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526庆祝春节英语作文高中
全文共 1309 字
+ 加入清单The street, people mountain people sea, beaming, against the colorful lights, neon lights, flash; Auto lamp, bright white, various, fantastic! Xinda street, heavy traffic, on both sides, the stall owners are selling beautiful balloon, different colors: red, yellow, blue, green, purple... . Form that vary: some blow grow winding, like a snake, somelike people smile face, there are various kinds of shape. Peoples vehicle is also different from ordinary, the car has a different decoration, like balloons, streamers and flowers and so on. Building, decorating, decorated, from the inside, outsidebusiness busy. Dance, the sky only colorful balloons, added the cheerful atmosphereto the Spring Festival. Most make a person happy that beautiful fireworks, firecrackers. Square, enthusiastic people putting the colorful fireworks, the best and the biggest shot a gun to shoot in the air, spread out a flower. And the flower on the ground, although it is small, power is also quite big, a light, spin, immediately issued a light, opened a little flower. Led adjustment by the smiling, like really, air spinning, then dance, finally finished BiBao shell exploded. A deafening noise, thefireworks blossom, beautiful!
Are happy New Year, Spring Festival is a festival, peoples life will be getting better and better.
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篇1:去动物园高中英语作文
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+ 加入清单I still remember the first time I went to the zoo.
When I was only five years old, my mother took me there.We took the camera and went to the station together. There were so many monkeys, tigers, lions, wolves and other animals in the zoo. We took many photos in the zoo with the animals. I was pleased to see so many real animals at the same time. They seemed so lovely and active.
I spent a nice day. But on my way home, I began to feel sorry for them. They were taken away from their parents and friends and also far away from the nature. They must have felt lonely, I thought. Every day, the only thing they could do was to sit there and wait for food.
我仍然记得第一次去动物园的那一天。
5岁那年,妈妈带我去动物园。我们带了相机一起过去。那里有猴子、老虎、狮子和狼等等,我们跟它们照了很多相。我很高兴能同时看见那么多活灵活现的动物,他们看上去又活泼又可爱。
我度过了快乐的一天。可是在我回家的路上,我开始替它们难过起来。人们把它们从父母和朋友身边捉走,它们一定感觉很孤单,我想。它们每天惟一可做的事就是等着人们来喂食。
篇2:关于我的梦想高中英语作文
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+ 加入清单when we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. the opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. reality always frustrates us to be successful. we need to balance them. first, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.
in this way, our dreams can achieve. lets work hard together to make our dreams come true.
篇3:高中英语作文中常见的100个错误
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+ 加入清单写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查,是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天,我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳,并举以实例,大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。
一.名词
写作中,学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。
1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.
句中的a要去掉,因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的,表示数量时在要其前加apieceof,类似的词有:news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。
2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.
可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里,或前面加冠词,或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.
3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.
一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s,如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词,改为abookshop.
4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.
一些集合名词如看成一个整体,则用单数的谓语动词,如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为,则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为,应把is改为are。类似的词有:team,class,audience等。
5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.
中学阶段,以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es,它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。
6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.(这和他们的信仰没关系。)
以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves,如knife—knives,
thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.
二.冠词
7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.
用a还是an,取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音,如为元音用an,为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的,我们说aEuropeancountry.
8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.
plane为可数名词单数,不能单独放在句中,应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数,而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a,变为Aplane。
9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.
把a改为the,因为乐器前用定冠词。
10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.
在in后加the,因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数,如在八十年代inthe80s。
11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.
去掉the,因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。
三.代词
使用代词时请注意其单、复数,主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。
12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.
定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers,为复数,因此从句中的指示代词应为复数,应把his改为their。
13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?
放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语,应把Whom改为Who。
14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.
John和I在句中都做的宾语,应把I改为me。
15.Thesebooksaremine;thoseinthebagareher.
her是形容词性物主代词,后面应该加名词books,或把her改为hers。
四.数词
16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.
hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s,前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of,表示大约几百几千的概念。如two
hundredstudents(两百个学生),hundredsofstudents(成百上千个学生)。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。
17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.
表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.
18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.
几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数,所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.
19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.
英语表达中分数的分子用基数词,分母用序数词,分子大于一时分母后要加s,所以就把third改为thirds.
五.形容词和副词
形容词和副词容易被误用,形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。
20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.
appear在此是个系动词,其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.
21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.
此句需要一个副词来修饰,hardly是副词,但意为“几乎不”,hard也可以是副词,表努力,因此把hardly改为hard.
22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.
more只构成比较级,而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。
23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.
两者相比较时,比较级前用定冠词,三者或三者以上才用most,因此把most改为more.
24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.
表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级,因此把harder改为hard.
25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.
fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级,可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有:much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等,因此把fairly改为rather.
