初中期末英语作文写作九大技巧分析汇总20篇

I woke up early this morning. I went out to play with my neighbor. We watched cartoon at his home. After I went home about 4 Oclock in the afternoon, I helped my mother to do some house work. She is very happy so I am happy too.

一直都想写我的英语老师，只是因为觉得学习不好，颇感内疚，不好意思来写。用我妈妈的话来说，他就是一个小男孩，我应该叫哥哥的。

他说话的样子十分夸张。他跟我们说在另一所学校里做班主任时，他安排的座位非常合理，因此学生成绩提高很快。我当然理解他的自豪，但我也理解我的班主任为何不采用。因为丁老师谈建议时的神情就像一只狗伸着舌头，流着口水，教一只猫如何分配自己盘中的鱼。明明一张很英俊的脸，有棱有角，鼻梁挺直，眼睛凹下，嘴唇也很性感。你不知道呀!他生气时目光看向远方，深沉而坚定，加上魁梧的身材，就像一位年轻的法老，站在他的城墙上，指点江山。可是除了生气时像个男人外，其他时候就是个小男孩了，大笑起来嘴很夸张地向上翅起，就像卡通画，让所有的人都可以感受到他的快乐。若是说到什么好事，他就像大公鸡似的炫耀他的两根粗粗的眉毛向上飞扬，眼中不时闪着像星星一样的光点，还手舞足蹈的，唾沫横飞，经常唾到前排同学的脸上。被人夸奖的时候，又显得女里女气的，十分腼腆。每次开考前，他在教室门外，他的嘴角像一只红色的狐狸，在雪中伸着一只爪子，望着一只兔子。

英语老师姓丁，家在阳曲，可能地理位置有些偏辟，所以考出来不大容易。本来在另一所中学里教高中，后来考入我校，校长让他教初中。这让他十分失望，有时还在学生中露出了像李白一样怀才不遇的痛苦和颓唐。有时又高兴地告诉我们，我们是他教的第一拔学生!?

可能是刚刚带学生，他有年轻老师的激情，为我们自费复印英语资料，很喜欢在读英语课文时，一边作着奇里古怪的样子，一边发出奇里古怪的声音。有时上课，讲着讲着就讲起了自己的自传，于是常常在自我的唾沫星子中陶醉得难以自拔。上他的课让我感到十分的快乐和高兴，只是因为成绩不好而十分愧对他。不知为什么，我学也学不好，只能在每次考完试以后都躲着他。很亏心很愧疚地面对他对我的微笑，但他从来不说我不好，一次又一次地原谅我。

又一次，语文老师让我们以描写一位老师的神态特征为作业，到了下节课是英语。他进来十分讨好的让我们写他。回家后我写了两篇，有一篇是写他的，到了教室，临交作业时我又拿回了，结果我的另一篇得了第一，上课时他说已看过，可惜不是写他的。到后来越到中考我觉得愧对老师，现在考完了，我却一直想着他，想着欠他的一篇作文。

A Present For Mother’s Birthday.

Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is

coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she

wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe

a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But

it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people.

So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.

It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s

mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned

her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.

Why do you think it was a good present?

如何减肥 how to lose weight

it seems that many people today are overweight. no one wants to carry around extra pounds, lout few people know how to slum down effectively. they look for miracle pills and magic cures. in the end, they fail and the pounds come back. but the most effective way of losing weight is actually very simple. it is a combination of a good diet and proper exercise. what makes it work is determination. it requires discipline and commitment to succeed. here is an example that proves the truth of these words.

现在似乎有许多人的体重都过重。没有人会希望身上有多余的重量，但是很少人知道如何才能有效地瘦下来。他们会去寻找特效药，以及神奇的治疗法。最后不仅失败，而且反弹了。但是事实上，最有效的减肥方法非常简单。主要就是结合均衡的饮食，以及适当的运动。成功的关键就是要有决心。成功需要自制和投入。以下这个例子，可以证明这个方法是正确的。

my aunt had been trying to lose weight for years. she went on one diet after another, but none of them worked. she lost a lot of weight quickly only to have it come back. finally, she followed her doctors advice and began to eat a simple, well-balanced diet. she ate lots of fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat foods. in addition, she joined an exercise class. she worked out three times a week. at first, my aunt wasnt happy because the weight came off so slowly. but her classmates encouraged her to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. best of all, she was able to stay at her ideal weight. that was because she had developed healthy new habits.

