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545英雄的告别高中作文600字
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+ 加入清单天亮时,我绕着寨子走了三圈,来到打洛江畔,站在江滩的卵石上,久久凝望着清波荡漾的江面,在这江水中,我看到了曾经浴血搏杀的场面,身后,全村的人们都肃立不动,眼里噙满泪花,久久不肯离去。
在打洛江畔,在我以为我就要和战友们一同归去的时候,是寨子里的人们救下了我,你们为我疗伤,是我的亲人,最亲的亲人。
再见了,亲人。再见了亲爱的土地!我还记得,在我倒下后的不久,村长带领全村的男女老少来为我疗伤。看着我身上的子弹,你们都心痛的哭了,大婶哭呀了嗓子,大娘在敌人的尸体是发泄着愤恨……慢慢的,我恢复了健康,在你们的宠爱下过着悠闲的日子。和孩子们在江边戏水,听年轻的姑娘歌唱,和老人们一起晒太阳。饿了有人给我香蕉,病了有人为我吃药……这比山高比海深的情谊我怎么能忘怀?
再见了,亲人,再见了亲爱的土地!我要追随我的战友去了。
我忘不了战友们冒着枪林弹雨奋勇杀敌的那一幕。亲爱的战友们,我们用尽所有的力气去杀敌,没有丝毫的畏惧,勇敢的冲向敌人,即使中弹了,即使快要死了,即使只剩最后一口气了,我们也坚持到了最后一刻,因为,我们是战士!二十六年过去了,我也要离开我的亲人,去追寻我战友们的脚步了,我们又要重新聚在一起了。
我有同甘苦共患难的战友,我有爱我的亲人,我已经没有遗憾了……我要和我的战友一起融到这片洒过鲜血的土地。
再见了亲人,再见了这片亲爱的土地,再见了,亲爱的打江洛河!我的心将永远和你们在一起。
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篇1:高中英语作文:一年四季
全文共 1491 字
+ 加入清单Thereare four seasons in the year. They’re spring, summer, autumn and winter.
一年有四个季节.它们是春天,夏天,秋天和冬天。
Springis warm and sunny. In spring days, everything in our nature is green, so we cango out to release ourselves and breathe the fresh air. I think its a good wayto enjoy our beautiful nature.
春天是温暖又阳光灿烂的。在春天,自然界中的一切都是绿色的,所以我们可以释放自己,呼吸新鲜空气。我认为这是享受美丽的大自然的一种很好的方式。
Summeris hot and rainy, but summer is the best season for entertainment, because wecan go swimming in the sea and enjoy the beautiful sunshine on the beach. Itmust be very interesting.
夏季炎热多雨,但夏季是休闲娱乐的最佳季节,因为我们可以在海里游泳,在沙滩上享受美丽的阳光。那肯定很有趣。
Autumnis very cool and comfortable, and it is also the best season for harvest. Inautumn days, the farmers are busy in their fields. If we had a chance, we couldgo to the countryside and pick up some fresh fruits and vegetables.
秋天很凉爽舒适,也是收获的最好季节。秋天的时候,农民们在他们的田野里忙碌。如果我们有机会,我们可以去乡下摘一些新鲜的水果和蔬菜。
Winteris very cold and freezing. In winter, our world is covered with white snow, sowe can either make snowmen or fight with snow. And we can also enjoy thebeautiful ice lanterns in Harbin. But I prefer to go to Sanya during that time.As its on Hainan Island, the weather is always so temperate. Even in December,I can still enjoy the green palm trees, the beautiful sea, the sunny beach andthe blue sky. Maybe I can find endless pleasure there.
