广东中考英语作文评分标准及评分细则热门20篇

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

篇一：My Favorite Animal 我最喜欢的动物

Last year, my father bought a lovely pet for me. She has four white paws and a white and yellow tail. She has two small ears, two green eyes and eight whiskers on her face. Her name is Sally and she is one year old.

Do you know what it is? A cat? Yes, it is a cat. She has very short fur and she is quite small. She weighs about 2 kilograms. She is usually very friendly and quiet. We never frighten her or pull her tail or ears. She likes walking around me and playing with me.

If she is hungry, she will miaow. Usually, she eats food from a tin, but her favorite food is fish. She likes juice if it is not too cold. She likes to chase and catch mice and sometimes she plays with butterflies. Sally often plays with balls and pieces of string. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She likes sitting on the sofa and watching TV.

Sally is a very good friend, but she is quite lazy! She never worries because we take good care of her. She is always a happy cat.

去年，我爸爸给我买了一个可爱的宠物。她有四个白色的爪子和白色和黄色的尾巴。她有两只小耳朵，一双绿色的眼睛和八胡须的脸上。她的名字是萨利和她一岁。

你知道这是什么吗？一只猫？是的，它是一只猫。她有很短的皮毛，她是相当小。她重约2公斤。她通常是非常友好和安静。我们从不吓唬她或拉她的尾巴或耳朵。她喜欢走在我和我一起玩。

如果她饿了，她会喵。通常，她吃罐头食品，但她最喜欢的食物是鱼。她喜欢果汁如果不是太冷。她喜欢追逐和捕捉老鼠，有时她扮演的蝴蝶。萨莉经常用球和绳子打。她不喜欢狗，她讨厌下雨。她喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。

萨莉是一个很好的朋友，但她很懒惰！她从不担心，因为我们把她照顾得很好。她是一个快乐的猫。

篇二：My plan for College life 我的大学计划

Im extremely excited now ,In face of new envirenment of study and life ,I must make a good plan for it .我现在感到无比的兴奋，面对的学习和生活环境，我必须为此做个好的打算。

Study comes first so I should make new goal and improve my study method.Hard will I study in the college as I do now.It is also important to learn how to live by myself . I will join in various activities and try my best to manage the relationship with other classmates.学习是第一位的所以我要制定新的目标并改善我的学习方法。在大学里，我要像现在一样的努力学习。学会独立生活也同样重要，我要参加各种各样的活动，并尽我所能处理好和其他同学的关系。

No matter what I will meet in the future,happiness or sorrow,keep an optimistic attitud towards life and I believe that my college life will be colorfull as planned.不管我将在未来的日子里遇到什么，快乐或悲伤，对生活始终保持乐观的态度，我相信我的大学生活一定会像我想象的那样丰富多彩。

篇三：the second day of the summer holiday 暑假第二天

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常饿。

篇四：Discrimination in Education 学历歧视

According to the picture, an employer turns down a job applicant, for his degree is less advanced than the other applicants, even though he has a good resume. Actually, what’s behind the cartoon is the tendency that employers focus on academic performance when hiring.

No one disputes that a college or higher degree opens doors. Despite that, as far as I’m concerned, academic degree should not be the primary criteria in selecting talents. First of all, academic degrees only represent the applicants’ proficiency in their school work, and cannot demonstrate their personality or other abilities. For instance, the responsibility of a human resources manager is to deal with people, and thus it requires advanced people skill which is by no means shown in the diploma. Second, emphasis on degrees may stall the development of the company. They will lose real talents if they judge people only by their educational background, while it is often the case that college drop-outs like Bill Gates, Michael Dell, Steve Jobs, etc., run wildly successful enterprises.

Therefore, instead of running after applicants with higher degrees, companies should become more concerned about what it takes to do the job and what a college education actually provides.

根据图片，雇主拒绝求职者，因为他的学历不比其他人高，即使他有一个好的简历。其实在漫画中展示的东西是，雇主当雇用员工时专注于学业成绩。

没有人质疑大学或更高学历能打开求职门。尽管如此，在我看来，学历不应是选择人才的首要标准。首先，学历只能代表申请人在学业方面的能力，并不能证明他们的个性或其他能力。例如，一个人力资源经理的职责是与人打交道，因此需要拥有先进技巧的人，但是这个不是在学历上可以证明的。第二，过于强调学历可能停滞公司的发展。如果他们认为人只有通过他们的教育背景来证明自己，他们就会失去真正的人才，而这是通常的情况下，大学辍学者，像比尔盖茨，迈克尔戴尔，史蒂夫·乔布斯等都非常成功的进行了创业。

因此，不是招聘高学历的应聘者，公司应更加关注职位需要什么人才和大学教育实际上提供了什么。

[关于中考的英语作文4篇

发言稿要注意以下三点：

1、发言的地点

2、发言的对象

3、发言的内容。

请看例文：

在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80～100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名。

提示：

①What does your school look like?

