初一英语教学工作总结（通用20篇）

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.

New year, New Year! I have long been looking forward to the new year. New years old people come to us with joy, and our faces have opened flowers.

For the new year, everyone took out the already prepared fireworks, rushed out to the door, and ignited the lead. Ah, how beautiful! The sky suddenly opened a brilliant flower, the sky was dyed extraordinarily dazzling. Streets and lanes have already become the world of children.

After the new year, I went to my grandparents home early and sent a good word: "wish you, happy Spring Festival!" The blessing suddenly >warm you and me. At night I also send a text message to my teacher, which says: I wish you good health and all the best. Your student: Lu Yao. And write back to the teacher: Thank you, I wish you a happy new year, learning progress! When I read the mind tianzizi.

In the new year, I got one thousand yuan more in my wallet. I really want to spend one hundred yuan on my wallet, but I think of grandma again, "Daddy is not easy to earn money, and money must be spent in the most needed place." I hold back.

I have been a year old again. I grew up, increased weight, increased a lot of knowledge, and should be more knowledge-based.

Ah, new year old man, thank you for this joy. In this year, I will certainly make you happy. Believe me! Come on for me!

Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24

hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to

twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The

temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the

highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature

would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in

Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.

There are many television programs in taiwan today, from tv aeries, quiz shows, soap operas, movies to cartoons. of all the programs, i like to watch cartoons the best, like cartoon network, disney and many others. i like to watch cartoons because they are funny and very interesting, especially when i am sad, tired or bored.

I also like cartoon characters. they are so cute and vivid. we must use our imagination when we watch cartoons. because they are often exaggerated, so you need to have a sense of humor.

The Great Wall is the symbol and pride of China,and it is famous all over the world.

But,do you know about it?Let me tell you something about it.The Great Wall was first built during the Qin Dynasty,which was the beginning of the Feudal Society of China.Hower,it was not what it is now.It was very short.The following dynasties continued to build it It became longer and longer and finally reached to about 5000 kilometres,winding from the Shanhai Pass,north-east of China to the Jiayu Pass,north-west China.

Being solid and strong ,the Great Wall acted a very important part,protecting the governors and their people from being attacted by their enemies in ancient China.

Nowadays,the Great Wall has become one of well-known interesting places of China,attracting millions of visitors througth the world.

Happy summer holidays

my summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable. i went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays. it is very beautiful there. there are green plants, clear rivers, lovely animals kind people. i spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there. i wrote down what happened in my diary every day.

besides that, I helped the children in the neighbour hood with their lessons. i helped them read english improve their spoken english. their parents thanked me for this.

【中文翻译】

快乐的暑假生活

今年的暑假生活非常愉快。我去农村过暑假。那儿非常美丽，有绿色的植物，清澈的小河，可爱的动物和善良的人们。在那里的两周中我帮爷爷干了些农活。每天我在日记中记下所发生的事情。

除了这些，我还帮助邻居家的孩子做功课。我帮他们读英语，使他们的口语有所提高。他们的父母为此很感激我。

明师教育广州中考学习网小编预祝同学们更有一个快乐而富有意义的暑假!

执教一个半学期以来，最让我头疼的问题就是学生的写作水平没有多大的提高。经过多次与老教师交流，以及自己工作之余的学习钻研，我对作文教学有了进一步的认识，现反思如下：

一、 认清学情，夯实基础，不盲目追求作文形式。

从我所任教的两个班的学生作文水平来看，大部分学生基础不扎实，存在着句子表达不通顺、用词不恰当、词汇积累太少、选材较狭隘、立意不高等情况。因此，作文练习不应该追求字数和技巧，而要立足于强化用词造句的训练、拓展阅读面。

写文章最基本的就是做到“文从字顺”，为此，在每天的作业中加上“造句”这一项，由科代表选择难度适中的1～2个词语造句。把句子写通顺了，表达的基础才能提高。

更重要的工作是增加学生的阅读量。在两个班中，我组织学生创建班级图书库，鼓励学生多读好书，读文学作品，并给他们介绍《读书笔记8种方法》和《读书三种方法》等。多读还要多写，鼓励学生勤写读书笔记，准备定期举行班级优秀读书笔记展览和名著电影欣赏。另外，组办班级文学兴趣小组，定期交流，推选出优秀作品向学校《绿洲》文学社投稿。试图通过一系列活动把阅读引向深处。

二、 解放教学思想，还学生更广阔的写作空间。

新课程呼唤作文教学的开放，指出“要求学生说真话、实话、心

里话、不说假话、空话、套话”。为学生的自主写评提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少对学生写作的束缚、鼓励自由表达和有创意的表达，提倡学生自主拟题、少写命题作文。然而，繁杂的作文教学程序、陈旧的作文教学内容、单一的作文教学方法、一成不变的作文评改方式——这些是不可忽视的传统的束缚力量。如何突破传统，取其精华、取其糟粕？这是我反复思考的问题。

1、 解放老师的教学思想。

想给学生一碗水，自己必须储备一桶水。客观条件对学生

创造力的束缚是显而易见的，但这是教育普遍存在的现象。假如老师的教学方式也是单一陈旧的，那么我们就等于在制造教育成品，而不是在创造人！工作虽繁忙，但还要以学习为主。多借鉴名师的经验，多与老教师交流，多读书。

