笑容，就是那杯关怀的温暖，永远存温于心中。

无论我站在风雨里或拐角处，总有一米阳光的温暖陪伴，温柔地牵着我走向远方……

天空阴沉沉的，无力的我骑着自行车，顶着大风，朝家的方向驶去……

回家的一路上，路旁的树木被吹得发出婆娑声，轿车从我的身边一闪而过，留下的只有“呜”的一声马达声。它们似乎在责怪我。

到了家中，我那全是汗水的双手拿着英语试卷，走到房中，一头扎进了被子中去。“马上准备吃饭，我今天烧了许多你最爱吃的，红烧鸡翅、清蒸鲤鱼……”只见母亲小心翼翼地伸进房间一本正经地说道。“没胃口，你们先吃吧！”我厌烦地嚷道。

这时，窗外传来了一阵阵孩童的嬉闹的，显然，那已经不再属于我。但我感受了温暖。

来到餐厅，只见父母还是坐在那儿，桌子上还盛了一碗饭。我慢慢挪动身体，轻轻走到了桌前，端起饭碗，大口大口地吃着这丰盛的晚餐。如同一位几天没吃饭的人一样。

父亲开始询问我考试的感觉如何，我只是默不作声，继续吃着晚餐。饭后，我看了会儿书，然后很早进入了梦乡，在梦中，我似乎也在责备自己没将英语试卷给们看。

今天一早，我就看到了一张便利贴贴在了门上，它像一条爆炸性新闻，进入了我的耳中。上面写着，孩子，我们知道你学习压力大，现在学习也很用功，感觉不好不算什么，你应该像勾践一样，遇到困难，积极面对。——爸妈看完便条，我感受到了温暖，使我重拾信心，迎接考试。

温暖在我的身边。它无处不在。风小了，不再是那么凶怒，树木也显现出了它的生机。

[温暖就在身边初三写事作文

“呼呼呼”呼啸的寒风不停地击打着我的脸庞，漆黑的夜里不带一点光亮，以往闪闪发光的路灯在寒风下也变得那么不堪一击。那张烂透了的试卷，让回家的路变得更加渺茫。

不知走了多久，猛的一抬头却发现妈妈在寒风中站着。突然她像是看见了珍珠似的眼睛冒了光大步流星的向我走来“回来这么晚吖，我给你打电话了咋不接?"我从兜里掏出手机一看3个未接电话。”奥...我开震动了，没听着。““妈妈给你做了好多好吃的菜，快走。”说着，她一把抓住我的手跑回家里去。

我感到有点诧异，咋回事吖，怎么也不批评我反而还奖励我。吃过饭我开始写作业，她像是憋在嘴后的话都涌出来了似的对我说：”这次考试...“她刚说这几个字我就深深的低下了头，不敢直视她，也不敢面对自己。“这次考试考得不太理想吖。”“恩。”“没事，别泄气，不是还有一次考试呢吗?下回别犯同样的错不就行了。”说罢，她离开了。我的眼泪差一点就要从眼睛里涌出来，可还是忍了回去。

是吖，别泄气，初三了，是最考验耐力的时候，只要不放弃就一定能战胜困难还有自己。妈妈，谢谢您，谢谢您在我难受的时候给我鼓励，谢谢您在我迷茫的时候给了我方向，谢谢您，我亲爱的妈妈!

if we have a book ,we will not be felling of being longly

如果我们有一本书，我们将不会被孤独的感觉

When I`m free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, I`ve put my heart into it so that I`ll forget all the troubles. It`s in this way that I`ve formed the habit of reading in any time.

当我`米自由或麻烦，我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候，我`已经把我的心让我`会忘记所有的烦恼。它`的这样，我`已经形成在任何时间阅读的习惯。

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

当我还是小孩子时，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学，我开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。

Reading “The Emperor`s New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldn`t keep me from crying for her misery. “ Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Keller`s patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didn`t before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

阅读“皇帝的新衣`”，我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。“卖火柴的小女孩”也`却令我痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒`的耐心和毅力……除此之外，本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人，如何分辨对与错。总之，好的书籍可以让我知道我并`之前。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。

I`ll never forget this famous saying,“ Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”

我`永远不会忘记这句名言，“好书是最好的朋友，谁不背对我们。”

I have a dream that I can stay young forever. Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want. Moreover， I dont have to worry about the old age during which I even cant take care of myself. I know that my dream will not come true. However， I think it is lucky that I am young now. So I will treasure my time， enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.

