小学生怎样才能写好英语作文（精选20篇）

XX is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. XX is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

我最喜欢的小动物是小猫，我们家就养了一只小猫，它是邻居送过来的。因为现在那只小猫已经死了，所以我会经常想起它。

My favorite little animal is a kitten, and we have a kitten in our house. It was sent by a neighbor. Because the kitten is dead now, so I often think of it.

小猫长得很漂亮，他有一身雪白的毛，爪子下的肉垫可以使他走路没有一丁点声音。最独特的是他的眼睛：一只眼睛是蓝色的，另一只眼睛是绿色的。蓝眼睛像蓝宝石，绿眼睛像绿宝石。

The kitten was beautiful. He had a snow-white coat, and the pads under his paws made him walk without a single sound. The most unique is his eyes: one eye is blue, the other eye is green. Blue eyes are like sapphires, green eyes are like emeralds.

小猫很贪吃，有时一斤重的鱼不一会儿就“消灭”了。有一次，妈妈做了一碗鱼汤。小猫跳上桌子，津津有味的吃了起来。正在吃的时候，它被我发现了，于是我狠狠的教训了他一顿。小猫耷拉着脑袋，好像在说：“我再也不敢了。”我立刻笑了。

Kittens are voracious, and sometimes a pound of fish will soon be wiped out. Once, my mother cooked a bowl of soup. The cat jumped onto the table and ate it with relish. While I was eating, it was discovered by me, so I gave him a hard lesson. The little cat drooped its head as if to say, "I dare not."." I laughed at once.

现在那只小猫已经死了，从那以后，我每次见到小猫，都要和它嬉戏一番。小猫，你到底去了哪里了呢?

Now that kitten has died, since then, every time I see a kitten, I have to play with it. Kitty, where the hell have you been?

There is always a pile of smelly rubbish in front of the building we live. Everyone has to cover his nose with his hand while he passes by. One day, our teacher told us in class some good deeds done by Uncle Lei Feng. I was moved deeply by that. So after school, I started to clear the rubbish away. Now my neighbors dont have to cover their noses.

我们家住的楼前总是有一堆垃圾，天长日久都发出了恶臭。人们经过时都得捂着鼻子。有一次课堂上，老师给我们讲了雷锋叔叔助人为乐的故事，我被深深地感动了。于是我放学回家后就开始清扫那堆垃圾。现在我的邻居们就不必捂着鼻子进家门了。

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1。 allow sb to do sth 允许某人去做某事(后接动词不定式)

My father allowed me to go out for a walk after finishing my homework。

2。 asked sb (not) to do sth 叫某人做事某事(叫某人不要去做某事)

My father asked me to study hard。

He asked me not to swim alone。

be asked to do sth 被叫去做某事/被邀请去做某事

I was asked to have a dinner with them yesterday。

3。 be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事

She is afraid to ask me questions。

4。 be afaid of doing sth 害怕做某事

I am afraid of going out at night。

5。 be afaid of sth 害怕某物

He is afraid of snakes。

6。 be amazed to do sth 对做某事感到惊讶

He was amazed to meet the girl there。

be amazed at sth 对某事感到惊讶

they were amazed at the news。

7。 be busy doing/with sth 忙于做某事(常考)

I was busy washing my car at that time。 那时候我正忙于清洗我的车子。

I am busy with my work。

8。 becoming/going/leaving/fiying/moving/dying(某些位移动词用进行时态时表将来)

the bus is coming/the dog is dying。

9。 be excited to do sth 对做……感到兴奋

Jacky was excited to travel there by plane。

be excited at sth

Lily was excited at his words。

be excited about doing sth

he was excited about passing the exam without going overing books。

10。 be frightened to do sth 害怕去做某事

Sam is frightened to ride a horse。

11。 be glad/happy to do sth 高兴去做某事

She is happy to clean theblackboard with me。

be pleased to do sth高兴做某事

She was pleased to helpthe old man yesterday。

be pleased with sth 对某事感到高兴/满意

The teacher was pleasedwith my answer。

12.be interested in sth/doing sth 对某事感兴趣/对做某事感兴趣

She is interested inswimming in the river。

My btother is interestedin Chinese。

13。 be/get ready for/to do sth

be ready for 为某事做好了准备

We are ready for the exam。

Be ready to do sth 为做某事做好了准备

We are ready to have a birthday party for her。

get ready for sth为某事在做准备

We are getting ready for the exam。

14。 be surprised to do sth 对做某事感到惊奇

be surprised at sth 对某事感到惊奇

This is nothing to be surprised at。

I‘d be surprised to see him on such an occasion。

15。 be worth doing sth 值得做某事(worth 后接动词-ing形式，常考)

It was too remote to be worth thinking about。

16。 开始去做某事begin to do sth begin/start to do/doing sth

When do children begin to go to school?

