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初中英语作文我的家乡哈尔滨(精彩20篇)

重阳节登高望远,也是思乡的季节。让人想起已故的亲人,同时也对于亲人有一种珍惜的感觉。下面是开学吧小编整理的作文,快来看看吧,希望对你有帮助哦。

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初中简短寒假英语日记

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Do you know what a snowman is? Let us a make!

First, we make a big ball of snow. Then we make another is smaller than the first snowball.

Now we make another very small snowball. We put it on top. Let us make a face on the snowman. Carrot is his nose. Some little

rockets for his mouth and eyes. Two sticks for his arms.This hat are on the top for his hat.

Ok!The snowman is wonderful.

你知道雪人是什么吗?我们来做一个吧!

首先,我们做一个大雪球。然后我们做一个比第一个小点的雪球。

现在我们做另一个小点的雪球。我们把它放在上边。让我们来制作雪人的脸吧。胡萝卜是他的鼻子。一些小的身故体验深谷他的嘴巴和眼睛。两个树枝是他的胳膊。这个帽子放在上边作为他的帽子。

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篇1:初中英语作文狗是人类的朋友

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Nowadays there are so many animals out there make people in real life  happier. Dog is the best example to identify. As many people believe dog is  mans best freind, this is very true.It not just entertain us, however,  sometimes dogs could actually help their owner do some work!

When we are bored, we might take our dogs for a walk, we could play with  them. Mainly dogs listen to their owner all the time, they are most obedient pet  out of all kinds of animals.Peeple like dogs simply because, they are cute, they  make fun of us and most significantly, dogs make people happier. Therefore,  saying dogs are peoples friend have nothing wrong, they actually obtain the  most closest relationship with the human beings out of all animals.

[初中英语作文人类朋友

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篇2:春节英语初中生

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Today is the beginning of seven, I told my cousin went to the big red flag in the town of Villa Zhuo watched a wonderful "Spring Festival acrobatics extravaganza." After we came to find a place performing acrobatics, find a place to sit, then waited patiently show began.

"Show began," I do not know who shouted. We immediately recovered.

The first program, the small monkey riding old goat rope walk. I saw the old goat monkey carrying a small step by step down the rope, hey, before. Really amazing ah! The next program more exciting! For example: a tightrope, tigers jump through hoops, lions and tigers slide across the beautiful swing, bears do sports, air swing ...... and so this "Spring Festival acrobatic extravaganza," the protagonist is mainly animals.

This "Spring Festival acrobatics show" really meaningful ah!

今天是年初七,我跟表姐一起到大冲镇的卓旗山庄观看了一场精彩 “贺新春杂技汇演”。我们来到之后,先找到表演杂技的地方,找个位置坐下,再耐心的等待着表演开始。

“表演开始了”,不知道是谁大喊一声。我们立刻回过神来。

第一个节目是,小猴子骑老山羊走绳子。只见老山羊背着小猴子一步一步地走在绳子上,嘿,过了。真令人惊讶呀!接下来的节目更精彩!比如说:走钢丝、老虎跳火圈、狮子老虎跨美人滑秋千、狗熊做运动、空中秋千……等等 这 “贺新春杂技汇演”的主角主要是动物们。

这次的“贺新春杂技汇演”真是有意义啊!

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篇3:哈尔滨游记作文初中

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中央大街位于我的家乡哈尔滨市中心,它有“哈尔滨第一街”的美称。它可是最能表达哈尔滨这座“东方小巴黎”特色的街道。

中央大街目前是亚洲最大最长的步行街。全长1400米,路宽11米,人行道宽2至6米。最让世人所称奇的是它的路面,铺路用的方块石为花岗岩制成,形状像极了俄式的小面包,经过百年的洗礼,它们一块块还是那样密实而精巧,踩在上边那起起伏伏、光滑细腻的韵律质感,让人步履翩然。道路两旁是具有欧式风格的建筑,全是大大小小的商场和饭馆,每天都有无数人来到这里。如果你白天到这条街上来玩儿,会有一种身处艺术长廊的感觉。

但到了晚上,这里更是热闹非凡!

