初一关于我的梦想英语作文汇编两篇 作文带翻译(20篇)

在人生的黑暗处，是梦想赐予我力量;在人生路途的岔路口，是梦想指引我方向，是梦想的力量，让我有力气重新站起，是梦想的力量，让我坦然面对各种风风雨雨。晴空万里，天空像一块闪闪发光的蓝宝石。课室外的大榕树，枝不摇，叶不动，就那样静静地肃立在那里，似乎在等待着什么。

课室里的学生，屏息凝神，静静地听着老师如出谷黄莺般的声音，那清脆的声音，正在宣布着什么。“叶慕颖，795，第一名!”同学们的眼里闪出惊讶的光，一副不可置信。我露出自然而欣喜的微笑。初三的最后一次模拟考，我终于如愿以偿地摘下了第一名的桂冠。两个月前的月考，我破天荒地考得一塌糊涂。我颓废不振，走到哪里，哪里就有窃窃私语，所有人都在嘲笑我或是指责我。所有人都觉得我要考中大是不自量力。老师和父母更是语重心长地：“颖颖，快中考了，这样下去，可怎么行?!你的前途会毁了的!”我无言以对。明明很努力了，为什么，为什么……有那么一瞬间，我竟然想要放弃了。我轻轻带上房间门，缓缓地坐在地上。

眼神很呆滞，很空洞。仿佛全身的力量都被抽走了一样。两滴眼泪，在我眼眶里慢慢凝成了。泪眼朦胧中，眼里的余光瞥到一张照片。那个女孩，神采飞扬，朝气蓬勃，暗暗地比了个加油的手势。照片的左上角，醒目的“中大”两个字跃入我的眼帘。中大，中大……我默默地念着。脑海中，浮现了一个女孩捧着书行走在中大的校道，把青春活力尽显出来……中大，梦想……脑海中这两个词一闪而过。霎时我的身体被注入了力量，精神一振。我跳了起来，对!中大!我的梦想!我一定不会放任你消失!……?两个月后，我静静地坐在教室里，看着老师满意的微笑。

我坚信，三年之后，我会依靠梦想的力量和自己的努力，站在中大的校道上，让嘴角上扬，凝成一个自豪的微笑。即使时过境迁，仍不会忘记，那一次失败，是梦想给予我力量，让我有勇气向前走去……

人生在世，谁没有梦想，谁没有渴望，谁没有期盼，谁没有追求，就像花儿渴盼春的讯息，果实渴盼秋的爱意，沙漠渴盼流彩的绿洲，草原渴盼及时的雨露。一个又一个的渴盼、追求和梦想编织着人生的路。

梦想是磁石，人生是铁。漫漫人生路，因梦想而追求，因追求而辉煌，人的一生却只有两个梦想，一个实现了，另一个破灭了。

世间万物都在不停地变化，怎能局限于一种结局？人生坎坷，绝不会一帆风顺，而梦想也会随之变幻无穷。

有那么多美梦终难成现实。梦想与现实在为人生设计着两种方案。在得得失失、失失得得的反复的交替中，走过了一天天、一月月、一年年，心中的梦想也渐渐走向未来。

然而梦想易有，现实难求。真正实现梦想，让梦想成为现实的人并不多。大千世界，无人不想万事如意，实现一个个梦想，可是阳光总在风雨后，实现梦想的背后隐藏着一个个悬机。

在每一位实现梦想的成功者身后，都有很多的艰辛。正如冰心那首诗中所说：“成功的花，人们只惊羡她现时的明艳，然而当初她的芽儿，浸透了奋斗的泪泉，洒遍了牺牲的血雨。”令我们惊羡的仅仅是一次次的成功，可是成功背后，他们又曾付出了多少血汗？正因为如此，他们的梦想才成为了现实。

梦想是那么美好，那么使人渴望，那么令人着迷。它蕴含着太多，太多，成功、喜悦、追求……然而，最重要的是努力。

因此，我们要擦亮双眼，打足精神，朝着梦想一步一步进发。只要付出努力，奋发拼搏，总有一天，通往美梦成真的殿堂一定会在我们面前洞开，为我们展现新奇美妙的风景。

也有些人，没有任何梦想，只想得过且过，了此终生。但是，没有梦想就没有追求，没有了追求又怎么会成功呢？

风吹落了花瓣，花儿明年还要开。永恒的不是万事如意而是追求，如果没有梦想，没有追求，人生也会单调、乏味。

邀请梦想来做客吧，怀着美好的梦想，带着新的希望，走向更加丰富的漫漫人生路吧。

[初一作文邀请梦想来做客

The Wind And The Sun

风和太阳

One day the wind said to the sun, “Look at that man walking along the road.