17。 can/be able to afford (to buy) sth 有能力负担(购买)……

At this rate we won‘t be able to afford a holiday。

18。 can/may/must do sth could/would/should/might do sth

We may come at another time。

19。 can‘t wait todo sth 迫不急待地去做某事

I can’t wait to hear the news。

20。 decide to do sth 决定去做某事

make up one‘s mind to do sth 下决心去做某事(常考)

make a decision to do sth 对做某事作出决定

What do they decide to do?

I have made up my mind to go with him

21。 deserve to do sth 值得/应该做……

We must admit that she did deserve to win。

22。 encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人去做某事

Encourage them to do some other helpful recreations。

23。 enjoy doing sth 喜欢去做某事

I enjoy reading the story book

24。 expect (sb) to do sth 期望去做某事

Don‘t expect him to help you。

25。 fail to do sth 做某事失败

succeed doing sth 成功做了某事

If you don‘ t work， you willfail to pass the exam。

26。 finish doing sth 做完某事(后接动词-ing形式)(常考)

After finish doing your homework， you can have a rest。

27。 follow sb to do sth 跟随某人去做某事

Follow me to read the new words。

28。 get sb to do sth / make sb do sth/ let sb do st 让某人做某事(后接动词原形)

Her jokes made us laugh。

29。 get/have a chance to do sth 得到一个做某事的机会

I‘m very happy to have a chance to visit your school。

30。 give/pass/show/lend/sell sb sth/sth to sb

buy/get/bring sb sth/sth for sb

Please give me a piece of paper。

I bought him a drink in return for his help。

31。 go on to do sth /go on doing sth 继续做事(常考)

Go on doing the exercise after a short rest。

32。 hate to do/doing sth 讨厌/不喜欢做某事

Ihate to tell the news to you。

33。 have fun doing sth 做某事很有趣

Have fun getting to know each other。

34。 have problems doing sth 做某事遇到困难

Many people have problems getting to sleep at night。

35。 have sb do sth/have sth done 让某人做某事

This is the best work you have ever done。

36。 hear sb do sth 听到某人做某事(后接动词原形，常考)

hear sb doing sth 听到某人正在做某事(常见)

I heard someone laughing。

37。 help to do sth 帮忙做某事

help sb (to) do sth 帮助某人做某事

I‘ll help you clean the room。

38。 hope/wish to do sth 希望做某事

wish sb to do sth 希望某人做某事

I wish to take this opportunity to thank you all。

39。 It seems that 这像是……(后接从句)

seem to do sth

seem +adj

It‘seems that you are lying。

Does that seem to make sense?

40。 It‘s + adj+(for sb) to do sth。

It‘s+adj +(of sb) to do sth

It‘s glad for him to hear the news。

41。 It takes sb sometime/money to do sth 。 花费某人多长时间做某事(常考)

It takes me an hour to walk there and back。

42。 pay …for… cost spend…on…。。 it take …to do sth 花费

He paid for it out of his own pocket。

43。 It‘s best for sb to do sth。 对某人来说做某事是最好的

It‘s best for you to do more exercise。

had better do sth 最好做某事(注意had没有时态和人称的变化，better后接动词原形)

You had better go to the school。

44.It‘s time for sb to do sth 是某人做某事的时候了

It‘s time for us to have dinner。

45.keep (on)doing sth 坚持做某事(常考)

John always kept (on) asking questions。

keep sb doing sth 让某人做某事(常考)

Don‘t keep me waiting。

keep sbfrom doing sth 阻止某人做某事(常考)

He keeps her from cutting the tree。

keep sb/sth +adj 使某人保持……的状态

Washingyour hands keeps you healthy。

46.learn to do sth 学做某事Ilearn to play football。

learn sth from sb 向某人学习

I learn the spirit from him

47.like to do/doing sth 喜欢做某事like sb to do sth 喜欢某人做某事

She likes swimming。/She likes to swim this afternoon。

48.need to do sth/ need doing sth/need to be done 需要做某事

The garden needs to be watered。 / The garden needs watering。

49。 prefer to do sth rather than do sth 宁愿……而不愿……(常考)

