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中考英语作文保护动物(最新20篇)

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保护鲨鱼的英语作文

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Dear humans, I have to write to you because my friends are dying.The reasons are as follow.First,you damage the forests and take up too much land where we live.Second,you humans even kill the endangered animals for food,many of us have been killed over the past years.But as you all know,animals and humans are good friends.We live in Earth,relying on each other.Without animals,humans wont live long.So,humans should protect animals,that means protecting yourselves. Best wishes Yours Panda

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篇1:最喜爱的动物英语作文

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My favourite animal

Dolphin is my favourite animal.

It is one of the most precious animals. Their bodies are very long, about one zhang(丈). Dolphins live in the sea. They live on fish, shrimps and so on.

Dolphins are very friendly and peaceful. They never attack people. Instead, they have saved many people in danger in the past years. How helpful the dolphins are!

Dolphins are very clever. People often train them so that they can give a dolphin show which brings people a lot of happiness and joy.

Unluckily, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. If we don’t protect them, maybe we’ll lose our good friends one day. As a student, I hope more and more people should take actions to protect dolphins.

My favourite animal

My favourite animal is tortoise. Tortoise walk not fast. But I like the tortoise. Why? Because, tortoise is a cute animal. It have a short tail and a four short foot. It have a little head and a hard shell. They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home. They like to play in the water. When they afraid some thing. They wall run fast. They like to eat the fish. I often buy some small fish to them to eat. They can catch the fish fast. First, they fake(假) sleep. When the fish swim near they mouth. They catch the fish fast and bit the fish head. So, the fish die. They can eat the fish. In winter. They like to sleep in the sand. When they sleep, they don’t eat any food.Because they wall hibernation. But, when they are thirsty. They come out of the sand. So, we must give water to them to drink.

I love the tortoise. I hate the eagle. Because, the eagle often eat the tortoise with it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.

My Favourite Animal

My favourite animal is a dog.I had a dog when I was ten years old.Its name is Lily.Its a brown and white dog.It does everything with me.Everyday I give it some water to drink and some food to eat.At the weekend,Ill make it take a bath.At that time,the dog is very gentle.And I like it very much.This is my favorite animal----a beautiful,gentle and lovely dog.

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篇2:中考英语作文:关于环境保护问题

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As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places,we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

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篇3:关于保护动物的句子

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不要让我们的孩子只能在博物馆里才见到今天的动物。小编收集了保护动物的句子,欢迎阅读。

1、 提高环境意识,爱护花草树木,保护野生动物,维护公共设施,促进人与人、人与社会、人与自然的协调发展。

2、 保护鸟类保护野生动物维护生态平衡。

3、 鸟是害虫的天敌,鸟是人类的朋友。

4、 给它们一点爱,我们唯一的家园地球才更美好——保护野生动物,就是关爱人类自己。

5、 这世界上有一种鸟是没有腿的,它一辈子只停下来一次,那次就是它死去的时候。

6、 保护野生动物,就是关爱人类自己。

7、 保护野生动物,人与自然共存、保护野生动物,实现人与自然和谐共处!

8、 同一片天空,同一个家园。

9、 小鸟想回家了,你想回家吗?——关爱动物,关爱我们共同的世界。

10、 维护生态平衡,保护动物。

11、 保护野生动物就是保护人类自己!

12、 不要让我们的孩子只能在博物馆里才见到今天的动物。

13、 野生动物是人类的朋友!

14、 我怎么能因为蝎子有蜇人的天性就放弃我爱的天性呢?

15、 爱护动物光荣,虐待动物可耻。

16、 无数事实证明,人类与动物共存亡。

17、 保护野生动物,维护生态安全!

18、 动物是人类亲密的朋友,人类是动物信赖的伙伴。

19、 同在地球上,共享大自然!

20、 我喜欢山,因为山上的百鸟为生活鸣唱快乐;我喜欢海,因为海中的鱼虾为自然谱写生机;我喜欢动物,因为世间的万物为地球续写辉煌;世界动物日,爱护动物,愿地球更和谐!

21、 狮吼虎啸斑马跑,狼嚎豺叫鸡鸭逃。天鹅大雁火力鸟,深海鲸鱼浅礁豹。人类生活动物伴,精彩世界起舞跳。世界懂我保护日,保护动物好朋友,计划杀戮来繁育。

22、 如果世界没有了动物,虎啸猿啼只能到录音中寻找,鸟兽鱼虫只能在想象中看到。再也没有美味的佳肴,再也没有开心的欢笑,世界变得寂寞无聊。世界动物日,保护动物,刻不容缓!

