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321六年级英语日记
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+ 加入清单This morning I went to the English corner which is in the park near my home. It is three years since it was founded. Many middle school students as well as college students and foreigners take part in the activity. People there practice speaking English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English Learning. I think it is a good chance for me to use what I have learnt in my English class. I felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best to learn English better, for it is so widely used in the world.
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篇1:高二期末英语满分
全文共 2950 字
+ 加入清单In the courtyard of my hometown, there is an old phoenix tree that has been
with the town for decades.
Indus trees are not as slim as maple trees, nor are they evergreen like
pine trees. It is just a tall and thick tree with a plain appearance, but it
gives a sufficient sense of security. Relying on it, you dont have to worry
that it will crumble like a skinny maple, and you dont have to worry that it
will "pin to pin" to you like a pine tree. Its sturdy body is always waiting for
your support; its smooth skin wont hurt you in the slightest.
Sycamore tree, just like mother.
In the hot summer, my pleasure is to enjoy the shade under the tall plane
tree. Its lush leaves will divide the dazzling sunlight into small pieces and
sprinkle it down, which is also warm on the body. Leaning on the trunk and
looking up, the plane tree is really featureless, and its ordinary appearance is
incomparable with those beautiful scenery elsewhere. However, in my eyes, only
it is the most beautiful. Its beauty is not in appearance, but beauty from the
inside out. Only when you experience it and experience it with your heart will
you discover it.
When I was a child, because the adults in the family were busy with work,
no one could play with my brother and me. So I got into the habit of liking
being alone. When the adults were busy going out, I led my brother to sit under
the plane tree and waited for the adults to return. Laifu would sometimes lie
quietly beside us, waiting for us. Every summer, such a view is the most
beautiful.
Time passed quickly and we all grew up. The sycamore tree is also getting
older. When I went to see it again, nine years had passed in a trance with the
wind. Its branches were cut off a lot because it blocked the newly built small
building, and it seemed to have grown taller. The leaves were not as green as
before, and some of them were yellowed, which seemed to have a different kind of
beauty. Just like my mother, it is getting old day by day.
I stood on the roof, the furthest away from it, and stroked its smooth
body. I dont know, maybe it does. This time Im not coming back just to see it,
this may be the last time we see each other. what is the reason? It was probably
because the house was going to be renovated, and the tree blocked it. In fact, I
still have a lot of words in my heart that I want to tell it, and I watched it
quietly, and thousands of words came to my mind, but in the end, it came to my
lips and became silent. I looked at it, just like that quietly, at this moment,
it was the scene in my eyes. Is it beautiful? No. But it will always be etched
in my heart.
Perhaps, it is not a tree. Instead, its a playmate of mine. Bring me joy,
support, help, warmth.
The autumn wind blows, and a yellowed leaf dances in the wind. It still
seems to be nostalgic, until the last moment, it will always stand here,
guarding us. Protect us with everything that is kinder than a pine tree and
taller than a maple tree.
Goodbye, sycamore tree.
篇2:关于生命的六年级英语作文
全文共 2073 字
+ 加入清单In recent years, the news about saving others lives at the cost of ones own are frequently reported. Some people praise the people who save others, becuase its traditional virtue in China to help those who are in need. However, some other people argue that its not worth to save others lives at the cost of ones own and it should not be encouraged. As far as I am concerned, the spirit of self-sacrifice is worthy for us to learn, but we should find amore appropriate way to avoid accident as well.
近年来,关于用自己的生命为代价来拯救别人的生命的新闻频繁被报道。有的人赞扬拯救别人的人,因为帮助需要的人是中国的传统美德。然而,其他人争论到,以自己的生命为代价去拯救别人的生命是不值得的,这种行为不应该太被鼓励。在我看来,自我牺牲精神是值得我们学习的,但是我们也应该找一个更合适的方法来避免事故。
First, every life is precious and respected. Whenever somebody is in danger, we will certainly give them a hand to rescue the lifeif we could. Its our nature. However, its unwise to take action without any considerations. For instance,somebody is drowning, if you are good at swimming, you could jump into the water to save the life; but if you cant swim, the best way for you is not jump into the water but shout loudly and ask others for help. Secondly, some extra accidents can be avoided if we think carefully. There are too many stories about young and promising people sacrifice their own lives to save other but lost their own lives. Its quite debated about these cases. They all have their persuasive reasons and its difficult for us to tell right or wrong between them.