我阿姨试图减肥已经好多年了。她一次又一次地节食，但是没有一次成功。她的体重会快速地下降，但没多久就又反弹了。最后，她听从医生的建议，开始吃简单、均衡的饮食。她吃大量的蔬果，并避免高脂肪的食物。除此之外，她还去参加运动课程。她一星期运动三次。起初，我阿姨并不是很开心，因为体重下降得很慢。但是她的同学们鼓励她坚持下去，最后她终于达到目标。最棒的是，她能够维持她的理想体重。因为她已经养成健康的新生活习惯。

初中英语日记（一）

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

初中英语日记（二）

As is well known, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. They increase our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In other words, they are our good teachers and wise friends. This is the reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

Reading is a good thing, but we must pay GREat attention to the choice of books. It is true that we can derive benefits from good books. However, bad books will do us more harm than good.

如众所周知，书籍教我们学习 人生，真理，科学以及其它许多有用的东西。它们增加我们的知识，扩大我们的心胸并加强我们的品格。换句话说，它们是我们的良师益友。这是为什么我们的父母终是鼓励我们要多读书的理由。

读书是一好事，但我们必须多加注意书的选择。不错，我们能从好书中获得益处。然而，坏书却对我们有害无益。

初中英语日记（三）

In my dream

Last night ,I dreamed I became a very beautiful brid.I dreamed that I was in a forest. In tht forest,there were a lot of animals.Then,an old bird told us,"we have a very beautiful forest,we should therefore protect it from pollution."All the animals agreed with him.

But the second day,people came into our forest.Many animals were caught.The people wanted to build house and parks in our forest.Many old trees were felled.And then suddenly,nothing was left standing.

I was so shocked and then I bursted out crying.I woke up at midnight.It was only a dream.

在梦中

昨晚我梦见我变成一只非常漂亮的鸟.我梦见我在一座森林,森林里有很多动物.然后有一只老鸟告诉我们,"我们有一座非常美丽的森林,

因此我们应该保护它,免受污染"所有的动物都赞成他.

但是第二天,人们进入我们的森林,许多动物被逮捕.这些人要在我们的森林地上建造房子和公园.许多年老的树木被砍下,然后,突然间,一切都被夷平了.

我很震惊,接着突然大哭起来.我在半夜醒来,原来只是个梦.

我的新老师—初中英语作文大全

【—我的新老师—】下文是老师为同学们带来的关于对老师的印象及自己的看法，同学们对自己的老师是否也有着不一样看法呢？

My New Teacher

The new semester has begun. Every thing seems the same as before, except one thing. That is our class has a new English teacher. His name is Yang yang, but we always call his English name, Robert. He is a young and sunshine. He just graduated from university. His pronunciation is very good and I like his spoken English. Robert is humorous and his class is interesting and lively. Except for the textbook, he finds many other articles for class teaching, such as songs, movies and cartoons. He says that we can learn more from what we are interested in. I like this new teacher.

新学期已经开始了。除了一件事以外，每一件事看起来都和原来一样。那就是我们班来了个新的英语老师。他的名字叫杨阳，但是我们经常叫他的英文名Robert。他年轻阳光，刚刚从大学毕业。他的发音很标准 初中英语，我很喜欢他的口语。Robert很幽默，他的课堂生动有趣。除开课本，他还找了很多文章进行课堂教学，比如歌曲，电影和卡通。他说我们可以从我们感兴趣的东西学到更多。我喜欢这位新老师。

