大学贫困申请书咋写（经典20篇）

孟子说：“人之初，性本善。”这句话我一直不太明白。社会上这么多恶人做坏事，难道他们原本也是善良的吗?但读了《悲惨世界》这本书之后，我对这句话有了新的认识。

这本书讲述了一个苦役犯让·瓦让悲惨曲折的故事，他跌宕起伏的命运时刻牵动着我的心。让·瓦让为了他饥饿难捱的孩子偷了一块面包，被判19年苦役。刑满释放后，向往自由的他逃离了政府指定居住地，被警探雅维尔追捕，从此一生过着逃亡的生活。几年后他改名换姓当上了市长，大办慈善，尽自己最大努力帮助穷人。工厂女工芳蒂娜因生活所迫过着屈辱卑贱的生活，临终前把自己的女儿托付给了让·瓦让。为了这个承诺让·瓦让历尽艰辛找到珂赛特，并哺育她长大成人。为了救珂赛特深爱的恋人——马里尤斯，他参加了巴黎友社的革命战争，并冒着生命危险就出了马里尤斯。当马里尤斯和珂赛特结婚时，让·瓦让将自己的身份告诉了两位年轻人，却不料被马里尤斯误解，带着珂赛特离他而去。他终日郁郁寡欢，日渐衰弱，内心无法原谅自己的罪行。当马里尤斯消除了误解，和珂赛特赶回修道院时，他已经奄奄一息。此时的他内心平静祥和，迎着上帝的召唤，问心无愧地与世长辞。

合上书，我的眼前出现了一位高大消瘦、目光炯炯、一脸正气的人物形象——让·瓦让。他心地善良，自身的经历让他深深地关怀和同情生活在底层的贫苦群众。当他有了钱之后，他不是附庸于上流社会，也不是满足于自身的享乐，而是救助穷人，开办工厂，帮助他们渡过难关。他重承诺、守信用。芳蒂娜与他非亲非故，只为一个临终嘱托，他重金赎回被酒店老板折磨的珂赛特，尽心尽力养育她长大，让她远离贫穷、疾病和冷漠，最重要的是有尊严地活着。在安稳平静的环境下，珂赛特出落成一位美丽、善良、纯洁的姑娘，并与马利尤斯相识相爱，收获幸福。

更难能可贵的是，虽历经种.种生活的不公正，让·瓦让仍然保持着一颗宽容博大的心。ABC友社抓到雅维尔，交给让·瓦让处死，面对这个追捕了他一辈子的警探，让却放走了雅维尔。起义失败后，雅维尔又抓住了让·瓦让和马利尤斯。在这里，让·瓦让没有被苦难和不公摧毁他的精神世界，没有用仇恨来对抗仇恨，没有用暴力来对抗暴力，而是用宽容完成了自我信仰的升华。而雅维尔的结局也完成了自我灵魂的救赎，两个人的行为都折射着人性的光辉。

是的，每个人生来都是善良的，那么为什么仍有人犯罪?这个世界仍有罪恶?作者雨果说：只要法律和习俗造成的社会惩罚依然存在，在文明鼎盛时期人为地制造地狱，在神赋予的命运之上人为地妄加噩运;只要本世纪的三大问题——男人因贫穷而沉沦，女人因饥饿而堕落，儿童因黑暗而愚蒙——得不到解决;只要在有些地区，社会窒息的现象依然存在，恶性就会存在。所以，在我看来，人性虽本善，但善的人性需要健全的制度和法律来维护，需要社会上所有的人用宽容来呵护。

If life is a book, then the university life is the most beautiful book of color pages; If life is a drama, so university life is the most exciting scene in the play, if you say that life is a time from birth to death The long-distance travel; so we have a college life, will be able to see the most splendid scenery. My friends, the best moment in this life, you have raised a sail, is the ideal toward the other side? Whether that strong stretch your wings, being rushed to freedom of the sky? Whether due to go to college and excited, heart acquiescence of a wish and strive for?

For this long-lost dream, we bided sword, those days of hard heart now is still vivid. In those days we gain a deep understanding through their own efforts to complete the thing is how meaningful, despite wind and rain we walked together through thick and thin from the beautiful university campus. Standing at a new starting point, I was so excited, they are so fascinated ......

However, when the picture of university life spread, I found searching searching at the end, not all heart, "that person is in the dim light," the joy of the past. Look for him thousands of Baidu dream, but it is still holds partly concealed. This was when I had lost, wandering over, but the time will not stop its pace from the forward qing written as "wash your hands when the day from the basin in the past; dinner, the last day from the bowl; When silence, begins before the gaze as in the past. I can feel his haste now ...... "Yes ah! Time is like water, and our lives have a lot to do, to dream, let us cherish every moment, from now accumulated bit by bit it! Lets university life becomes more full, rich, rhythmic.

