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1000皮匠和银行家英文作文欣赏
全文共 2480 字
+ 加入清单The Cobbler and the Banker
By La Fontaine
A cobbler passed his time in singing from morning till night;it was wonderful to see,wonderful to hear him;he was more contented in shoes,than was any of the seven sages.His neighbor,on the contrary,who was rolling in wealth,sung but little and slept less.He was a banker;when by chance he fell into a doze at day-break,the cobbler 12 awoke him with his song.The banker complained sadly that Providence had not made sleep a saleable commodity,like edibles or drinkables.
Having at length sent for the songster,he said to him,
"How much a year do you earn,Master Gregory?"
"How much a year,sir?"said the merry cobbler laughing,"I have reckon in that way,living as I do from one day to another;somehow I manage to reach the end of the year;each day brings its meal."
"Well then!How much a day do you earn,my friend?"
"Sometimes more,sometimes less;but the worst of it is,-and,without that our earnings would be very tolerable, a number of days occur in the year on which we are forbidden to work;and the curate,moreover,is constantly adding some new saint to the list.
The banker,laughing at his simplicity,said,"In the future I shall place you above want.Take this hundred crowns,preserve them carefully,and make use of them in time of need."
The cobbler fancied he beheld all the wealth which the earth had produced in the past century for the use of mankind.Returning home,he buried his money and his happiness at the same time,No more singin;he lost his voice,the moment he acquired that which is the source of so much grief.Sleep quitted his dwelling; and cares,suspicions,and false alarms took its place,All day,his eye wandered in the direction of his treasure;and at night,if some stray cat made a noise,the cat was robbing him.
At length the poor man ran to the house of his rich neighbor;"Give my back." said he,"sleep and my voice,and take your hundred crowns."
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一个皮匠从早到晚在唱歌中度过。无论见到他本人或听见他的歌声都使人觉得很愉快。他对于制鞋工作比当上了希腊七圣还要满足。
于工作把他吵醒了。银行家郁郁寡欢地抱怨上帝没有睡眠也制成一种像食品或饮料那样可以买卖的商品。后来,银行家就叫人把这位 歌手请来,问道:“格列戈里师傅,你一年赚多少钱?”
“先生,你问我一年赚多少钱吗?”快乐的皮匠笑道:“我从来不算这笔帐,我是一天一天地过日子,总而言之坚持到年底,每天挣足三餐。”
“啊,朋友,那么你一天赚多少钱呢?”
“有时多一点,有时少一点;不过最糟糕的是一年中总有些日子不准我们做买卖,牧师又常常在圣徒名单上添新名字,否则我们的收入也还算不错的。”
银行家被皮匠的直率逗笑了,他说:“我要你从今以后不愁没钱用。这一百枚钱你拿去,小心放好,需要时拿来用吧。” 皮匠觉自己好像看到了过去几百年来大地为人类所需而制造出来的全部财富。他回到家中,埋藏好硬币,同时也埋葬了他的快乐。他不再唱歌了;从他得到这种痛苦的根源那一刻起,他的嗓子就哑了。睡眠与他分手;取而代之的却是担心、怀疑、虚惊。白天,他的 目光尽朝埋藏硬币的方向望;夜间,如果有只迷途的猫弄出一点声响,他就以为是有人来抢他的钱。最后,这个可怜的皮匠跑到他那富有的邻居家里说:“把你的一百枚钱拿回去,还我的睡眠和歌声来。”
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Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水。
Blood will have blood.血债血偿。
Books and friends should be few but good.读书如交友,应求少而精。
Business is business.公事公办。
Cheats never prosper.骗人发不了财。
Business is the salt of life.事业是人生的第一需要。
Cannot see the wood for the trees.一叶障目,不见泰山。
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Caution is the parent of safety.小心驶得万年船。
Children are what the mothers are.耳濡目染,身教言传。
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Come what may, heaven won‘t fall.做你的吧,天塌不下来。