上面的是关于对老师的英文介绍，同学们对单词和短语都了解呢？如果不懂，记得要查英语字典哦！

初三英语单词表大全

A a(an) art

a(an) art ability n

ability n able a

able a about prep & ad

about prep & ad above prep

above prep abroad a & ad

abroad a & ad absent a

absent a accent n

accent n accept v

accept v accident n

accident n ache n

ache n achieve v

achieve v across prep

across prep act n & v

act n & v action n

action n active a

active a activity n

activity n add v

add v address n

address n advantage n

advantage n advertisement n

advertisement n advice n

advice n advise v

advise v afford v

afford v afraid a

afraid a after ad , prep & con

after ad , prep & con afternoon n

afternoon n again ad

again ad against prep

against prep age n

age n ago ad

ago ad agree v

agree v agreement n

agreement n air n

air n airline

airline airplane n

airplane n airport n

airport n alive a

alive a all a & pron

all a & pron allow v

allow v almost ad

almost ad alone a

alone a along ad & prep

along ad & prep aloud ad

aloud ad already ad

already ad also ad

also ad although conj

although conj always ad

always ad America n

America n American a & n

American a & n among prep

among prep ancient a

ancient a and conj

and conj angry a

angry a animal n

animal n another a & pron

another a & pron answer n & v

answer n & v ant n

ant n any pron & a

any pron & a anybody pron

anybody pron anyone pron

anyone pron anything pron

anything pron anyway ad

anyway ad anywhere ad

anywhere ad appear v

appear v apple n

apple n April n

April n area

area arm n

arm n army n

army n around prep & ad

around prep & ad arrive v

arrive v art n

art n article n

article n as ad, conj & prep

as ad, conj & prep Asia n

Asia n Asian a & n

Asian a & n ask v

ask v asleep a

asleep a at prep

at prep Atlantic n & a

Atlantic n & a attention n

attention n August n

August n aunt n

aunt n Australia n

Australia n Australian a & n

Australian a & n autumn n

autumn n available a

available a avoid n

avoid n awake v

awake v away ad

away ad baby n

The Laba Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth month of the lunar Chinese calendar. "La" is the name given to the 12th lunar month and 8 is pronounced as "ba" in Chinese, which translated is "Laba." There are several legends about the origin of this festivity and we could not tell which one is true. But what we know today is that this festival started as a sacrificial offering to ancestors. It was also a time for the ancient Chinese to pray to heaven and earth that there would be a bountiful harvest. Many people hoped for good luck as well for the coming year.

农历十二月初八是中国的传统节日——腊八节，腊代表中国农历的十二月，而八是eight的发音，因此，这个节日被翻译成腊八。关于腊八起源的传说有很多，我们已经不能辨其真假。时至今日，我们确定的是这个节日起初是为了祭祀祖先，祈求丰收以及为即将来到的一年祈福。

Traditionally, the Laba rice porridge is the most important element of the festival. Generally, the porridge contains eight ingredients which can include glutinous rice, red beans, millet, Chinese sorghum, peas, dried lotus seeds and some other ingredients, such as dried dates, chestnut meat, walnut meat, almond, peanut, etc. The porridge must be boiled for many hours and then offered as a sacrifice to the ancestors. This must be done before noontime. Also, it is tradition that family members eat the porridge together. Then they leave some as a symbol of hope for a good harvest the coming year.

从传统上讲，腊八粥是腊八节最重要的元素。腊八粥通常由八种材料做成，这些材料可以是黏米，红豆，小米，高粱，豌豆，莲子和一些诸如红枣，栗子，核桃仁，杏仁，花生等谷物。粥要熬制数小时，然后作为祭品祭献给祖先。这个祭祀活动一定要在中午之前完成。之后，家人们坐在一起吃腊八粥也就成了传

Another custom is the soaking of Laba garlic. Garlic is soaked in vinegar for more than twenty days starting from Laba festival. Then when the Chinese New Year comes, the garlic and vinegar is used alongside jiaozi on the table.

腊八节的另一传统式腌制腊八蒜。从腊八节那天起，就将蒜泡在醋中二十多天，这样，到春节的时候，就可以在餐桌上与饺子同食了。

关于个人责任(On Responsibility)

We Chinese place a high value on responsibility. It is traditional deal for us Chinese to take care of our parents. We owe them a great deal for the love they give us while we are growing up. It is right, then, when they are getting older with each passing day, we help them and see that they are well cared for. In this way, we give back some of the love and care they have given to us.

As loyal Chinese citizens, we must have a strong sense of responsibility to our country. I t is our duty to keep China strong in the eyes

Finally, we must remember that we have a responsibility to the world we live in. It is important that we learn to live in peace with the other nations of the world and to protect our environment.鶬f we carry out these responsibilities, we will be respected citizens of our country.

[初中英语作文：关于个人责任

This is my first impression of Mr.Lu Xun.He was "Head-bowed as a willing

ox" day and night to change the destiny of the nation rather busy.Frail,he was

literary giant.Mr.Lu Xun humor,and no lack of cordial.He hated the dark as the

devil,but a lot of the benefit of others,to play down their own.In my opinion,he

is ordinary and great people!There is a sub-heat,made a spectrophotometry."Mr.Lu

Xun,Lu Xun article will always be the history of Chinas most dazzling bright

light.

As the new year is coming, many families plan to go the zoo and have fun together. But recently, a tragedy happened in the zoo, a man was bitten by a tiger. The public scared, then later the truth came out that the men tried to skip buying ticket and he went across the limited line. The animal has their nature. Once they are under threat, they will do the horrible thing. If the visitors behave themselves well and do as the tips, then the tragedy won’t happen. But still a lot of people scream and try to throw away the food to the animals, which do harm to the animals. It is everybody’s duty to protect animals.