冬天很冷,很冰。冬天,我们整个世界都被雪覆盖了,所以我们可以堆雪人或者打雪仗。我们还可以欣赏哈尔滨的美丽的冰灯。但我更喜欢在那段时间去三亚。因为它是在海南岛,天气总是很温和。即使是在十二月,我仍然可以享受绿色的棕榈树,美丽的大海,阳光明媚的沙滩和蔚蓝的天空。也许我可以在那里找到无穷的乐趣。
篇2:高中英语口语考试自我介绍
全文共 981 字
+ 加入清单good morning, my admirable professors and my dear fellows. it’s my great honor to be here to introduce myself to all of you. my name is xing heng and i’m in my eighteen years old. i come fromxiamen, which is a famous and beautiful city. i strongly suggest you visiting there and i can be your guide if it’s convenient. after three years’ hard work, i am so excited that i am finally enrolled by my dreaming school,sichuanuniversityand be one of you. i am outgoing and i have many interests, such as playing basketball, football, and swimming, but i am only good at basketball.
i hope we can always play together in the next four years. computer science and technology is my favorite subject and i am sure that it’s also a promising area in the future, with the great development of computer science and our society. i am glad to be a classmate of you and i hope we can study and make progress together in the future. i greatly expect my life to be with you in the coming four years.
篇3:高中英语写作指导:高中英语写作教学的体会
全文共 1809 字
+ 加入清单一、勤读、多背词汇,好精句
要想写好一篇文章,没有充足的词汇量是不行的。课文中的俗语和谚语的识记是通过背诵来完成。背诵是语言学习的重要手段,也是语言学习的必经之路。
1.背词句,背诵课文中的重点句型和短语尤其是课文中的俗语、谚语和经典句子。
2.背范文,将近几年高考中的作文和课文中好的段落以及报刊上的各种各样的体裁和优秀文章让学生多背,这样学生才能在自己的脑子中形成一定的写作框架,做到心中有数。
3.多读书,用英语进行思维。为了培养学生用英语思维的定势,增加对英语国家文化、社会风俗、风土人情、思维方式的了解,扩大视野,选择课外阅读,提高学生分析、判断、猜测、推理和领悟的能力。部分学生在写作时习惯用汉语思维,然后再逐句译成英语,结果写出来的文章是汉语式的英语。要想学会用英语进行思维,就要有计划、有目的地培养学生的语感。一个重要的方法就是大量阅读,选择精彩的词句、文章和佳句,引导学生阅读,摘抄或背诵来培养语感。
二、亲自动手,自己写作
教师应注重基本功训练,严格要求学生正确,工整,熟练地书写字母,单词和句子,同时注意大小写和标点符号。进行组词造句,组句成段练习时,要学生写出最简单的短句,为以后英语作文打好扎实的基础。这种练习可以安排在刚开始的训练中,要求学生能够用最基本的时态去完成写作。另外结合高中英语基础知识的复习,对学生提出较高写作能力的要求。
1.范例引路
学生在进行短文写作训练时,教师应提供各种文体的范文,讲明各种文体的写作要求和注意事项,如日记,便条,书信,通知的格式等,并给予必要的提示,并掌握各种体裁文章的格式。在平时的教学中,教师应该指导学生应对高考中各种体裁文章。
2.限时训练
教师当场发题,限时交卷。这样能促使学生瞬间接受信息,快速理解信息,迅速表达信息,提高实际应用和应试能力。这一步是关键,也是学生的的难关。必须要求学生在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀:“先读提示,要点与格式要弄清;时态语态要当心,前后呼应要一致;结构搭配,莫违背;文章写好细检查,点滴小错别忽视”。学生明确目的,并掌握要领后,要严格在规定时间内完成作业。
3.多想精炼
在平时的教学中,教师要求学生多看、多听、多想,用心体验和感悟身边的人和事,然后将自己的体验和感受用英语写出来。教师可要求学生每周写两篇,有话则长,无话可短。对不同水平的学生作不同的要求。鼓励表达自己的看法和体会。
此外,有时根据所学单元知识布置一篇作文,或给学生提供一些与时事或与学生学习活动和生活有关的材料。此类话题的现实性能诱发学生的写作兴趣,使其有话可写,有感而发;还能增强其信心,使其写作能力、技巧得到充分的锻炼和提高。对于有待进步的学生要及时励,激发其写作热情,增强其自信心。
4.自改互改
对照范文,学生先对已查出的表达有误的地方进行初改。范文不可能把各种表达方式都包括进去,况且学生作业中的错误也不尽相同,因此,还可安排学生互改。以同桌两人为宜,这样同时进行了改错训练。
三、培养学生良好的写作习惯
写作教学是一项“由简单到复杂,循环往复不断上升的”过程。不是一蹴而就的,需要教师在教学中由浅入深、由简入繁、由易到难、循序渐进。起始阶段,培养学生良好的写作习惯是非常重要的。要求学生做到以下几点:
1.认真审题。要求学生认真审读图表或提纲,领会意图,捕捉信息,确定文章时态及体裁。
2.写提纲。教师引导学生构思文章要点,写出每个段落主题句、关键词,然后确定细节和内容要点。
3.写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后,学生开始写作,教师指导学有意识地使用固定句型,使用关联词,把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体,形成基本连贯的初稿。
4.检查错误。检查是书面表达不可缺少的环节,学生完成初稿后,老师指导学生从以下六个方面进行修改和查错:(1)看要点是否齐全,有无遗漏;(2)体裁是否恰当,有无偏题;(3)内容是否连贯,有无缺词;(4)语法是否正确,人称、时态、语态、冠词及名词单复数等有无错误;(5)用词是否得当,有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误(6)最后注意句与句、段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡,经过有效的训练,学生犯的错误会逐渐减少,同时学生的书面表达能力会逐步提高。