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Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
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Constant dripping wears away a stone.水滴石穿,绳锯木断。
Count one‘s chickens before they are hatched.蛋未孵先数雏。
Courtesy on one side only lasts not long.来而不往非礼也。
Creep before you walk.循序渐进。
Cry for the moon.海底捞月。
Custom is a second nature.习惯是后天养成的。
Custom makes all things easy.有个好习惯,事事皆不难。
Diamond cuts diamond.强中自有强中手。
Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。
Do as you would be done by.己所不欲,勿施于人。
Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上,不如落实在行动上。
Do it now.机不可失,时不再来Do nothing by halves.凡事不可半途废。
Don‘t claim to know what you don‘t know.不要不懂装懂。
Don‘t have too many irons in the fire.不要揽事过多。
Don‘t make a mountain out of a molehill.不要小题大做。
Don‘t put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事,今日毕。
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Don‘t trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.不要自找麻烦。
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Easier said than done.说得容易,做得难。
Easy come, easy go.来也匆匆,去也匆匆。
Eat to live, but not live to eat.人吃饭是为了活着,但活着不是为了吃饭。
Empty vessels make the greatest sound.实磨无声空磨响满瓶不动半瓶摇。
is good when new, but friends when old.东西是新的好,朋友是老的亲。
Example is better then percept. 说一遍,不如做一遍。
Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother.经验是智慧之父,记忆是母亲。
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+ 加入清单我的家乡在厦门,相传远古时代是白鹭鸟生活、嬉戏的地方,所以它还有一个美丽的名字叫“鹭岛”。鹭岛虽只是个岛,却是我国著名的海滨风景城市,同时是中国的四个经济特区之一。
厦门四面环海,绵延千里的海岸线,与祖国的宝岛――台湾隔海相望,蓝天碧海,气侯宜人,风景秀美,每年都吸引了世界各地无数的游客来到这里旅游观光。鼓浪屿因为家家户户都有钢琴而出名,被称为“琴岛”,漫步在岛上干净的小路上,会不时传来一阵阵悠扬的琴声,岛上绿树成阴、鲜花盛开,四季长青,有如人间仙境。厦门这几年经济发展速度很快,发生了翻天覆地的变化,一幢幢造形各异的大厦拔地而起,马路宽阔整齐、四通八达,到处是绿树,到处是草地,整座城市就像一座花园,海沧大桥、厦门大桥将鹭岛与大陆紧紧连在一起,厦门再也不是原来的厦门。
一天晚上,我在甜密的梦乡中梦见:蔚蓝的大海下,鱼儿欢快地游着,一条闪着金光的海底隧道,尤如海里的七色彩虹,架起了厦门到翔安的另一条高速通道,人们乘着车悠闲地走在隧道里,将可观看齐妙的海底世界,享受海底翱游的美妙感觉;鼓浪屿的东南方,一座比鼓浪屿面积更大、景色更优美的人工岛已经建成了,人们称它为“仙境岛”,美国迪斯尼乐园在这里落户,米老鼠、唐老鸭等热情欢迎着世界各地的小朋友;突然有一天,鹭岛上车流、人流少了许多、车水马龙的景象不见了,厦门的第一条地铁通车了,从此,人们上班、学习再也不用为堵车的现象而发愁了,空气也更加清新……
清晨,我从梦中醒来,原来是一场梦啊!我在心里盼望:不久的将来,我的这些梦想一定很快就会实现,那时的厦门将更加美好。因为我们大家都爱厦门。
篇12:我最喜欢的作者鲁迅英文作文
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+ 加入清单My favourite writer—Lu Xun 我最喜欢的作者-鲁迅
Lu Xun is my favourite writer. He is one of the most famous writers in China. He wrote a lot of literary works.
He was thin and not tall. He always wore a long old coat in that time. At first, he wanted to be a doctor and save people s lives. So he learned medicine, but later he found the Chinese were in sensitive when they faced the oppression of their enemies. So he began to write articles to wake the people up.
Lu Xun wrote some famous novels, he attacked the social mores in that time, and in his works, many persons were known very well, such as Ah Q Kong Yi ji .
I like Lu Xun because I also want to be a great writer like him. I like reading and writing, and I often write some articles in my free time. Though I don t have good literary talent or a large vocabulary, I spend lots of time reading and writing to improve my writing skills.
Lu Xun is my hero, I will learn more from him. I believe I can be a great writer like him in the future.
