初二年级英语作文：我看到的彩虹（20篇）

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

July xx ,20xx Thursday

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave(离开) the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

人生在前进的道路上，总会遭受一些挫折和打击。十四年的路并不是平坦的，是曲折多变的，是那么的幼稚，那么的无知，那么的可笑。如果问我：“你最爱的人是谁?”我会毫不犹豫的回答：“感谢那个赐给我生命教会我知识，教会我人生哲理，教会我自信，在我前进的道路上洒下汗水，为我付出一切的人——妈妈。”她勤劳，朴素，对我十分疼爱。

爱上病床边红红的眼

也许厨房里有妈妈的爱，衣服里有妈妈的爱，桌上有妈妈的爱……但我最爱的是病床边妈妈的爱。记得那是一个夏天的晚上，我突然发起高烧，外面的雨水正从天上大滴大滴地砸下来，凉风一阵阵的刮着。妈妈拿起雨伞，背起我就往医院跑。天好像在折磨我们一样，雨毫不留情的下得更大了，风随意得窜来窜去刮得更猛了。路又湿又滑，妈妈一不小心摔了一跤，妈妈爬起来，捡起伞，一如既往地又把我背在背上，我说：“妈妈，我下来自己走吧!”妈妈似乎没听见，把伞仍然往后倾斜着，使劲往医院赶。到了医院，妈妈身上几乎湿透了，头发紧紧地贴在脸上，雨水顺着她的脸颊滑落，而我身上虽然有一点湿，可是比她好得多，我感到非常羞愧。医生给我输了液，渐渐地迷迷糊糊睡着了。第二天，我醒来，看见妈妈的眼里布满了血丝，我猛然意识到这是无私的母爱，虽然这没有我成长的需要，但是我将这份爱好好的保存着，因为前进的道路还长，保留妈妈这份爱可以挑战前进道路上的挫折。

走向成熟

成熟慢慢近了，我更能听见老人眨眼之功确把我带向了走向成熟

感恩该从何处起

当我懂得感恩那天起，我就觉得爸爸妈妈为我付出了许多，每天早起摸黑，想起我就觉得自己没出息。没出息就罢了，偏偏每天还要惹妈妈生气。想报恩，结果让妈妈生气、哎!感恩该从何处起

落叶再次落下，小草再次枯萎，怎能报答春天的恩惠呢!既然，如此，那我们该怎样报答父母的恩惠呢!

我热爱地球，热爱我们赖以生存的家园。爱她的青山绿水，爱她的碧草蓝天……

I love the earth, love for our homeland. Love her beautiful country scene, love her green to the sky......

在四野飘香的花丛中，我和蝶儿一起嬉戏、欢笑;在郁郁葱葱的森林里，我与小鸟一起追逐、歌唱;清晨，我迈着轻盈的步履去原野上踏青，雾霭缭绕着、白纱般的柔柔地漂浮在空中。吮吸着花草的芳香， 欣享着阳光的沐浴，我被陶醉在这如痴如醉的梦幻里;夜晚，我坐在稻谷飘香的农家小院里，仰望着璀璨的星空，聆听着蝉鸣嘹响，蛙声如潮，仿佛置身于一个童话般的王国。

In the fields the fragrance of flowers, butterflies, and I play together in laughter; a wild profusion of vegetation in the forest, I chase, with birds singing; early in the morning, I walked with light steps to the fields on the outing, mist shrouded with white veil, gently floating in the air. At the scent of flowers and plants, we enjoy the sun bath, I was intoxicated in the dream of the night, delude one to folly; I sat in the fragrance of rice farmers in a small courtyard, looking up at the bright sky, listening to the sound of cicadas Liao ring, frog sound waves, like being in a fairy tale kingdom.

多么好的环境啊!怎能容许被破坏呢?

Very good environment! That would allow the destroyed?

人类的高科技，大排放，无止地开采……恐龙因环境而灭绝，而人类却要把自己毁灭掉吗?

The high-tech, high emissions, the endless exploitation...... The dinosaur extinction due to the environment, human have to destroy ourselves?

保护环境与维护生态平衡的历史重任要落到我们跨世纪一代的肩上。让我们都来关爱自然，热爱地球吧，手挽手、肩并肩、心连心地铸起一道绿色环保的大堤，捍卫资源、捍卫环境、捍卫地球、捍卫我们美好的家园吧!

The historical responsibility Protect environment and maintaining ecological balance to fall on our cross century generation shoulder. Let us all come to love nature, love the earth, hand in hand, shoulder to shoulder, heart to heart to set up a green dam, defend, defend, defend the earth resources and environment, protect our beautiful homeland!

Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages.

The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasseshave been built in big cities. Chinese people’s life is much better than ever before. We have Tv sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc.

