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关于猫的英语作文3篇 作文初一【精选20篇】

生活中我们会遇到各种各样的人,有的人让你尊敬,有的让你佩服,有的让你感动,有的让你叹息……她的样子我已模糊,她的名字我也不知不过他的做法让我感动。下面是小编整理的2024关于这样的人让我感动的初中作文,欢迎阅读参考

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初一英语作文:凡事量力而行

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The proverb "Haste makes waste" means that one may delay the time to complete one thing if he rushes to do it, because he may neglect something important in the process and has to do it again from the beginning. So one should do every step well.

Take remembering English words for example, every student wants to enlarge his vocabulary. But this aim cannot be achieved in one or two days. You should stick to remem bering some words a day and revise the words every few days. In this way you can keep the words in your mind firmly. There is mo shortcut. If you want to stuff all the words into your brain and mot to revise them, you will remember nothing. So dont be hasty. Haste makes waste.

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篇1:以诚信为话题的初一英语作文

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A boy went to a shop and bought a pencil and other things. When he was going to pay the bill, he took out his wallet and found he had not enough money to pay. He felt awkward. At that moment, an old man who was in charge of the shop smiled and said to the boy that he could give the rest of the money next time. The boy was so shocked, as the old man trusted him so much. When the boy went home, he remembered it all the time. So the next morning, when he passed the shop, he gave the money without hesitation. Integrity is priceless and decides who we are.

一个男孩去了一家商店买了一支铅笔和其他东西。当他要付钱的时候,发现钱包里的钱不够支付。他觉得很尴尬。在这个时候,这位管理商店的老人笑了笑,对那个男孩说他可以下次再给剩下的钱。男孩很震惊,老人竟然那么信任他。这个男孩回家后,他一直记得这件事。所以第二天早上,在他经过商店时毫不犹豫的给了老板钱。诚信是无价的,也决定着我们是怎么样的人。

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篇2:初一英语作文:我的英语老师

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Look this is my English teacher .Hes tall and fat .Hes very fanny !

He has two small eyes ,and a big mouth.I tell you, he looks like a big bear.

So,If I meet him I often said :Hello,Mr bear .And he said :Hell ,small bear.Because my classmates think I look like a bear too.

My English teacher works very hard .And he often tell us :You must

very hard to leron English .

I like my English

teacher very mueh!!!!

Welcome to meet my English!!!!

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篇3:端午节的初一英语

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When it comes to the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, you will think of Dragon Boat Festival and zongzi. Do you know the origin of Dragon Boat Festival? Let me tell you something about it.

Qu Yuan, a doctor in the state of Chu, had always loved the country, but his patriotic heart was unfairly treated by Zi Lan and Jin Shang. In the early May ad 278, five, Qu Yuan was patriotic and angry, holding a big stone, jumping into the Miluo River and suicidal. The people of the state of Chu were all sorrowful. They all rowed a boat to save Qu Yuan. But a vast ocean, where there was Qu Yuans shadow, the gang had been in the Miluo river for half a day, and had no choice but to find Qu Yuan corpse. The bamboo tube in Steamed Rice cast the hope that the fish in the water is not the original body of gnawing humiliation. After that, every year on the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, the local people rowed the rice into the river in the bamboo tube, and later, the rice in the bamboo tube was changed to zongzi.

On the annual Dragon Boat Festival, people pack zongzi, buy zongzi and eat zongzi. The shape of zongzi is very special, neither square nor round. The zongzi is wrapped with green rice dumplings wrapped in glutinous rice and jujube. The color and appearance of the dumplings are very good. The taste of the dumplings is unique. It is a unique taste of the zongzi. It is both a delicacy of summer and an appetizing food, and a good nourishing nourishing product.

Whenever I eat zongzi, I think of Qu Yuans patriotism.

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篇4:有关交流英语初一

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In the last century, the government carried out the policy of family

planning to control the increasing population. So most families have only one

child, but recently, a new policy has been announced and people can have the

second child. It sounds like the good news for the family, as the only child can

have a sibling to company. While for some parents, they seem to be not the

qualified parents. A boy complained that his parents’ second child was the smart

phone, because they lowed down their heads all the time. Many parents did not

realize the lack of communication with their children. If they want another

child, they’d better learn to communicate their kids first.

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篇5:作文初一英语

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Chinese food is colorful, varied, delicious, and nutritious. Chinese people

cares not only about the taste of the food, but also about its color and smell.

Food in different places has different flavors. Beijing food is quite oily and

salty; Shanghai food is sweet and light; Sichuan food is spicy and hot; and

Cantonese food is fresh and tender. Whats more, there are some popular local

snacks. For example, Beijing Roast Duck has a good reputation for its tender

meat, while the steam buns in Shanghai are well known for their juicy

ingredients.