鲁迅是我最喜欢的作家。他是中国最著名的作家之一。他写了大量的文学作品。
他很瘦,个子不高。他总是穿着旧衣服。首先,他想成为一名医生,挽救人们的生命。所以他学医,但后来他发现中国人愚昧时,他们所面对的敌人在压迫着他们时。他开始写文章来唤醒人民。
鲁迅写了一些著名的长篇小说,他抨击当时的社会习俗,在他的作品中,许多人熟知,如阿Q孔乙己。
我喜欢鲁迅,因为我也想成为一个像他这样伟大的作家。我喜欢阅读和写作,我常常在我的空闲时间里写一些文章。虽然我没有好的文学天才或大量的词汇,所以我花时间阅读和写作,来提高我的写作技能很多。
鲁迅是我的英雄,我会从他身上学到更多。我相信我能成为一个伟大的作家,未来就像他一样。
[我最喜欢的作者鲁迅英文作文
篇13:英文社交书信格式怎样写
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+ 加入清单Dear Mr. Clark:
We are wondering if you and Mrs. Clark want to have supper with us on Friday, January 21st at seven oclock?
James and I are looking forward with great pleasure to seeing you and Mrs.Clark. We do hope you can come.
Sincerely yours,
Lucy Wheeler
篇14:伤感英文经典好句
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+ 加入清单With the last breath of my soul I’ll be blessing you. 在我灵魂最后的呼吸中我祝福你。
You’re always there for me.当我需要你时你永远在那里。
You know my loneliness is only kept for you, my sweet songs are only sung for you.你可知我百年的孤寂只为你一人守侯,千夜的恋歌只为你一人而唱。
When love is not madness, it is not love.如果爱不疯狂就不是爱了。
When every love comes to the end, if u look back, u will find flowers and sorrows, but it’s always beautiful.不是把对方留在自己身边才叫爱,能放手让所爱的人离开,也是爱的一种。
what a loveiy world it well be with you away.没有了你.这个世界多么寂寞。
We cease loving ourselves if no one loves us.如果没有人爱我们,我们也就不会再爱自己了。
To see a world in a grain of sand. And a heaven in a wild flower.从一粒沙子看到一个世界,从一朵野花看到一个天堂。
this valentine is for the girl who stole my heart.这份情人节礼物,是送给那位偷去我的心的女孩。
There will always be people who’ll hurt you, so you need to continue trusting,just be careful.生活中总会有伤害你的人,所以你仍然需要继续相信别人,只是小心些而已。
篇15:怎样写出正确的英文好句
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+ 加入清单每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?
好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。
特点一:整体性
句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。
Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.
【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。
【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.
特点二:连贯性
句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。
Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"
【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?
【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"
Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.
【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。
【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.
特点三:准确性
句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。
Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.
【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。
【提升】He returned in early August.
特点四:重点突出
好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。
Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"
【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。
【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"
特点五:语法正确,句式多变
句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。
Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.
【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。
【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.
如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。
篇16:旅游的经历英文作文
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+ 加入清单Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing for a week. The first day when I took off at the capital airport , it gave me the first feeling was cleanand tidy. The people in Beijing were very friendly. T he second day, I visited Beijing city. I went to the WangFujing Ave , I tasted many famous snacksand Beijing Roast Duck, they are very delicious. I also went to the XinDongfang square, it was a very big shopping mall, it took me about half an hour to walk between two doors. I can saw many famous brands: Cucci, Chanel, Rolex, Seiko, even the new Audi cars. It made me really want to stay in Beijing .The third day I visited the Tian’anmen Square, and it’s very beautiful. And the Chang’an Ave is wide ,straight and clean. The forth day, I went to the Forbidden City. It made me felt the emperor ’ s royal mausoleum was very luxury. The fifth day I went to the Summer Palace, I went boating there. The sixth day, I visited the Great Wall, it’s very terrific, this great architectural complex told us how clever the Chinese people are ! T he last day, I visited the Beijing University ----one of the topest universities of China . There are many famous people were graduated t here.
That’s a happy travel. In the future, I want to visit many countries. This is my dream.