26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.
as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as,因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.
27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.
同样的事物才能相比较,weather和不具有可比性,因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.
29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.
这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?,因此把went改为go.
30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?
修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。
31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.
像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后,实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.
32.Thebookisworthtoberead.
beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.
33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.
sure的主语只能为人,而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.
34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.
alive为表语形容词,偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living,或把alive放在writers后面。
35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.
yet用于否定和疑问句,already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.
36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.
nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中,而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。
六.介词
37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.
by加上名词表示一种交通方式,中间什么都不加,如bycar,bybus,byplane等;如果名词前有其他的词修饰,则应用除by以外的其他介词,此处把by改为in.
38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.
wait为不及物动词,需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。
39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.
marry不跟with连用,应把with改为to。
40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.
篇4:母亲节话题高中生英语
全文共 1427 字
+ 加入清单Mothers Day Mother’s Day is a holiday when children honor their mothers with
cards, gifts and flowers. In many countries, such as Denmark, Finland, Italy,
Turkey, Australia and the US, people cel lebrate Mother’s Day on the second
Sunday in May while many other countries of the world celebrate their own
Mother’s day at different times through out the year.
One of the best ways to celebrate Mother’s Day is to give your mom the day
off. Let her relax with the rest of the family doing all the housework. Usually,
dad and the kids will let mom sleep late that morning as they go into the
kitchen to prepare her favourite breakfast. Never forget to place a vase with a
single flower on the table beside the food. The kids can pick up the flower from
the garden or buy one from the shop. Arrange everything nicely before mom wakes
up. Some families will carry the food and mom’s favourite sections from the
newspaper to her bedroom so that mom can have breakfast in bed. Presents and
cards from the kids can be handed to mom by themselves or just placed on the
dining table.
After breakfast, go anywhere mom likes to go. Shopping, swimming or going on
a picnic in the garden. Make a special Mother’s Day dinner or take mom out for a
great meal in a famous restaurant she loves most.
Anyway ,let mom enjoy the whole day and feel your love, and then the Mother’s
Day can be a good one. As Mother’s Day is around the corner, it’s time to take
actions!
篇5:高中优秀英语作文
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+ 加入清单It’s a good option for college students to join the army. Army is the important constitution in a country. Nowadays, many college students prefer to be soldiers. Why?
参军对于大学生来说是一个很好的选择。军队是一个国家最重要的组成部分。如今,很多大学生都愿意去参军,是什么原因呢?
Firstly, there are many preferential policies for college students to join the army, such as tuition waiver, wage subsidy. What’s more, I consider join the army can strengthen our mind. In my opinion, it’s the most important reason to join the army. Whatever you are a student or others, two years’ training can build a strong body, too.
首先,大学生参军有很多优惠政策,如减免学费,工资补贴。更重要的是,我认为参军可以丰富我的想法。在我看来,这是参军最重要的原因,不管你是一名学生或其他人,两年的培训可以练就一个强壮的身体。
I want to join the army. My family is delighted to my decision. Because I want to be a great and strong woman and change my images in front of my friends. More importantly, I would like to experience the army life; I think it will be a colorful moment in my whole life.
我想参军。我的家人对我的决定感到很高兴。因为我想成为一个伟大而坚强的女人,并且改变我在我朋友面前的形象。更重要的是,我想体验一下军旅生活;我觉得那会是在我的整个人生中丰富多彩的时刻。
篇6:以假如让你回到童年为话题的高中英语作文
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+ 加入清单If I were a boy again, I would practice perseverance more often, and never give up a thing because it was or inconvenient. if we want light, we must conquer darkness. perseverance can sometimes equal genius in its results. “there are only two creatures,” says a proverb, “who can surmount the pyramids—the eagle and the snail.”
if i were a boy again, I would school myself into a habit of attention; i would let nothing come between me and the subject in hand. i would remember that a good skater never tries to skate in two directions at once.the habit of attention becomes part of our life, if we begin early enough. i often hear grown up people say “ i could not fix my attention on the sermon or book, although I wished to do so” , and the reason is, the habit was not formed in youth.
if I were to live my life over again, I would pay more attention to the cultivation of the memory. I would strengthen that faculty by every possible means, and on every possible occasion. it takes a little hard work at first to remember things accurately; but memory soon helps itself, and gives very little trouble. it only needs early cultivation to become a power.
