初三这个冬天很温暖的作文实用2篇 作文英语（经典20篇）

我的家乡在贵州遵义。家乡的冬天没有北方那么冷，更没有鹅毛大雪。

早晨，我打开窗帘，只见白茫茫的一片什么也看不见。啊，这雾好白好纯呀!

我走在路上，四周围静悄悄的，只是偶乐听见车子的嗽叭声和人们的叫卖声，却看不到踪影。路旁沾满露珠的草木在大雾中若隐若现，好像正与大雾争个高低。

到了上午十点多，大雾渐渐散开了。太阳从云中跳了出来，可是一点也不耀眼。后来，太阳升高了，放射出万道光芒。光芒照在沾满露珠的草木上，使草木变得波光粼粼一般了。

到了夜晚，街上没有一个人，公园、街道也变得更加宁静了，偶尔刮起一阵风使柳树摇曳着枝条。这时，公园边的灯发出微弱的光，映照在马路上，马路也变得更加宁静了。整个遵义又沉沉欲睡了。家乡的冬天很温暖，因为那里有我的亲人，我爱我的家乡，更爱我的亲人!

[家乡的冬天很温暖小学作文

The Spring Festival

This year,I had a exciting spring festival.Do you want to know about it?Let me tell you!

First,I went to ocean park with my family in Hongkong.It was very relaxing there.I ate the sea food.I played with the dolphins!

It was really happy there!

Then,we went to the Disneyland.It was very romantic.We enjoyed our selves there.It remind our mind to our childhood!If we will have another chance tour Hongkong.We will come there again!

This is my spring festival!What about you?

和煦的阳光伴随着冷冽的冬风来了，小草摇晃着脑袋，喃喃地说道：这是寒冷冬季;那枯黄的树叶，在风中盘旋摇曳着，无奈地摇了摇头说道：这是干涩的冬季……而我却觉得这是个温暖的冬季。

虽然这几天的温度在持续下降着，但庆幸的是，冬日下的阳光依旧灿烂明媚，我偶尔也会在阳光下独自享受着冬阳带给我的温暖。

这个冬季似乎显得有些不同寻常!没有下大雪，要是以往这个时候肯定已经是大雪纷飞，漫天都是风雪了，可现在却只有前两天下的几片飘雪罢了，根本就感觉不到一丝的寒意，并且我的心里总是还洋溢着一股暖意，要不是天天被妈妈叫多穿些衣服，我都忘了现在已经是冬天了，这是我第一次感觉到冬阳的温暖……

想当年我曾幻想自己能成为冬日晴空中的一只小小鸟，在大地妈妈和白云姐姐的怀抱里自由翱翔，自由哼唱着山河哥哥们为我谱写的新歌……可是终究抵不过冬季的寒冷，每次都只能徒有羡鱼情了。不过现在进入了冬季我还能看见小鸟们在天空中自由翱翔，还能享受着这么温暖的冬季，就已经很满足了。

我想这个冬季就是一个温暖的冬季吧!

生活中，每个人都会遇到各种各样的困难，但每个人面对困难都有不同的选择，有的迎难而上，有的知难而退。

In life, everyone will encounter all sorts of difficulties, but everyone in the face of difficulties have different choices, some difficulties, some place.

记得前几天，我做数学课外练习上面的一道思考题。那道题目很难，我做了好几遍怎么也做不对，于是，我就放弃了这道题目。突然，妈妈走了过来，问我为什么不做我说：“太难了，我不会做!”妈妈跟我讲了一个故事。外国有位撑杆跳运动员，叫布勃卡，他曾经创造过35次世界纪录，迄今还没人打破。他以前在训练时，也遇到过困难，总是跳不过去。那段时间里，他苦恼过、沮丧过，甚至怀疑自己的潜力。他真的想放弃了，教练告诉他，一定要有信心，让心先过去，身子就跟着过去了。布勃卡听了教练的话，重新跳了几次，他真的跳过去了...... 听了妈妈讲的故事,我重新思考这道难题，我反复地思考，反复地演算，终于做出来了。我心里可高兴啦!