篇17:太阳英文
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+ 加入清单In summer I usually get up early in the morning to exercise. Raising my head, I see the vast space in the sky. There are fish scales clouds, cotton-like clouds, sheep like clouds and dark blue clouds like a lake. The clouds are moving silently, changing constantly in shape.
Looking to the east, the sun is gradually showing her face, as if realising shes being watched. She blushes in shyness. Climing up the tree and over the house, the suns rays become radiant. It hurts the eye to watch it. A dark cloud tries to throw its shadow over the sun and shroud her in its shade. But the suns rays are irresistably bright. They cannot be covered.
Soon the trees, the houses, the river, in fact, everything is bathed in the golden sun. The almighty sun is generous and the source of energy and the symbol ot truth and knowledge. No wonder an many people sing in praise of her.
篇18:我的理想_英文作文1000字
全文共 1056 字
+ 加入清单Dream is a beautiful word. I like it very much. I think everyone has a eternal dream.Because dream is important for us.
My dream is to be a teacher. Because teacher can teach students. And teach themknowledge. When I see their smile, I will be happy. Our teacher are kind to us. So Iwill be kind to my students. Our teacher often and we make fun of. We loved to playjokes on our teacher, too .I think teacher is a good job. Because it’s very interesting.If I want to be a teacher when I grow up, I must study hard. I often read Englishbooks. And in all the subject, I like English the best. So I am becoming an Englishteacher.
This is my dream. Although it’s very small and impossible, I believe as long as Iwork hard at it, I will be realized. Then what is your dream?
译文:
梦想是一个美丽的词藻。我非常喜欢它,我认为每个人都应该有一个永恒的梦想,因为梦想对我们很重要。
我的梦想是当一名老师。因为老师可以教学生们知识。当我看到他们的笑脸,我一定会很开心。我们的老师对我们很友善,所以我自然也会善待我的学生。我们的老师经常和我们开玩笑,我们也很喜欢和他们开玩笑。我想,教师是一份不错的工作,因为它的确很有趣。如果我长大想成为一名老师,我必须努力学习。我经常读英文类图书,在所有科目里,我最喜欢英语。所以我想当一名英语老师。
这就是我的梦想,虽然很微不足道,也不太可能实现,但是我相信只要努力就一定会实现的,这就是我的梦想。
[我的理想_英文作文1000字
篇19:初中英文
全文共 743 字
+ 加入清单I had an unforgettable birthday party when I was thirteen years old. Before
that, I had never invited my friends to my birthday party and it was my first
time to do that. When the party began, we had chocolate and juice at home and we
played a funny game. My friends gave me a lot of gifts, I liked them very much.
Later we went to a restaurant and had a big dinner. I had a birthday cake with
thirteen candles. I blew out them. My friends said, “Happy birthday to you!” I
was so excited. I cut the cake into pieces and gave them to everyone. I did not
do well in it, but we laughed and laughed. We were happy that day.
Money doesn’t mean everything, but friendship can make us happy. I can’t
forget that birthday party and I miss my friends very much.
篇20:满分作文英文阅读Englishreading
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+ 加入清单假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:
1. 参加英语角的益处;
2. 坚持写英语日记的作用;
3. 英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。
注意:1. 词数:120-150;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分作文2
As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I take an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.
作为一个高中生,我认为英语是一个非常重要的学科。为了学好英语,除了英语课之外,我还积极参加英语角和英语课外活动,这对我来说很有好处。
In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I have been keeping on doing it for years and it is helpfl to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make rapid progress. Finally, EnjoyReaing contributes a lot of my improvement. Through the English website, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. What’s more, I can learn a lot, which play an important part in my study process.
在英语角,我遇到了很多朋友,他们和我有着相同的兴趣。此外,有时也有一些外国人愿意加入我们。通过与他们交谈,我的英语口语进步了很多。我还发现有助于保持英语日记。我一直坚持做了多年,这对我的英语有帮助。俗话说,实践是完美的。只有通过实践我们才能快速进步。最后,喜欢阅读贡献我的很多改进。通过英文网站,我可以阅读一些经典的英文文章,诗歌和故事。更重要的是,我可以学到很多,这在我的学习过程中扮演一个重要的部分。