We’ll study harder and make our countrry stronger and more beautiful.

I think reading is important in the whole life for people. There are many

benefits of reading.

Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs

without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and

writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write.

Thirdly, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to

job hunting in the future.

Finally, reading helps us become self-cultivation that would be beneficial

to our whole life. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and

what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of

reading.

There is no doubt that football is No. 1 sport in the world. People from

all around the world are so crazy about this match. In China, a lot of people

stay up all the night just to watch the football match from TV. The fans from

different areas make up the group just to support their teams. These fans sit

together and cheer for their idols. It is such a great moment for them. Though

the football level in China is below the international, more and more teenagers

work on this field and they fight for the country’s future. This year, the

football team has won some important matches and win respect from the world.

Happy Holiday

May day is coming. I’m so happy because my father and my mother take me to wu quan park this holiday.

In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!

I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday.

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五一节快到了。我很高兴，因为我的父亲和我母亲带我去吴权公园这个节日。

在公园里，我看到很多树木和美丽的鲜花。有许多孩子和许多快乐的玩游戏，我的父母带我去动物园。有狮子，老虎，鹰，熊，鹿，猴等。我喜欢猴子最好的，因为他们都非常聪明，他们让我们笑。它们多可爱!

我有一个很好的时间那一天。多么美丽和快乐的节日。

第一、目标要明确、适当。因为每位同学的基础各异，接受新知识的能力不同，所以选择目标一定要切合自己的学习实际，要正确估计自己的知识和能力、估计能够自己支配的时间，了解自己学习上的缺欠和漏洞。目标既不能定得过高，也不能过低，“跳一跳就能摘到果子”，便是最佳目标。

第二、要合理安排常规学习时间和自由学习时间。常规学习时间主要是用来完成老师当天布置的学习任务，消化当天所学的新知识。自由学习时间是指完成老师布置的学习任务后归自己支配的时间，这一时间可用来预习、复习功课，查缺补漏和进行课外阅读、训练等。

第三、计划要全面，要符合素质教育的基本要求。中学生不能成天只讲读书，智育只是人追求全面发展的一个方面，除此，还有德、体、美、劳等。因此，在制定计划时还要安排锻炼身体的时间、娱乐的时间以及充足的睡眠时间等。

第四、要做到“长计划，短安排”。在一段较长时间内应当有个大致安排，每星期、每天干什么，也应有个具体计划，长远计划可以使具体计划有明确的实现目标;短安排，则可以使长计划的任务逐步落实。

第五、计划要留有余地，不要定得太死，太满，太紧，要留出机动时间，可作必要的补充和安排。

另外，需提醒同学们的是，学习计划不是制定给老师或家长看的，更不是用来装璜门面的，而是指导自己学习行为的准则。计划一旦制定，就要严格执行。计划执行一段时间后，一定要检查计划内的任务是否完成，没有完成计划的原因是什么……通过检查，立即采取相应措施，调整补充计划或排除干扰计划执行的因素等。

Having a good nights sleep at grandmas house is definitely the best time to

get up in the morning. I opened my sleep mengs eyes, big had a stretch, casual

to took a glance outside the window, but I felt very comfortable: see, the green

fields like wool blankets, seem very soft. There are dozens of muddy paths in

the field, separated by large peanut leaves.

There are several apricot trees along the edge of the field, and the yellow

apricot trees are full of trees. The morning dew sticks to the apricot, which

makes it look lovely and inviting. From time to time, a few fat sparrows were

coming, and standing in the trees, chirping and whispering to each other; Or one

or two big black birds, "woah, wow," and fly to the distance; Because of several

nearby streams and ponds, also often have egrets pass by, so they are flapping

wing of the white clean, gracefully and rest a while in the field, or fly

directly to the side of the stream of fish to eat.

What a beautiful view! I kicked my slippers and walked slowly up to the

field. The smell of incense came to me, I was intoxicated, I can not help

holding a side of the MM and JJ, dancing. We whirled around in the field like a

tornado, and the mud was whirling around and we were surrounded by mud...

In the afternoon, I first saw the sunset glow. Oh, that was a masterpiece

of nature! The exotic glow of the glow of the earth, the cunning cloud, stole

the suns gold gauze, triumphantly rode in the wind driven carriage, into the

sunset clouds to show off their charm. The bright sunset clouds, like the red

rose with crystal clear dew, open with enthusiasm; Like a girls bashful face,

full of blush; Like a girls clothes, light and floating... It has red, yellow

and purple colors, and sometimes it is a lovely red scarf, and sometimes it is a

red mane horse with sprinted feet.

Beautiful home, beautiful green field, I - love - you.

