初一英语教学工作总结(优秀20篇)

今天一大早，我就风风火火的赶到少年宫。这是为什么呢？因为我今天要参加英语剧表演。

刚进会场，哈，我们已经迟了里面早已热闹非凡。第一个上场的表演的节目是狮子觅食。一个同学头戴狮子面具威风凛凛的出场了。只见他伸伸懒腰说道：“I  am   hungry，What’s  for  dinner 。”说完就出去觅食了。这时一只小兔子拿着一个红萝卜蹦蹦跳跳的走了过来，狮子一见就上前去威严地说：“把食物给我吃吧。”小兔子一看是狮子，连忙把手中的红萝卜送给了狮子，狮子吃了一口觉得不好吃，发了狮威恶狠狠的把红萝卜砸向小兔子还大声的骂着，小兔子吓得飞快的逃跑了。他们精彩的表演赢得了一片掌声。狮子表演者熟练的英语对话、惟妙惟肖的动作，仿佛把我们带进了一个动物园。

接下来的节目是皇帝的新装、狼来了和拔萝卜，各班的表演都很精彩，让我觉得心里不踏实起来，怕自己表演不好。

终于轮到我们上场了，我的心怦怦直跳怕我们班会输给其他的班级。当音乐一响起来，我们每个人都很快进了状态。我那颗怦怦直跳的心也平静了下来。大家各自表演者自己的角色，十分认真。突然电脑出问题了，把我们出场的顺序都打乱了，弄得我们几个团团转转都不知道怎么去表演了。这是老师在后面打着手势让我们跟着幻灯片来表演，我们手忙脚乱的的样子把评委都逗笑了。最后我们的成绩只有76.365分。

虽然这次我们没有取得好的成绩，但是我们却收获了快乐。

Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom, my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic accident. It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning. I couldnt accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.

Mr Sun was a middle-aged teacher. He was full of sense of humour. We all liked him very much because of his excellent teaching. His lessons were usually very lively and interesting.We all liked to attend his class. He was an experienced teacher.

Mr Sun will always live in our hearts!

The proverb "Haste makes waste" means that one may delay the time to complete one thing if he rushes to do it, because he may neglect something important in the process and has to do it again from the beginning. So one should do every step well.

Take remembering English words for example, every student wants to enlarge his vocabulary. But this aim cannot be achieved in one or two days. You should stick to remem bering some words a day and revise the words every few days. In this way you can keep the words in your mind firmly. There is mo shortcut. If you want to stuff all the words into your brain and mot to revise them, you will remember nothing. So dont be hasty. Haste makes waste.

My mother of medium height, white skin, not very beautiful but dignified and easy, her dress is just like people, not fashionable but very elegant. My mothers character is bad, often lose his temper. Strengths, weaknesses, you want to know? My mother is a man of ingenuity, will do a lot of exquisite handicrafts. Fengling is very good-looking, she will do what all have, in the shape of different colors, hung in the window, my home is very beautiful, especially under the wind chimes look gorgeous in that some of small ornament, whenever there is a wind blowing, they will send melodious bell, it sounds like the wings, can fly far away.

Do you know? My mother a bath just half an hour. Her do the housework is also very clean. 5 o clock in the morning get up to do breakfast for the family to eat, at 9 o clock in the morning will go to the market to buy food, come back and then do a housework. Cook a meal at 11 o clock. Wash his clothes, and 2 PM 3 PM to do the housework. Shes housework: sweeping, washing clothes, sweep the floor, washing the dishes, and so on household chores, few are also countless. The evening she often said: "oh ~ today the housework so much do I waist sour backache." Father and sister, I have no words to say. In fact, we want to help her, but we help her. She said: "go away, you do not clean."

You say my mother is very love clean and industrious again?

