2018年广州英语中考作文范文（20篇）

英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚；

关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；

组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；

字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

You are writing a complaint to the manager about the hotel.

题目：你向饭店经理写信投诉酒店服务。

(以e-mail的形式出现)

On the whole, my stay here was satisfactory. The hotel was comfortable and the room was bright, but it was too dirty. Whats more the food was compeletely awful and the service was really terrible. I have stayed in your hotel for several times and everything is getting worse, though the price is fair.

总体而言，我在这边住得比较满意。酒店很舒服，房间也很明亮，但是太脏了。另外，这儿的食物太糟糕了，服务也很差。我已经在这里住过好几次了，虽然价钱还不错，但每件事都越来越糟糕。

Please try to clean the room a bit more often and find someone who is capable of cooking and who knows how to talk friendly to others.

请时常打扫一下房间，找个真正懂烹饪的和懂得跟别人和睦相处的员工!

饮食安全是指对人体健康不造成任何急性、亚急性或者慢性危害。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语作文范文，希望对你有帮助。

假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑。你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿。

★ 范文1

Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health。

Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon。

★ 范文2

From this incident,we can see that there are still more things to be done.Firstly,the government needs everything possible to ensure the quality of products,particularly the safety of food as this concerns everyones life.Secondly,as for the producers,it is very important for them to be morally honest.They should never try to pursue profit or economic growth at the expense of health and life of people.Thirdly,we consumers must attach importance to the things we eat and develop an awareness of how to protect our legal rights if cheated.Only in this way will we be able to build a more secure and harmonious society.

提示性作文：就是给出一个标题或无标题，给出具体的内容，规定一定的字数，让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容，因此考生可以不再列出提纲，只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。

写好提示性作文应注意的事项

1、仔细审题，明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读，弄清这个题目要表达什么，然后对所给信息进行整理、组织，按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。

2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中，考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写，不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度，不要字数过多或过少。

例题分析

1．假设你叫李华，6月18日在报上看到一篇《救救老虎》的报道。想到近来看见有人在路边销售老虎骨头(bone)

等事，你感到担忧.请你给某报社编辑部写一封信。

要点如下：

1.老虎是国家保护动物，目前数量日趋减少；

2.写信原因是目睹到有人为赚钱,滥捕滥杀老虎；

3.森林的大量砍伐破坏了老虎的生存环境.呼吁严惩捕猎者(hunter)，希望大家共同努力，创造一个人类和动物共同的幸福家园，不计入总词

注意：

1.书信应包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译。

2.词数：80左右。(开头已给出数)

Deareditor,

Ive just read an article in a newspaper about saving tigers. It says that the number of tigers is becoming smaller in our country. Its terrible. I saw a few people sell bones of tigers by the roadside the other day.I also learned that some people killed tigers in order to make money.And too many trees have been cutdown. The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. Tigers are in danger of dying out.

Our government should punish the hunters.We should try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful,not only for human beings but also for animals.

Yours faithfully，

LiHua

Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：

When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)

How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)

What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)

中考英语满分作文：

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

春节习俗与计划，如何过2009年的春节，假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。

The spring Festival

Dear Jhon :

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历). It’s China’s New Year’s Day. So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰) for houses.

About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner. And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses. People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion（团聚）.

On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night. And there will be some interesting programmes on TV. The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.

On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings. When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friengs . I ’m going to Diseyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessinos do exercise every day help the old and children .Wellcom to China. Waiting for your e -mail.

Yours

Lingling

导语：现在是互联网的时代，很多人都沉迷于网络游戏中，你觉得这种现象是好是坏呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.