In life I always want to be happy along with the success of smiling youth in every season, I know: that we have not let the call of the sea in the waves fighting courage deterred, blue sky call, you can not be too let fly wings degradation in the dark cloud.

We all have a dream to pursue the people, not because the road hard to give up the pace of progress. Pursue the dream process is bitter, but only after the sharpening of life will have more meaning. Do not let the restless heart was impetuous occupied, but the drive from the wings of the soul the knowledge learned on campus, at different levels of the crowd learn better man, four years is difficult to adhere to, to give up very easily. We are always firmly believed that winter comes, can spring will no longer far away, do not spend the winter I do not know the warmth of spring, there is no sweet water through the desert do not know, I do not understand the joy of success after failure. Because the young and frivolous, we are likely to fail, but it was also young and gives us courage to never give capital. As long as we get down to enthusiastically take a good foot of the road, we will eventually win.

University is full of talent, knowledge, but it is also a highly competitive, challenging small stage, a small community. Each of us in this arena to play a different role, then why do not we strive to own the best RPG! As a college student, we are eager optimistic and positive rather than blind impulse, without wantonly recklessly bold, dare dare not dream, ponder inquiry without Luanxiang dead end ...... let us grasp the youth, where exercise yourself! Organizational activities leave you hard figure, to show you the most beautiful style in community activities, and dedication to a force in your volunteer activities. Here you get not only a knowledge, but also a lifes most valuable asset. They Were Young, in their prime, pointing Jiangshan, Jiyangwenzi. Let the flower of life because young students of color, so that the youth because vitality and brilliance. College campuses, not impossible, just think, let us enjoy to play to their talents now! Humanoids then less, most cherished university. Let youth wasted, loading a little gain in every day life, make you confident smile floating in my face, firmly believe that pay a return, brilliant burst of passion!

University is the dream of every one of us the halls, in order to come to this hall we have experienced ups and downs. Since stepped into this threshold, then let us enjoy sway personality in this dream palace in it.

Universities are not fantasy, not a dream, but not delusional, but our great ideals. As long as we strive for, worth fighting. Someday we will be a rewarding experience! Then you will hear Maple stream boat, youll see goldenrod laughing, you will smell the fruit fragrance, because you go to the harvest season!

如果说人生是一本书，那么大学生活便是书中最美丽的彩页；如果说人生是一台戏，那么大学生活便是戏中最精彩的一幕，如果说人生是一次从降生到死亡的长途旅行；那么拥有大学生活的我们，便可以看到最灿烂的风景。朋友们，在这人生最美好的时刻，你是否已经扬起了航帆，正奔向理想的彼岸？是否已伸开你那坚强的翅膀，正冲向自由的天空？是否因进入大学而激动万分，心中默许下一个心愿并为之奋斗？

为了这个久违的梦想，我们十年寒窗磨一剑，那些刻苦铭心的日子如今仍旧历历在目。在那收获的日子里我们深刻的理解通过自己的努力完成一件事情是多么有意义，栉风沐雨我们一同走过，风雨同舟抵达美丽的大学校园。站在新的起点上，我是那么的激动，又是那么的神往……

然而在大学生活的画卷铺开时，我发现在寻寻寻觅觅的尽头，并不都是以往心里的“那人却在灯火阑珊处”的喜悦。梦里寻他千百度，却是犹抱琵琶半遮面。这个时侯，我迷茫过，徘徊过，然而时间从不会停下它的脚步，正向朱自清写的那样“洗手的时候，日子从水盆里过去；吃饭的时候，日子从饭碗里过去；默默时，便从凝然的双眼前过去。我觉察他去的匆匆了……”是啊！时间如流水，而我们的人生还有很多要做的事，为了梦想，让我们珍惜时光，从现在开始一点一滴的积累吧！让我们的大学生活变得更加充实、丰富、有节奏。

在生活中我总希望快乐伴随着成功，微笑在每一个青春的季节里，我深知：有大海的呼唤我们就不能让搏击的勇气在海浪中却步，有蓝天的呼唤，就不能过让纷飞的翅膀在暗云中退化。

我们都是有梦想有追求的人，不要因为路途艰辛就放弃了前进的脚步。追寻梦想的过程是苦涩的，但只有经过磨砺的人生才会拥有更多内涵。不要让不安的心被浮躁占据，而是驾起灵魂的翅膀在校园里汲取知识，在不同层次的人群里学着更好地做人，四年的时间里坚持很难，放弃却很容易。我们是始终坚信冬天来了，春天就不会再远，没有度过寒冬不知春的温暖，也没有走过沙漠不知水的甘甜，没有经过失败不懂成功的喜悦。因为年少轻狂，我们很可能会失败，可也正是年轻给了我们勇往直前永不言弃资本。只要我们满怀激情踏踏实实地走好脚下的路，我们终究会取得胜利。

