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对英语试卷的评价与建议

篇一:介绍自己情况英语作文

每一次考完试之后，仅仅由别人的评价来判定自己是不全面的，当自己也沉淀下来，窥探自己的内心，写下自己的自我评价，这样才可以不断进步。但是自我评价要怎么写呢?下面是小编为大家带来的对英语试卷的评价与建议，相信对你会有帮助的。

对试卷的评价与建议篇一

一、 试卷基本结构分析

安徽卷英语试卷卷面满分150分，共86道题目。全卷由选择题和非选择题组成，第Ⅰ卷选择题包括听力、英语知识运用和阅读理解三个部分;第Ⅱ卷为第四部分写作，分为第一节任务型阅读和第二节书面表达。具体情况分布如下表：

二、总体评价

本套试卷是严格按照XXXX年安徽省高考英语《考试说明》,结合新课标《考试大纲》精心命制的，难度适中。整套试卷立足教材,突出语篇,强调应用,注重交际,语言考查的灵活性更强,

完全符合安徽高考英语试题的命题原则。其特点有下列几个方面:语言注重时代性及隐含的情感态度和文化意识,关注社会热点,语言考查的灵活性增加。

三、具体分析

第一部分 听力

.听力注重以考生熟悉的话题考查考生听英语的能力,从今年的听力试题可以看出,直接获取信息的试题有所减少,推断题有所增多。选用的材料特别注重语言的真实性和交际性,对话的内容涉及面较广,口语化程度较高。

第二部分：英语知识运用

(I)单项填空

单项填空题在保证知识覆盖面的基础上,突出一贯倡导的语境化、交际化的特点,题干力求语言生动、地道,语境真实、新颖,所选考点都是《考试说明》中所列的语法知识和要求掌握的词汇。该部分涉及动词时态和语态、固定搭配考查的有24、26、28题，33题考查倍数表达法，25、35题考查交际用语。同时兼顾对代词、形容词短语等项目的考查。整体考查全面,要求考生掌握好基础知识。

XXX年安徽卷单项填空试题考查项目数据统计：

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出，2013年高考在单项填空部分考查了考试大纲所要求的基本考点，考查的项目多达13项。主要考查了动词的时态与语态、非谓语动词以及交际用语。但去掉了对冠词、主谓一致和其它特殊句式的考查。各题题干简洁，却能够给考生创设一个个较为完整的语言情景，这有利于考查学生在具体语境下对所学过语言知识的掌握情况。

(II)完形填空

完形填空是一篇议论文，作者谈了如何学好一门语言，难度属于中等。综合考查考生在语篇中对词汇的掌握和运用能力,以及对篇章逻辑的理解和把握能力。从考点上看，主要考查实词，兼顾虚词。请看下表。

2010-2013年安徽省高考英语完形填空考点分布：

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出，高考完形填空题重点考查名词、形容词、和动词等实词。这就要求考生在了解语篇的基础上，加强语义、语境的深层次理解，同时还应具备一定的逻辑思维能力。所以在平时的学习中一定要注意高频词汇的积累，对于这些常考词的词性、词义与用法要准确无误的把握。

第三部分：阅读理解

根据考试说明，阅读理解主要考查学生六个方面的能力，即理解事实细节、理解主旨要义、推理判断、猜测词义、理解文章的基本结构、理解作者的意图，观点和态度。下面是近四年的阅读理解题的考点分布表。

XX安徽省高考英语阅读理解相关考点统计表：

从上表可以看出，2013年试卷阅读理解选材广泛。文章涉及健康习惯调查、如何确保有足够的生活用水慈善基金会、网络的发展让人们忽视了现实中交往、探戈舞的介绍等话题, 题型设计多样 ,细节理解题、推理判断题考查较多,兼顾对主旨大意、句意推测题的考查,试题整体难度适中。

第四部分：写作

该部分共分两节，第一节为任务型读写，考查考生对书面语言的监察能力;第二节为书面表达题，考查考生根据所提供的话题和特定的要求进行书面表达的能力。

(I)任务型读写

任务型读写题与2012年相比,难度相当,内容是关于幸福，学生读起来较为轻松，题目设置有梯度，答题要求简练和规范。涉及词语释义、同意替换、归纳演绎、细节理解等。 近几年安徽卷任务型读写所选文章以说明文为主，内容贴近现代社会生活。2013年此题的难度与往年持平。这就要求考生在阅读理解的基础上，对文中所提供的信息的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括，并根据表格的形式，把加工后的信息准确、有序地完成与短文有关的表格，这一题型共10题，每个空格只能填一个词。其特点是任务型阅读属于综合能力考查题，考查的能力有：(1)捕捉信息能力，属基础题，快速获取信息的能力;在这十个空中，捕捉信息题要占一半。(2)组织信息能力，属活用题，考查学生组织信息和表叙信息以及对文中的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括的能力。(3)概括信息能力，属概括题，要求学生在获取相关信息后，根据表格相关要求，对所获取的信息进行二次加工，这主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。

