我的自传英文怎么写(推荐20篇)

Dear Mr. Wang,

Thank you for a rapid response to our invitation. Enclosed you will find an

outline of events to take place during International Week here at the University

of Montana. I will also list a number of possible speaking engagements so that

you can choose those things in which you are most interested. As far as topics

are concerned, the topics for classroom visits are generally determined by the

professor, but most professors are very flexible. We have approximately

thirty-five faculty members that teach courses in Asian Studies, ranging from

language and culture to history and economics.

Here is a tentative schedule:

Sunday, April 8th

10 am - Cultural Exhibition opens

12 am - International Festival begins with a speech by the university

president and an introduction of visiting dignitaries

1-5 pm - Opportunity to visit festival, interact with student performers,

taste foods

6 pm - Dinner with Director of Mansfield Center Phil West, Ambassador Mark

Johnson, and staff of Mansfield Center

As you can see, there is tremendous interest in China here at the

University of Montana. Please let me know if this outline suits your purpose,

and if not, please dont hesitate to offer any suggestions for changes. We can

arrange as many or as few speaking engagements as you have time for.

Thank you for your attention and enthusiasm.

Yours sincerely,

Lily Ma

1998年8月20日中午，在医院里，一个小生命伴随着“哇哇”的哭声诞生了。那就是我——王一焯。我个子不高，却有一个聪明的脑瓜。我从小就是一个争强好胜的孩子，为此，我还遭受了一次“事故”。

那时我还小，一听爸爸说去奶奶家，我十分高兴，风一般的穿上鞋。可我刚穿上鞋，发现爸爸已经走了出去。这我可不让了，竟然超过我？我立马站起来，冲过去，超过了爸爸。到了楼梯口，我想停住脚步下楼。可是我刚才求胜心切，冲的太猛，没有刹住。只听“咣当”、“咣当”……几声，我顺着楼梯滚了下来。膝盖一下子磕破了，鲜血直流。爸爸一看，又急又气。立马把我抱上来涂了药水。然后说：“你看你，跑那么快干什么？现在可好，就有让你吃点亏才长记性。”我从此以后十分谨慎的做事，少吃了许多亏。

时光飞逝，转眼我已到了上学的年龄。我在上一年级时，学习成绩相当好。可到了二年级，我的学习明显退步了许多，我很不解，便问妈妈，“为什么我一年级的内容不学都会，而到了二年级却不会呢？”妈妈听后说：“一年级的知识你在幼儿园都已经学会了，但到了二年级就不一样了，许多知识都没学过，你如果上课不认真听讲，不好好学，以后会越来越难。你要一步一个脚印，扎实的学好习，这样才会名列前茅。”我听了妈妈的话努力学习，现在学习越来越好。但我知道，“山外有山，人外有人”。不能就此满足，还有许多人等着我超越。作为“三好学生”，我应该尊老爱幼，并且德、智、体、美全面发展，当一个称职的“三好学生”。

成为一个品学兼优的学生并完成我的理想是我一生的目标，我一定会画着我生活的“小船”向我的目标驶去。

dear vv,

your delightful present,vv,reched me vv and i must thank you very much indeed for it.it was awfully kind of you to think of me.you could not have chosen anything else that would have given me more pleasure.i put it to use right away,and have already had some pleasant time out of it.

once again,many thanks.

yours,

vvx

I went skiing with my friends on Sunday. It was my very first time to try this super interesting sport. I really enjoyed skiing A LOT, and I think that I have potential!!! For the entire afternoon, I only fell down twice before our coach actually came and taught us the correct postures. After some basic and advanced practices, I did try to ski down the hill, and it was AWESOME ! I think Ill try to go skiing as often as possible. However, wearing all the equipment to walk with is GOD DAMN exhausted!