我的妈妈中等身材，皮肤白白的，不十分漂亮但端庄大方，她的穿衣打扮也跟人一样，不时髦但很高雅。妈妈的性格不好，常发脾气。优点很多，缺点也不少，你们想知道吗? 妈妈是个心灵手巧的人，会做许多精巧的手工艺品。她做的风铃很好看，什么形状的都有，颜色各异，挂在我家窗前，非常漂亮，特别是风铃下的有些小装饰好看极了，每当有风吹起的时候，它们就会发出悦耳的铃声，那声音像是长了翅膀，能飞得很远很远。

你知道吗?我妈妈一洗澡就半个钟头。她做家务也非常干净。早上5点起床做早餐给一家人吃，早上9点就去市场买菜，回来后就做一做家务。到了11点就做饭。下午2点洗衣服，3点做家务。她的家务范围是：扫地，洗衣服，拖地，洗碗，等等家务，数也数不清。晚上她常常说：“唉~今天家务好多做得我腰酸背痛。”爸爸和姐姐，我都没话可说。其实我们想帮她，不过我们一帮她。她就说：“走开走开，你们做得不干净。”

你说我的妈妈是不是很又爱干净和勤劳?

When I lived in my hometown, I liked raining so much, because sometimes I could see the rainbow, it is so beautiful and attractive. I remembered the first time when I saw the rainbow. It was a stuffy afternoon, when I took a nap, I heard it rained, but there was sunshine in the sky. After an hour, the rain stopped. I walked out of my house and took a look at the sky, I saw a long colorful bridge in the sky. It appeared clearly, so close to me, it seemed that I could walk it to the sky. Now I live in the city, but I never see such beautiful rainbow again. The citys buildings cover the sky.

hello, everyone! my name is i’m a student in a very beautiful school called liangbing middle school and i am in class 1 grade 7.my hometown liangbing is also a beautiful town. i’m very happy and i like to make friends with others. i  also like singing but traveling is my favorite, i have been to  many interesting places in china but i haven’t been to other  countries. what a pity!

at school, i study chinese,math, english, history, politics  and so on. i like all of them. i often help my teacher takecare of my class and i think i am a good helper. i live with my parents and we go home on time every day.

when i am at home, i often help my mother do some housework and my

mother said i am a good helper, too. my mother is a barber.she cuts hair very well.she is kind.many people like her. she often teaches me the way of

learning well, if you want to learn english well, here is some of my advice. at first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. if you keep working hard, you will be successful. then, you ought to speak english as much as possible. remember an old saying, nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it.  that’s all, thank you.

Inow living in a small house with my parents. Life for us is hard but

happy. I must study hard so that I can buy a big new house some day. I call it a

dream house.

It has three floors with five bedrooms, three bathrooms, two big dining

rooms and two living rooms. When my friends come to visit me, I will have enough

bedrooms for them. Well have a good time. Besides that, we will have a swimming

pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house. In the morning, my

parents can do some exercise in the garden. The air must be very fresh. When we

feel tired, we can have a swim in the swimming pool. Life will be easy for

us.

Ill study harder than before so that the dream can come true.

Computers are changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a

computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs,

play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to

join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest

information in all fields. We don’t need to leave home to borrow books from a

library or to do shopping in a supermarket.

Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of

computers, the word is becoming a large family.

Autumn is the third season in the year. It lasts from September to

November. When the autumn comes, the leaves begin to turn yellow and then fall.

The weather becomes cool. It makes people feel comfortable. So many people like

autumn and enjoy this season. Besides, autumn is a season of harvest. The crops

turn to rip. Farmers are busy with the harvest. And they begin to prepare for

the winter and the New Year.

初一年级英语作文：Cars or Bikes?

题目：有人选择骑自行车上学/班,有人选择开/坐私家车上学/班。你觉得哪种出行方式更好? 为什么?

Cars or Bikes?

Cars and bicycles are similar in that they are both privately owned means of transport. In other words, they have in common the fact that the owner can decide when and where to go. However, there are a lot of difference between them. A car costs a lot more to buy than a bicycle.

In addition, it is far more expensive to run. For example, a car has to be insured, and must be serviced regularly; furthermore, spare parts for a car cost a lot of money. A ear uses petrol, which is expensive, whereas a bicycle uses only human energy.

On the other hand, as far as comfort is concerned, a car is better than a bicycle. In a car you are protected from the weather, have comfortable seats and plenty of room to can? people and luggage. A car is not only more comfortable than a bicycle, but it is faster as well. With respect to convenience, it is difficult to say which one is better. A bicycle is certainly easier to park!

