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初一英语教学工作总结(汇编20篇)

导语:学习是烦恼、悲伤的天敌,而且可以增加各方面的知识,我希望所有人都能爱上学习。小编收集学习的乐趣作文,欢迎阅读。

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初一年级英语作文:Mothers love

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All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.

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篇1:新学期初一英语

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The new semester is coming and I want to make a plan for it.

Firstly, I will work as hard as before. I really did a good job last term, so I want to keep good as well. During the summer holiday, I did some previews and I found that the courses are not very hard. Secondly, I will spend more time in reading.Readingis really good to a person, because we can learn a lot from books and broaden one’s horizon. Besides, reading can help us think more and deeply.

Finally, I will take part in exercises actively and regularly. No matter how busy I am, I will set sometime aside to build my body which is the basic of any other things. Moreover, after doing exercise, I feel so fresh and relaxed that I can put my whole heart in doing something, such as study, reading, thinking and so on. So this is the plan for the new semester and I am sure I can carry it out step by step.

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篇2:初一年级英语作文我的梦想

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What are dreams? Is going to make track for to find, with dreams, we have the vast blue sky in the heart, a kind of hard teacher, a contribute to the motherland defenders, a great inventor like Edison, a great writer like old grandpa, etc., is a great dream, and my dream just want to be a fashion designer.

Be a costume designer, to match the color of the clothes, costume design, draw the look of the clothes and so on, do you want to be when I grew up in a special designer, I want to design a four seasons can wear, and can adjust the color of the clothes, the appearance of the telescopic clothes, transform the style of clothes, I also want to design a special woolen sweater, is the standard I do a costume designer.

Ha ha, you must be very surprised, so how novel clothes design, I want to install a temperature adjustment in the dress of the stealth screens, it will automatically adjust according to the temperature of the weather condition, the color will have a multi-function screen, there is a fashion design decorative pattern, and had good several sets of clothing color, the dress and scaling, can shrink into shorts, grow and shrink, still can slip into various styles, such as dust coat, skirt, the dress is comfortable and tide, I want to make a lot of people do put on my own, after numerous changes, thinking about clothes. Special sweater I to design for children, the outside is full of fluffy, white Snow White, goose feather, hat is full of hair, two balls hanging down, very cute! My dream is to be a fashion designer, a special designers, a wonderful dream!!!!!

Dream is to have you to chase that dream, as long as to look for a good dream is to a good future! My dream is so, the design is novel, fashionable clothes, the achievement of the greatest pleasures in my life!

梦想是什么?是要去追去找的,有了梦想就有了心中广阔的蓝天,一个慈祥辛勤的老师,一个为祖国做贡献的保卫者,一个像爱迪生那样伟大的发明家,一个像季羡林爷爷那样的大作家等等,都是一个远大的梦想,而我的梦想只想做一个服装设计师。

做一个服装设计师,要会搭配服装的颜色,设计服装的款式,画出衣服的样子等等,我长大以后要做一个特殊的设计师,我要设计一件四季都能穿,而且能调整衣服的颜色,伸缩衣服的样子,变换款式的衣服,我还要设计一件特别的羊毛衫,就是我做一个服装设计师的标准。

哈哈,你一定很惊讶,那么新颖的衣服怎么设计啊,我想在这件衣服里安装一个调整温度的隐形屏幕,它会自动根据天气的温度情况来调整,色彩会有一个多功能屏,里面有时尚的图案花纹,还有原本配好的几套衣服的颜色,这件衣服还有伸缩功能,能缩成短装,又能缩成长装,还能伸缩成各种款式,有风衣、裙子等,这件衣服既舒适又潮流,我想让许多人穿上我亲手做的,经过无数修改、思考的衣服。特别的羊毛衫我要设计给小朋友们穿,外面全是毛绒绒的,雪白雪白的,都是鹅毛,帽子上全是毛,垂下两个绒球,可爱极了!我的梦想就是当一个服装设计师,一个特殊的设计师,一个美好的梦想!

梦想是要有你来追的,梦想只要去寻找,一个好的梦想就是一个好的未来!我的梦想就是如此,设计新颖、时髦的衣服,成就我一生中最大的乐趣!

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篇3:端午节的初一英语

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Today is the Dragon Boat Festival in the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. Every year, aunt will pack lots of delicious food. Sweet sweet jujube dumplings for us, especially my mother and I like it best. You can also eat with your elders and sisters at your grandmothers house, and enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival, but this year, it is not so lively. Uncle and aunt went out to earn money. Uncle went out with his sister. There were only three family members and grandparents. It looks very cold.