在借鉴余映潮老师的方法后，我尝试了这样的作文批改方

式：小组合作。

第一步：交换找优点，评价闪光点，写出主要内容，概括大意。 第二步：再交换挑毛病，指不足（比如错别字，病句等）。 第三步：本人小声读文，动情优美处，大声的读，后品味反思别人的评价，结合自己的感受，对自己提出中肯的建议。 最后，交流心得。每组推一篇美文大家共赏，由作文负责人（苗甜甜）根据各小组记分，上交。由老师根据各小组的情况，找出优缺点，并概括不足（共性的东西），思考下一次作文要求及目标。

经过这样一改动，学生的作文课上，以小组为单位，全部动起来，全身心积极投入，每位同学至少读了三篇同类的作文，又听读了6篇美文，不论从听觉、视觉上都获得很大的收获，相对以往单一，枯燥的形式，学生的积极性，大大提高小组之间的凝聚力。

2、 还学生更广阔的写作空间。

（1）、让他们亲近大自然，走进社会，丰富他们生活和精神世界，在生活实践中获得更多的人生感悟。

抓住每一次人性教育的机会，让学生关注时事，写相关的周记。比如学期初，跟学生讲今年春节的雪灾，让他们周末回去利用电视、网络、报纸等形式关注灾区的情况，体会人间冷暖。

（2）、让他们勤于思索，乐于想象。

抓住每一篇课文的闪光点，让学生写读后感。比如学习《从百草园到三味书屋》一课，让学生写《从小学到初中》等类似的短文，让他们抒发自己的成长体会。

（3）、让他们学会用自己的眼睛和心灵去感受、体验，“我手写我心、我笔抒我情”。

培养学生的观察能力，引导他们从三点一线的单调生活中，体会成长的快乐。布置《成长的烦恼》、《成长的快乐》等作文题，引导学生关注自己的心灵成长。

（4）、提供优秀的视听材料，给予学生足够的视觉刺激和听觉刺激，还要引导他们“于无影处见有影、于无声处闻有声”。

给学生观看一些人性教育的电影，让他们写观后感。比如看了《跑吧，孩子》这部电影以后，他们很多在观后感中都感叹自己的幸福生活，增加了幸福感，学习就更加有动力了。

3、 开放写作内容。

《语文课程标准》指出“语文课程应该是开放而有创新活力的，应尽可能满足不同地区、不同学校的需求，并能够根据社会的需要不断自我调节、更新发展。”作文教学更是如此。

为此，在阅读教学中充分挖掘习作资源，实现阅读文本的超越，是开放写作内容一个较可行的途径。如补写（补写背景、补写结尾、补写文中的空白点等）、改写（改变体裁写，改变人称写，改变时空写等）、仿写、扩写、缩写等等。在阅读教学中开发学生感兴趣的习作资源，创出习作教学的新洞天。

如学生续写《皇帝的新装》，展现了他们无穷的想象力和天真的思想；改写《丑小鸭》，体现了他们唯美的童话情结。

通过这些写作活动，我发现其实学生的创造能力不是我想象的那么差，关键是如何去激发学生的写作热情，让他们在写作中表现自己，

获得成就感。只有有所获，有所得，学生才会有兴趣，进而才有动力。当学生的写作有了源源不断的动力时，我的教学也就成功了。

这些尝试只是初步的，也需要时间不断的关注教学成果，不断的反思，才能进一步完善。

[初一作文教学反思参考

初一五一英语作文1

These days the May Day holiday, my mother is going to take me to play in the public ecological garden.

Because unfamiliar terrain, white ran a lot of road, only "ah-ha!" to the ecological garden of the masses.

Ecological YuanHou bought tickets and went into the masses, a look, really a lot of people, there are a lot of fun projects dont money, make me happy from ear to ear.

Walk, see a pond, fishing, I can be happy, because has always been very love fishing, can be approached a look, just know to rent cost ten dollars, but I managed to persuade his mother, rent the fishing rod.

Started fishing, there is a group of fish came up, but only in the next to look, not biting. I saw big fishes swim by, but I sat uncomfortable, move the fish all fled away.

I summarized the reasons for the failure of the last time, after waiting for fish to, did not move, do not emit sound, eyes also unchanged, finally, a big carp bite the hook, but immediately loosened, ate half of the bait, when I was frustrated, I saw it with a bite, I quickly put the hook, the fish really big trouble ah, just pull the lever to bad, I have a hard, give it up, and in this way, we can eat the grilled fish at noon today.

In addition to these, I also played a lot of things, and now that I think about it, really want to play again!

初一五一英语作文2

Today is May Day, I follow mom to dinghai haisan park by bus.

Here people mountain people sea, there are a lot of children accompanied by mom and dad to play there. Some playing with kites, some are playing gyro, some in fishing.

I quickly came to the goldfish. Theres water on the bottom, the goldfish have greatly small, colors: red, orange and purple! I saw many people in the fishing, and also bought a fishing pole gaps.

Soon, my fish bait was snapped, quickly pull up the fishing pole, in line with your hands, I catch a frisky goldfish was came up, I carefully put the fish into the basin, the heart is extremely happy! But the goldfish is too small, I also want to hook to larger goldfish. But in the next few minutes, always dont take the bait fish, or fish ate fish bait, but has not been pulled, I was so angry, I stared straight the way of just overjoyed when already flew to the cloud nine, clamouring to go back home. Mother told me at this moment, fishing to calm down, take your time, not impatient. Listen to the mother, and I put down the fishing pole, patiently caught up, indeed as expected and caught 3, and a than a big. So, I take 4 goldfish went home happily.