23、 世界多么美妙,生态需要平衡。食物链互相制约,换来和谐一片。人类欲望贪婪,杀害动物万千。多少珍稀动物,眼看就要灭绝。奉劝盗猎之人,为了子孙后代。爱护动物生态,保护野生资源。世界动物日,还动物一个生存的空间!

24、 蝉鸣蛙叫,奏响快乐的乐曲;莺歌燕舞,拉开欢乐的序幕;鱼美虾肥,演绎自然的生机;世界动物日,爱护动物,让地球充满生机,愿家园更美丽!

25、 杀戮使部分动物濒临灭绝,美味使部分珍禽远离人类,享受是多少动物无路可逃,生态失去平衡人类朋友减少。世界动物保护日,保护动物人有责,爱护动物爱自己。

26、 田间的青蛙为你唱响快乐,林中的鸟儿为你舞动幸福,水里的鱼儿为你跃动吉祥,家里的萌宠为你演绎开心,世界动物日,爱护动物,愿你乐享生态平衡之美!

27、 世界之所以精彩有动物的舞动,地球之所以美丽有动物的功劳,生活之所以多彩有动物的伴随,人类之所以幸福有动物的添彩。世界动物保护日,保护人类朋友,愿你生活更美丽!

28、 蓝天因鸟儿的飞翔充满活力,溪流因鱼儿的跳跃更显生机,森林因虎豹的怒吼充满朝气,世界因动物的存在更加和谐。世界动物日,爱护动物,从身边做起!

29、 保护动物,与自然和谐、保护鸟类,保护野生动物,人人有责。

30、 不要让一切都成为记忆——保护动物,与自然和谐。

31、 关注候鸟,保护环境。

32、 同在蓝天下,人鸟共家园。

33、 爱鸟护鸟是人类的美德。

34、 保护野生动物,不打鸟,捉蛇,捉青蛙。

35、 爱护动物,珍惜生命。

36、 地球上没有动物,那是一个没有活力的世界。

37、 有了鸟儿,天空变得多彩;有了鱼儿,河流变得欢快;有了宠物,生活变得有趣;有了动物,地球变得富饶。世界动物日,爱护动物,从我做起!

38、 放弃贪婪的食欲,不再屠戮;放过弱小的生命,不再滥捕;放下嗜血的屠刀,不再滥杀。世界动物日,一起行动起来,保护动物,人人有责!

39、 鱼儿畅游在水中,鸟儿翱翔在蓝天,虎豹栖身于森林,它们的存在让世界更加活力非凡。没有了动物,我们将会多么孤单。世界的动物日,爱护动物,就是爱护我们的家园!

40、 鱼儿点缀了河流的生机,鸟儿舞动了天空的活力,动物演绎了大山的朝气,地球的美丽因有万物的存在,世界动物日,爱护动物,愿地球家园更繁荣!

41、 鸟儿的羽毛画着我们的未来,鱼儿的眼泪把我们的忧愁哭泣,海豚的歌唱伴我们的幸福,鳄鱼的游动决定我们发展的脚步。世界动物日,请爱护动物,一个家园注定要和谐共处,愿我们的自然轻松自在,和睦的春风把每一双眼睛吹拂。

42、 忙忙碌碌蚁搬家,慢慢腾腾蜗牛行。比翼双飞彩蝶舞,程鹏万里雄鹰翔。快马加鞭千里驹,看家护院牧羊犬。南来北往鸿雁飞,占山为王狮虎豹。世界动物日来到,保护动物人有责,和谐共处大自然,生活精彩更有趣。

43、 世界动物日,请放下“屠刀”,听听动物们的哭诉,你能否承诺,能否行动,爱及生灵,尊重生命,给予它们一个生存的权利,让我们一起去保护动物,善待动物,让人与动物和谐发展!

44、 学习长颈鹿的高瞻远瞩,学习大熊猫的憨厚可爱,学习小松鼠的动作敏捷,学习金丝猴的聪明灵活,学习牧羊犬的尽职尽责,学习北极熊的坚毅性格。动物是人类的朋友,也是人类学习的楷模,世界动物日,让我们爱自然,爱生活,爱护动物人人有责!