Early this morning, I have the mother will give me to eat dumplings package dates, who knows but mother was busy with housework. At noon, dad cooked a good meal and cooked food, called grandpa and grandma to come to dinner, but not a bit of a cheerful atmosphere. In the afternoon, in order not to let the festival have a little meaning, my mother and I went out for a stroll with my grandmother. We went to the market, but did not see the shadow of half of the dumplings, to buy dumplings but no jujube. I was disappointed. My mother comforted me and said, "next time you see the decision to sell the zongzi, you can eat it." Its a little better to hear that. Mom visited the clothing store and took us to the home supermarket, and bought some delicious food on the way. From the supermarket out, we have been fruitful.

Back home, I wanted my uncle and aunt, and my four year old sister, so I went online to chat with them, and the little aunt laughed and told me that a lot of jujube zongzi was given to me at the Dragon Boat Festival next year, so I could eat enough. Though we have not been together for Dragon Boat Festival this year, we can also enjoy seeing them online. Uncle and aunt also have an appointment with me. Next year, Dragon Boat Festival will definitely come back for the holidays.

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篇4:初一英语作文关键连词汇总

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【摘要】“初一英语作文关键词语指导”本文是编者为大家整理的英语作文写作关键词,希望可以给大家的学习带来帮助:

一、表示递进关系的关键词语

Additionally加之;又

besides此外;除……之外

equallyimportant同样重要的是

furthermore此外;而且

inaddition另外

inotherwords换句话说

lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是

moreover而且;此外

thatissay即;就是;换句话说

二、表示转折关系的关键词语

although虽然;尽管

atthesametime同时;但是

despite不管;尽管;不论

evenif即使

eventhough即使

however然而;可是

inspiteof不管

instead代替;而不是

nevertheless然而;不过

onthecontrary正相反

otherwise另外;不同地

regardlessof不管;不顾

still依然;仍然

though虽然;可是

while而

yet然而;但是;仍

三、表示选择关系的关键词语

either…or………或……

insteadof………,而不是……

neither…nor………和……都不……

not…but…不是……而是……

ratherthan…宁可;胜过

whether…ornot是否

四、表示比较关系的关键词语

comparewith/to与……比较

equally相等地;平等地

incomparisonwith与……比较

incontrast相反;大不相同

incontrastto和……对比

inthesameway同样地

instead代替;改为

onthecontrary正相反

while而

五、表示因果关系的关键词语

accordingly因此;从而

asaresultof作为结果

because(of)因为

consequently从而;因此

dueto由于;应归于

hence因此;从此

inthat由于;因为;既然

nowthat因为;既然

onaccountof由于

owingto由于;因……的缘故

so所以

sothat所以

thanksto由于

therefore因此;所以

thus因此

六、用于表示总结的关键词语

aboveall最重要的是

accordingly于是

asaconsequence因此

asaresult结果

ashasbeennoted如前所述

asIhavesaid如我所述

atlast最后

briefly简单扼要地

bydoingso如此

certainly当然地;无疑地

consequently因此

eventually最后

hence因此

inaword总之

inbrief简言之

inconclusion总;最后

inshort简而言之

insummary简要地说

insum总之;简而言之

obviously显然

onthewhole总体来说;整个看来

toconclude总而言之

tospeakfrankly坦白地说

tosumup总而言之

tosummarize总而言之

以上是小编为大家整理的“初一英语作文关键词语指导”全部内容。

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篇5:初一英语作文:中国的新年ChineseNewYear

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Chinese new year is a chinese traditional festival. We also call it the spring festival. It is on lunar january 1st.

On new years eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. There are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. Overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. After dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. We have a wonderful evening on new years eve.

On the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. After breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. On the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.

Everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.

春节是中国的传统节日。我们也称它为春节。它是在农历1月1日。

新年前夕,所有人围坐在桌子上,有一个大的家庭晚餐。有一些蔬菜,一些鱼,一些肉,一些水果和一些喝果汁、可口可乐、百事可乐和一些不错的葡萄酒。总的来说,这是一个很好的和美味的晚餐。晚饭后,我们总是看电视节目。我们有一个美好的晚上在新年前夕。

在春节的第一天,大部分的人早起,说“新年快乐”。早餐,人们经常吃饺子和包子。早餐后,人们常常做出许多美味的食物,和孩子经常打牌,电脑游戏和烟火。第二和第三天,我们拜访亲戚、朋友。

在中国新年每个人都很忙,每个人都是快乐的,也是。

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篇6:初一英语上册作文写给Lucy的一封信

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假设你叫李红,请你给Lucy写一封,向她介绍你的家庭情况和学校情况,60词以上。

X. One possible version:

May 23th, 2005

Dear Mr Qiu,

Thank you so much for teaching me so well. You are very kind to me. During the last three years I have learnt a lot of knowledge from you. I’ll never forget you. I’ll keep on studying hard as usual in the senior middle school.