I can get his cloak off more quickly than you can.”

有一天风跟太阳说: “看看那个沿着路上走的人.我可以比你快让他把披风脱下来.

“We will see about that,” said the sun. “I will let you try first.”

“我们等着看吧,”太阳说, “我让你先试.

So the wind tried to make the man take off his cloak. He blew and blew, but

the man only pulled his cloak more closely around himself.

因此风尝试让那个人把披风脱下来.他用力地吹,可是那个人把披风拉得更紧.

“I give up,” said the wind at last. “I cannot get his cloak off.” Then the

sun tried. He shone as hard as he could. The man soon became hot and took off

his cloak.

“我放弃了,”风最后说, “我无法让他把披风脱下来.”然后由太阳试试看.他尽可能地晒他.不久,那个人很热就把披风脱下来了.

Do you have any hobbies? If not ,what do you do in the holidays ? I have

many hobbies .On weekdays ,when I study in school ,I play with my classmates

.Sometimes I play volleyball with them,sometimes I play football with them .I

think playing football is very interesting and exciting .But when I get home ,I

like listening to music alone .Also I like reading story books.When I am not

happy about something ,I usually draw some pictures though I am not good at

drawing .On weekends ,there is no class ,I like shopping with my friends and my

parents .

我的朋友

My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair，two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them， too. Her favourite food is fish， so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary，too. They are cute.

这篇是讲述我的好朋友玛丽。介绍她的住址，她住在一幢高楼里。她住在五楼。她的年龄，她十二岁。她的外貌，她又高又瘦。她有短的黑色的头发，两只大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。

i want to be a teacher when i listen to my teacher carefully. i think i can be a teacher when i grow up. i can help many students learn things well. i can play with my students, too. so we are good friends. i want to be a doctor when i see many doctors save their patients. to be a doctor is really great. i think i can be a doctor when i grow up. then i can help many people out of danger. i will be the happiest girl in the world.

i want to be a reporter when i watch tv every evening. we can get lots of important information from them. they make the world smaller and also make us happy. i would like to be a reporter when i grow up. and i can learn a lot about china and the other countries around the world. i can meet many superstars as well. i have lots of dreams. i think my dreams can come true one day, because there’s an old saying “where there is a will, there is a way.”

青春的花开花谢让我疲惫却不后悔，四季的雨飞雪飞让我心碎却不堪憔悴。

淡淡的云，淡淡的梦，

淡淡的晨晨昏昏，

淡淡的雨，淡淡的泪，

淡淡的年年岁岁。

“太阳下山花儿依旧爬上来，花儿谢了明年还是一样的开，美丽小鸟一去无影踪，我的青春小鸟一样不回来。”一首《青春之歌》把我带入了青春的思绪。青春一去不再有，所以我们应该珍惜青春，拥抱青春，拥抱朝阳，拥抱生命中的每一天。把握青春，才能去实现自己的梦想，展望未来。为了理想去拼搏，去奋斗，去发奋图强。

雄鹰之所以能大漠鹰飞，能在干旱的沙漠中自游自在地展翅翱翔，是因为它在青春的时候坚持不懈地努力，才换来了现在的自由自在，写到这里，又使我想起了《天堂》中的“雄鹰在这里展翅飞过，留下那段动人的歌。”

所以我们要把握青春，放飞理想，展望未来。

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I

decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and

become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase

you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I

make a decision to be a good girl.

今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

我们都曾有过一个梦想，一个让我们不停追逐、奔跑着的梦想。可现如今，梦想去哪儿了呢？——题记

“梦想”，我们谈过无数次。有想做一个企业家的，有做作家的，有想成为像姚明那样的运动员，也有平平安安就此度过一生的。可是，我们真真正正地去努力过吗？有去不停地追逐过吗？我们扪心自问。

我们只会在嘴上说说罢了，我们不过就是个只会说大话的人罢了。这样的梦想不叫梦想，是空想。一个只会坐在那儿不断想象着自己的未来，自己梦想，自己功成名就回到家乡那得意洋洋的样子，而无动于衷的人，他有什么样的资格拥有梦想呢？说得更难听一点儿，他连说“梦想”这两个字的资格都没有。