冬天是寒冷的，在这个季节里，几乎所有的动物都在它们的巢里过冬，树木们都失去了它们往日的茂密，森林也失去了夏日的生机勃勃。在这寒冷的冬天依然存在着一种人间的温暖，这种温暖在寒冷的冬天里显得格外明显。

在一个寒风呼啸的早晨我从甜美的梦想里苏醒，发现自己已经被发烧缠了身，我感觉我的体内好像有一个火球，又热又难受，我的喉咙沙哑的发出了声音：“妈妈快来。”我妈妈听见了我的声音，迅速跑来，妈妈看见我痛苦不堪的样子，询问我哪里不舒服，我对妈妈说：“我好像发烧了，快拿药来。”我妈妈拿了几片治感冒发烧的常用药给我，然后给我量了一下体温，我的体温竟然达到了38℃，我妈妈立刻带我去了就近的一家医院，在路上，寒风刮着我和妈妈的脸，就这几分钟的路程，我干就走了好久，终于到了医院，医院的暖气解开了在路上的寒冷，医生给我开过药回家后我妈妈细心的照顾我，一天后，我再次从梦里醒来，我发现我的病已经好了，这多亏我妈妈的细心照顾。

每一天放学，妈妈都会说这样的话：“今天你冷不冷，热不热，用不用再添加一点衣服。”这说明了母亲对我们温暖的关爱。

在冬天，总会有这样的温暖哪怕只是妈妈的一句话关心的话，也会让我的这个冬天非常的温暖。

When the flowers of the spring of the past; when the summer sun in the past; when the fruits of the fragrance of the fall in the past, the winter came, the winter line of light walking line.

From now on, people no longer feel the sunny sunshine; feel the summer sun scorching; also do not feel the fall of the autumn breeze, we can only feel the winter came!

In the morning, filled with fog. Milky white fog covered the earth, everywhere a vast expanse of white, walking on the road, dozens of steps away to see the silhouette. Looked from the fog can only see the car on the road lights flashing. Walking people full of red, facing the cold wind, step by step to go. Some people cold handle into the trousers pocket; some hand over his mouth blowing gas. Although the weather is cold, but the camphor on the road is still tall and straight. Tall enough to give some green in the winter sky.

Winter came, winter came, it brought the sky of the mist, brought the cold wind, the pace of winter slowly into our side.

Environment is a basic human existence conditions, if we destroy the environment, it is ruined our survival conditions.

At present, the ecological environment is becoming more and more bad, is the greatest influence on our water resources. According to the relevant information reported: the laying of drainage system and detergent used to grow, consume the oxygen in the water, fish died, deterioration of ecosystem. Human activities can make a lot of industrial and agricultural pollutants into the water, the water is polluted. The world each year about 4200 sewage into the river, polluting the 5. 5 trillion of fresh water.

This is how the startling fact, protect the environment is everyone duty, why want to destroy?

Lies a small river near my grandmas home, on the bottom, before my sister and brother in ones childhood often swimming in the river, and their friends to play in the water, uncles and aunts are often in the river to wash clothes, wash dishes, and now, near the river built a chemical plant, the production of waste water discharge into the river, originally the bottom stream gradually turned into a black sending out the smell of the river. The adults never go to the river to wash clothes to wash the dishes, friends never go to the river to play, too!

How I miss the crystal-clear stream! I think: cherish resources, good care environment, these are GongZaiDangDai, force and art event! If we are in such polluted water, that we can use water resources will be less and less, we destroy the environment, is destroying our living conditions.

Let us join hands to jointly protect the environment, dont let water into water, protect the environment, is our common responsibility!