I would prefer to spend the weekend at home rather than drive out。

prefer doing sth to doing sth 喜欢做……胜过做……

I prefer reading books to going shopping。 比起购物来，我更爱读书。

preferto do sth 喜欢(爱)做某事

50。 refuse to do sth 拒绝做……

I refuse to answer that question。

51。 remember/forget to do sth 记得/忘记做某事(没有发生)

Please do remember to post a letter forme。务必记得帮我寄信。

remember/forget doing sth 记得/忘记做过某事

I remember telling you the news before。我记得曾经告诉过你这个消息。

52。 see sb do sth 看见某人做某事(结果)

see sb doing sth 看见某人正在做某事(正在进行中)

be seen to do sth 做某事被看见

I saw them play football last weekend。

I saw her cleaning the classroom。

I saw him get on the bus。= He was seen to get on the bus。

53。 something to eat/drink 一些吃/喝的东西(词不定式放在something等后修饰这些词)

I need something to eat。 我要一些吃的东西。

54。 spend some time (in)doing sth /on sth 花费时间做某事(注意动词要用ing形式)(常考)

I spent 2 hours on homework。= I spent 2 hours in doing homework。

spend some money on sth/doing sth 买……花了多少钱

I ofen spend some money on the book。 I ofen spend some money buying the book。

55。 Sth is hard/difficult/easy to do 。 做好某事很难/容易

The question is easy to answer。

56。 stop to do sth停下来去某事(两件事)(常考)

stop doing sth 停止做某事(一件事)(常考)

stop sb (from) doing sth 阻止某人做某事(常考)

The two girls stopped to talk to me when they saw me。

The two girls stopped talking when they saw me。

I tried to stop my father from smoking，but failed。

57。 take turns to do sth 轮流做……

They take turns to do the cleaning。

58。 tell sb (not)to do sth 叫某人去(不要)做某事

He tell me not to swim in that lake。

59。 There is no need (for sb) to do sth 对某人来说没必要做某事

There is no need for you to worry。

60。 There is notime (for sb ) to do sth

have no time to do sth 没时间做某事

There is no time to think 。I have no time to do morning exercises。

61。 too…(for sb) to …… so… that… not… enough to do …太……以致不能

The boy is too young to go to school。

62。 try/do one‘s best to do sth 尽力去做某事

try to do sth 试着(图)做某事

We must try our best to do the job。

63。 used to do sth 过去常做某事

I used to live in the country。

used to be + adj/a +n 曾经是。。。

Mr wang used to be a teacher worker。

64。 would like to do sth=want to do sth= feel like doing sth 想要做……

want/would like sb to do sth 想某人做……

I don‘t feel like walking very much today。

I would like you to go away。

65。 warn sb (not) to do sth 警告某人做某事(或不要做某事)

His mother warned him not to go out in the evening。

66。 Why don‘t you do sth ?= Why not do sth ? 为什么不……(表建议的句型，注意用动词原形)

Why not have a rest?

表示建议的句型还有：

Shall we……?

What /How about……?(如果是动词，要用ing形式)

How about going fishing?

67。 Would you like (sb) to do sth ?Yes， I‘d love to 。

Would you like to join us?

Would you like me to buy you some food?

68。 Would you mind doing sth ? 你介意做某事吗?

回答：不介意(No+……)

Never mind/Not at all/Of course not/Certainly not 。 (从不介意/一点也不介意/当然不会了)

回答：介意(Yes+……)

I‘m sorry but I do。/Sorry， you’d better not。/ I‘m afraid you can’t。

-Would you mind my opening the door?

- No，of course not。

69。 Would you please (not) do sth 你可不可以做(不做)……?

Would you please open the door? / Would you please not close the windows?

70。常用固定短语

finish doing sth 完成某事

She finished cleaning the room。

practise doing sth 练习做某事

You‘d better practising reading and speaking English every day。

be good at doing sth 擅长做某事

I am good at playing basketball。

go on doing sth 继续做某事，指前后做的是同一件事。

The students went on talking and laughing all the way。

Go on doing the other exercise after you have finished this one。

be busy doing sth 忙于做某事

I am busy in cleaning my room。

see/hear/watch sb doing sth 听/看/观察到某人正在做某事

I hear him singing。

be afraid of doing sth 担心(害怕)会发生某事

My little sister is afraid of staying at home alone。

be interested in doing sth 对做某事的兴趣。

I‘m interested in playing games。

My school life

My school life in primary school is wonderful! I have a lot of friends. They are friendly to me.We study together play together and talk together.My teachers are very patient .They teach me a lot and help me with many problems. The school life is unforgettable.