梦想不一定是要伟大的，但是一定是自己真正的梦想。小学的时候，写过很多篇作文，其中也有关于自己的理想，自己的梦想等许多篇，全都是谈自己的理想、梦想的。写这些作文时，总是不知道，自己的梦想是什么，写自己最初的梦想：当个旅行家，拍下一张张美丽或是奇特的景象吧，又觉得不好——别人都写当医生，造福人民；做老师，教授知识；只有我一个人写这种不伟大的梦想，于是就写成了作家。渐渐地，写的多了，也就理所当然地认为当个作家才是我的梦想。上初中后，我又恍然大悟，其实梦想不一定是要伟大的，也可以是一个平平凡凡，普普通通的梦想。

《我的梦想》《我的理想》这些作文写过上百次，可是就是不明白，“梦想”和“理想”究竟有什么区别呢？把梦想拆成两个字来理解就是现实中梦幻的想象；理想就是有理性的梦想。在我的心里：理想是方向，而梦想是彼岸。经过了方向的指引，才会到彼岸。

我们都曾有过的梦想被这个残酷的世界所毁灭了，也被我们那冷的让人窒息的心所冰封了。

Dear David,

Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

【翻译】

亲爱的大卫，

我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。

希望能尽快看到你在北京。

此致，

王明

[高考满分英语作文附翻译

Lantern Festival is our traditional festival, the Lantern Festival every

year to eat dumplings, fireworks.

Mom cooked dumplings, I cant wait to pick up the one in your mouth, mom

shout; "Be careful, dont burn yourself. Bite on the filling flow out slowly,

sticky. Sweet taste is great!

The Lantern Festival without watching lanterns. Finish eat yuanxiao, dad

and I arrived Yang head square. There were so many lanterns here! There is

"running" tiger. "Eat grass" rabbit. And "swimming" in the fish. Is a

multifarious! All became light of the ocean. The world of light! Dad bought me a

rabbit lanterns. As long as one click button. Deer will be singing a happy song.

I hurriedly took my tiger lamp join make lanterns, after my father and I go to

fireworks.

Fireworks can be interesting. So many kinds of fireworks! Some on the left

of the gun... People are respect, suddenly, a naughty kid threw jilt cannons,

people scared hiding; I followed papa fired cannons sky it spray flame, 1 of

"pa" exploded and emits the colorful flowers.

The Lantern Festival is really interesting!

元宵节是我国的传统节日，每年元宵节要吃汤圆，放烟花。

妈妈煮好汤圆了，我迫不及待的夹起一个放在嘴里，妈妈大叫;“小心点，别烫着。”咬上一口馅慢慢地流了出来，粘粘的。甜甜的味道好极了!

元宵节可少不了观花灯。吃完元宵，我和爸爸来到阳头广场。这里的花灯可真多啊!有“奔跑”的老虎。“吃草”的兔子。还有在“游动”的鱼儿。真是五花八门!都成了灯的海洋。光的世界!爸爸给我买了一个兔子花灯。只要一按按纽。兔儿便会唱起欢乐的歌。我连忙拿起我的老虎灯加入闹花灯的行列，之后我和爸爸去放烟花。

放烟花可有趣了。烟花的种类真多!有的还有的在放甩炮……人们正看得起劲，忽然，一个淘气的小朋友扔甩炮，人们吓得四处躲藏;我跟着爸爸放礼炮它喷着火焰天空冲去，“啪”的一声爆炸了，放出五彩的鲜花。

元宵节真有趣!

列夫·托尔斯泰曾说过：理想是指明灯，没有理想，就没有坚定的方向;没有方向，就没有成功。

有梦的人生是生机勃勃多姿多彩的，为梦想而奋斗的人生是充实而快乐的。我们要放飞自己的梦想，不要将其逼上绝路。

就像董丽娜在演说中说到的那样：不要把自己的梦想逼上绝路，要相信你的潜能比你想象中更强大。她虽然是一个盲人，但绝不接受自己还没有奋斗就过早的宣判。她战胜重重困难，自学成长，最终进入了中央人民广播电台主播行列。她用自己的行动践行了对梦想执著的追求，用汗水铸就了通往成功的道路。她的人生没有因为疾病而蒙上阴影，声音的魅力将她从黑暗中唤醒。“别把梦想逼上绝路”，这是董丽娜摆脱困境的关键。