I remember a few days ago, I do maths extracurricular practice the above sikaoti. The problem is difficult, I do a few times do it wrong, so, I give up this question. Suddenly, the mother walked over, asked me why I dont do what I say: "too hard, I cant do!" My mother told me a story. Foreign a pole vaulter, called Bubka, he had created the world record 35 times, no one has yet to break. He used in the training, also encountered difficulties, always can jump. During that time, he was annoyed, depressed, or even suspect that their potential. He really want to give up, the coach told him, must have confidence, let the heart to the past, the body will follow the past. He listened to the coachs words, to jump a few times, he really jumped... Listen to the mothers story, I to think about this problem, I repeatedly thinking, repeatedly calculus, finally did come out. My heart is happy!

是啊，世上无难事，只要肯登攀，困难像弹簧，看你强不强，你强它就弱，你弱他就强。在困难面前，我们一定要信心十足、战胜困难，做一个决不向困难低头的人!

Yes, the world is difficult, if you put your heart into it, the difficulty is like spring, you look strong, you are strong it weak, you are weak he is strong. In the face of difficulties, we must have confidence, overcome difficulties, to do a never bow to difficulties of the people!

清晨，原本枝繁茂叶的树木经过大自然这双神秘的大手，竟然被剥去了色彩鲜丽的外衣，只剩下几片零碎的枯叶，黑漆漆的天在这个冬天显得再平常不过了。我与父亲穿上棉靴像往常一样去买菜。

如今的市场与夏日相比简直就是天壤之别，别说是热热闹闹的人群了，就连小贩的吆喝声也被这刺骨的寒风硬生生地压下去。

我与父亲来到比较偏僻的菜摊买白菜，我问父亲为何不到市场中去买，父亲笑了笑说：“不是人人都租得起摊位。”我冻得发抖，忍不住踩踩脚来取暖，我注意到，在我身后的楼梯口那，在那黑洞洞的地下蜷缩着一位衣衫褴褛的老人，他的头发乱作一团，双眼紧闭着，嘴唇被冻得发紫，但他的眉毛舒展，神态端祥。我穿着棉靴都能感觉到从地上传来的讯号，何况是一位只披着几件薄衣的七旬老人呢？

然而，寒风却没有因为同情而手下留情，却更疯狂地肆虐着每一寸土地。我为这位老人感到深深的惋惜。这时，卖白菜的小贩给我们称好后就端起早起准备好的热粥，小心翼翼地端给那位老人，老人睁开尘封已久的双眸，眼眶中的感恩之情一霎那奔涌而出，而其他菜摊的小贩像听到命令一样，纷纷拿起准备就绪的热饭，这一瞬间，我内心像被什么牵扯住了，久久不能释怀，而这些人却成为这个冬天最美丽的风景线，老人连忙点头道谢，这些人的脸上出现了天真的笑容，整个冬天的寂静也被他们的笑声打破了。

到我们老了，也许会因为种种原因而被迫沦落成这种地步时，你也一定希望有一双托满太阳的手出现在你面前，把这个冬天照亮，甚至发光。所以把公德装进你心里，才会把温暖装进你胸膛。

[这个冬天很温暖作文600字

Dear teacher,

I really want to say thanks to you because you not only teach ue a lot of knowledge, but also are concerned about us. I still remember that you worried about our health last spring, when influenza A spreaded rapidly around the city. You, my dear teacher, asked us to wash hand and take a bath frequently. You also suggested us to open the windows and not go to the place having many people. You recommended us to drink more water and form a good habit. You came early and back late to spray drug. It was very painstaking.My dear teacher, thanks again.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely

Mike

[关于初三英语的作文：预防猪流感

I have a pet.She is a rabbit.Her name is Xiaobao,because she is white.She is a small rabbit.