②What fun do you have at school?

③Why do you like your school?

Proud of My School

My school is very big with several tall buildings. There are 2，000 students in my school. We have a big playground with lots of trees around it. There are a lot of flowers everywhere.

We have lots of fun at school. After class we play games and do lots of sports, like a big family. The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

一、解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).

Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)

Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measure

s to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待)

For one thing, ------(解决方法一).

For another -------(解决方法二).

Finally, ------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)

Personally, I believe that ---(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because------(带来的好处).

二、说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表

明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a signific ant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as

follows.(它很好)

First ------(A的优点之一). Besides -------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性).

The negative aspects are also apparent. On the one hand,------(A的第一个缺点).The other hand,---------(A的第二个缺点).

In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the

negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circum

stances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的测).

三、议论文的框架

不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B，说说理由)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________.

There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______.

Secondly , ___原因二_____.

however,People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people thin

k that ___观点二_______. On the one hand， ___原因一___ __

__. On the other hand, ____原因二_____.

Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because ____(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more __better____.(越努力越好)

四、图表作文的框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure inthetable (graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically steadily rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/mared decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons.

But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonlyconvincing.

As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my

opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)

五、说明原因型

(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)

Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .It is clear that ( 1 ). if you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .

No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4) .You dont have to lookvery far to find out the truth 。 We all know (5) .It will have a profound influence upon ( 6) For me ,I think (总结全文：题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).

导语：如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1.如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。其优点如下：1.可以非常迅速地与朋友进行文字、表情等交流;2.可以与朋友分享图片、音乐、视频等;3.不仅能发送语音讯息，而且可以直接通话;4.使用时不受时间地点限制;5.使用时免费。

词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, WeChat has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages. First, we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. Second, we can share pictures, music and videos with them. Third, we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly. Besides, we can use it in any time. Last but not least, we use it for free and can save money. In my view, although WeChat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it.

记得小学上音乐课时，总是唱呀唱的，于是没有音乐细胞的我，最不 喜欢上音乐课。上初中了，音乐课以欣赏为主，这时的我不仅不讨厌上 音乐课，而且几节课下来，我竟深深地爱上了音乐课。

音乐课上，老师给我们讲音乐的内涵，给我们讲作者创作音乐作品 的背景，让我们学会欣赏音乐。听音乐时，音乐占据了我的身心。它时 而婉转，时而高亢，时而欢乐，时而悲泣，使我的身心也受到了感染。

听音乐时，把我的眼睛闭上，感受到它无限的美妙。譬如欣赏《钟表店》，朦陇中我仿佛来到了一家古老的钟表店门口，两个落地钟在欢迎着 我，那“当当”的声音似乎在说:“欢迎你!”我朝它们笑笑，推门进去。只 见各式各样的钟表满屋子都是。所有的钟表都在运转着，发出“嘀嘀嗒 嗒”的声音。那声音与音乐汇在一起，就好似那粼粼的湖水与跳跃的月 光揉合在一起，那般轻柔，那般舒畅。突然“丁零，··…”一个刺耳的声音 传来，吓了我一大跳，我转身去看，原来是一只小闹钟在响。我在店内边 走边看，不知不觉就逛了一圈。欣赏完《钟表店》，转眼，《春之声》圆舞曲 的悠扬乐曲响了。于是，我面前又出现了一幅图画—一望无际的原 野，鲜花盛开，我兴奋地投人它的怀抱。我在翩翩起舞，风儿是我的舞 伴，花朵是我的裙子，绿草为我的舞姿而喝彩。看，那边的小黑点是什么?近了，近了，是一匹骏马。我抓住跑在最前头的那匹骏马的鬃毛一 跃而上。我手持马鞭驰骋着，欢呼着。马儿，快点，再快点.我用力地挥 着马鞭，谁知“嘶……”一声长鸣，我摔了个四脚朝天。怎么马儿这么不听 话，我挣扎着站起来，原来前面是水的世界。是泊泊的泉水，似少女的明 眸，似月光的轻柔，似飞花碎玉。泊泊的泉水，把我送到神秘幽静的大森 林。在这里，我与豹子赛跑，与苍鹰齐飞。正盘旋在空中，“丁零……”似又 听见了小闹钟的声响，我停止了“空中的盘旋”，睁眼一看，原来是下课了。