梦想是生活的动力，拥有了梦想，坚定了信念，我们就应该不畏艰难地为了实现梦想而不懈奋斗。

斯蒂芬·威廉·霍金是一位著名的物理学家，曾毕业于牛津大学和剑桥大学。他在21岁时患上了卢伽雷氏症，因此被禁锢在轮椅之上。但他没有放弃对梦想的追求，对生命的热爱。他证明了黑洞的面积定理，为物理学的发展做出了巨大贡献，因而被誉为是继爱因斯坦之后最杰出的理论物理学家。霍金身上不断追求的科学精神和勇敢顽强的人格魅力，深深地震撼着我们，激励着我们。

身患疾病，体有缺陷，生活挫折，这是生命过程的曲折，但也是生命过程的常态，彩虹也要经历风雨，乌云过后更有湛蓝的天空。

在实现梦想的道路上，我们或许会遇到各种各样的困难，但我们不能放弃，不能气馁，要把梦想当作指明灯，让梦想指引我们前行的方向。命运或许会给我们带来许多的障碍，但它不会将我们的梦想逼上绝路。董丽娜作为一个盲人，命运虽然给了她一双看不见明天的眼睛，但并是没有封杀她美好的未来，她只是躯体上的不幸，并没有将自己的梦想逼上绝路，她用自己的坚持与抗争超越了自我。

因为缺陷而思考自己更多的可能性，最终成就了一个不一样的未来。别把梦想逼上绝路，我们要拥抱更美好的蓝天，放飞梦想。

I think all of them have a dream! Maybe this dream is not big, but always give yourself a decision, that is, to complete the dream.

My dream is not for me, for my family. Because in my small time total people in front of my parents always say that their sons and daughters how powerful, a long time. Gradually I in the heart under the seed is my must grew up to buy a luxury car, live in luxury real, I want to let everyone envious of my parents.

I want all the people to envy my parents and my brother, these two children. This seed has been buried in the heart of my slowly germination, I know that it is difficult to achieve this dream, but I must make a lot of money.

Maybe someone said I only care about money $$, money is worldly possessions, in my eye, for fear of parents with their own life to protect our, we care about and care for us! Every time I see parents very hard, always wanted to help, but also humiliating.

But I always want to realize this dream, I also want to let their parents when old to live an extravagant life.

For this dream, for me refueling bar!

我想所有的人都有一个梦想吧！可能这个梦想不大，但是总是给自己一个决定，就是一定要完成这个梦想。

我的梦想 不是为了我自己，是为了我的家。因为在我小的时候总有人在我父母面前总是说自己的儿女多么多么的厉害，时间久了，渐渐渐渐我在心里种下了一粒种子___就是我一定要长大买豪车，住豪房，我要让所有人都羡慕我的父母。

我要让所有的人都羡慕父母有我和哥哥这两个孩子。这颗种子一直埋在我的心里慢慢的发芽，我知道想要实现这个梦想很难实现，但我一定要赚大钱。

可能会有人说我只在乎钱$_$，钱是身外之物，在我眼里父母们用自己的一辈子去守护我们，关心我们，在乎我们！每次看到父母很辛苦，总想去帮忙，可是又拉不下脸。

但是我不仅一直想实现这个梦想，我还想等父母们老的时候让他们锦衣玉食。

为了这个梦想，为我加油吧！

[我的梦想小学生优秀英语作文

How to keep healthy What is the most important thing in the worldI think it is health. You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly. In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins. Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy. What ＇ s more, I think friends are an important part of one ＇ s health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don ＇ t. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends. By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy. 如何保持健康 什么是世界上最重要的事情吗我认为这是健康的。 你可以拿走我们的钱、房子、汽车,甚至我们的衣服,我们可以生存。但是如果我们 的健康被带走了,我们肯定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尽量吃以健康的方式和定期锻 炼。 为了能吃得健康,我通常避免吃高脂肪的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点。我也很少吃肉。 我会吃很多的蔬菜和新鲜水果充足的维生素。 每天做运动有助于我们建立一个强壮的身体。规律的运动的一个重要组成部分,我 们保持身体健康。 更重要的是,我认为朋友是一个重要的部分人的健康。许多研究表明,人们用广泛的 社会交往更少生病比那些没有。我总是感觉更好,当我和朋友在一起比当我独自一人。 当我与朋友一起时,我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和朋友一起大笑。 正确的饮食和有规律的锻炼,我就能让我的身体在一个适当的体重和保持健康。花 时间和我的朋友,我可以让我的大脑以及我的身体快乐。这些事情听起来容易做,但没有 多少人可以管理它们。我认为一个坚强的意志是非常必要的,如果我们想要保持健康。 Sunset In order to see the sunset ， I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill . At that time ， the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldnt even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill ， the light became a bit yellow . After a short while ， it was completely golden ， then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big