I have a lot of happy things, but I feel most happy is my six birthday.

That day my father said I was a small birthday, he took a day and my mother to accompany my birthday. They took me to the swimming pool, I like a small tadpole, like in the water free to swim to swim. Then, I went to the mattress bed to play, like a happy little rabbit in the same jump on the jump ... ... I am most happy and Mom and Dad in Zhongshan Park crazy paradise in the fight.

The battle began, my mother and a pair of upstairs, my father downstairs. My mother helped me pick up a lot of bullets, I have poured into the launcher, aimed at the father, "beep, beep ... ..." There are a lot of bullets are hit the father. Dad is not to be outdone, he also launched a fierce attack on us. "Dodo, beep, beep ... ..." bad! Mom shot, but fortunately I hid not played. At this time, my father did not bullets, and he hurried to the ground to pick up bullets.

At this critical moment, we hurry to win. My mother gave me a lot of bullets, we all went to my father. In our concerted efforts, my father was beaten. Later, I pressed another button, who knows, next to the shelves of the ball are falling, like the same day, like the flowers scattered to the father just like picnic. Daddy said I was cunning, we all laughed ...

Every time I think of this thing, I will feel very happy, very happy.

Today is Childrens Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals,the tigers, the pandas,the lions, the elephants,the giraffes and the bears.

They are different from each other ,some are shy, some are beautiful, some are interesting , some are friendly, some are so cute. But i think these animals are unhappy, they should live in the forest,because the life in the zoo are different from that in the forest.

The children`s day is coming .so I am very happy.I think that day I am going to buy a beautiful gift for me.on that wonderful day, I am going to play in that childrens garden whit my mother and father. it will be the most happy day!

During the Childrens Days when we were young, we sometimes were taken out by parents, or we young kids went together by ourselves, running to the very places with lots of fun and buying plenty of things for a whole day. If my parents took me to, I would choose climbing hills as i loved to.we usually chose to climbing tall ones,because it would be so meaningful.some would like to invite friends home to have a party to celebrate the Childrens Day.

Anyhow, it was fun each time.

今天是儿童节。我的父亲带我去动物园。有许多种类的动物,老虎,熊猫,狮子,大象,长颈鹿和熊。

他们彼此不同,有些害羞,有些是美丽的,一些很有趣,一些很友好,一些是如此可爱。但我认为这些动物不快乐,他们应该生活在森林里,因为动物园里的生活是不同于在森林里。

儿童节来了。所以我很高兴。我想那天我要给我买一件漂亮的礼物。在这美好的一天,我要在孩子的花园一点点我的母亲和父亲。这将是最快乐的一天!

在孩子们的天当我们年轻时,我们有时会被父母了,或者我们自己年轻的孩子一起走,跑去的地方有很多乐趣和买很多东西一整天。如果我的父母带我去,我会选择我喜欢爬山。我们通常选择攀登高的,因为它会如此有意义。想邀请一些朋友家里有一个聚会来庆祝儿童节。

总之,每次都很有趣。

诚信就是诚实守信，是做人的根本，是中华民族的传统美德。诚实指忠诚老实，言行一致;守信指说话和做事讲信用，说到做到。

Honesty is, life is the fundamental, is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Honest honest, match words with deeds; and to speak and act in good faith, said to do.

