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关于初中即将毕业的英语作文带翻译(汇编20篇)

导语:我更加小心地溜着,不时也加快速度,平稳而缓慢地推着椅子绕了几圈之后,我一次也没摔倒。下面是小编整理的一些关于溜冰的优秀作文,欢迎查阅,谢谢!

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英语日记大全带翻译

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The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy。 As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some。 Early in the morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more fortable。翻译:最后放暑假了,就应好好歇歇了!但是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了,帮妈妈洗碗,扫地,做饭等等,到了中午,我快累死了,往床上一躺,扇扇电风扇,舒服多了。

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篇1:初中英语作文如何做个快乐的孩子

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How To Be A Happy Kid

Good morning, dear judges!

My name is Joyce. Today I will give a speech about How To Be A Happy Kid.

Everyone deserves to have a happy childhood. We all know, life isn’t

easy all the time, even for children.

One time I didn’t do well on a math test. It was the first time for me

to get such a low mark. I felt miserable about it. When I got home, without

saying a single word to my parents, I rushed into my own room. I sat down

in front of my piano. Unconsciously, music came out from my fingers. I was

lost in the beauty of the music. My heart flew with the song in the air. The

piano music was just like a wise old man consoling me with soft words. After

playing the music, I felt very calm and happy.

We shouldn’t lack for joy in life. The key is to find ways

to be happy. For me, playing the piano helps me初中物理 find the road back to

happiness. For other children, they might find it other ways, like by

singing, dancing, playing soccer or helping people. But for all of

us, it should come from knowing our parents love us.

I am a child. Children shouldn’t worry about anything. I wish every

kid is a happy kid.

Thank you for listening!

[初中英语作文如何做个快乐孩子

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篇2:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

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In a few days is the Dragon Boat Festival.

Do you have to know the Dragon Boat Festival? I know, in order to commemorate WuZiLian, his father was murdered by king chu, dig grave after he went to the kingdom of wu, chu got know sword he giveth him dead bodies into river, on May 5, the day the custom of Dragon Boat Festival is a family mo_a grass, pomegranate flowers, garlic, rowing.

Home is the holiday, we get up early in the morning, bath, wash a mo_a grass.

I most like the Dragon Boat Festival!

再过几天就是端午节了。

你知道端午节的有来吗?我知道,为了纪念伍子廉,他的父兄被楚王所杀,之后他去吴国挖墓,楚王知道了他赐剑死了他将尸体投入大江,这天5月5日端午节的习俗是个家插艾草,石榴花,蒜头,划龙舟。

我们家是这样过节的,一大早起床,洗一个艾草澡。

我最喜欢过端午节了!

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篇3:自我介绍初中英语作文

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i come from china.i am 13.i am a lively girl.my name is wang ting,and my english name is linda.i am keen on sports,because it can make me strong.i also like reading book,because i can learn some knowladge.i like reading best.i enjoy it when i was a child,i think it has many attractions.my ambition is to be a teacher in poor mountain region schools,the children there cannot go to school for theyre so poor.they are so clever and lovely,it is really a pity if they cannot go to school.so i want to help them.thank you

[自我介绍初中英语作文

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篇4:初中英语作文大全

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These are lots of books in our daily life. Some are about history, some are novels, and some are even about the dream in the future. I think its useful to read stories, because it can be used sometimes. Once, there was a very difficult question in an important history exam history, which wasnt mentioned in our history books, even our teacher has never told us about it. But I remembered clearly that I had read it in a history story, so I answered the question without difficulty and became the only student in our class who answered the question correctly. In my view, its useful to read stories.

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篇5:初中国庆英语

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celeberate the 55th national day chinese people will welcome the 55th national day two days later,october 1th.

in beijing,the tiananmen square is decorated by more than 300,000 pots of flowers,the chairman maos old icon is changed by a new one hanging on the tiananmen building.

in nanjing,sweet-scented osmanthus festival,misty rain culture festival in mochou lake,barbecue festival in gulin park will be held during the national day.

in chongqing,more than 2,000 of lights on bridge are renewed to welcome the national day.

during the national day period,raising the national falg ceremony,a concert of national music and an exhibition of patriotic films will be held in hangzhou,zhejing province.

happy national day!