首先,每个生命都是珍贵和值得尊重的。无论什么时候,只要有人有危险,如果可以的话,我们一定会伸出援助之手。但是,缺乏考虑而采取行动的行为是不明智的。比如,有人溺水的时候,如果你擅长游泳,你可以跳到水里拯救生命;但是如果你不会游泳,你最好不要跳进水里,而是大声喊叫寻求他人的帮助。其次,如果我们仔细考虑,一些额外的事故就可以避免。有太多故事是关于年轻有前途的人牺牲他们自己的生命去拯救别人,但是失去了自己的生命的。这样的案件争议相当大。他们都有有说服力的理由,我们很难判断他们谁对谁错。
In conclusion, we should study the noble spirit and action of those who sacrifice themselves to save lives. However, we should also try our best to find the best way to rescue others at the lowest cost. Anyway, all lives are precious, unique and respected and we dont want to see anybody lose their lives.
总之,我们应该学习那些牺牲自己拯救他人的人的高尚精神和行为。但是,我们也应该尽我们最大的努力以最小的代价去营救他人。不管怎么样,所有的生命都是宝贵,独一无二并且值得尊重的,我们不想看到任何人失去他们的生命。
篇3:高二下学期期末考英语作文
全文共 850 字
+ 加入清单This summer holiday, I had travelled to Hong Kong with many other students. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but there are many people living there.
In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs.
We went to lots of places, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. Sitting in the cable car, you can see two hills, lots of different flowers and the sea. Some students were afraid of sitting in the cable car!
We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didnt like the food.
Hong Kong is very beautiful. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day.
篇4:六年级英语作文:Mary,my new good friend
全文共 361 字
+ 加入清单Maryis my new friend.I got to know her only yesterday. but we like to each other at first sight. she is a tall , outspoken ,13-year-old girl. she is good at english ,and i do well in maths.we helped each other yesterday with our homework.we both like playing pingpang,and we had a match yesterday afternoon. she is easy going .and i m so glad to be her friend.
篇5:高二期末英语
全文共 897 字
+ 加入清单Happiness is dependent upon work. Sometimes we complain that we have too
much work, but we fail to realize that it’s our work that keep us moving on and
helps us to become a better man. Last summer I visited my friends in a small
village. It was obvious that working has become an indispensable part of their
daily lives. They all went to the field to plant the crops. The sun was shinning
above them and they looked quite happiness about their work. On their face there
were such smiles as I had never seen before.
Work provide us with happiness. Work is more than a necessity for human
beings. If we have no work to do, we will waste our precious time. That’s pity.
We will lose everything in the end. Work helps us to realize the importance of
life, then we will appreciate it more. Everybody who live in this society could
not live without working. If we spend every day idly, we will find life is
boring.
篇6:关于生命的六年级英语作文
全文共 2020 字
+ 加入清单Compared to the universe, our lives are really short, just like a meter. But the meaning of life doesn’t depend on its length but contributions. For example, Marie Curie, in order to find the radium, she devoted her whole life to the research. Though the radioactive element had shorter her life, she never gave up her mind to serve the world. According to her story, I conclude that the first meaning of life is contribution. The standard of judging a life isn’t how much he asks for but how much he gives away.
和宇宙相比,我们的生命其实很短暂,仿佛只有一米。但是生命的意义并不取决于它的长度,而取决于它的贡献。比如,居里夫人为了发现镭把她的毕生都奉献到研究中。尽管放射性元素缩短了她的生命,但她从来没有放弃为世界服务的决心。根据她的故事,我可以得出这样一个结论,生命的最初意义在于奉献。判断一个人生命的标准不是他索取了多少而是他贡献了多少。
The second meaning of life is struggling for our goals. Each of us has goals, such as longing for position, hoping for wealth and looking forward to be loved. However, the path leading to them isn’t filled with roses. But no matter how tough to accomplish our dream we should never say die. If you really want to achieve them, please keep diligent and patient just like an English motto goes;“No pains ,no gains.”
