观看春晚的英文（经典20篇）

《英雄之城》中描写的感人的场面让人动容，一场突如其来的疫情打破了人们原本正常的生活，2020年的春节注定是不平凡的，在我们阖家团圆吃年夜饭的同时，有这样的一群人，用生命在和病毒打交道;在我们嬉笑玩耍开心时，有这样一群人，每天都在面对生离死别。

疫情当前，小家和大国，无疑先有大国才能有小家。无数志愿人员奔赴疫情一线，医护人员为了更好的工作而剪短头发甚至剃成光头，许多热心市民尽自己最大的努力捐赠口罩，不留名字。钟南山院士义无反顾地奔走在疫情一线，从未放弃。

万水千山的距离，是你们，素未谋面的陌生人，用爱扛起生命的重量，我向你们致敬!

这场无声的战役打响以来，千千万万医护人员奔赴前线，自动请缨、毫不犹豫、毫无退缩，微信群里一句句“我请愿”“我报名”是我听过最动听的誓言，请战书上的一个个红手印是我见过最耀眼的色彩，视频上掉落的一缕缕发丝是我见过最决绝的感动。

如果这算是一封信，这封信，是写给奋战在前线的全体战士，写给坚守岗位为人民服务的勇士，写给同是中国的英雄相见而又不能见的亲人，写给努力抗击疫情的所有人，待到春暖花开之际，见面必定热情相拥。

这是一场没有旁观者的全民运动，是一场齐心协力的人民战争。每个人都应当牢牢坚守自己的战位，只要我们继续发挥特别能吃苦、特别能战斗的精神，把每一项工作、每一个环节都做到位，相信一定能打赢这场阻击战。

沧海横流方显英雄本色。有无数“逆行者”的拼搏奋斗，一定能战胜疫情、打赢这场特殊战争，确保人民群众的生命安全和身体健康。

Life is like a box of chocolates

-----The review of Forrest Gump

Forrest Gump is a famous film which won a high reputation , it’s tell us a story of a low IQ boy’s unexpected and legendary life. In the film, Forrest’s IQ only had 75 lower than normal people, but he graduated from the university,participated in the Vietnam War, took part in Table Tennis Competition in China as diplomatic envoy, became a millionaire...

“If God intended everybody to be the same, hed have given us all braces on our legs. “ God is so fair. Forrest met lots of accidents and every accident fortunately achieve him. I think nothing is predestined except death. Just like Gumps mother did not know that she will be his mother,just like Forrest did not know that God gave him only 75 IQ,just like Lt. Dan Taylor did not know he had to endure the pain of losing legs...

Tom Hanks who played Forrest Gump said “our destiny is only defined by how we deal with the chance element to our life.” When we face our life,maybe we should have this preparation---“Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what youre going to get.”

2020年，面对新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎疫情加快蔓延的严重趋势，全党全局全国各民族人民都站在一起，心连着心，携手抵抗疫情。“只要坚定信心、同舟共济、科学防治、精准施策，我们就一定能打赢疫情防控阻击战。”

一方有难，八方支援。84岁高龄的钟南山院士继2003年抗击非典后再次出征，深入疫情前线。无数党员干部冲锋在防控疫情斗争的第一线。无数医务人员不畏生死、不计报酬抗击疫情。“众志成城，抗击疫情”成为2020年新春的集结号。我们要坚定信心，相信科学，不信谣，不传谣，坚决做好各项防护措施。作为学生干部，做好学校和班级同学之间的联络员，时刻关注班级同学的假期动态，做好班内疫情防控宣传。

人民健康是民族昌盛和国家富强的重要标志。面对疫情，我们不能恐慌也不能轻视。面对疫情，我们不能有侥幸心理，应该做好个人防护，加强对新型冠状病毒及疫情的认知保护自己也保障他人。只要我们坚定信心，振奋精神，我们一定能在抗击新型冠状病毒的战役中取得胜利。

生命重于泰山。疫情就是命令，防控就是责任。愿每一位奋战在前线的医护人员平安健康。愿每一位患者早日康复，愿每一个人都能做好防护，健健康康。

人生像攀登一座山，而找寻出路，却是一种学习的过程，我们应当在这过程中，学习稳定冷静，学习如何从慌乱中找到生机。这便是学习知识的好处，金秋九月迎来了一年一度的开学季节，意味着我们即将告别暑假的时光的时光，接受新的知识洗礼，抛开之前的玩耍心情，全身心的投入学习当中，而在开学前学校统一安排了一节特别有意义的公益节目便是《开学第一课》了，之所以为什么要安排在这个时间段无非是为了在开学前稳住军心，通过每年的励志事件进而来更好的学习成长。