总之,教学有法,教无定法。教师面对的教育对象是多样化的,因此在教学中一定要关注学生的个体差异,采取相应的措施,激发学生写作的兴趣。让学生参与实践,体验成功的快乐,循序引导,学生点滴积累,不断磨练,这样能达到理想的效果。
篇4:感恩节英语作文高中
全文共 1367 字
+ 加入清单i would like to thank the manpeople, but the most grateful to mfather, from small to large, mfather gave me encouragement and love so many.
mfather iwarm and severe, when holidatime, he liketo join me sitting in bed talking daylater to see if the book later. he told me iso severe! in particular, i do not listen, hieyewere round, sharp eyelike a sword in mbodscan to scan, i immediatelfor the mistakei feel ashamed. i love mfather, grateful to him for mpay, meducation. when i wasick, ito take care of mfather in everpossible way; i am in trouble, the father ikind of nice to help me. he gave me the love iselfless. one sundaevening, i feel listless, had no energto the body. dad found, help me to rest, give me temperature. goodfellas! 39 degree5! at thitime, i also head halo youteng bodcold and hot, uncomfortable bed in dengjiao, the father then took a wet towel on mhead enough, i feel better. in the 3-point night, i did not fire back, the father had no choice but to the clinic to bumedicine for me, a father of seven lianpao clinics, but are not yet open. b6 oclock, mfather turned to the cou
nthospital, the father upstairdownstairto bumedicine for me, pay, i can clearlsee the father of crystal beadof sweat on hiforehead. at thipoint, i reallwanted to sato the father: dad, i thank you! dad inot onlconcerned about mbody, ialso verconcerned about mlearning.
篇5:2024高中英语作文大全:父亲
全文共 1687 字
+ 加入清单Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of 12. You could tell they didnt have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly jabbering about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be.
The mother was holding her husbands hand, looking up at him as if to say, "Youre my knight in shining armor."
He was smiling and basking in pride, looking back at her as if to reply, "You got that right."
The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, "Please let me buy eight childrens tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."
The ticket lady quoted the price. The mans wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lip began to quiver. The father leaned a little closer and asked, "How much did you say?"
The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didnt have enough money.
How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight kids that he didn‘t have enough money to take them to the circus? Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. (We were not wealthy in any sense of the word!)
篇6:旅行的高中英语
全文共 629 字
+ 加入清单When I was alittle child, I had many dreams. I wanted to be rich, so that I can live in abig and beautiful house. I can go everywhere by car. But now, my dream seems tobe better and more realistic. I hope I can have a good job. It will not takemuch of my time, although I can’t earn much. Every year, I have holidays totravel. Traveling is my favorite and it can reduce my pressure. It’s good formy life. Therefore, I hope traveling can be a part of my future life.