环境是一个人类生存最基本的条件，如果我们破坏了环境，这等于破坏了我们生存的条件。

目前，生态环境日益恶劣，对我们影响最大的就是水资源。据有关资料报道：排水系统的铺设和清洁剂的使用有增无减，消耗水中的氧，使鱼类死亡，生态系统恶化。人类的活动会使大量的工业、农业污染物排入水中，使水受到污染。全世界每年约有4200多亿的污水排入河中，污染了5。5万亿的淡水。

这是多么让人触目惊心的事实啊，保护环境是人人有责的，为什么要破坏呢?

我外婆家附近有一条小河，以前清澈见底，我的姐姐、哥哥小时候常常在小河里游泳，和他们的小伙伴们在水中嬉戏，叔叔、阿姨们也常常在这小河中洗衣服、洗菜，而如今，小河旁建造了一个化工厂，把生产的废水排放到河里，原本那清澈见底的小河渐渐变成了黑黑的散发着怪味的小河。大人们再也不去小河洗衣服洗菜了，小伙伴们也再也不去河里嬉戏!

我多么怀念那条清澈见底的小河啊!我想：珍惜资源，爱护环境，这些都是功在当代、力及千秋的大事啊!如果我们在这样污染水，那我们可以用的水资源就会越来越少，我们破坏环境，就是破坏我们生存的条件。

让我们携起手来，共同保护环境，不要让淡水变成污水，保护环境，是我们共同的责任!

Snow, fluttering leisurely shed, my heart, with it, also shed it. This snow, the next is very anxious, and soon, on the ground, the tree ... ... have become the site of the Queen of ice and snow. White playground, white roof, white trees, everything is so immaculate. Step up, soft, but also issued creaky sound, the ground seems to be covered with a layer of silver yarn, it seems that all of a sudden can pull up. On the roof, a touch of snow, a snow, a snowball. Wearing a silver hat of the tree stands in the snow; wearing silver yarn building stands in the sky snow, cute me, running in the white path. Thick snow, so that my soles of white; white snow, so I surging; pure snow, my day really open the heart; holy snow, let me wait in front of the snow before the door.

I walk in the white path, carrying a bag to go home and run quickly. I am eager to finish the homework early, to the snow once his style. And rounds.s.ithers. Refers to rounds.eredithers.ither nights calling roundsy swellsy swellas nights views L.

冬天来了，家中要数妈妈最开心了，冬天里有她的生日，当然，我也很开心，因为冬天有圣诞节。12月4日是我妈妈的生日，我早早地准备好礼物，在生日当天送给她，她会露出开心的笑容。今年也不例外，跟往常一样，我给妈妈准备了一张贺卡和我亲手编的挂件，还多了一个千纸鹤。我欢喜的将生日礼物送给妈妈，并对她说：“生日快乐！”妈妈接过盒子，先是愣了一下，以为我就送她一个盒子，没想到打开盒子一看，竟有那么多精美的礼物。妈妈对爸爸说：“女儿真乖，每年都会亲手制作礼物给我，太感动了。”妈妈当着爸爸的面表扬我，我也很开心。

冬天到了，圣诞节也不远了，大大小小面包店里，放上了跟圣诞节有关的食物，比如圣诞饼干、圣诞蛋糕之类的，让人感觉圣诞节近在眼前。每到圣诞节，父母总会送孩子们礼物，让我们有了迎新年的幸福。去年，妈妈送了一大包我最爱吃的草莓棒棒糖，对于平时不能多吃糖果的我来说，这是多么珍贵的礼物。

今年，我的圣诞节礼物提早到了，昨天就送到我手里了。我本想圣诞节让妈妈请我上淘宝网买我想要的礼物呢，没想到，礼物就在我的床头了。那是我以前出去游玩时最想要的东西——玫瑰花香皂，打开紫色的心形礼盒，一阵玫瑰花香扑鼻而来，我看到整个盒子都铺满了淡紫色香皂玫瑰花，中间还有一只可爱的小熊，那浓浓的香味散布在我的睡房，让我觉得幸福满满！

冬天对我们来说，是一个互送礼物彼此温暖的季节，我送妈妈生日礼物，妈妈送我圣诞礼物。对于我们母女俩，每个冬天都是温暖的冬天。

Thuesday Nov. 16, 2016 Fine

I took my school report and came back home cautiously only to find mother wasnt at home. She went to my aunts and wou!d come back in the evcning. I knew that fiom a note on the table. I was still a little bit frightened as if mother would come back suddenly.