生命的第二大意义在于为我们的目标努力奋斗。我们每个人都有目标,比如追求职位,渴望财富,期待被爱。但是,通往它们的道路是布满荆棘的。但是不管实现梦想有多艰难,我们都应该永不言败。如果你真的想实现它们,请保持勤奋和耐心,就像一句英语座右铭说的:“没有付出就没有收获。”
The third meaning of life is happiness. Not only should we keep happy, but also bring enjoyment to others .For example, we can have an optimistic attitude which can affect the people in our surroundings. Besides, we are supposed to be ready to help others, because in this way we can make both us and them happy .I consider it an unchangeable truth that ‘Helping others creates happiness.’
生命的第三大意义在于快乐。我们不仅应该保持快乐,也应该给别人带来快乐。比如,我们可以抱着乐观的态度去影响身边的人。此外,我们应该乐于助人,因为这样我们可以使我们和别人都开心。我认为“助人为乐”是不变的真理。
just want to say, the lives for us are limited, but we are able to make efforts to make it shine out .Believe it, though our lives are rather short, we can also make a hit .If we try our best, our lives will be meaningful as well.
我只想说,生命给予我们的是有限的,但是我们可以努力使它发光。相信,尽管我们的生命很短暂,我们同样可以使它绽放光芒。如果我们尽力了,我们的生命同样有意义。
篇7:六年级英语作文:My Dream Home650字
全文共 828 字
+ 加入清单I have two kinds of dream homes. One is quiet, and the other is on a busy street.
I want a quiet home because I want to have a rest there. The house is on the grass. In front of the house, there is an apple tree. I want to have many apples to eat every autumn. I also want to play the swing at the tree. There are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, two sitting rooms, a kitchen, a dining room and a big study. There are lots of books in the study and there is a computer in it. I can read books, surf the Internet and play computer games there.
I want a flat on the busy street. It’s close to my school. I have seven rooms. The biggest one is the sitting room. There is a TV and a comfortable armchair opposite the TV. After dinner, I sit in the armchair and watch TV. It’s very nice. I have a balcony. I can enjoy the sunshine on it.
篇8:六年级英语作文:新学期的打算
全文共 465 字
+ 加入清单The plan for the new term
Another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.
Firstly,i descide to finish my homework more carefully than
before.And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didnt know it clearly.
Secondly,i will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge.and try to combine thoery to practice.
Finally,i will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.Thats what i plant to do in a new term.
篇9:高二期末英语
全文共 758 字
+ 加入清单Parents are the people who care about us the most. But for a lot children,
they think it is necessary for parents to give them everything. As they grow up,
they start to realize their responsibility and feel grateful to their parents. I
was very naughty before. One day, I hanged out to play with my friends very
late, but I havent told my parents, because I thought they would not care. But
when I went home, I found my parents and uncle were sitting together, and they
looked very upset. When my parents saw me, they were angry to ask me why I went
home so late. I felt unhappy and shouted at them. Then my uncle told me that my
parents worried about me so much, and they had searched me for the whole street.
At this moment, I felt so touched, and felt their love.
篇10:小学四年级期末英语作文MyFavoriteAnimal
全文共 1980 字
+ 加入清单Last year, my father bought a lovely pet for me. She has four white paws and a white and yellow tail. She has two small ears, two green eyes and eight whiskers on her face. Her name is Sally and she is one year old.
Do you know what it is? A cat? Yes, it is a cat. She has very short fur and she is quite small. She weighs about 2 kilograms. She is usually very friendly and quiet. We never frighten her or pull her tail or ears. She likes walking around me and playing with me.
If she is hungry, she will miaow. Usually, she eats food from a tin, but her favorite food is fish. She likes juice if it is not too cold. She likes to chase and catch mice and sometimes she plays with butterflies. Sally often plays with balls and pieces of string. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She likes sitting on the sofa and watching TV.