She is just eight months old.She is lovely rabbit.She has two loog ears,two red eyes and a short tail.Her hair is loog and white.

She eats grass ang vegetables.She is very interesting.

She can jump and dance.If you give a bowl of water to her,she drinks the water first,then she washes her face and clean her mouth.Ilike her very much.

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

I’m unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. I ‘m careless to kindle the firecracker, so I’m very unlucky.

I still unlucky on my friend’s party. In the morning, I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10:50. After ten minutes, the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home! And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!

I’m worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term, I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram! I must to do banting!

But most important, I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium, I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse, the monkey……in the sea. Now I’ve done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.

In the present society, with the exploration of human needs, pursuit and desire, human beings have pushed the life together. But most people can not follow the evolution of the joint, will feel the pressure of life, to the life of the roll!

Dont always want to finish much more work than you can do, because one day, you will feel depressed because of less work done than planned. Only to increase your own pressure. You should try to improve this situation now. Relying on your own ability to complete the workload, so that you will not be disappointed by the completion of the work that is less than the plan. People should hold this kind of mentality: do one thing no matter what, because of difficult to achieve perfection, in the work, to show their talent, to play their own potential, not because of the existence of self humble causal work.

In the final analysis, in the final analysis is to survive, in order to meet the needs of life! That is to meet the desires of the individual!

I think all the origin is a place of "common human heart"! It can dilute the evolution and sublimation of all of you! What do you think of it, what is it! Oh, can make you a lifetime of pain, also can let the happy life! As long as we do it, how to live through share it, how to drive it, only you can clear direction, you need to test your life infiltration surrounding environment to identify and travel!

If you have to accept the truth, what has happened cant be changed. No matter what you do wrong, you turn it into a small thing, hehe, relative to life is just a small thing. Let it be the story of the past, it can also be a lesson to remember! But you must remember that the unfortunate story must not be allowed to play again. Do not weigh anything to life, everything is a thing of life, life is not brought, death does not go. Its not worth doing that, only you know the best. For things to take it up and put it down, can take temporary setbacks. Looking for a best balance point to carry to scratch your heart, with the "lost" to do the balance! You will lose, lose win, gain and loss, loss is too lazy to human survival interlocking protocol is! You can never keep off the saturation state, is a new idea, the pursuit of!

You cant be too greedy, everything is just a passing traveller. A flower world, you have to take its process, use it to dilute your life for a period of time, it can not be two days in the world is the same. You have to know that everything will have the precious and unreflux time of your life, and dont have too much demand, and you cant overdo yourself too much. All things have a moderate, more than moderate you will be troubled by the outside world, natural will become a load! To learn "know Stop" "contentment". How to release pressure, relieve pressure, and more importantly, how to relieve pressure, alleviate the need for a certain process, everything is how you do it, so as to ease the pressure in your heart. Other people are only the role of guidance, so you do what you like, what you should do!

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular in our country. More and more middle school students would like to go abroad through mediators. Is it good or bad to study abroad? In my opinion, on one hand, it has some advantages. Studying abroad can provide better studying conditions. People can make rapid progress in their foreign language study and it can also help widen their field of vision. Meanwhile, young students can learn advanced science and technology from foreign countries and spread cultures of different nations.

On the other hand, it has disadvantages. For example, because of the lack of living experience and poor capability to take care of themselves, they may feel lonely and homesick. In addition, high living expenses and tuition fees will become a heavy burden upon their parents.

So I think whether studying abroad or not should be decided according to oneself and ones family. It is not right to follow others.