篇7:高中寒假英语作文
全文共 1833 字
+ 加入清单my winter holiday pian
the winter holiday ia corning. i’m going to beijing next week. i will go there by piane. my perents are going there with me. we are going to take a trip and visit my aunt. i think we will be happy. 我的寒假计划
我下周要去北京。我将乘飞机去那里。我的父母和我去那里。我们打算去旅行,去看望我的姨妈。我想我们会幸福的。
寒假计划高中英语作文篇二:关于寒假计划的英文作文
January 15th,Sunny
As the winter vacation is drawing near, I have a plan about my vacation. Im going to do what I want to do. Im going to study harder in order to get good grades in the following term. After finishing all my homework, Im going to enjoy myself in the sea of knowledge. Reading must be a good idea. Im going to keep fit at the same time. Ill get up eary in the morning everyday and play sports. I really love sports. Besides that, Eating a balanced diet is also good for my health. Im going to help my mom and dad with the housework as well in the vacation.Ill learn to cook. As for
travelling, Im planning to go to Hainan. But whether going there or not will be decided on the weather.During the vacation,Im going to learn more about history,as Im really poor on it.
寒假计划高中英语作文篇三:寒假计划英语作文
I’m very glad to tell you about my winter holiday .It will be both relaxing and meanful . Let me tell you in detail.
First, studying is the most important thing for me, so I have to finish my homework carefully and do lots of exercises everyday .I’ll probably have two or three lessons so that I can make more progress.
Then I should do sports at the same time. Not only because the PE exam in next term, but also for my own health.
Phsics interests me a lot ,and I also like to read some books about it in my free time .At the end of the vacation,maybe I’ll go sighting with some friends and some books to another city .
I think my plan is the best possible one .I’m hopeful the winter holiday will come soon .
篇8:高中英语日记
全文共 676 字
+ 加入清单Every year on October 4th is the World Animal Day. It is proposed by the
Italian monk St Francis in 12th century. He lives in the forests of Assisi
Island for the long time, building a good relationship with the animals. So he
asks people to express thanks to the animals on October 4th. He sets a good
example for our human beings about how to deal with the relationship with
animals. In order to memorize him and what he does, we make October, 4th to be
World Animal Day. Nowadays, people from all over the world will hold various
activities to celebrate on that day. The aim of this festival is to remind
people to care for all animals and build a harmonious relationship with
them.
篇9:高中英语日记
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+ 加入清单Spring is my favorite season. In spring days, everything comes out. While
you are walking outside, your eyes will be filled with green.
In spring days, our world is a sunny place, which is covered with green
trees and colorful flowers, so it can be described as a paradise. Especially
when you are in the countryside, you can see green mountains, vast fields, clean
streams, and all the living creatures, coexisting harmoniously. All of them make
up the most beautiful picture in the world.
In spring days, the sun shines brightly, and theres also some pleasant
breeze. So how charming it is while feeling the spring wind blow us. Its also
wonderful to enjoy the beautiful sunshine. You will also get a lot of
refreshments while having a walk outside.
I hope we can enjoy the life of spring every day.
参考翻译
春天是我最喜欢的季节。春天一切都发芽了。在外面散步,眼睛里看到的都是满满的绿色。
在春天,我们的世界是一个充满阳光的地方,到处都覆盖着绿色的树木和色彩缤纷的鲜花,所以它可以说得上是一个天堂。尤其是当你在乡下时,你可以看到绿色的山,广阔的田野,清澈的小溪,和所有的生物和谐共存。所有这些组成了世界上最漂亮的画。
春天,阳光灿烂,还有一些令人愉快的微风。所以感觉到春风吹过我们的时候该是是多么的令人陶醉。也是享受美丽的阳光时候。你也会觉得恢复精力当你到外面走一走时。
我们希望我们可以享受春天的每一天生活。
篇10:高中英语作文:我的妈妈
全文共 3251 字
+ 加入清单导语:每个人都有自己的妈妈,你喜欢你的妈妈吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
My mother has no idea that her ninetieth birthday is coming up. She has no notion of the time of day, the day of the week. the season of the year, the year of the century. No notion of the approaching millennium. And no idea any longer, who I am. Her forgetting of me happened just a few months ago, after I had been traveling for more than a month and hadnt been to see her. When I came back, she asked me if I were her niece, l said no, I was her daughter. "Does that mean I had you?" she asked. 1 said yes. "Where was I when l had you?" she asked me. I told her she was in a hospital in Far Rockaway. New York. "So much has happened to me in my life." she said "You cant expect me to remember everything."
My mother was once a beautiful woman, but all her teeth are gone now. Toothless. No woman can be considered beautiful. Whenever I visit her in the nursing home, she is sitting at the table in the common dining room, her head in her hands, rocking. Medication has eased her anxiety, but nothing moves her from her stupor except occasional moments of fear, too deep for medication. This is a room that has no windows, that lets in no light, in which an overlarge TV is constantly blaring, sending images that no one looks at where the floors are beige tiles, the walls cream colored at the bottom, papered halfway up with a pattern of nearly invisible grayish leaves. Many of the residents sit staring, slack-jawed, open mouthed. I find it impossible to imagine what they might be looking at.