Seeing the low marks on the school report and remcmbering mothers cold face, I almost trembled with fear. lf mother know I got so low marks oa the subjects, especially English, she would tear all my cartoon books which are my fovourite. I have been treating them as my own life for a long time. But mother always thought cartoon diverted my attention from study and had a bad effect on me. Frankly speaking, I had realized it. Mother hated those books. She had warned me if I got low marks once more she would get rid of them. I Still wanted to keep those books even if I would mever touch them from then on. What should I do? I knew that any persuation was in vain. I would prevent mother from doing that.

A good idea stroke me. I gathered all the books and put them in a box. Then, I hid the box under my bed. Having done it carefully, I had a breathing spell.

Opening the English book, I sat at the desk and began to read. It was really the time that I learned English carefully, I thought.

[初三英语作文-Staying at Home Alone

I am a middle school student. I am active. I like going out to play.

Recently, I am fond of skating. I want a pair of skating shoes, but my mother doesn’t allow, because she worries about me to be hurt in playing. So, I want to find a part-time job to earn money to buy a pair of skating shoes. I am always free at weekends. During the weekday, I think I can’t have spare to work. I am tough and I am willing to do everything I can do.

Anyone has the information about part-time job, please recommend to me.

我是一名中学生。我很活泼开朗。我喜欢出去玩。

最近，我迷上了溜冰。我想要一双溜冰鞋，可是我妈妈不允许，因为她担心我会受伤。所以，我想找份兼职来挣钱买一双滑冰鞋。周末我一般都是有空的。星期一到星期五，我觉得我没有多余的时间工作。我很能吃苦耐劳的，而且我愿意做我能做的任何工作。

谁有关于兼职的信息，请向我推荐一下。

祈祷多下雪。

——题记

上海是个不怎下雪的城市，当冬天来到的时候。伴随着的只是阴冷的风和凝结而成的雨。对于雪来说，真是一场奢望。

还记得2008年的那场雪，在湖南死了几个人，当时从电视上看的时候，我正吃晚饭。看着那掩盖住人大腿的雪，艳羡之情溢于言表。

当然，那年上海也是下了雪的。只是薄薄地一层，而且很脏。

我拉着周先的手，说：我们堆雪人吧！哈哈！

你确定？她抖了抖眉毛，嘲讽道。

就这脏不垃圾，鸟不生蛋的破地方，就这脏不垃圾，薄地跟iPhone手机一样冰，你还想堆雪人？

而现在，上海却是被雪包裹着的。阴冷的风也席卷而来，但厚厚的雪铺盖在每一个角落，那种难以言喻的幸福感和新奇让我那颗向往已久的心也像枯树逢春，挂满了幸福。

我拾起一把雪，用手指把它揉成一个又一个的形状。大脚踩在乳白的雪上，我傻呵呵地对周先说：周先，你也玩啊。真好玩。

嗯。她低眉，漂亮的脸在乌黑的发下垂成一个弯弧。

我拉着她的手，四只脚死死地踩在雪上，每一步都是用了吃奶的力气。我的脸冻得通红，生了冻疮的手像是两只火红的猪蹄。

她也轻轻笑，对我说：冬雪，真好。

是啊。

只不过3天，雪下了三天，上海又恢复了那只有阴冷的风和凝结而成的雨的样子，那些雪都化作了冰冷的水流进了下水道。

来来往往的人又恢复了以前淡泊的样子，周先亦是如此。她倒没什么太大的留念，我倒是握着她的手叹长叹短的。

3天，我们学校的人好多人一起打雪仗，堆雪人，一起笑嘻嘻地玩。

那种新奇，那3天的幸福都结束了。

认识的，不认识的，都又安安静静地坐在自己的教室上着课。

全都不见了。

春天也提着裙子慌忙地来到，我无比苍凉的想为什么不多下几天呢？以后上海还会不会下雪呢？

我厌恶那阴冷的风，我厌恶上海的冬天。

而它们全又都扑向我的生命中。

全都存活着。

[上海的冬天_初三写事作文

That was a morning in the early of June. I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and ponds. The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern horizon. "There must be a heavy rain soon." I spoke to myself.