(II)书面表达

XX年安徽省高考英语书面表达题统计表：

书面表达依旧属于话题作文，关于文明校园征稿，难度不大。命题贴近考生生活,符合考生的认知水平,能够让不同层次的考生都能不同程度地发挥自己的英语水平,体现考试的公平性。

总之,整套试卷命题科学,充分体现安徽新课标高考的精神。紧扣时代热点,整套试题渗透着对考生人文素养的培养,让考生在答题的同时受到思想感情、文化意识、价值观等方面的启发和教育。

对试卷的评价与建议篇二

期中考试已经结束了，这次考试是对于不少刚刚接触英语的初一新生而言是一次重要的考试，是全面衡量学生这段时间学习情况的一次考试。下面我主要从以下几个方面来分析：

一、考试质量分析

1.试题方面

就整个试题而言，考点分布均匀，覆盖面广，考题难度适中，大部分试题能够体现目前注重基础、体现能力的考试命题要求。

2.试卷方面

本次考试题型，分为听力部分、辨音、单项选择、阅读理解、完形填空，词汇运用，阅读表达，翻译句子和写作几个大部分，各部分难易程度不同。大部分题都比较基础，和平时的练习比较起来相对集中一些，更能反映出学生在这一阶段学习中的问题。

此次英语考试的听力部分，内容为与日常教学相关的材料，与所学教材难度相当，较为简单。朗读速度适中，对平日教学的听力训练有着良好的导向作用。但在第一节中还是有部分学生容易犯书写不规范的错误，也有些学生“g”、“j”不分，“r”、“l”混淆，因而造成较多失分。这学期对学生在听力方面的练习不是很多，除了在课堂上少量练习外，平时课下学生几乎得不到练习。

单项选择，突出了课本和平常练习中较基础的知识，学生训练较多，此部分得分较好。

完形填空，对于我校大部分基础较薄弱学生而言觉得难度较大，因选项具有大的灵活性，而学生在平时对单词的记忆和对句子的积累还不够牢，而且也没有掌握好做题技巧，没有联系上下文推测出正确答案，以至于此部分得分较低。

翻译句子，由于平时练习较多，且反复强调大小写及单词、字母的正确书写，因此这部分得分比预计要好。阅读表达学生在此题得分较少，不是多了这个就是漏了那个，答的不好，得分非常低。

写作部分大部分学生书写较差，只有极少数学生在这部分未动笔。

二、分析原因

教师方面的原因：

这段时间由于课时多，时间紧，因此对学生部分知识掌握情况的落实不够，这也是这次考试成绩不高的原因之一。从这次考试中应该吸取这样的教训。在以后的英语教学中，加大管理力度，提高学生在课堂上的学习效率。

学生方面的原因：

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实，且大部分学生毫无学习习惯而言，记忆知识极难，遗忘知识快，过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高，不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强，完形填空、阅读理解失分较多，不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。很容易漏掉be动词。

三、今后采取的措施

抓好单词、词组过关，狠抓知识落实。在进行单词和词组教学时，首先让学生读准音，然后反复读单词和词组，并找出同义词、反义词、类似用法的词一起记。在进行句型时，以小组合作等方式举一反三，反复练习课堂上学习的句型。平时督促学生多听录音磁带，一星期集中训练两次听力，在培养学生的听力技巧和听力能力上多下功夫，提高他们的听力能力和听力技巧。

在阅读教学中，设计一些问题，通过学生自读文章找出其答案，在整体上感知文章内容。而且讲解文章时，注意生词在句中的运用、注意文章里出现的词组，注意对关键句子的理解。针对学生阅读能力差的问题，将通过大量阅读来培养学生的语感以及通过上下文捕捉信息的能力，还要注意文化背景知识的学习，拓宽学生的知识，开阔学生的视野。

不会用英文写作文是绝大多数学生的通病。作文是由句子构成，一个正确的句子需要用正确的句型、正确的词组，正确的时态构成。训练学生的答题技巧和书写方面的好习惯。写好作文，没有诀窍，只有多写多练。

在今后的教学中，我们将继续抓好双基知识的训练，打牢基本功;引导学生梳理知识，掌握语法规则，逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力;培养学生上课时的听课习惯，要求学生全神贯注，要和老师同步思考出现的问题;讲课时，尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言，坚持用英语教学，让学生用英语来想英语;在平时要通过阅读，培养学生阅读多种文体的能力，如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性，同时，启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想，逐步培养良好的英语语感。在培优辅差上下功夫，大面积提高学生的优秀率和合格率。