每天晚上,大约8点左右,大大小小的商场和酒吧就亮起了小灯笼,就像是打出了一个个迎客的信号。在休闲广场上摆了许多桌椅,让人们可以一边聊天,一边观赏街景,感受这条街的特别之处。

你可别以为到这条街来只能观光和购物,休闲酒吧里汇集了全国各地的风味小吃,比如:云南米线、新疆烧烤、四川麻辣烫……让你吃饱喝足的同时还能欣赏到精彩的有爵士乐、时装秀、相声等表演。

这就是我家乡的一条步行街,它的建成为我们提供了一个休闲娱乐购物的好去处。。

我喜爱家乡这条古老的街道!

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篇4:初中英语作文:面对挫折

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People always say in one life, they can’t be sailing plainly, it means people will meet all kinds of difficulties and they are easy to feel frustrated, the one who gets over frustration, the one who becomes successful.

When we meet difficulties, we must learn to face it in the optimistic way, so we can see the hope and have the faith to move on.

The difficult moment is just the small interlude of our lives. As the saying that failure is the mother of success, so we need to learn lessons from failure and then when the time comes, we will get successful. Facing frustration is unavoidable, if we can handle it well, we will win.

人们总是说人的一生不可能一帆风顺,这意味着人们会遇到各种各样的困难,他们很容易会感到受挫,谁能走出挫折,谁就能获得成功。当我们遇到困难,必须要学着去乐观面对,这样我们才能看到希望,有信念前进。困难时刻不过是我们生活的小插曲。俗话说失败乃成功之母,我们要从失败中学到教训,当时机到来,我们就会成功。面对挫折是不可避免的,如果我们能处理好,就能赢得胜利。

[初中英语作文:面对挫折

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篇5:初中优秀英语作文:大雪

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IT snowed heavily last week in northern China. Big snows fell on Beijing, Hebei, Shanxi, Ningxia and Xinjiang. For many cities, it was the biggest snowfall in 50 years. The snow made traveling hard. Many schools had to close for days.

Jia Aizhen, 14, lives in Taiyuan, Shanxi. She should have a mid-term (期中的) test on Wednesday. Because of the snow, they had the test on Sunday instead.

It was good because we had more time to review (复习) our lessons, said Jia. She enjoyed the snow. It was as deep as 15cm and came to halfway up her leg. I felt peaceful (平和的) and relaxed (放松的) to see the white snowy world.

Kang Xinyi, 13, and Wang Danyang, 13, are classmates at Shijiazhuang No 43 Middle School in Hebei. Their school stopped on Wednesday. Kang said the snow in the yard was as deep as 40cm.

It was so good we didn’t have to go to school! said Kang. Kang, Wang and another friend had a snowball fight (打仗) and made snowmen. They also helped clear snow off the roads.

I never saw such a big snow, said Wang. Last year we only made a small snow panda, but this year our snowman is as tall as 1 meter!

If the snow didn‘t make trouble for traffic (交通), we would hope it would never stop! said the girls.

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篇6:生活初中英语

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I have studied in my middle school for three years.My life in middle school

is rich and I have learned a lot. I get knowledge from text books as well as

from extra curricular activities. I studied hard in the past three years so that

I got perfect scores. But, I also attach importance to other aspects, such as

making friends, hobbies, health and sports. I build good relationships with my

classmates. They become an important part of my life.I like to chat with them

after class that makes me relax and comfortable. My hobby is swimming. Every

Sunday morning, I go to swim with my friends or my father. When I have fun, I

build a healthy body. Its so great to me. In one word, my life in middle is

colorful and unforgettable.

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篇7:寒假英语作文初中

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Once a child asked such a question: What can I benefit from being "a good

child"? Among the many answers he received one ran like this: "A good child" is

the most precious gift God gives to you. And the same can be said for being

honest. It pays to be honest.

Yes, its true that dishonesty exists almost everywhere in the society.