When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without wind. I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something tohappen. Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders following. Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind blew. soon the grass flattened under the wind and the rain. With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became bright. I took several deep breathes. I felt comfortable.

The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was over. The air was so fresh and the sky was so clear. I felt like a new man myself.

有的人喜欢春天，因为春天温暖、明媚而又灿烂;有的人则喜欢夏天，因为夏天火热、激情;还有的人喜欢秋天，因为秋天凉爽、舒适。可我却喜欢家乡的冬天，以为我们家乡的冬天是深沉，是欢快，是生机勃勃的。 Some people like spring, because spring is warm, bright and brilliant;Because autumn is cool and comfortable.But I like the winter of my hometown, thinking that the winter of our hometown is deep, cheerful, and vibrant.

冬天刚一来临，雪白的雪花就向我们报告，冬天来了。顽皮的雪花耐不住寂寞，想早点来人间看风景，所以还没等季节爷爷允许，就私自落下人间。有的落在了树木上，有的落在了田野里，有的落在房顶上，还有的碰巧落在行人的帽子上。后来，季节爷爷知道了，可是又无可奈何，只得叫它的部下北风婆婆去人间查访。北风婆婆刚到人间，其它的雪花也就迫不及待地飘落下来。慢慢地，雪越来越大，边堆积起来，铺成洁白的地毯。慢慢地，房顶也堆积起厚厚的雪，远远看去，房顶上像铺了一层香喷喷的白色奶油蛋糕。

你瞧!那树梢在不知不觉中堆积了一点簿雪，远远看去，就像在树梢长着雪白色的梨花。慢慢地，生命力旺盛的小草也挡不住白雪的覆盖，盖上了一层厚厚的棉被。田野里，雪花也照下不误，把有些农作物盖在自己的身体下，生怕它们伤着。民间有句话：今年麦盖三层被，来年枕着馒头睡。不一会儿，绚丽多彩的村庄变成了白雪皑皑的世界。在着粉妆玉砌的世界里我们看到了白色的大自然，这也是我们农村孩子引以为傲的，因为生活在城市里，也未必能看到这么美的景色。

这白色的世界，也是孩子们的游乐场。打雪仗，堆雪人，互相打闹、追逐和嬉戏。那哈哈的笑声使我们忘记了寒冷，那白雪的世界使我们已忘记天色已晚。

我爱冬天，我爱家乡的冬天，你爱你家乡的冬天吗?

一个严冬的傍晚，因天晚得早，放学时，天已经蒙蒙黑了，西北风使劲地吹着，而我却推着瘪了胎的自行车，在寒风中焦急地走着。寒风吹透了我的棉衣，让我打着一阵一阵的寒颤。此时，我只希望快些找到一个修车铺，要不然我得步行一个多小时才能回到家。唉!

我是幸运的!这不，前面的车铺还亮着灯，我在心里大叫一声：“有救了!”推着车子我跑了过去。车铺的老板是一个瘦弱的男人，寒风把他的衣服吹得紧包着身子，那单薄的身影让人觉得有种心疼的感觉。他正在收拾着修车工具，眼看着刚刚整理好。“怎么办?”我忐忑地叫了一声：“师傅!”那个背影转过了身，那张布满皱纹的脸在昏暗的路灯的光线下，没有一丝血色。“我的车胎被扎破了，能不能——帮忙修一下?”我试探性地问。(因为到了吃晚饭的时候，大部分人都急着赶回家，况且外面的温度又是这样低，谁会为赚我这一点小钱而留下来了呢?)但修车人并没有说话，只是把已收好的工具默默地拿了出来，慢慢地向我走来。他蹲下身子，用长满老茧的手捏了捏被扎破的车胎，然后缓缓地站起来，用手将车子扳倒，他认真地修起车来。很快，车子修好了。我松了一口气，将手伸进了口袋……啊!猛然间我想起：口袋里的那点零钱我不是在课间买了零食?当时还够慷慨的，请了两位好友共享。这下该怎么办?我万分后悔!怯怯地走近两步，嗫嚅着：“师傅，我……我现在身上没有钱，不过我明天一定会把钱给你送过来的。”说完，我小心地望了他两眼。他没有看我，只是说：“钱的事，以后再说，现在快点回家吧，别让父母担心了。”我身子猛地一抖，不过，这次并不是因为冷，而似乎是被电击了一下，一股暖流在我身子里流动。一位生活过得并不宽裕的老师傅，在寒风凛冽的傍晚，帮人修车而分文未取且能泰然处之，我对他的敬意油然而生!