我跟朋友去滑雪了星期天的比赛。这是我头一次的时间尝试这只超级有趣的活动。我真的很喜欢滑雪很多,而且我觉得我有潜在的!整个下午,我只俯伏三思而后行实际上我们的教练来教我们正确的姿势。经过一些基本的和先进的做法,我曾试滑雪下山,这实在太棒了! 我想我会试著去滑雪,次数越多越好。然而,戴着所有的设备散步是上帝诅咒累啊！

光阴似箭，日月如梭，转眼间，我已经度过11个春秋，已经从一个从不懂事的小孩成了一个懂事的少年。

我在一二岁时，奶奶说我非常的调皮，经常走路不让人扶，时不时的就摔跤了，但奶奶还说，就算我摔倒了，也不哭，我很坚强，有一次，我睡觉时从床上掉了下来，手摔伤了也没有哭闹，至今我的手上还有一个非常显眼的伤疤。

到了4岁，该上幼儿园了。开始我非常想去幼儿园，可后来，我和同学闹了矛盾，打了一场架，从那以后，我再也不想上幼儿园了。妈妈要我去，我都不去。在妈妈的千言万语劝说之下，我才愿意上学。

到我七八岁时，那真是个淘气包，整个村都被闹个鸡飞狗跳，在别人田里偷橘子，赶着鸡满地跑，用鞭炮炸邻居家的猪……这些都是我做过的事。不过我印象最深刻的还是那一件：有一次，妈妈给我买了一把玩具水枪，那把水枪要吸水才能玩，我正好瞧见我的不远处有一个水缸，我拿了一个板凳放在地上，爬了上去，只听咕噜一声，我就掉下了水，我当时就急了，马上大喊：“救命，救命”。爸爸马上跑过来，把我从水缸里捞了上来。

刚上小学时，我才知道学习是多么快乐，多么有趣，我便爱上了学习。我沉浸在语文阅读的快乐之中，我陶醉在战胜数学难题的喜悦之中，我更痴迷于科学与社会等课程。我一直在补习英语，因为这是我的弱项，所以我一直在好好学习英语。

直到升上六年级，我懂事了，经常帮妈妈做家务，拖地，扫地，洗碗等许多事，我都做过，这时，我才体会到妈妈是多么的辛苦。长大后，我一定要报答妈妈养育之恩。

比起小时候，我的确是进步了，已经从一个不懂事的小孩子慢慢成熟了，但我不能骄傲。古人云：“书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。”我还有许多东西不会，人生的道路还有很长，我需要努力，我一定会努力！

modest and prudent

参考例句：

A mark of true nobility is,not to hold ones bead high,but to bear oneself humbly in a high station of life.

真正高贵的标志并不是趾高气扬，而是身居高位而谦虚谨慎。A mark of true nobility is, not to hold ones head high, but to bear ones self humbly in a high station of life

真正高贵的标志并不是趾高气扬，而是身居高位时谦虚谨慎。Lao Li was unselfish and modest, always putting the interests of the people before his own

老李大公无私，谦虚谨慎，总是把人民的利益置于个人的利益之上。Through Mrs. Todd, the woman with whom she boards, the narrator enters unobtrusively into the lives of the townsfolk

通过她的女房东托德夫人，故事叙述人谦虚谨慎地进入镇中居民的生活。modest是什么意思：

adj. 谦虚的，审慎的；端庄的；适度的

a modest salary; modest inflation; helped in my own small way.

适度的薪水；适度的夸张；以我的所能施以援手。 She is elegant, modest, decent and truthful.

她端庄文雅，诚实正派。 Exhibiting no pretensions,boastfulness,or ostentation;modest.

不装腔作势的不装腔作势的，不夸耀的;不铺张招摇的;谦逊Gordon is at once modest and clever.(at once …and…既..又)

戈登既聪明又谦逊There has been a modest decrease in house prices this year.

房价今年略有下降。 prudent是什么意思：

adj. 谨慎的，稳健的；精明的；节俭的

She is a prudent housewife.

她是一个节俭的家庭主妇。Governments consider it prudent to minimize the risk.

各国政府均认为把这种危害降低到最小程度的做法是明智的。In my opinion, it was extremely prudent as well as generous.