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篇6:初一英语作文

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Inow living in a small house with my parents. Life for us is hard but

happy. I must study hard so that I can buy a big new house some day. I call it a

dream house.

It has three floors with five bedrooms, three bathrooms, two big dining

rooms and two living rooms. When my friends come to visit me, I will have enough

bedrooms for them. Well have a good time. Besides that, we will have a swimming

pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house. In the morning, my

parents can do some exercise in the garden. The air must be very fresh. When we

feel tired, we can have a swim in the swimming pool. Life will be easy for

us.

Ill study harder than before so that the dream can come true.

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篇7:有关坚持英语初一

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Last night, I watched a tennis game, it was the US open, because there was

a Chinese female player came to the semi-final, so I stayed up to watched the

game. Unluckily, she was injured twice, though she still wanted to finish the

game, her body situation did not allow her to do so. Her insistence moved so

many audience, they gave her the biggest applause.

The power of insistence is great, it will help you set free your potential

and keep move on. Just for the players, they will face all kinds of incidences

now and then, but the will to insist will make them finish the game. Sometimes,

people win the game not because of their excellent skills, but their strong

will. Those who can stick on to the final line will win people’s applause.

What’s more, when people insist to finish the game, it is the respect that

they show to their opponents. Their spirit deserves people’s applause.

Insistence is a merit, we should keep it, no matter what we do, we must remember

to insist.

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篇8:初一关于读书的好处英语作文

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Study raises a gender, reading can cultivate their temperament, make oneself is so mild and gentle, have the bookish; Read volumes, such as writing, reading can improve our writing skills, writing articles is sharp; Old tire back to read, read up on thoughtful child knows, reading can improve understanding ability, as long as the master thought, you will know the truth; Reading can make their own knowledge accumulation, the gentleman to gather. In short, the hobby reading is a good thing. Lets have to study.

The benefits of reading has a lot of, I introduce you to the following:

1. Can make us see the world, dont go out, that is whats going on in the world.

2. Can improve our ability of reading and writing level.

3. We can make the change has the tutelage.

4. Can let us find a good job.

5. Can make us in an impregnable position in the fierce competition in the society.

......

Actually there are many benefits of reading, is up to you to find slowly.

读书养性,读书可以陶冶自己的性情,使自己温文尔雅,具有书卷气;读书破万卷,下笔如有神,多读书可以提高写作能力,写文章就才思敏捷;旧书不厌百回读,熟读深思子自知,读书可以提高理解能力,只要熟读深思,你就可以知道其中的道理了;读书可以使自己的知识得到积累,君子学以聚之。总之,爱好读书是好事。让我们都来读书吧。

读书的好处有很多,我给你介绍以下几点:

1.可以使我们增长见识,不出门,便可知天下事。

2.可提高我们的阅读能力和写作水平。

3.可以使我们变的有修养。

4.可以使我们找到好工作。

5.可以使我们在竞争激烈的社会立于不败之地。

……

其实读书有很多好处,就等有心人去慢慢发现。

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篇9:MyFamily的初一优秀英语作文

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My Family

My name is Claire and I’m in my fourteen years old. I live a happy life because I have a warm and harmonious family.

There are four people in my family. They are my parents、my elder brother and me. My parents both are teachers so that my brother and I have been well educated. I am four years younger than my brother who always cares much about me. We have a good relationship, though we quarrel and even fight sometimes. Actually, I am likely to consider it as a sign of love.

In one word, I really love my family. How about yours?

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我的家庭

我的名字叫克莱尔,我十四岁了。我过着快乐的生活,因为我有一个温暖和谐的家庭。

我家有四口人,他们是我的父母、我的哥哥和我。我的父母都是教师,我和我哥哥都受过良好教育。我比我哥哥小四岁,他总是非常关心我。我们有良好的关系,尽管有时我们争吵甚至打架。事实上,我可能会认为这是爱的象征。

总之,我真的很爱我的家人。你的家庭怎么样?

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篇10:初一学习总结英语作文

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阅读是其它任何一种题目的基础,包括听力、语法、改错、选词填空、写作等等。

——阅读量大了,对语法和单词的掌握必然会更加熟练,通过阅读来理解和记忆单词语法比死记硬背效果好得多。阅读水平上去了,写作水平自然会跟着提高。

在平时,应该多读一些英语材料,这是泛读。不过今天我主要围绕考试来谈,也就是落实到怎么样做阅读理解。我自己做阅读理解可以分为四个步骤,我曾经把这四个步骤教给很多同学,只要能按照这四个步骤做下来的,一两月之内,英语成绩基本都有很大的气色。

