英语介绍我的英语老师作文(汇集20篇)

上英语课时，英语老师于老师让我们大吃一惊。

课上，英语老师坐在讲台上，盘着二郎腿，脚尖在地板上有节奏的踏着，没有像往常一样强迫我们去背课本，而是东张西望，扫视着同学们（尤指男生）。那表情，眉头紧锁，眯起眼，撅着嘴，一脸谁都看不顺眼的样子。一看就知道有大事要降临了！

五分钟后，她摇摇头，叉着腰，说：“你看看你们班的男生，头发留这么长，和个老娘们一样！”同学们立刻受影响，立刻你看看我，我看看你，都不由得“扑哧”笑出声来。英语老师又皱着眉头说：“唉，你看徐建邦，还留个毛毛碎，多丑，真是典型的老娘们，那个齐相楠、米凯钰，头发留这么长不说，还留什么刘海，又不是小闺女，刘海留了有屁用！”英语老师边说边用手拍着脑瓜，一副愁得不得了的样子，英语老师说着说着，看着看着，眼睛露出一副喜色，下撇的嘴角开始上扬，眉头舒展开，说：“看看人家贾兴潇，王庆洲，留个小平头多帅，这才是老师心中的好孩子，大家看看。”说完，全班68对目光一齐投向他们的头上，女生们不由得捂着嘴偷笑，切！这也叫好看，老师审美观有问题！待老师说完下课铃声响了……老师又利用下课时间说：“中午都去理发店理头发去，如果怕花钱的话，大家中午可以来我家，看我给你们理发，一刀成光头，免费的呦”，说完，同学们哄堂大笑。

上午老师说完后，下午上英语课时，大家见上午那些被批评的同学都剪了头，据说还真有人去于老师家，被于老师笑着赶了出来。

后来，听大家说于老师是因为校长通知男生要剪头才说的，真是“诡计”多。

[英语老师的诡计作文

I come from a rural area of Yingkou, Liaoning Province.

My hometown is a beautiful place. It is surrounded by mountains. The fields are fertile and the agriculture here is well-developed. The climate is comfortable. The people in my hometown are very friendly, hardworking and honest. we get along with each other very well.

I love my hometown very much.so,whenever I speak of it I ’m always full of pride.

That’s all. Thank you.

Autobiography

My name is ________. I am graduate from ________ senior high school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.

My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.

[中学生介绍自己的英语作文

I am an ordinary girl with soft and smooth hair on her head. Liu Haijian has to pull her hair up like an innocent, gentle and lovely fairy. Round cheeks with delicate facial features with a glib mouth a high nose; a sharp chin, the sides of the head has a pair of ears". There is that I am a happy girl, either at home or at school, parents, classmates, friends and teachers are called me "happy". I feel a great deal of pride and joy for this name.

My character is variable and weird. It is a change, and no one can understand my character (including my parents). If you are not careful with angry tone to contradict me, or foul language to insult me, scold me. Im sure that even a moment ago I was joking with you, but after a moment I will be furious to refute you, then go away in the fly into a rage, not you. But after an hour, I will take the initiative to go and you may, at the time of the bowl, I will put what happened an hour ago like eraser typos as erased and forgotten. If you ask me, Ill say, "cut it!" Trifle, never mind."

Hee! Is my character unpredictable? Its not hard, as long as you know everything about me and get along with me. Its as easy to catch my character as you eat, and find me a close - up girl.

在我的身边，有许许多多令我感动的人，其中最让我感动的莫不过是我的英语老师Miss Liang。

Miss Liang 是我的英语老师，为什么说她感动人呢，是因为她对我们的教学工作进行得无微不至。每天早上一来到学校，她都微笑着对我打招呼。有的同学请假缺课了，她总是待他回来后帮他认真地补 上落下的课。还有的同学做了些错事，她都会叫他到跟前，耐心地批评指正。在同学的面前，她显得格外亲切，好似她是我们母亲一样，我们都非常喜欢她，喜欢她讲课时流利的语言，喜欢她和同学们 交流时亲切的眼神，更喜欢她对教学无微不至的优良品质。