当我还是个小孩的时候,我有很多梦想。我想变得富裕,这样我就可以住在漂亮的大房子里,可以驾车到每个地方。但是,现在我的梦想似乎更好更现实了。我希望我能够拥有一份好工作,尽管我不能赚很多钱,但是它不会占用我太多时间,每年有假期去旅游。旅游是我的爱好,它可以减轻我的压力,对我的生活有好处。因此,我希望旅游可以成为我将来生活的一部分。
篇7:高中英语作文介绍春节
全文共 1551 字
+ 加入清单"I now declare the rules of the game: a man hides a few things, and a few others go and hide them," said the town. We drew a lot and finally decided to hide three coke bottle caps from our cousin. The cousin pushed us out of the room and hid things by herself... After a while, the cousin came out with a smile and said, "hide it, you cant find it!" We swarmed in, and I thought: the easiest place to hide is probably the most secluded place. So, I will seriously every corner to find it again, did not, in the look at the kid sister, drill under the bed, their tails on the outside, groping hands in it, no, she just want to stand up, "alas!" The little sister cried, and she cried, and she stood up under the bed and hit the bed.
So she stopped the game. Ah! One less opponent, but the cousin is also difficult to deal with, see her in the closet to each piece of clothing to turn over, wow! Not yet! But where exactly? I glanced around, and then I noticed a shiny object behind the curtain.
I pulled the curtain aside. Coke bottle caps! I was happy to jump three feet high, my cousin saw, a look of unconvinced. But shes picking up speed. Look for it here. I made haste, and under the bed and then watch out of the reach of little younger sister, and I found a coke bottle caps, my heart even more excited to get up, then I have found in a book under the last bottle. "Shout! It took me a lot of work! I sighed and said, my cousin, my cousin and my sister are all happy for me. The cousin said, "you are very observant!" I heard it, I was very happy.
篇8:我的忧虑高中英语作文
全文共 1021 字
+ 加入清单my secret worry
while fear of death is universal, my worry about death is so overwhelming that there is not a moment passing without my thinking of it. i never bring this up with any other, just because no one will ever realize the seriousness of this problem. i know it very clearly that as long as there is life, there will be death. in addition, though i am still so far away from death, i have been plagued by the thought of it for years. fortunately, the root of my fear of death lies in my overzealous love for life. i am too timid to think of the end of life, when every worldly affair should be thrown away. how can i carry on without friendship, affection, and joy of being alive? i really hate to leave all these behind. to ease my worry about death, i should make the fullest use of this life i now possess. concentration on this life can at least temporally make me forget about death. as a matter of fact, i really don't need to worry so much about death, for i already have too much to worry about this life.
篇9:寒假计划英语作文高中
全文共 1717 字
+ 加入清单Luxuriant it gives us boundless endless fun. A long summer vacation to supply the vast reveals itself for the classmates of the stage. And plans to use the summer vacation time, has become our current begin to should do.
One, scientific and reasonable to develop a plan of summer vacation work.
Amount of work in the holiday, want to do the work. To put these job screening, mediation, according to the summer fair time settling, draw up a table "" summer deeds. All the cruel deeds should be carried out in accordance with the "schedule", but still need to be careful mix.
Second, serious review, welcome to scholarship test
This test is after the summer vacation the first put a summary of the semester, summer vacation, want to put the first semester studies the entire contents of the seriously review again, and to formulate a "review schedule. For good measure.
Third, develop my funny hobbies, growth of my specialty.
According to my funny hobby, takes an active part in all kinds of funny Hong shed organized group, such as: painting, calligraphy, music, English, journalism skills, grasp the skills, as to lay a foundation for the growth of the letters patent day.
Fourth, study diligently, careful accumulation, longer than writing, used motor
Manipulation of the heat I visit a few good books as points. Such as: national classics, history allusions, good books and periodicals, fables, fairy tales, etc., progress I browse ability and writing level, edify sentiment.
Else, might as well also active in the summer sports refined, help parents do more housework, experience to meet the social actual deeds... Only seize the opportunity to reveal themselves constantly, expand the line of sight, to be healthy growth.
