中考英语作文保护动物【推荐20篇】

提示性作文：就是给出一个标题或无标题，给出具体的内容，规定一定的字数，让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容，因此考生可以不再列出提纲，只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。

写好提示性作文应注意的事项

1、仔细审题，明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读，弄清这个题目要表达什么，然后对所给信息进行整理、组织，按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。

2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中，考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写，不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度，不要字数过多或过少。

例题分析

1．假设你叫李华，6月18日在报上看到一篇《救救老虎》的报道。想到近来看见有人在路边销售老虎骨头(bone)

等事，你感到担忧.请你给某报社编辑部写一封信。

要点如下：

1.老虎是国家保护动物，目前数量日趋减少；

2.写信原因是目睹到有人为赚钱,滥捕滥杀老虎；

3.森林的大量砍伐破坏了老虎的生存环境.呼吁严惩捕猎者(hunter)，希望大家共同努力，创造一个人类和动物共同的幸福家园，不计入总词

注意：

1.书信应包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译。

2.词数：80左右。(开头已给出数)

Deareditor,

Ive just read an article in a newspaper about saving tigers. It says that the number of tigers is becoming smaller in our country. Its terrible. I saw a few people sell bones of tigers by the roadside the other day.I also learned that some people killed tigers in order to make money.And too many trees have been cutdown. The places where tigers used to live were destroyed. Tigers are in danger of dying out.

Our government should punish the hunters.We should try our best to make our earth pleasant and peaceful,not only for human beings but also for animals.

Yours faithfully，

LiHua

英语写作要拿高分其实并不是很难，只要掌握了一定的词量以及写作方法就有可以能拿到高分。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语写作高分秘诀，希望对你有帮助。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

Many animals are in danger of dying out。 As is shown in the chart， we can see the number of animal species decreases faster and faster and this trend will continue。 From 1980 to 2010， at least 1 million animal species have disappeared。 Worse still， more and more wild animals are in great danger。 It is not a piece of sensational news; it is a fact， a harsh reality。 Unfortunately， we may not see these animals in the near future。

From the second picture， we can find some reasons。 Why is the number of animal species declining year by year？ Apparently animals have become victims of fashion industry。 Animal skin has been used to make fashionable clothes and these clothes sell at a high price。 So some greedy people begin to kill animals in a large quantity。 This irresponsible behavior not only breaks the balance of nature but also endangers the living environment of human beings。

As far as I am concerned， something must be done to stop this illegal action。 We believe "no buying， no killing"。 First， we must make concerning laws to protect these animals in danger。 Second， we must take some measures to protect animals effectively。 Animals are our friends and part of our environment。 Third， we should raise peoples awareness to protect animals and our environment。 In this way， we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development。

When the Arctic Ocean freezes over in the autumn, polar bears set off in search of their favorite meals: fatty ringed seals and bearded seals. By the summer, the sea ice begins to melt and break apart. Deprived of access to the tasty seals, polar bears spend the summer fasting. At least, thats whats supposed to happen. As the planet warms, the warmer ice-free season is getting longer and longer. So whats a hungry bear to do?

Scientists once thought that polar bears might survive by supplementing their pinniped diet by turning to terrestrial foods like snow geese, their eggs and caribou.

"Weve had this debate in the literature about whether terrestrial foods are nutritionally relevant to polar bears during the on-land season when the ice has melted."

University of Alberta biologist Nick Pilfold.

"And weve known for a long time, going back to research in the early 70s, even going to back to early explorer logs, that polar bears will consume terrestrial based foods. But the debate was always whether those foods actually add up, energetically." In other words, do these substitutes provide enough nutrition to make up for the lost seals?

To find out, Pilfold and his colleagues estimated the weight lost each day by polar bears in the wilds of western Hudson Bay during the ice-free season, when they could ostensibly be chowing down on terrestrial foods. Then they compared that to the weight lost by bears that are temporarily held in Manitobas Polar Bear Alert Program.

