六年级下期末英语作文【优秀20篇】

I always think there is not enough time. For example， I have just taken a

three-day holiday. But when I look back， I just feel that it‘s only one day.

There goes a proverb， “Time is money”。 Now I want to say， time is more precious

than money， because when money is spent， we can earn some more again. However，

when time is gone or lost， never will it return.

Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually

limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But it‘s a pity that I am

always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.

So I think， I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting

time is equal to wasting one‘s life. Do not put off what can be done today till

tomorrow!

今天，我们来到了故宫。

Today, we came to the Imperial Palace.

我们先到了广场，广场大极了!广场上有五座精巧的汉白玉拱桥。桥下有一条金水河，形似玉带，漂亮极了。

We first went to the Plaza, Plaza! There are five exquisite marble arch bridge on the square. There is a river in Jinshui, the bridge shaped like a jade belt, very beautiful.

站在广场上，抬头一看，一座金碧辉煌的宫殿耸立在眼前，黄色的琉璃瓦闪闪发光。这就是太和殿。往太和殿内一看，太和殿内金光闪闪的宝座，坐落在正中的须弥坐式楠木平台上，宝座周围是六根沥粉蟠龙金柱，气势磅礴。

Standing on the square, looked up, a beautiful decoration. stands in front of the palace, glittering yellow glazed tiles. This is the hall of supreme harmony. Into the hall of supreme harmony at the hall of Supreme Harmony, golden throne, is sitting in the middle of the Sumeru Phoebe platform, around the throne is six Lek powder Panlong column, of great momentum.

参观了太和殿，我们来到了乾清宫。乾清宫在明代和清代前期是皇帝的寝宫。皇帝在乾清宫处理政务，召见臣工，接见外国使臣及内廷受贺和举行家宴。

Visit the hall of Supreme Harmony, we came to the palace of heavenly purity. The palace of Heavenly Purity in the Ming Dynasty and early Qing Dynasty is the emperors palace. The emperor to handle affairs in the palace of Heavenly Purity, summoned his work, received foreign envoys and palace by he and held a seder.

接着我们进了御花园，御花园里有一座亭子。葱郁的树丛映衬着红色的墙壁和金黄的琉璃瓦，神气极了!亭子旁边是一座山，那座山是一座石头砌成的假山，四处是碧绿的树木，美丽极了。

Then we went to Imperial Garden, there is a pavilion in Imperial Garden. Lush trees silhouetted a glazed tile with red walls and golden, dashing! Next to the pavilion is a mountain, the mountain is a stone rockery, everywhere is green trees, beautiful.

随后，我们还参观了中和殿、保和殿等地方，最后，就到达了故宫的正门。走出正门，我再一次回首遥望着这座古老的宫殿，心里默默的祝愿着：祝愿祖国繁荣富强，一代更比一代强。

Subsequently, we also visited the temple, and then other places, finally, arrived at the the Imperial Palace Front Gate. Out of the Front Gate, I once again look back at this ancient palace, silently wish: I wish the motherland rich, strong and prosperous, the younger generation is strong.

Was a cold winter day, a cold wind blowing the bare branches on the side of the road. Blow to the with the wind, with creepy, and tremble.

From cram school I just from school, mother brought home a box of eggs when I go home. Mother with the help of colleagues, will this box heavy eggs carried to the electric vehicle.

Windy that day, people walking on the road is very difficult, dont say is driving electric cars, whats more, the car was carrying two eggs and a box. When the car to a fork in the road, the car of the box of eggs yield to the test of the wind, the eggs roll down, luckily isnt bad.

My mother and I hurried out of the car to pick up the eggs, but eggs pick up one, get one, I thought to myself: when will going to pick it up! What if pick it out, will be a case of heavy eggs home?

Right against the face come a big truck suddenly, I shouted anxiously: "what can I do, bus, eggs also dont want to!"

To my surprise trucks "cheep -" to a screeching halt. Down, an aunt said: "elder sister, so late how to still take so many eggs?" Say that finish, three of them began to pick up the eggs.

