追逐梦想英语演讲稿精选5篇 作文带翻译【20篇】

卖火柴的小女孩的梦想只不过是一顿温饱，鲁滨逊的梦想只不过是想当一名伟大的航海家，而祥子他的梦想只是想要一辆属于自己的车……人人都有自己的梦想我也有。

每个人的心底都有属于自己的梦想，不管这个梦是否有意义，它始终是一块人生的拼图，它需要我们一块块、一步步慢慢拼凑。

梦想是美好的，他们人们心中最美丽的东西，每个人的梦想都是绚丽光彩光彩夺目，他们可能因为某一些事情，或者自己爱好而去实现这个梦想，有梦想的人就是伟大的，他们时时刻刻不在努力，不再努力的完善自己实现自己长久以来伟大的梦想去为人民做有利益的事情，我觉得梦想不需要多伟大，多么有意义，多么光彩，只需要为社会做出贡献，就算是那微不足道的贡献那你也是成功的，伟大的，因为你的梦想已经体现了他的价值，为社会做出了贡献，去追逐那个属于自己的梦想，当你有一天回想起你曾经的梦想，今天已经实现了，你是有多么的骄傲

我的梦想与一般人的梦想不同，我的梦想不是遨游太空，不是在舞台上炫丽发光，不是当一名兢兢业业的老师，也不是当一名伟大的科学家，我只想做一名普普通通的社会劳动者，一位能为社会做出贡献的人，在大家需要帮助的时候，能伸出我自己的援助之手去帮助他们，拉他们一把，我不想为世人称赞，我只想做一根蜡烛。这样才是我的梦想，有很多人都在向我讲述他们的梦想，讲述他们的梦想有多么的宏伟，多么的有意义，但我只是做个小小的劳动者为人民付出便好。

实现梦想说难不难说简单不简单，他需要我们勤勤恳恳，踏踏实实的，去实现他完成他，让青春的明天更加绚丽多彩！

一切都在继续，天空继续它的蔚蓝，花儿继续它的芬芳，天鹅继续它的飞翔，我也继续我的梦想。

Mingming came to my house today. We spent some time playing computer games.

We played basketball game online. I chose NBA and Mingming had to take CBA. Of

course, I won finally. We had a good time.

明明今天来我家。我们一起玩电脑游戏。我们打在线篮球游戏。我选NBA 球队，明明只能选CBA球队。当然，我赢了。我们玩的很开心。

introduce myself

my name is ningruoyan。i’m a china girl。i’m ten 。i’m from zhengzhou，china。do you know zhengzhou？it’s in the middle of china。our shool is a good school in zhengzhou。i’m in class4 grade4。there are 83 students in our class。i like our shool ，teachers and classmates。

i like listening to music，i hope everyone likes music as i do。music can bring you a lot of joy and happiness。

i like reading，too。in my room，there are many books。i often go to the library to read books。sometimes，i borrow some bookes from the library。

swimming is my favorite sport。if you swim in the water，you will look like a lovely fish。if you smim ，you’ll be strong。

i like myself very much！do you like？

自我介绍

我的名字叫宁若岩。我是一名中国女孩。我10岁。我来自中国郑州，你知道郑州吗？它位于中国的中部。我们的学校是郑州的一所好学校。我在四年级四班。我们班有84名学生。我爱我们的学校，老师和同学。

我喜欢听音乐，我希望每个人都像我一样喜欢音乐。音乐能给你带来很多喜悦和幸福。

我也喜欢读书。在我的房间有许多书。我经常去图书馆看书。有时还从图书馆借阅书籍。

游泳是我最喜爱的运动。如果你在水里游泳，你看起来就像一条可爱的鱼。如果你经常游泳，你会变得强壮。

我非常喜欢自己！你们呢?

[自我介绍英语作文及翻译

I have a dream.Compared toMartin Luther King’s, my dream is very

small.Iwant to be a teacher in the future.And then I can have a two long

vacations fortraveling.I can travel around the world.I can go America, Canada,

New York,New Zealand, Hong Kong, Beijing, Shanghai and so on.It’s perfect.Yes,

goingtravel around the world is my dream.Even I want to go to the moon

fortravel.