我认为这样做极为慎重而豁达。 That lady, prudent and reserved, maintained an irreproachable demeanour.

这位女士，持重，谨慎，保守了无可非议的品行。This conservative stance sounds prudent, but it often puts the seller at a distinct competitive disadvantage.

这种保守的付款方式听起来很谨慎，但是经常是的卖方处于一种比较不利的竞争地位。

Today is June 21st, Fathers Day. There is an indescribable feeling in my

heart, because I am not by their side, my parents are over 50 years old, and a

son cannot be filial by his side, and when the family is busy with farming, he

has to go to the construction site to sell his coolies in exchange for a little

bit. Poor wages.

I deeply remember the year when I went to school in 1999, my father told me

a sentence: "I can only put you in the car, and the future is up to you." I

understand what he meant, he was in Tell me that your brother went to a normal

school, and I will also enroll you in a secondary school. After school,

everything is up to you. My fathers teachings are like a lamp, illuminating my

future and inspiring me all the time.

I am a native rural boy. At some point our way out is to go to school. My

three brothers and sisters all went to secondary school, which is a huge expense

for a rural family. But in the eyes of my parents, we must be more promising

than them, not to farm at home, even if the family is busy with farming, we

should read books at home. I clearly remember that when I was in the first grade

of junior high school, my father and mother were working in the farmland. When I

went home to fetch water to drink in the field, I found that I was not reading,

but watching TV at home. Dad was very angry at the time, and asked me to take

the book and follow him. I followed him in despair. When he got to the field, he

asked me to read books there. He even found an umbrella for me so that I would

not be exposed to the sun. Although Dads eyes were harsh, they were more warm

and caring. At the time, I didnt understand the good intentions of my parents,

but now I really feel guilty when I think about it.

Dad, today is Fathers Day. In the past 28 years, you have done so much for

us. I can never repay in my life. I hope you are happy every day, healthy and

safe.

Whenever I walk heavy, I can always remember the power of your gaze and

move forward. Dad, you are my crutch at all times, give me support, give me

direction, give me strength, so that I can walk every step of the way in the

future. Even if you are not by my side, that deep fatherly love will still help

me forever!

Now that I have become a father, I have a deeper understanding of the kind

of expectation and care I have for my children. Dad I will always love you.

Again, I wish the parents of the world good health and long life.

smile， how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy。 and this happiness is from the bottom of heart。

it’s not like enthusiastic laughter， but just warm， makes your heart warm。

mother’s smile is like a spring wind， so gentle when you are sad， it can make you happy again; when you fail， it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up， it can make you try your best again…

smile， so easy， but also so useful。

| so， let’s learn to smile。 everyone needs others’ smile。 when we give others a smile， we will feel happy， too。 and maybe next time， when you need a smile， the person who received your smile will give it to you。

let’s learn to smile often， i believe it can even make the whole warm。 living with a smile， every day will be sunshine。

[关于学会微笑的英文作文

Life is like a box of chocolates

-----The review of Forrest Gump

Forrest Gump is a famous film which won a high reputation , it’s tell us a story of a low IQ boy’s unexpected and legendary life. In the film, Forrest’s IQ only had 75 lower than normal people, but he graduated from the university,participated in the Vietnam War, took part in Table Tennis Competition in China as diplomatic envoy, became a millionaire...

“If God intended everybody to be the same, hed have given us all braces on our legs. “ God is so fair. Forrest met lots of accidents and every accident fortunately achieve him. I think nothing is predestined except death. Just like Gumps mother did not know that she will be his mother,just like Forrest did not know that God gave him only 75 IQ,just like Lt. Dan Taylor did not know he had to endure the pain of losing legs...

Tom Hanks who played Forrest Gump said “our destiny is only defined by how we deal with the chance element to our life.” When we face our life,maybe we should have this preparation---“Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what youre going to get.”