Consumers often found themselves being blackmailed by those merchants selling

shoddy products; and there are students

Cheating in order to pass the exams or get high marks; moreover, we are not

short of examples that many rich professionals evade the taxes by sacrificing

the interests of government.

But havent we seen their results? "A fall into the pit, a gain in

customers wit", which would surely drive those dishonest merchants out of

business. Regret of wasting time yet being

Empty-handed would accompany those dishonest students all their life. On

the contrary, we could have all they lost, especially a good reputation and a

clear conscience, which are the best qualities of human beings. Thats why we

say "It Pays to Be Honest".

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篇8:家乡的新变化初中作文

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我的家乡在无时无刻的变化,人们的生活水平也大大提高了。比如说我们家乡的住房从简陋的楼房到美丽的高楼大厦;从以前的粗茶淡饭到现在的大鱼大肉,变化可真大呀!

听爸爸说:改革开放前,我的家乡次营镇还是一个贫穷的乡镇。到处都是一片片的田野,家乡的人们住的都是茅草屋,用石头堆砌的屋,生活过得非常艰苦,哪家有困难了,都有可能无法生存下去。现在改革开放以后,次营从贫穷的乡镇逐渐走向富裕,以前人们住的都是泥砖屋,茅草屋,现在每家每户都住上高楼大厦,以前到处都是一片田野,现在到处是高楼大厦,以前的公路是烂泥路,现在是宽阔的柏油路,当时只有少量公共汽车,现在人们生活改善了生活质量提高,许多家庭都拥有私家车。过去连通往乡村的公路也没有,现在汽车有了,一通通道家门口,可方便了。

听妈妈说:改革开放前家乡的人们的衣着朴素单调,都是用麻布做的,颜色都是一种,不漂亮,而且还很宽大,行走不便,有的小孩甚至还穿着哥哥姐姐穿破了的衣服;改革开放以来,人们的衣服样式丰富多彩:有皮草衣,有小夹克,有单衣,有棉衣,有短袖衣,有中袖衣,有长袖衣,有迷你超短裙,有长裙,还有连衣裙,有长牛仔裤,有短牛仔裤,有条绒裤,还有单裤,有绵长筒袜,有绵短筒袜,有长丝袜,有短丝袜,现在的人们穿的还很时尚个性,2009年还流行蝙蝠衣。现在穿的衣服颜色五花八门,有七彩色的,有红,有橘,有黄,有绿,有紫色等,穿上不宽不大,可漂亮了。

听外公说:刚建国时期,家乡人们的生活贫困,食不果腹或粗茶淡饭就只能填饱肚子,有的家庭孩子多,饭不够吃,大人为了让孩子吃饱,不吃饭,都有可能饿死。 改革开放前,很有改善,但食物匮乏单调、票证盛行,人们营养不足,有些农村没有解决基本的温饱问题 。改革开放以来,人们不但吃饱,还可以吃好,营养均衡,粗细搭配,而且有些家庭现在还搞“忆苦思甜”的活动,现在绿色食品深入人心。

啊!家乡,你和祖国一样翻天覆地的变化让个次营镇的镇民都为你感到骄傲,虽然你现在平平凡凡,普普通通,但是,我相信,你总有一天会非常辉煌!

[家乡的新变化初中作文

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篇9:关于我的家乡的英语作文

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【网络综合 - 英文写作翻译英语作文】

My hometown is beautiful scenery, rich products, beautiful, and is a beautiful place.

My hometown is in ji hills, although not a big place, it is a very intelligent and a town. In the west of her was a famous JiShan temple, the tomb. Is a national key protection object, trees lush, hill strewn at random have send, has now become a tourist area. Attracted many domestic and foreign tourists to come and visit.

JiShan is rich in rice, fish, animal husbandry developed. JiShan fish sell well all over the country, JiShan dragon meters and color white, taste sweet, is famous at home and abroad.

Every village of JiShan repaired smooth tarmac. It was built JiShan people, walk in the street, mood is extremely happy. In the field ?

我的家乡风景优美,物产丰富,人杰地灵,是一个美丽的地方.