45、 不要小瞧动物,自然和谐有它们一份功劳,不要忽视动物,地球家园有它们一份领土,不要无视动物,生态平衡有它们一份苦劳,世界动物日,共同爱护动物,让万物共同维护地球家园的美好。

46、 蜈蚣蝎子最值钱,牛黄蛇胆钱也高。虎狼骨头治风寒,鹿茸鳖血保健康。鸽子斑鸠可补虚,獐子麝香气味扬。象牙筷子世无双,动物药品价更高。保护动物要重视,身体给养离不开。对人贡献不可忽,杜绝杀戮共生存。

47、 鸡鸭鱼虾滚下桌,乌龟王八爬上来。猪羊牛兔已过时,燕窝海参羡你眼。白鹭天鹅食桌餐,蚂蚁驱虫汤汁鲜。猴脑熊掌味更美,山珍海味尽情享。“世界动物保护日”严格控制捕杀猎,无辜滥杀能剩几,人人保护有责任。

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篇4:保护动物年级篇

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谁能告诉我哪里是我的家?谁能告诉我哪里有我自由的天空?谁能告诉我我的父母在哪里?谁能告诉我……

我叫咪咪,原来有一个幸福的家庭,家中有爸爸妈妈的疼爱。每当晨光熹微,我在伙伴的呼唤声中苏醒,伙伴们在林间嬉戏着。妈妈早已为我准备好丰盛的早餐,快乐的一天就从这里开始……暮色降临,爸爸在一旁给我讲闲暇的故事,林子里的一切都那样安谧。那时我们在这林子里生活得多么幸福呀!

可是好景不长,有一天来了一群猎人,他们拿着猎枪四处寻找猎物,我的同胞有好多已经被他们打死了,爸爸说它们都被卖到大酒店里去做特色菜——“小鸟点盘”。我担心地问爸爸、妈妈:“我们是不是也要遭受这样的厄运呢?”妈妈从容地:说:“孩子别怕,有我们在。”但从他们不安的眼神中,我感到了恐惧的来临。惊魂的枪声时常打破了树林的宁静,伙伴们的呼唤声越来越少,爸爸、妈妈常常护着我躲在窝中不敢轻易地行动。

这样提心吊胆过了几天,灾难终于降临到我的家中。爸爸为了保护我,让我骑在他的背上,带我飞走。而妈妈却留下来引开猎人,临行前,爸爸叫妈妈小心一点,在一片告别声中猎人的枪声已经响起,爸爸只好带着我一步三回头地飞走了。在一阵枪响之后,我的妈妈被打死了。我大喊一声:“妈妈……”猎人发现了我和爸爸便向我们举起了枪。爸爸躲开了猎人的子弹,带我向一片森林飞去,猎人依然穷追不舍。爸爸将我安置在茂密的丛林中,自己去跟猎人搏斗。我的直觉告诉我,爸爸这一去就回不来了。果然,一阵枪响和惨叫之后,我的爸爸死了。

从那以后,我饱偿了没有母爱、父爱的痛苦,虽然猎人走了,我的生活并没有变好。过了几年,又有一群人把这片森林砍伐了,我已经没有地方安家了,只能四处盘旋,流浪。

人类快快醒悟吧!不要再伤害野生动物了。地球是我们赖以生存的家园,给我们一点生存的空间吧!不要因为你们的贪婪而破坏我们幸福的生活!这是一只小鸟在呼吁,这是一只小鸟在哭诉!

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篇5:保护动物英语

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Mark suddenly had a bad bellyache before class began this morning. His classmates immediately sent him to the Peoples Hospital nearby. In the hospital, the doctor gave him a medical check-up. The result of the examination showed that he was suffering from acute appendicitis and he needed an operation right away.

The monitor of his class quickly called Marks father and asked him to come to the hospital at once. After a while,Marks father came and the operation began in no time. Several days later,Mark recovered.

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篇6:有关动物的英语谚语

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导语:谚语的使用能够使作文语言流畅,生动活泼,处处闪现亮彩。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

1、Fine feathers make fine birds.

人要衣装,马要鞍。

2、Don’t be a dog lying in the manger.

莫学狗占马槽不吃草。不要占着茅坑不拉屎。

3、Scornful dogs will eat dirty puddings.

狗再傲慢也会吃脏布丁。

4、Who will bwll the cat?

谁去给猫系铃?谁愿意为大家冒风险?

5、Too much pudding will choke a dog.

布丁太多噎死狗。

6、Dog does not eat dog.