大学是一个充满才华、学问，同时又是一个充满竞争、挑战的小舞台、小社会。我们每一个人就在这个舞台上扮演着不同的角色，那我们何不努力将自己的角色扮演得最好！作为一个大学生，我们都渴望乐观积极而不是盲目冲动，大胆而不大肆妄为，敢说敢想而不空想，深思探究而不乱想钻牛角尖……那就让我们把握青春，在这里锻炼自己吧！在组织活动中留下你辛苦的身影，在社团活动中展现你最美丽的风采，在志愿活动中奉献你的一份力量。在这里你得到不仅是一种知识，更是一种人生最宝贵财富。恰同学少年，风华正茂，指点江山，激扬文字。让生命之花因为年轻而生彩，让青春因为活力而生辉。大学校园里，没有做不到，只有想不到，让我们尽情地去发挥自己的才能吧！人生物再少，大学最珍惜。不让青春虚度，在每一天的生活里载入一点点收获，让自信的微笑浮在你我的脸上，坚信付出就有回报，激情迸发精彩！

大学是我们每一个人梦想的殿堂，为了来到这个殿堂我们经历了风风雨雨。既然跨进了这道门槛，那么就让我们在这梦想的殿堂里尽情的挥洒个性吧。

大学不是幻想，不是梦想，更不是妄想，而是我们伟大的理想。只要我们为之奋斗，为之拼搏。总有一天我们会满载而归的！那时你会听到枫叶流舟，你会看到金菊在笑，你会闻到硕果飘香，因为你到了收获的季节！

大家好，我叫xxx，毕业于XX高中。我从小便喜好文学，对我而言，相比理科中奇妙的符号数字和多变的几何图形，我更喜爱文学中的那一片人文气息。无人时，我喜欢静静的看书，沉浸甚至沉醉于那一部部文学名著中。书中那片浓郁的人文气息，沁人心脾，让我不由的深陷其中，无法自拔。

不过由于过于以书为友，反而让我忽略了现实中的人际交流，在面对陌生的环境和陌生的人时，我会由于茫然不知所措而显得过于沉默乃至沉闷，这也算是我最大的一个缺点吧，所以我希望在大学里多和同学们交流，努力改掉这个缺点。

在今后的四年里，我希望在收获好成绩的同时，也能收获到数份珍贵的友谊！在此先谢谢大家了！

Dear Sir / Madam :

Hello!I was a senior at Hunan Normal University, students going into the  community, I was full of expectation for the future.I believe, Well begun is  half done (good beginning is half the success).I hope your company is the  starting point for my success that I can, together with your company to create a  brilliant tomorrow.

I was born in the border town of scenic rivers -- Riverside.outstanding  performances in 2003, I admitted to the Hunan Normal University School of  Economics and Management, and thus opened a new chapter in my life.School  classes since I have been secretary of the corporation, not only the heavy  workload of my job training and tempering,I have the ability to solve problems  more tempered, I can calmly analyze the problems faced and thoughtful.And all of  this to my professional choice will have a profound impact.

I do our own work, the school also took an active part in the various  activities, and to encourage students to participate,for their advice; In daily  life, I was able to closely unite students, I believe that a collective effort  is a powerful,Only when we engage in, we can all work.The socialist  modernization drive is comprehensive quality management talentsSo I learn  professional knowledge, the main English andcomputers, in English, I cultivation  my hearing, said,Reading, writing ability; in the computer, I start from the  basic knowledge, and further understand the function of the OFFICE,INTERNET also  studied the basic knowledge can be used flexibly.

End professional after the election, in order to broaden their knowledge, I  also participated in the study and computerized accounting.mastered the basic  application and Excel and other accounting software applications.To make their  professional knowledge to mastery learning, I read a textbook case of the  MBA,such as strategic management, corporate governance, financial management and  capital operation, and to use their training to work.With Love width of the sea,  the days of His Career, I hope that your company can give me a chance to display  his talent.I will work hard, study hard expertise to the company to live up to  my expectations.

香港大学，是莘莘学子心中向往的大学，近几年来，许多内地的状元考生纷纷选择来港大求学，可见其魅力。据史料记载，港大始建于1911年，于1912年正式办学，为香港第一所高等教育机构，一个世纪的办学中，港大涌现了许多杰出的人才，有我们最为熟悉的革命先驱孙中山，有著名女作家张爱玲等等。今天，我们将去港大参观，近距离地感受港大的风采！

我们从港大的西南方向进入校园，我惊奇地发现没有气势恢宏的校门，从略显陡坡的路上爬上来，只看到了一个小小的岗亭，里面胖乎乎的阿姨也没有对我们查问，我们毫不费力地进入了港大的校园，后来我们才得知，港大是一座开放性的大学，允许游人自由参观，只要你能保持安静。