我的家乡在纪山镇,虽说不是一个很大的地方,却是一个很有灵气的一个名镇.在她的西部是有名的纪山庙,古墓众多.是国家的重点保护对象,这里树木茂盛,小山错落有致,现已成为旅游区.吸引了许多国内、国外的游客前来游玩.

纪山盛产大米、鱼牧业发达.纪山鱼畅销全国各地,纪山的龙米色泽洁白、口感香甜,更是名扬国内外.

纪山的各个村都修了平整的柏油马路.这是纪山人民修建的,走在马路上,心情极其舒畅.田野里是辛勤劳动的叔叔、阿姨、伯伯们,是他们造就了我们美丽的纪山.

我爱我的家乡,我爱家乡的人们,我的心在家乡.

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篇10:初中一年级作文:家乡的春

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等待着,等待着,春姑娘拉着优雅婉转的曲子,一步一步悄悄地走到了我的家乡,家乡的春。

看,那一大片大片的草原,多像一张软绵绵的绿地毯,舒适无比。小草就像个活泼可爱的小娃娃,冲破一切艰难险阻,迫不及待地破土而出,睁眼天真无知地望着这个美妙奇幻的世界,嫩绿如酥,以顽强旺盛的生命力,一次又一次地迎接春的到来。

花儿们也绽放开了,它们争奇斗艳,开得多么鲜艳美丽!桃花就像个婀娜多姿的小姑娘,花枝招展地挂在高高的树枝上,向下面的花儿炫耀着,沾沾自喜。花儿们也不甘示弱,更努力地绽放出最美的自己。你看,这一大片大片的,红的似火,粉的似唇,白的似雪,黄的似金。它们都美丽地绽放着,像灿烂的烟火,随风舞蹈,看这世界:有山有水有河流,有天有地有风光。都眉开眼笑的。

风雨也来了,多么使人心旷神怡。风轻柔和煦地吹着,雨细细密密地下着,仿佛在演奏一曲美妙的乐章。它们牵起手来,共同走过世界的每一个角落,演奏着复苏曲。风就像位慈祥的母亲,用手轻轻地抚摸着你的脸颊,柔柔的,舒舒服服的。雨也来了,细细密密的,看那雨珠晶莹如珍珠,透亮如碧玉。像软软的牛毛,像密密的花针,像细细的轻丝,滋润着你。当它打在你脸上,当它透过那土壤,是多么清凉舒适。风雨交加时,更使人神清气爽。

最妙的就是那些小动物呀!你看,蜜蜂们正合作着,飞到花朵上忙碌地采着蜜呢!它们不辞辛劳,为人们酿造蜂蜜,也为大自然增添了一份美丽。还有那各式各样的蝴蝶,就像娇艳美丽的舞蹈家,翩翩起舞,它们轻轻地扇动着美丽的翅膀,优雅地跳着舞蹈,黄莺和百灵也高兴起来了,放开了嗓子,叽叽喳喳地唱起了悦耳动听的歌,那歌声婉转,抑扬顿挫,为大自然增添了许多生机勃勃。

春姑娘来了,带着喜悦与欢乐;春姑娘来了,迎着鲜花与赞美;春姑娘来了,带来美丽与芳香!我爱我的家乡,但我更爱我家乡的春!

[初中一年级作文:家乡的春

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篇11:幸福观初中英语作文

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人类已进入了一个崭新的世纪,不同的人有不同的幸福观。An Express Way to English (英语通)正在中学生中进行幸福观的讨论,请你根据下表的提示,用英语写一篇短文,以便向该刊投稿。

Students| Possessions| Benefits

Some |Money |Buying and doing anything

Some|Health |Enjoyment Some Wealth From parents free from work

Ι|Knowledge |For mankind

范文:

Happiness

Happiness means different things to different people. For example, some students believe that if they have much money or a large number of possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have money. Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can have everything. I don’t agree with the above points. We can’t buy many important things with money, such as health, happiness and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.