She sleeps anywhere! She sleeps on any table, on any chair, or in any basket. She sleeps on top of the piano, on top of the fridge or TV. She sleeps on the window ledge, in the open drawer, in the empty shoe, on the grass, between the flowers, under the tree, on anybody’s lap, in a cardboard box, in the cupboard, or on my dress. Sally doesn’t care! She sleeps anywhere. She likes sleeping on my lap best.
I feed Sally every day and give her clean water. Sometimes I brush her fur and she enjoys it very much.
Sally is a very good friend, but she is quite lazy! She never worries because we take good care of her. She is always a happy cat.
This is my favorite animal---Sally!
去年,我的父亲给我买了一个可爱的宠物。她有四个白色的爪子和白色和黄色的尾巴。她有两个小耳朵,两个绿色的眼睛和八脸上胡须。她的名字叫莎莉,她是一岁。
你知道它是什么吗?一只猫?是的,它是一只猫。她有很短的毛,她是非常小的。她重约2公斤。她通常很友好和安静。我们从不吓唬她或拉她的尾巴和耳朵。她喜欢散步我,玩我。
如果她饿了,她会猫叫。通常,她吃罐头中的食物,但她最喜欢的食物是鱼。她喜欢果汁如果天气不是太冷。她喜欢追逐和捕捉老鼠,有时她玩蝴蝶。莎莉经常玩球和字符串。她不喜欢狗,她讨厌下雨。她喜欢坐在沙发上,看电视。
她睡在任何地方!她睡在任何表,在椅子上,或在任何篮子里。她睡的钢琴,在冰箱或电视。她睡在窗台上,打开抽屉,在空的鞋,在草地上,在花朵之间,在树下,在任何人的腿上,在一个纸板盒,在柜子里,或在我的衣服上。莎莉不在乎!她睡在任何地方。她喜欢睡在我的膝上最好。
我每天都给莎莉,给她干净的水。有时我刷她的皮毛,她非常喜欢它。
莎莉是一个很好的朋友,但她很懒惰!她从不烦恼,因为我们好好照顾她。她总是一个快乐的猫。
这是我最喜欢的动物——莎莉!
篇11:小学六年级英语作文:我的暑假
全文共 1599 字
+ 加入清单Summer vacation then suddenly passed half, and half of the life before I can say is a full, let me say my summer vacation life.
Summer vacation homework can not less, this summer vacation homework is not much, so I three an hour.than play games every day, five pages speed to complete the happy summer vacation, I will read after finished writing homework, watch and a half hours every day, not only wont let my reading level wont drop down. Can also let me understand a lot of sense.
In this summer holiday, not only write my homework, and travel are also the one thing of not less in the summer vacation, I went to the famous wuyi mountain in this summer holiday, I visited the mighty king of peaks in wuyi mountain, very narrow sight and some other beautiful places. I think I was a travel this summer.
In summer vacation, my friend and I went to play a few rooms to escape, let I harvest a lot. Also let me understand the team cooperation is very important. In the summer sports is also very important. Ill go to play basketball with friends every day to the days troubles as sweat flow out.
Time is always short, but in the short time we are not learn very much, hope time can slowly, so that we can learn more.
暑假一转眼就过了一半了,而在我前一半的生活可以说是比较充实,下面就让我说一说我暑假的生活吧。
暑假作业不可以少,这个暑假的作业量不算多,所以我每天三张钢笔字,五页愉快暑假的速度来完成的,在写完了作业之后我都会看看书,每天看个半小时,不但不会让让我的阅读水平不会掉下来。还可以让我明白很多的道理。
在这个暑假里,不只有写作业,旅游也是暑假里不会少的一件事,我在这个暑假去了有名的武夷山游玩,在武夷山我游玩了雄伟的大王峰,十分窄小的一线天等一些美丽的地方。我认为我这个暑假可以算得上是游山玩水了。
暑假里,我和我的朋友还去玩了几次密室逃脱,让我收获很多。也让我明白了团队合作十分重要。暑假中运动也十分的重要。我每天都会去和朋友一起去打篮球让当天的烦恼随着汗水流泄出来。
时光总是那么的短暂,但在短暂的时光时我们不是都在学到十分多的道理,希望时间能过得慢一点,这样我们就能学到更多的道理。
篇12:六年级英语作文:The cat and the mouse
全文共 658 字
+ 加入清单one day, cat is in the basket. its very lazy. it is sleeping. now the cats food is beside the cat. one mouse is very hungry. it is eating the cats food. the cats food is so yummy.