【参考译文】

李华花太多时间玩电脑游戏，他落后于别人。作为他的好朋友，我必须做些事来帮助他。

首先，我认为学好功课对他很重要。他应该把大部分时间花在学习上而不是电脑游戏上。其次，我必须告诉他玩电脑游戏太多对他的健康有害，尤其是对他的眼睛。所以他必须放弃。放学后我可以和他多做运动。也许他会对体育更感兴趣而不是电脑游戏。然后我会让他更加专心学习。当然，我会尽我所能帮助他的所有科目。我认为我可以在许多有趣的方式，让他在学习中找到很多乐趣。同时，我会请他的父母和我们的老师帮助他，太。如果我尝试这些，我相信他很快就会取得很大的进步。

【海珠区】在新华字典里，“错过”这个词的含义是：动词，失去(时机、对象)

要求：①文体自选(诗歌除外)。②600字以上。③文中不能出现考生姓名和所在学校。

错过了清晨的朝霞，错过了正午的骄阳，错过了夕阳中的绚烂，错过了暮色中的朦胧，也许还会错过迷人的月色。

错过了春日的烂漫，错过了夏季的奔放，错过了秋天的丰硕，错过了冬日的清冽，也许还会错过春夏秋冬转换的空隙。

错过了童年的幼稚，错过了少年的懵懂，错过了青春的激扬，错过了中年的凝重，也许还会错过老年的安详。

错过了青梅竹马的两小无猜，错过了卿卿我我的初恋情怀，错过了海誓山盟的相亲相爱，错过了耳鬓厮摩的相依相偎，也许还要错过超脱于现实之外、凌驾于精神之上的相遇相知。

人生中总会有那么多的错过，这种错过有时会让云流泪，让风止步，让春夏秋冬停滞，让生命轮回有情。承受过错过之痛的人都明白：一时的错过，也许就会成就一世的落寞。但又有什么办法呢?人不能让自己生活在感慨里。

这世上，有无数春雨，无数清晨，无数落叶，无数场大雪。错过的不只这一个。无数完美，不是每一个都完美;无数缺陷，每一个都有缺陷。

【越秀区】一 次班级表演，我发现自己竟拥有如此美妙的歌喉;一番书海徜徉，我发现思绪驰骋原来是这样的自由;一回亲友送别，我发现从此多了一份牵挂;一轮朝阳初升，那 片辉煌居然洒满我的心头;也可能，一场误会摩擦，我还发现自己并不那么高尚，理智，成熟……行走在这迷茫而美丽的青春路上，我们是否步履匆匆，来不及发现 别样的自我?

请以“刹那间，我发现了自我”为题，写一篇不少于600字的记叙文，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

【荔湾区】请以“一样的精彩”为题目写一篇作文。

要求：①文体自选(诗歌除外)。②600字以上。③文中不能出现考生姓名和所在学校。

【黄埔区】请以“_________伴我成长”为题目写一篇作文。

要求：先将题目补充完整，然后作文，文体不限，不少于600字，文中不能出现考生姓名和所在学校的名称。

【天河区】最美

要求：①文体自选(诗歌除外)。②600字以上。③文中不能出现考生的姓名和所在学校名称。

(微编省略的部分，请各位同学自己进行审题，想想从哪个角度写才能出采，搜集相关的素材进行作文创作)

附：中考作文六大高分技巧

1.卷面

在考场上一定要记住，必须一笔一划写清楚，不要太大，也不要太小。千万别写得太潦草。你不认真，阅卷老师也不会认真。

2.文体

中考对作文的要求是：不得设置审题障碍，要淡化文体要求，鼓励学生写真情实感。据此，我们可以明确地准备记叙文一种体裁。这里提一下小应用文。书信、通知、颁奖词、短信、导语、简单的说明文、分析概括某种现象等，可能还会出现。

3.标题

如果是命题作文，我们自然不用考虑起标题。如果是半命题或其他形式，我们则要尽力求新。

4.立意

作文的立意必须积极向上。对于有争议的内容，不要太大胆。譬如，你要求中日开战夺回钓鱼岛，中菲海军在黄岩岛摆战场，你骂朝鲜独裁，等等类似的内容，只能降低你的分数。

5.结构

作文的开头不要很长，不要因为玩弄作文书上的技巧而弄得开头超过了5行。同学们要记住，六七百字的作文，要有六七段，千万不要出现"大肚子作文"、"大头作文"，"大尾巴作文"，这样结构不协调，视觉也不够顺眼。