有两则关于同一条英语谚语Blood is thicker than water的译例。其一是“清水不浓血却浓”，其二是“血浓于水”。从字面上看，上述两则译例译得固然不错，似无可厚非。译文读起来很顺，又比较易懂，但读后似有不知所云之感。

这是因为译文的形象没能准确地传达出这条谚语的喻义来。

Longman Dictionary of English Idioms（p.28）上对这条谚语的解释是“The relationship between people of the same family is stronger than other，relationships”因此，这则谚语似可以借用汉语中一句俗语“亲不亲一家人”来译更能表达出“属于同一血缘关系的一家人比别人更亲近一些”的寓意。

语言是文化的表现形式。谚语同文学作品、诗歌一样是语言的精华。英语谚语是富于色彩的语言形式，一般具有生动形象、喻义明显、富于哲理的语言特征。在一定程度上，英语谚语反映了英语民族的文化特点。因此，翻译英语谚语时，仅仅以语言之间词汇的同义性（等价性）为前提，寻求对等的表现是不够的。译者须较多运用汉语的表现手段，力求能再现英语谚语的语言风格和丰富内涵。只有多注意英语谚语字面以外所特有的语言内涵色彩，才能使译文讽喻得当，宜于说理，又不失原来谚语所具有的语言形象。

某些英语谚语和汉语成语、俗语在表现形式和含义方面是一致的或基本一致的。汉译这些英语时，可惜用与其喻义相同或相近的成语或谚语及俗语直接对译。这样不但可以比较好地保持原文的神韵和形式，又使译文易于为读者或听者接受。如：

Pride comes before a fall．骄兵必败。

Amiss is as good as a mile.差之毫厘，失之千里。

Two is company，but three is none.两个和尚抬水吃，三个和尚无水吃。

Walls have ear.隔墙有耳。

Enough is as good as a feast．知足常乐。

有些英语谚语虽然在语言习惯和文化背景方面和其相对的汉语谚语之间存在着某些差异，而且所比喻的事物并不一样，但他们的喻义却相互吻合，而且表达方式也很相似，汉译这些英语谚语时，常常需要“易其形式，存其精神”，即采用形象近似的汉语成语意译。这样可使译文既喻义明显，又含而不露，且可再现原文所具有的语言效果，容易达意。如：

Two can play the game.孤掌难鸣。

Newbroom sweeps clean.新官上任三把火。

Speak of the devil，and he appears.说曹操，曹操到。

The grass is greener on the other side of the hill．这山望着那山高。

Putting the cart before the horse.本末倒置。

有些英语谚语意在言外，语言含蓄，寓意深刻。如果仅从字面意义直译成汉语，而不领会原文的具体含义及其效果，译文势必平淡无味。这样既不能表达意思，又有损于原文的语言形象和丰富内涵。因此，在翻译时，应在汉语中寻找那些与原文喻义相同或效果相似的成语、谚语或俗语来表达，则会使译文形象生动，准确达意。试比较下列各译例。

People who live in glass houses should not throw stones.如译成“住在玻璃房子里的人，不应扔石头”不如译成“己有过，勿正人”或“责人必先责己”。

In fair weather prepare for the foul．如译成“晴天要防阴天”，不如译成“有备无患”或“居安思危”或“未雨绸缪”。

Murder will out．如译成“谋杀终必败露”，不如译成“纸包不住火”。

Fools rush in where angels fear to tread．如译成“愚者敢闯天使不敢去的地方”，不如译成“初生牛犊不怕虎”。

One cannot make an omelette without breaking eggs.如译成“想吃煎蛋卷，就得打鸡蛋”，不如译成工“有得必有失”或甚至可以引申为“不破不立”。

如果所要翻译的谚语喻义清新，形象逼真，按其字面直译其意，就能表达出原文的喻义来，则可直译。这样做既能较完整地保存原文的表达方式，且又可丰富我们自己的语言文化，一举两得，请看下面的译例。

God helps those who help themselves.上帝帮助那些自己帮助自己的人。或“自助者天助之”。

Money is the root of all evil．金钱是万恶之源。

An empty sack cannot stand upright．空袋立不直。

Do as you would be done by. 以你所期望的别人待你的方式待人。

这与另一谚语： Don’t do unto others what you don’t want others do unto you.“己所不欲勿施于人”很相似。