晚上8点时观看了开学第一课时，每一分一秒都历历在目，今年主要讲述的是关于_的主题，一场突如其来的病毒改变着了我们身心健康，生活保障上得到了前所未有的危机感，使得人民惊心胆颤，人民群众险入了惊慌当中，而在惊慌当中中国人民英雄选择站出来了，那些奋战在一线医护人员天使用自己的生命在默默的为我们付出着，而我们并没有置身事外，而是选择安静的呆在家里，默默的为一线战斗人员祈祷加油着。

或许有些事情亲身经历过才明白并不能用困难这两字来形容了，好在祖国英雄们用他们的实际行动为我们支撑着共抗宝贵的时光，这段辉煌的历史将会刻骨铭心的印在我们心中。

通过节目上使我更进一步的了解到那些在一线的工作人员，那种无私奉献，艰苦奋斗，不顾生命的安危而一步步向前进着，仿佛在他们字典里没有后退这个词，这一幕让我触目惊心，历历在目，每一次感人的敬业行动，背后换来的是我们幸福安康，平稳的生活，试问一个拥有顾全大局，牺牲自我的心是多么的强大。而坚守在一线的人大多数都跟我们一样是个普普通通的老百姓，他们也有自己的家，自己的亲人，像一颗天上明亮的星星一般，驱散着周围的黑暗换来了我们的光明，

作为新世纪的我们，要树立远大的理想，人的一生只能享受一次青春，当一个人在年轻是就把自己的人生与人民的事业紧紧相连，他所创造的就是永恒的青春。所以我们要趁年轻的时候努力学习，正如少年强，则中国强的原理。

通过开学第一课的知识为今后的人生做出改变吧!将来为社会，为祖国做出更多的贡献!

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An October Sunrise 十月的日出

I was up the next morning be fore the October sunrise, and away through the wild and the woodland. The rising of the sun was noble in the cold and warmth of it peeping down the spread of light, he raised his shoulder heavily over the edge of grey mountain and wavering length of upland. Beneath his gaze the dew-fogs dipped, and crept to crept to the hollow places; then stole away in line and column, holding skirts, and clinging subtly at the sheltering corners where rock hung over grassland, while the brave lines of the hills came forth, one beyond other gliding.

The woods arose in folds, like drapery of awakened mountains, stately with a depth of awe, and memory of the tempests. Autumn’s mellow hand was upon them, as they owned already, touched with gold and red and olive, and their joy towards the sun was less to a bridegroom than a father.

Yet before the floating impress of the woods could clear it self, suddenly the gladsome light leaped over hill and valley, casting amber, blue, and purple, and a tint of rich red rose; according to the scene they lit on, and the curtain flung around; yet all alike dispelling fear and the cloven hoof of darkness, all on the wings of hope advancing, and proclaiming, “God is here!” then life and joy sprang reassured from every crouching hollow; every flower, and bud and bird had a fluttering sense of them; and all the flashing of God’s gaze merged into soft beneficence.

So, perhaps, shall break upon us that eternal morning, when crag and chasm shall be no more, neither hill and valley, nor great unvintaged ocean; but all things shall arise, and shine in the light of the Father’s countenance, because itself is risen.

Dear pen Pal ____ :

Hello,my pen Pal!Let me talk about my favorite animals.

I like cats,because he has a round face,big eyes,always so lovely.His ears were small,furry above.It is small,my favorite.

The second is the dog.Some dogs have curly body.And it also and humans are good friends,it often helps to human beings.His faithful let me also like it.

I also like the rabbit.Especially those with white rabbit fur,wool is slippery.At the same time it is also very good,so I like it.

I like the three small animals,I dont know what do you like?

I wish you:

Learning progress

your pen Pal:

The goal of my life is living a simple happy and healthy life.

What I want is a simple life not a complicated one.Because what my job or career offers me are difficult issues which I must handle them properly, and sometimes they are so boring and tedious,but I have to do.So after a days work, I want to have a break and do some things which would provide me happiness and a harmonious life. It is so simple like that, I have a supper with my families talking some funny and humourous topics, or I sit on grass with who I loved looking at the beautiful sky and counting the numbers of the stars. It is simple, but very harmonious and romantic.

I also want to spend sometime on my hobbies,such as playing table tennis,badminton,basketball and so forth.I like sports very much and I believe it will benefit me all my life.What I gained from sports are not only speed,strength and skill but also competitiveness,teamwork and so on.Sports could give me a strong and energetic body and a healthy life.

The goals of my life are just written as above,and they will be pursued by myself all my life.