追逐梦想动力

让我充满了感动和追逐梦想动力

王亚平和付丽娟

在梦想的道路上经历千辛万苦

训练场上汗水和泪水混杂在了一起

那是他们不屈和不放弃的精神

终于

他们一个坐着神十遨游了浩瀚的宇宙

一个将快乐挥洒在蓝天之中

成功的道路并不是一帆风顺

唐僧西天取经不也经历了九九八十一难吗

或许你们看到了星爷和子怡身上那闪闪的光环

那你是否知道

在他们没出名之前所经历的那些风和雨吗

或许这只有他们自己才知道

曾经吃过的哭和流到心里的泪

也许

你会许下一系列的愿望

我要当警察 我要当护士 我要当飞行员

可是 有多少人最终是达到了自己的愿望呢

撇开所谓的现实

那你是否真的在为自己的理想所奋斗吗

曾经我也像同学们一样许下一个自己的愿望

可是 到了就最后变成了那不值钱的诺言

动力有了 却没有那种坚持到底的信念

每个人有每个人的理想

你想要拥有的那你就必须去做

Today I’m very happy.My name is Alice. I’m 11 years old.I’m a sunny girl. I like purple and blue.My favorite animal is rabbit.It’s so cute. I like English,too.I like dancing best. I have a dream. When I grow up.I want to be a dancer. I began to learn dancing when I was 5 years old. I learned many lots of dancing. When I dance,not only I am very happy,but also can give other people happy. So I want to forever dance.

Now I will work hard for this dream. At last,please remember me-a little dream girl. Thank you for your listening.

每个人都有自己的一个梦想，可以是一名厨师、医生或是老师、工程师等，而我的梦想是成为一名发明家。

之所以我想成为一名发明家，是因为我从小就喜欢做一些稀奇的小东西。我常常在想，长大了我一定要发明一个飞船。为什么呢?因为现在车辆太多了，路上的交通太拥挤，汽车尾气也会污染我们的环境。而飞船则可以利用空中的空间缓解这些问题。很多人会问这个飞船会不会像汽车一样，造成环境污染、浪费能源呢?不会的，发动机使用来自我们生活中的垃圾做动力，产生的废弃物都做了无害处理，所以它即消除了垃圾，又保护了环境。这个飞船不仅可以在天空中飞行、陆中行走、海上航行，还可以潜水呢，你想到哪里玩它都能带你去，这难道不是很有趣的事情吗?

除了发明一个飞船，我还想发明一个百变魔方。这个魔方你平常可以把它当做一个魔方来玩，也可以在需要的时候变成一个你想要让它变成的东西。如果你在课堂上忘记带一本书，它就会变成那本书帮助你渡过难关。如果你在回家的道路上遇到坏人，它就会变成一个英勇的武士，来保护你的安全，并且还把坏人给抓到警察局，交给警察叔叔。如果你在森林中迷了路，它还能变成一个指南针，指引你找到回家的路。如果你在过马路的时候，对面突然冲过来一辆汽车，在这个紧急的时刻它会瞬间变一个巨大的安全气囊，你好像突然进入了软绵绵的云朵的怀抱里。它还有许多许多的功能呢，多到我把口水说干了也说不完。

可能在别人的眼中，觉得我是在信口开河、高谈阔论，根本就是在做白日梦。而我在面对他们的鄙夷嘲笑下，不仅不会就此放弃，还会更加坚定自己的梦想。我一直坚信：只要我们足够的努力并有坚定的信念，我们的梦想就一定会实现!

导语：近年来我国多地雾霾天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

With the broadcast of smog,this long-standing environmental problems,become the hot discussion once again.According to some reports,the frequent appearances of smog obscure the clarity of the sky recently.Some people drove slowly on the road because they could not see clearly. They also suffered from many illnesses caused by smog.

Smog is the general expression of various higher-than-permitted suspended particulate matter (such as PM2.5) in the atmosphere,which express the state of air pollution .It contains fog and haze,both of them are disastrous weather. Fog consists of a large number of tiny water or ice crystals.Its actually a harmless natural phenomena that makes visibility worse .Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust, smoke and other dry particles. The components that make up haze may have negative effect on peoples health, especially for children and the old.

So its necessary to find out the reason why leads to smog and work out the resolution.If we trace the cause for smog weather ,the main points are natural causes that include windblown dust and manmade causes which include three aspects.Firstly,china s air quality standards are rather lax and evaluation factors are limited.Secondly,some enterprises just go for economic interests instead of observing relevant law and regulations.Obsolete equipment、industrial fuel burning and manufacturing operations are high likely to emit much wasted air.Thirdly,across our society ,relevant protection awareness has not built up.Just for the sake of convience to go out,people rely more and more on travelling and working by car while car is the main cause for smog.