While captive, the bears do not eat. They drop about one kilogram each day. But the wild bears, who had access to the Arctic snack bar, lost the same amount of weight each day. The results are in the journal Physiological and Biochemical Zoology.

"Which is really saying that the terrestrial foods do not have dense enough energy to offset the mass loss. So this idea that bears can just switch from eating sea ice–based food to land food and thats going to help supplement against longer ice-free seasons, that really doesnt show up in the data."

The problem is that polar bears evolved to rely on the marine diet.

"The food on land is protein and carbohydrate based, and the food the polar bears really focus on is fat. Fat is the name of the game for these bears; theyre highly adapted to absorbing that fat into their system and putting it onto their body as body mass, so they can fast on it later on. And the only thing thats going to provide them with that type of fat are marine mammals. And they can only access those marine mammals when theres sea ice."

Adult males can go eight months without food. But younger, sub-adult bears, which are no longer nursing and must hunt, cant last as long without sea ice. So as the Arctic warms, younger polar bears will disproportionately die out. Leaving the species survival in doubt.

北冰洋在秋季结冰以后，北极熊就会出发去寻求它们最喜欢的食物：富含脂肪的海豹和胡子海豹。海冰在夏季开始融化断裂。这使北极熊在夏季无法吃到美味的海豹，所以它们进入禁食期。至少，情况应该是这样。但是由于地球变暖，温暖的无冰季节越来越长。那饥饿的北极熊要怎么办?

科学家曾经认为，北极熊可能会转向陆地上的食物来补充它们对鳍足类动物饮食的需求，进而生存下去，这些陆地食物包括雪雁、雪雁蛋和北美驯鹿。

“文献中有过这类辩论，即在寒冷融化时陆地食物是否能满足北极熊的营养需求。”

尼克·皮尔福德是加拿大阿尔伯塔大学的生物学家。

“通过上世纪70年代初的研究，还有早期的探险者日志，我们很早以前就知道，北极熊会以陆地食物为食。但是辩论的焦点在于，这些食物是否能增加北极熊的能量。”换句话说，这些替代食物能否为北极熊提供足够的营养，弥补不能进食海豹带来的损失?

为了解开这个疑惑，皮尔福德及同事对西哈德逊湾荒野地区的北极熊在无冰季期间每天失掉的体重进行了估算，从表面上看，北极熊在这段时间食用了陆地食物。随后，他们将这一数据与通过马尼托巴北极熊预警计划暂时捕得的北极熊所失掉的体重进行了对比。

在被关期间，北极熊不吃东西。它们的体重每天大约下降1公斤。虽然野生北极熊能享用北极“小吃”，但是它们的体重每天也同样会下降1公斤。这一研究结果发表在《生理学和生化动物学》期刊上。

“显然结果表明，陆地食物不能为北极熊提供足以抵消大量损失的能量。所以，北极熊可以从食用海冰下面的食物转向食用陆地食物，并帮助它们对抗日益延长的无冰季这个观点，并没有在这项数据中得到证明。”

问题是，北极熊进化成了依靠海洋食物的动物。

“陆地食物以蛋白质和碳水化合物为基础，而北极熊需要的食物以脂肪为主。脂肪是这些熊真正需要的东西;它们高度适应的情况是，将脂肪吸收进它们的系统中，然后把这些脂肪放在身上以增加体重，这样它们之后就可以依靠这些脂肪来度过禁食期。唯一能提供给北极熊这种脂肪的就是海洋哺乳动物。但是它们只能在有海冰时食用到这些海洋哺乳动物。”

成年北极熊可以8个月不进食。但是小一些的未成年北极熊已经不再被哺育，它们必须要去猎食，可是它们不能在漫长的无冰季期间一直不进食。所以，随着北极地区变暖，较小的北极熊将会大批死亡。这使这些物种的生存成为问题。

This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating abanana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly. No sooner had I done thisthan I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone wouldstep on it and tumbleover. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumpedoffthe bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeingthis, father praised me and I felt very happy.