记得一节英语课上，和往常一样，Miss Liang 提着录音机走进教室，所不同的是，她好像有点疲惫的样子，而且没有立即叫大家上课，而是在黑板上写道：非常抱歉！顿时，全班立即”热闹“起来了， 所有同学都窃窃私语，不知道发生了什么事：Miss Liang 究竟怎么了？为什么写下这些字？是不是生病了？老师没管我们，咳了几声，在黑板上写下了一些这节课要学的英语单词，然后又咳了几声，吃 力地说：”上课！“我听见她沙哑的嗓音，才知道，原来Miss Liang 嗓子哑了！同学们都大为吃惊，Miss Liang平时嗓音动听，今天怎么突然哑了，应该是天天上课累的吧。

老师叫了一个帮手，让他读她书上写的句子，自己也在旁边指导着，每次说话都很辛苦，有时非常沙哑，有时甚至发不出声音，要咳几下才能继续。我听见Miss Liang 那沙哑的声音，恨不得举起手来， 大声说道：”Miss Liang，我来帮您讲！“

直到下课，Miss Liang那沙哑的嗓音才慢慢离开了我们耳际……

从这件事中，我体会到了Miss Liang 教学的一丝不苟，舍己为人，如果没有这些品德，她可能会在课上随便乱讲应付了事，也可能一点小咳嗽就不上课。可Miss Liang 不是这样，她为了教学呕心沥 血的精神彻底感动了我们！

Smelling, a little life has come into this world -- I. With the advent of the rose, my father and mother took a name for me, called Tang - Jing - Wei.

I have a dark black hair, a small pair of eyes and a small cherry mouth. (I dont know, you say it)

I am very active. There are a few sad things in the boundless. Although I cant see any beautiful women, I can see for a while. In class, my popularity is very high. Almost all of my classmates like to make friends with me.

I like singing very much, and the love of the song is not enough. When I sleep, song with its elegant melody with me into the sweet dreams; when I feel sad, song with its cheerful music, let me forget all the troubles; when I feel happy, with its festive rhythm will comfort me, as if you are in a happy paradise...... But, my future it does not accompany me, and depend on my own efforts to strive for. Every day I think one day, I stood on a big stage, the cheers of the audience, the band accompaniment sound, and behind me as I dance dancers. How brilliant and romantic the moment was! But compared to now, from the big stage is how far away, only a day alone lying in the window, quietly look up in the stars from the sky, or knocked down the rain, the mouth can not help but sing out: "opened the night of the skylight, said the desire to the meteor, give me wings, to close to the sun...... If I want to sing and sing, sing and sing loudly, even if there is no one to applaud for me, at least I can be able to enjoy myself bravely... " Yes, I did not applaud this life for me, but I still have the courage to enjoy myself. But the only thing that can listen to me now is that that does not speak. Please bring my wish to the meteor, and bring my heart to the meteor.

This is me, a love of music, once crazy about music, forget to learn, like me to make friends with me.

敬爱的英语老师：

我知道你担负着全校的英语课的教学任务，工作已经很忙了。但是为了让我们把英语学得更好，我想向你提几条建议，希望你能抽出一点儿时间看看我的这封信。

我非常喜欢英语。我觉得每个同学都应该好好学习英语。这也是以后我们更进一步学习的基础，为了让同学们对英语感兴趣，把英语学好，我有这样几点建议：

一、组织同学们搜集有关资料，共同讨论学习英语的重要性，让大家从思想上重视英语的学习。

二、利用节日、纪念日举办各种活动，来激发大家学习英语的热情。例如，组织大家排练英语节目，小短剧、歌曲、诗歌朗诵……既丰富了大家的课余生活，又锻炼了大家的英语表达能力，还能提高学习英语的兴趣，这不是一举多得的好事吗？

三、我建议其他各学科的老师也能掌握一些英语日常用语，师生见面，用英语打招呼，上课时，师生用英语互相问候。这样在学校里创设学英语用英语的环境，更有利于大家的学习。

我想，如果我们这样坚持下去，一定会有很大的收获的，英语水平也会有大幅度的提高。这样就会为我们以后中学的学习打下坚实的基础。我真心希望得到你的支持！

祝老师工作顺利！身体健康！

你的学生章琳

20xx年3月5日

介绍元宵节风俗的英语作文

The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month, usually in February or March in the Gregorian calendar. As early as the Western Han Dynasty (206 BC-AD 25), it had become a festival with great significance.

This days important activity is watching lanterns. Throughout the Han Dynasty (206 BC-AD 220), Buddhism flourished in China. One emperor heard that Buddhist monks would watch sarira, or remains from the cremation of Buddhas body, and light lanterns to worship Buddha on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month, so he ordered to light lanterns in the imperial palace and temples to show respect to Buddha on this day. Later, the Buddhist rite developed into a grand festival among common people and its influence expanded from the Central Plains to the whole of China.