Money talks.钱能通神。

有些英语谚语常常采用对称的修辞手段。使用这一修辞手段的目的在于加强语势，宜于说理，读后有心悦诚眼之感。汉译这些谚语时，应适当注意保持其修辞色彩，以便体现原文的表达方式。如：

You may take a horse to the water， but you can’t make it drink．

如果按字面译成，“你可以把马牵到河边去，但不能叫它饮水”至少是没有充分体现这句谚语本身所具有的强烈对比色彩。从语法分析的观点看，在这个句子里，情态动词may和can虽然都表示“可能”的，但在含义上有所不同。这里may表示“事实上的可能性”，而can则表示“逻辑上的可能性”。并列连词but使前后两个分句意义相反，对比色彩强烈。在这种情况下，译文也必须力求对偶整齐，前后呼应，形成对照。如将此句译作“牵马河边易，逼它饮水难”或“老牛不喝水，不能强按头”会更好些。

总之，即使像谚语这样孤立的语句，翻译时也需尽一番揣摩切磋之功，否则译文就可能与原文“貌合神离”，文不达意。译事艰辛也许正在于此。

It was fine today, Lily and I went to visit the Science Museum. It is about

two kilometers away from our homes, so we decided to go there by bike. We set

off at 8 oclock. At the museum we saw a lot of interesting things. We could

operate some equipment. There we met many classmates and friends. We thought we

had learned a lot and were more interested in science.

At half past eleven we left the museum for home. We enjoyed ourselves in

the museum today.

Dear Mary,

I am sorry to trouble you, but nobody would come into my mind to help me

except you.

You know, I had planned this holiday for several years. A t last, my dream

came true. You could imagine how excited I was. My mind was completely occupied

with the holiday. I forgot to collect my laundry. I dont know if you can help

me collect my laundry. I sent the laundry to the Johns. It is the one down the

corner on St. Peters Street. You cant miss it, because the house is painted

green-a big green house. I have got two pairs of trousers, three shirts, one

T-shirt and a blanket. Call a taxi to send you home. I will pay you back when I

am home.

My first stop is London. It is raining. The streets are very clean. How I

wish I could have the chance to see the famous London fog. But someone told me

that was already the history. One can only read things like that about London in

books.

My best wishes to you.

Yours sincerely,

Peter Chen

I have a lovely bedroom. It is small but clean and beautiful. The wall is light green and the floor is white. There is a bed in my bedroom, it is really comfortable. I sleep with it every night. And there is a small sofa near my bed, I always read books on it. There is also a desk in my room, I do my homework on it every evening. Near the desk, there is a shelf. There are many books on the shelf. You can borrow books from me if you like reading.

My bedroom is so good that I like it very much.

候老师是我的英语老师，她28岁，我们都很喜欢她。我的英语一开始真的很不好，我怕上候老师的课，当她发现了，她并没有责备我，她告诉我唯一能学好英语的方法就是喜欢上英语，她叫我去看英语电影，这起作用了。候老师是我最喜欢的老师。

If ask me who my favorite teacher is, I will no doubt answer you that Miss Hou is my favorite teacher. She is an English teacher, she is kind to everyone, she is not like other teachers who are so strict to students. As Miss Hou is so popular among students, students learn English with high enthusiasm, that is what they return to her. Miss Hou is a good teacher.

如果你问我我最喜欢的老师是谁，我会毫无疑问回答你候老师是我最喜欢的老师。她是一位英语老师，对每个人都很好，她不想其他的老师那样对学生很严格。候老师很受学生的欢迎，学生怀着很高的热情学习英语，这是他们所能回报她的。候老师是一位好老师。

I remember the first time I see Miss Hou, she walks in class, and then talks with students about small things. She doesn’t talk about English in the first class, everyone feels Miss Hou is so amiable, we like her so much. Miss Hou is good at teaching us, she explain the question very patiently, when we understand, she will be move to the next topic, Miss Hou is a good teacher.