Wish you success in the future teaching work. Wish you a healthy body for ever. And wish you a happy life in the future. And I also hope that everything will go well in our school! Best wishes for you and for our school!

Your student,

Li Hong

[初一英语上册作文写给Lucy的一封信

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篇7:初一英语作文:我最喜欢的运动员

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There are many sports stars in the world. Do you know which is my favourite sport star? My favourite star is Yi Jianlian.

Yi Jianlian is a good basketballer. He is born in Heshan, Guangdong. He is 2.12 meters tall and 113 kilos. He is taller than many people, and he is hangsome and kind. He works hard in the match and in the training. So his coach and team friends all like him.

Yi Jianlian began his career quite early. When he was fifteen years old, he came into CBA. In 2002, he got the first gold medal——Asia Youth championship’s champion. After that, he helped Guangdong team win 3 gold medals from 2003 to 2006 CBA championships. And he von the CBA MVP from 2005 to 2006. In 2006 Asian Games, he got 16.6 points and 10.3 rebounds. He was the greatest basketball player in PRC, in 2006, I think.

On June 28th, 2007, Yi Jianlian came into NBA! All the Chinese people were excited. Because he is the fourth Chinese basketballer who came into NBA. All the people hope he can become better and better..

Yi Jianlian is good at playing basketball. And he is handsome, friendly, kind and so on. So he has a lot of basketball fans in the world. My mother and I are both his fans.

Yi Jianlian is my favourite star. I think, Yi Jianlian will be a famous basketball star in the world later. All the people on the earth will know him!

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篇8:作文初一英语

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Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24

hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to

twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The

temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the

highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature

would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in

Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.

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篇9:初一英语FreshAir

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Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

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篇10:初一描写四季的英语作文

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winter is my favourite season. because my birthday is in it. it lasts from december to february. in winter it is cloudy, windy, cold and dry. in winter i take off my dress and put on my coat. i can make a snowman, go sking and go skating in it. i can drink chocolate. but i can’t drink cold water and eat ice-creams. winter is white. i like winter very much.

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篇11:初一英语Myday

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I am a junior high school student. Everyday, I get up at 7 am. And then, my mother gives me my breakfast. I go to school at 7.30 am. I have 4 classes in the morning and 3 in the afternoon. I go back home at 5 pm, and finish my homework before 8 pm. I go to sleep at 10 oclock.

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篇12:初一英语作文CarsorBikes

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初一年级英语作文:Cars or Bikes?

题目:有人选择骑自行车上学/班,有人选择开/坐私家车上学/班。你觉得哪种出行方式更好? 为什么?

Cars or Bikes?

Cars and bicycles are similar in that they are both privately owned means of transport. In other words, they have in common the fact that the owner can decide when and where to go. However, there are a lot of difference between them. A car costs a lot more to buy than a bicycle.

In addition, it is far more expensive to run. For example, a car has to be insured, and must be serviced regularly; furthermore, spare parts for a car cost a lot of money. A ear uses petrol, which is expensive, whereas a bicycle uses only human energy.

On the other hand, as far as comfort is concerned, a car is better than a bicycle. In a car you are protected from the weather, have comfortable seats and plenty of room to can? people and luggage. A car is not only more comfortable than a bicycle, but it is faster as well. With respect to convenience, it is difficult to say which one is better. A bicycle is certainly easier to park!

To sum up, each one has its advantages and disadvantages.(约180字)

[初一英语作文Cars or Bikes

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篇13:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇14:初一英语自我介绍80词作文

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Me Hello,everybody!My name`s Kevin Bill。I am a 15-year-old boy and I am from China。My favorite movie are Rush Hour and Mr。Bean。Do you know them?I think they are exciting action movie and interesting comedy 。My English teacher is a beautiful teacher and she`s always friendly to us。Her favorite sport is basketball and we always play basketball together。My favorite music is pop and my favorite fruits are apples and grapes。And Sunday is my favorite day。How about you ?What`s your name?

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篇15:初一英语作文:快乐课间

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Happy Class Break

The bell rang and the class was over. Many classmates jumped up from the seat. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom while talking and laughing. Two girls were singing a song on their seats. Some boys were telling a joke loudly. They were laughing together. I was chatting with some classmates when Li Hong came to me. She joined us. Our class break was often full of fun and laughter. We often have a pleasant break

[初一英语作文:快乐课间

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篇16:我教爷爷学英语

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爷爷退休后觉得无聊,我就想教他学英语。于是,我对他说 :“爷爷,我教您学英语吧?”爷爷一愣,然后说:“这么大岁数学英语,能行吗?再说,学了有什么用呢?”我就知道爷爷会这么说,早就准备好的劝说辞便一股脑儿地倒了出来 :“退休后学一门外语,正是好时机,虽说您年岁大一点,记忆力差了些,但时间很宽裕,只要肯花工夫,学起来不一定比年轻人差。再说,您老外出旅游,遇上外宾还可交谈几句,怎么就没有用呢?”