To settle this problem,a series of meaures should be taken as follows.Primarily,we should establish a sound control system of smog. Not only can environmental protection departments strengthen air monitor,but government should enact more strict laws and regulations.Moreover,Reduce pollution sources is the fundamental solution to cut air pollutants. For example,we can reduce the amount of fuel vehicles or close down high polluting enterprises.Developing green and energy-saving energy can lower the emission of smog.Last but not least, People should do personal protection.They need to reduce the time for outdoor sports and pay attention to rest in smog days.Everyone all over the country should take measures to reduce the smog weather. We can use more public transport such as the bus and the underground so that the number of cars will be limited.Also,people should plant more trees. As far as Im concerned ,if we work together to do such measures ,smog weather will vanish completely and we will get clear and blue sky.

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随着烟雾的传播，这个长期存在的环境问题再次成为人们讨论的热点，据一些报道，烟雾的频繁出现模糊了最近天空的清晰度，有些人因为看不清楚而在路上缓慢行驶。他们也遭受了许多由烟雾引起的疾病。

烟雾是大气中各种高达允许悬浮颗粒物(如PM2.5)的普遍表现，它表示大气污染的状态，含有雾和霾，两者都是灾害性天气。雾由大量的细小的水或冰晶组成，实际上是一种无害的自然现象，它使能见度变得更糟。Haze是空气污染，它与灰尘、烟雾和其他干粒子混合在一起。构成雾霾的成分可能对人们的健康产生负面影响，特别是对儿童和老年人。

因此有必要找出原因，导致烟雾和工作的决议。如果我们追溯雾霾天气的成因，主要是自然原因，包括风沙和人为原因主要有以下三个方面：首先，中国的空气质量标准是相当宽松的评价因素是有限的。其次，一些企业只是去代替观察相关的法律和法规的经济利益。设备陈旧、工业燃料燃烧和生产经营高可能发出多浪费空气。然后，在我们的社会中，相关的保护意识还没有建立起来。只是为了方便出门的缘故，人们越来越依赖旅行和工作的汽车，而汽车是主要原因烟雾。

为了解决这个问题，应采取一系列措施如下。首先，我们应该建立一个健全的烟雾控制系统。环保部门不仅要加强大气监测，而且要制定更加严格的法律法规，减少污染源是减少大气污染物的根本途径。例如，我们可以减少燃料量或关闭高污染企业，发展绿色、节能的能源可以降低烟雾排放。最后但并非最不重要的，人们应该做好个人防护。他们需要减少户外运动的时间和关注在烟雾天休息。全国各地的人应该采取措施减少烟雾天气。我们可以使用更多的公共交通工具，如公共汽车和地铁，这样汽车的数量将是有限的，人们也应该种植更多的树。就我而言，如果我们共同努力，采取这样的措施，烟雾天气将完全消失，我们将得到明确和蓝天。

Tonight, my mother invite her friends to come to dinner. So my mother

prepare a lot of food, she even cooks the new food, which I never taste before.

My mother’s friends praise her a lot, which makes my mother so happy. The food

my mother cooks is so delicious, I love to eat them so much. I am so happy to

have such a good mother.

今晚，我妈妈邀请她的朋友来吃晚饭。因此妈妈准备了很多的食物,她甚至煮了新的饭菜，只是我以前从来没有尝过的。妈妈的朋友们都赞美她，这让她很高兴。妈妈煮的食物，非常美味，我喜欢吃。我很高兴有这样一个好妈妈。

People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were many old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which attrated my eyes. The city was coverd by the green trees, which made it a green city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so lovely, I just ingored its beauty usually.

人们总是说我们缺乏发现实现生活中的美丽的眼睛。我十分同意。上周,我早上很早就醒了,所以我决定出去散步。街上很安静,有很多老人在广场上跳舞。街上没有了很多小车,我意识到这个城市看起来那么干净和漂亮。一些咖啡店装修很好,吸引了我的眼球。这座城市被绿色的树木覆盖着,这是一个绿化放的城市。我很喜欢这种感觉。这时,我发现这个城市是如此的可爱,平常我忽略了它的美。

August 7,2014 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to

grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions.

Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文：今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival

most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because

it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family

gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they

are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit

together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to

have some fun.

On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone

they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we

will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a

time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.