我记得我第一次见到候老师，她走进教室，然后和学生讨论一些小事情。她在第一次课上并不讲英语，大家都觉得候老师很和蔼，我们很喜欢她。候老师很擅长教我们，她很耐心地解释问题，当我们明白了，她才会讲下一个题目，候老师是一名好老师。

Dear Wang Hua,

How are you going on recently? I’m glad to tell you that I have planned to go to Zunyi Teachers’ College to study Chinese soon.Could you please give me some advice on how to learn Chinese well?

Write back soon.

Tom

我来到这个世界上已经10年了，如果过完这个生日，我就11岁了。在这10年里，我体验到了世间的酸甜苦辣，也懂得了一些做人的道理，更明白了是妈妈一直鼓励我，锻炼我，是我一步步的走向成功。

记得我不到2岁时，就已经上幼儿园了，听姥姥讲我第一天上幼儿园时又哭又闹，很不情愿。后来我喜欢上了幼儿园，一上幼儿园我就高兴的“咯咯”乐，幼儿园里的老师丢我都特别好，因为我又可爱，又调皮。而且我还特别喜欢出去玩。妈妈说那时的我可爱极了！

转眼间，又过了3年，我5岁了，这段时间我已经适应了幼儿园里的生活，并且成为了幼儿园里的“小明星”，因为大家总能在升旗台上看到我。

后来我来到了文艺二小学，在那里我不仅认识了好多同学，而且还学会了好多的知识。很快我已经步入六年级了，在那个优美的校园里，我是大队委员，是老师的小助手，还是一个被大家认可的小主持人。

成长的经历告诉我：我前面的道路，绝不会一帆风顺，一定会遇到困难和挫折，我一定要勇敢的去面对！

我在一个布满了“轰隆轰隆”的大大的黑黑的东西里出生，我看不大清那东西的长像了。我往旁边一瞧：一大群兄弟正在我身边睡大觉呢。我不知不觉进入了一辆货车。

货车里黑漆漆的，我什么也看不清了。车顶上突然“啪啪啪”地传来一阵响声，然后我的衣服就湿了。我感到十分难受，便开始睡觉。

一觉醒来，我就发现自己进了一个保险箱，一个哥哥对我说，我们在银行里。我的眼里突然一亮，就又进入了黑暗。

等我再次见到光明时，已经是很久以后了。一个小偷把我和兄弟们装到一个麻袋里拎走。到了小偷的家，小偷把我们一股脑儿地倒了出来，一个一个看过去。看到最后一个弟弟时，他猛地一撕，把弟弟惨忍地杀害了。小偷不停地咒骂，说自己倒霉，偷到的都是一元钱。他骂完，带上了一位爷爷（百元大钞）和我，冲出了家门。

那个小偷走到一家商店前，把我和爷爷交给一个中年人，说：“来两瓶小酒。”就这样，我和爷爷又进了中年人的钱柜。

里面有很多叔叔（五十元），他们告诉我，我在一个赌徒家中，说不定哪一天就要被带到赌场，流落到黑帮手中，我开始感到惶恐不安。

幸好我没有到赌场，我在一个老奶奶买东西时被当成零钱找了回去。老奶奶把我收进一个钱包，哼着歌走回了家。

老奶奶从包里把我拿出来，说：“孙女，一元钱！”她的孙女把我抢去哇哇叫声，撕成了两半，一阵剧痛感从腰上传来，顿时我就不省人事了。

等我苏醒时，我已被扔进了垃圾桶。我在一条传送带上，一位阿姨说：“我们正在前往垃圾回收厂，要变成新的纸张了。”

我不会紧张了，我相信，我在重生后，一定还会对人类做出贡献。

Tomorrow we are going to plant trees. now let me tell you about how to plant a tree. 1 .dig a hole large enough for the tree. but the hole should not be too deep 2 .knock a long , strong stick into the earth in the hole .make sure that it hole again 3 .put the tree in the hole next to the stick 4 .put the earth back in the hole again 5 .push it down hard with your foot several times 6.tie the tree to the top of the stick. 7. water it well I hope you must remember above and plant tress well

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

A suichu fireworks, energy-saving - signature

With the sound of familiar firecrackers in the ear, the taste of the year became thicker and thicker. The eyes see, the ears hear, the nose smells full of jubilation.