red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud coveredmore and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back . 日落 为了看日落,我把一切都准备好了在下午 5 点前。然后我去了东山。 那时,太阳已经在西方了但是它仍然在照耀着。它的光是如此强烈,以至于我甚至无 法睁开眼睛。当我来到东山的时候,阳光已经变得有点黄。一会儿以后,它完全变成了金 黄,然后变成红色。太阳近设置。这就像一个大大的红色的火球。它周围的云也被涂成 了红色。渐渐地,云彩遮盖越来越多的太阳。最后它消失在云。这是黑了,我快步跑回了 家 A trip to the zoo Today is Sunday. Its sunny today . I go to the zoo with my mother. I can see many animals . There are tigers ,lions ,pandas ,snakes and many more. Look ! The pandas are over there . Theyre from China . Look at the baby panda ! Its climbing trees. How cute it is ! I love pandas. Next, we go to see the lions .The lions are so strong . Their mouths are too big. The tigers ae next to them. They are from Asia. They are yellow. At last,we go to see the monkeys . Some are climbing moutains , some are eating bananas . THey re so much fun ! I see many animals at the zoo and I m so happy today! 去动物园 今天是星期天。今天天气晴朗。我去和我妈妈去了动物园。我可以看到很多动物。 有老虎、狮子、熊猫、蛇和许多更多。看!大熊猫们在那里。他们来自中国。看那个婴 儿熊猫!这是爬树。多可爱啊!我喜欢熊猫。 接下来,我们去看狮子。狮子是如此强大。他们的嘴太大。老虎 ae 旁边。他们都 来自亚洲。他们是黄色的。最后,我们去看猴子。有些是攀登山峰,一些人吃香蕉。他们 都太好玩了! 我看到很多动物在动物园里,我太高兴了! love my family love my family,because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What’s my mother jopIs she a teacherYes,you’re right!My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents! On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano,My father go to play basketball.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home. I love my family.Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together! 我的家庭 我爱我的家庭,因为我有一个快乐的家庭.我的爸爸是一名英语教师,他的名字叫 Jacky.他今年 38 岁.他非常喜欢打篮球.我的 妈妈是赶什么呢她是一名教师吗是的.你说对了!我的妈妈是一个很亲切、友善的人, 她今年 37 岁.我妈妈总是勤劳的干活.我爱我的父母. 在星期六和星期天里,我经常去图书馆和弹钢琴.我爸爸去打篮球.有时侯,我们都在 家看电视和听音乐. 我爱我家.因为我

和爸爸妈妈一起生活得很开心! Computre games Computer games is a hot topic nowadays. Some people hold that it is bad. And others hold that it is good. In my view, whether good or bad is determined by the players. If one plays computer game properly in his spare time, computer games can be an excellent source of joy. For example, something impossible in your real life can be realized in the computer games. You can pilot a space craft and travel in the universe. Every coin has two sides. If one plays computer game excessivly, it may affects his eyesight and study. the computer games itself is only a tool like knife. If we use it properly, it can pare apples. But if we use it to attack others. It immediatly becomes an lethal weapon. 电脑游戏是一个热门话题如今。一些人认为它是坏的。其他人则认为这是好的。 在我看来,无论好坏是由球员。 如果一个人玩电脑游戏正确地在业余时间,电脑游戏可以快乐的一个很好来源。例 如,不太可能在生活中你可以意识到计算机中 游戏。你可以驾驶宇宙飞船和宇宙中旅行。每个硬币都有两面。如果一个人玩电 脑游戏,那可能会影响他的视力和学习。 电脑游戏本身只是一种工具像刀一样。如果我们正确的使用它,它可以削去苹果皮。 但是如果我们用它攻击别人。它马上就会成为致命的武器。 My friend I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made GREat proGREss. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future. 我有很多朋友。其中一个是我的同班同学马华。他是一个共青团员和最好的一个 学生在我的类。他很喜欢英语,并且擅长它。他经常练习大声朗读英语。所以他的发音 很好。他总是乐于帮助别人。在他的帮助下,我取得了很大的进步。我已下定决心要赶 上他,加入联盟在不久的将来。 My holiday-我的假期 Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus. Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious. My mouth is now watering again. I will never forget such interesting expirence. 暑假已经到来。我是多么幸福! 我想做的最喜欢的事情是