对试卷的评价与建议篇三

英语测试对于提高教学质量起着有效的促进作用。通过测试一方面教师可以取得教学工作的信息反馈，另一方面，可以调动学生的学习积极性，使学生在今后的测试中不断发扬成绩，克服缺点，取得最佳效果。测试的重要性是显而易见的，对试卷的评讲就显得尤为重要。高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

高质量的试卷评讲会让师生收益非浅。有效的评讲，能让老师更成功地总结教学经验，分析学生学习情况以改进教学，提高教学效率和教学效果。有效的评讲，能让学生找到自己的不足和改进学习的方法。

有效地评讲英语试卷应该坚持三个原则：

一、评讲的内容和细节必须由学生实情决定。学生才是课堂的主体，教师只是引导者。学生在测试中暴露了他们自己在英语各方面存在的问题或漏洞，学生有他们自己的难点和疑惑。教师具体该讲什么和怎样讲必须根据学生的情况和特点来进行。对于学生普遍存在的难点，应该仔细分析，详细评讲。对于个别学生存在的难题，可以个别辅导，个别评讲。

二、评讲必须结合试卷特点。尽管都是英语测试，但不同阶段，不同时间的测试试卷是有其自身的特点的。教师应该在认真分析和研究试卷的基础上评讲试卷，切不可千篇一律的对待各种英语试卷。试卷的评讲步骤和时间长度都要根据试题的难度来定，当然必须结合学生实际。对于不同类别的试卷应该有不同的评讲方式，对于试卷中的不同题型也应该用不同的方法。

三、评讲时必须给予学生必要的反馈和消化的时间。英语课堂的师生互动性很强，即使是评讲试卷也应如此。评讲时切不可让老师一个人唱独角戏，其间必须穿插必要的互动和反馈。尤其在评讲典型错题时，有必要先让学生自述答题思路，然后由老师根据学生的错误根源进行讲解，最后让学生再读题目和正确的解答依据。学生始终是受教育的主体，教师切勿包办一切。

简而言之，评讲试卷必须结合试卷的特点和学生的实际情况，切不可草率行事。 怎样才能有效的评讲英语试卷呢?

第一、认真了解和初步分析试卷。在评讲前，教师有必要用自己教给学生的方法亲自把试卷做一遍，以便确定试题的检测范围和感受试题的难度。在做题的过程中可以预测学生的难点，也可以根据学生所学内容，看看哪些题目超出了学生的学习范围。当然，也可以检阅试卷的不足，以便今后选择并合理利用英语试卷。

第二、认真统计学生成绩。在批阅完学生试卷后，认真统计学生的成绩是很有必要的。统计的项目主要有：求出平均值和求出差距。在统计出平均成绩后，可以参照其他班的情况分析，确定该班的成绩位置。平均分较低，就说明该班的成绩较差。如果平均分较高，那该班的整体情况就较好。另外，还要排列出全班考生中的最高分和最低分，找出二者之间的差距。差距越大，两级分化就越严重，教学的难度就越大。在排列学生成绩时，最好由高分到低分排列，找出中间位置考生的分数，并把该成绩列为全班成绩的中位数。在评讲试题时，要特别注意中位段的学生的反映和效果。

第三、根据学生的成绩和分析情况，再次分析试卷，并做好学生的错误统计。在分析学生成绩后，及时的看学生答题的错误率，从中找出学生的典型错题。错误率较高的题目，就是要评讲的重点部位。这部分题目，既是学生应该关注的，也是教师应该详细评讲的。在统计错误率后，教师应该耐心的查阅典型错题，分析学生答错的原因，反思自己教学上的不足。对于，教师很难作分析的题目，要及时与学生进行交流，然后再确定学生做错的根源。 第四、认真耐心的评讲试卷。在试卷发给学生之后，教师可以安排学生自主讨论和简单分析自己的试卷。教师最好要提示学生如何讨论和分析。例如，要求学生发现自己的错题，并尽力分析出错题的知识类别：是宾语从句还是动词不定式，还是动名词或是其他的。

在学生分析错误类别后，可让学生互相讨论解答的方法或依据等，让学生达到初步了解解答出错的根源，并试着改正自己的错误。对于学生猜对的题目，也要要求学生诚实地标出来，一并作为错题对待，设法杜绝学生答题的侥幸心理。在学生讨论分析试卷后，教师就可以开始评讲试卷了。对于学生错误率较高的试题，教师必须详细的评讲。评讲时不光要书写答题的根据，还要多举相关的例子，最终要让学生能正确解答这些题和相似的试题。对于错误率较低的试题，蜻蜓点水般的评讲就可以了。当然，这部分错题的分析可以让成绩优秀的学生来完成。既可以从分发挥优生的能力，又能给其他学生提供鲜活的榜样。最后，就要解答学生的疑问了。