音乐，确实给人以美的享受，给人以无限的遐想。在它的怀抱中，可以忘却一切烦恼，抛开一切顾忌，得到无限欢愉。我喜欢它，我深深感受 到了它无穷的魅力。

邀请信

Class 1，Grade 7

Beijing Sunshine Secondary School

Sunshine Town

Beijing

April 20

Dear＿＿

We are happy to invite you to________________________________ We’ll hold___________from…to… (time). We will meet at________ _________(place) and have it at _________(place). We’ll do_______ (activities). We’d like everyone _____________(reminding).

Please complete the note on the next page to tell us if you can come. We hope you can come. We look forward to seeing you at out party. Yours faithfully ∕ sincerely,

(Signature) (打印)

Amy (手写)

Monitor of Class 1, Grade 7

注意:邀请信的关键是要体现出邀请的主旨，反映出邀请人的盛情，并明确表示活动的时间、地点及相应的安排。这些都是邀请信不可缺少的内容。

实用套语

1．Will you do us a favor of joining our party？您能光临我们的聚会吗？

2．May I take this opportunity to invite you to our university to give a lecture？我可以借此机会邀请您到我们大学给我们演讲吗？

3．If you have no other plans for Monday, May 15th, will you come to our party at my home？如果本周五，即五月15号，您没有其他安排的话，可以来我家参加我们的聚会吗？

4．Shall we have the pleasure to invite you to our party this weekend？我们可以荣幸地邀请您参加我们本周末的聚会吗？

经典用语

1. If you haven’t made any definite plan for the coming weekend, I’d love to invite you to come to our school and join us in the party.如果您本周末尚无安排，我想邀请您来参加我们的晚会。

2. If you haven’t promised to join your friends elsewhere, we shall be delighted to have you with us.如果您还没有答应别的朋友的邀请，我们将十分高兴地邀请您到我们这儿来。

3. With your presence on this occasion, we are sure to have a most delightful evening.您的到来一定会让我们的晚会增色不少。

4. All of us here are longing for the pleasure of seeing you.您这儿的所有朋友都在盼望着能见到您。

推荐信

Address of sender

Date

Name （Title）of receiver

Address of receiver

Dear _________（Greeting）

I’m writing to recommend sb. To become／be ______（Subject）

Para1: abilities

Para2: personalities

Para3: examples of details

Para4: Ending: We all think … should… Para1--- Para4: Message Yours sincerely,_____ （Closing）

(Signature) (打印)

(Signature of sender) ((手写)

Monitor of Class 1, Grade 7(Title of sender)

注意:

写推荐信的关键在于:

1. 在新的主体部分的首尾各用一句话明确表示写此信的目的,如:

篇首:I’d like to recommend sb. to be/do…

篇尾:We all think sb. should be…/should get the reward

2. 文中所写的这个人的性格特点与能力要与所推荐的任务或职位相关。

3. 在用事例说明这个人的某个优点时，事例要与该优点相吻合。

实用套语

1. I would like to recommend sb. to be ／become….我愿意推荐某人成为／当／做….

2. It’s my pleasure to recommend sb. to be ／become….我乐意推荐某人成为／当／做….

经典用语

1. I am writing to recommend Mary to become the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.我写此信的目的是推荐玛丽当学生会的主席。

2. May is a hard-working and helpful student.梅是个努力且乐于助人的学生。

3. I think John is good enough to be the chairperson. I hope you will agree.我认为约翰很适合主席这个职务。希望您能同意我的想法。

感谢信

Date of writing

Name（Title）of receiver

Dear______（Greeting）

I am writing the letter to say thank you for______（Subject）

Para1: reasons for writing the letter

Para2: examples or details

Para3: Ending: Thank you for… Para1--- Para3: Message

Yours sincerely,_____ （Closing）

(Signature) (打印)

(Signature of sender) (手写)

注意:

写感谢信应注意以下几点:

1. 在新的开头，第一节中明确表示感谢，即“开头言谢”；

2. 信的主体部分要写出感谢的原因。如果原因不止一个，要分段写。每段写一个主题句，表明一个原因，再辅以具体的事例进行说明，使感谢落到实处，不让人产生客套或做作的感觉；