Till today, the lantern festival is still held each year around the country. Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hung in the streets, attracting countless visitors. Children will hold self-made or bought lanterns to stroll with on the streets, extremely excited. "Guessing lantern riddles"is an essential part of the Festival.

Lantern owners write riddles on a piece of paper and post them on the lanterns. If visitors have solutions to the riddles, they can pull the paper out and go to the lantern owners to check their answer. If they are right, they will get a little gift. The activity emerged during peoples enjoyment of lanterns in the Song Dynasty (960-1279). As riddle guessing is interesting and full of wisdom, it has become popular among all social strata.

People will eat yuanxiao, or rice dumplings, on this day, so it is also called the "Yuanxiao Festival."Yuanxiao also has another name, tangyuan. It is small dumpling balls made of glutinous rice flour with rose petals, sesame, bean paste, jujube paste, walnut meat, dried fruit, sugar and edible oil as filling. Tangyuan can be boiled, fried or steamed. It tastes sweet and delicious. What’s more, tangyuan in Chinese has a similar

pronunciation with "tuanyuan”, meaning reunion. So people eat them to denote union, harmony and happiness for the family.

In the daytime of the Festival, performances such as a dragon lantern dance, a lion dance, a land boat dance, a yangge dance, walking on stilts and beating drums while dancing will be staged. On the night, except for magnificent lanterns, fireworks form a

beautiful scene. Most families spare some fireworks from the Spring Festival and let them off in the Lantern Festival. Some local governments will even organize a fireworks party. On the night when the first full moon enters the New Year, people become really intoxicated by the imposing fireworks and bright moon in the sky.

元宵节英文介绍译文:

元宵节

每年农历的正月十五日，春节刚过，迎来的就是中国的传统节日--元宵节。

元宵主要的活动就是看灯。东汉明帝时期，明帝提倡佛教，听说佛教有正月十五日僧人观佛舍利，点灯敬佛的做法，就命令这一天夜晚在皇宫和寺庙里点灯敬佛，令士族庶民都挂灯。以后这种佛教礼仪节日逐渐形成民间盛大的节日。该节经历了由宫廷到民间，由中原到全国的发展过程。

直到今天，元宵点灯的习俗仍然在中国的各地流传的，各式各样美丽的花灯在这一天都会点亮，孩子们提着自制的灯笼走街串巷，非常高兴。

猜灯谜也是元宵节的一项重要活动，花灯的主人会将谜面写在灯笼上，挂在门口，如果有人可以猜中，就能得到小小的礼物。这项活动最早起源于宋朝，因为谜语能启迪智慧又饶有兴趣，所以流传过程中深受社会各阶层的欢迎。

民间过元宵节吃元宵的习俗。元宵由糯米制成，或实心，或带馅。馅有豆沙、白糖、山楂、各类果料等，食用时煮、煎、蒸、炸皆可。起初，人们把这种食物叫“浮圆子”，后来又叫“汤团”或“汤圆”，这些名称“团圆”字音相近，取团圆之意，象征全家人团团圆圆，和睦幸福，人们也以此怀念离别的亲人,寄托了对未来生活的美好愿望。

随着时间的推移，元宵节的活动越来越多，白天有耍龙灯、耍狮子、踩高跷、划旱船扭秧歌、打太平鼓等传统民俗表演。到了夜晚，除了五颜六色的美花灯之外，还有艳丽多姿的烟火。大多数家庭会在春节时留下一些烟花等到元宵节这天燃放，而一些地方政府也会举办烟花大会，当新年的第一个月圆之夜在盛大的烟火表演中来临时，人们都陶醉在这令人难忘了烟花与皎洁的明月中。

1. 你聪颖，你善良，你活泼。有时你也幻想，有时你也默然，在默然中沉思，在幻想中寻觅。小小的你会长大，小小的你会成熟，愿你更坚强!愿你更……

2. 美，是智慧，是静谧。祝你聪明!愿你上进!