Along the way, my heart never know how much excited, because I not only hook into the big goldfish, also understand such a truth: do not impatient, be patient, itll be successful!

初一五一英语作文3

May 1st is the international labor day, is the world labor peoples freedom anniversary, for we students, is a long-awaited festival, is also in our winter vacation the again after the holidays, have a three-day holiday. Given that we can open again, happy, happily free sent time, space and dominate their own!

In the labor day holiday, I was going to with dad to Olympic sports center to do some sports like playing basketball, table tennis, some exercises. However, because of my father and an empress have never been to hainan, want to go to hainan play, so Ill just have to reassure the idea, stay at home to play. I turned on my computer as usual, but, but online is different from usual, I suddenly reminded us in the 21st century is the age of information technology, many people celebrate May Day on the Internet.

I also have their own space on the Internet, many know uncle aunt, play games on the Internet know school friends and classmates will come to my QQ space, in their different ways to celebrate with me "51" international labor day! Not only in my QQ space, in baidu post bar has a lot of brother elder sister also uncles and aunts blessing each other together the happiness during the holidays, we like the family happy, happy, I think network not only, and our warm home!

This years "51" section, and we all had a good time. Through the "51" section, the real from different sides showed the new achievements in the construction of spiritual civilization, also showed the fundamental role of everything for the masses, in the interests of the masses. I think next years "51" international labor day will have a more pleasant and beautiful!

Therearesomephotosonthewall.They’reverybeautiful.

Inthemiddleoftheroom,thereismybed.It’snotsobig,butit’svery

comfortable.Everynight,Ilayonthebedandhaveagooddream.Ontherightofthebed,thereismydeskandchair.They’reinfrontofthewindow.Mycomputerisonthedesk.Thereisalamponthedesk,too.Icandomyhomeworkhereandplaycomputergames.

Mybookshelfisontheleftofthebed.Therearealotofstorybooksandpicturebooksintheshelf.Ilikethemverymuch.

Noteveryonehasabedroom.I’mverylucky,becauseIhaveaverybeautifulbedroom.I’lltrymybesttokeepitcleanandtidy.

1.OurSchool

Ourschoolisinthewestofthecity.Itisverybigwithatallteachingbuilding.Therearethirtyclassrooms,amodernlibrary,adinninghallandagym.Thereisabigplaygroundwhereweoftenhavesports.Therearelotsoftreesandflowersbesidetheplayground.Therearemorethanfivehundredstudentsandteachersinourschoolandweallworkhard.Ourschoolissobeautifulthatwealllikeitverymuch.

2.Howdidyouspendyoursummervacation

Ihadabusyandinterestingsummervacation.IdidmyhomeworkeverydaysoIfinisheddoingmyhomeworktendaysbeforethenewterm.Ialsoplayedtabletennisandbasketballwithmyfriendseveryday.Isometimeswent

moviesandwenttotheparkswithmyfriends.Isurfedtheinternet,readbooksandwatchedTVeveryevening.Ivisitedmygrandparentsandhelpedthemwiththehousework,too.Ihelpedmyparentscleantheroomandcookmeals.ThemostimportantwasthatmyparentsandIwenttoHannanIslandandspentaweekthere.

3..AhappyDay

Itwassunnyandveryhottoday.Igotupearlyandhelpedmyparentscookbreakfast.ThenIwashedthedishesandcleanedtheroom.AfterashortrestIdidmyhomeworkinthemorning.IntheafternoonIwentswimminginthe

nearestswimmingpoolwithmyfriends.Itwasreallycooltoswiminsuchahotday.Isurfedtheinternetandreadastorybookintheevening.Ireallyhadabusyandhappyday.今天天气晴朗比较热。我起得很早，帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很快乐。

4.给笔友的一封信

DearLucy

Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Nowletmeintroducemyselftoyou.MynameisLiLei.Iamelevenyearsold.Iamtallwithapairofglasses.NowIam

studyingatYuyingPrimarySchool.IaminClassOne，Grade5.Ilikesingingandplayingthepianoverymuch.IamgoodatEnglishandChinese.很高兴收到你的来信。现在让我介绍我自己。我叫李雷。11岁。我高个子、带眼镜。我在育英小学。我在五年级一班。我非常喜欢唱歌和弹钢琴。我数学和语文学得都很好。

6。暑假打算

Iwillhaveabusysummervacation.Iamgoingtodomyhomeworkeveryday.Iamgoingtothelibrarytoborrowsomebooksandgototheshopstobuysomebooks.Iamgoingtodosportssuchasplayingtabletennis,swimmingandsoon.Iamgoingtovisitmygrandparentsandstaythereforaweek.Iamgoingtohelpmyparentsdosomehousework.我暑假会很忙。我每天要写作业。我打算去图书馆去借书、去商店买书。我要做运动，如：打乒乓球、游泳等。我要去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周。我要帮父母做家务。

7.自我介绍

Hello,everyone.MynameisKelly.Iamfriendlyandhonest.IamgoodatEnglishandmaths.Ilikesurfingtheinternet,playingcomputergames,watchingTVandtraveling.IalsolikeplayingtabletennisandIamgoodatit,too.Ioftenplaytabletenniswithmyfriendsonweekends.AndIwanttobeafamoustabletennisplayerwhenIgrowup.WhatIlikemostistoseethe

seagullsflyingfreelyintheskysoIoftengototheseainsummer.MyfavouritecolouriswhitebecauseIthinkwhiteissymbolizepurity.大家好我的名字叫KELLY.我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。我爱上网、玩电脑网络游戏、看电视和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓球，长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔，因此在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。

8.海南之旅

wenttoHainanIslandwithmyparentsforaholidyandwestayedthereforaweek.IttookusonlymorethanthreehourstogettoHaikouairport.Weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthesoftwind.Wewalkedonthebeachandpickedupthebeautifulshells.Wealsosufedonthewavesanditwasreallyexciting.Weplayedballgamesonthebeachaswell.IbelievedHainanwasreallyanattractivecitywithfamousbeachandmountains.WereallyenjoyedthebeautifulsceneryofHainan.