随着新年的来临，许多家庭计划一起去动物园玩。而最近，动物园里发生了一场悲剧，有人被老虎咬伤。大家都害怕起来，结果真相是那个人试图逃票，还越过禁止线。动物都有自己的本能，一旦受到威胁，他们就会做可怕的事情。如果游客遵从提示、约束自我，那么悲剧就不会发生。但是仍然很多人会大喊大叫，试图扔食物给动物吃，这对动物是有害的。保护动物是每个人的责任。

The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to

relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not

only interesting but also helps me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend

more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am

going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the

society. If possible, I’d like to make a trip to Xiamen. I’m sure I’ll have an

interesting and meaningful summer holiday. I am looking forward to it..

借物喻人，就是借某一事物的特点，来比喻人的一种品格。这也是作文中用来表现、突出中心思想的常用的一种写作方法。

如《落花生》，全文讲述“我们”全家欢度收获节，边品尝新花生，边谈论花生的好处；告诉人们，做人要做务实有用的人，不要做只讲体面而对别人没有好处的人。文章在谈论花生的好处时，有这样几段话：父亲说：“花生的好处很多，有一样最可贵：它的果实埋在地里，不像桃子、石榴、苹果那样，把鲜红嫩绿的果实高高地挂在枝头上，使人一见就生爱慕之心。你们看它矮矮地长在地上，等到成熟了，也不能立刻分辨出来它有没有果实，必须挖起来才知道。”我们都说是，母亲也点点头。父亲接下去说：“所以你们要像花生，它虽然不好看，可是很有用，不是外表好看而没有实用的东西。”我说：“那么，人要做有用的人，不要做只讲体面，而对别人没有好处的人了。”父亲说：“对。这是我对你们的希望。”

这几段话就运用了借物喻人（借用花生的特点来比喻怎样做人）的方法：父亲引导孩子谈花生，目的是为了论人生；他赞美花生的品格，也是为了说明做人应该做怎样的人。“我”从父亲的话中体会到“人要做有用的人，不要做只讲体面，而对别人没有好处的人。”这个认识得到了父亲的肯定。这就像画龙点晴一样，很自然地表达出了文章的中心思想。

由此可见，无论写人记事还是写景状物，正确运用借物喻人的方法：可以使文章立意更深远，表情达意更含蓄；可以大大增强文章的表现力和感染力。

大家再读读下面这篇文章，体会一下借物喻人的特点及作用：

山中的老杏树

杏子成熟时，正赶上农村收麦。麦收过后的一天，我才抽空儿扛着木棍儿，棍儿上挑着篮儿，上了南山。

半路碰上邻居二婶儿。二婶儿见我也去采杏，忙告诉我：“我都找遍了，只有山梁南面第二个山沟里那棵树上还有杏儿，只是杏子又青又小，还不好吃！”说完，二婶便走下山去。

我登上山梁，老远就看到了那棵树。它是那条山沟里仅有的一棵杏树。走近了才望见树上绿绿的叶子中颗颗半红不绿的杏子，成串成串地挤满枝头。随着一阵微风，杏树抖动起枝叶，像是在和我打招呼。

这是一棵老杏树，它长在沟底缺土少水的岩石旁，树干又高又曲又粗，疤痕累累，显然它已历尽沧桑。我把木棍儿插在腰间攀到树上。坐在粗大的树杈上，我看得更清楚了：枝条上，每个叶窝儿都挂着一个圆溜溜的杏子。大多杏子又都长着“阴阳脸”——一面绿中透黄，一面黄里带红；个头儿也不小，个个儿都像个小苹果儿。望着这绿叶间压串枝的杏子，我比喻不出它们像珍珠、像宝石，还是像翡翠、像玛瑙。捏开一个一看，哎呀，金色的果肉浸满果汁，放到嘴里，酸溜溜，甜滋滋，沁人心脾。

一抬头，无意中发现两个树杈之间卡着一块石头。哦！我全明白了：二婶儿说这杏子又青又小不好吃，是因为树太高，她看不见结在上面的杏子，只摘些下面小的。她不会上树，够不着，用石头又砸不下来。显然，她着实冤枉了这棵老杏树。

望着满树伸手可及的果实，再俯视一下这棵饱经风霜的老杏树，一种敬慕之情油然而生。老杏树啊老杏树，你不怕寂寞，不畏艰难困苦，独自扎根于这深山岩石之中，老而不衰。一年又一年，你为人们结下多少杏子？可你对人却无半点所求。当你受了委屈或遇到冷眼、非礼时，脚跟仍是那样坚定，胸怀仍是那样坦荡、无私。多么可敬的老杏树啊！我轻轻地取下石块，抽出腰间的木棍儿，可怎么也不肯打下去，唯恐因打杏儿而折损老树的枝叶，伤害它的身心。于是，我下了树，挎上篮儿，再爬上树，坐在老杏树的怀抱中，尽情地摘着杏子，尽情地享受着它奉献的果实。