To sum up, each one has its advantages and disadvantages.（约180字）

[初一英语作文Cars or Bikes

今天，我把所有作业都做完了，闲着没事干，便萌生出一个想法：教奶奶学英语。于是，我对奶奶说：“奶奶，我教您学英语吧？”“好！”奶奶爽快地答应了。我递给奶奶一张预先准备好的“新生报名单”。上面写着：“欢迎您加入花朵芬芳学校英语初级班，请填写您的英文名字。”奶奶一看新生报名单就愣住了。“我哪有什么英文名字呀？”“没关系，我帮您取。”我对奶奶说。

我想了一下，问奶奶“lavender,怎么样？”

“好，好，好。”奶奶没有经过思考就回答着。可当我问她“您叫什么英文名字呀？”她却把刚才的lavender忘得九霄云外了。于是，教奶奶学英语就从教奶奶学读英文名字开始了。

我不厌其烦地把lavender反复读给奶奶听。奶奶看着我的嘴型认真地学着。“la--ven--der”，可她的发音很不标准。

“奶奶，您的嘴巴再扁一点，行吗？”“?—?—?。”我把奶奶读的不标准的地方，抽出来单独训练。我记得自己学小提琴的时候，老师一直叫我把掌握不好的地方抽出来单独练，这样效果很好。所以我也用这种方法教奶奶。还别说，经过我的耐心指导，奶奶终于学会读自己的英文名字了。生怕下次再遗忘，奶奶拿来纸和笔，认真地记着笔记。

真认真啊！我在心里默默想着，奶奶年纪这么大了，学习起来还这么认真，真值得我学习呀。

奶奶学会了自己的英文名，我又教了奶奶一些水果类的单词，每学一个单词，奶奶都非常认真。

“奶奶，今天学的单词，我下节课要抽背的哦。”在下课前，我对奶奶提出了要求。“好的，我会认真复习的。”奶奶说。

就这样，一节有趣的英语课结束了。从中我不仅感受到了当老师的快乐，还体会到了生活的乐趣。

Blowing balloons is an interesting game. You may have some ideas of it. It is of great value to your health, especially to those who are fat. People usually make an airless balloon halfairfilled, put it on the hand, then blow it hard. Shortly after it flies up, his partner blows it away towards the opposite party. And the opposite blows it back.

Repeat doing so until the balloon drops onto the follr. Any party onto whose floor the balloon drops will be the loser. So any party who tries to control the balloon’s direction and blows it with great efforts will make the balloon fly straight to the other party and will have more opportunities to win.

[初一英语作文 Blowing Balloons

今天就是英语外研比赛的日子了，我被安排在下午2.30那场，老妈的单位离考场比较近，上午我便跟她去单位值班。

我在老妈的办公室里，一直都在背稿，时间过得很快，稿纸在我的手中不停地抖动，说好的不紧张呢?

简单吃了点饭，老妈看我这副状态，她提议说，咱们提前溜达着去吧，就当散散步。

午后的街道有些冷清，看到不错的景致，老妈竟不忘给我拍张照片啥的，她可真有兴致。不觉中就来到了“宝睿国际未来小学”门口，我们是下午考生中来得最早的。

等了好久一些家长才陪着孩子到来，有接待老师把我们安排在家长等候区，并给选手们讲了些注意事项，接着老师又读了考场名单，我被安排在第三考场。

这是初赛，演讲的内容是自我介绍加才艺表演。我看到有的选手准备得真棒!不光自己化了淡妆，还梳了很复杂很漂亮的辫子，有的还穿了美丽的裙子。有不少同学手里拿了画板，上面是他们精心绘制的图画，他们边指着自己的画边小声念着英语，看来他们的才艺表演一定是用英语介绍自己的画了。而我的才艺显得多么的微不足道，我只打算读一首英文小诗。

上午考完的同学在群里发来信息，他们说很简单，评委主要看你的口语能力，觉得背不好的，也可以直接读，我终于有了一些安心。

马上就轮到我了，听到老师念我名字，稿子在我手中抖的更厉害了。原来考场里只有三位评委老师，但其中有一位外国人。我的心开始咚咚跳个不停，手心也开始冒汗。我刚说一句“Hello everyone.”，三位评委老师便微笑着向我点头示意。他们这一微笑，我反而不自在的很，我僵硬的站在他们面前，机械地象在用英文诵经一般，我甚至听到自己的声音就象一只大苍蝇在我周围嗡嗡着飞，它飞飞停停，停停飞飞，可恶极了。我发现三位评委老师都在低着头，记录着什么，也不知他们听清了这“嗡嗡”声没有。自我介绍环节很快就完了，我看没人看我，便拿出稿子，直接读那首“四季”的小诗。依然没人看我，平时读得一点问题都没有，此时竟卡了好几下，自己都觉得糟糕透顶。