6.语言

句子最好短一些，不要一逗到底，一个句子的主谓宾定状补都有了，就用句号，并注意修辞手法。

not very far from our house there is a small river that has many wild ducks. the ducks are very colorful during the spring mating season. male ducks have multiple colors of green.

gray, red, and blue; the female ducks are brown all the year round. this section of the river is also part of a small island park where people picnic and play ball. wooden tables and chairs, metal boxes for cooking, and big trash cans are available.sometimes the ducks will leave the water and walk ashore looking for food among the picnic grounds. quite often my sister and i like to bring old bread there to feed the ducks.

if is really a very peaceful place to relax and play, and study, too.

中招考试即将到来，许多学生感到压力很大，为此很烦恼。你校的校刊特意进行了课后放松方式的调查。请你以”Learn to relax yourself “为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示：

1)学生压力大及其表现

2)学会放松很重要

3)常见的放松方式

4)最适合的自我放松方式

5)我的建议

Learn to relax yourself

Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.

It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favourite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after a good rest.

参考译文

学会放松自己

现在许多9年级的学生压力太大。上课时他们总是觉得太累了以至于不能认真听老师讲课。

对学生来说放松是很重要的。只有这样他们才能学习健康。这里有一些不同的方法来放松自己。例如，他们可以尝试有足够的睡眠，或者他们可以听他们喜欢的音乐课后。他们也可以读一些书或做一些运动。对我来说，我经常和朋友们出去玩。

当你在学习的时候，不要忘记放松。好好休息后你会学得更好。

和时态一样，语态也是动词的一种形式，用来说明句中主语和谓语的关系。如果动作由主语执行，就可使用主动语态，如果主语不是由主语执行，主语是动作的承受者，则可使用被动语态。由此我们可以看出英语动词有两种语态：主动语态和被动语态。

被动语态：表示主语是动作的承受者，什么事情被主语做。被动语态的构成和形式被动语态由助动词be+及物动词的过去分词构成，一定要记住是及物动词。助动词必须与主语的人称和数一致，注意要与我们前一讲学过的八个时态配合使用。

适合被动语态的情况：

不知道动作由谁发出，或由于某种原因没有必要说明谁发出动作。如： This table is made of wood.需要突出或强调动作的承受者时，如： This park was built for children.

注意：主动句中的主语如果是people，they，somebody等含糊的表示人或人们，没有确指执行者是谁，为被动句时，通常省略by+执行者。如：The door was opened secretly. But nobody came in.

注意：在主动句里,不定式在make，see，hear等动词后面作宾语补足语时都不带to，但变成被动句时，后面的不定式都需带to。如：He was made to do that work.

主动语态不能变被动语态的情况：学了被动语态，别以为主动句和被动句可以随意转换，千万要注意呀!有些主动语态不能转换成被动语态。当宾语是反身代词时, 如：You should take care of yourself.当谓语是表状态的而不是表具体动作的及物动词时，如：Does the skirt suit you

1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言

2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…

3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……

4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，

5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…

6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…

7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…

8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……

9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是

11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…

a.体育运动的好处

b. 体育运动可能带来的副作用

c. 我参加体育活动的体会

Sports do us good in many respects (TS). It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, "there are two sides to everything", and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. Whats more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.

My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.

[中考英语的作文——体育运动的好处和坏处

The 21st century, the thought of the teenagers, we and our beloved one generation, will never be able to melt together, seems to have no why, I do not know why. Adults like to impose their ideas in a new generation of us, and we, must also accept the ideology of "unreasonable", if not accept, perhaps, in the eyes of an adult, our behavior is what is called a rebellious, not sensible, wings hard, but, you never know what we carry in our hearts, can only silently bear all this, buried our own thoughts, not move to the attraction.

We are the -- the future of The Times. We have our own dreams, we have our own in the future, we have our own life to live, all this, go to our own, you can never be with us life, the way back, but also to go on our own. Please let go of your generous hand, let us fly yourself.