When I walk into the dining room on the day of my mothers birthday, I see that she has already been served lunch. The staff has forgotten to hold it back. Though I told them a week ago that I would be providing lunch. She hasn’t touched anything on her tray except a piece of carrot cake, which she holds in her hands. The icing is smeared on her hands and face. I dont want my friends to see her smeared with icing, so I wet a paper towel and wipe her. This fills me with a terrible tenderness, recalling, as it does. a gesture I have performed for my children. As I wipe my mothers face, I see that her skin is still beautiful I hold her chin in my hand and kiss her forehead. I tell her its her birthday, that shes ninety years old. "How did that happen?" she asks. "I cant understand how that could happen."
l have brought her a bouquet of crimson, yellow, and salmon-pink snapdragons. She likes the flowers very much. She likes the name. "Snapdragons. It seems like an animal thats going to bite inc. But its not an animal, its a plant. Thats a funny thing,"
I have bought food that I hope will please my mother, and that will be easy for her to eat: orzo salad with little pieces of crayfish cut into it, potato salad, small chunks of marinated tomatoes. I have bought paper plates with a rust-colored background, upon which are painted yellow and gold flowers and blue leaves.
My friends Nola and Gary come for my mothers birthday. When we are about to leave, I tell my mother that Im going on vacation, mat I wont see her for three weeks, that 1 am going to the sea. "How will I stand that, how will I stand thats she says, but I know that a minute after I’m gone shell forget I was there.
篇11:高中英语书信类作文的万能模板邀请信
全文共 311 字
+ 加入清单示例一:
Dear____,
There will a _____(内容) at/in______(地点) on____(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at _______(具体时间). This will be followed by a ____(进一步的安排). At around______(时间),__________(另一个安排)
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ______(通知你的最后期限)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
篇12:高中英语作文生活需要宽恕
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+ 加入清单There was a teenage boy who stole a lot of money from home and left home to live outside. After staying out for half a year, the boy spent all his money. He was so cold and hungry that he really wanted to go home. Hesitate for a long time, he wrote a letter to his family, wrote in the letter: dear mom and dad, I know I was wrong, only go out in the outside, to remember the warmth of home, these days, I miss you all the time. With deep regret, I dare not to see you, and I am going home on a dark night. If you will forgive me, please hang a light for me at the door. After the letter was sent, the boy set out on his journey home. After a long journey, he came to the mountain girder of his hometown, and he ate some dry food and hid there until night when he crept up the hill. He was shocked when he looked at the village crying. There was a lantern hanging in the door of the whole village!
有一个十几岁的男孩,他从家里偷了一大笔钱,然后离开家到外面生活。在外面呆了半年,男孩把钱全部花光了。他又冷又饿,他非常想要回家。犹豫了很久,他给家人写了一封信,信中写道:亲爱的爸爸妈妈,我知道我错了,只有出门在外,才能想起家的温暖,这些日子,我无时无刻不在想念你们。由于怀着深深的愧疚,我不敢见你们,我准备在一个黑暗的夜晚回家。假如你们愿意原谅我,就请在门口为我挂一盏灯吧。信寄出去后,男孩踏上回家的旅程。经过长途跋涉,他来到了家乡农村的山梁后,他吃了一些干粮,躲在那里,直到夜晚降临,他才悄悄爬上山梁。当他哭着看向村子里看时,他惊呆了。整个村庄的人家门前都挂着一个灯笼!
篇13:旅行的高中英语
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+ 加入清单When I was alittle child, I had many dreams. I wanted to be rich, so that I can live in abig and beautiful house. I can go everywhere by car. But now, my dream seems tobe better and more realistic. I hope I can have a good job. It will not takemuch of my time, although I can’t earn much. Every year, I have holidays totravel. Traveling is my favorite and it can reduce my pressure. It’s good formy life. Therefore, I hope traveling can be a part of my future life.