在评讲试题时，教师最好不要全部评讲，而是留一些小的疑问给学生。这样便于引导学生学会提问和思考。在教师评讲了主要错题之后，可以让学生之间互相讨论，让他们尝试相互探讨相互学习。在讨论和研究的过程中，激发学生学习的激情，启发他们思考和解决问题。在学生提出疑问后及时有针对性地给予解答，并随时肯定学生的质疑能力和探讨精神。

第五、师生认真翔实地做好总结。在师生互动地评讲完试卷后，教师和学生都有必要进行各自的总结。学生需要总结初自己在知识和能力上的薄弱环节，并写好错题集。在学生收集错题时，教师应要求他们写明解题的正确依据。英语教师也有自己的总结。要总结学生的薄弱环节，要总结自己评讲时出现的不足(范围过大，语言不清楚，讲解欠通俗等)。教师也要收集学生的典型错题。以便今后检测时插入以往的错题，让学生巩固和弥补以前的不足。

总而言之，坚持实事求是的原则，坚持师生互动的方式，让英语试卷的评讲体现教师、学生、试题和环境之间的相互作用的关系，让英语试卷的评讲更有效，才能真正的体现英语检测对学生的评价和督促作用，才能真正地增强英语教学的实际效果。

高考英语满分作文-我的秘密

篇二:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文:我的秘密

This evening there was a broadcast of an exciting football match on TV. It was between Chinese team and the team of the United Arab Emirates. I am a loyal football fan and I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I found a little boy crying. He lost his way. Considering his parents must be very worried, I

immediately decided to send him home. Seeing their son back, the boys parents showed their gratitude. They also invited me to stay for supper. But thinking of the football match, I refused them politely. When I got home, it was very late. Therefore, I missed the match,However, I felt very happy because I helped other people. Although my mother asked why ! came back so late, I said nothing.Perhaps this will become my own secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。我是一个忠实的足球迷，而且我盼望这场比赛很长时间了，所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我发现一个小男孩在哭。他迷路了。考虑到他的父母一定很担心，我立刻决定送他回家。看到他们的儿子回来，小孩妁父母感激之情溢于言表。他们留我吃晚饭，但想着足球比赛我婉言拒绝了。 我到家时已经很晚了，因此我错过了比赛。然而我很高兴因为我帮助了他人。

尽管妈妈问我为什么这么晚回来，我什么也没说。或许这将成为我自己的小秘密。

Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

There was an exciting football match on TV this evening. It was played between China and the United Arab Emirates. As a loyal football fan, I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I saw a little boy crying. He told me that he lost his way. Maybe his parents were worrying about him. Thinking of this, I decided to send him home. It was a long way. It took us much time to reach his home.Seeing their son, the boys parents were very grateful and asked me to stay for supper. I refused politely because I still wanted to watch the match.

But when I arrived home, it was so late that the match had been over.What a pity! However, I was very happy all the same because I helped others. I told nobody about it. It was just my secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。作为一个忠实的足球迷，我已盼望这场比赛很长时间了，所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我看见一个小男孩在哭。他告诉我他迷路了。可能他父母正担心他呢p想到这，我决定送他回家。那是一段很长的路。到他家花了很长时间。看到他们的儿子，小孩的父母非常感激并留我吃晚饭。我婉言拒绝了，因为我依旧想看比赛。

但是我到家太晚了，比赛已经结束了。真遗憾!然而我仍然很高兴因为我帮助了他人。我没有将这件事告诉其他人，这只是我的秘密。

高考英语作文优秀范文分类(全)

篇三:介绍自己情况英语作文

经典范文

1、表达观点类

在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语

优点：有助于提高听说能力等

缺憾：不易听懂等

结论：??

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用

优点：易于理解等

缺憾：英语氛围不浓等

结论：??

注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。

2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文(一)

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.

名师点评：

审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。

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背诵内容：

好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with，对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.

我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。

2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

满分文(二)

I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评：

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

应背好词：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

应背好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)

因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目：

请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2、学生会将于5月6日中午12：30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

3、希望全校同学从我做起，节约水资源。 2

参考词汇：干旱drought 注意：词数不少于60。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places we hope that all of us can realize the

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。（2009·天津）

1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意： 1. 词数：不少于100词；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

范文背诵：

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can

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perform at your best!

Thank you!

句型背诵

①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.

②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...

③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

练习篇目：

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

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Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。

（3）利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

注意：1．词数：150左右 2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。 参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization（文明）. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the

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高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

篇四:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

July 17th Fine

This morning, on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A little girl was calling for help in the river nearby. I immediately got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. At last the girl was saved, After sending the girl back home, I hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

However, in the afternoon the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. Soon the story spread all over the school. TherefOre, the teacher knew why I was late this morning and he apologized to me. The headmaster also praised me and called on all the students to learn from me.

7月17日 晴

今天早晨，在上学的路上，我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩正在附近的河里喊救命。我立即跳下车，脱掉衣服，跳到河里。女孩终于得救了。把小女孩送回家后，我急忙赶到学校，但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因，老师批评了我。

然而下午小女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿，很快我的事迹传遍了整个校园。由此老师知道了我今早迟到的原因，他向我道歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。

July 17th Fine

Today I did a thing that was well worth doing although I was misunderstood at the beginning.