9.AniceSunday

ItisSundayanditisafinedaytoday.WecometothePeopleParkwithourEnglishteacherwhocamefromCanada.Look!Tomandotherfiveboysareplayingfootball.Cinaandsomegirlstudentsareflyingkites.AliceandIaretakingphotosnearthepark.Aliceandweareveryhappy.AlicehelpsusalotwithourEnglish.

今天是星期天，天气晴朗。我们和来自Canada的英语老师Alice来到人民公园。瞧，Tom和五个男同学在踢球；Cina和一些女同学在放风筝；我和Alice正在公园附近拍照。Alice和我们都非常高兴。Alice在英语方面帮助了我们很多。

10.Thismorning,Iwokeupwithastart:myclockwasalarming.Unwillinglyopenedmyeyes,Ifounditwas6:30already.Nevertheless,theroomwasverygloomy,foritwasrainingoutside.Whatacoldday!HowcomfortableitwouldbeifIcouldstayinbedforthewholeday,readingafavouritebookinthe

soundofrain.But,Ididhavetogotowork.Thoughitwasarushhour,ontheway,therewerefewerpeoplethanusual.Manypeoplearduouslyheldanumbrellawhichwasalwaysblowndownbyablastofwind.Fortunately,Iwasdressedinaraincoat.Severalyardsaway,apolicemanwasguidingthetrafficintherain.Iwasfilledwithdeepesteemforhisseriousness.Ikeptthinkingoftodaysplanforashortwhileand,then,Iwasinmyoffice.Abusydayisbeginning……

导语：每个人都有精彩的校园生活，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Hi! I am a girl. I’m fourteen years old. I come from a small village of Guangxi. I am a student of Class 1, Grade 2. My School life is very interesting. Class begins at 7:45a.m. I have five classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I often have two or three classes. We learn Chinese, English, math, history, biology, geography, politics, physics and so on. I learn them with great interest. I like P.E. best. Because having sports is good for us and build us up. And we’ll have a sport meet this term, I want to take part in the long jump.

I have lunch at school at about a quarter to twelve, because my home is a little far from the school. After school, I often play basketball with my classmates on the playground. Sometimes, I go to the school library. In my spare time, I often practice speaking English with my good friends on the lawn. Because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic, English is very important. Speaking English will help me to make more foreign friends.

My teachers and classmates are very friendly to me. I like my school life very much. What about your school life? Can you tell me?

【参考译文】

嗨!我是姑娘我十四岁。我来自广西的一个小村庄。我是一名1年级2班的学生。我的学校生活很有趣。在7:45a开始上课。我上午有五节课。在下午，我经常有2个或三个班。我们学语文、英语、数学、历史、生物学、地理、政治、物理等。我很感兴趣。我最喜欢体育运动。因为有运动对我们有好处，把我们建立起来。这学期我们将有一个运动会，我想参加跳远比赛。

我在学校吃午饭大约四分之一到十二，因为我的家离学校有一点远。放学后，我经常和我的同学们在操场上打篮球。有时，我去学校图书馆。在我的业余时间，我经常练习说英语和我的好朋友在草坪上。因为北京将举办2008届奥运会，英语是非常重要的。说英语将帮助我结交更多的外国朋友。

我的老师和同学对我很友好。我非常喜欢我的学校生活。你的学校生活怎么样?你能告诉我吗?

Most people has a sweet home, so have I. I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

I can remember clearly. Once I came back home late because my teacher didnt want me leave until I finished my homework. At that time, the weather became colder and the wind became stronger. I was so hungry and cold at that time! I felt I cant take it any more, so I ran to my home quickly. When I got my home, I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

Thats why I love my sweet home. Dont you think so?

许多人拥有一个甜蜜的家，我也有。我认为我的家是甜蜜的，因为它是我休息、与父母、朋友一起玩乐的地方。

我可以清楚地记着。有一次，直到我完成作业，老师才肯放我回家，所以我就回来晚了。那时候，天气更冷了，风也变得更大了。在那时，我又冷又饿。我觉得自己无法承受了，所以我迅速地跑回家。当我到家的时候，我感到从未有过的温暖和幸福。

这就是为什么我爱自己的甜蜜之家。难道你不是这么认为的么?