Spring Festival comes, we are very happy, all families have attached to the couplet, and the word "Fu", "Fu Fu" is the meaning of "blessing". With regard to the origin of "Spring Festival", there is a kind of legend that there was a kind of beast called "year" in ancient times of China. "Year", head long antennae, ferocious abnormality. Long years of deep seabed, each to a specific day (which is now the new years Eve) to climb the shore, devouring livestock harm human life. Therefore, every new years Eve, people help the aged and the young stockaded village fled to the mountains, to avoid "year" damage. One year on New Years Eve, the old man begged from the village. The villagers rush to a scene of panic, no one cares about him, only village as an old woman gave the old man some food, and urged him to speed up the mountain to avoid "year", the old man pulled up to the mustache smiled: "if her mother let me stay at home one night, I have to years away." The old woman continued to persuade the old man to laugh without saying.

So there must be fireworks in the Spring Festival

The fireworks in the sky diversiform dressed in brightly coloured, "fireworks into the sky", "bang" sound exploded, the sky suddenly become colorful, the faint powder is like colorful flower blooming. But the drama is not long. The fireworks are fading slowly from the sky until they disappear. Over there, a shock silver light caught my attention, and it sprayed and sprayed up. Falling back then jumped out of the silver, like pearls falling from the sky to tens of thousands of people, very beautiful feeling; snapping, snapping, the deafening sound of firecrackers is certain! The noisy sound is enough to add a lot of joy to the 2013.

There is a warm fire, burning, and intensified, the orange flames rolling up and down, as if calling what, like dancing in joy. People, things, China, the Spring Festival is becoming more and more intense, bringing 2013 new weather!

The Spring Festival rich in the rich years, the rich people.

小女子生于乙酉年二月，年十四。姓陈，名诗涵，山东滨州人也。名随父母之意，为：精通诗文、谦逊有涵养。

吾自幼好学乐器，擅习书法，有时也随父论棋，谈不上精通，多是略通皮毛。吾爱阅读却不擅阅读，往往囫囵吞枣，不求其解，父母亦不通此道，吾便于此碌碌无为。

吾幼年生性好动，常攀于院中树，摘其果，不亦乐乎。因父严母慈，吾幼时爱母胜于父。因生性玩闹，常受于家法，但仍本性不改，打架斗殴，时常之事。

忆七岁年初，吾已升小学，不知何情何故，父母决意转学，吾乃至新校，名为高新，初来乍到，欺凌乃常有之事，兴许为好奇亦或为新颖，吾自不惧，行事鲁莽，便也不少慰问家长。

六年末，正植豆蔻，分别之际，十分不忍，同窗六年，实在叹息，岁月流逝，心智渐熟，吾蜕去无理取闹，不再莽撞行事。满怀期望踏入初中。

去岁，父亲身体欠佳，母亲决心还乡，收拾潦草，行走匆忙。吾亦于同年入新学，现居海林，寄身异地，父母不近，甚是想念。八载兜兜转转，身边竟无一亲友。

父甚爱饮酒，却因病不得戒，偶尔生馋，细品小口，闭目回味，甚是引人发笑;母亲酷爱歌舞，过往常舞于厅中，现却少尔。家无钱财之源，虽不至于短褐穿结，箪瓢屡空，却也是一筹莫展。

吾生性不喜多愁善感，过去之事更不会怀念，虽一路不平，却又耐我几何，吾不喜世俗，不戚戚于贫贱，不汲汲于富贵，常感足矣，便是安矣，以乐其志，虽言不雅行，却其心向善，未见人外人，不知天外天，只愿闯一闯，逝时已无悔。