Everyone firewood high flame, too soon, just pick it up. My mother and I are very grateful to the aunt, aunt and help my mother the eggs onto the vehicle. Aunt looked at the far of figure, I think that as long as everyone sacrificed a little love, the world will be how good.

是一个寒冷的冬季里的一天，凛冽的寒风吹着路边那光秃秃的树枝。大风呼呼地叫着，吹到身上让人毛骨悚然，浑身直发颤。

我从补习班刚刚放学，妈妈接我回家时带回来一箱鸡蛋。妈妈在同事的协助下，才将这箱沉重的鸡蛋抬到电动车上。

那天风很大，人们在路上行走都很困难，别说是驾驶电动车了，更何况车上还载着两个人和一箱鸡蛋。当车行到岔路口时，车上的那箱鸡蛋经不住大风的考验，鸡蛋都滚了下来，幸亏还没坏。

我和妈妈赶忙下车捡鸡蛋，可鸡蛋捡一个，滚一个，我心里想：要到什么时候才能捡完啊!就算捡完了，又怎样将一箱沉重的鸡蛋运回家呢?

忽然迎面来了一辆大卡车，我焦急地喊起来：“怎么办，车来了，蛋也别想要了!”

令我大吃一惊的是大卡车“吱——”的一声来了个急刹车。下来一位阿姨，说：“ 大姐，这么晚怎么还带这么多鸡蛋呀?”说完，三个人就开始捡起鸡蛋来。

众人拾柴火焰高，过不一会，就捡完了。我和妈妈都很感激那位阿姨，阿姨又帮妈妈把鸡蛋抬上电动车。望着阿姨远去的背影，我觉得只要人人献出一点爱，世界将会多么美好。

Dear Wei Fang,

I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.

You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.

I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

A great poem is a fountain forever overflowing with the waters of wisdom and delight .(P. B. Shelley , British poet )

伟大的诗篇即是永远喷出智慧和欢欣之水的喷泉。(英国诗人 雪莱. P. B)

A novel is a mirror walking along a main road .( Stendhcl , French writer )

一部小说犹如一面在大街上走的镜子。 (法国作家 司汤达)

Art is a lie that tells the truth .( Picasso , Spanish painter )

美术是揭示真理的谎言。 (西班牙画家 毕加索)

Humor has been well defined as thinking in fun while feeling in earnest. (Mark Twain , American novelist )

幽默被人正确地解释为“以诚挚表达感受，寓深思于嬉笑”。(美国小说家 马克·吐温)

The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation ; the two keep in their downward tendency.( Johan Wolfgang von Goethe , German poet )

文学的衰落表明一个民族的衰落。这两者走下坡路的时间是齐头并进的。(德国诗人 歌德 . J . W .)

When one loves one‘s art no service seems too hard .( O. Henry, American novelist )

一旦热爱艺术，什么奉献也不难。 (美国小说家 欧·亨利)

Dear Sue,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours，

Li Hua

Now, the new term begins. I live the life normal as before. Every morning, I get up at 6:30. After washing, I eat breakfast at home. My mother always cooks delicious and nutritious breakfast for me. I usually go to school at 7:20 by bike. It only takes me ten minutes to get to the school. We have the morning reading at 7:40 and the classes begin from 8:00. I usually have Chinese, math, English and other subjects. I go home at noon and have a short rest at home. Classes are over at 5:30. I usually play at school for a while and then go home. At night, I usually finish my homework and then watch TV. About 10:00, I go to bed. This is my all day.

I have a good friend -- China pistil. Under her with a knife flat bang, bang has a pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes, always fly fly. China pistil or a wise girl.