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篇12:我的家乡英语作文

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英语作文 我的家乡

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

英语作文 我的家乡

I am from ShenZhen. In spring ,the weather is warm and wet. I can play kite. In summer, the weather is hot and wet. I can swim in the swimming pool. In the autumn, the weather is cool and dry. I can play kite, too. In the winter, the weather is cold and dry. It never snow.

英语作文 我的家乡

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Welcome to my hometown! Shanghai is my hometown. It is a modern and busy

town. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see big trees and nice flowers. There are many restaurants in Shanghai. The food tastes very delicious.You can enjoy eyery minutes of it. Many visitors come here to enjoy it.

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篇13:写信介绍家乡英语

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dear eric,

it’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. now i’d like to tell you something about my hometown quanzhou.

the city stands on the west bank of the taiwan straight. it is a beautiful place for people to live in. its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built. more schools and hospitals are available for its people. however, there are still some problems, such as water, air and noise pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. in my opinion, quanzhou should develop its economy scientifically. i would also think that the growth of its housing construction should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

yours,

lihua

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篇14:初中生英语日记良好的健康

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We all wish (hope) to be happy, so we should take good care of our health.

Health is the best treasure (which) a man can possess. Money can do many things, but it cannot buy happiness. However, so long as man has good health, he can enjoy the pleasures of human life.

In order to insure good health we must pay attention to three things. They are-nourishing food, fresh air and proper exercise.

我们大家都希望快乐,所以我们应该好好保重健康。一个病人因为失去健康而很少快乐。

健康是一个人所能拥有最好的财富。钱能做许多事情,但是它却不能购买。然而,只要一个人有良好的健康,他就能享受人生的乐趣。

为了保证良好的健康,我们必须注意三件事情。它们是营养食物,新鲜空气和正当运动。

[初中英语日记良好的健康

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篇15:春节初中英语小

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Spring Festival is our traditional festival, as the saying goes, Chinese New Year.

On the day before the New Year, people go shopping in crowded stores. Some people buy chickens, ducks, geese, some people buy fish and meat, others buy biscuits, chocolate and other snacks...

One afternoon, my father took a broom and swept the house up and down. Mother rubbed the table and Windows clean with a duster. And I? It is to stick the decorations on the wall. The whole house became clean and beautiful. We were very happy.

Chinese New Year, for our children, is the most enjoyable, I look forward to that day.

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篇16:生日宴会初中英语作文

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昨天是我的生日,我十四岁。妈妈为我举行生日宴会,我邀请了我的一些朋友。妈妈送了我一些书作礼物,朋友们也为我带采了礼物。我们玩的很开心。

A Birthday Party

Yesterday was my birthday. I was fourteen years old. My mother had a party for me and I asked my friends to come. My mother gave me some books as birthday presents. My friends bought some presents for me. We had a good time.

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篇17:初中生暑假英语日记怎么写

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Matt gave us a class this afternoon, at the first part of the class, we saw a film. It was mainly about American football. After the film, we began t get to know the American football. It is similar to soccer, but it was much rougher. Players might get more easily. In another word, it was a game full of danger, they played just like fighting. One of the players just broke his leg during the match, and he would never play American football, because of his leg. What a pity! Matt told us that when he was in high school, he also take part in American football. He had broken his fingers for three times and his leg for once. Then I was puzzled, it was a very dangerous game, why was is popular?

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篇18:假期计划初中英语作文及翻译

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Summer holiday is coming. How excited! I havemade a plan for my summer holiday. First of all, I will go to Hong Kong tovisit my aunt. And then I will stay with her for a while. As Hong Kong is the shoppingparadise, of course, I will ask my aunt to go shopping with me . I will also eatthe delicious food there. And then I will go home. I know that study comesfirst. So I will finish my homework first. After that I will go out play withmy friends. And then I will take a good rest to prepare for my coming back toschool.