the cat wakes up. he is behind the mouse. he wants to catch the mouse. so,he is chasing the mouse. the mouse is afraid. he jumps onto the door. but, the door is high. the cat cant catch the mouse. the mouse is under the chair now. it is running.the cat still cant catch the mouse. the mouse runs fast. it runs into the hole. the hole is small. but, the cat is big. it cant go into the hole. so, the cat is angry and tired. it is crying. its very sad. but the mouse is very happy!
篇13:小学三年级期末考试英语作文Myfamily
全文共 980 字
+ 加入清单I have a happy family. My family have five poeple:grandpa, grandma, father, mother, and me.
My grandparents live in countryside. They have six rooms. The room is big. There are two apple in the ground. They have sixteen goats and three cows. The goat is white. The cow is yellow. They are healthy.
My parents and me live in city. My father is a worker. His work is hard. My mother is a high schools Chinese teacher, She take bicycle go to work at sevenclock. In the afternoon, she doesnt go home. In the evening, she make supper. The food is delicious. I am a student. I have Chinese, math and English everyday. That is boring. I have many friends. After class, I play with my friends.
We are tried, but we are very happy. I love my family
我有一个幸福的家庭。我的家庭有五人:爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,和我。
我的祖父母住在乡下。他们有六个房间。房间是大的。有两个苹果在地上。他们有十六个山羊和三头牛。山羊是白色的。牛是黄色的。他们是健康的。
我的父母和我住在城市。我的父亲是一个工人。他的工作是很难的。我妈妈是一个中学的语文老师,她在7点带自行车去上班。下午,她不回家。在晚上,她做晚饭。食物是美味的。我是一个学生。每天我有语文、数学和英语。这是无聊的。我有很多朋友。下课后,我和我的朋友玩。
我们试过了,但是我们很开心。我爱我的家庭
篇14:六年级下学期英语
全文共 1676 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays we see supermodels on almost every magazine cover and one might wonder what life will be like being one of them. Such assumption may be painful for most of the magazine readers who are already over the age when they can get taller. In response to the ”Getting taller trend”, some goes so far as to pay doctors to cut their legs open and let surgeries do the job to get just two centimeters’ higher.
In spite of all these that are happening, some of my taller friends desire to give up this superiority for they just don’t want to be the center of the crowd, saying that they would kill to be a 4 feet child. Girls, maybe you can’t remember the time when you were younger and you need to jump really hard to catch a glimpse of up-the-table world? But being taller, even the upper world of the refrigerator top is no longer a myth and your mom and dad can’t hide your snacks up there any more! As time goes on, you can easily see on the table the beautiful lavenders or lilies stretching themselves in their own fragrant smell, the shining toaster popping out warm tasty toast, or the little drops of water glittering under bright sunshine after your mom wipes the table. Don’t you just love to see every phase of the moon even when they are not that high up in the sky?
Well, I do. Being a 5 ft 10 myself, I am also taking the advantage of buying a larger outfit at a same price. Also, I get a cleaner view of the blackboard even when sitting far away from it. I run faster, jump higher and can think positively. I am proud to say that I possess the ability to see the upside of almost everything. I guess it is because I am closer to the clear blue sky above our heads.
篇15:小学六年级英语作文_假期生活
全文共 1130 字
+ 加入清单During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. I wake up 11 o’clock Am everyday, after a washing, I have a good lunch with my parents. Next I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner. I go on playing till 2 o’clock Am, and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day of my winter vacation.