同类不相残。

7、When the weasel and the cat make a marriage, it is a very ill presage.

黄鼠狼和猫结亲,不是好事情。

8、Dead dogs bite not.

死狗不咬人。

9、There are more ways of killing a cat than by choking it with butter.

杀猫的办法很多。达到目的的途径很多。

10、A crow is never the whiter for washing herself often.

江山易改,本性难移。

11、A gloved cat catches no mice.

戴手套的猫,老鼠抓不到。不愿吃苦的人成不了大事业。

12、The cat shuts its eyes when stealing cream.

帽偷吃奶油的时候总是闭着眼睛。

13、Birds in their little nests agree.

同巢之鸟心儿齐。

14、Every dog is a lion at home.

狗在家门口就成了狮子。

15、It’s an ill bird that fouls own nest.

家丑不可外扬。

16、A cat has nine lives.

猫有九条命;吉人天相。

17、All cats are grey in the dark.

黑暗之中猫都是灰色的。人未出名时看起来都差不多。

18、Each bird loves to hear himself sing.

鸟儿都爱听自己唱。

19、He who would hang his dog gives out first that it is mad.

欲加之罪,何患无词。

20、Kill two birds with one stone.

一箭双雕;一举两得。

21、A bird is known by its note, and a man by his talk.

听音识鸟,闻言识人。

22、The frog in the well knows nothing of the great ocean.

井底之蛙,不知大海。

23、Care kill a cat.

忧虑愁死猫。

24、You cannot catch old birds with chaff.

用粗糠捉不住老鸟。有经验的人难骗。

25、Let sleeping dogs lie.

勿惹事生非。

26、Every dog has his day.

人人皆有得意时。

27、All are not thieves that dogs bark at.

狗见了叫的不一定都是贼。不要以貌取人。

28、Birds of a feather flock together.

物以类聚,人以群分。

29、A staff is quickly found to beat a dog with.

欲加之罪,何患无词。

30、Love me, love my dog.

爱屋及乌。

31、A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.

双鸟在林不如一鸟在手。

32、Barking dogs don’t seldom bite.

爱叫的狗很少咬人。(.)

33、Don’t count your chickens before they’re hatched.

鸡蛋未孵出,先别数小鸡。不要过早乐观。

34、Cats hide their claws.

知人知面不知心。

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篇7:关于动物的英语作文:动物园里最喜欢的猴子

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Since the childhood like monkeys, because it looks very interesting.

Its head is always kept, eyes are east Chou west look, seems to be especially alert. Its ears pointed out, as long as there is any voice, it will. You scratch it little fluffy, a moment that, clenched it after a while, always do. A yellowish-brown fur also as it is not honest body shaking, as if she was full of lice, this is fun. Monkeys limbs is very flexible, blink of an eye kung fu can move from one tree to another tree, sometimes used it long tail roll the branches on the swings, let me see the very is envy.

Monkeys have a lot of skills. On one occasion, our family went to the circus performance, turn the monkey play, see it quickly on the bike, bottom a twist twist to turned around and turn around the site. Saw it on the spinning bike for a while to a handstand, for a while over, and the superb skills that I may see it is stunned, think about your bicycle also fell a couple of times, in the sight of the little monkey cant help but let me sit up and take notice. Just thinking, little monkey came to the next to the steel wire rope, swaggering go up, it surprised me. All the audience hold their breath, staring at the thin wire. Little monkey is easily walked forward firmly. Suddenly, it to a big upside down, the audience and a brawn, it upside down. This bottom can be shocked the whole audience, thunderous applause to the special animal actors, I am more excited to quickly put the red film.

Oh, little monkey is so the stars of the animal kingdom!

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篇8:2024保护濒危动物英语作文

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This afternoon, I turned on the computer on the qq, and saw in qq space "simply make the gods cry".

Some people are ready to take the little bears bile. At that time, break the cage, a mother bear with huge PAWS strangled little bear, then her head hit the wall and died. Maybe it is their best way to them, because they are relieved.

After I read this story, I almost cry. So cute teddy bear, so the great bear, who is cruel killed them? Is human. Who is the one who claim to protect giant pandas? As humans. This is not a contradiction? The giant panda is a national treasure in our country, but as soon as I saw some pandas humans want to flee. Why is this? Because someone hurt the panda.

The panda is so cute! They also have life, they are not rich. We must protect the panda, some panda has been found, there are some pandas still suffer from the endless pain. We want to be treated, if they are they, by this pain?