我们首先看到的是最负盛名的本部大楼，大楼采用文艺复兴时期的建筑形式，以红砖及麻石建成，我们步入楼内，只见楼内古色古风，兼有中西合璧之美感，整幢楼犹如一位女子，显得十分优雅，令人赏心悦目。信步入庭院之内，只见中间有个水池，池水清澈见底，旁边柳树的婀娜全倒映在池水中，阳光从树的缝隙中射下来，斑驳陆离，忽明忽暗，煞是好看，让人忘却了夏日的炎热，顿有清凉之感。走上二楼，看到一个平坦的露台，前边的窗户上都有一样的精致花纹，排布十分有规律。抬起头，看到一座小钟楼，据说那是遮打爵士于1930年所赠与的，已经有很长的历史了，周围有高大的棕榈树环绕，令人叹为观止。

从本部大楼出来，我们还参观了港大的图书馆，教学楼，学生公寓等等地方，但由于港大占地太大，我们所看到的还是冰山一角罢了。

观景也许是浮光掠影，匆匆而过，但港大的饭和港大的人却给我留下了深刻的印象。中午游览结束后，我们入乡随俗，选择在港大食堂就地用餐，出人意料的是食堂里的饭菜好吃又便宜，我们一行四人，仅仅花了九十多港币就享用到了一顿丰富的午餐，我发现在食堂就餐的有年过花甲、西装革履的老教授，也有农民工打扮的务工人员，民主、自由、开放的港大办学理念也许在餐厅里也能可见一斑。下午，我们在偌大的港大迷了路，向港大的学生问路。那些大哥哥、大姐姐尽管自己手捧书本脚步匆匆，但是对我们的问路却充满热情，他们笑容可掬、温文尔雅，耐心地为我们讲述行走路径，怕我们弄不明白，有的还主动陪我们走上一段，我们不禁叹服：不愧是港大的学生啊！看着来来往往的大哥哥、大姐姐，我也好想成为港大的一名学生，接受最先进的教育，成为一个优秀的人。

著名作家田晓菲她曾有过北大的际遇，现在我希望将来能与港大也有一个际遇。啊，为了我的人生，为了我的前途，也为了港大食堂的美味，总有一天，我要说：港大，我真的来了！

[香港大学，我来了 作文

8College life

When I was young at high school,I couldnt stop dreaming about my college life again and again.Suffering too much pressure form college entrance test,I always admired college students for their relaxed life in college.

In my personal opinion,living in university is  an enjoyment.Every day we can open our eyes naturally,and put on clothes in our own style without warring about teachers rigid control.Communicating with great master is no longer beyond our reach.Each course we take can be a feast for our mind and soul.After class,we will lead a rich and colorful life filled with various leisure activities such as .Library in  university is another factor I pursue.I think its an access to enhancing our comprehensive abilities to read even just scan all  sorts of

writings.Whats more,we will have so much disposable time that we can do whatever worthy.And our contact group will be extended signally via organizing and participating many activities.All in all,I once imagined that I can live a life that is substantial but meaningful.

However,I just have to admit that what I just describe is really dream.Now living in SD I cant figure out what I pursue and make a feasible career planning.So many young cynics in this schoolyard  argue for something meaningless.Worse still,the academic atmosphere has already done with nothing left.I havent found a busy but rich thing to try my best.As a matter of fact,I even cant choose a lifestyle I prefer.What a tragedy it is between dream and reality. 篇二：大学生活的英语作文怎么写

Life in the university is not as satisfactory as what we had expected.

First of all, we are tightly hound by continual classes, excessive homework and exams; some students complain that we are becoming “exam machines”. Secondly, the teaching method is boring; instead of lecturing, some teachers just “read” lessons. Finally, living conditions need to be improved; and food in the dining-hall is far from being attractive and tasteful.

In spite of all these adversities we still enjoy our life in the university. During the four-year university study, we can not only acquire a lot of book learning, but also foster various abilities. All types of extracurricular activities such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings and dancing parties provide opportunities to make friends; many of these friendships may last a long time.

In short,we should value our life in the university. Four years is only a short period when compared with our whole lifetime. In the university we mature, and in the university we prepare ourselves for the real world. Although there are many things lacking, the four years in the university is a worthwhile period in our whole lifetime.

贫困山区的同学们：

你们好！

我是陕西省安康市第一小学五年级五班的学生王悦如。今天，我在电视上看到了你们瘦弱的身影，还看到了你们无助的眼神。你们那里的学生大都家境非常困难，吃不饱、穿不暖，但是你们非常想上学，渴望学到一些你们梦寐以求学到的知识。

在你们的学校里，是一间间破旧的房子，一张张破旧的桌子，还有同学们从家里带的破旧的板凳。没有电灯，没有书本，甚至没有黑板！这一切都是我们无法想象的。但你们在这么艰苦是条件下，还能坚持学习，取得优异的成绩，这些都是值得我们学习的。

再看看我们吧！我们有各种各样的文具，漂亮的书本一个个五颜六色的书包，数不胜数。虽然我们拥有这么美好的学习环境，但是有的同学还身在福中不知福，不好好学习，和你们比起来，真是很惭愧。