我一番恳切的话,终于把爷爷的心说动了。心动之后是行动,自此,我每天抽空教爷爷学国际音标。在我的辅导下,爷爷学会了元音、辅音的发音方法,并 将 48 个 音 标 背 得 烂 熟 于 胸。 之 后,我又教爷爷单词的拼读法,并授口诀 :“辅音轻,元音重,两音相撞猛一碰。”同时,我还教爷爷一些简单的日常用语。爷爷肯下功夫,学得很快,不久之后就能说一些句子了。

那段时间奶奶刚好去姑姑家住了一阵子,一天她回来刚进门,爷爷就给奶奶个“How are you”,搞得奶奶一时摸不着头脑。当她弄清了是英语问候语“你好吗”时,乐得直捶爷爷的背,说:“你这老头子,驴子学马叫,这么大年纪了还开什么洋荤。”我听了,在旁帮爷爷的腔 :“奶奶,爷爷现在求上进学英语哩。他说他学会了还要教您学呢。”看着奶奶惊讶的表情,爷爷得意地说 :“Yes !”

看着爷爷的高兴劲,我庆幸自己这步棋走对了。

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篇17:初一描写四季的英语作文

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in the spring,everything become green,the grass come out,there are flowers everywhere.

in the summer,its very hot,you can hear birds chirping in the tree and frogs singing in the riverside.

in the autumn,everything become yellow,the fruits are mature,and wheat is ripe,its the harvest time.

in the winter,it snows here.everything is covered with whiteness.

how beautifel my hometown is!but i like winter the best.i can make a snowman and play outdoor.it is so exciting.

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篇18:初一英语作文Anunforgettablefriend

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A friend who is a police in Guangzhou got married yesterday.He once helped me get out of a very sticky situation without asking for any demand. I am sorry that I couldnt give my congratuation to him in pern his big day. Two years ago, a stuffy summer evening I was robbed when walking on the street with my another female friend after we left a hair salon.

Two guys riding on a motorcycle behind us rushed onto the sidewalk and pulled my purse away. I fell down on the hard concrete ground and the mortorcycle was hitting by a electricity pole.They quickly shifted the direction and zipped away. We were so appalled and black-out that we forgot to dial 110.I called my friend, the police, for help with tears in my eyes. Ten minutes later, he showed up and send me to a hospital nearby. The young resident took little care of my spot where I got hurt. Misfortunes never come alone.Three days later, it became so inflaming and swollen because of the heat of summer that I couldnt walk. I vented my anger and anxiety everywhere I could and decided to change another better hospital.In order to avoid making further and worse problem then and future, I decided to let a specific doctor to diagose it. It was a bolt out of the blue to learn that I needed a surgery, whereas it was incredible to undertake a surgery without any local or gerenal anesthesia. I extremely suffered from it. It was him who held my hand tightly without any hesitation during the whole process and it was him who took me back and forth to hospital to do the daily checks. There were no sufficient words expressing my thanks for him.It took me a month back to the normal track until the Mid-Autumn day.My friend availed himself of the benefit from his job to offset the 70% of the total costs. However, what the quite unhappy thing was a hard-to-miss and hard-to-fade mark on my right leg.

[初一英语作文 An unforgettable friend

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篇19:给好朋友的一封信初一英语作文

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写给好朋友的一封篇一

Dear John,

亲爱的约翰:

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

好久不见,你的暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子,可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话,我喜欢那里的生活。

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

我很期待你的回复!

Truly yours,

Zoey

你忠实的朋友

写给好朋友的一封信篇二

Dear Friend,

亲爱的朋友,

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember me?

最近过得怎么样?我很想你。你还记得我吗?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my life.

老实说,我很荣幸成为你的朋友。我还记得我们在一起的日子。我觉得你是世界上最善良的人。我们在一起的时候,我们总是亲如兄弟,所以在我的心里我很感激你。你离开后,我总是想起你。下一次如果我们有机会见到对方,我会对你说“谢谢你”。谢谢你的善良。让我现在的人生有了意义。

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

虽然现在我们在两个不同的地方,但我们依然在一起,因为我们总是心连心。我相信我们还能再次见面。 因为我们是亲密的朋友,亲爱的兄弟。因为你,我的人生总是那么的有意义。无论我在哪里,我都会为你祈祷好运。

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright future.

最后但并非最不重要的是我希望你能有一个光明的未来。

Sincerely yours,

Jason

詹森

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篇20:初一英语作文WeatherForecast

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Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24 hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.

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