今天，我们小记者团组织去吴桥看杂技表演。一早我就迫不及待的让爸爸送我到集合地点，上车不一会儿就出发了。2个多小时的时间到达了目的地，同学们收拾东西，有秩序的下了车。

我们在老师的带领下看着指向标，来到了“红牡丹剧场”。表演马上开始，大家陆陆续续地坐下来，准备看杂技表演。节目精彩极了！演员有的转盘子、有的借用彩带飞上了天、有的头顶花瓷瓶转圈儿……真是功夫了得。看完杂技表演，我们又来到魔术剧场。魔术师们表演了大变活人、变鸽子、变换服装等节目。他们的表演千奇百怪、变化多端，让我们看得眼花缭乱，纷纷鼓掌叫好！

下午，我们又看了动物表演。狗熊“玲玲”骑三轮车时，它滑稽又灵巧的样子可爱极了！我非常喜欢看它表演。还有老虎“欢欢”滑滑梯等节目，时间真快呀！在不知不觉中节目都演完了，回家的时间到了。

吴桥的节目真是丰富多彩，让我流连忘返，真不愧是杂技之乡啊！

Today I found time was a cruel thing。 Whatever man is， time always goes on。

It won’t stay to wait for somebody。 You can’t use anything to exchange time。

Time is also a fair thing。 Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high

reputation， time won’t leave them more。 Today I found I hadn’t enough time。

Although I have more than a-month holiday， but I found I had a lot of things to

do。 I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to plete the homework as

soon as I have time。

In the Spring and Autumn Period, a farmer in the State of Song was one day working in the fields when he saw a rabbit bump into a tree stump(树桩) accidentally and break its neck.

The farmer took the rabbit home, and cooked himself a delicious meal.

That night he thought, I neednt work so hard. All I have to do is wait for a rabbit each day by the stump.

So from then on he gave up farming, and simply sat by the stump waiting for rabbits to come and run into it.

This idiom satirizes(讽刺，挖苦) those who just wait for a stroke of luck, rather than making efforts to obtain what they need.

What a great forest! Today is the Spring Festival party in the forest, on the ground, flying in the sky all go to see the Spring Festival Gala.

The host is the thrush bird and the canary, which first speaks fluently about some blessings, and then please go to the singer &mdash in the forest; — the puppy.

When the puppy came to power, he said, “ what song do you love to hear me most? ” the animals say in a different voice: “ spring ”. The puppy sang, &ldquo, Wangwang, spring sprouts, spring flowers opened … … ” after listening to the puppy song, the animals applauded the puppy singer down.

The second play is the fox, the fox came on, he sang the song of the fox fox: “ squeak, our mouth is so sharp, so big eyes … … “, listening to the fox singing, we laugh together not so please clap down the fox mouth side. The third is the peacock. When the peacock comes to the stage, she starts to jump up &ldquo. The dance of Spring Festival &rdquo, her head is wearing gold crown, wearing bright clothes and graceful dancing. Animals cant help saying, &ldquo, they jump too well, &rdquo.

Two kids came, they came to power, to everyone bowed, then bleating for everyone to ask a good start to drop, some ball in their hands is very obedient, look at the dazzling animal.

Nbsp; after the end of the spring party, the animals walked out of the studio.

家人是指指家庭成员或具备家庭成员间的情感的相关人或事物。我的家人英文优秀作文，希望可以帮助到大家。 篇一：我的家人英文优秀作文

Hi， boys and girls， I am glad to be your English teacher this year. As you dont know much about me， let me first talk about myself here.

On the right you see an age-old picture of my family. Two of them have already passed away-my father and my elder （not the eldest） brother. Both of them died of cancer. my father suffered from liver cancer and was deceased in the year 1978 while my brother was killed by cancer which spread from the underside of his tongue to many other parts of his body. He left us on the 15th of April 1992 at the age of 37.

In the photo， the youngest one， sitting on the lap of the woman（my mother） was me. my younger sister was not yet born. my elder sister was seated next to my mother. She was a fat little girl at that time but now she is a middle-aged mother of two children. Her family and my mother are at present living in the U. S. A. my sister owns a Chinese-American restaurant which has been making good profits.

my eldest brother is a civil servant right now. He has been doing this job for more than 20 years. He likes this job， I guess. He has a son and a daughter. Both are working now. So， his burden as the breadwinner（one who supports the whole family） has not been so heavy recently. Thats whyhe took a trip to Beijing during the last Lunar New Year Holiday.

As for me， I am 36， a school teacher and the father of a boy and a girl who are still too young to help me in anything.