通过这次的“手拉手”活动，让我们都能真正感受到社会就是一个大家庭，一方有难，八方支援。我们可以通过援助，让有困难的学生不再感到孤独，让他感受到温暖。也许我们捐助的东西微不足道。也许是一个书包，一支铅笔，一本图书，一枚硬币但它代表了我们的情意。我相信，当你们收到我们的礼物时，一定体会到了大家庭的温暖，拥有了欢乐。

希望与你们手拉手，肩并肩，创造更美好的未来！

祝

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刘梦娇，女，现年8岁，大冶镇第五小学四年级学生。家住登封市大冶镇沁水村第16组，全家五口人。梦娇的奶奶因瘫痪卧床多年，不但生活不能自理，而且常年医药不断。梦娇的父亲刘光辉四年前在老君堂煤矿上班，不慎砸伤颈脊椎，虽经治疗，现在病情还是没有根本好转，一点儿重活也不能干。

梦娇同学在校尊敬老师，团结同学，文明守纪，助人为乐，身为课代表和小组长，工作认真负责，学习积极主动，善于思考，成绩优异。在家孝敬奶奶、父母，经常为奶奶端茶倒水，帮母亲洗碗、扫地、择菜、带妹妹，做一些力所能及的劳动。几年来，期期被学校评为优秀学生。

Thanksgiving, or Thanksgiving Day, is coming. Its a traditional North

American holiday,and is a form of harvest festival. In the United States, the

fourth Thursday in November is called Thanksgiving Day. Thanksgiving was about

the Pilgrims, the first settlers in America. They shared the first harvest with

the Indians and gave thanks.

Thanksgiving Day is usually a family day. People always celebrate with big

dinners and happy reunions. Pumpkin pie and Indian pudding are traditional

Thanksgiving desserts. Relatives from other cities, students who have been away

at school, and many other Americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday

at home.

On that day, Americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed

during the year. And I am sure that we all must have a lot to be thankful for.

Maybe you would like to give thanks for being here with your family and for

being well,or give thanks for a healthy year, a good job,or thank your friends

for encouraging you when you are in dismay,etc.

曾经以为，在大学就象生活在天堂一样自由快乐，

我将是一只羽毛逐渐丰满的飞翔在大学这片广阔的天空，那时的我应该充实而快乐!

现在，大学生活已经悄悄溜走了一学期，真是时光如梭啊!理想和现实拉开了很大的

差距。理想和现实的对比就象魔鬼一样一点点吞噬掉我的激情和自信，而我内心却十分不甘，刻度往往平添的是那份消沉和伤感。自己在各方面都挺失败的，可是我本不该是这个样子，我本可以做得更好!可是大学中的我真是如此平庸呢!

我首次尝到了长期孤独的滋味。我一直都有很多朋友，身边欢声笑语不断。现在朋友和笑声已经存在我的记忆里成为我的催泪剂，我是多么渴望友情，很多人的友情，可是真的就那么难吗?同学们都是上课来下课走，进寝室就关门，接触交流的机会很少。现在大家都有固定的伙伴，我想扩大交往多交朋友是否就不容易了?大家的感情就这样淡淡的吗?我是一颗孤独的灵魂可我从来没有封闭过自己，我甚至想我宁愿住进8人一间的破旧的寝室，我也不要2人一间的公寓。我怀念快乐的从前，怀念活泼的自己。如今，我的学习、生活和情绪都受到了极大的影响，我不知道我是否变的文静起来了，是否变得自卑起来了，我只知道我惧怕孤独，可孤独随时向我袭来。我最快乐的时候就应该是和好朋友通电话了，那时我就立刻轻松快乐起来。也许后面的日子还很长，我将不再孤单。

对于学习，我知道学计算机的确蛮苦的，课程很多。也许是我受情绪的影响，对什么事情都不感兴趣，也没有激情，上课也不怎么听课，脑袋里要么一片空白，要么胡思乱想。大学的压力是无形的，自由时间看上去蛮多，一不小心就会空虚得难受。我上学期患得患失，毫无恒心，觉得自己有点慵懒，然而同时有感到内疚和自责。

我天天反省着，却继续慵懒着。我遇到了可怕的敌人那便是自己。我老是在想，我不该是这个样子的。现在想起来我过得无怨无悔的也就是期末考试那一周了，全心全意地看书，什么也不想，心情竟也蛮好。我知道我们少了一份激情和自信。

上学期，烦恼很多，任何困难都得自己独自承受，尽管很苦，但也明白了很多道理。祝福自己这个学期走好。

My campus life is rich and colorful.

The university life different secondary school life.And it is a problem that how should I adapt to college life.

I go to attend claeveryday morning excluding weekend .In the class I just listening to lectures, and my teachers and classmates discuss the problem.After  class, ofen i go to play basketball or badminton with my friends.