篇10:个忙碌的周末高中英语
全文共 354 字
+ 加入清单Hi, Im Shao Ying. Im going to have a busy Sunday.
In the morning, Im going to the zoo by bike. I want to see the monkeys. Then , Im going to the bookstore. Im going to buy a new English book. In the afternoon, Im going to visit my grandparents with my mom.
It is far, so we are going by bus. In the evening, we are going to watch TV together.
How about you?
篇11:高中英语老师给学生的毕业留言寄语
全文共 1377 字
+ 加入清单Life is like a piano,what you get out of it,depends on how you play it.
No sweat, no sweet.
没有辛勤的劳动,哪有甜美的收获?
There is no end to knowledge.There is no end to perfect character.
读不尽者书,造诣不尽者人品。
Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance.
做大事,靠的是毅力而不是力量。
Cease to struggle and you cease to live.
停止奋斗,就等于放弃生活。
Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance
伟大的工作是源于坚持不懈,而不是一时的热情。
Congratulations on your graduation! Whishing you a future filled with success and joy of seeing your dreams come true.
祝贺您的毕业!希望您有一个成功的未来,感受到梦想成真的快乐。
Boys, be ambitious.
男孩,是雄心勃勃的
Man can survive, only when he has the substance, man can live only when he has ideal.
人依靠物质就能生存,但只有拥有理想时,才叫生活。
Goals determine what you are going to be.
目标取决于您的愿望。
Great hope makes great men.
伟大的愿望成就伟大的人。
An aim in life is the only fortune worth finding. Pursue your object, be it what it will, steadily and indefatigably.
Man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.
目标专一的人肯定会成功。
Follow your own course, and let people talk.
走自己的路,让别人去说。
Life is a leaf of paper white, thereon each of us may write his word.
There is a limit to ones youth, but no limit to his wisdom. Draw on the limitless wisdom during the short span of youth.
Self-reverence, self-knowledge, self-control, these three alone lead life to sovereign power.
自我尊敬,自知之明,自我控制,这是生活的最高境界。
Character decided the fate ,and knowledge changes ours fate.
篇12:关于高中英语作文的教学反思
全文共 4208 字
+ 加入清单导语:以下是小编精心整理的高中英语作文教学反思,欢迎大家参考阅读。
高中学生的想象更趋于现实化,创造想象也日益占优势地位。表现 出更大的主动性和有意性,能够运用自己的创造力去解决新的问题。
由于高中学生在英语学习方面有了一定的词汇积累、阅读经验以及掌握了一些基本的语法规则,使他们已初步具备了将心中所思转化为英语文字的能力。在这个阶段,教师如果通过影像、音乐、语言等多种手段,在学生的作文训练中大力发展学生思维的变通性和独创性,那么,学生想象力的提高将会成为可能。
一、利用表象,丰富想象
观察图画和实物作文符合英语作文起步阶段需要有一定的情景要求,也符合高中学生有意想象占优势的特点,同时避免了文字情节作文易使学生中译英的缺点,但若每一次训练都是刻板的再现材料,创造想象则难以增长。如果在教学设计时,在图中留有空白,或对实物设置悬念,不仅可以引发学生的好奇心,激发他们对英语作文的兴趣,减轻他们的惧怕心理,而且可以促使学生通过创造性的想象去填补空白,解决悬念。
如Senior BookⅠ,Unit 3 中的“Help! Help!”,可按发展顺序设计几幅救落水儿童的图,但只给学生展示第一、二两幅图,图画的内容大致与课文内容相同,但是后几幅的空白,使学生必须通过创造性的想象才能填补材料的空白。学生可以引用课文中的材料,也可以自由发挥。有学生这样写到:
Last week, we had a picnic in Forest Park. We found a shady place by the river. As soon as we had sat down, Tom suddenly got up and shouted, “Someone has fallen into the river!" It was true. A boy was struggling in the water, and the children in a boat looked hopeless. Tom and Jack took off their shoes while running to wards the water. They swam very quickly towards the boy who was sinking fast. Tom and Jack got hold of the boy by the arms and lifted his head above the water. Together they pulled the boy to the shore.