Times are changing, the life also is changing. Different time, different people, have their own way. Dear, father, mother, we grow up, learn to walk, bumpy road ahead, lets face it alone, raising more than ten years, we wont forget, you also should have a rest.

二十一世纪，我们这些青少年的思想，与我们所敬爱的上一辈人，永远无法融在一起，似乎没有为什么，也不知道为什么。大人们喜欢把他们的思想强加在我们新一辈人的身上，而我们，也必须接受这种“无理”的思想，如若不接受，也许，在大人的眼睛里，我们的行为就是所谓的叛逆、不懂事、翅膀硬了，可是，你们永远不会知道我们心中所想的一切，只能默默地承受这一切，埋藏我们自己的思想，不动生色。

我们是这个时代的——未来。我们有自己的梦想，我们有自己的未来，我们有我们自己的生活要过，这一切，要我们自己去承担，你们永远不能陪伴我们一生，往后的路，还要靠我们自己去走。请你们放开你们那宽厚的手，让我们自己飞翔吧。

时代在变，生活也在变。不同的时代，不同的人，有自己的路。亲爱的——爸爸，妈妈，我们长大了，学会走路了，前面坎坷的路，让我们独自面对吧，十几年的养育之恩，我们不会忘记，你们也该休息休息了。

E-Books Are Good

It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.

Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.

In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.

My birthday is on .i celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.every year,i hold a little birthday party and invite my friends over. we chat and play a lot of games together. the best part of it is that i love the birthday cake and the gifts i get from my parents and my friends. i also get some money on my birthday.i can buy what i want with the money. i have GREat fun on my birthdays. but on the other hand, i also understand that i am 1 year older after each birthday. and that means i should be more responsible for myself and i should also my self-aware. i should understand more things and be less ignorant!fianlly, i should be thankful for my parents,i know they have done their best in raising me up.

My birtiday is on XXX. I always have both happy and sad feelings on my birthday. Why I am happy? I have group of friends that come over to celebrate with me. And they give me birthday presents, sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. Also, I can feel how much my family loves me because my parents always make a birthday cake for me. They do not go to buy one, but make one themselves. I feel so happy about that. However, I understand my mother was the one who suffered the most pain on the date I came to the world. I feel so sorry for my mother for what she had suffered. But I promise her, I will take good care of her when I have that ability.

[中考英语作文:My birthday

As we all know，the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places，we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping，and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment ，there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

If you start preparing for the exams ahead, you’ll feel a lot better about getting everything accomplished.

Here are some ways to help you prepare your mind and body for a successful final exam season:

First,you should focus your time on difficult classes.

If you always do well in a course,then you obviously don’t need to spend as much time studying for that course.You should spend most of your study time on the difficult courses where your grade is borderline.

Second,spending time reviewing notes is also necessary.

By simply going over all your class notes, you’ll get a good overview of the specific areas you should start studying. This will also provide your mind with a good summary of everything you’ve been learning

Besides,you can design a study schedule and stick to It.

By setting aside time now to focus on the final exam, you’re preparing your mind for what’s ahead. And you’ll also find areas that you have questions about. This will provide you plenty of time to get answers from your professors.