第一步,是先看问题。问题下面的选项可以稍微扫一下,不用认真看。这样做的目的是快速了解整篇文章的大概意思和考点。也就是说你把题目看完了之后,基本就知道这篇阅读理解在讲什么了。因为有的阅读文章它的写作方式不是“开门见山”式的,往往会先闲扯两句,然后慢慢的导入主题。很多人上来先看文章,一看开头——看不懂,不知道作者想要说什么,然后就晕了头,后面的内容也就跟着糊里糊涂起来。所以我们先看题目,知道全文大意和考点,即使看文章的时候有些地方看不懂,也影响不大了。

第二步,就是认真的把全文阅读一遍,然后做题。

这前面两部,是我们做阅读理解的常规步骤,在考场上,也就按照这两个步骤来就不错了。完成者前面那个步骤,每篇文章需要用的时间大概是12分钟。

但是,在平时练习中,也这样做收效不大。因为只阅读一遍,看个半懂不懂,糊里糊涂的选择几个选项,然后对一下答案。这样我们花了时间,实际上没有什么收获初一学生英语学习总结初一学生英语学习总结。花了很多时间做了很多英语题目,却还是停留在原来的水平。所以说在平时练习中,既然做了一篇,就要吃透一篇,理解一篇,收获一篇。这样即使在某一篇文章上花的时间多一些,效率却比流水一样的做很多篇阅读理解要高得多。

怎么个多花时间呢?

第三步,要对照参考答案。但是不能简单的知道正确答案就完了。对于自己做错的题目,包括那种没有把握但是“蒙”对了的题目,要认真的对照原文,理解清楚为什么这个选项才 是正确的。这个过程,就是再重新阅读文章和理解题目的过程。

第四步,在把问题都梳理清楚以后。我们要再回过头来认真的读一篇文章,这个时候可以查字典,理解一些生词的意思(注意:不要去背诵没有在课堂上学过的新单词!)在此基础上,保证自己把这篇文章的每一句话都彻底理解了。把每一句话的意思和语法结构都要弄清楚。 这样四个步骤下来,我们对于这一篇阅读理解才算彻底吃透吃通了。这样,本来12分钟就可以搞定的一篇阅读理解,可能要花差不多半个小时。但是,这比我们花半个小时做三篇阅读理解的效果要好得多,因为你真正收获了、进步了。按照这个方法,每天哪怕只做一篇阅读理解的题目,一两个月坚持下来,我们的英语成绩必然会有很大的提高。

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篇11:初一寒假英语周记

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This week I didn’t do many wonderful things. I went to learn developing film with my classmates on July 1st. It was easy and we all got good marks. On July 4th, I went to school to learn, because I will be a junior three student soon. We would have to learn some lessons in advance. The weather was very hot. But I didn’t feel that learning lessons was boring. Some teachers are new. They are good I think, although they are all looked strict. And the lessons were not too bad. This week was the beginning of this summer holiday, but it was really typical

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篇12:我的暑假生活初一英语作文

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We all know, summer holiday is a long time. Well how should we speng it? I have a good plan to spend my summer holiday.First, Im going to visit my grandparents.

First, Im going to visit my grandpa--ents for three weeks.

Then,Im doing my homework, sounds boring. "When you finish my home work, we are going to aquarium"my mother says. When I finish my homework,we are going to aquarium, and going to take many photos. I am so happy.Two weeks later Im going to school.

This is my plan to speng my sommer holiday. How about you?

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篇13:初一暑假英语

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No sooner had the summer vacation begun than I returned to my native town.

Of course I must make good use of it; otherwise I would incur the displeasure of

my parents.

In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In

the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river.

At night (In the night) I watched television with my family (the members of my

family). hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to bed.

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篇14:初一下册英语

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How to protect the environment has become one of thebiggest problems in the

world .

It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matterwhere we live , we

should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy. We can collect

waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We shouldplant more trees and

we should prevent those factories from pouring waste waterinto rivers, lakes and

fields. Weshouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We

mustn’t pickthe flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his

best toprotect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and

ourlife will be better and better .

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篇15:看电视初一英语作文

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Now TV has become necessary in our life. We can get all kinds of information through TV. The world is in front of us. The distance between countries is shortened with the help of TV.Every day we can watch some interesting programs to make us happy.

Although TV has some benifits, sometimes it has bad influence. Some students have no time to study because they watch TV in all the free time. And some programs are not proper for children.

So we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children.

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篇16:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇17:我的英语老师初一学生作文

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在教棒和粉笔的共同飞舞中,在老师声声叮咛,鼓励和无微不至地呵护下,多少位良师被学子深深地印在心里啊!