3. 在信的结尾，还要把感谢的话再说一遍，并加上对对方的祝福。

实用套语

1. With many thanks to you for entertaining me so generously.非常感谢您如此慷慨大方的招待。

2. Indeed I do not know how to express my appreciation for your valuable services.对您优质的服务我无以言谢。

3. We express our sincere and hearty thanks for the favors you have done for us.衷心感谢您为我们所做的一切。

4. It will give me much pleasure to do whatever I can in return for your favor.若能对您的好意有所回报，我将不胜荣幸。

5. Please accept our warmest thanks for what you have done for us.您如此帮忙，请接受我们最热忱的谢意。

经典用语

1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, for your letter and for your kindness to me during my long illness.衷心地感谢您在我漫长的卧床期间给我来信，给我关心。

2. I am grateful for your kind wishes for my success.感谢您对我成功的祝福。

3. Thank you very much for the letter of congratulation and the nice gift you sent to me.感谢您寄来的祝贺信及礼物。

4. I’d like to thank you for always being by my side on Thanksgiving Day. 值此感恩节来临之际，感谢您一直以来陪伴在我身边。

[中考英语应用文作文模板

在我们的语文考试中，书写作文是必不可少的一环。以下是小编搜索整理的深圳中考作文评分标准，我们来看看下文。

一类卷（43-50分）

A.内容：切合题意 思想健康 中心突出 内容充实 感情真切

B.语言：语言顺畅 没有语病

C.篇章：结构完整 条理清楚

评分细则：

①具备ABC三项条件的，评一类下(43-45分)。

②具备其中一项条件的，评一类中(46-47分)。

③立意深、构思巧、语言生动形象的，评满分;具备其中两项条件的，评一类上(48-49分)。

二类卷(35-42分)

A.内容：切合题意 思想健康 中心明确 内容具体 感情真实

B.语言：语言通顺 偶有语病

C.篇章：结构完整 条理较清楚

评分细则：

以38分为基准分，适当浮动：

①具备B项条件，而另两项只达到三类卷标准的，酌情减分。

②具备B项和另一项条件，其余一项达到三类卷标准的，获得基准分。

③具备ABC三项条件的，酌情加分;或材料新鲜，或立意新颖，或结构新巧，可评为二类上。

三类卷(27-34分)

A.内容：基本合题意 中心尚明确 内容尚具体 感受尚真实

B.语言：语言尚通顺 语病不多

C.篇章：条理尚清楚 能分段

评分细则：

以30分为基准分，适当浮动：

①基本具备ABC三项条件的，获得基准分;,

②其中B项较好的，酌情加分;

③另有某些缺点的，酌情减分。

四类卷(18-26分)

A.内容：偏离题意 中心欠明确 内容不具体

B.语言：语言不通顺 语病较多

C.篇章：条理不清楚

评分细则：

以22分为基准分，适当浮动：

①凡属ABC三项之一者，评为四类卷，获得基准分;

②另两项较好的，酌情加分;

③兼有ABC两项以上情况的，酌情减分。

五类卷(0-17分)

A.内容：文不对题 不知所云

B.语言：语病严重 文理不通

C.篇章：结构混乱 不能完篇

评分细则：

以13分为基准分，适当浮动:

①凡属ABC三项之一者，评为五类卷，获得基准分;②其他两项尚好，酌情加分;

③兼有ABC两项以上情况的，酌情减分。

说明：

1.漏写题目扣1分。

2.错别字每3个扣1分，重现不计，最多扣2分。

3.字迹工整的加1─2分;字迹潦草，难以辨认的酌情扣1-3分。

4.字数不足550字，每少50字扣1分;不足400字，降一等。

5.凡认为有严重错误的答卷，评卷领导小组研究处理。

[深圳中考作文评分标准

假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to，mothers love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile

写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;3.词数在60-80左右

Dear Han Mei，

Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me，“Be careful while crossing the street。” “Put on more clothes。” “Did you do a good job at school?”And so on. Im annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?

Alice

例文

Dear Alice，

As a teenager，I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you。

Your mother talks much，because she cares about you. Maybe its not a good way，but it shows your mothers love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mothers，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about。

If your mother doesnt take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile。

I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

和时态一样，语态也是动词的一种形式，用来说明句中主语和谓语的关系。如果动作由主语执行，就可使用主动语态，如果主语不是由主语执行，主语是动作的承受者，则可使用被动语态。由此我们可以看出英语动词有两种语态：主动语态和被动语态。

被动语态：表示主语是动作的承受者，什么事情被主语做。被动语态的构成和形式被动语态由助动词be+及物动词的过去分词构成，一定要记住是及物动词。助动词必须与主语的人称和数一致，注意要与我们前一讲学过的八个时态配合使用。

适合被动语态的情况：

不知道动作由谁发出，或由于某种原因没有必要说明谁发出动作。如： This table is made of wood.需要突出或强调动作的承受者时，如： This park was built for children.