In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.

上学路上

今天早晨，爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上，吃着香蕉。吃完后，我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境，或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒，我必须把它拾起来。想到这些，我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车，跑回去拾起香蕉皮，并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些，爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。

将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境，更多地为他人着想。

How long haven’t you saw the star at night in the city? Would you miss the fresh and sweet air? Have noticed the river had seriously been polluted? Would you mind listening the crazy honking car horns instead of the birds’ ringing everyday? Could you be calm down if leave the air conditioning room in summer? Around us a little observation , air pollution, drought, flood, global warming, tsunami, earthquake and so on, was more closer to us. Caring for our earth, imminently! Not only for ourself, but for our further generations. As a teenagers, especially a college student, there are lots of things we can do to stop damaging our environment. Firstly, changing the way we think of our environment, facing the reality of our environment which have been seriously damage. Secondly, take some actions and from the side small start like play a tree, install low-flow shower heads and applicants, use public transport , less plastic bags and so on. The last but not the least, influence our neighbors by our behavior and let more and more people care for our motherland. Caring for our earth, all of us join together, with our heart and efforts, more blue days, cleaner water, peaceful

world ,that would not be a dream!

Nowadays, the environmental protection is becoming one of the most important issues in the world. Being one of the members of our society, what shall we do to protect the environment

First, stop using plastic bags, boxes and bottles. Stores should be required to use the bags, boxes and bottles which are made from paper. Secondly, more and more trees and flowers should be planted to keep our surrounding clean. People must be required to plant plants around their houses and work places.

Finally, we must control the pollution by law, according to which, polluted water and air exhausted from factories should be forbidden.

These are some of the measures that we can take to protect our environment and they are not hard tasks for us. Remember, the earth is the only planet we could live at present.

Since the first day, BNBM has paid more attention to protect the environment as its social responsibility, by developing green building materials, producing green products and creating green enterprise. According to the spirit of "From the nature, for the nature and return to the mature", BNBM has tried its best in developing new technology and improving equipment to reduce the pollution.

I have a lot of aspirations. but what i desire most is to have no examinations.

We are always told that examinations aim to check what we have learned. but i dont think so. examination is not the best way, especially in the primary school. examinations, composition examinations in particular, will bring students, teachers and parents a great deal of pressure. to cope with the examination, some students just remember the model essays by rote. it will do no good to the improvement of writing.

The students scores can be measured by their daily in-class study and by the completion of their everyday homework. if we do in this way, all the students and teachers will have a pleasant time every day.

翻译：

我有很多愿望，但我最渴望的就是不要考试。

我们总是被告知考试的目的是为了检测我们学到了什么，但是我不这么认为。考试不是最好的方式，特别是在小学。考试，特别是作文考试，会给学生、教师、学生家长带来很大的压力。为了应付作文考试，一些学生仅仅是死记硬背范文，这对提高学生的写作没有什么好处。

学生的成绩可以通过课内的日常学习和每天家庭作业的完成情况来衡量。如果我们用这种方法检查学习效果，所有的学生和教师每天都很快乐。

今天夜晚，我和爸爸在电脑上查了对我们有益的小动物，我们在网上找到了许多对我们有益的小动物，比如：蜻蜓、燕子、青蛙、蚯蚓、蜜蜂、蛇、猫头鹰、啄木鸟等。下面就说说它们对人类有哪些益处吧！

蜻蜓生活在水边，扑捉蚊子等小飞虫，免得叮咬人畜，传播疾病；燕子是候鸟，专门扑食空中飞虫，如；蝗虫、蚂蚱等害虫；对农作物生长有益的青蛙生活在稻田里，每天能吃70多条害虫，是农民伯伯的好帮手；啄木鸟是森林的好医生，它们可以从树掏出蛀虫来，每天吃上千条害虫，好厉害啊！猫头鹰专吃传播疾病和破坏庄稼的老鼠……。