In the evening,i have two hours for study by oneself in scheduled time, and then go back to my dormitory and surf on the internet.At the weekend,i take part in some part-time jobs and go to the Einglish Corner sometimes.

All in all,life in the University is beatiful and substantial for me.And I believe I will achieve my self-value through  the university life .

自然与职场中的自我介绍不同，但唯一的目的就是要对方认识你，记住你。有人说要低调简单的好，有人则认为可以高调，但不炫耀，以展示自己的才华为主。以下资料则为您多方面进行分析：

做人要低调，介绍还是简单好

“班会上做自我介绍，大家都四平八稳地说几句话，所谓做人要低调。”回忆起四年前的班级见面会，浙江财经学院刚毕业的刘灵渊觉得，自我介绍并无多大意义。

浙工大大三的谢同学也表示了类似观点：“班会上用才艺自我介绍的人总会很反感，好像刻意准备的，自我介绍还是简单点好。”

网友kapy83和帆草七七则认为：“班会上的自我介绍没用，没人会记住你，所以随便就行。”他们说的“随便”也就是介绍一下名字，毕业学校，再加一句“希望以后友好相处”就成了。

网友“我是晓晓”则一针见血地说，有的人刻意准备华丽的自我介绍，目的是希望给老师留个好印象，然后顺风顺水地当上学生干部。

先立乎其大者，则其小者弗能夺也。——孟子

今天的语文课，老师拿起了一本新书——《大学》。什么是“大学”呢?四书之一，儒家经典。但今天，老师给了不一样的答案。

《大学》，什么是大?是一个人，张开双臂去感受大自然的壮丽，去体悟天地人的灵气。什么为大?万物皆为大，心怀天下，志存高远，便是大。“大”是梦想，一个目标，一个希望。梦想是一个远大的造逼于人类的理想，可能有些虚幻，有些幼稚，但如果鹰在地上扑腾，那还是鹰吗?梦想是大，梦想如那鸿鹄一般高飞于天，还不忘去关怀大地。真正的伟人，他们把自己的理想和他人联系起来。他们有真正的梦想，他们才能称之为“大”。

《大学》便是学大。孔子说“吾十有五而志于学”。从十五岁开始，我们便进入了“大学”阶段，从学识变成学品，直到“至善”，直到仁。我们学“善”，学仁，不都是为了完善自己帮助人吗?鹰飞得很高，但它不会忘记，是高山养育了它，树长得很直，但它不会忘记，是土壤滋润了它;人走得很远，但他不会忘记，是家庭教导了他。我们可以登上山顶，但不要忘记，是他人在你感到累時鼓励你，退缩时劝导你。愿你也有梦想，搭乘梦想扬帆起航。

站起来，张开你的双臂，你会感到很奇妙，这便是“大”，这便是《大学》，这便是“至善”。

美丽的杭州有各种不同的景色，像远近闻名的西湖，古老的岳王庙……其中我最喜欢的就是浙江大学。

我们在杭州只打算逗留一天的时间，原本只想去西湖，可是大学对我的吸引力实在是太大了，所以在打的去西湖的半道上又改道去全国排名第三的浙江大学了，一进大门，首先映入眼帘的是毛主席的雕像，他挥着手好像在说：“欢迎同学们来到浙江大学”，我们接着往里走，哇噻，校园好大好大，感觉比复旦、同济都要大，妈妈告诉我这只是浙江大学的其中一个校区，妈呀，如果把这几个校区加起来，不得赶上我们濮阳了呀。路两旁树立着高大的松树，因为比较古老了，所以从远处看就像一把把大伞，郁郁葱葱的，可以在下面乘凉，也可以在下面遮雨，接着我们往里走，就到了图书馆，图书馆的前面两侧有我们小朋友最喜欢的音乐喷泉，它们时而高、时而低、时而激情、时而平淡、时而像一根柱子一样直冲天空绽开了一朵花……有时候还会有水珠落在我们的身上，为我们送来一丝清凉，走进图书馆，好大啊，还有好多名人名言，座位弯弯曲曲的，好像在带领着我们攀登知识的高峰，虽然是暑假，不过很多大哥哥大姐姐们在那里读书。

我们继续骑着单车在浙大转悠，发现这所大学和其它大学不一样，一会上坡，一会下坡，好像在坐过山车，真是刺激，后来才发现学校靠着山。

我对这所大学充满了向往，我以后要努力学习，一定要努力考上浙江大学。

Gender discrimination is always a topic in our society. Nowadays, an issue（应该是the issue，因为表示特指） under discussion is whether equal numbers of male and female students should be enrolled in every subject by universityies（拼写！）. In my opinion, it is benificial to put emphasis on sexual equality. However, the request of accepting same（前面要加the,属于固定用法） numbers of boys and girls in every subject is overly simplistic.