作文是衡量学生语文素质的重要尺度,是现代社会进行交际的重要手段,作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分。下面是小编为大家整理的初一年级作文教学实录，欢迎阅读。

一、引言

初中语文教学中，令人最苦恼的莫过于学生的作文教学，这是一个我执教的差班，共有21名学生，各科成绩普遍很差，这些学生平时写作文字数总在四百字左右，所写内容单调乏味，不会综合运用多种表达方式，平铺直叙较为简单的生活、学习事件。为了激发他们的写作兴趣，使他们感受到作文并不是一件困难的事，我设计了一堂作文课，从学生的角度出发，为增强学生的信心，力求拓展学生作文的思路，引导学生自由写作，表达自己对社会、自然、人生的独特感受和真切体验。

二、教学设计说明

面对这些基础并不好的学生，如果只是简单地告诉他们这次作文的要求，读几篇范文，然后叫他们写作，这样效果肯定不好，因此在设计时必须抓住学生感兴趣的内容，让他们即兴说、想说爱说，让他们通过畅所欲言萌发写作的信心，进而产生写作的欲望，于是我就选取了“兴趣”这个话题。

三、教学进程

作文课上，当我走进教室正准备上课时，突然有两个学生在下面窃窃私语，打打闹闹。我站在讲台上，平静地望着他们，直到教室完全安静下来，我便微笑着说：“初三即将毕业，老师以前对你们关心不够，没有过多地与你们交流沟通，今天想跟同学们聊聊天，好吗？”学生听了我的话，开心地笑了（对他们来说由于基础差，上课是一种折磨）。于是，我提出第一个问题：“你们平时最喜欢干什么？”“一石激起千层浪”，学生都在下面说了起来，这时我要求学生一个个清楚地告诉我。

“最喜欢打篮球、最喜欢看NBA；最喜欢踢足球；最喜欢看电视；最喜欢上网；最喜欢看小说；最喜欢逛街……”也许是找到了学生说话的兴奋点，学生们在下面显得格外起劲。看到这种情景，我又欲擒故纵，“大家说了这么多喜欢的事，能告诉我你为什么喜欢”话刚完，下面学生安静下来了，没过多久，学生又开始“动作”了，我抓住这一时机，叫了一个平时不爱学习的学生，那学生平时非常喜欢打篮球，一起来，那学生语出惊人：“打篮球给我自信，使我快乐，所以篮球是我的最爱”，说得好，我立即鼓掌叫好，下面同学也拍手叫好。由于开了一个好头和对学生的鼓励，接下来学生都积极配合，思维活跃，说话热情高涨。

“足球是男人的运动，踢足球可显示一个人的风采，足球使我找到感觉”，“逛街，让我边散步边欣赏风景，让我没钱的人能大饱眼福。”“上网，能让我一网情深，使我跟人聊天玩游戏听音乐，上网查各种有用的资料。”“读书，使我不出家门了解天下，使我感受书中有无穷无尽的知识和乐趣……”

这些即兴的发言使我一下子惊呆了，也使学生对自己的出色表现感到兴奋，于是我因势利导，抛出早已准备好的话题作文——以兴趣为话题写一篇作文，“以上我们每个同学谈了自己的兴趣爱好，说得非常精彩，只要我们每个同学把刚才说的话整理好，说具体，就可以写成一篇较好的作文；其实，写兴趣，第一步要告诉别人你的兴趣是什么，第二步需要介绍你是如何拥有这个兴趣的，如何保持这个兴趣的；第三步，最关键要写出你对这个兴趣的体验，对你的学习生活有什么帮助等。就举我们同学刚才的例子，如“篮球”这个话题，其实大家只要写清楚你从什么时候就喜欢打球、看篮球，篮球怎么成了你学习生活中重要的一块，同时还要写从打球中学到哪些对人生有益的知识，获得哪些人生的感悟，如……”这时我又发问了，“喜欢打篮球的同学，请你说说，从打球中获得了哪些有价值的东西，你有哪些独到的感受？”话一完，学生就低头思考起来。过了一会儿开始举手发言了：“打球讲究的是配合，我们同学在平时也应相互支持鼓励，不要因为我们是差班学生而看不起自己。”“打球最需要顽强的毅力和永不言败的精神，在我们的人生中也会遇到困难挫折，打球使我懂得如何对付这些困难挫折。” ……“说了这么多，我们要对“兴趣”这个话题拟个题目，先看老师的，《我的兴趣爱好》，大家说好不好？”

“不好，这个题目太一般，不能吸引人。”

“不好，这个题目不能体现自己的个性。”

“不好，这个题目太笼统，不能突出自己的哪个兴趣爱好。”

“不好，不如改为《噢，我的篮球！》”

“可改为《音乐，让我与你相伴》”

“《生活因篮球而精彩！》”…………当学生说出《生活因篮球而精彩！》时所有学生都拍手叫好，如果不是亲耳听见，确实很难相信这个题目出自这个差班学生之口，有了这个好题目，作文就已完成了一半。

接下来，进行作文开头结尾辅导，我给他们作了两组示范：1、开头：“阳光、空气、水是人类生存的三元素，在我每天的生活中，也有一样少不了，那就是篮球，它陪伴我每一天，给我莫大的快乐和幸福，在此，让我慢慢告诉你。”

结尾：感谢你，是你给了我信心和勇气；是你给了我快乐和幸福；是你使我从幼稚走向成熟，从软弱走向坚强；感谢你，篮球，你是我一生的最爱！

2、开头：“音乐一直是我的挚爱，我是一个不折不扣的乐迷。音乐已融入我的生活，我实在无法想像要是没有音乐，我的生活会成什么样。我经常光顾音像店，那些美妙的声音从而陆续流进了我的家、流进了我的心中。”

结尾：生活，成长，在音乐中，我觉得自己在音乐中永远是一个孩子，一直跟着它一起哭、笑，感受生命的存在与灿烂。听音乐时，闭上眼睛，放飞心灵吧！

即兴开了两组开头结尾，是让学生明白，对自己喜爱的事物一定要把这种强烈的感受抒发出来，尽可能打动读者，产生共鸣，尽管要求过高，但要让每一个同学相信自己有这个能力，尝试着去写，相信会有奇迹发生。