Here, I appeal to everyone: love animals, let animals no longer afraid of us, let the world become real peace!

At the same time I also urge those who hurt the panda: panda also have life, pandas have feelings. Their value is not let us make a living, but live for yourself. I hope you can stop here!

今天下午,我打开电脑上了qq,,在qq空间里看见了“惊天地泣鬼神”的一幕。

一些人准备取小熊的胆汁,这时,一只母熊挣脱了铁笼,用巨大的熊掌掐死了小熊,然后把头撞上墙壁,死了。也许这是它们最好它们的办法,因为它们解脱了。

看完这一则故事,我快哭了。这么可爱的小熊,这么伟大的母熊,是谁狠心夺走了它们的生命?是人类。口口声声说保护大熊猫的是谁?也是人类。这不是自相矛盾吗?大熊猫是我国的国宝,可一些熊猫看见人类就想逃。这是为什么?因为有人伤害熊猫。

熊猫是多么可爱啊!他们也有生命,它们不是致富的工具。我们一定要保护熊猫,一些熊猫已找到,还有一些熊猫还在受那无尽的痛苦折磨。我们要将心比心,假如自己是它们,受到这种痛苦会怎么样?

在这里,我呼吁大家:爱护动物,让动物不再惧怕我们,让这个世界变得真正和平吧!

同时我也奉劝那些伤害熊猫的人:熊猫也有生命,熊猫也有感情。它们的价值并不是让我们赚钱,而是为自己而活。希望你们能到此收手!

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篇9:写海洋动物的英语作文

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Orcas are not related to whales at all, other than being ocean-dwelling mammals. Rather, they are close kin to dolphins. While it was believed that they were a single species, recent research indicates that they may, in fact, be comprised of several different species of Orca. You can find them in every ocean in the world, though they tend to favor the colder waters around Antarctica and the North Atlantic or Pacific. The only predator they possess is humankind. While theres a deadly standoff between the two species, Orcas proliferate in the wild, and have an incredible life span. The males usually live as long as sixty or seventy years, while the females—who are excluded from the sometimes-violent competition for mates—may live a hundred years or more in the wild.

虽名虎鲸,但不同于海洋其他哺乳动物,非鲸目,海豚科的近亲。此前一直认为虎鲸只有一种,但最近的调查显示虎鲸种类繁多。部分虎鲸会终年停留于南极、大西洋北部和太平洋等温度较低的海域,但总体来看,它们的活动范围几乎覆盖全世界水域。它们堪称海上霸王,唯一的天敌也只有人类了。虎鲸全年都可以交配,数量庞大,雄鲸的平均寿命在60到70年左右,野生雌鲸不同于雄鲸经常参与猎杀食物,寿命可达100年甚至更长。

Theyve been observed reaching speeds of around 30 miles per hour, although some Orcas may utilize much greater bursts of speed, based upon their favored prey. Resident pods in the Pacific Northwest have shown a decided preference for salmonids—specifically, Chinook salmon. This presents a conflict with the goals of companies that rely on high yields of salmon for profit. Several communities of killer whale seem to favor beach and ice floe ambush approaches, snatching seals and walruses or even sea birds from their resting places. Others, located in the Southern Hemisphere, take up the challenge of hunting sharks in the open sea, as well as feeding on species of rays and other fish abundant in the cold southern waters.

虎鲸约时速30英里,当然也有爆发力更强的,为了追捕中意的猎物,时速可以更快。太平洋西北海域的虎鲸族群偏爱三文鱼,尤其是大鳞三文鱼。这就和沿岸经营三文鱼生意的公司产生一定的利益冲突。虎鲸族群喜欢在浮冰区伏击猎物,捕杀海豹、海象或者在这里歇脚的海鸟。在南半球海域里,有些虎鲸还会在公海里捕杀鲨鱼,也会以鳐和其他鱼类为食。

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篇10:中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。

所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

标点错误:每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。

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篇11:小学生描写动物的英语作文

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我最喜欢的小动物是小猫,我们家就养了一只小猫,它是邻居送过来的。因为现在那只小猫已经死了,所以我会经常想起它。

My favorite little animal is a kitten, and we have a kitten in our house. It was sent by a neighbor. Because the kitten is dead now, so I often think of it.