这些小动物可都对人类有益的，为人类作出了贡献哦，它们都是我们的好朋友，我们一定要好好地保护它们。首先，我们要爱护环境，让这些小动物有安身之处；其次，我们小朋友还可以成立保护小动物的队伍，宣传小动物对人类的益处，告诉别人不要扑食这些小动物……当然，可行的措施还不止这些，希望所有的人都行动起来，为保护好小动物献计献策。

我最喜欢的小动物是小猫，我们家就养了一只小猫，它是邻居送过来的。因为现在那只小猫已经死了，所以我会经常想起它。

My favorite little animal is a kitten, and we have a kitten in our house. It was sent by a neighbor. Because the kitten is dead now, so I often think of it.

小猫长得很漂亮，他有一身雪白的毛，爪子下的肉垫可以使他走路没有一丁点声音。最独特的是他的眼睛：一只眼睛是蓝色的，另一只眼睛是绿色的。蓝眼睛像蓝宝石，绿眼睛像绿宝石。

The kitten was beautiful. He had a snow-white coat, and the pads under his paws made him walk without a single sound. The most unique is his eyes: one eye is blue, the other eye is green. Blue eyes are like sapphires, green eyes are like emeralds.

小猫很贪吃，有时一斤重的鱼不一会儿就“消灭”了。有一次，妈妈做了一碗鱼汤。小猫跳上桌子，津津有味的吃了起来。正在吃的时候，它被我发现了，于是我狠狠的教训了他一顿。小猫耷拉着脑袋，好像在说：“我再也不敢了。”我立刻笑了。

Kittens are voracious, and sometimes a pound of fish will soon be wiped out. Once, my mother cooked a bowl of soup. The cat jumped onto the table and ate it with relish. While I was eating, it was discovered by me, so I gave him a hard lesson. The little cat drooped its head as if to say, "I dare not."." I laughed at once.

现在那只小猫已经死了，从那以后，我每次见到小猫，都要和它嬉戏一番。小猫，你到底去了哪里了呢?

Now that kitten has died, since then, every time I see a kitten, I have to play with it. Kitty, where the hell have you been?

导语：近年来,环境保护仍存在许多问题。其中最严重的问题之一是空气、水和土壤的严重污染。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

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近年来,环境保护仍存在许多问题。其中最严重的问题之一是空气、水和土壤的严重污染。污染的空气对人体健康有害。污染的水导致疾病和死亡。此外,随着现代城市的快速发展,植被已大大减少。

为了保护环境,许多国家的政府做了很多。已采取立法步骤控制空气污染,保护森林和海洋资源,制止任何环境污染。因此,政府在今天的环境保护中发挥着最重要的作用。

我认为,要保护环境,政府必须采取更具体的措施。首先,它应该让人们通过教育充分认识到环境保护的重要性。第二,应该更加努力使人口规划政策付诸实践,因为更多的人意味着更多的人意味着更多的污染。最后,故意破坏环境的人应该受到严惩。我们应该让他们知道破坏环境意味着毁灭人类自己。

Panda is one of the scarcest animals. People in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in China long ago. As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. But at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

Nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

Everyone knows animals are our friends.So we should be friendly to them.But some people kill the rare animals,such as pandas,golden monkeys and so on in order to get money.It will cause these animals to disappear soon.I think our government should punish those people severely who kill the rare animals.It is our duty to protect the endangered animals.

I am the most intelligent Marine. Good magic. Very fun and very friendly to you humans Marine mammals, is a small and streamlined shape toothed cetaceans. My body like a fish, and general body length 4 ~ 5 meters, back 靑 black, with a white belly. On small fish. Shrimp. Squid, etc.

I am a swimmer and can swim 15 meters per second, can the fishing boat far behind, swimming, the entire surface of the skin can do Ann water waves, become and the shape of the wave is consistent; Reducing the friction of 90% of the water.