当我还是个小孩的时候,我有很多梦想。我想变得富裕,这样我就可以住在漂亮的大房子里,可以驾车到每个地方。但是,现在我的梦想似乎更好更现实了。我希望我能够拥有一份好工作,尽管我不能赚很多钱,但是它不会占用我太多时间,每年有假期去旅游。旅游是我的爱好,它可以减轻我的压力,对我的生活有好处。因此,我希望旅游可以成为我将来生活的一部分。
篇14:2024浅谈提高中考英语写作指导
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+ 加入清单导语:听说读写是构成英语语言交际能力的重要组成部分,其中要求较高的是“写”的能力。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
一、学生写作过程中出现的现状
1.词汇量太少
词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素,要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想,必须以足够的词汇量为基础,但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求,因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误,影响理解;词语误用,表达不准确;某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;文章中出现大量“造词”,让人看了啼笑皆非等。
语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。学生英语写作中出现的“大错”又多半是由语法错误引起的,学生在写作中语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清等情况屡见不鲜,Chinese English现象更是不乏其中,所以词汇量和语法问题是中学生英语写作时首先要解决的问题。
2.词汇错误较多
学生在写作的时候,中式英语Chinglish :如There are many people would like to go on a vacation. I by bike to school every day. 2、词汇错误:错别字、近义词混淆、词性误用3、词组、句型使用不正确,缺乏重点句型的使用:如I spent one hour to read the book yesterday. 4、时态、语态、人称把握不正确(审题不正确)。思维模式总是先汉语,后转化为英语,可能他想到了句子该怎样写,句型也知道的,但却有个别单词不会。如:“对我来说学英语是困难的”这个句子可能他想到了,句子结构“it is+adj for sb to do sth”也知道,但里面的形容词difficult不会写,导致句子表达含糊,以至于整篇文章错词百出,面目全非。
3.写出的长句达不到表达效果
一般的英语应试作文,总会给出汉语提示,学生写作也是从提示上入手,有的提示意思较长,所以学生写的时候会直接翻译,但对太长的句子又没有驾驭的能力,导致整个句子错误。
4.听力较弱影响写作能力
我们所面临的是一群农村学生,他们没有特别好的条件练习听力,每次的练习时间仅仅是每节英语课上,听听力的时间是在太少。有位作家说过:“不写没有读过的语言,不读没有说
的语言,不说没有听过的语言”。很明显,通过听的渠道获得语言信息及语言感受在英语学习中基础的基础。听不来也就写不上。
5.单词书写不规范,卷面书写较乱
对于大多数学生来说,格式、大小写、标点,书写不规范:句首字母大写不注意,使用从句时不会使用标点、大小写等)。如:After he went back home. He cooked supper.,考试时把单词写整齐的很少,学生普遍认为只要把单词写正确就可以得分,虽然觉得自己写的作文还可以,但卷子发下之后却没有得到期望的分数,而有的同学写作能力较差但书写整齐,写作得分也不是很低。
二、提高写作的方法
1.词汇的积累
初中学生在阅读理方面最大的障碍就是词汇量的缺乏,而扩大词汇量绝非死记硬背就能做到。最有效的方法就是大量接触各种不同体裁的英语文章,利用“在句中记,在文中记”的方法来积累词汇。因此我们指导学生依据英语报刊的特点,按栏目、话题、题材、体裁归类收集常用词,将出现频率较高的常用词汇积累到单词本子上,查字典写例句,初步学会这些单词的运用,放在身边,利用零散时间反复记忆,加强印象。
同时拟定时以单选、完型、阅读等形式考察学生对这些单词的掌握情况,通过测试和竞赛的方式进一步激发大家学习词汇的热情。不过,由于课程的时间安排问题,测试的工作开展较少,这也是实验工作中的一个不足。
2.熟练记住单词
( 1.) 巩固单词拼写,培养组句能力。 词汇匮乏是妨碍英语写作的最大障碍之一,有话想说,无词可写是大部分学生的苦恼。因此,我要求学生坚持每天听写、默写、循环记忆单词,掌握巩固词汇。还要求学生给出与单词有关的同义、近义、反义和词形相似的词,使词汇量得到最大限度的复现。如:反义词appear/disappear, crowded/uncrowded, polite/impolite/rude. 词形相似的词except/expect, chance/change/challenge. 还以某一词为中心,写出该词的不同形式或词性,组成典型的句型,从而不断丰富词汇和句型。如拼写单词die 时,不但要写出其过去式过去分词died,而且要写出其他词性(death, dead, dying), 再分别组句,如:The old man died two years ago. He has been dead for two years. His death made his dog very sad. It is dying.又如写到易混淆的词pay, spend, cost, take 时,可以多种方式表达句意。He paid 20 yuan for the book. He spent 20 yuan on the book. He spent 20 yuan buying the book. The book cost him 20 yuan. It takes him 20 minutes to read the book every day.等等。这样,通过大量的词汇练习不仅仅能有效地积累词汇,还为组句打下了基础,同时还能训练学生的发散性思维和总结、归纳、比较的能力,为学生正确使用词句奠定了良好的基础。以上这些机械操练虽然枯燥,但很有必要,它是能力培养的基础。在词句落实的基础上,可向学生提出稍高的要求,如写出高质量的句子: What a happy family I have ! (I have a happy family.) The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.( The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it. ) He didn’t come to school, because he was ill. (He was ill. He didn’t come to school.) I am good at not only English but also math.(I am good at English and I am good at math ,too. )( 2、) 阅读背诵精彩段落,围绕单元话题设计书面表达。 阅读是写作的 熟练记住每一话题的单词。熟记单词后让他们能够熟练的运用,能够把重点单词用来造句。然后熟记词组,特别是能够熟练的运用词组,能够用词组熟练造句。用词组和单词连成简单句,只要学生将句子表达清楚,语意连贯,就是一篇好的英语文章。