注意：主动句中的主语如果是people，they，somebody等含糊的表示人或人们，没有确指执行者是谁，为被动句时，通常省略by+执行者。如：The door was opened secretly. But nobody came in.

注意：在主动句里,不定式在make，see，hear等动词后面作宾语补足语时都不带to，但变成被动句时，后面的不定式都需带to。如：He was made to do that work.

主动语态不能变被动语态的情况：学了被动语态，别以为主动句和被动句可以随意转换，千万要注意呀!有些主动语态不能转换成被动语态。当宾语是反身代词时, 如：You should take care of yourself.当谓语是表状态的而不是表具体动作的及物动词时，如：Does the skirt suit you

自律的乐趣

给初三学弟学妹的一封信

新学期已经开始，今年学校进行了教育改革，将课程改成了上午五节课与下午四节练习课。其实这本像是一场赌局，因为下午的四节练习课赌的正是同学们的自律。无论是对升学率还是我们都是极大的挑战，那些自觉、自律、认真的同学可以竿头直上、日就月将，而那些不自觉的同学更会退行千里、雪上加霜。可以说这个决定是一场意志的磨炼，你准备好了吗?

在当今社会，最靠谱的不是你有多少金钱，你有多大靠山，而是你是否是个优秀、自律的人。人们说：“自律的人最可怕。”这是为何?难道是自律的人凶残无比吗?不，不是的。

人们所畏惧的是那颗积极向上、不受干扰、严于律己的心啊。有一颗自律的心，你不怕世间的_;有一颗自律的心，你不惧前路的艰险;有一颗自律的心，你不缺高尚的友人。你说自律是多么强大，你视他人所追求的的功名利禄为粪土，你可以比别人的内心更强大、坚定，你比别人更优秀，那么，养成自律的习惯何乐而不为呢?

自律的人往往是优秀的、大有作为的人。就如曾国藩，一个幼年时笨到读了百遍的课文都无法背诵的人，后来居然成为清朝中兴之臣，这真是让人大吃一惊。他为何有如此成就?

如果他幼年时期没有自觉地学习而去安逸享乐，他会如此名震四方吗?曾国藩曾经有好色的缺点，为了改正每天写日记责骂自己禽兽不如，以此警醒自我。从他开始写日记起，他从未断过，直到临死前一天还在写，你说这样一个严于律己的人是多么令人敬畏。他将极致的自律贯穿到底，人们怎能不会称他为“半个圣人”呢?他的一生正印证了苏轼的一句话：“古之成大事者，不惟有超世之才，亦必有坚忍不拔之志。”

曾国藩的《诫子书》中说：“自修之道，莫难于养心;养心之难，又在慎独。”自律之难，难于精心，难于不受纷扰。若能严于律己，方能秀出班行!

i have two great-grandfathers, one from my mother’s side. my father’s grandfather is now97 years old and lives. in toufen although his eyesight and hearing is poor, his mind is still sharp and clear.

he always asks each visitor many pertinent questions and shares his ideas and opinions. he often talks with a loud voice and with much enthusiasm and energy. he can remember all he can remember all the names of his relatives and friends.

in his youth he was trained to be a medical doctor; through his life he was an avid reader.

[中考英语作文:我的曾祖父

When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.

Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.

当有人问我:你的中国梦是什么?我将毫不犹豫地回答:是一个好医生。我想成为一名医生的原因是,我想要尽可能的挽救人们的生命。当我年轻的时候,我有一个可怕的车祸。多亏了医生,他们把我带回生活。从那时起,成为一个好医生一直是我的灵感。我将努力学习,以确保在未来我的梦想成真。