三分钟终于结束了，我向三位评委鞠了躬说了“thank you”之后，心情才平静下来。

因为我是最后一场，所以，我来到家长区没多久，就有老师进来，当场宣布进入复赛的同学名单了。老师神采飞扬，声音洪亮，她说：“非常高兴地通知大家，祝贺以下进入复赛的同学，读到名字的同学也请家长一起上台!”

接着老师便念“张三，李四”，没有我的名字!

我沮丧极了，连为大家鼓掌的力气都没有了。

也许从我站到台上的那一刻就被评委老师“秒杀”掉了。老妈反倒安慰我说：“你在这里登过台，已经很棒了。但一定记住，台上一分钟，台下十年功啊。”

是的，通过参加这次比赛，我也找到了自己努力的方向。

路过一家烘焙店，我说：“老妈，给我买点吃的吧，我要化悲痛为力量!”

March 12th is Tree Planting Day. This year our school bought enough trees before that day. On that day, we didn‘t had classes. The teachers and our classmates planted trees around our school.

We began to planted trees as soon as we got to school. some students dug the holes. Some students put the trees into the holes.

Some students put the earth back to the holes. Then we pushed the earth hard with our feet. At last we watered the trees as much as possible.

From then on we looked after the trees carefully and the trees grew very well. It made our shcool more beautiful .And How happy we are!

3月12日是植树的一天。今年我们学校买了足够的树在那一天之前。在那一天,我们没有课。我们学校周围的老师和同学们种植的树木。

我们开始种植树木一旦我们到达学校。一些学生挖洞。一些学生把树放进洞。

一些学生把地球回洞。然后我们把地球与我们的脚。最后我们尽可能多的树木浇水。

从那时起我们仔细照顾树木,树木生长得很好。它使我们的学校更美丽。我们是多么快乐!

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During May day,I went to Shanghai with my family.We all fell in love with it at the moment we saw it.

Shanghai is really a beautiful city!There are many tall buildings and trees!There are also many flowers,it makes Shanghai look like a nice garden!If I have oppotunities to visit Shanghai again,I will be very happy! i go to beijing yestoday.i see great wall and so on .

im very happy because i see a old red man. he is 95 years old.i like him because he tel our many story.

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五一期间,我和我的家人去了上海。我们都爱上了它目前我们看到它。

上海真是一个美丽的城市!有很多高楼和树木!上海也有很多鲜花,看起来像一个漂亮的花园!如果我有机会再次访问上海,我将会非常快乐!我昨天去北京了。我看到长城等等。

我很高兴,因为我看到一个红色的老人。他已经95岁了。我喜欢他因为他电话我们的许多故事。

Blue sky white clouds, clear pledge ", when heard the words of the lyrics, the situation here is as in the word can describe the same. Nowhere to escape the sun pledge according to the heat. Alas - once the leafy village are now built a small house. In this new era, in a little bit of modern human, and the earth began to a little bit of become scarred, become overwhelmed.

According to research, the green coverage rate reached 30%, the carcinogenic substances in the air can fell by 58%, carbon dioxide at least by 90%, but now dont say those big cities, is even we this small country is doomed.

When summer arrives, sorching summer, cement road tan as hot as the red coals in the kitchen. Not a piece of green plays for us to talk, everyone stay at home, alone the cool, from a distance is very bleak.

Plants also is life, people are enjoying provide rich resources, it gives us life bring us countless convenience at the same time, should learn to be grateful. I can conveniently, for example: plant to filter and absorb the dust in the air is good, it is understood that the atmosphere through the forest, can reduce the amount of dust, 32% fly ash quantity reduced by 30%!

Dear classmates, greening can bring us a lot of good life, why dont we take action? Let us join hands and according to the requirements of the ecological civilization, cherish the nature, protect the environment, we will be more beautiful tomorrow!