This morning on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A girl fell into the river! I got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. After a few minutes struggle, I finally saved the girl, I informed the girls parents and then hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

In the afternoon, the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. After the teacher learned the whole thing,he made an apology to me. And the headmaster praised me and also called on all the students to learn from me. I felt very proud.

7月17日 晴

今天我做了一件非常值得做的事情，尽管开始我被误会了。

今天早晨，在上学的路上，我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩落水了!我立即跳下车，脱掉衣服，跳到河里。几分钟的努力后我终于救了小女孩。我通知了小女孩的父母然后就急忙赶到学校，但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因，老师批评了我。

下午女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿。老师知道了整件事后向我道了歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。我感到非常自豪。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! Its my honor totell you about the changes of my school.

When you walk around our school, you can see various flowersand trees everywhere. At the same time, you can smell the taste, breathe freshair. Its a nice place for us to study.

Please look at the new building over there. Its ourlibrary that was painted white again this year. It not only looks morebeautiful, but also has increasingly more books than before. Reading differentkinds of books can enhance our horizons and increase our knowledge. I stillremember I entered the school two years ago, the library was old enough and Ialways couldnt find my favorite comic books. Therefore, I often complained tomy classmates that the library was out of fashion that we were not able tolearn fresh knowledge in it.

What was even worse, as a member of school basketballteam, my partners and I had few chances to practice, as the playground was toosmall to play andfull of so many students after school. Luckily, I dont haveto worry about that anymore, because our playground is large enough for all ofus to play games, and basketball court is also bigger. Thats wonderful!

My school has changed a lot, for it is more beautifuland modern. I love my school.

[介绍美丽的校园英语作文

My Dream

I’m longing for a weekend. It’s happy and it’s free. This is my dream.

At this weekend, I don’t have to play the violin; I don’t have to draw pictures; Olympic Maths is far away from me; Handwriting doesn’t bother me.

I can play and I can sing; I can do everything interesting. No one can stop me.

Oh, what a happy weekend! But, it’s only my dream. I hope it will come true.

[初中英语我得梦想介绍作文

Good afternoon, professors !I am great honored to meet you here.Now allow me to give a brief self-introduction.

My name is xx, xx years old, born in xx city, xx province. I have been working for nearly xx years. I am open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of history. In my spare time, I have broad interest like many other youngers.

In year xx, I entered xx, major in xx. After my graduation, I entered xx University to study my postgraduate course, major in xx. In those 7 years study, I worked hard, and I gained scholarship for many times.

During 3 years study in xx University, under the strict guidance of my tutor, I have learned systematically the theory of xx. I benefit from working together with excellent colleague. xx University shares many same characteristics with xxx University. Both of them have a refreshing, scholarly atmosphere.

After my graduation in xx, I worked in xx. I got a position in xx. However, with time going on, the more I experienced, the clearer I realized that I am really interested in xx. I am eager to learn more about xx and I hope I can study further. I wish to find a way to solve the complicated problem in my daily work.

So I started the way to pursuing my studies in xx, and work hard for about half year. Now all my hard word has got a result since I have a chance to be interview by you. If luckily I got the chance to learn xx, I will work harder than before. Thank you!

good morning/afternoon everyone! it is my honor to be here and i really appreciate you offer me the chance of interview .now i will introduce myself first .my name is……from xiangfan in hubei province.

im an honest, responsible, and warm-hearted person. i can adapt different environments quickly .second i like this kind of field very much and i take it as my career .till now i have one year experience in this field. as a 21 years man, id like to experience more to enrich myself and then it can help me to laid good foundation for my future career .there is no use doing what we love ,we must love we do just like the field. at the same time, i am really proud of myself applying for this job. i hope you can give me a chance and i will try my best to do it better.

finally , i hope your hotel can become the best one among hotel industry。

thanks for your time.

Mid-autumn Festival in Singapore is quite lively. The holiday arrived a

front for month, the moon cake lantern starts to go on the market. Moon cake,

not only satisfies peoples luck of having good things to eat also to use for the

ancestor worship to pay respects to the moon, is the holiday high quality goods

which the relative friend presents mutually. Except the moon cake, Midautumn

Festivals another kind of holiday high quality goods are “the pomelo”.

Speaking of the young people, makes them feel the interest is the all kinds

of manufacture fine lantern, they also were taking advantage of the holiday

opportunity, exposes manufactures the lantern the talent, adults also may at the

once a year lantern manufacture competition and the decorative lantern

exposition heartily the entertainment.