3. 你是泊于青春的港口的一叶小舟，愿你扬起信念的帆，载着希望的梦幻，驶向辽阔的海洋。

4. 以你的自信，以你的开朗，以你的毅力，还有我的祝福，你一定能够驶向理想的彼岸。

5. 你用才智和学识取得今天的收获，又将以明智和果敢接受明天的挑战。愿你永葆一往无前精神。

6. 进步，意味着目标不断前移，阶段不断更新，视野不断开阔。

7. 自爱，使你端庄;自尊，使你高雅;自立，使你自由;自强，使你奋发;自信，使你坚定……这一切将使你在成功的道路上遥遥领先。

8. 我深深地理解，耗费了多少时间，战胜了多少困难，你才取得眼前的成绩。请你相信，在你追求、拼搏和苦干的过程中，我将永远面带微笑地站在你的身旁。

9. 愿知识之泉，经书籍而奔流，流进你的心田!

10. 明天，这是个美丽灿烂、辉映着五光十色的迷人的字眼。愿你的明天无限美丽、无限灿烂、无限迷人!孩子，愿你快快脱去幼稚的娇嫩，扬起创造的风帆，驶向成熟，驶向金色的海岸。

My name is ZhangYanYu. Im in Grade Seven. I like to go to school. Now,I want to tell you something about our class.

Our classroom is very beautiful. There is a blackboard on the front well. There is a teachers desk in front of the blackboard. There are two boxes of chalk and an eraser on the desk. There are many nice maps on the wall. There are some beautiful flowers on the sill. Our classroom is very nice and clean. There are two tall trees behind our classroom.We ofter play games wiht teacher under trees. There is a small garden on front of our classroom.Its nice .There is small river not far from our school ,in front of the garden. We often swim in it in summer.I like our class.I like our school.

我的英语老师是所有的老师中年纪最小的，可是她的教学任务是非常多的。我的英语老师长的非常漂亮。她的眼睛像玻璃球一般大，十分有精神。在长长的睫毛的衬托下，跟显得楚楚动人。她的皮肤白里透出点微红，她那金黄色的头有时候披在肩上，有时候扎成蝎子头，显得天真可爱。英语老师微笑的时候，像鲜花一样温柔，像天仙一样美丽，像小姑娘一样可爱！她看起来是那样善良，温柔又美丽的活泼女孩。

英语老师不仅长得美，而且她的心更美更纯真。

在星期三上辅导的时候，英语老师听见我们班的好多人都在咳嗽。她就劝我们说：“你们宿舍的提电壶的女同学可以装些热水放在教室里。那些咳嗽的同学可以拿一个杯子放在教室，下课后倒水喝。

英语老师非常关爱我们。

在去年的的12月24日，我们上英语辅导的时候。英语老师神秘兮兮的提着一个红塑料袋来到教室里。我们都私下里窃窃私语。我们组也在讨论。张辰昭说：“有可能装着一些书吧。”王亚雯反驳道：“书应该占大面积，可是你看，塑料袋现在确实扁的。”赵泽林惊奇的问道：“那到底装的是什么呀？”我说：“我也不知道。老师一会打开了我们再看吧。”只剩5分钟就快下课了。英语老师把袋子打开了，给班长张宝康说：“你把……给发一下。”我听到不太清楚。只见张宝康提着袋子走到了我们组，放了七个小熊棒棒糖，我迫不及待的塞进嘴里吃起来。英语老师问我们：“你们知道今天是什么节日吗？”同学们都遥遥头。接着她又说：“今天是圣诞节前夜——平安夜。”本来平安夜是吃苹果的。我打算给你们买苹果，可是苹果很难带上来，所以我给你们买了棒棒糖，希望你们在新的一年里平平安安。

我们的英语老师还十分刻苦地向别人学习，她的课堂上，同学们都积极回答问题。在上学期，我的英语第一次考得太差了，第二次，第三次确进步很大。在英语老师的鼓励下，我的英语在一步步的地提高。

这一桩桩、一件件的大事小事，不禁让我明白了我应该努力学习，不辜负老师对我的期望。

My name is xxx from beautiful "jiangbei city"-liaocheng. Now study in hometown of Confucius-qufu normal university.

My personality stable, also do not break again cheerful. Good at making friends, make more friends.

My hobby is widespread: listen to music, photography, playing computer, of course, the most like or physical exercise, basketball, ping pong, football, and so on, this is why I choose the cause of professional sports.

Now in college, I want to in the university study hard, and actively participate in school activities and occasionally to do a part-time job.

As for the future, after four years I may continue my professional, use

professional knowledge to find work, perhaps I will choose my own business.In a word, I will use my hands and ability to create life without regret.

