中考英语作文保护动物(汇集20篇)
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1000动物英语作文:Snakes
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+ 加入清单导语:动物是人类的朋友,可是每天都有着很多的动物被人类消灭,但是这依然动摇不了我们保护小动物的决心,下面和小编一起来看看动物英语作文:Snakes。希望对大家有所帮助。
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The snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places. A snake has no legs or feet, but it can move very fast on its stomach. Snakes usually have green, yellow or black skins, which make them difficult for their enemies to find them.Some kinds of snakes live in water. They can swim as freely as fish.
蛇是一种又长又瘦的动物,生活在草丛里和阴暗的地方、蛇没有腿和脚,靠胃部飞快的移动前进。 蛇常常有绿色,黄色和黑色的皮肤,使得敌人很难找到他们。
Snakes are cold-blooded animals. In winter they hibernatein holes which are narrow enough only to hold the snakes bodies. The snakes can sleep through a whole winter without eating and moving. They can not feel any pain. The hibernation period lasts about five months. When spring comes, the snakes come out and begin their normal life.
蛇是冷血动物,在冬天,它们通常隐藏在只能容下它们身体的狭小的小洞里。蛇可以不吃东西,不移动地睡一整个冬天。它们不会感觉到痛苦,它们的隐藏时期持续大概5个月。当春天来临的时候,蛇就会出现并开始它们的正常活动。
Snakes can take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs,birds eggs, pests and so on. People sometimes can see a snake eat a sparrow. First it moves close to the sparrow, then it puts out its tongue and brings the sparrow into its mouth and swallows it, which makes a lump in the snakes body. After some time the lump disappears.
许多东西都可以成为蛇的食物,就像老鼠,麻雀,青蛙,鸟蛋和害虫等等。人们常常看见蛇吃麻雀,蛇首先靠近麻雀,然后伸出它的舌头把麻雀带进它的嘴巴里并吞下去。麻雀就像一块肿瘤一样突出在蛇的身体里,但是过了一段时间就会被消化消失。
As snakes are dreadful-looking, people are afraid of them. Many people drive them away whenever they see snakes. But in Chinese fairy tales, snakes are by no means bad. They seem to have human feelings. They can change into pretty girls. People like and respect them. The most well-known is the story about the White Snake and the Blue Snake.
因为蛇看起来很可怕,所以人们总是害怕它们,很多人每当看到蛇的时候都会把它们赶走。但是,在中国的神话故事里,蛇并不代表坏人,它们可以感觉到人类的想法,它们会变成美丽的女生,人们喜欢和尊重它们。最著名的故事就是白蛇与青蛇的故事了。
In fact, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. They can help us to kill mice and pests. They can provide us with delicious meat. Their blood is a good drink. Poisonous snakes are especially useful. We can make valuable drugs with them.
事实上,蛇并不是像它的样子那么可怕,它们可以帮助我们杀死老鼠和害虫,它们可以给我们做成美味的佳肴,它们的血是很好的饮料。毒蛇就特别有用处了,我们可用它们做成珍贵的药品。
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You look! They are adorable, they are our humans good friends, how are we going to have the heart to hurt them?
动物是人类的朋友,保护动物人人有责,我们应该爱护它们。因为,有很多昆虫都对人类有益。比如说:蜜蜂,它很勤劳,每天早上很早就出去采蜜,一次又一次。到了天黑,吃几口蜜糖后,就马不停蹄地对采来的蜜进行加工。蜜蜂的外形并不起眼,生命也很短暂,只有3个月左右;可它一生都不休息,勤勤恳恳地工作,它们对人类毫无所求,却为人们酿造了甘甜可口、营养丰富、可医治病痛的蜂蜜。
还有青蛙,青蛙披着碧绿的衣裳,两只大眼睛,像两颗晶莹透明的玻璃球,它藏在田里,专吃害虫,保护庄稼。它捉害虫的时候两条后腿一蹬,一纵身,敏捷地将后腿一蜷,跳起老高,长长的舌头一伸,就像一个吸尘器一样转眼就把害虫吃到肚子里去了。可是,我们人类却把它们当成美味佳肴摆在餐桌上。
还有许多可爱的动物,我最喜欢的是大熊猫。大熊猫是我国珍贵的动物,妈妈告诉我大熊猫还是我们国家的国宝呢!大熊猫长的很可爱,胖乎乎、圆滚滚的,走起路来一摇一晃的,特别逗人。它的头部和身体都是白色的,只有眼圈、耳朵和肩部是黑褐色的。特别是那一对黑黑的眼圈,长在白白的脸上,像是戴着一副墨镜,加上那笨拙的动作和走起路来东张西望的神情,显得像个小绅士。
你瞧!它们多么可爱,它们是我们人类的好朋友,我们怎么忍心伤害它们呢?
篇15:2024年中考英语作文怎么拿高分
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+ 加入清单下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语作文高分指导,希望对你有帮助。
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。
表达年龄的方式有:Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
四、耐心修改,提炼句子
很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕,高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实,这时候,不妨从以下方面去修改,相信会让你受益匪浅的。
1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等
当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后,在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力,你务必要选择高级的。例如,就以今年中考的英语作文为例,它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法,有oldpeople和theold。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理,作文中的“病人”的表达法有sickpeople,patients,thesick,你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是thesick了。
2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点
我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如:我市今年中考作文题,就要求学生表达一个意思:帮助同学,可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”,面对这样的问题怎么办呢?怎么不换个说法呢?你看,Ifwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings,wecanmakeourfriendshiplonger。不就达到目的了吗?