3.熟练使用简单句
简单句对学生来说相对好掌握些,可以要求学生们能够熟练划分主语、谓语、宾语。 正确掌握并列连词andbutor等词。在写作中要求学生不能随意发挥,也不能逐字逐句的翻译所给的文章,要求学生能抓住题中所给的条件,只要考生能将题中所给的要点全部表达清楚,而没有遗漏,在写作中并且注意到语言的连贯,那么就是一篇很好的英语文章。
4.加强听力训练,促进写作
目前英语听力教材使用的具体做法是:事先提出每课生词,教师领读几遍。排除生词障碍后,第一遍学生主让学生在课后反复听课文内容,并逐字逐句写下。每周星期五布置,星期一用课堂时间,教师将该文念一、二遍,让学生听写,教师收上来查阅,加以评讲。通过这种训练,提高学生的听力水平和表达能力。
5.书写规范,促进写作
关于书写的卷面整洁与否,字体如何,是老生常谈话题。可是由于印象分数的一分半分之差,很可能影响一生。在此处丢分纯属不值得,这也是笔者把它放在第一位的原因。在教学过程中,应坚持要求学生书写规范,写好匀笔斜体行书,注意连写,以及文面美观。可以采用出专刊的形式,让全班同学都参加英语书法评比,从而激发学生练习英语书写的兴趣,养成良好的书写习惯。
综上所述,在英语写作中听、说、读、写应同步发展。写作是一种语言输出形式,只有语言输入大于语言输出,语言输出才有可能。英语写作训练作为英语综合能力训练之一,是与英语的听说读是不可分割的,它们是相互影响、相互作用的有机统一体,必须注重听、说、读、写能力的同步发展。
比如笔者实施多年的“五分钟课前训练”:在上正课前五分钟里,要学生用英语讲述一个故事(积累素材);或者课前朗读一篇短小精悍的文章,让大家课后模仿;或者就大家平时关心的话题写一个发言稿或演讲稿进行课前发言;或者让学生自立主题,围绕自己喜欢的主题写一段话。这种课前训练取得了很好的效果。
美国作家舒伯特指出:“Reading is writing”,即:阅读能够促进写作,因为对学生而言,他们对生活的体验、对人生的认识大多是从书本上获得,从大量的阅读中获取的,阅读不仅能帮助学生积累思想,也能帮助他们积累语言素材。“You ought to read very carefully. Not only very carefully,but also aloud,and that again and again till you know the passage by heart and write it as if it were your own.” 这就清楚地说明了熟读成诵对写作是多么重要。所以要想写出好文章,就必须大量读书,它是写作的基础。
阅读对写作固然重要,但其它形式写作训练同样不可忽视,英语写作实践是英语写作理论转化为写作能力的“中介”。英语写作要突出实践,正如学习游泳一样,写作的能力是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充,因为课堂时间有限,仅靠课堂写作训练培养学生的写作能力是不够的。作文不是“学”出来的,而是“写”出来的。学生必须进行大量的写作练习才能掌握并且灵活运用各种写作技能,而且写作技能只有在不断写作的过程中才能逐步得到提高和完善。
此外,学生的英语语言意识和英语思维能力的培养也需要大量的练习。可见,课外练笔非常必要,应该给予重视。课外练笔的形式多种多样,可采用让学生写英语日记、写英语周记,教师也可有意识地给学生提供一些尽量贴近生活的时尚话题,如奥运会、环境保护等,让学生在课外习作。
总之,学生要提高写作能力应在教师有计划、有组织的引导下进行,开展多种形式的写作实践,努力扩大学生的生活面和知识面,以提高学生的写作能力。
篇15:高中寒假过年英语日记例
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+ 加入清单January 27 20XX
It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the city center of Beijing. It was cold outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t nete into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted, we went to the 5-star restaurant to have lunch. The lunch cost us 800 yuan. Oh, dear! They were all very rich, and one was poor.
January 28 20XX
Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare for the college entrance examination. It is the most important for us now.
January 29 20XX
I was bored. So I wanted to travel to Hong Kang. I told my father my decision. To my surprise, my father agreed. My father thought I always at home was bad. He thought I should go out to see our country clearly. How beautiful our country is! My father drove me a travel service. I filled out an application form. After that, the agency would finish every things. At last the agency told me it would take a week time to transact procedures.