蓝蓝的天空白云飘，晴空万里当头照”，当听到这句歌词时，此处的情景已如词里所形容的的一样了。太阳当头照酷暑无处逃。唉—曾经绿树成荫的小村如今都建起了小洋房。在这样的新纪元里，人类在一点点的现代化，而地球却开始一点点的变得伤痕累累，变得不堪重负。

据研究，在绿化覆盖率达30%的地段，空气中的致癌物质可下降58%，二氧化碳至少下降90%，可如今不要说那些大城市，就是连我们这个小乡村都难逃厄运。

一到夏天，炎炎酷暑，水泥路晒得如同灶里的红炭一样炙热。没了成片的绿茵供我们嬉戏畅谈，所有人都呆在家中，独自乘凉，远远望去甚是凄凉。

植物同样是生命体，人们在享受它给我们生活提供丰富的资源，带给我们无数便利的同时，应该学会感恩。我可以随手举个例子：植物对空气中的灰尘有良好的过滤和吸收作用，据了解，大气通过林带，可使尘量减少32%，飘尘量减少30%！

亲爱的同学们，绿化能带给我们生活许多好处，我们为何不行动起来呢？那就让我们携起手来，按照生态文明的要求，珍爱自然，保护环境，我们的明天一定会更加美好！

Far and away the most important holiday in China is Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year. To the Chinese people it is as important as Christmas to people in the West. the dates for this annual celebration are determined by the lunar calendar rather than the GREgorian calendar, so the timing of the holiday varies from late January to early February.

To the ordinary Chinese, the festival actually begins on the eve of the lunar New Years Day and ends on the fifth day of the first month of the lunar calendar. But the 15th of the first month, which normally is called the Lantern Festival, means the official end of the Spring Festival in many parts of the country.

Class is over. The students are jumping with joy, just like runaway horses. Look, some of them have left their seats and begin to play noisily. They are laughing and screaming from time to time. Some don’t leave their seats.

They are making use of the short time to play games. Sometimes they argue so seriously and sometimes they appear so polite. Others are sitting in their seats, as if they are thinking of something. Now and then they will stop to watch what others are doing. What an active ten minutes’ break it is!

[Break Between Classes初一英语作文

Now TV has become necessary in our life. We can get all kinds of information through TV. The world is in front of us. The distance between countries is shortened with the help of TV.Every day we can watch some interesting programs to make us happy.

Although TV has some benifits, sometimes it has bad influence. Some students have no time to study because they watch TV in all the free time. And some programs are not proper for children.

So we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children.

作文是衡量学生语文素质的重要尺度,是现代社会进行交际的重要手段,作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分。下面是小编为大家整理的初一年级作文教学实录，欢迎阅读。

一、引言

初中语文教学中，令人最苦恼的莫过于学生的作文教学，这是一个我执教的差班，共有21名学生，各科成绩普遍很差，这些学生平时写作文字数总在四百字左右，所写内容单调乏味，不会综合运用多种表达方式，平铺直叙较为简单的生活、学习事件。为了激发他们的写作兴趣，使他们感受到作文并不是一件困难的事，我设计了一堂作文课，从学生的角度出发，为增强学生的信心，力求拓展学生作文的思路，引导学生自由写作，表达自己对社会、自然、人生的独特感受和真切体验。

二、教学设计说明

面对这些基础并不好的学生，如果只是简单地告诉他们这次作文的要求，读几篇范文，然后叫他们写作，这样效果肯定不好，因此在设计时必须抓住学生感兴趣的内容，让他们即兴说、想说爱说，让他们通过畅所欲言萌发写作的信心，进而产生写作的欲望，于是我就选取了“兴趣”这个话题。

三、教学进程

作文课上，当我走进教室正准备上课时，突然有两个学生在下面窃窃私语，打打闹闹。我站在讲台上，平静地望着他们，直到教室完全安静下来，我便微笑着说：“初三即将毕业，老师以前对你们关心不够，没有过多地与你们交流沟通，今天想跟同学们聊聊天，好吗？”学生听了我的话，开心地笑了（对他们来说由于基础差，上课是一种折磨）。于是，我提出第一个问题：“你们平时最喜欢干什么？”“一石激起千层浪”，学生都在下面说了起来，这时我要求学生一个个清楚地告诉我。