我们换了一位英俊潇洒的英语老师，帅气的他，个头中等，身材匀称，健康的皮肤，乌黑亮丽的短发，非常有形，高高的鼻梁上架着一副眼镜，可能是因为时间戴久了，已压出了一道深深印子，他看上去斯斯文文的，很有学问，他就是我们的英语老师——何云先生。

他上课风趣幽默，常把同学们逗得开怀大笑。记得有一次上英语课，他先让我们看着书拼读英语单词，我们拼的都很认真，然后他用同学们最感兴趣的开火车的方式，让我们不看书拼单词，大家一下子来了兴趣，纷纷举起了小手。第一个同学李天宇站起来虽然说的不是很流利，但老师还是伸出了鼓励的大拇指，大声的说了声：“棒”！又一位同学站起来响亮而流利的拼出了单词，老师亲切的拍了拍他得肩膀说：“酷毙了！”逗得同学们哈哈大笑。每次上课何老师总能把课堂气氛带动的非常活跃，同学们都能聚精会神的听课，不由得被他这风趣幽默的上课方式给深深地吸引。风趣的他，有时也很厉害哦，对我们的书写要求总是一丝不苟，必须达到工整、漂亮。该背的课文和该默写的单词一定要会背诵，达到会默写，不然绝不会手软，所以我们从不敢抱着侥幸心理，总是老实、认真的去完成。

我喜欢风趣幽默又不失严格的何老师，我想你们也一定和我一样，让我们爱上英语！爱上何老师吧！

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for

some advice on how to form a band. I, together with two boys and two girls in

different classes in our school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop

music and modern dance.

I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different

styles to start with. And is it enough to practise only at weekends? How can we

get more chances to perform? We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name

for our band. Looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

My name is Yang Yang, I am thirteen years old. I am a student from Class 3,

Grade 2. I am very friendly and easy-going. I like to help others. All my

friends and classmates like me very much. I like playing basketball and volley

ball. I often play with my classmates after school. I am good at singing, I won

the first prize in the singing match last year. Id like to be a friend of you,

how about you?

小学英语自我介绍的作文4

Hello,everyone. Now please allow me to do an introduction. My name is Li

Lei. I’m 14 year old. My birthday is on October 11th. My favourite book is

twilight. I really love to read the books about vampires. My hobby is singing.

Some people say I’m a good singer.My favourite singer is Justin Biber.I think he

is a great singer. I love to sing his songs. Besides singing, I love shopping

very much. If I have time, I will go shopping with my friends.I’m really good at

English, if you have any questions, you can ask me, I will do my best to help

you. We can be the best friends forever. Thank you.

The the Imperial Palace in Beijing is a beautiful The Grand Palace. The the Imperial Palace is also called the Forbidden City. There are 24 emperors who have lived in the two dynasties of Ming and Qing Dynasties. The the Imperial Palace of the entire building beautiful decoration, magnificent, known as one of the worlds five palace.

When I entered, the first show in front of me is the lamps. The lamps are "living place, beautiful scenery here, green grass, flowers blooming like a piece of brocade. The Imperial Palace is the palace of ancient buildings Chinas largest and most complete, a total area of more than 720 thousand square meters, the temple palace has more than 90 million rooms, very spectacular.

Through the study to the palace, this is where the emperor on the morning, in front of the palace stood a gilded throne. The dragon carved on many dragons, some Shuanglongxizhu, some around each other is really vivid. I looked up and looked up, there is a large plaque on the wall, the plaque reads "open and aboveboard" four characters, four characters as if it is told ministers: "all things are open and aboveboard to do." I stand in the middle, also saw the emperor and ministers to negotiate the momentum of state.

Out of the Front Gate, I once again looking at the ancient palace, the grand vision is greatly! What a beautiful the Imperial Palace!

北京的故宫是个美丽的大皇宫。故宫也叫作“紫禁城”。这里居住过24个明清两代的皇帝呢！故宫的整个建筑金碧辉煌，庄严华丽，被誉为世界五大宫之一。

当我进去后，首先展现在我眼前的是坤宁宫。坤宁宫是皇妃住的地方，这里风景优美，绿草如茵，繁花似锦。故宫的宫殿建筑是中国现存最大、最完整的古老建筑，总面积达到72万多平方米，殿宇宫室有9000万多间，极为壮观。