中国梦是由每一个普通人的梦想。我们应该尽力使我们的梦想成真。

christmas, annual christian holiday commemorating the birth of jesus christ. most members of the roman catholic church and followers of protestantism celebrate christmas on december 25, and many celebrate on the evening of december 24 as well. members of the eastern orthodox church usually delay their most important seasonal ceremonies until january 6, when they celebrate epiphany, a commemoration of the baptism of jesus. epiphany also traditionally commemorates the arrival of the three wise men of the east in bethlehem (near jerusalem, israel), where they adored the infant jesus and presented him with gifts of gold, frankincense, and myrrh. the official christmas season, popularly known as either christmastide or the twelve days of christmas, extends from the anniversary of christ’s birth on december 25 to the feast of epiphany on january 6. christmas is based on the story of jesus’ birth as described in the gospel according to matthew (see matthew 1:18-2:12) and the gospel according to luke (see luke 1:26-56). roman catholics first celebrated christmas, then known as the feast of the nativity, as early as 336 ad. the word christmas entered the english language sometime around 1050 as the old english phrase christes maesse, meaning “festival of christ.” scholars believe the frequently used shortened form of christmas—xmas—may have come into use in the 13th century. the x stands for the greek letter chi, an abbreviation of khristos (christ), and also represents the cross on which jesus was crucified.

12月25日，是基督教徒纪念耶稣诞生的日子，称为圣诞节。从12月24日于翌年1月6日为圣诞节节期。节日期间，各国基督教徒都举行隆重的纪念仪式。圣诞节本来是基督教徒的节日，由于人们格外重视，它便成为一个全民性的节日，是西方国家一年中最盛大的节日，可以和新年相提并论，类似我国过春节。西方人以红、绿、白三色为圣诞色，圣诞节来临时家家户户都要用圣诞色来装饰。红色的有圣诞花和圣诞蜡烛。绿色的是圣诞树。它是圣诞节的主要装饰品，用砍伐来的杉、柏一类呈塔形的常青树装饰而成。上面悬挂着五颜六色的彩灯、礼物和纸花，还点燃着圣诞蜡烛。红色与白色相映成趣的是圣诞老人，他是圣诞节活动中最受欢迎的人物。西方儿童在圣诞夜临睡之前，要在壁炉前或枕头旁放上一只袜子，等候圣诞老人在他们入睡后把礼物放在袜子内。在西方，扮演圣诞老人也是一种习俗。

导语：中考时，英语作文是必考项，重要性不言而喻。它也是让大多数学生最头疼的事情。词汇是最重要的一部分。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

above prep. 在 …… 上面

a. 上面的

ad. 在 …… 之上

abroad ad. 到(在)国外

absent a. 缺席， 不在

accent n. 口音，音调

accept vt. 接受

accident n. 事故，意外的事

ache vi.& n. 痛，疼痛

achieve vt. 达到，取得

across prep. 横过，穿过

act n. 法令，条例 v. (戏)表演，扮演(角色)，演出(戏);行动，做事

action n. 行动

active a. 积极的，主动的

activity n. 活动

add vt. 添加，增加

address n. 地址

advantage n. 优点; 好处

advertisement n. 广告

advice n. 忠告，劝告，建议

advise vt. 忠告，劝告，建议

afford vt. 负担得起( …… 的费用);抽得出(时间);提供

afraid a. 害怕的;担心

after ad. 在后;后来 prep. 在 …… 之后;在 …… 后面 conj. 在 …… 以后

afternoon n. 下午，午后

again ad. 再一次;再，又

against prep. 对着，反对

age n. 年龄;时代

ago ad. 以前

agree v. 同意;应允

agreement n. 同意，一致;协定，协议

air n. 空气;大气

airline n. 航空公司;航空系统

airplane n. (美)飞机

airport n. 航空站，飞机场

alive a. 活着的，存在的

all ad. 全部地

a. 全(部);所有的;总;整

pron. 全部;全体人员

allow vt. 允许，准许

almost ad. 几乎，差不多

alone a. 单独的，孤独的

along ad. 向前;和 …… 一起;一同

prep. 沿着;顺着

aloud ad. 大声地

already ad. 已经

also ad. 也

although conj. 虽然，尽管

always ad. 总是;一直;永远

America * n. 美国;美洲

American a. 美国的;美国人的 n. 美国人

among prep. 在 …… 中间;在(三个以上)之间

amuse vt. (使人)快乐，逗乐

ancient a. 古代的，古老的

and conj. 和;又;而

angry a. 生气的，愤怒的

animal n. 动物

another a. 再一;另一;别的;不同的 pron. 另一个

answer n. 回答，答复;回信; 答案 v. 回答，答复;回信;(作出)答案

ant n. 蚂蚁

any pron. (无论)哪一个;哪些 任何的;(用于疑问句、否定句)一些;什么

anybody pron. 任何人，无论谁

anyone pron. 任何人，无论谁

anything pron. 什么事(物);任何事(物)

anyway ad. 不管怎样

anywhere ad. 任何地方

appear vi. 出现

apple n. 苹果

April n. 4 月

area n. 面积;地域，地方，区域;范围，领域

arm n. 臂 , 支架

army n. 军队

around ad. 在周围;在附近 prep. 在 …… 周围;大约

arrive vi. 到达;达到

article n. 文章; 东西;冠词

art n. 艺术，美术;技艺

asad.& conj. 像 …… 一样;如同;因为 prep. 作为，当做

Asia * n. 亚洲

Asian a. 亚洲的，亚洲人的 n. 亚洲人

ask v. 问，询问;请求，要求;邀请

asleep a. 睡着的，熟睡

at prep. 在(几点钟);在(某处)