小猫长得很漂亮,他有一身雪白的毛,爪子下的肉垫可以使他走路没有一丁点声音。最独特的是他的眼睛:一只眼睛是蓝色的,另一只眼睛是绿色的。蓝眼睛像蓝宝石,绿眼睛像绿宝石。

The kitten was beautiful. He had a snow-white coat, and the pads under his paws made him walk without a single sound. The most unique is his eyes: one eye is blue, the other eye is green. Blue eyes are like sapphires, green eyes are like emeralds.

小猫很贪吃,有时一斤重的鱼不一会儿就“消灭”了。有一次,妈妈做了一碗鱼汤。小猫跳上桌子,津津有味的吃了起来。正在吃的时候,它被我发现了,于是我狠狠的教训了他一顿。小猫耷拉着脑袋,好像在说:“我再也不敢了。”我立刻笑了。

Kittens are voracious, and sometimes a pound of fish will soon be wiped out. Once, my mother cooked a bowl of soup. The cat jumped onto the table and ate it with relish. While I was eating, it was discovered by me, so I gave him a hard lesson. The little cat drooped its head as if to say, "I dare not."." I laughed at once.

现在那只小猫已经死了,从那以后,我每次见到小猫,都要和它嬉戏一番。小猫,你到底去了哪里了呢?

Now that kitten has died, since then, every time I see a kitten, I have to play with it. Kitty, where the hell have you been?

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篇12:关于介绍动物的英语作文

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我们每个人都有自己喜欢的动物,那么,关于介绍动物的英语作文应该怎么写?今天小编为你整理了关于介绍动物的英语作文,希望对你有用。

The snake is a long and thin animal that lives in graor other dark places. A snake has no legs or feet, but it can move very fast on its stomach. Snakes usually have green, yellow or black skins, which make them difficult for their enemies to find them.Some kinds of snakes live in water. They can swim as freely as fish.

Snakes are cold-blooded animals. In winter they hibernatein holes which are narrow enough only to hold the snakes bodies. The snakes can sleep through a whole winter without eating and moving. They can not feel any pain. The hibernation period lasts about five months. When spring comes, the snakes come out and begin their normal life.

Snakes can take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs,birds eggs, pests and so on. People sometimes can see a snake eat a sparrow. First it moves close to the sparrow, then it puts out its tongue and brings the sparrow into its mouth and swallows it, which makes a lump in the snakes body. After some time the lump disappears.

As snakes are dreadful-looking, people are afraid of them. Many people drive them away whenever they see snakes. But in Chinese fairy tales, snakes are by no means bad. They seem to have human feelings. They can change into pretty girls. People like and respect them. The most well-known is the story about the White Snake and the Blue Snake.

In fact, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. They can help us to kill mice and pests. They can provide us with delicious meat. Their blood is a good drink. Poisonous snakes are especially useful. We can make valuable drugs with them.

Panda is one of the scarcest animals. People in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in China long ago. As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. But at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

Nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

My favorite animals are swans.they are white.they can swim very well.I think they look like a beautiful girl in a white dress.they have a pair of wings and they can also fly well.I believe they are angles from the sky.they bring us love and make us happy.they are always friendly to us.We cant hurt them,because they are our friend.I love them!I like dogs,too.they are not beautiful,but they are the best friends.they keep the thieves away.Dogs have the best listening and eyes.they can hear in the nosiy,see in the dark.If we are in danger,they will help us at once.And they dont mind their lives.So,I love them.

Elephant is the largest animal on land today. It weights some ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born. When it is 12 years old, it studs over three meters and does not grow any more. Elephant is usually grey in color, having a long trunk with large ivory tusks protruding from each side of its mouth. Usually moving in groups and caring for each other, Elephant is know to be a very and gentle creamre. For many years people have used the strength of these poweful animals to move trees and heavy logs. Elephant has been and is a vital tool for people to do many things that would normally be imposs-ible. Elephant is and will continue to be one of the greatest creatures man has ever come into contact with. Its size. beauty, and power willforever be useful to man.

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篇13:写濒临危机动物的英语作文北极熊

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The global polar bear population could decline by more than 30 percent in as little as 35 years. Thats according to a new study in The Royal Societys Biology Letters.

全球北极熊数量在35年内可能下降超过百分之30。这是根据英国皇家学会生物学快报的一项新研究。

Researchers looked at climate change effect on the Arctic Sea and calculated the likelihood of this projected population drop is 71 percent.