Tomorrow is Mid-autumn festival， since I don’t have go to school， so I want to take a break and have fun. Mid-autumn festival is a big day， in the tradition， the families will get together and have a big dinner. For me， I have made some plans. In the morning， I will go shopping with my sister， we will buy some delicious food， so as to prepare for the dinner. In the evening， after finishing the supper， I want to play some games with my family， since it is the precious moment for us get together， we must enjoy the moment. At last， we will watch the TV show， what a wonder night.

明天就是中秋节了，由于我不用去学校，因此我想要休息下，找下乐子。中秋节是个大日子，传统上，家人们会聚在一起，吃一顿大餐。对于我来说，我制定了些计划。早上，我将会我的姐姐购物，我们会买一些美味的食物，为晚餐来做些准备。晚上，吃完晚饭后，我想要和家人玩游戏，因为这对于我们来说是一个珍贵的时刻，我们必须要享受这个时刻。最后，我们会看电视节目，这是多么美妙的一个夜晚啊。

Computersare changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs, play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest information in all fields. We dont need to leave home to borrow books from a library or to do shopping in a supermarket.

Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of computers, the word is becoming a large family.

It is the Lantern Festival. My grandfather, grandmother and father are all

in shanxi. There are only my mother, my aunt, my sister and me. My mother and

aunt are looking at the computer. I teach my sister to skateboard.

First, I asked my sister to step on the skateboard with her left foot and

gently push her right foot to jump. But she jumped several times and couldnt

jump. So I asked her to stand on a skateboard with her right foot on the board.

But she could not walk two steps and fell, but she fell several times without

losing heart. Once, when she slipped more than two meters, I was happy to give

her a hand. She was also a brave and persistent person. My sister jumped up

too.

This day, although my grandpa, grandma, and father are not at home, but

this Lantern Festival I have a very happy!

Computers started to become popular with big companies in the 1960s.

Computer

You’ve probably known about computers your whole life. But computers have not really been around for very long. Computers started to become popular with big companies in the 1960s. Computers didn’t become widespread in homes and schools until the 1980s.

HOW DO PEOPLE USE COMPUTERS?

People use computers in many ways. Stores use computers to keep track of products and check you out at the cash register. Banks use computers to send money all over the world.

Computers help teachers keep track of lessons and grades. They help students do research and learn. Computers let you hook up to networks (many computers hooked together). They let you hook up to a worldwide network called the Internet.

Scientists use computers to solve research problems. Engineers use computers to make cars, trucks, and airplanes. Architects use computers to design houses and other buildings. The police use computers to track down criminals. The military uses computers to make and read coded messages.

Friends are part of people’s life, we can’t live without friends, or we

will be isolated from the society. When we have troubles, most people will think

of their friends in the first time, for they don’t want the parents know their

hard time. While most peole are losing their friends when they don’t know how to

keep friendship.

Before I went to high school, I lived in the coutryside, where I made a lot

of friends. There was a girl who lived next my house was my best friend, we

talked and share about everything. But when I moved to another city, we had to

be aparted, though I promised her that I would write to her as I had the time, I

only insisted for about half a year. Then I met new friend and I became lazy, we

talked less and less, finally, we lose touch.

Now I have new friends, but I still miss my best friend, our friendship is

lossing as our communication stops. No matter how busy we are, we need to keep

in touch with our friends, don’t let the time takes away this precious

relationship.

Almost everyone has one idol,or maybe more than one.Someone’s idol is maybe

a Movie star.For example,Li Ming. Someone’s is likely to be a Sports star,such

as Yao Ming or Beckham.The idols are different from different persons.And my

idol is my mother.Why do we need a idol?I think the idol can set an example for

us and bring fulfillment.

No mother,no I.It is my mother gives me life.For my safe birthing,my mother

had suffered great pain.Mother’s love is the greatest thing in the world.Then

she takes good care of me,so I have a happy childhood.In the course,she is so

careful and patient.This is the love that I need to learn.My mother is

hard-working and diligent.She always gets up early and do the housework,and

other things.This sets an very good example to me.

and gradually,I develop a habit of getting up early and help her to do some

work.In school,I will go to read books in the morinig.She is also virtuous.She

is helpful.When some neighbours need help,my motherdoesnt hesitate help them.I

have been doing the same like my mother.And she is attentive,She is supportive

of the things I do.When I face a choice,she can let me make a choice.Then she

will support me.And when the time that I feel unhappy and heart-struc.

she will console me,then I will restore confidence and my body will be full

of strength.

I love my mother very much.She is my idol,the model also.She is the

greatest person in my heart.

1、Wuhan

just had a disease, the motherland and we still love it!

武汉只是生了一场病，祖国和我们依然爱它！

2、With

so many people sticking it out, why wouldnt we try.

有这么多人都在坚守，我们有什么理由不去努力。

3、No

party this year, double love next year.