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

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一、表示递进关系的关键词语

Additionally 加之;又

besides 此外;除……之外

equally important 同样重要的是

furthermore 此外;而且

in addition 另外

in other words 换句话说

last but not least 最后但同样重要的是

moreover 而且;此外

that is say 即;就是;换句话说

二、表示转折关系的关键词语

although 虽然;尽管

at the same time 同时;但是

despite 不管;尽管;不论

even if 即使

even though 即使

however 然而;可是

in spite of 不管

instead 代替;而不是

nevertheless 然而;不过

on the contrary 正相反

otherwise 另外;不同地

regardless of 不管;不顾

still 依然;仍然

though 虽然;可是

while 而

yet 然而;但是;仍

三、表示选择关系的关键词语

either…or… ……或……

instead of… ……，而不是……

neither…nor… ……和……都不……

not…but… 不是……而是……

rather than… 宁可;胜过

whether…or not 是否

四、表示比较关系的关键词语

compare with / to 与……比较

equally 相等地;平等地

in comparison with 与……比较

in contrast 相反;大不相同

in contrast to 和……对比

in the same way 同样地

instead 代替;改为

on the contrary 正相反

while 而

五、表示因果关系的关键词语

accordingly 因此;从而

as a result of 作为结果

because (of) 因为

consequently 从而;因此

due to 由于;应归于

hence 因此;从此

in that 由于;因为;既然

now that 因为;既然

on account of 由于

owing to 由于;因……的缘故

so 所以

so that 所以

thanks to 由于

therefore 因此;所以

thus 因此

六、用于表示总结的关键词语

above all 最重要的是

accordingly 于是

as a consequence 因此

as a result 结果

as has been noted 如前所述

as I have said 如我所述

at last 最后

briefly 简单扼要地

by doing so 如此

certainly 当然地;无疑地

consequently 因此

eventually 最后

hence 因此

in a word 总之

in brief 简言之

in conclusion 总;最后

in short 简而言之

in summary 简要地说

in sum 总之;简而言之

obviously 显然

on the whole 总体来说;整个看来

to conclude 总而言之

to speak frankly 坦白地说

to sum up 总而言之

to summarize 总而言之

请以“出错”为题目写一篇文章。

要求：1、文体自选(诗歌除外); 2、600字以上; 3、文中不能出现考生的姓名和所在学校名称。

出 错

“啪”的一声，手中的碗被我重重地摔在了地上，饭菜与碗的碎片混合在一起，洒满了一地。我也残忍地将妈妈的那颗心摔碎了，我像一只失去理智的野兽，破门而出……

晚秋的风冷飕飕地吹着，可心中却有一股热浪在翻滚，刚刚发生的种种情形不断地在脑海中闪现。

带着一星期的疲惫，风尘仆仆地回到家中，妈妈早已精心地为我准备了一桌可口的饭菜。橘黄的灯光笼罩着小屋，桌上的饭菜散发着诱人的香味，显得非常的温 馨。我胡乱地拨动着盘里的菜，一副挑三拣四的样子。妈妈只是一愣，也没有说什么，继续吃饭。突然，妈妈问了一句：“最近学习吃力吗?”我只是应付式地回答 了一句：“还行!”语气中带着几分生硬和不耐烦。我的这种态度引起了妈妈的不满，妈妈说了我几句：“你这是用什么态度在跟我说话?每个星期回来，都把脸一 绷，你摆给谁看?”

妈妈的几句话点燃了我心中那根存积已久的导火线。十五年来，我第一次对着妈妈大吼道：“我就是摆给你看的，你根本一点儿都不理解我心中的苦恼，只会说那些听了耳朵生老茧的话。”我第一次摔碗，第一次破门而出……

风依旧在吹，心中的那股热浪也渐渐平息。冰凉的风吹来，让我冷静了许多。我总是一味的埋怨妈妈不理解我，可是我又什么时候向妈妈说过我的心事呢?每次， 妈妈见我心情不好，总是关心地问我遇到了什么麻烦事，我每每总是应付了事地敷衍几句。我只知一句句地埋怨妈妈不理解我，却忽略了妈妈眼神中淡淡的哀愁……

这一刻我才知道自己是多么的残忍!我一次又一次用冷漠去刺痛妈妈的心，可妈妈她总是把无限的痛楚都埋到内心深处，依旧悉心地照顾着我，一次又一次尝试着走进我的内心世界，可我给妈妈的永远是一扇锁得紧紧的大门。

“我错了，回家吗?”我犹豫了，刚才我那样冲动，妈妈会原谅我吗?风吹动着树叶，发出“簌簌”的声响，好像在催促我回家。

“回家吧!去向妈妈道歉!”心里不停地对自己说。我不由得加快了脚步。渐渐地，我看见房屋前透出的诱人的灯火，似乎已感觉到妈妈的那份焦急……

一次出错的叛逆，让我重新拾起妈妈那份沉甸甸的爱。