Atlantic a. 大西洋的

attention n. 注意，关心

August n. 8 月

aunt n. 伯母;舅母;婶;姑;姨

Australia * n. 澳洲;澳大利亚

Australian a. 澳洲的，澳大利亚人的 n. 澳大利亚人

autumn n. 秋天，秋季

avoid v. 避免，躲开，逃避

awake (awoke, awo ken) v. 唤醒 醒着的

away ad. 离开;远离

I lie cartns because the chatacters are ust lie cn peple. I can’t stand scar vies because the’re s scar . I dn’t lie sap peras because the’re lng and bring. Althugh I reall wnder what happens next .I dn’t lie the at all. I lve watching cedies because the alwas ae e laugh. It’s alwas interesting t watch the funniest perfrer shw their es,als I can lean se funn es fr the. As fr actin vies. I dn’t ind the . The’re as bring as sap peras .But , I’d sa ,actin vies are trul exciting! What abut u?What inds f shws d u lie?

Changes in Shanghai

1 300年前的上海

2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)

3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)

参考作文

Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.

300年前，上海只是个小镇，只有几千人居住在这里，其中很多人是渔民和农民。

Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.

今天，上海已变成一座国际大都市，并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。

Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.

上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权，我相信上海的环境会越来越好，并且越来越美丽。

点评：虽然2010年世博会已经结束，但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈，除了上海，像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。

1、改变作文没有满分的观念，只要符合要求者，就可以得满分。

2、重内容，重真情实感，重创新轻模仿。

3、激励为主，不吝啬分数。

4、作文内容分数值(100分制)：

思想健康，中心明确(30分)(附标题可占5分)

内容相符具体(20分)

条理清楚、段落分明(20分)

语句通顺(20分)

会用标点，错别字少(10分)

5、评分参考：(30分标准)

一类文(90—100)(27—30)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容具体，层次清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面清洁。

二类文(80—89)(24—27)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容比较具体，层次较清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面整洁。

三类文(60—79)(18—24)：基本切题，思想健康，中心基本明确，内容欠具体，层次不够清楚，语句基本通顺，标点使用大体正确，错别字多。

四类文(40—59)(12—18)：不合题意，中心不明确，内容很不具体，层次不清，语句不通，标点错误和错别字多。

五类文(39分以下)(0—12)：内容有错误，语句表达很差，不会使用标点，错别字很多。

这种评定法还可规定，错别字每个扣0.5分，扣足5分为止;标点错误每个扣0.5分，扣足3分为止;卷面太乱，字迹潦草酌扣1—2分。

导语：环境问题是当今的热门话题。它不仅影响我们的健康，它也对我们的未来有很大的影响。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.

Due to lacking of environmental concepts, peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.

In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world! ​

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环境问题是当今的热门话题。它不仅影响我们的健康，它也对我们的未来有很大的影响。

由于环境观念的缺乏，人们的健康受到了空气、噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更好的生活，我们需要一个更清洁的世界。我们现在应该关注环境，为下一代创造更美好的未来。

总之，环境问题是一个直接影响人类的重要问题!

Though there are no exact figures for the ecotourism segment， a government-sponsored push for rural tourism usually involving staying with farmers has become popular in China in recent years.

虽然生态旅游方面还没有确切的统计数据，不过近年来由政府资助推出的乡村旅游项目却已在中国广受欢迎。

上面的报道中，ecotourism就是近几年经常被提及的一种旅游形式生态旅游，其实就是ecological和tourism两个词结合而成的，类似的用法还有eco city，eco-farming等。另外，这里还提到了rural tourism 乡村旅游，算是ecotourism的一个初步形式吧。其他常见的旅游形式还有：package tour，DIY tour，group/organized tour，medical tour等。

1.Environmental protection in the places embodying cultural， historical and natural relics will be promoted. Integrated planning and management of tourism will give priority to the development of ecological tourism and improvement of forest parks and scenic resorts.加强有关文化遗产和自然遗产的环境保护工作，加强旅游业统一规划管理，开展生态旅游，强化森林公园和风景名胜区建设。

2.A variety of tourism products designed around sightseeing， conferences and contests， vacations， business trips， academic studies， cultural explorations， technology， sports， ecological tours， and traditional customs shall all be improved.完善观光旅游、会奖旅游、度假旅游、商务旅游、修学旅游、文化旅游、科技旅游、体育旅游、生态旅游、民俗旅游等旅游产品。

Now advocate low carbon life, as the primary school, I wont make much contribution to the earth, but in low carbon life that on the one hand, I also try to do things I can do.