这是一篇优美、生动、感人至深的文章。相信每一个同学读了此文之后，都一定会认识到：决不单纯是状“物”；作者运用了借物喻人的方法，借山中老杏树的特点，热情讴歌了具有老杏树品格（不怕寂寞，不畏艰难困苦，扎根深山，饱经风霜，老而不衰，只讲奉献，胸怀坦荡、无私）的人，同时从心底抒发了对具有老杏树品格的人的无比敬爱之情。

运用借物喻人的方法需要注意的是：作文时，描述的事物的特点，要与人的品格有相似之处；让人读了文章，就能清楚地认识到，借物要说明什么，要借物赞誉怎样的人。如果不是这样的话，“借物喻人”的方法，也就失去了使用的意义。

Military Training

In our country, when we go to middle school, we must attend to the military training. Most students are afraid of it, because the training often happens in hot summer. In summer days, the weather is too hot to stand. But students have to stay outside all the day. In addition, the training is very hard. Students have to learn to be a solder. They have to obey many rules that they don’t have to in daily life. And the trainer is very strict to students. They do like our teachers who care us patiently. However, military training is a good way to train students’ strong will power. It’s useful to the life of students. Therefore, it’s necessary to student.

作文翻译：

军训

在我国，当我们去上初中的时候，我们必须参加军训。到部分的学生都害怕军训，因为训练通常是在炎热的夏天进行。夏天，天气炎热难熬。但是，学生必须一整天都呆在外面。另外，训练还很辛苦。学生们必须像士兵一样。他们必须遵守很多在日常生活中无需遵守的规则。而且，教官对学生很严厉。他们像老师一样耐心照顾我们。但是，军训也是一种锻炼学生意志的好方法。它对学生的生活很有帮助。因此，军训对学生是很必要的。

When the summer comes, the weather is so hot, it is rarely to see the rain. Today, when I wake up, I find the weather is chilly, it is going to rain. I am so happy, I miss the rain so much. Suddenly, the rain drops from the sky, I ran out of the house, looking at the sky, dancing with the rain. I feel so cool, then all my weariness has gone.

当夏天到来的时候，天气很热，很难见到雨。今天，在我起床的时候，我发现天气有点凉，准备下雨了。我很开心，我很想念雨。突然，天下起了雨，我跑出房子，看着天空，与雨共舞。我觉得很凉爽，我所有的倦意都消散了。

[初中描写雨的英语作文

Nowadays, with the development of technology, the market competition is

fierce and people feel great pressure. In order to improve the working

efficiency, they force themselves to work overtime. However, they are not

machine and need to slow down life pace, or they will break down sooner or

later.

We cant slow down the working hour, but we can control our private time. A

lot of young people mix with working time and private time, so they cant enjoy

their life and feel depressed all the time. The smart person will find the

balance. They will put aside the working stuff when the clock tells them that it

is time to be off work and find the way to release their pressure, such as

KTV.

Spending the time with friends and families is always a good way to enjoy

our time. No matter what kind of difficulties we face, when we recall of these

happy moments, we will have motivation to move on. We cant choose everything we

want, but we can adjust ourselves to the environment and keep the good mood.

Once life pace slows down, we control our life.

Helen Keller lived in the U.S.A. She was a great woman. When Helen was a baby,she got very sick. Afthe many weeks,the doctor said:"she is better,but now she cant see and she cant hear." Her mother and father were very sad . Afthe a few years,things got worse. There was no way for Helen to speak to other people. She heard nothing. She saw nothing. She didnt undertand anyting. Then one day a teacher come to live with Helen and her family. The teacher helped Helen learn about words. Helen was a bright child and soon she learned to spell her first word. When she was older,she went to college. Helen was very famous. She helped many blind and deaf people. She traveled around the world and helped many people. Helen was a very old woman when she died. The world remembers her today as a brave and wonderful person. She was blind and deaf,but she found a way to see and hear.