围绕“兴趣”写一篇作文，采用开门见山、“先情夺人”的开头方式，使学生有一种创作的新奇感；中间的叙事也做到了选材于生活，真实生动感人，在叙事中表现这个兴趣所带来的启示或感悟；结尾采用抒情式结尾，亦显得感情浓烈，得以升华。在学生已充分理解作文目的的基础上，学生们开始写下刚才说的话，写得认真快速。

四、教学反思

通过这样一堂课，作文的火花在每一个学生心中点亮，就连平时写作文最差的学生也写出了400字左右。由此可见，差生的作文是可以写好的，只要是触动了学生的感情神经，选材得当，命题新颖，相信作文自然会绽放其独有的光芒，也会让差生自主地发挥主观能动性，变厌写为乐写，变白话为含蓄，变浅层为深刻，使学生在琢磨中悟道，在坚持中获得乐趣。

作文教学是一个循序渐进、不断积累发展的过程，仅仅通过一堂课，其实很难断定学生已对作文有了浓厚的兴趣，并能坚持写作。要全面提高学生的写作水平，功在课外。但通过这堂课，使我对这些学生有了新的认识，也感觉到新课标新教学理念学习实践的重要性。这堂课我认为有几点是成功的：

1、树立学生的主体意识，发挥差生说话写作的主观能动性，让学生活动起来，对自己感兴趣的话题能畅所欲言。

2、找准切入点，让学生找到生活与写作的桥梁。每个学生都有自己感兴趣的事物，即使再差的学生，他也有自己的“一技之长”，作为教师一定要善于发现并利用学生的这些“亮点”，从而有效点燃写作兴趣之火。特别是学生所表达的有关活动的感受，言语自然有味，确实体现了学生的个性。

3、实践“跳摘”理论，化解作文难度，使学生稍微一跳便能摘到“果子”。课堂上与学生聊天说话，消除学生对作文的紧张恐惧心理，让他们轻松进入写作状态，调动学生学习生活中的知识积累，使作文有话可说。从学生拟写的作文题目来分析，远远超出平时的水平，若不是采用这种方式，很难让这些学生有这种水平发挥。

但这节课也存在一些不足，未能采用灵活多样的方法，使学生自主探究，如条件允许，可在学生叙说的同时，播放有关NBA篮球赛、世界杯足球赛的画面，把学生的情感推向高潮，更有利于激发差生的写作热情。另外由于学生基础水平的局限，写作思维仍旧单一，未能进行较好的想象联想，在文本中呈现的语句表达仍旧直露，不含蓄，未能综合运用多种表达方式和修辞方法。

因而我认为，在写作教学中尽可能为学生创设自主探究的“境”，即提供自主的机遇，设计自主探究的情境，创设自主探究的氛围，来有效激发学生的写作兴趣。教师应善于营造平等、民主、和谐、轻松的课堂气氛，使用最佳的教学艺术，为学生自主写作提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少束缚，使学生易于动笔，乐于表达，思维灵动，笔下生辉。写的文章自然就富有创新，富有真情实感和情趣

在写作教学中，应注重培养观察、思考、表现、评价的能力。要求学生说真话、实话、心里话，不说假话、空话、套话，使作文朝自然、生活、哲理的方向迈进，真正做到“让写作快乐起来”！

[初一年级作文教学实录

In the 21st century, the scientific and economic development of mankind has

reached a high degree. But I want to ask: have you ever thought that the exhaust

gases from the industry pollute the air? Does the industry waste water seriously

contaminate the water? A lot of snacks will eat the ozone layer to make

ultraviolet radiation harmful to human health?

In scientific and economic development, we should also think about the

environmental damage and the causes of global warming. Protect the environment,

trees, flowers and birds will bring you wonderful scenery. Can you listen

carefully to the graceful singing of the birds? Can you ever stroke the birch

smooth coat or the rough skin of the pine? Can you smell the intoxicating

fragrance of the flowers?

Let the stream crowd through your open fingers. You will feel the beauty of

nature. Let the wind blow you, you will feel the wild nature. Let the rain be on

you, you will feel the naughty nature of nature.

狗是人类的好朋友，你喜欢狗吗?下面小编为你整理的我喜欢狗初一英语作文，希望对你有帮助! 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇1

I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇2

Dog is my favorite animal. The reason why I like it most is because it’s very competent. Dog is the best friend for mankind. It is also the best companion for the old people. The dog can feel the human nature. So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them. The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warmly. I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous. They are special dogs. Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way. See, I say dogs are very competent.

我最喜欢的动物是狗。我最喜欢它的原因是因为它很能干。狗是人类最好的朋友。它也是老人们最好的伴侣。狗是通人性的。如果他们的孩子不在他们身边，很多老年人会养狗。老年人可以把对他们孩子的爱放到狗狗的身上，这也能温暖他们的心。导盲犬是非常有名的。他们是特殊的狗。这些狗会引导眼睛看不见的主人找到正确的路。看，我就说狗狗是非常能干的。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇3

I like dog.

Dogs are friends of human beings.And it is known to us that dogs are very honest.They can help people do many things when people are out of home .For example ,dogs can take a good care of babies when people go to work.They also can watch the house to make sure that it is safe for his master.Dogs are friendly to people.