古人曰：“君子一言，驷马难追。”记得在《品德与社会》书上多次出现的“曾子杀猪”吗?曾子的妻子要上街买东西，为了摆开儿子的纠缠，唬他说：“娘回来杀猪给你吃。”当曾子的妻子回来看见曾子手举大刀，正准备宰猪时，连忙走上去，说道：“我唬唬儿子，你倒来真的了，快放下刀。”曾子说：“唉!父母乃是孩子的第一任老师，孩子还小，我们大人说话做事，孩子会跟着学的。你骗儿子，就相当于教他骗人呀!因此我们就要履行诺言，给孩子做个好榜样。”话刚说完就将猪给杀了。如果曾子听他妻子的话，家中的猪是保住了，但对他的儿子来说，也许以后再也不会相信他母亲的话，不明白做人需要诚实守信的道理。

The ancients said: "a mans word, can never be withdrawn." Remember that in the book of "morality and society" repeated "Zengzi slaughters a pig"? Whos wife to Shangjie to buy things for my son, entanglement,. He said: "the mother back to you to eat pig." When he saw Zengzis wife came back holding machetes, preparing to kill pig, hurriedly walked up and said: "I frighten son, you come true, quickly put down the knife." Ceng Zi said: "Alas! The parents are the first teachers of the children, the child is still small, we adults do, children will follow. You lied to her son, is equivalent to teach him to lie! So we must carry it out, set a good example for the children." It has just finished killing pigs. If he had listened to his wife, the home of the pigs is saved, but to his son, perhaps in the future will not believe his mothers words, do not understand how to be honest.

《狼来了!》的故事，你们再熟悉不过了吧!故事中的小牧童向山下农民撒了两次谎。当狼群真的来时，他的话再也没人相信了，正因为他的谎言，导致羊群被吃的后果。这个故事难道不是更能告诉我们不诚实守信的严重性吗?

"The wolf is coming!" the story, you are familiar with the story of the little boy! And two times to the mountain farmers. When the wolf really came, his words are not believed, because of his lies, resulting in the sheep were the consequences of eating. This story is not to tell the seriousness we are not honest?

所以，大家要诚实守信!从我做起，从我们身边做起。我们在学校要做一个诚信的好学生，在家中做一个诚信的好孩子。

Therefore, we should be honest and trustworthy! I start from, start from our side. Good students we should make a good faith in school, do a sincere good children at home.

Home is a warm words, a warm place. I believe that every classmate have a warm home. My home also is such, is the serious cautious father alive, tender and beautiful mom and I together.

My dad, the top of the square face, a head of black shiny hair, thick eyebrows below with a pair of eyes, high bridge of the nose more foil out of his culture. My father as my tutor, all assignments to please him, sometimes I met wisdom surfing math very hard, my mother and I dont use the standard equation solutions, one to ask dad, a few simple formula has solved the problem easily. My father was a geek, home in the evening every day the first thing to do is open a computer. But hes learning with a computer, dont like someone turned on the computer is pure to play games.

My mother, long brown hair perms beside the oval face, big eyes are so bright, I would have been she found all the little affectations. My mother not only looks affable, also special bright and broad minded, every time I quarrel with my sister, she will tell me the importance of friendship, let me and her sister and good, maybe I touched my sister, whenever the two of us quarrel, she will learn to me let us be friends.

This is my home, a warm home, a warm home, a family full of happiness. This is a story of a love knitting, reading the rest of my life, forever aftertaste, touched a lifetime.

家是一个温暖的字眼，一个温馨的地方。我相信每一个同学都有一个温暖的家。我的家也是这样，是由严肃谨慎的老爸、温柔美丽的老妈和活蹦乱跳的我组成的。

我的老爸，方形的脸的上方，一头乌黑光亮的短发，浓浓的眉毛下面高高的鼻梁上夹着一副眼睛，更衬托出了他的文化。我的爸爸就像我的家庭教师，所有的作业都要请他过目，有的时候我遇到了很难的智慧冲浪数学题，我和妈妈都不会用标准的算式解答，一去问爸爸，几道简单的算式就把题轻松的解开了。我的爸爸还是个电脑迷，每天晚上回到家的第一件事就是打开电脑。不过他可是在用电脑学习，不像某些人打开电脑纯是为了玩游戏。

我的妈妈，长长的褐色烫发披在那椭圆的脸的旁边，那双大大的眼睛是那么明亮，我的一切小动作都会被她发现。我的妈妈不仅面容和蔼可亲，心胸也特别的宽广，每当我和妹妹吵架时，她都会告诉我友谊的重要性，让我主动和妹妹和好，也许我的行为感动了我的妹妹，每当我们两个吵架的时候，她也会学着我让我们和好。

这就是我的家，一个温馨的家，一个温暖的家，一个充满快乐的家。这是一个有爱编织的故事，叫人阅读一辈子，回味一辈子，感动一辈子。

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

Dear Ms. Smith,

Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation. Please call me at 123456 if you have any question.