——题记

我在这里写的是一位普普通通,平凡得不能再平凡的人民教师,50来岁,由于终日为我们不辞辛苦的操劳,脸上布满了皱纹,她的两眼黑得发亮,锋利的目光,仿佛要把什么刺穿似的。我有点害怕。她只教我们还不到四个月,但是,每当我想起她时。她对我们的严就像教练训练运动员那样一丝不苟;她对我们很关心,体贴,就像对待自己的儿女一样。 但是,那一次,我尽对她起了怨恨。那是一节自习课,英语老师让同学们把作业本A订正好交到办公室去批改,作业本B作好的也去批改。我怀着喜悦的心情拿着作好的B去批改,"报告""进来"她的声音很平稳,我走了进去,队伍并不长,我跑到英语老师右边去批改,无意间发现了电脑里有语文竞赛的成绩,我便很期盼得到自己的成绩,不听话的手尽往鼠标地区前行,不经意间,我触摸到了,这下手更不听使唤,一直往下翻动着,"啊"我目瞪口呆,倒数第三,我的喜悦心情沉淀了下来,"谁呀,谁在动我的电脑?"一声果断而又严厉的语言向我发起进攻,我吓了一大跳,我心里想:哎呀,这下怎么办呀,不如来个死不承认,或者,英语老师的教棒在桌上"吃吃"作响,"把手拿过来。"我害怕极了,真想使用一下神仙的仙术,把英语老师的教棒变成长长的棉花棒,只有我能看见,而老师看不见,软软的棉花棒触摸了我一下,"哇!"教棒落下来了,打得好痛呀,我有点生气,心里暗暗想着;你这个老太太,太坏了,我只不过碰了一下鼠标,看了电脑屏幕一眼,也不过如此,您竟打我,只要教育几下就行了嘛,我可是个怕痛的女孩。我心中的怨恨一直不能平静。但刚想完,那教棒的滋味和对老师的怨恨跑掉了,我寻找着,发现它屹立在英语老师身上展现出来的无可抗拒的人格魅力上。

她总穿着比别人温暖的衣服,长得虽不出众,但是她的人格魅力在我心中是最出众的,那一次英语课,因我们作业做得不好,而被英语老师斥责了一翻,最使我深受教育的是这样一句话:我做事情,要做就要做到最好。"这声音在教室里久久回荡,震撼着我的心灵。一颗'作一个高尚的人"的种子便埋下了,自从那节课后,我猛然发觉自己长大了好多好多,幼稚正向我告别。我的心底默默地感谢这位教我如何做人的英语老师。

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篇18:初一英语作文:怎样保持城市的整洁

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City cleanness is the symbol and reflection of the civilization of that city. It is obvious that if one comes to a clean and bright city, he will have a comfortable feeling and will be in a joyful mood. On the contrary, a dirty and polluted city may drive him away. So the deanness is very important to a city. But how can we get it?

The key lies in the citizensawareness of the importance of deanness. Citizens are the owners of their city. If everyone dwelling in the city keeps the city clean enthusiastically just as they keep their house clean, then streets will become cleaner and cleaner, buildings brighter and brighter, and consequently, the city will surely become more and more beautiful.

Some measures must be taken to keep our cities clean. For example, we should set a limit to noises and exhaust gases, and invest in the planting of trees and flowers. Moreover, some education and punish ment are necessary too. I believe in the future our city will become more beautiful gardens in a common effort of all the urban inhabitants.

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篇19:Finishclass初一英语作文附译文

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【正文】:

The bell rang and the class was over. Many classmates jumped up from the seat. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom while talking and laughing. Two girls were singing a song on their seats. Some boys were telling a joke loudly. They were laughing together. I was chatting with some classmates when Li Hong came to me. She joined us. Our class break was often full of fun and laughter. We often have a pleasant break.

译文】:

铃响了,下课了。许多同学从座位上跳了起来。教室变得嘈杂。一些学生走出教室,说话和笑。两个女孩坐在座位上唱歌。一些男孩正在大声讲笑话。他们一起笑着。我和几个同学聊天时,李洪来找我。她加入我们。我们的课间休息充满了乐趣和欢笑。我们经常度过愉快的课间。

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篇20:寒假初一英语日记

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You know? Is tired, happy, is happy, because today I have a good spirit in class.

In the afternoon, I was very happy to answer the question, the teacher was very happy to boast of me. For a moment, when I was in math class, I was active. My teacher didnt call me. I was very angry. I would be very angry when I arrived in the afternoon. In the 3 or 4 class, I would answer the teachers questions in Chinese, math and Chinese classes. The "bell" class, we rushed out of the classroom, "bell" class, math class, the last section about the problem, I did not finish, I am afraid, the teacher said to take the book, 3 and 12 teacher said that a problem, I raised my hand and said the problem, the teacher praised me. I came home and I told my mother that my mother was happy.

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