I can show, such as: playing table tennis. Jump fire, people often training my brain, to train it to complete the underwater operation. A trained dolphins can trace of the investigation to the fish. Can undertake port alert, rescue the victims and wrecked plane for sea and underwater in service.

Want to know me!

参考翻译

我是海洋中最聪明.善良神奇.极富情趣而且对你们人类十分友好的海洋哺乳动物，是一种身材小且呈流线型的齿鲸类。我体型似鱼，，一般体长4~5米以下，背部呈靑黑色，腹部呈白色。以小鱼.小虾.乌贼等为食。

我是游泳能手，每秒可游15米，能把渔船远远的抛在后面，游泳时，整个皮肤表面能安水流做波浪起伏，变得和水流波的形状一致;这就减少了90%的水的摩擦力。

我还能表演节目，如：打乒乓球.跳火圈等，人们常常训练我的大脑，来训练它完成水下作业。训练过的海豚可以侦查到鱼群的行踪。还能承担海港警戒，抢救遇难者以及寻找海上失事的飞机和海底沉船等在务。

想认识我吧!

[介绍海洋动物英语作文

Helen Keller

Helen Keller lived in the USA. She was a GREat woman.

Helen was blind and deaf. She couldn’t see anything or hear anything. Her parents are very sad.

A teacher helped Helen study words. Helen studied them very hard when she GREw up. She went to college. In Helen Keller’s life, she wrote fourteen books and her first book is My Life. The book If you give me three days light is very famous.

She has some words: Be of good cheer. Do not think of today’s failures, but of the success that may come tomorrow. You have set yourself a difficult task, but you will succeed if you persevere; and you will find joy in overcoming obstacles.

Though she was blind and deaf, she found a way to see and hear.

[中考英语作文：Helen Keller

Directions: Please write a short essay entitled How to Protect the EnvironmentYou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1．近年来地球环境日益恶化，人类面临很多突出的环境破坏问题 2．环境恶化的原因有哪些。

3．提出改善环境的建议。

The global is more and more warmer.The river is more and more dirtier.In the past years,the environment was more and more worst.The human beings are facing many pollution problems that are standing out.

We always see that the river is covered with white rubbish,the water is against clean. Roads are dirty,too.I can imagine the future that is covered with rubbish.People through rubbish away into the river.The industry let off sewage。People on the car through the rubbish away form the window of the car.Rubbish is waving。People enjoy using refrigerator that is the cause of that the global is more and more warming.We should get together to do something to improve our environment.We can plant so many trees that the temperature of the global will lower.Trees will reduce the crash of the global.

Punish the person who through away the rubbish around the roads instead of the rubbish bin.

Stick out to do the things above,the environment will be better and better.

中考英语作文范文 我的朋友

标签： 范文 / 作文 / 英语

I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it.

He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

Animals are friends of human beings. Most of them are lovely. I like giraffe the most. They are very tall and have many brown spots. They have very long necks, so that they can eat the leaves in high trees. Giraffes are gentle and lovely. They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them. They move slowly. I can’t keep it as a pet, because it’s so huge. It’s a big pity.

动物是人类的朋友，大部分的动物都很可爱。我最喜欢的是长颈鹿，它们很高而且又很多棕色斑点。它们的颈很长因此可以吃到大树上的叶子。长颈鹿温驯可爱，它们对人类很友善。当我去动物园的时候我总喜欢去看它们。它们动作缓慢。我不能把它当宠物因为它太大了，这有点遗憾。

俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动，偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析

The ocean and we are a whole, first of all, the ocean itself has great handling of pollutants, dilution, diffusion, oxidation, reduction and degradation of purification ability. But the capacity is not unlimited, when toxic and harmful substances accepted by the local waters more than its own self-purification ability, it will cause pollution of the waters. In addition the ocean while contains many resources, but the regeneration of marine resources is the need of time, if the development of marine resources we uncontrolled and not pay attention to the protection of these resources, so there is always used in the light of day. So the protection of the marine is extremely important.