西北风还在呼呼地吹着，但我却不再感到寒冷，这个冬天因这个修车师傅而不再寒冷……

语文课上，老师让同学们列两张清单，一张是自己抱怨的事，一张是自己感恩的事。

我将这两张清单罗列完之后又重新逐条看了一遍。抱怨的事中第一件就是快中考了。是啊，中考，在我的想法里早已被压力、担心、紧张等等等等里三层外三层地围了个水泄不通。而不可否认的是，在感恩清单上的第一件事也是中考，因为中考过后可以升到高一级学府，而且还有近两个月的长假，那是很令人期待的事啊。

可见，无论是抱怨还是感激，都有内在的联系。我憎恨考试，它让我时时刻刻都那么紧张;我厌恶父母永无休止的唠叨，使我不得尽事随意“开心颜”。但我感激一次又一次的考试，让我认清自己的不足，更感谢父母的唠叨，这些唠叨句句都是关爱，让我不会迷失，更不会在无垠的人生旷野上走丢。

我们之所以抱怨那么多的事情，是因为它们令我们身心俱疲，打击在我们的最软弱处最悲哀处。然而，我们是否想过正是这些磨练使我们的脆弱处变得坚忍，从而提升了自己。

所以，我们抱怨的那些事情，也正是我们最应该感激的啊!

感激不如意的成绩，感激令人疲惫的体能训练，感激父母的唠唠叨叨，感激即将到来的中考……这些曾经都是“抱怨清单”的住户，如今却在我的“感恩清单”上居住，并且是永驻!

同那么多的抱怨，挥手作别吧，让它们成为我们的感恩基石，感激它们的历练使我们得到了真真正正彻彻底底的成长。

In the language class, teacher lets schoolmates arrange in order two detailed lists, one matter which is complained, one matter which is feels grateful.after I displayed these two detailed lists, one by one looked again. In the complaint matter first was quick tests. Yes, tests, in mine idea by the pressure, the worry, anxious and so on and so on with huge crowds of people have already been encircled watertight. What but is undeniable, in feels grateful in the detailed list first matter is also tests, because will test might rise from now on to the high first-level school, will also have nearly two month-long long vacations, that will be makes the matter which very much one anticipated. is obvious, regardless of being the complaint or feels grateful, has the intrinsic relation. I hate the test, it lets me so be all the time anxious; I will loathe the parents forever endless talking incessantly, will cause me not to the completely matter be optional “the happy face”. But I feel grateful the test time and time again, lets me clearly recognize that own insufficiency, thank parents#39; talking incessantly, these will talk incessantly are show loving concern, let me not lose, will not walk in the boundless life wilderness loses.the reason that we complained that many matters, are because they make our body and mind to be all weary, attacks weakly in us place most sorrowful place. However, we whether to have thought is precisely these disciplines causes us frail place becomes endures, thus has promoted itself.therefore , we complained these matters, is also precisely we most should feel grateful! the gratitude unpleasant result, feels grateful the fatiguesome physical ability training, grateful parents#39; chattering, the gratitude soon arrives tests ......These once were “the complaint detailed list” inhabitant, now actually in I “feel grateful the detailed list” on to live, and will be will forever be stationed! with that many complaints, waves the hand makes farewell speech, enables them to become us to feel grateful the cornerstone, felt grateful they to enable us to grow true thorough informed and experienced.

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

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basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of

cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and

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Whats more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.