[精选初三英语作文：Studying Abroad

1）    风和日暄：微风和畅，阳光温暖。见“风和日暖”。

2）    惠风和畅：惠：柔和；和：温和；畅：舒畅。柔和的风，使人感到温暖、舒适。

3）    冬日可爱：如同冬天里的太阳那样使人感到温暖、亲切。比喻人态度温和慈爱，使人愿意接近。

4）    佴之蚕室：居住于蚕室，指受宫刑。佴：被放置。蚕室，指密封之室，因受刑人怕风，所以室内温暖严密。

5）    冬温夏清：冬天使父母温暖，夏天使父母凉爽。本指人子孝道。现亦泛称冬暖夏凉。

6）    冬温夏凊：凊：凉。冬天使父母温暖，夏天使父母凉爽。本指人子孝道。现亦泛称冬暖夏凉。

7）    和风丽日：谓天气温暖而晴朗。

8）    嘘寒问暖：嘘寒：呵出热气使寒冷的人感到温暖；问暖：指问寒问暖。形容对人的生活十分关切。

9）    春回大地：好象春天又回到大地。形容严寒已过，温暖和生机又来到人间。

初三英语作文：Our Dreams Of Life

As soon as we became students of Grade 3, we had to make up our minds to study hard. Because we have the motive forces of study. They may be our dreams of life.

We must all want to study in Haimen Middle School in the future, so the competition for study will be very fierce. Both in class and after class, we think about our knowledge and work on the hard problems. We all believe that the harder we study, the better we will become.

But we have to face difficulties and hardships. Even though, we cant give up our life dreams. When you suffer a setback, think about your dream, then rally your forces. Make a spurt towards your dream!

[关于Our Dreams Of Life的初三英语作文

Today, as the economy develops fast, people can buy what they need, the producers provide them all the new things, so the factory produce many products, in order to make the biggest profit, they don t deal with the pollution. Water gets polluted, it does harm to people s health, we drink water everyday, the government controls the producers to figure out some ways to deal with the water pollution.

今天，随着经济的快速发展，人们可以买到所需的，生产商提供了各种各样的新产品，所以工厂生产很多产品，为了挣最大的利益，他们不处理污染。水被污染了，对人们的健康有害，我们每天都喝水，政府控制厂商来找到处理谁污染的方法。

[初三英语作文及翻译：Water Pollution

初三英语作文：That Day

I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.

That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.

When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, “Take it.” I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.

初三英语作文：The Sea

What do you know about the sea? Some people know about it, but others dont. The sea looks beautiful on a fine sunny day, but when theres a strong wind, its very rough. What else do you know about it?

Of course, the sea is very big. In the world, there is more sea than land. Do you know Hainan Island? Its really very nice. We can see beaches, trees and the sea. We can swim and visit a lot of beautiful places.

When you swim in the sea, you feel that the water is salty.

At last, I tell you about the Dead Sea. Fish cant live in it, because its dangerous. This sea is too salty.

The sea is nice, but sometimes its not good.

初三英语作文：Lucky or Not?

When I was a small child, I usually thought it was a good luck to be sick in bed. You see, when you are ill, you can stay home. There is no need to finish so much homework. Your parents will take care of you. Besides there is always something good to eat. Isnt it enjoyable to eat so much nice food?

A week ago, I was really in hospital. It was painful for me to stay in bed for several days. I couldnt get up. I couldnt even move. I didnt want to eat anything though there was a lot before me. I missed my classmates and teachers so much that I was anxious to get back to meet my friends. I was also worried about my final examination.

Now I have grown up. I have changed my mind.

初三英语作文：A Sunset

The sunset is very beautiful and lovely. Its scene is as wonderful as a sunrise but it is even more beautiful to watch it in the country than in the city.

When the sun begins to set behind the mountains, its long rays light up the green fields. The clouds in the sky also begin to glow with a golden light, and the mountains are really colourful.

When the sun begins to set behind the mountain, it looks like a red ball. Its light fills the sky and changes the colour of the clouds from gold to red. When the sun is gone altogether behind the mountain, the clouds turn grey and the mountains become black.

Then you cannot help admiring the wonder of nature.