【提要】英语四六级四级信息 : 20176月英语四级写作高分黄金句式【1】

▌列举法

列举法是四级写作中常用的方法，一般用first, second等一系列标志词引出原因或者可能的影响等。列举法常用的素材有：

引出列举

1. There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/are responsible for/can explain ______. 也许有一些因素造成/可以解释______。

2. There are probably three/many/several/a variety of reasons for this dramatic/significant increase/decline in ______.引起______显著增长/下降的原因有三个/许多/几个/很多。

3. Some reasons can explain this trend. 一些原因可以解释这一趋势。

4. Why ______ ?为什么______?

5. The causes of ______ are varied. They include______ , perhaps the main cause is ______. 造成______的原因有很多，包括______,主要原因可能是______。

6. The reason for this is not far to seek. 这一问题的原因不难发现。

7. It is no easy task to identify the reasons for this phenomenon which involves several complicated factors. 要找出这一现象的原因并非易事，因为它涉及若干复杂的因素。

8. There are numerous reasons why ______, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. ______的原因有很多，这里我只想探讨其中几个最重要的原因。

9. There are many reasons responsible for this phenomenon, and the following are the typical ones. 导致这种现象的原因有很多，以下是其中比较有代表性的。

10. There are many reasons explaining this case. As for me, I regard the following as the typical ones. 有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而言，我认为以下原因比较典型。

11. A number of factors could account for/contribute to/lead to/result in the change of ______. 引起______变化的因素有很多。

分条列举

1. In the first place, ______. In the second place______ .首先，______。其次，______。

2. First,______ . Second, ______ . 首先，______。其次，______。

3. To begin with, ______. Secondly, ______. Last but not least, ______.首先，______。其次，______。最后但并不是最不重要的，______。

4. The first reason is that ______. The second one is ______. The third is ______. 第一个原因是______。第二个原因是______。第三个原因是______。

5. First of all, ______. Secondly,______ . Furthermore,______ .首先，______。其次，______。另外，______。

6. For one thing, ______. For another, ______.一方面,______。另一方面，______。

7. Firstly, ______. Secondly, ______. Thirdly, ______.首先，______。其次，______。再次，______。

8. Another reason why I disagree with the above statements is that I believe______.我不同意上述观点的另一个原因是我认为______。

▌对比法

对比法是指通过对比两种截然不同的观点来陈述其中的利弊，从而得出自己的结论。对比法常用的素材有：

1. The advantages gained in ______ outweigh/are much g

一、帮助你的孩子提高写作技能

1.鼓励你的孩子培养他们的精细运动技能。需要用到手和手指的力度的肌肉活动能够帮助你的孩子在今后有一个良好的写作技能。你可以让你的孩子玩彩泥、撕纸或者是用塑料镊子夹东西。

2.找出你孩子的学校里面老师的书写方式。一些学校教给孩子们的是传统的书写方式，而另外的一些则不是。用合适的书写风格教你的孩子书写他们自己的名字和其他的家庭成员的名字。

3.为了提高孩子们的写作技能，父母应该鼓励孩子们每天都进行写作练习。为了避免孩子们遇到过多的挫折，你可以将这个练习限制在几分钟之内，除非孩子们自己要求进行更长时间的写作。通过这样的方法，孩子们的写作技能在一定时间之后就会有一定会的进步了。

二、帮助你的孩子提高阅读技巧

1.经常读书给你的孩子听。这样能够帮助你的孩子了解单词的读音和意思。阅读包括了解单词的拼写，同时还包括理解单词的含义。当你大声的朗读给你的孩子听的时候，你可以问他们对这个情节的理解和他们对这个单词的理解。

2.保持事物的新鲜。家长在带孩子们去图书馆的时候，可以让孩子们自己选择他们想要阅读的书籍。这时候，父母要注意孩子们感兴趣的书籍是什么，并且给孩子们找一些他们可能会感兴趣的书籍。同时，你也可以偶尔给孩子们买一些新书作为礼物。

3.和孩子们玩文字游戏。在冰箱上用磁铁拼出孩子们知道的单词。让孩子们用手指在沙子里面将看到的单词拼写出来。父母还可以和孩子们玩押韵游戏，并且将单词的尾字母指出来。给孩子们说一些绕口令，并且将开始的单词的发音指出来。

4.让你的孩子试着读书给你听，即使你的孩子可能还不能读的很流利。如果整个页面的单词都非常的复杂的话，那么就让他们读那些他们知道的单词。

安徽 刘腾辉

【作文导引】

写作说明文的目的一般是让人们了解事物的特征、明白事理，从而获得一定的知识和技能。只有清楚地进行说明，才能达到这个目的。那么，如何使说明文条理清晰，使读者一目了然呢？众所周知，任何事物或事理都有其内在的特点及其一定的逻辑关系，说明时就要按照其本身的条理性来合理安排说明的顺序。

说明文的说明顺序各不相同。说明顺序的采用，往往是由说明对象的特征和说明目的决定的。常见的说明顺序有以下三种：时间顺序，空间顺序，逻辑顺序。一篇文章中，不一定只采用一种说明顺序，有时根据说明的需要，综合使用几种说明顺序。我们在写作时，怎样才能合理地安排说明顺序呢？