The Singaporean person also may participate by the populace contacts or the

clubhouse sponsor midautumn festival party. The whole family enjoys looking at

the moon also is fine deeds together, displays the fruits and melons, the moon

cake in the home, again adds the children lantern, is warm, harmonious .

In order to cause the midautumn festival festival the atmosphere thickly,

celebration is more common, we suggested hangs up the lantern in the public

place, at the same time sponsors plays lantern-riddles and so on the

activity.

My hometown Nanchang, capital of Jiangxi Province, stands on the eastern bank of the Gan River. An ancient city, its origins lie in the Han Dynasty over 2,000 years ago. In the late 1920s Carl Crow described it as a conservative town, surrounded by a high wall which had remained impenetrable even the Taipings, protected by the city god---the Universal Lord of Happiness; although Crow’s book came out in a fifth and thoroughly revised edition in 1933 there is no reference to the uprising or the activities in the soviets.

Modern Nanchang is a pleasant and prosperous city with a growing industry, places for recreation, and many historical sites connected with the Nanchang Uprising. Historical sites include the Plum Fairy Temple, which dates bark to the western Han Dynasty, and the Hundred Flower Islet, which is in the Bayi Park and dates back to the Song Dynasty.

My name is Li Haiqing. I am a local person who is 21years old. I am from

chongqing and I am of the opinion that my hometown is a beautiful city.

Moreover, I would like to say something about my family. I have my mother

,my father,and my elder sisther,they love me very much,I know my parents have so

much hops and dreams for me。So I must study well.

I have the confidence because I have such ability! I am kind-hearted,

patient, outgoing and creative. I am a hard working student especially do the

thing I am interested in. I will try my best to resolve any problem no matter

how difficult it is. I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he

keeps on learning.

In spare time, I like reading books, surfing on the Internet, listening to

music like, classic, or light music, because they can make me feel relaxed.

Nobody could keep on working efficiently, therefore proper amusement is a must.

In addition,() I insist on do some physical training such as running, and

horizontal bar as well. By doing this, I can always stay healthy.

Thatrsquo;s all. Thank you for giving me such a valuable opportunity!

安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。

（ 1 ）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。（ 2 ）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。（ 3 ）登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇松（ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意 1、词数： 80 词左右。 2、请不要逐字翻译。

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China 。 It lies in the south of Anhui 。 Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there 。 Its not far from here 。 It takes you about three hours to get there by bus 。 You can also go there by train or by plane 。 While you are climbing the mountain ， you can enjoy the sea of clouds ， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you 。 In the early morning when the sun rises ， the sky looks very beautiful 。 Its really a nice place to visit 。

[向外国友人简单介绍黄山英语作文

HuangMei is  my  hometown. It is  in  the  East  in  HuBei.It is East  on  the  city  named  AnQing  of   AnHui.And it is  south to   the  city  named  JiuJiang  of  JiangXi. It  is  a    great city  in  my  heart.It  has  a long  history for about  1800 years  in  China .Example .The  temple  named  SiZu  and  WuZu were   in  HuangMei for a  long  years-old.Today,Every  year  many   visitor  come  different part  to  there.As  a  daughter  from Huangmei.I  leaved it away  for  about  seven  years. But  I miss it everyday .Even  in  a lot of  my  dream  in  the  night  .I belive HuangMei will  be  richer and  richer .The  new  year  2009  will going .Tonight  I  hope  everything  will  be  well  in  my  new 26  years-old.All  my friends  will be  well.I  must  work  hard in   the new  year.I will be ain growth as  my  hometown .

中文：我的故乡在黄梅.黄梅位于湖北省的东部，它东接安徽省安庆府，南邻江西省九江市.在我心中，它是一座伟大的县城.它在中国史上约有1800余年的历史，像闻名遐迩的四祖寺，五祖寺在黄梅有很长时间的历史了.每年，都有来自不同地域的许多游客去那.我自离开故乡已是七载余，但是我却每天思念故乡，以致在梦里都是如此.作为从黄梅走出来的女儿，我坚信我的故乡会越来越富饶.新的2009就要来临，今晚我祝福新的一年将万事顺利，我所有的朋友都好.在新的26岁年轮里，我必须努力工作，我会像我的家乡一样成长.

Hello everyone！ My name is Chen Jiaobing. I have a pair of eyes, curved eyebrows, not tall nor short, every hair in a ponytail.

My favorite color is blue. My hobby is singing and dancing... My favorite people are my family, my friends and the people worthy of my respect.

My greatest dream is to have wings of angels or elves and fly freely in the blue sky. I am very outgoing, I like to make friends, to be good to friends.

As everyone knows that China is one of the most beautiful Countries all over the world. It is really famous for its long history and civilizations. As a Chinese girl, I’m so proud of my Country. And of course, I love it deeply in my heart. not just because it’s my hometown.

Daqing is beautiful and modern. Thescenery here is so attractive. Everyone will love it at the fist sight.