暑假即将来临。多么的兴奋啊!我已经为我的暑假制定了计划。首先,我会去香港拜访我的婶婶。之后我会和她呆一段时间。因为香港是购物天堂,当然我会叫我婶婶陪我一起去购物。我还要吃那里美味的食物。然后我就会回家。我知道学习是最重要的。所以回去之后我会先完成我的暑假作业。之后我就会和我的朋友出去玩。再之后我就会好好的休息来为回校做好准备。

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篇19:真正的美丽初中英语作文

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true beautyeveryone is attracted by beauty and beauty is powerful. but what is true beauty? perhaps you can get the answer from the following story.this morning i went to the market to buy some vegetables with my parents. on the way we all highly praised a young man in western-style clothes and leather shoes who was riding by. but he rode so fast that he knocked an old lady down carelessly.instead of stopping, he pretended not to see this and rode away quickly. we were all very angry with the young man. to our happiness, a girl in plain dress ran forward at once, helped the lady up and took her home. we all praised the girl.from this we know we cannot judge a person by his appearance. a person who is dressed beautifully may not have a beautiful soul. only a person who has a beautiful soul is really beautiful.

每个人都会被美所吸引,荚有强大的力量。但是什么是真正的美呢?或许你可以从下面的事情中得到答案。今天早上我和父母一起去市场买蔬菜,路上我们都赞叹一个西装革履的正骑车经过的年轻人。但是他骑得太快了,不小心把一位老妇人撞倒在地。而他却假装没看到,飞快地骑走了。我们都生那个年轻人的气。让人欣慰的是,一个穿着朴素的女孩立刻跑过来,扶起老人并把她送回了家。我们都夸奖这个小女孩。由此我们知道了,不能通过外表来判断一个人。一个身穿华服的人可能没有美好的心灵,拥有美丽灵魂的人才是真正美丽的。

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篇20:我的家乡作文初中作文我的家乡作文

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我的家乡作文江西省铅山县永铜小学四年级罗百川我的家乡在江西省铅山县永平镇,这里山清水秀,物产丰富。在我家的西边有一座山,因为它的主峰像一头勤劳的骆驼,所以人们叫它骆驼山。骆驼山是树的海洋,毛竹、松树、杉树都长得苍翠挺拔。清晨,骆驼山笼罩在一层淡淡的晨雾中,就像披上了一层轻纱。过了一会,这里热闹起来了,附近的村民出来种菜、养鱼、耕地。傍晚,许多人来到依山而建的森林公园散步,他们踩着石子铺成的小路,边走边聊天。如果走累了。就在石凳上休息一会儿。晚上,小路边的一盏盏路灯亮了,远远望去,就像一颗颗闪烁的星星。家乡有一条江叫桐木江。桐木江的水很清澈,可以看见水里的鱼。夏天,常常有人在这儿游泳、钓鱼。江两岸种有一棵棵垂柳,风一吹,柳树姑娘就甩着长长的辫子,跳起欢快的舞蹈。江上有座桥,叫大义桥。大义桥历史悠久,据说是宋朝的时候,鹅湖山峰顶寺的高僧大义禅师主持修建的。桥长150米,宽4.8米。

大义桥十分坚固,全部用麻石修建。为了保护古迹,车不能开上桥,只能走人。桥下是几个大大的桥洞,站在桥上可以看到家乡的美丽风光。我的家乡有许多美味小吃,像“灯盏粿”、“千层糕”、“南瓜粿”、“烫粉”等,其中我最爱吃的是烫粉。粉是米做成的,烫粉时,先把粉用开水烫熟,再浇上事先熬好的排骨汤,然后放上肉丝,撒上葱花,一碗香喷喷的烫粉就做好了。夹起一根放在嘴边,轻轻一吸,“哧溜”,那根粉一下就滑进了我的喉咙。再喝一口汤,哇,真鲜!这就是我可爱的家乡,你们想不想来参观呀?指导老师杨清[简评]习作条理清晰,按照总一分一总的结构,先总写家乡的位置和特点,再具体地描述了家乡的山、家乡的水、家乡的小吃,最后总括全文。习作语句流畅,情感真挚。小作者还善于运用比喻、拟人等修辞手法,使得文章的表达更加生动,更具可读性。

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