寒假期间,我的生活没有什么不同。每天早上十一点我醒来,洗后,我和我的父母有一个很好的午餐。然后我玩电脑游戏,直到吃晚饭的时间。晚餐后。我继续玩到凌晨二点,然后去睡觉了。这是我寒假无聊的一天。
But I haven’t bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books, sometime I listen to the music or the radio in the bed,because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. And I also meat some of my good friends during the vacation ,we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis tegether .And I watched the spring festival party of the CCTV in the last seconds of the 2004 year! I think this is the thing most people of china doing at that time.
但我还没有厌倦所有的时间。有时我读的书,有时我听音乐或收音机在床上,因为外面很冷而且整天下雪。我还肉我的一些好朋友在假期,我们在过去的一年里对彼此的生活很长的谈话和打乒乓球。我看了中央电视台春节晚会在2004年最后一秒!我认为这是中国的大多数人当时做的。
That’s all, all my dull, coldly and snowy winter vacation.
这一切,我所有的乏味,冷冷地和冬季度假。
篇16:六年级优秀英语作文我的家庭
全文共 1123 字
+ 加入清单My home have a gentle father, kind mother, and my naughty.
Dad is working in the planning commission. He work very hard, always in the busy busy every day, on one occasion, at 9 o clock in the evening, my mother and I all went to sleep, dad is still in for tomorrows work to copy a file, at ten o clock when I accidentally got up to go to the bathroom, found my father also
Copy the files in the dim light, I look at the clock again already ten o clock.
Mother work in huanggang normal university, she told me very concerned. Every day go home, mother had already prepared dinner.
And Im naughty. I am a third grade of primary school children, every day is always happy to carry a bouncing to arrive at school,
I finished my homework when I came back from school, and then check up a book attentively look up. Call me "small fans" mother wit.
Look! This is my happy family.
我的家里有性情温和的爸爸,慈祥的妈妈,还有淘气的我。
爸爸是在计委工作。他工作十分勤劳,每天总是忙里忙外,有一次,晚上九点时,我和妈妈都睡了,爸爸还在为明天的工作抄一份文件,十点时我无意中起床上厕所,发现爸爸还
在幽暗的灯光下抄文件,我再抬头看看钟已经十点了。
妈妈在黄冈师范学院工作,她对我非常关心。每天一回家,妈妈就已经做好了饭。
还有淘气的我。我是三年级的小学生,每天总是高兴地背着书包一蹦一跳地来到学校,
放学一回家就做完作业,然后,检起一本书聚精会神的看了起来。妈妈风趣的叫我“小书迷”。
瞧!这就是我欢乐的一家。
篇17:2024期末考试英语记叙文写作指导
全文共 5333 字
+ 加入清单记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H ",但动笔之前,围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Dont worry, well send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
篇18:小学三年级期末考试英语作文MyFavoriteSeason
全文共 1966 字
+ 加入清单There are four seasons in a year.My favorite season is summer .Because when the summer is coming .I can change the beautiful skirt and I can go swimming .I like the swimming pool very much.In summer ,all things are bright.I can go to a lot of places that I like.In summer holiday,I also can spend my holiday with my parents and we can go to the Forbidden City.How interesting !
The four seasons accompany us and make our lives interesting.Summer is when everyone has fun under the warm sun,autumn is the time of harvesting,and winter’s white snowflakes decorate the bare earth and trees.But it is spring’s vitality that fascinates me the most.
I remember when I was a small child,my favorite season was winter.But one thing made me change my mind.
I loved playing in the garden and climbing trees when I was small.But I realized one autumn day that golden leaves had started to fall from my favorite tree,and by winter its branches were already bare.I thought that it had died,and would never turn green again.
When my father knew why I was crying,he told me:“The tree hasn’t left you.It’s just resting.I promise in three months,that tree will be prettier than ever.” I believed what my father said and waited for three months.
Sure enough,when the time came,the tree was greener and taller than ever.Sprouts started to stretch their heads out of the melting snow,and creeks and streams started to run again freely.
From then on,spring has become my favorite time of the year because its vitality brings me happiness.