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篇6:关于父亲节的英语作文带翻译

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Dear John, It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,

亲爱的约翰: 今天是父亲节。它是一个特别的日子, 不是吗? 在这个特别的日子我认为我们应该做一些事情来向我们的父亲表达我们的爱。我的爸爸和我是好朋友。不论我什么时候遇到困难, 他总是在那里准备帮助我。今天, 我将为他制作一张漂亮的卡片, 在上面写上我的谢意和最美好的祝愿。然后下午我将帮助他洗汽车, 在晚上做他最喜欢吃的食物。此外, 晚饭后我将和他散步, 然后和他下象棋, 因为他非常喜欢下象棋。我确信他将非常高兴。你的父亲节计划是什么? 我期盼着你的来信。

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篇7:初中这就是我英语作文

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My name is Li Xing, a boy in fourteen years old. I come from Dalian, Liaoning Province, which is a beautiful and energetic city. Every year, thousands of tourists visit there. There are three people in my family, my parents and I. My parents are doctors who work in a big hospital in my city. I have many interests. Swimming, reading and movie are my favorites, which bring color to my busy study life. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. I work very hard to improve it, but it doesn’t work very well. Besides, I am easygoing and likely to make friends with others. Friendship is an important part of my life.

我叫李兴,今年十四岁。我来自辽宁省大连市。这是一个美丽而又充满活力的城市。每年都有成千上万的游客来这里参观。我家共有三口人,父母和我。我的父母都是大医院的医生。我有很多爱好,其中游泳,阅读和电影是我最喜欢的。它们给我忙碌的学习生活带来了很多色彩。我擅长语文和英语,而数学则是我的弱项。尽管我很努力去提高它,但是并没有很大的作用。除此之外,我也是个外向的人,喜欢和别人做朋友。友情是我生活中重要的一部分。

就是我,一个完完整整的我,一个不一样的我,一个地球上仅有的我,希望我给大家留下很好的印象哦。

[初中这就是我英语作文

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篇8:漂亮的洋娃娃少儿英语寓言小故事带翻译

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Tina is a lovely girl. She has a lot of dolls. One of these dolls is very beautiful. She has long blond hair and wears a white dress. The little girl likes her very much. She called her “Sandy”. You would forget all the sad things and become happy when you see her.

Tina tried to teach Sandy to speak, but she failed. When she is free, Tina always made clothed for her. When she is unhappy or met with some difficulties, Tina talked to her, because they are close friends. What a lovely girl she is!

Do you like it, too?

漂亮洋娃娃

缇娜是一个可爱的女孩, 她有许多洋娃娃。其中有个是很没得:她有着金色的长发,穿着一件白色的连衣裙。小女孩非常喜欢它,因此, 小女孩叫她“桑迪”。当你看到它的时候就会高兴,会忘记所有不开心的事。

缇娜试着教桑迪说话,可她失败了。 当缇娜空闲时,她时常会桑迪缝衣服。当她遇到不快乐的事或碰倒困难的时候,缇娜中哦你对它倾述,因为他们是亲密的朋友。多么可爱的一个女孩啊!

你也喜欢它吗?

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篇9:英语作文及翻译之我的理想工作

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以下是为大家整理的关于英语作文大全:我的理想工作,希望大家能够喜欢!

Today, as the development of technology, people can change their faces by doing plastic surgery, because of the commercial ads, people are highly effected by the exaggerated facts that they can be the shining stars. So people pay special attention on the outlooks, they want to look perfect, as far as I am concerned, the true beauty is nothing with perfect looking, only the inner beauty makes you shining. In the fairly tale of Cinderella, the prince chooses the poor girl instead of the beautiful girls, because he admires Cinderella’s inner beauty, though she is nobody. Though it is just a story, it tells people that inner beauty makes one outstanding. People can make their faces perfect, but there is no way to fulfill their inner beauty by technology. Inner beauty is the most precious thing, beautiful outlook will fade away with the time, but inner beauty won’t, it only getting valuable.