Remember last summer vacation, home filled with the turquoise on jujube jujube, jujube is the sweetest. I embrace the trunk of Chinese jujube forcibly shake, but thick trunk did not move. At this time, China pistil said, "tang also heart, dont bother, look at me." She picked up a few small stones, want to put the dates down. I looked at her and said, "its too dangerous, falls to one thousand?" Around China pistil looked around as if (he were) in search tool that can be used. Her eyes stopped on my balcony hanging clothes on a bamboo pole, she said, "tang heart, also can ask your mother for drying clothes pole? We can use bamboo to knock the branches, so dates will fall down, we can eat to the dates." I listened to the idea of China pistil, happy said: "China pistil, you are so clever." She picked up a bamboo pole, want to knock the branches. Jujube is too high, however, she couldnt reach, how to do? "There is!" She stepped on a branch and two feet and a push, like a flexible monkey climbed up the tree. China pistil hugging the trunk, one hand picked up knocks on the bamboo pole to forcibly branches, see dates like raining down. So blessed and overjoyed, we run go to pick up dates. I put a jujube in your mouth, heartfelt China rui said: "China pistil, its too much of you." China pistil cheerful smiled and said: "a piece of cake." Jujube sweet filled our hearts.

Look, this is my good friend -- China pistil. A lively and cheerful, clever girl.

我有一个好朋友——华蕊。她有着一刀平的刘海，刘海下有一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，总是扑闪扑闪的。华蕊还是一个充满智慧的女孩呢。

记得去年暑假，家门口的枣树上结满了青绿色的枣子，这时的枣子是最甜的。我抱住枣树的树干用力摇晃，但是粗粗的树干纹丝不动。这时，华蕊说：“唐亦心，别白费力气了，看我的。”她捡了一些小石子，想把枣子扔下来。我看了看她，说：“这样太危险了，万一掉下来砸到人怎么办?”华蕊环顾了一下四周，似乎在寻找可以使用的工具。她的目光停在了我家阳台晾衣服的竹竿上，她说：“唐亦心，能问你妈妈要晾衣服的竹竿吗?我们可以用竹竿来敲打树枝，这样枣子就会掉下来，我们就能吃到枣子了。”我听了华蕊的想法，我开心说：“华蕊，你真是太聪明了。”她拿起竹竿，想敲打树枝。可是，枣树太高了，她够不着，怎么办?“有了!”她踩在一根树枝上，两脚使劲一蹬，像一只灵活的猴子似的爬上了树。华蕊一手抱紧树干，一手拿起竹竿用力往树枝上敲打，只见枣子宛如下雨般落了下来。我们高兴极了，跑东跑西地捡枣子。我放了一颗枣子在嘴里，由衷的对华蕊说：“华蕊，你真是太厉害了。”华蕊欢快的笑了笑，说：“小事一桩。”枣子的甜味沁入了我们的心田。

瞧，这就是我的好朋友——华蕊。一个活泼开朗，聪明伶俐的女孩。

The annual New Year again, really happy, because you can eat dinner with the family also can get lucky money, usually at home cant to have dinner with your grandparents, now finally can eat together, I feel I am the happiest person in the world.

During the festival, my father took us return home to play, in the morning we set out, I feel the home warm sun, sun, I put the clothes take off one by one, the hotel I headed to the beach, lying in a hammock coconut trees, everyone wants to play, then we put on a swimsuit, headed for the swimming pool to play water, we in the swimming pool, a water fight, play really happy, in the evening, we are in a lot of sumptuous buffet, for dinner, so have a good day. And then we went to old street and saw the Confucius temple, and peace, the castle, the building looks antique, thats very interesting.

On the last day, we went to my grandmas New Year, grandpa and grandma eat together, after dinner, my grandmother sent us a red envelope, we are happy with my grandmother said: "thank you grandma grandma listened to very happy, we are happy."

The above is my happy New Year holiday, I feel very happy, very fun, next time be sure to ask dad to arrange more fun trip.

一年一度的新年又到了，真开心，因为可以和全家人吃年夜饭又可以领到压岁钱，平常在家里都没办法和爷爷奶奶一起吃饭，现在终于可以一起吃饭了，我感觉到我是全世界最幸福的人。

过年的时候，爸爸带我们回老家玩，早上我们出发了，我感受到 老家热情的太阳，晒的我把衣服一件件的脱掉，到了饭店我直奔沙滩，躺在椰子树的吊床上，大家都要想玩玩看，接着我们换上泳装，直奔游泳池玩水，我们在游泳池打水仗，玩的真开心，到了晚上，我们在很多丰盛的自助餐吧，享用晚餐，就这样，度过美好的一天。然后我们去了老街，看到了孔庙、平安古堡，这些建筑物看起来古色古香，真有趣。

最后一天，我们去外婆家拜年，和外公外婆一起吃饭，吃完饭后，外婆发给我们红包，我们开心的跟外婆说：”谢谢外婆外婆听了很开心，我们也很开心。”

以上是我的快乐新年假期，我觉得很开心，很好玩，下次一定要请爸爸安排更好玩的行程。

This summer holiday, I had travelled to Hong Kong with many other students. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but there are many people living there.