旅游。我加入了一个户外俱乐部和去海边在浙江和其他 的成员。7 月 20 日,我们开始了我们的旅程在晚上 21:00。我太瞌睡了,我在公共汽车上 睡着了。 突然有人推我。我打开我的眼睛和一个美丽的海洋就在身旁。多么美丽的地方 !我 们在海里游泳和打沙滩排球。风、阳光、蓝天和快乐的男孩和女孩形成一幅精美的图 片!中午,我们煮熟的海鲜像螃蟹、虾、贝壳等等。它们都是那么美味。 我的嘴是现在又流泪了。我 永远不会忘记这有趣的经验。 How did you spend your summer vacation I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there. 我有一个忙碌而有趣的暑假。每天我做作业的时候,所以我做完我的作业前十天,新 学期。我也打打网球和篮球每天和我的朋友们。有时我去看电影,去了公园与我的朋友。 我上网,读书和看电视,每天晚上。我访问祖父母和帮助他们做家务 ,太。我帮助我的父 母打扫房间和做饭。最重要的是,我的父母和我去 Hannan 岛,在那里度过了一个星期。 Hello, everyone. My name is Kelly. I am friendly and honest.I am good at English and maths. I like surfing the internet,playing computer games, watching TV and traveling. I also like playing table tennis and I am good at it ,too. I often play table tennis with my friends on weekends. And I want to be a famous table tennis player when I grow up. What I like most is to see the seagulls flying freely in the sky so I often go to the sea in summer. My favourite colour is white because I think white is symbolize purity. 大家好 我的名字叫 KELLY .我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。 我爱上网、 玩电脑网络游戏、看电视 和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓 球，长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔，因此 在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。 My mother is a good mother.She is 158 cm tall.

She help me on life .I very grateful to her.Last weekend,she had stomachache. After take some medcizine,she feel better.I very happy.The day is first holiday.Our mothers sad,we dont happy.They happy,we happy too.We must grateful to them.They are very hard. Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention

to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I don＇t think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives 我的妈妈是一位好母亲。 她是 158 厘米高。她帮助我的生活。我非常感谢她。上个周末 ,她胃疼。花一些 medcizine 后,她感觉更好。我非常高兴。这一天是第一个假期。我们的母亲难过,我们 不开心。他们很幸福,我们很高兴。我们必须感谢他们。他们是非常困难的。 金钱的确很重要,但钱不能买到一切。一个吝啬鬼可能认为“金钱万能”,但如果你 只给你注意到赚钱时,你可能会失去很多东西,比如健康、友谊和爱。我认为我们不应该 认为金钱是一切。钱只是一个工具,可以帮助我们解决问题或使我们过上舒适的生活。 我们应该做的是合理使用它,而不是变成了守财奴。这种方式,我们都能领导一个快乐的 生活

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Mathematics was too difficult for me, the teacher spoke so fast that I

could not understand. I failed every math exam, my dad was very angry, he

wouldnt let me watch TV, or let me go out, I was very sad. The math teacher

always asks me to go to the office and tell me the problem. I am not afraid to

make mistakes, because I can correct them. I keep practicing, speed up my

problem, and dont forget to preview and review. In the most recent exam, I

achieved excellent results in maths. A good learner has many good learning

habits.

数学对我来说太难了，老师讲的太快，以至于我不能听懂。每次数学考试我都不及格，我的爸爸很生气，他不让我看电视，也不让我出去玩，我很难过。数学老师总是让我去办公室，给我讲题。我开始不害怕犯错，因为我还可以改正。我不断的练习，加快了我的做题速度，并且不忘记预习和复习。在最近的一次考试里，我的数学成绩达到了优秀。一个好的学习者有很多好的学习习惯。

Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Nothing is easy if you

don’t try your best.

We often hear people say, “Never give up.” A person who believes in these

words will keep trying to pursue his goal no matter how many times he fails. In

my opinion, the quality of determination to succeed is an important one to have.

Therefore, I believe that we should never give up.