初三英语作文：After the Exam

Scores are undoubtedly important for students. So today when I saw the score, 96,on my Chinese test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed that mum would also be very happy and perhaps she would reward me.

As soon as I got home, I raised the test paper before mum and said proudly, "Mum, look at my score!" Out of my expectation,Mum said calmly, "Good, but I hope you can find out the reason why four points were taken away." Hearing the words, I stood in amazement at first. Then I understood Mum’s words and nodded with all my strength.

Then Iunderstood that the most important thing that we get from examinations is not whether we have got high scores but whether we know what we have grasped and what we haven’t.

初三英语作文：Spring in Our School

Spring comes at last. Everything begins to grow. The trees turn green, and the flowers come out. On the playground, in the fields, on each side of the road, the young grass grows everywhere.

Spring also arrives in our school. Come and see, behind our teaching building, there are some small pear trees covered with white flowers; on both sides of it, there are some other flowers smiling at you, Some are yellow, some are red. In our school garden, more flowers are there. All kinds of flowers of many colours can be seen.

Look, there are some Kites flying in the sky. The spring wind is blowing. The sun is shining brightly. Some boys are playing games in the sun, Listen, a group of girls are singing "Where’s spring?" It sounds like the singing of lark birds. All these make me think that spring is here, spring is there, and spring is just in our school. Fhe boys and the girls are all like flowers in spring.

What a beautiful season! }tow lovely the children are!

[关于初三英语作文：That Day

从孩提记事的时候，就知道冬天很寒冷，但是今年的冬天却是那么的温暖。每当我想起这个温暖的冬天的时候，我的内心就会涌起一股股暖流，让我无比激动，甜美不已，并且眼前就会浮现出奶奶那慈祥的笑脸和她那饱经沧桑的双手。

那是今年的初冬，天气虽然不是天寒地冻，但是早上的寒风还是让人觉得手僵脚冷，寒气袭身，让人不想外出。

这天刚好是星期六，我就和爸爸呆在家里写我的周末作业。突然有人在外面敲了两下大门，并传来一个亲切而又熟悉的声音“昊昊”。我一听，是奶奶来了，我连忙放下手中的作业飞快地打开了门。“哇”果真是奶奶来了，我高兴地扑在奶奶怀里，欣喜若狂地叫道：“奶奶，奶奶你怎么这么早就来，你不怕冷吗?”奶奶乐呵呵地说：“还不是想你这个小孙子吗。”

我蹦跳着拽着奶奶，拉进了屋里。我仔细地一看，奶奶衣着单薄，头巾上都布满了白白的霜花。我正想跟奶奶扯东扯西说说近乎话，奶奶却拍拍我的头说：“想跟奶奶玩就先做作业去吧。”

我本想认真地写作业，但是我的手却忍不住直抓脚趾脚跟，奶奶好奇地问：“你怎么了?”。我怨声怨气地说：“我的脚又痛又痒，怎么抓也不好”。奶奶走近我，帮我脱下袜子，生气地说：“你看，脚都起冻包了，难怪你又痛又痒”。奶奶向爸爸投去责备的眼光，爸爸只是嘿嘿地笑了笑。这时，奶奶用她那双粗糙的双手紧紧地抓住我的双脚塞在她的怀里，惊奇地说：“你的脚怎么这么冰凉?”。突然，奶奶抓起我的鞋子，把手伸进鞋里摸了摸，沉着脸对爸爸说：“孩子的鞋子又潮又湿，冷冰冰的，你们做大人的怎么一点也不在意。”爸爸又是嘿嘿地笑了笑，就像一个“老憨包”。奶奶心痛地对我说：“你的脚要注意保暖，脚才不会起冻包。”