今年不聚会，来年双倍情。

4、All

over China is waiting for you to recover. We will meet you in spring to watch

the cherry blossoms!

全中国等你痊愈，我们相约春天观赏樱花！

5、Having

a meal together will not break the family relationship; eating together will add

chaos to society.

少聚一顿饭，亲情不会断；聚一起吃饭，给社会添乱。

导语：相信大家都有过假期，那么你们的假期是怎么度过的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship。

then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

【原文翻译】

我的假期我是要去太阳。我将坐着宇宙飞船去那。我需要一个大的蓝色的宇宙飞船。

然后我将会驾驶宇宙飞船到太阳。太阳上面很热。所以我穿上超级衬衫。在太阳的早上,我将吃一些汉堡当早餐。

八点的时候,我要跟我的朋友在那里玩耍。他们是超级狗狗和超级女生。超级狗狗是白色和黑色。超级女生是非常聪明的。超级女生和超级狗狗喜欢和我玩。所以我跟他们玩了四十分钟。然后我做我的功课,在我的小红的房间在一个蓝色的小桌子。我的家庭作业后,我将有我的午餐。我要在太阳上吃沙拉。我将做一些红色的小熊玩具给太阳宝宝。我将有红汁,红色的鱼和红米。所有的东西都是红色的。然后在太阳上我需要大量的水,因为太阳太热。所以我要走时候，我将会驾驶宇宙飞船到地球。

家校合力共成长！

十四岁，诗一般的年龄。

一个有权利做梦的年龄，

一个从幼稚迈向沉稳的年龄，

一个青春起步的年龄。

青春，一个多么美妙的词语，

它将见证你们人生的起伏变迁，

它将见证你们生命中最为精彩的历程。

汗水、泪水是青春路上的甘霖，

它们必将浇灌出成功之花；

烦恼、困惑是青春旅途必经风景，

有我，有我，有我们，

做你的向导，

引你轻松跨越人生的迷途。

青春，是人生最大的筹码，

只有把握它，珍惜它，

青春之舟，才能鼓起时代的风帆，

在岁月的长河里永不停息地航行。

青春，是人生最大的筹码，

对于每一个拥有它却不懂得把握的人，

失掉的却是整个人生的高度。

服装显示的是身体的美丑，

行为显示的是心灵的美丑；

不要崇拜别人，

如果足够努力，

你也可以成为自己的偶像；

名言不能充当铅笔盒里的装饰品，

它是我们的行为准则，

它是我们的实践指南；

用真诚换取信任和尊重，

用谦逊换取逆耳之忠言；

一个人最可怜的是无知，

最可悲的是等待，

最可敬的是奋斗。

让我们唱响奋斗的主旋律，

把种子和信念播进青春的天地，

让青春的嫩绿和奉献的金黄，

写进我们生命的履历，

见证我们灿烂的成长，

记录我们无悔的记忆，

在我们多彩的人生之路上，

竖起一座坚实的里程碑。

Today was a day for music, because we had the preliminary contest in the morning and we would have the final contest in the evening.

After the preliminary contest, we thought that only one program could go on next at first. It mad Vanessa sad. This result gave us a big surprise. At last, we knew that she got the first place of girl’s vocal music. Why she couldn’t pass at first was because she didn’t use the match music. Just like a joke! However, we all thought that she sang well all the time no matter whether she could pass or not.

In the evening, Vanessa, Ellison and I took part in the music contest. Vanessa sang almost perfectly and she go the second prize and last. I don’t think Ellison and I sang well. Ellison forgot the words of the song and my voice was a little dumb. Maybe Ellison felt a little nervous and I didn’t feel very natural on the stage. We haven’t got any prize. It was a little pitiful. Besides, my mother and uncle came to see me last night, so they could hear the song I sang by chance. I thought I should take part in activities more and be on the stage more.

After the music concert, my mother, my uncle and I talked a lot in my room. I felt happy to see them and talk with them.

[初二优秀英语作文：Today was a day for music

As the whole world has its boundaries, limits and freedom coexist in our life. I don’t expect complete freedom, which is impossible. I simply have a dream that supports my life.I dream that one day, I could escape from the deep sea of thick schoolbooks and lead my own life. With my favorite fictions, I lie freely on the green grass, smelling the spring, listening to the wind singing, breathing the fresh and cool air and dissolve my soul in nature at last. Simple and short enjoyment can bring me great satisfaction.I dream that one day the adults could throw their prejudice of comic and cartoon away. They could keep a lovely heart that can share sorrow and happiness with us while watching cartoon or doing personal things. That’s the real communication of heart to heart.

I have the belief that my dreams should come true. I am looking forward to some day coming when I am like a proud eagle, which flies to the blue and vast sky.