点评：从结构和内容上来说，还不错，符合要求：前两句话过渡一下，交待背景信息，最后表达自己的观点。本段作者是通过两句话来表达观点，也未尝不可。

从语言角度来说，没有严重的错误，从句也得到了运用，但是还是有错。

There are mainly two reasons for me to say so.（过于口语化的表达。而且这句话就代表了本段要写两个分论点！这不是一种preferred的写法，既然有两个原因，为什么不能写成两段呢？！这样结构不是更加清晰么。） Firstly, individuals have their own rights to choose the subjects they enjoy. Thus, it is hard to say whether the number of these two different genders will coincidentally be the same in the end. Secondly,（这里开始应该另起一段） the society calls for different things from males and females. According to my experience, we have a special school named ”Female school” in our university, the main subjects of which are intermedia, individual image design, photography and so on. Only girls can get enrolled in this school because the main goal of this school is to cultivate girls that not only can stand on their own fet（拼写！） after graduation, but also live a good life while they act as mothers or housewives in the future. There is no doubt that males and females will act different roles in society after graduation.

点评： 结构上已经说过了，最好分成两段。内容上来说，两个分论点写地一般，第一个分论点后面的扩展太少；第二个分论点本身太抽象，表达地不清楚。

语法上还可以，错误并不多，但是好像没什么特别精彩的地方。

Admittedly, up till now, sex discrimination remains a problem. The emphasis on equal education opportunities for both boys and girls is exactly a must, especially in rural areas. However, since boys and girls are born with different gifts and missions, the extreme equivalence is somehow a myth. Only when the gender differences are eliminated can this extreme equivalence come true.

点评： 这段写得还不错，内容、结构和句型上都比较顺。

In conclusion, I admit the importance of equal education opportunities for both males and females. But just like the harm sex discrimination will do, an emphasis on extreme equality of these two genders is also detrimental.

这段写得也很不错。

总评：全文后半部分写得还不错，主要就是第一段有些问题。貌似可以给个6.5-7分吧。

[雅思考试大作文点评

各位好，我叫***，今年**岁，***人。

我能来到那里学习十分高兴，一向以来我都很看好***这个行业。随着**的展，它为21世纪***。之后，我开始对**产生兴趣，用心钻研，三年的大专就是在不断的培养兴趣，不断的学习进步中度过的。三年的大专生活有如过眼云烟，一去不返，唯一留下的就是我的知识和技能，此刻的我将要走向我所热衷的岗位，应对当今激烈的人才竞争，我很清楚自我知识有限，但我更清楚我有着不甘落后的精神和不断学习、不断提高的愿望。我拥有自我年轻和执着的事业热情，我相信我会做的更好！我需要一个机会，一个展示自我、锻炼自我的机会。再苦再累，我都愿意一试。所以在以后的工作中我会继续严格要求自我，也期望在工作上大家能监督我帮忙我，让我更好地完成自我的工作，好吗？

多年以来，哈佛大学的教授经常给新入校的学生讲下面的小故事：

奥斯勒是一位加拿大医生，他为了从忙碌的工作中挤出时间读书，规定自己在每晚睡觉之前必须读15分钟的书，不管忙到多晚，一概雷打不动。他天天读书，坚持了半个世纪，共读了8000多万字、1000多本书。他对人类最大的贡献，就是成功地研究了第三种血细胞。

格劳福特·格林瓦特是世界上最大的化学公司——杜邦公司的总裁。他每天挤出一小时来研究世界上最小的鸟——蜂鸟，并用专门的设备给蜂鸟拍照。权威人士把他撰写的关于蜂鸟的书，称为自然历史丛书中的杰作。

科尔是美国的一位数学家。20世纪初，在数学界有这样一道难题，那就是2的76次方减1的结果是不是人们所猜想的质数。很多科学家都在努力地攻克这一数学难关，但均未如愿。后来，在纽约数学学会的年会上，科尔通过令人信服的运算，成功地证明了这道难题。有人问他：“您论证这个课题一共花了多少时间?”他回答：“三年内的全部星期天。”

多年以来，哈佛大学的教授经常给新生讲上面的小故事，以此来解释校图书馆墙上的一句名言：“谁也不能随随便便地成功，它来自严格的自我管理和毅力。”

导语：高考结束了，你即将迎来大学生活，你渴望中的理想大学生活是什么样的?你有什么样的大学规划吗?下面是小编为大家整理的高中英语作文范文：我渴望的大学生活。

My new college life is going to start, so i cannot help feeling excited. How many times i have dreamed my beautiful and meaningful university life!

When my new life begin, i think the first thing i should do is to focus on my study. i will try my best to learn as many subjects as possible. besides, i think i will take part in some school activities to improve my comprehensive ability, such as communication ability and so on. At the same time, i am supposed to join some student unions or clubs to make my life colorful.

I know there are many differences between high schools and universities, so i will change my study habits. in high schools, it is the times of teachers forcing students to study, but in universities, we should arrange all the things by ourselves, so i will study by myself. i will make study plans such as time scheduel or something like that by myself.

of course, i will practice myself to be more independent. independence is a rather crutial ability for future development, so if there are any problems, i will do my best to solve it personally, and wont ask someone at first as before.