之后,再给学生展示其中一幅图,或一句话的情景:……,a man/a woman/a child, etc. has fallen into the river/the lake, etc.……。让学生自由选择自由发挥。有的根据曾在报上看到的新闻,称颂一身怀六甲的妇女勇救落水儿童的事迹,也有的谴责那些对落水者无动于衷的旁观者。学生的作文体裁记叙文、议论文不限。这样,既训练了他们书面的表达能力,又发挥了他们的想象和创造能力、思维表达能力。同时也让他们思索了做人的道理。
二、精选图画,激发想象
处于英语作文起步阶段的学生的想象具有直观性,片面性和模仿性的特点,为其提供的观察材料越具体、越完整、越详实,他们的这些特点往往表现得越明显,有时甚至强化了他们的这些特点。换个方式,为他们提供一些抽象的图画,他们的创造想象反而被激活,因为他们必须在原有的图画上进行创造才可能有新的形象产生。而“抽象画作品所表现的物象与参照物相差甚远,它最大限度地把形与色对视觉作用的潜力发挥出来,直观效果非常强烈。它经过夸张、简化、分解、组合等变化手段,将客观事物的表象创造成为富于想象力。”如荷兰画家蒙德里安的表达百老汇街道的嘈杂与热闹的《百老汇爵士》(Jazz in Broadway)是一幅看上去比较抽象的图画,学生通过观察、运用合理的想象,写出了内容各异的作品。
有学生这样写到:
It is the downtown of Shanghai. The streets, such as Nanjing Road and Huaihai Road, etc are busy. Cars, buses and trucks with all kinds of advertisements are running. People dressed in their best are walking happily or hurrying to work on their bikes. Beautifully decorated stores are crowded with people shopping. They all look in high spirits. The traffic policemen at the crossings are directing the traffic attentively and seriously. Everything is in good order. Such is our city. I love our city.
而另有学生在他们的作文中认为这是一个“排污系统”(drain outlet system )或电路板(circuit board)或房屋平面图(a plane figure of a house)等等。
可见,由抽象的图画到生动画面的产生,到一篇作文的写作成功,是创造想象不断发展的过程,也是提高英语语言运用能力的过程。
三、借助音乐,拓宽想象
音乐能有效地丰富学生的精神生活,促进学生感知、情感、想象等方面的健康成长,能给学生提供想象和联想的广阔空间,有利于培养学生的发散性思维能力,促进人的全脑开发,为学生的创新精神和实践能力在各方面的延伸乃至终身发展提供良好的基础。因此,在英语写作训练中有时借助音乐等艺术形式,对丰富学生的想象力是一种有益的尝试。
如Senior Book Ⅵ ,Unit 7中的“The Waltz king ”这一课文,根据内容,可设计让学生听一首Beethoven的“命运”(Fate),让学生根据自己的理解,写一篇作文,一位学生这样写到:
I am a graduate from high school, and I will enter for the Collage Entrance Examination. Whether I will be admitted to a collage, I will work harder than before , since our country is still poor and weak.
从作品中我们可以发现,借助音乐,学生的想象力得到了较大幅度的拓展。“音乐艺术对学生的创造能力的发展具有独特的作用。
四、灵活方法,发展想象
“创造想象是严格的构思过程,它是由思维调节的。”想象会产生全新的物象与情景、独特的认识和感悟。一段文字、一篇文章,给不同的读者,就有不同的想象余地。正如:A thousand readers, a thousand Hamlets.(一千个读者,就有一千个哈姆雷特。)在英语作文教学中根据一定的线索或情节,提供学生广阔的思维空间,让学生进行想象描述(创造性的描述),会收到很好的锻炼效果。
例如 “After Twenty Years" (Senior Book Ⅵ,Unit 5) 这一课,可要求学生在学完之后, 简单续写一个结尾。这是一篇根据O. Henry 同名原作改写的文章。文章的故事情节虽然简单,但很能挖掘、发挥学生的创造想象力。学生这样写到:
As soon as the police officer wanted to catch Bob by the arm, he took out a gun, aimed at the officer and said, “I knew I was wanted, but I dont want to be arrested anyway. Tell Jim Wells I will come to visit him one day." Just at that time, the police officer found himself surrounded by some strong men, gun in hand, pointing to him. Bob then walked into the street and got into a car parking there, followed by those strong men. The car soon disappeared.