I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

一：用介词短语替代从句，例：

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：

句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

三：剔除你不需要的单词，例：

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。

英语写作注意两点

一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：

1.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。

2.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

下午，随着上课铃响，同学们陆续走进教室，英语老师也捧着试卷慢慢的走进教室。老师站在讲台上严肃地说：“今天我们考试，请大家准备好考试用的东西。”我一听，呆呆地坐在那，想“唉，竟然是英语考试，这可是我最怕的事情，啊，真是悲剧啊！”想完，只见老师发下试卷，说：“现在开始考试。”唉，只能写了。于是，我硬着头皮，乱写一通。

咦？这个怎么写呀！于是我想呀，想呀……忽然，我觉得试卷正面好像有这道题目，于是，我把试卷翻过来，看了一下，果然有这道题目，然后，我把填的答案抄过来，这样，这道题目就做完了。

过了半个小时，我的试卷做完了，看了看时间，快要下课了，于是我检查了一遍。过了一分钟，下课铃响了，我把试卷交了上去，静静的离开了教室。

[一次英语考试小学作文

Animals are our best friends. But there are many bad things about them. So we should try our best to protect animals.

First, let us know the status of the animal. Now, animals are facing very great danger. For example, there are many kinds of animals will die out. And there are many people eat precious and wild animals. They are nasty. As students, we should stop this behavior and protect animals.

Then, let us know we should how to protect animals. We should protect they habitat. If you see other people mindlessly trample animal homes, nicely remind them of the damage theyre causing. We can not also eat some wild animals. We should ask other people to protect them, too. Let we protect animals together!

Dear Sir or Madam,

Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours，

Li Hua

Animals are our humans good friends, ask you to protect them! Dont beat them with stones, sticks, they are flesh and blood hurts, will cry, their mom and dad will love dearly. Small animals made great contribution to the earths ecological balance for us, therefore, we hereby issue the following to the citys children initiative:

A small animal, dont hit, dont catch small animals.

Second, much care for small animals, send injured animals homeless shelter.

Three, to the whole society widely publicized the significance of protect small animals.

Fourth, study the life of small animals, learn to protect small animals.

The children! Let us heart to heart, hand in hand, jointly contribute to protect small animals!

小动物是我们人类的好朋友，请求大家好好保护它们吧!不要用石头、棍子打伤它们，它们有血有肉会痛的，会哭泣的，它们的爸爸妈妈会心疼的。小动物们为我们地球的生态平衡做出了巨大贡献，因此，我们特向全市小朋友们发出以下倡议：

一、不要打小动物，不要捕捉小动物。

二、多照顾小动物，把无家可归受伤的小动物送到收容所。

三、向全社会广泛宣传保护小动物的重要意义。

四、认真学习小动物的生活习性，学会保护小动物的知识。

小朋友们!让我们心连心、手拉手，共同为保护小动物事业做出贡献吧!

我又迟到了 I Am Late Again

I opened my eyes in the morning and looked at the clock. "Oh, dear! Its

half past seven already. Ill be late again," I thought. Without breakfast, I

hurried to school. But it began to rain hard.

早晨我睁开眼睛，看看钟表，“天啊!已经七点半了。我又要迟到了，”我想。没有吃早饭，我就匆匆朝学校赶去，可是天又下起雨来。

When I got to the classroom, the maths teacher had already begun his

lesson. It was Mr wang. All of us were afraid of him. I didnt like him, or his

lessons. I opened the door. " Im late again, Mr Wang."

当我到教室时，数学老师已经开始讲课了。是王老师，所有的学生都怕他。我不喜欢他，也不喜欢他的课。我打开门，“王老师，我又迟到了。”

"Ive told you not to be late, but you ..." he said angrily. But suddenly

he stopped, and looked at my clothes. He quickly took off his own jacket and

handed it to me. "Now take off your wet coat and put wet one on." he said

kindly.

“我早就告诉你不要迟到，可是你……”他生气地说。可是他突然停下来，看了看我的湿衣服。他很快脱下自己的上衣递给我。“把你的湿衣服脱下来，套上这件。”他和蔼地说。

It was a bit large for me, but I felt warm in it.

衣服套我身上有点大，可是穿上感觉很温暖。

As everyone knows, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is

no way to avoid it. As the pace of modern life continues to increase, we are

always feeling on the go from morning till night. And it is hard to slow down.