“最喜欢打篮球、最喜欢看NBA；最喜欢踢足球；最喜欢看电视；最喜欢上网；最喜欢看小说；最喜欢逛街……”也许是找到了学生说话的兴奋点，学生们在下面显得格外起劲。看到这种情景，我又欲擒故纵，“大家说了这么多喜欢的事，能告诉我你为什么喜欢”话刚完，下面学生安静下来了，没过多久，学生又开始“动作”了，我抓住这一时机，叫了一个平时不爱学习的学生，那学生平时非常喜欢打篮球，一起来，那学生语出惊人：“打篮球给我自信，使我快乐，所以篮球是我的最爱”，说得好，我立即鼓掌叫好，下面同学也拍手叫好。由于开了一个好头和对学生的鼓励，接下来学生都积极配合，思维活跃，说话热情高涨。

“足球是男人的运动，踢足球可显示一个人的风采，足球使我找到感觉”，“逛街，让我边散步边欣赏风景，让我没钱的人能大饱眼福。”“上网，能让我一网情深，使我跟人聊天玩游戏听音乐，上网查各种有用的资料。”“读书，使我不出家门了解天下，使我感受书中有无穷无尽的知识和乐趣……”

这些即兴的发言使我一下子惊呆了，也使学生对自己的出色表现感到兴奋，于是我因势利导，抛出早已准备好的话题作文——以兴趣为话题写一篇作文，“以上我们每个同学谈了自己的兴趣爱好，说得非常精彩，只要我们每个同学把刚才说的话整理好，说具体，就可以写成一篇较好的作文；其实，写兴趣，第一步要告诉别人你的兴趣是什么，第二步需要介绍你是如何拥有这个兴趣的，如何保持这个兴趣的；第三步，最关键要写出你对这个兴趣的体验，对你的学习生活有什么帮助等。就举我们同学刚才的例子，如“篮球”这个话题，其实大家只要写清楚你从什么时候就喜欢打球、看篮球，篮球怎么成了你学习生活中重要的一块，同时还要写从打球中学到哪些对人生有益的知识，获得哪些人生的感悟，如……”这时我又发问了，“喜欢打篮球的同学，请你说说，从打球中获得了哪些有价值的东西，你有哪些独到的感受？”话一完，学生就低头思考起来。过了一会儿开始举手发言了：“打球讲究的是配合，我们同学在平时也应相互支持鼓励，不要因为我们是差班学生而看不起自己。”“打球最需要顽强的毅力和永不言败的精神，在我们的人生中也会遇到困难挫折，打球使我懂得如何对付这些困难挫折。” ……“说了这么多，我们要对“兴趣”这个话题拟个题目，先看老师的，《我的兴趣爱好》，大家说好不好？”

“不好，这个题目太一般，不能吸引人。”

“不好，这个题目不能体现自己的个性。”

“不好，这个题目太笼统，不能突出自己的哪个兴趣爱好。”

“不好，不如改为《噢，我的篮球！》”

“可改为《音乐，让我与你相伴》”

“《生活因篮球而精彩！》”…………当学生说出《生活因篮球而精彩！》时所有学生都拍手叫好，如果不是亲耳听见，确实很难相信这个题目出自这个差班学生之口，有了这个好题目，作文就已完成了一半。

接下来，进行作文开头结尾辅导，我给他们作了两组示范：1、开头：“阳光、空气、水是人类生存的三元素，在我每天的生活中，也有一样少不了，那就是篮球，它陪伴我每一天，给我莫大的快乐和幸福，在此，让我慢慢告诉你。”

结尾：感谢你，是你给了我信心和勇气；是你给了我快乐和幸福；是你使我从幼稚走向成熟，从软弱走向坚强；感谢你，篮球，你是我一生的最爱！

2、开头：“音乐一直是我的挚爱，我是一个不折不扣的乐迷。音乐已融入我的生活，我实在无法想像要是没有音乐，我的生活会成什么样。我经常光顾音像店，那些美妙的声音从而陆续流进了我的家、流进了我的心中。”