January 30 20XX
The screen of my father’s mobile telephone is broken. When you open the mobile telephone, the screen is always white with light. You can’t see from the screen. And my father is a businessman. He needed a new one. So my father and I went to the electrical appliance shop. There are many new kinds of mobile telephones. At first, my father chose a Sumsung one. But all the telephones have sold out. Finally, my father chose a Motorola one.
January 31 20XX
The food in Shanghai disagree me. I think the food in Beijing is the most delicious. Seafood in Beijing is very fresh. Prawns in restaurant are all alive. And there are many food that you can’t see in other cities. It is very cheap that you eat seafood in Beijing. The less money you pay, the more enjoyable you are. Maybe my stomach is ill. Whatever food I eat, I am still thin. And I am too thin, I want to be a litter fatter. So I must eat more.
February 1 20XX
My dog will be dead. She is very old. We have kept her for ten years. Now her hairs are falling. And she always lies on the ground. She can’t see very clearly. She eats a little. She benetes thin. She was very strong before. She is still guarding my family. She is one of my family member. Now we are all uneasy because she will die. I think you may know my thinking. Even if it is a dog, you can’t forget it. So these days, we feet her the best food.
篇16:高中英语日记
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+ 加入清单This afternoon, we play a game called ‘Family Tree’. This game is very interesting. I’m very interested in it. Our teacher’s family is very large. She has many brothers and sisters. But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too. When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.
When I was a child, I can’t undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no ‘bread house’. Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think of this things. I will cry I can’t use words to say I love them.
I love my family!
高中英语日记(二)
I miss you very much, Mum.
I have left you for four days. Maybe it is really a short time. But I feel it is too long. I found that I couldn’t do a lot of things without you. For example, I couldn’t wash my clothes clean. It is too hard for me. I felt it is too troublesome and toilsome, but I’m sixteen years old now. I must be independent. So, Mum, I don’t know what’s what and I’m very stubborn. Sometimes, I disobeied your desire, which made you very angry. Now, I regret it. When I see some white hair in your head, I felt very sad. You are not young nay more. Sometimes you look very haggard. I know that’s because you give too much. You always concerned with my school record, healthy and a lot of other things. My school record always made you very sad. That’s my falt. I’m sorry.
Mum, you are too labbrious. You must have a good rest. I come of my ago now. I will correct my mistakes. You can rest assured!
Mum, I wish you good health and happy. I love you! Mum!
高中英语日记(三)
The hot sun is like our enthusiasm, because no matter how hot the weather is, we still keep on studying English hard.
Today, the chinese teacher taught us some English songs. I like the song which is called ”seasons in the sun” very much. We all lost ourselves in the beautiful voice. Today our theme is youth. After the teacher spoke. I suddenly understand that maybe being young is our advantage, so we must value every minute. We have to do something significant.
In the afternoon, our American teacher is father who is an associate proferssor of English from central college give us a lesson. He told us something about higher education in the USA. I think it will be useful for our future.
On the other side. I felt uncomfortable today. Perhaps it’s a small regret for such a wonderful day. But I think tomorrow still will be rosy.
篇17:高中的英语自我介绍范文
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+ 加入清单My name is ________. I am graduate from ________ senior high school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in acomputer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.
In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future. 中文翻译:我的名字是________。我graduatefrom ________ seniorhigh学校及主要________。有________人在我的家人。我父亲的作品在一家电脑公司。和我母亲是一位家庭主妇。我是家里最小的一个。我在业余时间,我喜欢看小说。我认为阅读可以enlargemy知识。至于小说,我可以想象不管我,如着名的科学家或功夫师父。除了阅读,我也喜欢玩电脑游戏。很多的成年人认为玩电脑游戏阻碍从学习的学生。但我认为,个人电脑游戏可以激励我学到一些东西,英语或Japanese.My喜欢当然,这样的英语,因为我觉得有趣的是,说的是一套通过不同的声音。我希望我的英语可以提高在未来4年,可以说在未来流利的英语。
高中英语自我介绍范文(二)
I am ___________. I was born in _________ . I graduate from senior high school and major in English. I started learning English since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.
In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English andsaw a lot of different things.
I think language is very interesting. I could
express one substance by using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English literatures and enlarge my knowledge. 中文翻译:我是XXX。我出生英寸我毕业的高中和英语专业。我开始学习英语,因为我是12岁。我的父母有很多美国朋友。这就是为什么我没有问题,与美国或其他国家的英语沟通。我在业余时间,我喜欢做的任何与英语的听英文歌曲,看英文电影或电视节目,甚至参加一些英超俱乐部或学院所举行的活动。我曾经去作短期英语留学。在此期间,我学到了很
多日常生活的英语,看到了很多不同的事情。我觉得语言很有意思。我可以表达一种substanceby使用不同的声音。所以,我希望我能学习更多英语文学和扩大我的知识 高中英语自我介绍范文(三)
My name is___________ . There are 4 people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.