穿过书斋就到了乾清宫，这是皇上上早朝的地方，乾清宫的正前方摆着一张镀金龙椅。龙椅上刻着许多龙，有的双龙戏珠，有的互相缠绕，真是惟妙惟肖。我抬头往上一看，墙上有一块大大的匾，匾上写着“正大光明”四个大字，仿佛这四个大字是告诫大臣们：“凡是做事，都要正大光明地做。”我站在这中间，也仿佛看到当时的皇上和大臣们商议朝政时的气势。

走出正门，我再一次遥望这座古老的宫殿，气魄宏伟令人赞叹不已！故宫真美啊！

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. I’m XX and I have been working as a XX at XX for ... years since my graduation from XX University. During my undergraduate years, I developed an interest in XX. Then I took several selective courses on XX and read a lot of literature in this field. However, it is one thing to study XX theory in university, but another to put theory into practice. That’s why I decide to be a XX to enrich both my XX knowledge and practical experiences.!

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

尊敬的英语老师：

您好!

我的名字叫：林沁楠，是您的新学生。我的性格活泼、开朗，一闲下来，就会去看看课外书。小学的成绩还不错。不过我有一个坏习惯——粗心，您还别说，“粗心”它可淘气了，常常在我考试的时候，跳到我的笔尖旁，害我每次考试都与满分擦肩而过，但我相信，我一定会改掉这个坏毛病的。

初中的学习生涯对我来说是陌生的，新的学习环境对我来说也是陌生的，您，对我老说当然也是陌生的。

我希望您是一位诙谐幽默的老师，能让我们在开心、快乐的课堂里学到知识，提高我们的学习兴趣。这样，我们就能上好没一节课，成绩也会跑得飞快。您不只要注重我们的学习成绩的提高，而是让我们德、智、体、美、劳全面发展。我一定会认真对待你布置的作业，我要认认真真的写好每一个字，认真对待每一篇作文，扎扎实实地完成各课学习任务，我能行，请相信我。

相信我能成为你的一位好帮手!

学生：___

20__年_月_日

I am a 10 years old boy. Smart and handsome. I am proud of myself. Because

I can get perfect scores in Chinese, math and English. It is not good enough, I

am also proud of being an elder brother. That is a Friday evening, my baby

brother was crying all the time. My parents were both cooking for dinner.

I said to my mum; let me look after this little thing. My mum said, “are

you sure you can?” “Yes, believe me I can.” I answered. Then mum went to the

kitchen. I went towards my baby brother. “Oh baby, don’t cry. I will sing a song

for you…” I carried him and sing songs for him. After a while, he was asleep. I

was so tired. My parents were happy and praised me a good boy. This is my first

time to look after my baby brother and I feel proud of myself.

Dear Mr. Cao

Hello!

Today, I would like to recommend to you a picture book of traditional

Chinese festivals, Spring Festival.

Spring Festival is the most grand, the most lively and the most important

ancient traditional festival in China. Every Spring Festival, we paste couplets,

red window decorations, and "pour" blessing. But why should the word "Fu" be

pasted upside down? It turns out that the word "Dao" and "Dao" are homophonic,

and vice versa is Fu "Dao". Its like "Fu" is home.

During the Spring Festival, we should not only paste couplets, red window

decorations and "pour" happiness, but also set off firecrackers and fireworks,

and wear red clothes. After reading this book, I realized that there was a

monster called Nian in ancient China. It went to the village to eat cattle,

sheep, chickens, pigs and people every year. Until one year, an old grandfather

who came to the village to beg lived in his wifes house when the villagers went

to avoid animals in the cave. When the "Nian" beast came, he set off

firecrackers in the yard and came out wearing a big red robe. In this way,

"Nian" beast was scared away. Since then, people have pasted couplets, red

window decorations and "Daofu" on their doors. They also set off firecrackers

and fireworks, and put on red clothes. If you are interested, dont read this

book.

Then there is the new years money. Every year on the eve of the Spring

Festival, adults give children lucky money. The original purpose of lucky money

is to suppress evil and expel evil spirits. Because people think that children

are vulnerable to the invasion of ghosts and insects, they use new years money

to drive away evil spirits and help children celebrate the new year safely. I

wish the children good health, good luck and peace in the new year. There is

also an old legend. This legend has something to do with a little demon called

"Sui". You will know after reading this book.

In a word, after reading this book, I gained a lot and also felt the spirit

of Chinese traditional culture. So I want to share with you, hope you will like

it!

wish

Happy new year and good health!

Your student: Wen Zhuo Yan