When you come to Daqing, you will see museums, parks and shopping centers here and there. Wherever you go, you can see green trees, grass and beautiful flowers. what’s more,there are many places of historic interest in Daqing. Such as Iron Man Memorial Museum, Childrens Park, Times square and the wetland tourism Taikang. I am sure that the beautiful scenery will attract more people to come here.

Daqing is also famous for its oil. It provides oil for our Country. Thus it is an important city in China. I am proud of it.

I also love the spirit of Daqing-the Iron Man Wang Jinxi Spirit.Wang Jinxi is a hero of Daqing. I learn a lot from him. Work hard! Persevere! And never give up!

That is my hometown Daqing. I love it very much! I hope you love it as I do.

Thank you everyone!

The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on

the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival， everyone in the family

will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front

of the house.

On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away

from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner， people will

light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with

their own toy lanterns happily.

At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon

while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can

look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that

there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To

protect the frighten the dragon away.

中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日，在八月十五号。在节日来临的前几天，家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子，把房子装扮得漂漂亮亮的，灯笼挂在屋前。

晚上有一顿美餐，离家在外工作的人也要回来团圆。晚饭后，人们点亮灯笼，一般是红色的圆灯笼。孩子们会高高兴兴地玩他们的玩具灯笼。

晚上月亮又圆又大，人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特别的食品——月饼。人们在一起回顾过去，展望未来。据说天上有一条龙，它要把月亮吞下去。为了保护月亮，孩子们要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑。

Miss Hou is my English teacher, she is 28, we all like her.

My English is really bad at first, I am afraid of having Miss Hou’s class, when she finds this, she doesn’t blame me, she tells me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English, she asks me to watch English movie, it works.

Miss Hou is my favorite teacher.

Leaders and colleagues:

How do you do!

Im XXXs new XXX, and its a pleasure, and its a great honor to work with XXX

I am 20XX graduates of Computer College of XX University, is a professional repair information security. The school taught many things very complicated, learn things are "not exclusively Bo". The language, master the skilled C/C++, of course, in programming and predecessors than up, that it is the rookie. So the work in the future but also to all the senior colleagues learn, ask, hope to give guidance. In mistakes, please predecessors criticism that the "new" is not an excuse to avoid responsibility, I will remember this sentence.

In terms of hobbies, as computer science students, said it is a lie in the school do not play games, I love playing some games, Dota, CS, three, play some drama, horror, as a way of survival, biochemical crisis.

Love sports, swimming, as far as possible in order to enjoy the student discount, when graduation is to do a swimming card; also love playing table tennis, before every day to see colleagues after work in the table tennis room, play, want to go, but some feel shy.

For other hobbies, War Within Three Kingdoms is a board game. It can be said that War Within Three Kingdoms is the first batch of school started to play, that time is not that many people play. Often with classmates killed pitch-dark, Saturday on the weekend, because killing too late, often disturbing. Inside the company seems very many colleagues are playing later, with the exchange, exchange views and learn.

[求职英语自我介绍模版

I have a good friend. His name is Wang weidong. He is my classmate and we often go to school together. He is tall and handsome with a pair of glasses. He is friendly and kind. He is always ready to help others. He is good at English and I am weak in English so he often helps with my English. He likes doing sports, reading and traveling. He can skate and ski very well. He is one of the most knowledgeable people I have ever met. 我有个朋友，他叫王卫东。他是我的同学，我们两经常一起去上学。他个子高高的很英俊。他戴着眼镜。他很友好善良，总乐于助人。他擅长英语而我英语不好，他总帮我学英语。他喜欢运动、阅读和旅游。他滑冰和滑雪都非常棒。他是我见过的知识最渊博的人之一。

[我的朋友简单英语作文及翻译

一、Hello, my name is Tom. I’m from JianXi. I’m 10 years old. I’m short and thin. I’m a student. I study in Class2, Grade 5 of primary school. I like English class very much. Because English class is so much fun. There are 4 people in my family. They are my mother, my father, my sister and me. I like hamburger and chicken very much. Do you like me?

二、Hello everyone,My name is xxx . I am from China, with a height of xx cm, and a weight of xx kg. ,I was born in xxxx xx xx, My favroite subject is xxx。My favorite month is February,My favorite season is spring , My favorite sprots is runningMy favorite food is hambuger,,My favorite housework is sweeping the floor, I want to be a computer engineer , You could ask me why , ha , because I like piaying computer !

三、Good morning (afternoon), teachers and students!

My name is JinYue. Beauty is my English name. Im ten years old. Im an active(活泼的) girl. I like singing 、dancing、drawing and playing Pingpang.Im a student of Class one Grade four from Affiliated Primary School of Hefei Pedagogical College.I like Chinese, Maths ,English and so on.I study very hard,I hope I can become a excellent student. I like making friends and wish to be friend with all of you.This is me. Please remember (记住)me, your good friend --JinYue. Thank you very much!