In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs.

We went to lots of places, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. Sitting in the cable car, you can see two hills, lots of different flowers and the sea. Some students were afraid of sitting in the cable car!

We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didnt like the food.

Hong Kong is very beautiful. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day.

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution isbecoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。

导语：有没有某一天对你来说是特殊的呢?以下是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Today is a special day ,it’s my maternal Grandpa’s birthday.In many years,we celebarted the day together happily ,with our whole family.But he has gone …and won’t come back again.We know he is living in the heaven, with God and gods.

That day ,I standed before him,during a queit moment ,he was looking at me ,smiling in peace …. And the next moring , he passed away…

I enjoyed the beautiful stories my grandpa told . He was a marvelous storyteller.When I was a child , he liked to told mythology for us. All the children crowded around him,like subjects around the throne. One after another,he told stories from his hearts. And now,I announce that it is maternal Grandpa’turn to listen to my stories for a change. I want to told him all about my shool life,with wet ,flashing eyes.It recalls all kinds of lost memories—stories about when we are little,stories about when Grandpa was young,stories that are shared family treasuers.

翻译

今天是个特殊的日子，这是我外公的生日。多少年来，我们在一起的日子celebarted幸福，我们的整个家庭。但他已经走了…不会再回来。我们知道他是生活在天堂，上帝和神。

那一天，我站在他面前，一个平静的时刻，他看着我，微笑吧…第二天早上，他去世了…

我喜欢我爷爷告诉我的美丽故事。他是个了不起的说书人，当我还是个孩子的时候，他喜欢告诉我们神话。所有的孩子都围着他，像周围的臣民。他一个接一个地讲述心中的故事。现在，我宣布，这是母亲的grandpaturn听我一个变化的故事。我想告诉他关于我的学校生活，用湿，闪烁的眼睛，回忆各种失去记忆的故事，当我们小，故事关于爷爷年轻时的故事，分担家庭treasuers。

The plan for the new term

Another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.

Firstly,i descide to finish my homework more carefully than

before.And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didnt know it clearly.

Secondly,i will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge.and try to combine thoery to practice.

Finally,i will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.Thats what i plant to do in a new term.

[下半学期的计划英语阅读作文

偶然，记起一个伟大的人来。他给我感触很深。

星期天的早晨，阳光普照大地。我和妈妈心情愉快地到花园散步。

突然，远远地，走来一个人！低垂的头，蜡黄的脸，破旧的布鞋，混浊的眼珠。额头的一道皱纹刻出了他所经历过的人间风雨。“唉，他这种人！”我不无悲悯地想。他向我们走来，妈妈迅速地把我拉到一边，好象怕我感染上什么病毒似的。

就在转身的那一瞬间，我看到了他的眼神。心，猛地颤抖了一下。

那是怎样的眼神啊！

透着哀怨，透着凄凉，透着绝望，透着无助。我的心，顿时我的心像被割了一刀。我赶紧背过脸去。一边无奈地想：“人与人之间，就是不同啊！”

然而，命运安排我们擦肩而过，是不是另有目的？我仿佛听到了树叶飘落的声音。

妈妈紧紧的握住我的手，加快速度往前走。

一个苍老的声音在背后响起：

“钱，钱掉……了。”

妈妈立刻转过身去，掏出钱包清点了一下。“呀，果然是我们的钱！”她向那人投去感激的目光，那目光还饱含着尊重。

我的心，再次颤抖了一下。

那可是张一百元的纸币啊！他完全可以悄无声息地捡起，放进自己的口袋。我们也不会发觉。可他，没有这么做！

我彻底改变了对他的看法。

他穷吗？不，他不穷！也许，他口袋里没有多少钞票。但是，他的人格钞票却异常的多，他的精神值得我学习。他很富有！

哇，他这个人！

他已经渐渐走远，但我和妈妈仍目瞪口呆地站在那里，久久没有动弹。

六年级:冷靖宇

--600字

I have a pair of big, eyes, a small mouth, and a head of long hair. Do you want to know my hobby? Read on.