一、安排说明顺序要依据说明对象的特点和内在的逻辑关系来进行。

一般情况下，说明对象包括具体的事物和抽象的事理两个方面。任何事物都有一定的特征，写作时，我们要在细致观察的基础上，抓住其本质特征安排合理的说明顺序。如果说明事物的发展变化过程，可采用时间顺序；若说明事物的形貌特征或者方位，可采用空间顺序。抽象的事理，一般都有内在的逻辑关系，说明时，可根据不同的关系确立适当的说明顺序，如由一般到特殊，由概括到具体、由因到果……

二、安排说明顺序要符合事物发展和人们认识事物的规律。

任何事物的发展变化都是有规律的，人们对事物的认识也是有一定的规律可循的。一般来讲，事物的发展和变化往往都具有由小到大，由简单到复杂的特点。人们对事物的认识，也是由浅入深、由表及里、由初级到高级，层层深入的。因此，写事理说明文，安排说明顺序时，一定要遵循事物发展的客观规律以及人们认识事物的规律。

三、安排说明顺序要充分考虑到说明的中心和材料的关系。

说明文的材料是为中心服务的，具体安排什么样的材料说明事物，就必须把握说明的中心是什么。而安排说明顺序，一定要充分考虑到中心和材料的关系。比如说，说明一棵树，若从其生长过程的角度进行说明，可采用时间顺序；若从其功用等角度说明，可采用逻辑顺序。

【升格例析】

【病文展示】

家乡的小桥

人们常说："江南多水乡，故而桥是南方独特的风景线。"南方的名桥固然奇妙，但作为土生土长的北方人，我还是认为家乡的小桥独具风韵。

在我的家乡，有两种桥最为普遍，土桥和钢筋混凝土桥。现在大多为钢筋混凝土桥。这种桥主要是以钢筋混凝土土作为材料进行修建的，虽没有镂刻的优美图案、独特的造型，形式简洁明了，但坚固耐用。桥面平坦，下面有七根粗大的桥墩；桥面两边的栏杆昂首挺立，像一个个威风凛凛的哨兵。每两个桥墩之间都有大大的桥洞，使水流畅通无阻，为旱灌涝排提供了方便。桥与地面相连，上面覆盖着厚厚的尘土，被过往的车辆压得结结实实。

过去，我们家乡则以土桥居多。所谓土桥，是以土为材料。几米、乃至十几米宽的小河，两岸随便垒起几块石头，然后在上面搭上几块石板，铺些土，压平，土桥就这样建成了。

家乡的小桥造型简单，古朴典雅。有时桥面上还有些许的坑坑洼洼，那或许是岁月所留下的痕迹吧。整个桥身和路面一样，非常不起眼，很难惹人注目。但是，两岸绿柳成荫，微风吹拂，景致宜人。

无论是现在的钢筋混凝土桥，还是以前的土桥，都起到沟通和连接的作用。()家乡的小桥虽然简陋，但维系着父老乡亲的生命线，意义重大。

【误区警示】

上面这篇文章，作者虽然抓住了土桥和钢筋混凝土桥的特点进行说明，但在说明事物特征、顺序及语言方面，还存在一定的不足之处。

警示一：没能很好地抓住说明对象的本质特征来写。写钢筋混凝土桥时，作者只是粗略地介绍了桥面、桥墩、桥洞等方面的一般特征，而没有抓住桥的坚固耐用这一本质特征重点说明。

警示二：条理不清，结构混乱。先写现在，再写过去，顺序颠倒。特别是写钢筋混凝土桥，一会儿写桥面、桥墩，一会儿又写栏杆、桥洞，条理极不清晰。另外，在说明钢筋混凝土桥和土桥之间，缺少必要的过渡，结构混乱。

警示三：个别语句的表达过于绝对，说明语言不够准确。像文中第三段"所谓土桥，是以土为材料"一句，语意就过于绝对。因为土桥的材料不完全是土，下文可知，还有石块、石板等。第四段"整个桥面和路面一样"一句表意也不准确，桥面和路面根本不可能完全一样。等等。

【升格点拨】

建议从以下三个方面进行升格：

一、写钢筋混凝土桥，应该抓住这种桥坚固耐用这一本质特征进行重点说明，无论写桥面、桥墩，还是栏杆等，都要围绕这一点来写。这样，才能更好地突出事物的本质特征。

二、应该按时间的先后顺序，先写过去的土桥，再写现在的钢筋混凝土桥。对钢筋混凝土桥的说明，要按空间顺序，由上到下，依次写桥面、栏杆、桥墩、桥洞。同时，土桥和钢筋混凝土桥两部分内容之间，应该加上一个过渡段，可这样来写："随着岁月的流逝，家乡那古朴简单的土桥因年久失修而破败不堪。而社会的发展，又使得钢筋混凝土桥这一新生事物在此安家落户了".