另有学生这样写到:
The moment the officer caught Bob by the arm, he got rid of it and ran away at once. He was running down the street as fast as he could, when he was shot on the right shoulder. He turned round. To his great surprise, it was Jim Wells, his o ld friend. He fell on the ground and fainted.
在作文教学中,通过对一定的语言材料进行不同方式的处理,确实是锻炼学生的思维,发展学生的想象力的一条重要途径。当学生对当前的语言材料进行阅读、处理时,进行了充分的分析、比较,又充分展示了自己的想象力,其思维得到了充分的发散。
心理学研究已经证实,发散思维对个体的创造性有着重要影响,我们应该根据教材特点,结合教学内容,注意这种思维能力的训练,并创造一些行之有效的教学技术。可以说,续写结尾、续写故事、改写、扩写等,都是高中英语作文教学中锻炼学生思维,发展学生想象力的有效手段。
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篇13:高中英语作文大全
全文共 808 字
+ 加入清单In China, people treat the family as a very important union, families get
together now and then, even the kids get married, they still treat their parents
in the first place. So the family means so much to everyone, family has great
influence on them. When the family gets on well, people can focus their mind to
work, they don’t need to worry about other issues. It is reported that the
people live in a harmonious environment are more easy to get succeed, which
reflects the importance of the family. While people who live in a unharmonious
family are easily distracted from work, because besides the work issues, they
also have family annoyance. So the family is very important, we should keep in
touch with family members often, even though we are busy, we should go home
often, never let the work occupancies you.
篇14:高中英语作文万能句子
全文共 341 字
+ 加入清单1.as an old saying goes,.正如一句古老的谚语所说
2.be nothing but... .不过就是...
3.from where i stand. 从我的立场来说
4.give oneself a chance to.给某人一个机会去...
5.i feel sure that...我坚信...
6.is the best way to make sure that.确保...的最好办法是...
7.we must do our absolute best to.我们必须竭尽全力做...
8.there is no denying the fect that...无可否认.
9.nothing is more+adj.+than to+v.没有比...更重要的了
篇15:高中英语日记
全文共 986 字
+ 加入清单I miss you very much, Mum.
I have left you for four days. Maybe it is really a short time. But I feel it is too long. I found that I couldn’t do a lot of things without you. For example, I couldn’t wash my clothes clean. It is too hard for me. I felt it is too troublesome and toilsome, but I’m sixteen years old now. I must be independent. So, Mum, I don’t know what’s what and I’m very stubborn. Sometimes, I disobeied your desire, which made you very angry. Now, I regret it. When I see some white hair in your head, I felt very sad. You are not young nay more. Sometimes you look very haggard. I know that’s because you give too much. You always concerned with my school record, healthy and a lot of other things. My school record always made you very sad. That’s my falt. I’m sorry.
Mum, you are too labbrious. You must have a good rest. I come of my ago now. I will correct my mistakes. You can rest assured!
Mum, I wish you good health and happy. I love you! Mum!(www.kuaidu.com.cn)
篇16:高中优秀英语作文
全文共 1012 字
+ 加入清单It’s a good option for college students to join the army. Army is the important constitution in a country. Nowadays, many college students prefer to be soldiers. Why?
参军对于大学生来说是一个很好的选择。军队是一个国家最重要的组成部分。如今,很多大学生都愿意去参军,是什么原因呢?
Firstly, there are many preferential policies for college students to join the army, such as tuition waiver, wage subsidy. What’s more, I consider join the army can strengthen our mind. In my opinion, it’s the most important reason to join the army. Whatever you are a student or others, two years’ training can build a strong body, too.