I really like the car, especially lamborghini and F1. Hundreds of thousands of car video my tablets. When you walked into my house, you will find, there is an ocean of car? Especially the guest lounge that lamborghini, very conspicuous. Yes, he is the classic lamborghini, do manual work is very delicate. As long as look, you will buy. The origin of it is unique: I when eight years old birthday, to go to the auto show, I looked into the distance, you found it. So he said to his mother: I want it. "Mother said:" that is all right. I can jump three feet high! Extremely happy.

You know my hobby, thats right, is the car!

我有一双大大的、水灵灵的眼睛，一张小嘴巴，和一头长长的秀发。想知道我的爱好吗?往下看吧。

我十分喜欢赛车，特别是兰博基尼和F1赛车。我的平板电脑里有数不胜数的赛车视频。当您走进我家，你就会发现，这里难道是车的海洋吗?特别是客人休息室的那辆兰博基尼，十分引人注目。没错，他就是兰博基尼的经典款，做工十分精致。只要看上一眼，你就会入迷。它的来历也非同一般：我过8岁生日时，去参加车展，我往远处一望，就发现了它。于是便对妈妈说：‘我想要它。“’妈妈说：”那好吧。‘我一蹦三尺高!高兴极了。

我的爱好你知道了吧，没错，就是爱车!

记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整：

I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H "，但动笔之前，围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"

3. 用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.

修改后：

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

"Dont worry, well send you home."

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.

1.有很多同学早晨上学不吃早餐，这是一个不好的习惯，对身体有很大的危害。请根据提示写一篇短文，指出不吃早餐的危害。70个词左右。?

提示：1.不吃早餐对身体有害;2.不吃早餐会影响上午听课。

Every morning we

have to go to school very early, so many of us don’t have breakfast. It’s very

bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. It’s a long

time before lunch. If we don’t eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry

and we can’t listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we

are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast.

2

. How to keep healthy

If we want to keep our

bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early

and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking,

swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food——more fruit

and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor

at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled

water every day. It’s necessary for our health.

We should not throw

litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. It’s also very important.

3.假如你的爸爸是个医生，曾参加了2003年的非典防治工作，虽然非典已经过去了，但是他对一家人的健康仍然很重视。请你写一篇60词左右的短文，讲一下只要预防得当，疾病并不可怕。

参考词汇：personal health个人健康 spit吐痰

overwork使……过于疲劳 food and drink饮食

Keeping healthy

3.My father is a doctor. In 2003,

he took an active part in the battle against SARS.

He said,“We don’t have

to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the

illness away.”

My father and I like

running in the morning. We keep the windows open so that the air in the room is

clean and fresh. We wash our hands before meals. We have healthy food and

drink. We don’t spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too

much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick.

"...5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go!" On October 15, 2003, China launched its

first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in

Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.

Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket

carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared

spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball betore vanishing into

deep space.

As the worlds largest developing country, China is more than proud of

making its own contribution to human beings outer space exploration. Meantime,

it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and

social development.The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter

in space history.

Hi ，this is Wang Fang Ping, I’m going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, I’m going to go shopping with my friend by bus. I’m going to buy a pair of new shoes, some books and magazine. Then I’m going to visit my grandparents by bike.

On Sunday, I’m going to my friend home. We will do homework.. Then, in the evening, I’m going to supermarket with my brother. He likes toy very much.. In the market, I’m going to buy five notebooks, one pen, three pencils, one pencil-case, a color pen and many snacks. At home, we are going to watch TV together. That will be fun. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

Dear Professor Smith,

I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 9 o’clock and end at 11 o’clock on Nov. 28th in Classroom 201 of the third teaching building.

As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.

Could you please contact us in advance at Englishtec @163.com if you could come to our culture festival? We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Lihua