3、大胆改变句型,使之生辉
例如,我们将一些句子改为感叹句,复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐而不为呢?
4、高度关注句与句、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然,衔接紧凑。
5、适当引用个别谚语或警句,来提高作文档次。
五、一丝不苟抄誊作文
一篇好的作文,经过审题、修改之后,务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上,再认真地仔细检查一遍,那才是大公告成了。
篇16:写濒临危机动物的英语作文北极熊
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+ 加入清单The global polar bear population could decline by more than 30 percent in as little as 35 years. Thats according to a new study in The Royal Societys Biology Letters.
全球北极熊数量在35年内可能下降超过百分之30。这是根据英国皇家学会生物学快报的一项新研究。
Researchers looked at climate change effect on the Arctic Sea and calculated the likelihood of this projected population drop is 71 percent.
研究人员观察气候变化对北极海的影响,并计算出预计种群下降的可能性为百分之71。
Thats because polar bears stand on Arctic Sea ice when hunting for seals. According to NASA, even the thickest ice in the Arctic Ocean has "either thinned or melted away."
这是因为北极熊捕猎海豹时站在北极海的冰上。美国国家航空航天局表示,甚至北冰洋最厚的冰要么变薄或要么融化了。
And just this week, scientists reported sea ice levels in the area were at a record low for this time of year.
就在本周科学家报告称,该地区的海冰水平创下一年中这个时候的历史新低。
This all adds up to not great news for polar bears. With an estimated population of 26,000, the bears are already listed as a vulnerable species by the International Union for the Conservation of Nature.
这对北极熊不是什么好的消息。现估计有26,000头北极熊,已被国际自然保护联合会列为易危物种。
篇17:中考英语作文命题预测
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+ 加入清单掌握好的学习方法非常重要,下面内容2019中考英语作文命题预测如何拿高分?,希望能给您带来一定帮助。
2019中考英语作文命题预测 如何拿高分?
随着中考逼近,考生都进入了紧张的备考状态,初三老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里,如何让考生更有针对性的复习,如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。
中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实,一般拿分没多大问题。如今,令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心,老师为学生们解析历年的中考英语作文题目,并作出预测,为同学们指点迷津。
首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。
2006年作文题目:
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”。
2007年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”。
2008年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)&rdquo,周记;。
2009年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”
2010年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m proud of myself”
2011年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m a member of… ”
我们可以发现,中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关,为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分,到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出,中考作文的写作思路通常为:what—why—how.评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时,最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分,另外,注意连接词的使用以得结构分,同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文,让同学们更能感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。
If you ask me what I want to do for my school, my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there, maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover, students can read under the trees. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study.
此文分三层,先提出自己的观点,然后写出为什么这么做,最后写出我会怎么做。
全文立意好,贴近实际,可行性强。从语法来看,没犯语法错误;从结构来看,用了so、after、moreover等连接词使行文更加流畅;从文采上看,文章多处用了从句,用到了形容词的比较级等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口,是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。
篇18:中考英语作文:创建文明城市
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+ 加入清单导语:你觉得创建文明城市的首要条件是什么?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动,学校举办以How to Behave Well?为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容,用英语写一篇80词左右参赛短文。
提示:1.衣着整洁;2.保持环境卫生;
3.待人有礼,乐于助人; 4.遵守交通规则; 5…….
要求:1.文章必须包括所给提示中1~4项内容,可展开思路,适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等。
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say “Thank you” and “Please”, and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well , our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
【参考译文】
为了建设文明城市,我们学生应该尽力在活动中表现良好。
保持衣服干净整齐是一个好习惯。我们的城市应该每天保持清洁。不要乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰。说“谢谢”和“请”是礼貌的,等等。我们不应该说脏话。对别人友好,随时准备帮助需要帮助的人。例如,当我们在公共汽车上时,我们应该给老人和有婴儿的妇女让座。我们也应该遵守交通规则。当交通灯是红色的时候,我们应该停下来。我们最好不要在公共场合大声说话或大笑。
如果每个人都表现良好,我们的城市将会更美丽更迷人。
篇19:必备的10句谚语中考英语作文备考资料
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+ 加入清单1. Every coin has two sides.每个硬币都有两面,比喻事物的两面性。
2. The winter is coming and the spring is not far.冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?
3. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
4. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
5. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
6. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
7. A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
8.Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事,今日毕。
9.Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。
10.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
篇20:2024保护动物的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Animals are peoples friends, we should protect them.
If there is no animal on earth, there would be no human. Animal is a most of the earths food chain, if animals disappeared, we human beings will be extinct. For example: the frog disappeared, there is no animal pests to catch paddy fields, crops will not grow, humans have no food; If there is no tiger, the rabbit will excess breeding, our food is likely to be a rabbit eat didnt; If there is no owls, mice will encroach on our territory...
The earth is a big family, not lack of anyone, without animals, we humans situation, we should all band together and protect small animals.
地球上如果没有动物,就没有人类。动物是这个地球生物链的一大部分,如果动物消失了,我们人类也会灭绝。例如:青蛙消失了,就没有动物去捉稻田的害虫,农作物也就无法生长,人类就没有食物;如果没有老虎,兔子就会超额繁殖,我们的粮食就可能会被兔子吃没了;如果没有猫头鹰,老鼠就会侵占我们的地盘……
地球是一个大家庭,缺谁都不行,如果没有动物,我们人类的处境可想而知,我们大家应该团结起来,保护小动物。