Now I just have a holiday at home, will be the first to the family "operation"! Grandmother cooking meals every day dont pay attention to save, I say: "grandma, now advocate low carbon life", if you like rice, cook the rice for 20 minutes and then, can shorten the time, should be used when cooking in the fire; burn something to wipe pan, not easy to boil and boil food with a pressure cooker, and helps save gas. Also, wash dishes of water that clean out rice can be used to water the flowers, wash clothes of water can be used to mop the floor or flush the toilet." Grandmother surprise of say: "is that so?! Grandmother, dont know, just do what you say!"

Dad always play while the computer before you go to sleep, I have the chance to say: dad, advocated "low-carbon life", now playing computer not only a waste of electricity, is not good for your eyes, you know, there are a lot of countries is because there are many people of reckless waste of electricity, so they often power outages, the day was fine, have to have lights in the evening! Dad you look how poor they are, you still go to bed early! Dad said happily: "my daughter grow up, know more than me, has a point, I will try, also join your" low carbon gens ". My heart crossed.

In the evening, grandpa opened the TV, voice is very big. I said: "grandpa, now people are constantly improve low carbon consciousness, the voice is small, low brightness can power saving, and your mobile phone, the evening is turned off when not in use, can reduce the number of charging." Grandpa all smiles said: "you not the kui is a great granddaughter, I know at an early age saving, these I also thought, I will do." I am pleased to jump three feet high, grandpa is the "low carbon" crowd.

I cant ask someone to low carbon, oneself also want to do, I will immediately take action. Do drink plain boiled water more, drink less; Less with paper towel to wipe hands; Choose a day every week dont eat meat. Less to buy school supplies extra clothes and life; Book with the positive, dont use correction fluid and tape.

I hope everyone a low-carbon habit, low-carbon awareness, to achieve low carbon pacesetter.

现在，提倡低碳生活，身为小学生的我，虽然不能给地球做出多大的贡献，但在低碳生活这一方面，我也努力做好我能做的小事。

现在我正好放假在家里，就先向家里人“开刀”吧!外婆每天做饭不太讲究节约，我说：“外婆，现在提倡”低碳生活“，如果你焖米饭时，把大米浸泡20分钟后再煮，可缩短时间;做饭时要用中火;烧东西时要擦干锅，不易煮烂煮烂的食品要用高压锅，都有助于节省燃气。还有，洗菜淘米的水可以用来浇花，洗衣服的水可以用来拖地或者冲厕所。”外婆吃惊的说：“是吗?!外婆老了不知道，就照你说的办吧!”

爸爸睡觉前总要玩会儿电脑，我就趁机说：爸爸，现在提倡“低碳生活”，玩电脑不仅浪费电，对眼睛也不好，你知道吗，有好多国家就是因为有许多肆无忌惮浪费电的人，所以他们经常断电，白天还好，晚上就得打着灯了!爸爸你看他们多可怜啊，你还是早早的睡觉吧!爸爸高兴地说：“我女儿长大了，比我知道的还多，说的有道理，我试试看，也加入你的”低碳一族“。我心里喜滋滋的。

到了晚上，外公打开了电视，声音调的十分大。我说：“外公，现在人们都在不断提高低碳意识，声音小，亮度低都可以节电，还有你的手机，晚上不用时就关机，可以减少充电的次数。”外公满脸笑容的说：“你不愧是我的好外孙女，从小就知道节约，这些我还没想到呢，我一定照办。”我高兴地一蹦三尺高，外公也是“低碳一族”了。

我不能光要求别人低碳，自己也要做到，我要马上行动起来。做到多喝白开水，少喝饮料;少用纸巾擦手;每周选一天不吃肉;少买多余的衣服以及生活学习用品;本子反正面都用，不用修正液、修正带。

希望大家都养成低碳习惯，提高低碳意识，争当低碳标兵。