结尾：生活，成长，在音乐中，我觉得自己在音乐中永远是一个孩子，一直跟着它一起哭、笑，感受生命的存在与灿烂。听音乐时，闭上眼睛，放飞心灵吧！

即兴开了两组开头结尾，是让学生明白，对自己喜爱的事物一定要把这种强烈的感受抒发出来，尽可能打动读者，产生共鸣，尽管要求过高，但要让每一个同学相信自己有这个能力，尝试着去写，相信会有奇迹发生。

围绕“兴趣”写一篇作文，采用开门见山、“先情夺人”的开头方式，使学生有一种创作的新奇感；中间的叙事也做到了选材于生活，真实生动感人，在叙事中表现这个兴趣所带来的启示或感悟；结尾采用抒情式结尾，亦显得感情浓烈，得以升华。在学生已充分理解作文目的的基础上，学生们开始写下刚才说的话，写得认真快速。

四、教学反思

通过这样一堂课，作文的火花在每一个学生心中点亮，就连平时写作文最差的学生也写出了400字左右。由此可见，差生的作文是可以写好的，只要是触动了学生的感情神经，选材得当，命题新颖，相信作文自然会绽放其独有的光芒，也会让差生自主地发挥主观能动性，变厌写为乐写，变白话为含蓄，变浅层为深刻，使学生在琢磨中悟道，在坚持中获得乐趣。

作文教学是一个循序渐进、不断积累发展的过程，仅仅通过一堂课，其实很难断定学生已对作文有了浓厚的兴趣，并能坚持写作。要全面提高学生的写作水平，功在课外。但通过这堂课，使我对这些学生有了新的认识，也感觉到新课标新教学理念学习实践的重要性。这堂课我认为有几点是成功的：

1、树立学生的主体意识，发挥差生说话写作的主观能动性，让学生活动起来，对自己感兴趣的话题能畅所欲言。

2、找准切入点，让学生找到生活与写作的桥梁。每个学生都有自己感兴趣的事物，即使再差的学生，他也有自己的“一技之长”，作为教师一定要善于发现并利用学生的这些“亮点”，从而有效点燃写作兴趣之火。特别是学生所表达的有关活动的感受，言语自然有味，确实体现了学生的个性。

3、实践“跳摘”理论，化解作文难度，使学生稍微一跳便能摘到“果子”。课堂上与学生聊天说话，消除学生对作文的紧张恐惧心理，让他们轻松进入写作状态，调动学生学习生活中的知识积累，使作文有话可说。从学生拟写的作文题目来分析，远远超出平时的水平，若不是采用这种方式，很难让这些学生有这种水平发挥。

但这节课也存在一些不足，未能采用灵活多样的方法，使学生自主探究，如条件允许，可在学生叙说的同时，播放有关NBA篮球赛、世界杯足球赛的画面，把学生的情感推向高潮，更有利于激发差生的写作热情。另外由于学生基础水平的局限，写作思维仍旧单一，未能进行较好的想象联想，在文本中呈现的语句表达仍旧直露，不含蓄，未能综合运用多种表达方式和修辞方法。

因而我认为，在写作教学中尽可能为学生创设自主探究的“境”，即提供自主的机遇，设计自主探究的情境，创设自主探究的氛围，来有效激发学生的写作兴趣。教师应善于营造平等、民主、和谐、轻松的课堂气氛，使用最佳的教学艺术，为学生自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少束缚，使学生易于动笔，乐于表达，思维灵动，笔下生辉。写的文章自然就富有创新，富有真情实感和情趣

在写作教学中，应注重培养观察、思考、表现、评价的能力。要求学生说真话、实话、心里话，不说假话、空话、套话，使作文朝自然、生活、哲理的方向迈进，真正做到“让写作快乐起来”！

[初一年级作文教学实录

My Day Today is sunny. I get up early and read some English. Then I have breakfast and go to school. In the morning we have four lessons, they’re two Enlish lessons, one Chinese lesson and one history lesson. I like English best. At noon we have lunch at school, we have rice and vegetables, but we don’t like them very much. In the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson. Math is difficult, but I study hard. And we sing a beautiful song. We finish school at a quarter to five. I play basketball with my friends on the playground. It’s fun! Then I go home and do my homework, next I have dinner with my parents and watch TV. I go to bed at nine o’clock.