研究人员观察气候变化对北极海的影响,并计算出预计种群下降的可能性为百分之71。

Thats because polar bears stand on Arctic Sea ice when hunting for seals. According to NASA, even the thickest ice in the Arctic Ocean has "either thinned or melted away."

这是因为北极熊捕猎海豹时站在北极海的冰上。美国国家航空航天局表示,甚至北冰洋最厚的冰要么变薄或要么融化了。

And just this week, scientists reported sea ice levels in the area were at a record low for this time of year.

就在本周科学家报告称,该地区的海冰水平创下一年中这个时候的历史新低。

This all adds up to not great news for polar bears. With an estimated population of 26,000, the bears are already listed as a vulnerable species by the International Union for the Conservation of Nature.

这对北极熊不是什么好的消息。现估计有26,000头北极熊,已被国际自然保护联合会列为易危物种。

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篇14:高二保护动物的作文

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虽然人们现在都说要保护动物,但是还有很多人执迷不悟,继续猎杀动物,导致许多动物都走向了灭绝的道路。同时人类还拿动物来观赏、卖钱,用兽皮做大衣……但这些人有没有想过,如果你是一只动物,却遭到了人类的猎杀,你会怎么想?有些人说:“我又不是动物。”但是现在人类大量捕杀动物,动物会愿意吗?不,永远不会。有些人虽然知道怎样去爱护动物,可是他们只会假惺惺地去教育别人,而自己却照样破坏环境,猎杀动物,照样兴致勃勃的品尝动物鲜美的肉。就拿我们身边的小狗来说吧,虽然不是国家一二级别的珍贵动物,但也是我们身边的好伙伴,不管主人怎么使唤它,它仍然很兢兢业业,可是人类发现狗肉鲜美,就开始捕杀小狗。

现在,有些动物已经快要灭绝了,就拿鳄鱼来说吧,它虽然很凶猛,但人类更凶猛。而在人类的眼中,鳄鱼皮可以制成行李箱,手提包,钱包,鞋等物品。就是因为有些动物身上的器官具有突出的经济价值,由此成为被人类掠夺利用的对象,成为动物灭绝的主要因素。所以鳄鱼,现在已经成为快要灭绝的动物了。朋友们,动物的大量毁灭对人类将产生严重的不良后果,造成生态环境严重不平衡,从而使人类的生存环境遭到破坏。消灭动物,就是在消灭人类自己,如果有一天世界上的动物全都消失了,那人类还能生存吗?要保护动物,珍惜这自然界里的每一个生灵吧!让我们从现在做起,保护动物,使世界变得更加美好吧!

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篇15:环境保护英语作文120字

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I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they can’t decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It’s good for our environment.

So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment.

Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.

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篇16:我的母亲英语中考作文

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There’s no doubt that my mother gives all her love to me. I do believe she is a great person who makes my life beautiful and meaningful.

She is an easygoing and kind woman with bright eyes and a lovely smile. Although she is often busy, I still feel that I am taken good care of by her. It’s a great pleasure to chat with her when I get into troubles. She always encourages me not to give up and tries to cheer me up by coming up with good solutions. In addition, I am fascinated by her cooking and writing.

With her love, I feel like a fish swimming happily in a beautiful sea. I’ll cherish her love forever.

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篇17:关于环境保护的优秀英语作文

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man and environment (人类和环境

(1)the world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction.

(2)a lot of measures have been taken …

(3)however, the problem of environmental protection remains far from being solved.

the world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. for example , forest destruction results in decrease of planting land and unpleasant weather. in addition, man is faced with problems of water pollution and air pollution.

a lot of measures have been taken. planting trees helps improve and beautify the environment. besides, laws concerning environmental protection have been put into effect and achieved good results.

however, the problem of environmental protection remains far from being solved. on the one hand, the environment pollution and destruction are getting worse and worse in the modern world. on the other hand, the lack of knowledge about the importance of protecting environment hinders the solving of the problem. in a word, there is a long way to go before we enjoy a clean and comfortable world.

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篇18:成长的烦恼中考英语作文

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Long so big, lived a fairy carefree life, many people think we are very happy, in fact, we also have some trouble, such as I had a long is not high.

I this year 13 years old, is also and 10 years old children metre almost 4 a few, but not that I dont, just grow slowly, only a few centimeters a year, I mother worry dead, I am also very worry, hope I hurry up taller, because of the high long not too much trouble.