In a word, i love dogs better than cats.I prefer dogs because they are loyal to human,besides they are the best friend of humanity.these days ,dogs have become pets of us. they are not in the wild any more.they get put clothes on and wear bowknot.they have fogotten how to prey.as a human, I love dog as a pet but I feel much pity that dogs have lost so much of their instinct.

I like dogs,because they are so clever、beautiful and cute.I can play with them,they are our good friends, and that is why I like him a lot.i regard dogs as better pets .first ,they are faithful to hosts.we have heard lots of stories about dogs faithfulness.second,they are lovely . there are many cute pictures of dogs on internet.besides,they are brave . when hosts are in danger , dogs often try to rescue their hosts.

现在越来越多的外国人开始学习中文，了解中国的文化。作为中国的传统节日过年，更应该向大家介绍介绍。接下来小编为你带来过年话题初一英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

The Spring Festival is very important to Chinese people. In the past，people could not often have meat，rice or other delicious food. They could only eat these during the Spring festival. So every year they hoped that the Spring Festival would come soon. Now， although people‘s life is much better，and we can eat the delicious foods everyday. People still like the festival. Because most people can have a long holiday，and we are free to go on a trip or visit our friends or have parties with our family. In the evenings，we can have a big meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watch the TV programs.

过年对中国人来说非常重要。在过去，人们往往没有肉，大米或其他美味的食物吃。他们通常只能在过年吃到这些。所以每年他们都希望过年可以快点来。现在，虽然人们的生活好多了，我和家人每天都可以吃美味的食物。人们仍然喜欢的过年。因为大多数人可以有一个很长的假期，我和家人可以自由地去旅行或拜访我和家人的朋友或与我和家人的家人聚会。晚上，我和家人可以在餐厅大吃一顿，或与家人留在家里看电视节目。

I like the Spring Festival very much. How wonderful the Spring Festival is！

我非常喜欢过年。过年是多么的美妙啊！

在我们班，同学们都叫我“小翻译”。其实，我以前的英语成绩是一塌糊涂。

记得那一次，我的英语测试只考了58分。卷子发下来后，老师要求拿回家让父母签阅。不用说，父母看了少不了一顿打哭。没办法，我只好去求外公了。

“外公，我知道您最疼薇薇了，求您帮我签个字，好吗？”

外公接过卷子一看，眉头皱了起来。“薇薇，外公可以帮你签这个字，不过外公有一个要求。”

“没问题，只要您能签字，十个要求我也答应您。”

“从今天开始，外公和你一起学英语，谁要是没学好，就由对方处罚。”

“好呀，一言为定。” 我满口答应了外公的要求。心想：一个老头子了，我就不信你还能记得住ABC！？

然而，我错了，真的错了。

那是一个夏天，正值高温季节。白天，火辣辣的太阳把大地烤得像个火炉。直到晚上，也没有一丝儿风，我们坐在阳台上边摇着蒲扇边谈话。唯独外公一个人聚精会神地坐在书桌前学习英语。豆大的汗珠从他的额头上滚落下来，但他顾不得这些，仍然埋头奋笔疾书。

突然，外公的眉毛紧锁起来，啊，原来他有一个单词背不出,急得汗一个劲地流下来。我走上前去用关切的口吻说：“外公，先歇歇吧！”“不，”外公说，“你先去吧，我写完再来！”就这样，外公翻呀查呀，渐渐地夜深了，我们都入睡了。

半夜里，我醒了，蒙胧中看见灯还亮着，书桌前有个背影，不停地写着什么，汗水已经湿透了背心。我定睛一看，啊，是外公，他怎么还没唾？我看了一眼挂钟，已经深夜12点多了。外公的旁边还放着只脸盆，里面盛着冷水，一条毛巾，啊，这是外公用冷毛巾来降温呢！

外公的学习精神深深感染了我。我暗自下决心，一定要发奋学好英语，绝不辜负外公对我的一片苦心。从这以后，我的课余时间就和ABC交上了“朋友”。在往返学校的路上，在课间休息的时间里，在完成家庭作业之后……我把所学的英语单词，一个又一个背记在心里。这一招，还是外公教我的，他说，学好英语的基础，首先就是熟记单词。一天又一天过去了，我对英语越来越感兴趣了，还时常用英语和外公进行简单的对话，英语成绩自然上了一个新台阶。

现在我不在害怕英语考试了，每次考试之后，老师都会在班上点名表扬我。看着同学们那羡慕的眼神，其实我心里比谁都清楚，我今天的成绩，全都是因为我有一个好外公！

[初一作文：我和外公学英语

Almost all people work hard for success, but not all people can success.

Many people ask how to make success. I think the answer is persistence. The way

to success is full of failure and difficulty. People should never give up when

meet them. If you give up, you can’t be successful. No matter how hard it is,

persistence must be there.

is time for farmers to get ready for their fields.

the second season is summer. the three months are june, july and august. the weather is very hot and it often rains. people can go swimming and sightseeing. it is time for all things to grow up.

the third season is autumn. the three months are september, october and november. the weather becomes cooler and cooler. leaves begin to fall to the ground. it is the harvest time for farmers.

the fourth season is winter. december, january and february are the three months of that season. the weather is very cold, and most of the plants die at that time. sometimes it snows. people can enjoy skating and skiing. but winter doesn t stay with us for a long time, for spring comes again soon.