Therefore, stress goes hand in hand with the life in a competitive society.

Different people, however, think of stress quite differently. Some believe

that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the

opinion that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give

purpose to life. Others argue that stress contributes to one’s mental decline

and hence endangers his health. According to them, relaxation, the opposite of

stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body.

Personally, I’m in favor of the former view. I think it is impossible to

avoid stress when one is entirely devoted to the career he pursues. In my

opinion, it is only when the stress gets out of control that it can lead to poor

performance and ill health.

In the early morning, my sister went out and brought home a bunch of pretty flowers. Right after my mother got up out of bed, we said "Happy Mothers Day"! to her and gave her the flowers. My mother was very happy; she smiled and said, How wonderful the flowers look! Thank you! Also, we told her we were going to do all the housework for our beloved mother, and she could take a rest for a day.

在清晨，我姐姐出去了一束漂亮的鲜花。当我的母亲起身下床，我们说“母亲节快乐”!给她的花。我妈妈很高兴;她笑着说，“花看起来多么美妙!谢谢你!同时，我们告诉她我们要为我们的母亲做所有的家务，她可以休息一天。

In the beginning, we were excited about all the work we can do at home. Before long, we found that the housework seemed to be endless, There was cooking and washing, and cleaning to do, and there was shopping to do, too . During the dinner hour, the kitchen seemed so busy. My father was making a salad, my sister was baking a pie for dessert, and I was washing rice and vegetables, and there were many other things to do. Finally, the dinner was ready; it was two hours behind the usual schedule. The food was not as delicious as my mothers. Nevertheless, my mother and father enjoyed it, and felt very proud of their daughter and son.

在开始的时候，我们感到很兴奋，我们能做的所有的工作在家里。不久，我们发现，家务似乎是无止境的，有洗衣做饭，和打扫卫生，并有购物的事，太。在晚宴小时，厨房似乎很忙。我的父亲是一个沙拉，我的姐姐是一饼烘烤的甜点，我洗大米和蔬菜，还有许多其他的事情要做。最后，准备晚餐;它是两个小时后通常时间表。食品是不是我的母亲。尽管如此美味，我的父亲和母亲很喜欢，和他们的女儿和儿子感到无比自豪。

During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. I wake up 11 o’clock Am everyday, after a washing, I have a good lunch with my parents. Next I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner. I go on playing till 2 o’clock Am, and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day of my winter vacation.

寒假期间，我的生活没有什么不同。每天早上十一点我醒来，洗后，我和我的父母有一个很好的午餐。然后我玩电脑游戏，直到吃晚饭的时间。晚餐后。我继续玩到凌晨二点，然后去睡觉了。这是我寒假无聊的一天。

But I haven’t bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books, sometime I listen to the music or the radio in the bed，because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. And I also meat some of my good friends during the vacation ,we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis tegether .And I watched the spring festival party of the CCTV in the last seconds of the 2004 year! I think this is the thing most people of china doing at that time.

但我还没有厌倦所有的时间。有时我读的书，有时我听音乐或收音机在床上，因为外面很冷而且整天下雪。我还肉我的一些好朋友在假期，我们在过去的一年里对彼此的生活很长的谈话和打乒乓球。我看了中央电视台春节晚会在2004年最后一秒!我认为这是中国的大多数人当时做的。

That’s all, all my dull, coldly and snowy winter vacation.

这一切，我所有的乏味，冷冷地和冬季度假。

导语：漫长暑假到了，心如小鸟飞了。学习压力放下，心情愉快多了。下面是小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

暑假英语作文——暑假回忆

A new term began. Students all returned to school and met again. They were talking about what they had done in the holidays. I was much happier. I couldnt wait to tell my story. Now its my turn. I told them I got a job in a restaurant. I worked as a waitress. They didnt believe at first.

"Yes, its true. "I said," I really had a hard time at the beginning. But several days later, I could do a good job. I earned six hundred yuan this holiday. "They all looked at me with their mouths open.

【参考译文】

新学期开始了。学生们都回到学校，又见面了。他们正在谈论他们在假期里做了些什么。我开心多了。我等不及要讲我的故事了。现在轮到我了。我告诉他们我在餐馆找到一份工作。我做过女服务员。他们起初并不相信。

“是的，这是真的。”我说：“我一开始真的很难过。但几天后，我可以做得很好。这个假期我赚了六百元。”他们都张开嘴巴看着我。