四、Hello, everyone. My name is JinYue. Beauty is my English name. Im ten years old. Im a student of Class one Grade four from Affiliated Primary School of Hefei Pedagogical College. I like singing 、dancing、drawing and playing Pingpang. I like English. I hope to become your good friends. Thank you very much!

五、Goodafternoon, teachers! Today, I`m very happy to make a speech(演讲) here. Now, let me introduce (介绍)myself. My name is ZhuRuijie. My English name is Molly. I`m 12. I come from Class1 Grade 6 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing basketball. Because I think it`s very interesting. I`d like to eat potatoes. They`re tasty(好吃的). My favourite colour is green. And I like math best. It`s fun. On the weekend(在周末), I like reading books in my room. I have a happy family. My father is tall and strong(强壮).My mother is hard-working(工作努力) and tall, too. My brother is smart.(漂亮) And I`m a good student. My dream(梦想) is to be a teacher, because I want to help the poor (贫穷的)children in the future(在将来). Thank you for listening! Please remember(记住) me!

When people say the word "hero", what will you think? Do you have a hero in your heart? Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great-man. But my hero is around me, who gives me more love than others. She is my mother, the hero in my heart. My mother isnt great in the way of a famous singer or a movie star. She does nothing big, but what she does make others inferior. From her, I learn a lot.

When I was a baby, she taught me how to walk and how to speak. When I go to school, she helps me solve many problems. She also tells me be kind to others. When I do badly in study, she encourages me and tries to cheer me up. My mother is a teacher, and she is always busy with her work. When she corrects students homework, she is always very serious. My mother is responsible to all of her students. She cares much about students study and life, and she tries her best to help students in need.

My mother is a loving mother, a qualified teacher, and a real hero in my heart.

Shanxi Province got its name due to its location to the west of Taihang Mountain.Shanxi neighbored on Hebei,Henan,Shaanxi and Inner Mongolia & Autonomous Region.It is located to the east of the Yellow River,and is also known as Hedong.Shanxi belonged to Jin State in Spring and Autumn Period,so it is abbreviated in Jin.Shanxi occupies an area of 156,000 square kilometers (about 60,000 square miles) and has a population of over 32 million,including its minority ethnic population.Its capital is Taiyuan City.

When to go

Being at a high altitude,Shanxi Province has a cold and dry climate and has an annual rainfall of between 400-600 millimeters.The province is also frequently plagued by sandstorms,especially in the spring,so it is often useful to bring along both sunglasses and a hat when visiting.Generally speaking,the provinces climate is the best between May and October.

History

Shanxi is one of the birth places of Chinese civilizations with a long history and traditional culture.As early as one hundred million years ago,the ancestors of the Chinese lived and propagated in this region.Legend tells us that the Yellow Emperor,founder of the Chinese nation,once lived in Shanxi for a certain period.Today,many Neolithic sites from that period can still be seen dotted across the vast expanse of the province.

What to see

Shanxi is endowed with an abundance of cultural sites from its long history.Most of the ancient structures were built before the Liao and Song Dynasties.So it is the reason why Shanxi is often called the Chinese Ancient Architecture Museum.The more obvious of these include:the Buddhist wonder of the Yungang Grottoes in Datong City,the ancient city of Pingyao which was listed as a World Cultural Heritage site by UNESCO in 1997,the oldest and tallest ancient wooden pagoda in China,the Wooden Pagoda of Yingxian County and the remote Shuanglin and Jinci Temples,which are well worth the long journeys for the visitors.

Of course,there are a number of natural magnificent and beautiful places that can also be seen in Shanxi.The most famous of them include Wutai Mountain with the longest and most prestigious history in the four most well-known Buddhist holy lands of China,the whistling rage of the Yellow Rivers Kettle Spout waterfalls (Hukou Waterfalls) and one of the Five Sacred Mountains in China - Mt Hengshan.

My name is ZhangYanYu. Im in Grade Seven. I like to go to school. Now,I want to tell you something about our class.

Our classroom is very beautiful. There is a blackboard on the front well. There is a teachers desk in front of the blackboard. There are two boxes of chalk and an eraser on the desk. There are many nice maps on the wall. There are some beautiful flowers on the sill. Our classroom is very nice and clean. There are two tall trees behind our classroom.We ofter play games wiht teacher under trees. There is a small garden on front of our classroom.Its nice .There is small river not far from our school ,in front of the garden. We often swim in it in summer.I like our class.I like our school.

Hi, My name is Jay, Im from the beautiful ancient city of Kaifeng. As you  can see, I am a very casual girl, and a lot of people here, like 18-year-old, I  love a lot, I love guitar, love to sing love dancing, very fond of English, I am  very love to watch "Prison Break", like the actor micheal clever wit.

I like making friends, and hope you will be able to and I have become good  friends, I think I will, and you get along with.