翻译：

一年四季

一年有四季，每个季节有三个月，每个季节的气候都不一样。生命的轮回由四季控制。

第一个季度是春季。春季的三个月为三月、四月和五月。在这段时间里，天气温暖、晴朗，万物复苏。冬眠的动物们也醒过来了，农民们开始忙农活。

第二个季节是夏季，包括六月、七月和八月。天气非常热，而且老是下雨。人们能游泳、观光。夏季也是万物生长的好时候。

第三个季节是秋季，三个月分别是九月、十月和十一月。天 气越来越凉，树叶开始飘落。这是一个收获的季节。

最后一个季节是冬季，这一季包括十二月、一月和二月。天气非常冷，大多数植物都死了。有时候还下雪，人们可以滑冰和滑雪。但是冬天不会太长，因为春天马上就要来临了。

"Low carbon" start small, since the sixth grade, as long as I dont save, mom and dad will speak of the words in my ear. To this end, I decided that I really want to be a low-carbon life. Remember once, mom after using the mask, just ready to throw away, just let me see, I hurriedly shouts to prevent a mother: "mom, cant throw away!" Mother heard after, immediately stop. I ran over and took the mother in the hands of the mask. Then said to his mother: "mom you have finished using the mask cant throw, said on television the mask after use can wipe furniture, not only a bright shine, and its fragrance.

"After listening to his mother, smiled and patted my head say:" my daughter really understand low carbon life. "I cant agree in front of dad, in a few days ago, because our wardrobe very damp, mom and dad are there, then I thought of my grandma often use newspaper mat in the wardrobe, she told the newspaper can be moistureproof, still can absorb peculiar smell, so I went to the newspaper, but used the newspaper all let me away, now also really didnt have the newspaper in the home, the somebody else all say" books to time square hate less "but I want to say today" newspaper when hate nothing ". Well, by the way, today I thought I saw daddy came home from work with a newspaper, I hurriedly found the father, "dad you back a newspaper today? "Dad puzzled nodded, I cant wait to say:" quick contribution out, I have an idea. "

When dad see me the paper pad in the wardrobe, harm my dad cant find newspapers and buy one. Now, I walk to school every day, no longer let father motorcycle send me; Every time I go shopping bring your own bag... I want to live a low-carbon life. Low carbon starts from me, lets construction of a new civilization, happiness, charm, donggang.

“低碳从小做起”，自从上六年级以来，只要我不节约，爸爸妈妈就会在我耳边说起这句话。 为此，我决定真的要做个低碳生活的执行者。 记得有一次，妈妈用完面膜之后，刚准备要扔掉，恰巧让我看到了，我连忙大喊一声阻止妈妈：“妈妈，不能扔掉!”妈妈听见了之后，立即停下。我飞快跑过去，夺下了妈妈手中的面膜。然后对妈妈说：“妈妈你用完的面膜不能扔，电视上说面膜用完之后可以擦家具，不仅擦得亮，而且还有香味。

”妈妈听了后，微笑着拍拍我头的说：“我女儿真的懂得低碳生活了。” 在爸爸面前我也不能服输，就在前几天，因为我们家的衣柜很潮湿，爸爸和妈妈都无计可施，这时我想到了奶奶常常用报纸垫在衣柜里，她说过报纸可以防潮，还可以吸收异味，于是我就去找报纸，但是以前用过的报纸都让我扔掉了，现在家里还真的没有报纸，人家都说“书到用时方恨少”今天我却想说“报纸用时方恨无”。嗯，对了，今天我好像看见爸爸下班时拿回来了一张报纸，我连忙找到了爸爸：“爸爸你今天是不是拿回来一张报纸?”爸爸疑惑不解的点点头，我迫不及待的说：“快贡献出来，我有办法了。”

当爸爸看我把报纸垫在衣柜里时，害的我爸爸找不到报纸又买啦一张。 现在，每天上学我都步行，再也不让爸爸摩托车送我;我每次逛街都自备口袋……我要过真正的低碳生活。 低碳从我做起，让我们一起来建设文明、幸福、魅力、新东港吧。

The first day is for the welcoming of the deities of the heavens and earth, officially beginning at midnight. Many people, especially Buddhists, abstain from meat consumption on the first day because it is believed that this will ensure longevity for them. Some consider lighting fires and using knives to be bad luck on New Years Day, so all food to be consumed is cooked the day before. For Buddhists, the first day is also the birthday of Maitreya Bodhisattva (better known as the more familiar Budai Luohan), the Buddha-to-be. People also abstain from killing animals.

Most importantly, the first day of Chinese New Year is a time when families visit the oldest and most senior members of their extended family, usually their parents, grandparents or great-grandparents.

Some families may invite a lion dance troupe as a symbolic ritual to usher in the Lunar New Year as well as to evict bad spirits from the premises. Members of the family who are married also give red packets containing cash to junior members of the family, mostly children and teenagers.

While fireworks and firecrackers are traditionally very popular, some regions have banned them due to concerns over fire hazards, which have resulted in increased number of fires around New Years and challenged municipal fire departments work capacity. For this reason, various city governments (e.g., Hong Kong, and Beijing, for a number of years) issued bans over fireworks and firecrackers in certain premises of the city. As a substitute, large-scale fireworks have been launched by governments in cities like Hong Kong to offer citizens the experience.

There is an English saying.It says,"Early to bed, early to rise, makes a

man healthy, wealthy and wise." Have you ever heard it before?It means that we

should go to bed early and get up early.If we do,we shall be healthy.People must

have enough time to sleep.We should sleep for 8 hours every day.So we must do

our homework quickly and go to bed before 10 p.m.Proverbs can always give us

some enlightenment.To know some proverbs is good for us.