I like to read English story books in my free time. Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E- books to read. Reading E- books is fun. In addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.
I hope to study both English and computer technology because I am interested in both of the subjects. Maybe one day I could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future. 中文翻译:我的名字是。有4人在我的家人。我的父亲是一个Chemistryteacher。他教高中化学。我的母亲是一名英文教师。她教英语的大学。我有一个弟弟,他是一个初中学生,是联考的准备。我喜欢阅读,在我空闲时,英文故事书。有时我上网冲浪和下载电子书籍阅读。阅读电子书籍的乐趣。此外,还扩大了,因为我的先进技术词汇和生动的动画。我希望学习英语和计算机技术,因为我感兴趣的是两个科目。也许有一天,我可以把他们和今后适用于我的研究。
篇18:生活是一种选择高中英语作文
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+ 加入清单In our daily lives, we have many choices to make, such as what to eat for supper,what clothes to wear, or what to do on weekends. At certain times in our lives, we need to make even more critical choices, such as which school to attend, what job to take or who to choose as husband or wife. Yes, life is a matter of choice. Seemimgly, it means a choice of tangible things. But in essence, it means choosing a way of life. Life is to be lived, savored, and enjoyed, not to be wasted or complained about.
Although we cannot choose our appearance, inborn gifts and even avoid unexpected disasters and adversities, we do have the privilege to choose to live optimistcally,to love our lives, to have dreams, and to cherish hopes.
Every morning when we get up, we have a choice of how we want to approach life that day. As for me, I choose to be cheerful.
日常生活中,我们会面临各种各样的选择,像是晚餐吃什么,穿什么或是如何度周末.而在人生中的特定阶段,我们需要做出更多关键性的抉择,例如教育,职业或者人生伴侣.生活就意味着一种选择.这种选择看似是对具体事物的判断,但归根究底,是一种生活方式的选择.任何无味的抱怨和虚度光阴只会带来乏味,生活的美需要细心品尝,用心体会.
尽管容貌和天资都是上苍给予,而人生旅途中的坎坷与荆棘我们也无法预计,那就让我们热爱生命,拥有梦想,珍惜希望吧.
每日清晨梦醒,我们都被赋予了选择生活的权利.而我会让一切从愉快开始.
篇19:高中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单High school life is so wonderful for me, and I have made many good friends.
We fight for our future together. As there are so many subjects for me to learn,
I spend most of the time studying knowledge. But deep in my heart, I like sports
so much, especially tennis. When I knew our school had tennis club. I felt so
excited and wanted to be part of it. But the problem was that what if I lagged
behind other students in study as I spent the time on this hobby. At last, I
still decided to join tennis club, because I wanted to do something special and
enriched my high school life. I tried hard to make plans for my study. At the
same time, I spared some time to play tennis. I found the balance and enjoyed
the thing l liked.
篇20:提高网络安全的高中英语作文篇
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+ 加入清单Recentlythe news that U.S attack on Chinas Internet is always exposed.And the question of how to stay online safely raises a lot of discussion in our country.As a resultin the era of rapid development of networkwe must take measures to protect our security of privacy and property effectively.
最近的新闻都揭示了美国对中国网络的攻击.如何安全地上网在我国引起了大量的讨论.结果是在网络飞速发展的时代我们必须要采取有效的措施来保护我们的隐私和财产安全.
From my perspectivein the first placewe should call attention to our personal information.Not only do we not offer them at random in some strange websitesbut we need to distinguish right from wrong among the numerous websites.Furthermoreit is inevitable that some secure anti-virus soft wares can be installed.And it will make it possible for that network can run more steadily.In addition to doing some work by ourselvesthe government needs to draw up some policies to preserve national cyber security.It involves probing for deeply rooted reasonsdevising creative solutionsdeveloping high-tech talents and strengthening the supervision.
从我的角度来看首先我们应该关注我们的个人信息.我们不仅不随随便便在一些奇怪的网站提供自己的信息而且我们需要在众多的网站之间明辨是非.此外安装一些安全的杀毒软件是必须的.这使得网络运行更加稳定.除了我们自己该做一些努力之外还需要政府制定相关政策来保护国家网络安全.这就涉及到探究深层次的原因想出有创造性的解决方案发展高新技术人才、加强监管.
Although scientists still cannot overcome the problem completelythey are studying a great deal about how to protect our national cyber security.Howeverconsciousness of cyber security should not decline.Only in this waywe just enjoy the convenience brought by the network.网络的好与坏高中英语作文
尽管科学家仍无法完全克服这个问题但是他们正在研究大量关于如何保护我们国家网络安全的办法.然而不应该放松网络安全意识.只有这样我们才能享受到网络带给我们的便利.