在我国，一年有很多节日，在这些节日中，我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日，更因为它是新一年的开始，给人们带来新的希望，也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方，人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。

通常，我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，之后家人团座一起，分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一，人们通常会早起，会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里，人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之，春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。

I made a decision today. Becuase I often lose my confidence, I decide tell

myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. I believe this will

make me confident. Thus, I can do things I want bravely. Now, I will say, ‘Keep

going’.

今天，我做了一个决定，有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样，我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在，我要说一句：加油!

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am very glad to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.

[我很高兴得知你要在我为期一周的假期里来看我。]My parents will also be happy to see you again.[我的父母也很高兴再次见到你。]I am sure you will enjoy every minute here. [

我相信你会喜欢这里的每一分钟。]

I have arranged our schedule for the holiday as follows.[我已经安排好我们的日程安排的假期如下.]On the first day you arrive, I will show you around our campus. [在你来着的第一天，我会带你参观我的校园。]On the second day, we will visit the art gallery and the music hall.[第二天，我们去参观艺术馆和音乐厅。]Next day,we will climb a hill in the northeastern part of the city.[第三天，我们去攀爬城市东北部的山峰。]On the top of the hill, we can have a wonderful bird’s eye view of the city.[在山顶上，我们可以鸟瞰这个美丽的城市。]During the next three days, we’ll make some short trips to some places of interest nearby，such as the Swan Cave, the Golden Lake, etc.[接下来的三天，我们去附近的名胜古迹来些短途旅行，例如天鹅洞，金色湖。]On the last day, I’ll see you off at the railway station.[最后一天，我会到火车站送你。]

Please remember to call and tell me your train number and time of arrival so that I can meet you at the railway station. [请记得打电话告诉我你的火车号和抵达时间以便我去火车站接你。]By the way, it is very hot here and we have a lot of sunshine, so don’t forget to wear

you sunglasses. [顺便提一下，这里天气很热阳光强烈，所以不要忘了戴太阳镜。]

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.[我期待很快见到你。]

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Ying

很快就要考试了。我的心里越来越紧张，因为我如果考不好的话，那我的摄像头和话筒就泡汤了。

也许你会问，为什么我考不好摄像头和话筒就会泡汤呢?

那是因为有一次，我和我爸爸还有我的班主任老师路过电脑城，就进去看了一看。这时，班主任开口了：“我在这里买过一个摄像头，很好用。他让我爸也买一个给我。我爸爸沉思了一会，说：“看看他的表现再说吧。”我爸爸认为我平时的表现有点懒，总是想不劳而获，所以给了我一个梦，希望我能够通过自己的努力去争取。

就这样，我开始了自己的追梦旅程。

为了自己的梦想，我想，我必须变“懒”为勤，必须抛弃不劳而获的思想，必须付出艰苦的努力。从此，课堂上我开始认真听课，我记笔记也变得勤快了。一有空就在试卷堆里愤笔疾书，或者看看数学、英语碟，或者听听英语带，在电脑前也不再受诱惑。

现在，期末考快到了,就像运动员在100米冲刺的最后关头，让人既紧张又兴奋。

摄像头、话筒，我等着你!

过去，面对过去，我们是站在回忆里，我们曾是在草地上追逐打闹的孩童，我们无忧无虑的欢笑，我们笑的那么真。孩子的笑容总是充满了童话的色彩。童年的追逐给了我们无数的幻想和憧憬，童年的追逐，同样是我们坚持的开始。最初的，我们的执着，我们的追逐，我们的坚持。

现在，花季正值的我们在青春里张扬放肆的生活着，慢慢的，我们懂得，站在原地，看看那些曾经发生的一切;站在原地，想想未来可能到来的美好。我们怀揣着追逐的梦想，我们执着，坚持，追逐。我们小心翼翼的呵护着我们闪烁而灿烂的梦想，飞逝的青春。我们能理直气壮的说，我们还年轻。我们会固执的说，就像李宁，一切皆有可能。我们那让人匪夷所思的执着，也许就是青春里，燃烧的热情，点燃的生命。未来在我们手里，我们追逐，执着，坚持着。

未来，是我们成功的期限。无数次，梦境里，洒落了成功的喜悦和泪水;无数次，幻想过，拥抱着成功后的鲜花和掌声;无数次，我们期待着，执着追逐，坚持的最后，我们成功了，然后静静的回首，成功的开始，奋斗的过程，最后的美好。因为我们不懈的坚持，执着追逐着。所以那一天，就在一步一步走向我们