今天,随着科技的发展,人们可以通过做外科手术改变自己的外貌,由于商业广告,人们深深受到那些夸张效果的影响,相信自己可以成为耀眼的明星。因此人们很关注外表,他们想要让自己看起来完美,就我看来,真正的美丽和完美的外表无关,唯有内在美才能让你耀眼。在童话故事《灰姑娘》中,王子选择了那个可怜的女孩而不是那些好看的姑娘,因为他欣赏的是灰姑娘的内在美,虽然她没有地位。虽然这只是个故事,它告诉人们内在美让一个人出众。人们可以通过科技让他们的外表完美,但是内在美却是无法通过科技得到的。内在美是最宝贵的东西,美丽的外表会随着时间而消逝,但是内在美不会,它只会更加珍贵。

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篇10:我的爱好初中英语作文

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hobbies are very important to a person。 without having any hobby, life wont be as colorful as it should be。 i have a variety of hobbies, such as collecting stamps, playing musical instruments, reading, and doing sport activities。

when i am free, i will spend time on my hobbies。 when i am in a blue mood, i will also do my hobbies to cheer myself up。 hobbies can help us improve our moods。 many hobbies requires devotion。 for example, when you play a musical instrument, you have to practice over and over in order to perform good music。 after a period if you still enjoy it, gradually it will become a hobby of yours。 but, remember: a hobby is like gold under the ground; no hobby will come to you unless you dig it out yourself。

if you can treat study as one of you hobbies, learning will be more enjoyable。 i hope all of you can find your own hobbies and also have fun from them。

[我的爱好初中英语作文

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篇11:英语日记带翻译

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I like the Chinese new year better than any other festival。 This is a time

especially for rest and joy。 I need not study。 I wear good clothes and eat good

food。 I have a good time from morning till night。 I am as happy as a king。

翻译:我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时光。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服,吃好东西。我每一天从早到晚日子过得简单愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。

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篇12:回家真好初中九年级的英语作文

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Last week, my friend asked me to go to visit his hometown with him. I felt so excited and wanted to have a look at the scenery. My parents allowed and I planned to play for a week. I felt so free to leave home and could do what I wanted. I picked up the fruits and caught the fish in the clear river. It was such fun for me. But when I saw my friend talked happily to his grandparents, I felt a little lost. I started to miss my parents. I missed the food my mother cooked and the way she complained. So when I got home, I was very happy and grew up.

上周,我的朋友叫我和他去参观他的家乡。我感到非常激动,想看一看风景。我的父母允许我出去玩,我打算玩一个星期。离开家我感到如此的自由,可以做我想做的。我采摘水果,到清澈的河边抓鱼。这对我来说是如此有趣。但当我看到我的朋友他的祖父母谈笑风生时,我感到有点失落。我开始想念我的父母。我想念妈妈做的菜和她抱怨的样子。当我到家时,我非常高兴,也长大了。

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篇13:有关手机控的初中英语作文

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Today, we talk about mobile phones, and as mobile phones are growing, more and more people are using mobile phones, which brings us a lot of convenience. There are also countless people who are addicted to mobile phones, especially small-school students, and i dont really object to mobile phones, and mobile phones are a good relaxation tool. I dont think its bad to play a mobile phone, but the middle school students are self-control, and they cant control the length of time they spend on their phones. So im addicted to cell phones, so i suggest relaxing a mobile phone, but it requires parental supervision, proper play, and not obsolete. You can relax your emotions, so i suggest that every day you can come back to play for an hour a day and relax and dont be too old to play. Relaxing, relaxing, relaxing relaxation

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篇14:初中毕业

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最后一个夏天,我们就要说再见、回首往事,一件件都历历在目。这三年,有快乐,有伤感…