首先,大学生参军有很多优惠政策,如减免学费,工资补贴。更重要的是,我认为参军可以丰富我的想法。在我看来,这是参军最重要的原因,不管你是一名学生或其他人,两年的培训可以练就一个强壮的身体。
I want to join the army. My family is delighted to my decision. Because I want to be a great and strong woman and change my images in front of my friends. More importantly, I would like to experience the army life; I think it will be a colorful moment in my whole life.
我想参军。我的家人对我的决定感到很高兴。因为我想成为一个伟大而坚强的女人,并且改变我在我朋友面前的形象。更重要的是,我想体验一下军旅生活;我觉得那会是在我的整个人生中丰富多彩的时刻。
篇17:关于朋友英语作文高中
全文共 463 字
+ 加入清单Friend plays important role in our lives. Everyone needs his or her own
friends. Some people make friends easily but some do not. And “friend” means
differently to people. Some people think friends should stay together all the
time, but some others think that share and support is the real meaning of
friend. From my point of view, friend is the person who will always be with you
no matter what happens. It’s the person who can share your happiness as well as
sorrows.
篇18:我的宠物狗高中英语作文
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+ 加入清单last year, my friend gave me a little dog. i was fond of him very much. i liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever i went. i was very glad that i had a "body guard".
last winter i was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.however, no matter how late i went home, my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. when i passed there, he barked two or three times then ran towards me. it seemed that he was calling me.
my dog not only,took good care of me, but also was respoasible at home. when strangers came to my house, he barked at them but not hurt them. what a lovely dog he is! (135 words)
我家的小狗
去年,朋友送我一只小狗,我非常喜欢它,放学后就和它一起玩耍,无论我走到哪儿它都跟在身后。我很高兴有这样一位“保镖”。
去年冬天我忙于功课,每天回家都很晚。然而无论我到家多晚,这只小狗总是在学校附近的一个角落处等我。当我从那经过时,它全冲我叫两声然后跑过来,似乎它是在叫我。
我家的狗不但对我照顾周到,而且还肩负着看家的重任,每当有陌生人来到我家,它总是叫个不停,但并不咬他们。多么可爱的一只狗啊!
篇19:高中英语作文写作技巧
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+ 加入清单1、审题:审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料。
2、进行构思,列出简单的提纲,打造文章之骨架:审好题、立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。
3、扩展成文:根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题:
1、确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样,才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。
2、要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内容的交叉。
3、用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,文字连贯,就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁,而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。
在扩展的过程中也有些窍门,以下几点可供参考:
1、在整篇文章中,避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词,准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式,如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等,从而增加文章的可读性。
2、使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话,通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
3、改变句子的开头方式,不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首,或用分词等。
4、学会使用过渡词。递进furthermore,moreover,besides,in addition,then,etc ;转折however,but,nevertheless,afterwards,etc ;总结finally,at last,in brief,to conclude,etc ;强调really,indeed,certainly,surely,above a11,etc ;对比in the same way,just as,on the other hand,etc。
5、确定文章用第几人称写,基本时态是什么。使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。时态要尽量保持一致。
检查修改:要检查复核,不要写完了事。
要留时间通读全文,修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅,该用连词的地方用了没有,所用的连词是否合适,是否有语法错误,主谓是否一致,动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确,词组的搭配是否合乎习惯,是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等,还有就是注意卷面整洁。
可归纳为:中心突出,主题明确;层次清楚,条理清晰;表达
篇20:高中英语作文大全
全文共 820 字
+ 加入清单Recently, the Prince Harry announced his engagement with an American
actress. When the media asked him when he decided this girl would be his
lifetime partner, he said the moment when he saw her for the first time. Love at
first sight sounds romantic and many young people believe that the first feeling
about another person is really important, because it always decides whether they
can be couples in the following days. While many old people think love at first
sight doesnt exist, because they need to know the personality, which will
decide the charm of another person. For a relationship, the good first
impression can bring passion and love, but it cant maintain the relationship
for lifetime. The way to get along with each other and the tolerance of both
sides are key factors to decide whether a couple can stay forever.