正如孙中山先生所说，我们应该坚持，我们的一切都是未知的，因为未知，所以一切皆有可能，不因困难而退却，不因未知而恐惧，不因失败而灰心，不放弃，做我们自己，坚持，执着，追逐，终会迎来属于我们的成功。

过去就像是一本翻不厌的书，让人忍不住的回味再回味;现在就像是一本写满计划和行动的笔记，让人不断检查，完成，再向前;未来，就像一页白纸，等待执着，等待追逐，等待坚持，等待这些美好的努力，最后画下一张灿烂的画……

过去，现在，将来，我们都在路上追逐梦想……

Many years ago, I saw the movie Harry Porter and I was so impressed by it. The magical world was so wonderful that I wanted to live there. My thoughts were so active that I always dreamed about myself walking in the magical world and taking the risk. So I decided to write down the things I dreamed about and then made these become a book. This is my little dream, when the book is finished, I want to read them to my friends and my brother. Now I have written down a few pages, I continue to write every day. I get great motivation to finish my little dream. I imagine how happy I will be when I finish the book, so I keep writing it when I have the thoughts. I am so proud of myself for I never giving up to finish my dream.

My dream is to become a doctorEver since I was little, Ive had a secret desire inside of me that Ive been almost ashamed of: I want to be a doctor. I dont know why, and Ive always known its ridiculous, since my worst subjects are math and science. Im not altogether terrible at them, but Im more of a literature person.

Im also pretty lazy, which makes me think theres no way I could survive medical school. Should I make myself stop? Is there any chance of me being somethign Ive always wanted to be?

My dream is to become a successful designer. I want to let all mankind put on my clothes.

Have a dream not yet, not go to work, not to sow, there would be no fruit. "Nothing in the world is difficult, as long as willing to climb. Have a dream, you got to know tillage, sowing seeds, it is not far from my dreams of success

Want to is not far away from me.

Want to realize my dream, there must be: the wings of the imagination, fly me to the imaginary space, search what you want; Sufficient sunshine, the sun of knowledge of his own dreams. Iron will to have a dream go to oneself, vanguards will; Ten very passion, with passion will do better... .

I want for my dream on the road, no matter how tornadoes, still have the storm, I will go forward. If, on the road have a handicap stone, tripped me, I also want to endure pain, walking through the road. I want to learn the reds lawn, climbing snow-capped mountains that the spirit of courage.

Dream, let the earth; Dream, let the plateau becomes shorter; Dream, let skyscrapers; Travel dream, let a person be in sky... Change everything, dream, dream all achievement, all beautiful... .

Dreams make people continuously the pursuit of one goal, one dream, let us put candles lit dream! The light yourself!

我的梦想是当一名成功的设计师。我要让全人类穿上我设计的衣服。

有了梦想还不行，不去耕耘，不去播种，就没有果实。“世上无难事，只要肯攀登”。有了梦想，就要懂得耕耘、播种，这样成功的梦想就离我不远

想就离我不远了。

我的梦想想实现，必须有：想像的翅膀，带我飞到想像的空间，搜索自己想要的东西;充分的阳光，知识的阳光照射着自己的梦想;钢铁般的意志，有一份对自己的梦想奋发向上、永往直前的意志;十万分激情，有了激情就做得更好……。

我要为我的梦想通一条道路，不管有龙卷风，还是有暴风雨，我都要勇往直前。如果，路上有拌脚石，把我拌倒了，我也要忍着疼痛，走完这条路。我要学习当年红军过草地、爬雪山那种勇往直前的精神。

梦想，让地球缩小;梦想，让高原变矮;梦想，让高楼拔地而起;梦想，让人在天空遨游……，梦想改变一切，梦想成就一切，梦想美丽一切……。

梦想让人不断追求一个一个的目标，拥有梦想的人，让我们把梦想的蜡烛点燃吧!把自己照亮吧!

Finally, we arrived in Guilin. After breakfast, we went to River Li. We

listened to the guide and enjoyed the views on boat. But I found the water in

River Li is dirty, many people washed clothes there. I feel angry and the trip

became boring and exhausting.

今天终于到了桂林，我们吃过早饭后就出发去漓江。坐上了船后，我们听着导游的讲解，观赏着风景。可是我发现漓江的水很脏，有很多人在那里洗衣服。我很气愤。在接下来的旅途中很无聊我也很疲惫。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。