感谢老师三年来对我们的辛苦教育和培养,向老师们,真诚地道一声:“老师,您辛苦!”。此时此刻,回想起曾经走过的三年初中生活,我们都难以抑制住内心的激动,惜别难舍之情也油然而生。

有人说,初中生活是一本仓促的书。三年前,我们带着激动而又景仰的心情迈进一中,三年来,我们在这,感受到她的温暖与丰富。三年的时光,一千多页的喜怒哀乐,就这样匆匆翻过,但是,它却给我们留下那么多精彩的片段。其中,有年少的顽皮不懂事,有青涩的失败的经历,有茅塞顿开的成熟感悟,也有回味无穷的成功历程。

三年间,我们和一中一起长大,这儿就是我们温暖的家。在这个欢乐的大家庭里,我们用勤奋和智慧创造一次又一次辉煌,我们用梦想和青春编织这温馨绚丽的初中生活。在此,让我们怀着感恩的心,感谢我们的母校,感谢学校的各位领导,感谢我们敬爱的老师,感谢我们亲爱的同学,并向他们送上我们最真诚的祝福!

我们的初中生活即将画上一个圆满的句号,这句号也将是我们迈向更高层次追求的号角。

有句话说得好:“养兵千日用在一时。”如今,我们面临着学习生涯中的一大挑战——中考。这是一个不寻常的时刻,同时也是一个庄严而充满希望的时刻。它也许是困难的,但是,要知道,当我们最困难的时刻,便是我们接近成功的时侯。就在那时,我们要向世人证明“江山代有人才出,各领风骚数百年!”

天下没有不散的宴席。中考过后,我们也许会分别,但是,离别也同样美丽,因为它是欢聚的序曲!到那时,我们也许会哭泣,但别在意。这就是青春的证据。是它,让我们拥有回忆,懂得珍惜。其实,离别并不可怕,可怕的是我们忘记自己。每时每刻,每个人都要做最好的自己。我相信,我们将用自己的行动表明,我们不愧为一中的优秀毕业生,让我们一同继续搏击风浪,勇往直前,实现自己的梦想。

我们会永远铭记“今天我以一中为荣,明天一中以我为荣”的口号!

最后一个夏天,我们就要说再见。

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篇15:关于春节的英语作文带翻译

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new year party

on new year‘s eve,our class had a party. the atmosphere was good. it was out of the ordinary from the very begining. the boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. we saw a boy named li xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. then with three resounding(响亮的) crow of a cock echoing in the hall,the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

then,the representative of the bedroom zhu guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. he added that li xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. they left us all in confusion. and it was our monitor who was quickwitted(机智的)。 he shouted our, “the day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn.” the hall after that,they had another item. this time li xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. while he was standing there,the other three stood around him,each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. it was an idiom. this time i got it right:“the dog stands out among a group of chickens.”

在除夕,我们班有一个聚会。气氛好。它是寻常从一开始。从一间卧室男生给一个不寻常的表现。我们看到名为李新民在突然关闭所有的灯单元一个男孩。然后用三个响亮的(响亮的)的回荡在大厅里鸡叫,大厅明亮又在瞬间点燃。

然后,卧室的朱国章代表要求我们猜测了有关上述情况的诗。他补充说,李新民单是出生在狗年,其他三个都在鸡年出生的。他们给我们留下了所有的混乱。它是我们的班长谁是quickwitted(机智的)。他喊我们,“天休息的鸡叫三在黎明倍。“大厅之后,他们还有另外一个项目。这一次李新民被放置在圆的中间。当他站在那里,其他三个人围着他站着,低头在每一个120度的角度下去见他。这是一个成语。这一次我得到了它的权利:“。狗中脱颖而出的鸡群!“

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篇16:初中英语作文:我的上学方式

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Different students like different ways togo to school. As for me, I like to go to school on foot the most. There arefour reasons.