一年有四个季节。我最喜欢的季节是夏天。因为夏季即将来临。我可以改变这个漂亮的裙子,我可以去游泳。我非常喜欢游泳池。在夏天,一切都是光明的。我可以去很多地方,我喜欢。在暑假,我还可以花我的假期和我的父母和我们可以去故宫。多么有趣!
四季陪我们,使我们的生活有趣。夏天是当每个人都有有趣的温暖的阳光下,秋天是收获的时候,冬天的白色雪花装饰裸土和树木。但这是春天的活力,最让我着迷。
我记得当我还是个小孩,我最喜欢的季节是冬天。但有一件事使我改变了主意。
我喜欢在花园里玩,爬树的时候小。但我意识到秋天的一天,金色的树叶已经开始从我最喜欢的树,和冬天的树枝已经光秃秃的。我以为它已经死了,不会再变绿了。
当我父亲知道我为什么哭,他告诉我:“这棵树就没离开过你。只是休息。我保证在三个月内,那棵树将会比以前更漂亮了。“我相信我的父亲说,等待三个月。
果然,的时候,这棵树是绿色的,比以往任何时候都高。豆芽开始伸展头上的雪融化,自由和小溪,小溪又开始运行。
从那以后,每年的春天已经成为我最喜欢的时候,因为它的生命力给我带来了快乐。
篇19:六年级英语作文:端午节
全文共 666 字
+ 加入清单导语:端午节马上要到了,端午节习俗你知道多少呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的端午节习俗,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Over the years, the story of Qu’s demise transformed into the traditions of racing dragon boats and eating zongzi – a kind of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. The races have certainly captured the imagination of people from all over the world. Every spring there are nearly 60 dragon boat races held outside of China in cities from Vancouver to Sydney, from Gdańsk, Poland to Cape Town, South Africa. Canada alone has nearly 50 dragon boat teams and Germany has nearly 30.
【参考译文】
多年来,屈原逝世的故事演变成了赛龙舟和吃粽子的传统--一种用竹叶包起来的米饭。种族当然吸引了来自世界各地的人们的想象力。每年春天有将近60场龙舟赛在中国举行的城市从温哥华到悉尼,从波兰到开普敦ńGDA的SK,南非。仅加拿大就有近50支龙舟队,而德国队有近30支。
篇20:六年级描写长城的英语作文
全文共 1235 字
+ 加入清单欢迎大家来到长城,我们参观的是秦朝修建的。从东头的山海关,到西头的嘉峪关,大约有一万三千多里。 从北京出发,不过一百多里就来到长城脚下,这一段长城修筑在八达岭上,大家看,长城是用巨大的条石和城砖筑成的,城墙外还有瞭望口和射口,是屯宾的堡垒,打仗的时候,城台之间可以互相呼应。
Welcome to the Great Wall, we visited the Qin Dynasty built. From the east to the west of Shanhaiguan, Jiayuguan, about ten thousand more than 3000. Starting from Beijing, but a hundred Li came to the foot of the Great Wall, this section of the Great Wall built in Badaling, you see, the the Great Wall is built with huge stone and bricks, walls and lookout and nozzle, Bing is Tun fort during the war, the city of Taiwan can correspond with each other.
其实最值得我们深思的是,修建长城是在秦朝时期。当时的科技是如此落后,那时没有飞机、没有轮船、没有起重机……
In fact, the most worthy of our thinking is that the Great Wall was built in the Qin dynasty. The technology is so backward, then no plane, no boats, no crane......
有的只是劳动人民的双手和双肩。 他们就是这样一步一步地,把一块块几千斤重的石条抬在山上,再用双手一块一块地建成了这样前不见头,后不见尾的万里长城。
Only working peoples hands and shoulders. They are one step at a time, to a thousand pound stone lift on the mountain, and then hands a piece of land and built a does not see the head, not the tail after the great wall.
没有他们,就没有这世界历史上的伟大的奇迹。我们可要珍惜这一切呀!
Without them, none of this would be a great miracle in the history of the world. We need to treasure it!