First, let me no face very much, the students often that I joke, such as once, Lin Qizhe and I went to the toilet, standing next to a four young children, he found a little bit taller than me. Yu Shilin kai zhe shame asked him: "kid, what grade are you?" "The fourth grade." And then he laughed at me said: "the fourth grade is higher than yours." I felt no face very much.

At another time, I went to the supermarket shopping and Lin Qizhe is originally very happy one thing, but when I came to the checkout counter, that aunt asked Lin Qizhe with smile: "the kid is your younger brother!" I nearly fainted on the spot, Lin smiled and explained the penguin, walk out the door he added opportunity to laugh at me, I think should make friends with him. This is a let me remember, I want to find a chance to even the score

Second, let me always sports than others, however, is not tall certainly sports is not good, especially what I run theres no way.

And one more thing is I in the morning exercises team is always the first, for six years, never change, once again, under the national flag, the front of the host is to find the nearest answer this question, I was just recently, he asked me, I didnt know, where is she reminded me that I didnt understand, let me very embarrassing, couldnt find a disappear. The back of the natural dont have to worry about finding yourself.

I couldnt get taller, but instead, I had to laugh at themselves: "concentration is the essence." "Im not a dwarf, but is not obvious." But I still want to grow taller.

长这么大,无忧无虑的过着神仙般的生活,好多人认为我们很快乐,其实我们也有一些烦恼,比如说我就有一个长不高的烦恼。

我今年13岁了,个子还和10岁孩子差不多高一米四几,但我不是不张,只是长得慢,一年只长几厘米,害得我妈着急死了,我也很着急,希望我快点长高,因为长不高太麻烦了。

第一:让我很没面子,同学们经常那我开玩笑,比如有一次,我和林启哲上厕所,旁边站了一个四年纪小朋友,他发现比我高一点点。于是林启哲不知耻的问他:“小朋友,你几年级啊?”“四年级啊。”,然后他嘲笑我说:“四年级的都比你高。”我当时觉得很没面子。

还有一次,我和林启哲去超市shopping,本来是很开心的一件事,可当我来到收银台时,那个阿姨笑着问林启哲:“那个小朋友是你的弟弟啊!”我当场差点晕了,林企鹅笑着解释完,走出门他又接着机会嘲笑我,我想是不是应该和他做朋友了。这是一只让我记忆犹新,我想找个机会报复一下

第二,让我体育总是比不过别人,个子不高肯定体育不好,尤其是什么跑步不行啊。

还有一点是我在早操队中是永远的第一个,已经六年了,从来没变过,又一次,国旗下表演,前排的主持人都是找最近的回答问题,刚好我是最近的,他问我,我没想到,她在哪里提醒我才明白,让我一下很难堪,恨不得找个地缝钻进去。后排的自然不用担心找到自己了。

我恨不得快点长高,但事与愿违,我只好自嘲:“浓缩就是精华。”“我不是矮,只是高的不明显。”但我依旧是想长高的。

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篇19:个人保护环境英语作文

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Do something to protect the environment.We want to hold a green Olympic Games ,so everyone should do something useful to protect the environment ,whether it is big or small.

We should do something to stop people from doing bad things to the environment .We should put rubbish into dustbins instead of throwing it about. Everyone must care for flowers ,grass and tress in public .We shound collect things like paper ,plastic bags our neighborhood as well ,it’s necessary to plant more trees every year .

It is everyone’s duty to make our neighborhood much better with our hands minds .Let’s make a contribution to protecting the environment and the Plympic Games successfully.

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篇20:保护森林环境英语作文

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保护森林(Protecting the Forests)

Now in some places of our country, a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland. The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years. It is really a terrible thing. Where the forests disappear, dust storms will occur occasionally. The weather will get hot and dry. The whole earth will become a big desert. A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere. Life will be difficult for everyone. The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities.

Therefore, we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests. We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green,the water clean, and the sky blue.

保护森林

在我国的一些地区,由于需要木材和得到更多的耕地,许多人一直在砍伐森林中的树木,森林面积正变得越来越小。一些科学家预言二三十年后将不会再有大片的森林,这真的是一件可怕的事情。森林在哪里消失,沙尘暴就在哪里发生,天气会变得炎热而干燥,整个地球会变成一个大沙漠,大量的动植物会消失,没有地方再长庄稼,生活会变得很艰难,人类因为破坏森林的活动将受到惩罚。

因此,我们应该认识到保护森林的重要性,尽最大努力保护我们的生存环境,保持山绿、水清、天蓝。

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