不同的人喜欢用不同的方式去学校。至于我,我最喜欢走路去学校。有四个理由

Firstly, my home is not far away from myschool. It takes me only twenty minutes to get to school. Secondly, the trafficon my way to school is heavy. There are a lot of bikes, buses and cars. I thinkits safe to go to school on foot. Thirdly, I think walking is a kind of sport.It’s good for my health. Finally, I can listen to my MP3 when I am walking.Its fantastic, but a little dangerous.

首先,我家离学校不远。只要二十分钟就到学校了。第二,去学校路上的交通太拥挤了。有很多自行车,巴士和私家车。我觉得走路去学校很安全。第三,在我看来,走路也是一直运动。对我的健康有好处。最后,我可以一边走路一边听我的MP3。真是太棒了,不过就是有点危险。

These are the reasons why I like to go toschool on foot the most. What about you?

这就是为什么我最喜欢走路上学的原因。你呢?

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篇17:海洋英语作文初中

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"Bumper harvest, bumper harvest!"!" Cried one of the fishermen, happily

jumping up like a child. After a while, the full cabin fish alive and kicking,

calm sea filled with coming from all sides of the fishermens

laughter.........

Now, like this "fish and shrimp full cabin" scene has been very rare. In

todays market, is the most common fish pound at least to dozens of yuan, more

serious pollution of the ocean, the ocean resources gradually dried up, seafood

production, prices rise, it illustrates this point?

In the ocean of natural calamities and man-made misfortunes emerge in an

endless stream today, human pollution is often not from the original intention,

but it is caused by the unexpected effect. The British Petroleum oil, because

the drilling platform explosion, caused by the oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico,

to 9900 square kilometers of sea water is seriously polluted, so that tens of

thousands of seabirds soaked in oil to move, die in hunger and misery, makes

countless fish poisoning death; and the Japanese earthquake and tsunami

triggered a nuclear leak the marine pollution is more serious......

The sea is so vast that it is because the rivers and streams flow into the

Yangtze River and then run into the sea. If we do not solve the pollution

problem from the source, then no matter how people clean up the sea, there will

always be sewage flowing into the sea, and all the efforts will be futile. Now,

streams and streams are often seriously polluted, or they become places where

people dump rubbish or are loaded with pesticide cans. Finding a clear stream in

an inhabited area can be very difficult today!

In any case, the protection of the oceans can not be achieved by individual

forces, and the protection of the oceans depends on the joint efforts of all

mankind. I do not want one day in the future, our descendants can only imagine

the image of the vast and wide sea.

This is not only the wish of a pupil, but also the wish of all mankind,

isnt it?

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篇18:初中描写花的英语

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A Visit to the Flower Show

Last week Nature Park held a flower show. I went to visit it with my friends. I was very glad to see so many beautiful flowers in the park. I was really amazed to see a sea of colourful

flowers. They told me that some rare flowers came from Taiwan. Thousands of people stopped and watched them carefully. I took many pictures there. Taiwan has always been a part of our country. I am sure sooner or later we can go there to see many more beautiful flowers. What great fun it will be.

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篇19:小学英语作文60字翻译

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Different countries have different customs and different ways to celebrate festival. In our China, we have a variety of festivals, of which celebrating way is different. For example, we will eat mooncake in Mid-autumn Festival and have dragon boat races in the Dragon Boat Festival and eat zongzi. But in some extend, we celebrate all the festivals in the same way. Every family will have a big meal with their family. It is a time for family gathering. No matter what kind of celebrating way for a festival, it is the time to enjoy life.

不同的国家有不同的风俗习惯和不同的节日庆祝方式。在我们中国,我们有各种各样的节日,而庆祝它们的方式是不一样的。例如,我们会在中秋节吃月饼、在端午节赛龙舟、吃粽子。但从某种程度上说,我们都是以同样的方式来庆祝所有的节日。每家每户都会和家人一起吃大餐。这是属于家庭相聚的时间。无论用什么样的方式来庆祝,这都是享受生活的时刻。

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篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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