三、对说明对象的特征并不完全了解的内容，应该用上一些表示估计或推测的词语，以体现说明语言的准确性。如"所谓土桥，是以土为材料"一句，应在"是"的前面加上"主要"一词，这样，语意就不显得绝对了。

【升格示例】

家乡的小桥

人们常说："江南多水乡，故而桥是南方独特的风景线。"南方的名桥固然奇妙，但作为土生土长的北方人，我还是认为家乡的小桥独具风韵。

在我的家乡，有两种桥最为普遍，土桥和钢筋混凝土桥。过去，土桥最多。所谓土桥，主要是以土为材料。几米、乃至十几米宽的小河，两岸随便垒起几块石头，然后在上面搭上几块石板，铺些土，压平，土桥就这样建成了。

家乡的小桥造型简单，古朴典雅。有时桥面上还有些许的坑坑洼洼，那或许是岁月所留下的痕迹吧。整个桥身几乎和路面一样，非常不起眼，很难惹人注目。但是，两岸的绿柳成荫，微风吹拂，柳梢便趁机亲吻小桥。桥下的流水哗哗流淌，唱着欢快的歌儿，远处的农舍隐藏在袅袅炊烟之中，具有"小桥流水人家"的诗情画意。

随着岁月的流逝，家乡那古朴简单的土桥因年久失修而破败不堪。而社会的发展，又使得钢筋混凝土桥这一新生事物在此安家落户了。

形式简洁明了，结构坚固耐用，是钢筋混凝土桥的本质特征。桥面结实平坦，两边的栏杆昂首挺立，像一个个威风凛凛的哨兵。桥下有四根粗大的桥墩，全是混凝土所制，如同擎天玉柱，使小桥牢牢地屹立在河面之上。三个大大的桥洞，又使水流畅通无阻，为旱灌涝排提供了方便。桥与地面相连，上面覆盖着厚厚的尘土，被过往的车辆压得结结实实，好像给桥面穿了一件黄色的外衣，让人分辨不清哪是桥，哪是路。

我国著名桥梁专家茅以升曾说过："桥是一条放大的板凳".不错，每一座桥梁都起到沟通和连接的作用。家乡的小桥虽然简陋，但维系着父老乡亲的生命线，意义重大。

【升格点评】

能抓住事物的本质特征，进行有条理的说明，是升格文最突出的特点。此外，语言生动准确，结构严谨也是本文的亮点。

一、作者在升格文中，紧紧扣住土桥的造型简单、古朴典雅及钢筋混凝土桥的坚固耐用的本质特征进行说明，鲜明具体，同时流露出作者对家乡小桥的喜爱之情。

二、升格后的文章，根据说明的需要，采用了两种顺序：一是以时间为序，先写过去的土桥，再写写作的钢筋混凝土桥；二是写钢筋混凝土桥时，采用自上而下的空间顺序。这就使文章条理清晰，使人一目了然。

三、以文艺性的语言，生动地说明了事物的特征，语言准确严密。如文中"柳梢便趁机亲吻小桥。桥下的流水哗哗流淌，唱着欢快的歌儿",以拟人的手法，说明土桥周围景色的美丽；同时，作者又把栏杆比作"哨兵",把桥面上的尘土比作"黄色的外衣",生动贴切。

Everyone has their own dreams.Dream is the start of success.When we have a

dream,the only thing we should to do is make it come ture.

I have a dream.My dream is to be a computer programmer,who can create

software or computer games.I like computer.When the first time I met computer,it

attracted me immediately.Of course,to be a good programmer is difficult,but I

think I can make it.

Now everything I do is close to my dream.I feel my life is fill with hope

and is colorful,and I have enough confidence to realize my dream.I’ll work hard

for my dreams,I will never give up.

One day, cat is in the basket. It‘s very lazy. It is sleeping. Now the cat‘s food is beside the cat. One mouse is very hungry. It is eating the cat‘s food. The cat‘s food is so yummy.

The cat wakes up. He is behind the mouse. He wants to catch the mouse. So,he is chasing the mouse. The mouse is afraid. He jumps onto the door. But, the door is high. The cat can‘t catch the mouse. The mouse is under the chair now. It is running.The cat still can‘t catch the mouse. The mouse runs fast. It runs into the hole. The hole is small. But, the cat is big. It can‘t go into the hole. So, the cat is angry and tired. It is crying. It‘s very sad. But the mouse is very happy!