下午，刚吃过午饭，奶奶就回家了，我的心里很不是滋味。若在平时，奶奶来到我家都要小住几天，为什么这次却要匆匆回家，真让人白思不得其解。

又过了几天，奶奶兴冲冲地又来了。刚一进门，奶奶就从挎包里拿出一摞厚厚的鞋垫，微笑着地对我说:“昊昊，你看这是什么?”。我高兴地跳起来，一把抓过鞋垫翻来覆去地看起来。“奶奶，这是给我的吗?”，我又兴奋又激动地问起来”。奶奶乐呵呵地说:“家里只有你一个小孩，不是给你又给谁呢?”奶奶接着又说：“冬天还长呢，你以后要勤换鞋垫，勤洗鞋子，你的脚就暖和了，以后就不会生冻包了”。

原来，奶奶上次急匆匆地回家就是忙着给我做鞋垫。这时，我的内心一下子涌起一股暖流，激动得让我哽咽起来。奶奶多好啊!

没过几天，爸爸也给我买了一双里面毛茸茸的小棉鞋。

这个温暖是奶奶和爸爸给予我无私的关爱，是他们用心对我的呵护。我真为能生长在这样充满爱的环境中而感到骄傲和自豪，我还有什么理由不去回报他们，回报社会呢!

Winter, the sky floating snow, covered with snow blankets, trees dressed in silver, everywhere a white.

Xiangyang primary school playground can be lively! Sky floating snow, a small snowflakes slowly drifting down, as if to explore the way, it seems to be sent to distant letters, told the children I came with you to play. Snow students are playing their favorite games.

Gao Yujie and Langchu Chu in the snowman, they use the red flag as a snowmans hand, with carrots as a snowmans nose, in order to fear the snowman cold, they are the people of the snow, With a bucket to give him a beautiful little red cap. Soon after, the snowman became cute under their dress, as if they were grinning!

The campus echoed the laughter of the students, the winter has become warm.

A Sad Story

Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom,my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic accident. It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning. I couldnt accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.

Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher. He was full of sense of humour. We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching. His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class. He was an experienced teacher.

Mr Sun will always live in our hearts!

[初三优秀英语作文：A Sad Story

In winter, you can make snowmen and throw snow fights. For example, you and your friends or family to play throwing snow battle, you may have to throw all others, or throw you of face, if I was thrown into it, I will be very happy, because I feel like throwing snow is very interesting, if I was thrown to me. With high interest. For example, if you want to make a snowman, its very easy. First, make the snow into a big snowball and a small snowball.

The wind was very tight, the snow like a torn cotton, like the purpose of falling around. But it is on both sides of the road covered with a silver line seems to give the sidewalk to set the two elegant silver yarn.

The more and more snow fell from the sky, fell on the umbrella of man, fell on the eaves, fell on the car, fell on the pedestrian face.

The wind was playing the umbrella, the umbrella was shaking, and the umbrella blew the hands of the pedestrian. The wind in the air roar, sound mournful, with the footsteps of the snow mixed together, became a strange music, this music stabbed the ears of pedestrians, as if to warn them: snow will be a long rule of the world The bright spring will not come.

Road vehicles staggered with each other, the road on both sides of the tree was cold hair straight stunned. People to plot the snow printed a footprints, forming a guide people to lead the way to a better world.

I like the beautiful scenery, like the snow world, full of joy, joy, purity, noble.

The pedestrians on the road, like the sleighs in the snow, sweep the streets of the workers, in the snow, so the face was cold; red on the roadside, in the day and night non-stop work, busy gas Come.

In this happy world, I think the snow is the most beautiful ... ...

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard

for the purpose to enter a good university. In the first year, I made a lot of

new friends. All of them were so excellent that I wanted to learn from them. As

the second year has come, I felt great pressure. My scores went up and down and

I felt so worried. I told myself that I should find a way to relieve pressure.

Listening to music was a good way. I would sing with the music and shake my

body, which made me forget everything but the joyous music. Second, I would like

to talk to my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the

shop and then shared our secrets. When we laughed out loudly, all the annoyance

would disappear.