One reason is that if we give up easily, we will achieve nothing. It is not

unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not

feel discouraged. Besides, if we always give up when fail happens, we will can

not develop new skills. Finally, we should never give up because as we work to

reach our goals, we develop confidence, and this confidence can help us succeed

in other areas of our lives.

Probably the greatest example of persistence is Abraham Lincoln. Born into

poverty, Lincoln was faced with defeat throughout his life. He lost eight

elections, twice failed in business and suffered a nervous breakdown. He could

have quit many times - but he didnt and because he didnt quit, he became one

of the greatest presidents in the history of America.

Lincoln was a champion For the reason that ---he ,never gave up.

In short, no matter you succeed or not, you can learn something, no matter

what we learn will help us to become more confident. If we give up, we have no

chance to make our dreams come true, if we keep trying, there is always a

chance, that we will succeed one day. Thank you very much!

世上无难事，只怕有心人。如果你不努力，没有什么是容易的。

我们经常听到人们说:“永不放弃。”一个相信这些话的人，无论失败多少次，都将继续追求他的目标。在我看来，成功的决心是很重要的。因此，我认为我们不应该放弃。

一个原因是，如果我们轻易放弃，我们将一事无成。我们第一次尝试新事物时失败并不罕见，所以我们不应该感到气馁。此外，如果我们总是在失败的时候放弃，我们就无法发展新的技能。最后，我们永远不应该放弃，因为当我们努力实现我们的目标时，我们会建立信心，这种信心能帮助我们在生活的其他方面取得成功。

也许最伟大的坚持就是亚伯拉罕·林肯。林肯出身贫寒，一生都面临失败。他在8次选举中失败，两次失败，并经历了精神崩溃。他本可以放弃很多次，但他没有，因为他没有放弃，他成为了美国历史上最伟大的总统之一。

林肯是一个冠军，因为他从不放弃。

总之，无论你成功与否，你都可以学到一些东西，无论我们学到什么都会帮助我们变得更加自信。如果我们放弃，我们就没有机会实现我们的梦想，如果我们继续努力，总有机会，我们终有一天会成功。非常感谢!

live very happily today! in the morning, it is very fine! then i climb the

mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants

and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful.

in the afternoon, i go to friends home to play, the friend entertains me

warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to his cd for me , then

also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner.

coming back home in the evening, family and i sat and watched tv together,

we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy

and harmonious!

译文：

今天我过得非常开心!早上，天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。

下午，我去了朋友家玩，朋友热情地招待我，给我看了他的很多书，给我听了他的cd，然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。

晚上回到家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果，全家其乐融!

I have many favorite holiday,such as:the Dragon Boat Festival and the double ninth festival,but I most like the needlework. Because the needlework section is by niulang and zhinv,below I will speak to you of the origin of the needlework section.

Met a sick one day,the cowherds workhorse, cowherd saw it was ill, and was taken care of.

One day, met a group of vega cowherd,and fell in love with the one of the female, the vega also like cowboy, they lived a happy life. This thing is know the heavenly queen, and catch the vega on the day.

After women talked: “when I die, I made a pair of leather shoes, you can walking.” The old cow died, cowherd took the old cow leather to make shoes, find vega flew to heaven, but was head of the heavenly queen hair clasp into the Milky Way of blocking the way. Cowboy on the other side has kept many days,finally, was touched by the heavenly queen so heavenly queen in July 7th this one day,only to meet niulang and zhinv. Vega ingenuity,women are begging for blessing themselves can also ingenuity.

This is the origin of the needlework section.

In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the

air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain

all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friends home to play,

the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to

his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in

the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and

eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!

早上，天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山，山上的空气非常清新，花草树木在山上都显得格外美丽。在下午，我去了朋友家玩，朋友热情地招待我，给我看了他的很多书，给我听了他的CD，然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚上回到家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果，全家其乐融融。

The new semester is coming and I want to make a plan for it.

Firstly, I will work as hard as before. I really did a good job last term, so I want to keep good as well. During the summer holiday, I did some previews and I found that the courses are not very hard. Secondly, I will spend more time in reading.Readingis really good to a person, because we can learn a lot from books and broaden one’s horizon. Besides, reading can help us think more and deeply.

Finally, I will take part in exercises actively and regularly. No matter how busy I am, I will set sometime aside to build my body which is the basic of any other things. Moreover, after doing exercise, I feel so fresh and relaxed that I can put my whole heart in doing something, such as study, reading, thinking and so on. So this is the plan for the new semester and I am sure I can carry it out step by step.