This is what i arrange for my new life, and hope it will start soon. i am ready for it!

Today is New Year, I wish my wish, very not easy to get this joyful holiday to come. New Years day, is our country folk ceremonious, the most lively a traditional holiday. I like the New Year, because you can get a red envelope, gather the family livelily, how happy things. Although our house is my mother and I and my sister, but Im still happy.

Early in the morning, I was waken up by the "or" firecrackers, began my new plan. I happily to find mom, grinning ground to say: "mom, I wish you a happy New Year, more and more beautiful!" Mother to listen to and then said, "that also wish you academic progress, happy every day!" And then solemnly give red packets to me.

In the afternoon, we went to bought a lot of gun, what the tortoise cannons, parachutes, fireworks anyway. By six o clock, we according to the convention on the balcony of the rope to hang a big bunch of firecrackers, exciting moment arrived, sister gently walked over, picked up in the hands of sweet braved Mars, carefully lit firecrackers, ran quickly. The gunshot deafening, we had to put his hand over his ears, look at the bright sparks, is very colorful. Then we went to dinner.

The food is delicious, have dumplings, braise in soy sauce meat, green vegetables soup, etc., an appetite is big, I forgot drooling, picked up the chopsticks one breath a soup, with a full stomach I watch TV.

New Years party was really wonderful ah, have a nice compendium of materia medica, and eye-catching "ring into egg", and "not bad money" zhao4 ben3 shan, is really an eye-opener to me.The New Year is really makes me unforgettable, like the first the unforgettable tonight!

今天吃完饭后，我坐在沙发上，对我的大学生活展开了无限的想象。

我，幻想到了我们的校园：东边是许多同学向往的游戏地方，几个阳光大男孩在操场是玩耍，你追我赶；西边是学校里生意葱茏的竹林，翠色一欲流的绿色让人神清气爽，；南边是我们学校知识的地方，朗朗的读书声从教室里传来；北面是敞开的学校大门，上面“长”了许多“尖刺”，为的是不让小偷轻易进入。

我，幻想到了我们的校服：走廊上，千奇百怪的涂鸦映入眼帘。“还我钓一鱼一岛！”“为中华之崛起而读书”呀，原来这些都是爱国的好青年啊！“垫‘十里香’牌鞋垫，要脚不要脸。”“喝肾宝，长生不老。”哟，这些青年长大的梦想原来是做推销员哪！“偶滴肾哪！”“今天不是个好日子。”哎，这些青年正处在伤心的境界。“偶是阎王老子，偶最大！”“我住精神病院302室。”这这———让我叫他们是什么青年好呢？

哎呀！爸爸叫我一起上街，拜拜，下次见！

"小说被以为是一个民族的秘史——巴尔扎克，白鹿原读后感400字。"翻开书的第一页是这句话，我不由心中产生了疑惑，为什么这本书被称为秘史呢?现在就让我来一探究尽吧。

这本书的作者是陈忠实，《白鹿原》是他的代表作。白鹿原迄今已发2OO万册，在国内外读者影响强烈。在文学界评价很高。

评论家认为，该作是一部渭河平原近现代50年变迁的雄奇史诗，一轴中国农村斑斓多彩、触目惊心的长幅画卷。

小说成功地塑造了白嘉轩、鹿子霖、鹿三、朱先生这些具有深刻历史文化内含的的典型形象，成功地塑造出黑娃、白孝文、田小娥、鹿兆鹏、鹿兆海、白灵等年轻一代性格各异、追求不同、极具时代代表性的人物形象。

著名学者范曾评价说，"陈忠实先生所著白鹿原，一代奇书也。这是一部渭河平原50年变迁的雄奇史诗，一轴中国农村斑斓多彩，触目惊心的长幅画卷。

这篇小说主要讲了：主人公六娶六丧，神秘的序曲预示着不祥。一个家庭两代子孙，为争夺白鹿原的统治代代争斗不已，上演了一幕幕惊心动魄的话剧;巧取风水地，恶施美人计，孝子为匪，亲翁杀媳，兄弟相煎，情人反目……

白嘉轩是一个典型的封建家长，恪守祖先家训，继承祖先的地位，成为白鹿原上仁义村的族长，管理着族内的事务。他也是那种让人一看就心生畏惧之感的人，又黑娃的话说，他的腰挺的太直太直了，白嘉轩对自己的这个儿子都管得特严，而对自己唯一的女儿却是疼爱有加。这为白灵反抗自己的家庭，最终走向共产主义道路埋下伏笔。

这部《白鹿原》构架恢弘，从日常生活的手描绘了一卷壮丽的生活史，其中形形色色的人物和事件总能叫人无数遍回想，

每次都能发现一点心意，是一部值得反复回味的作品。

这真的是一本好书!