Many changes have taken place over the last 35 years and things will never be the same again. No matter whether you like your family or not， think about itsome years later they wont be around you anymore. Try your best to love and forgive them. Nobody is perfect. They deserve your love and care because they are your family. 篇二：我的家人英文优秀作文

hello,everybaby.

im wangshuli.im 12 years old.there are four people in my family.my father,mother,sister and me.

we are happy family.my father,mother and sister are worker.im a student.

my father is fouty-six years old.my mother is fouty-five years old.my sister is twelfty-four years old.im a happy gail.i like running.this is my family.

thank you! 篇三：我的家人英文优秀作文

Everyone has a family. We live in it and feel very warm. There are five persons in my family. We live together very happily and there are many interesting stories about my family.

my father is a hard-working man. He works as a teacher. He always tries his best to help every, patient and make patients comfortable. But sometimes he works so hard that he cant remember the date.

my mother is a woman with a bad memory. She always does a lot of housework, but sometimes she makes mistakes out of carelessness. For example, one day, she washed clothes in the washer, after the washer finished the work, she found she hadnt filled the washer with water.

my daughter is a pretty girl.she is very lovely.

Sometimes  my Family go out to have a trip together .I have a happy family . I love my family.

“一个人并不是生来要给打败的，你尽可以把它消灭掉，可就是打不败他。”“人不是为了失败而生的。一个人可以被毁灭，但是不能被打败。这两句话完美地体现了作者的思想。

书中的老人圣地亚哥在连续八十四天都没有捕到鱼的情况下，在大海上遇到一条巨大的马林鱼。经过三天三夜的耐力与毅力的较量下，尽管老人的手已经抽筋，没有水，也没有食物，也没有武器，老人还是把马林鱼杀死了。可就在老人回家的途中，遭到了鲨鱼的袭击。当他到达港口时，只剩下一副鱼骨头了。

这个简单的故事，却唱出了一首英雄主义赞歌。老人虽然失败了，但那只是力气和肉体上的失败，它的信心和希望始终不会破灭。生活中的我并不像老人那样迎难而上，是一个遇到困难就退缩、逃避的loser。但因那次的胜利，我改变了自己。

一次手抄报的班级比赛，我认为自己做的手抄报不大好看，所以就没有要参加的念头。突然，我看到了班上画画最差的同学举手了。见此景，大家纷纷使出“激将法”让我参加。“你画画比他好几百倍，他都参加了，你怎么可以不参加?”“对啊，参加吧，你肯定可以得奖的!”他们的“激将法”奏效了。尽管抱着很小的希望，我还是认真地完成了手抄报。功夫不负有心人，一个星期的努力换来了第一名的成绩，出乎意料，自己竟然可以做得这么好。从此，我的步伐再也不会被困难阻挡了。

墙角的蜗牛，正奋力地往上爬，动作慢得让人看不见。它的脸上似乎挂着汗水，背着它那庞大的“房子”，留下了它努力的痕迹。它和老人一样，执着、不放弃、勇往直前，努力完成自己的目标，无论怎么样的艰难险阻都阻挡不了他们前进的步伐。

老人是真正具有百折不挠、坚强不屈、敢于面对困难的精神。从另外一种意义上来说，他并不是失败者，而是一个胜利者。因为，他并没有在命运面前“跪下”，无论在怎么艰难的环境里，他都凭着自己的勇气、毅力和智慧进行了和马林鱼、鲨鱼的战斗。老人是一个失败者，但更是一个失败的英雄。真正的英雄形象，正是海明威笔下的人物圣地亚哥。

今天我收看了高校党组织战“疫”示范微党课“致敬最美白衣天使弘扬伟大抗议精神”特别专题，观看过程中我感触良多。每个人在这世上都是独一无二的，每个人的生命都无法替代，谁的生命都值得珍惜。疫情面前，每个人的健康,都一样地重要;生死关头，谁不希望自己能够平安无事。可是这场战“疫”没有人可以独善其身，人人都是抗击疫情的主体。对普通人来说，做好自我防护就是对疫情控制最大的贡献。眼下，各行各业复工开业，车流人流将明显增多,传染感染风险随之加大，疫情防控压力有增无减。自我防护就显得尤为重要，我们依然不能放松警惕:出门戴口罩，回家勤洗手必得继续坚持。经过这一堂思政课的学习，我明白了许多。明白了少年强则国强，少年独立则国独立的道理，明白了爱国的意义。这不仅仅是一堂课，更是对我们人生引领。

第一，青年大学生要充分认识社会主义制度的优越性。“一方有难，八方支援”，疫情救治的经费由国家财政兜底，中央统筹调度全国医疗资源迅速驰援湖北，动员一切能够动员的力量，同时间赛跑，与病魔较量，和死神竞速。全国14亿人民众志成城，打响了疫情防控的人民战争。我国社会主义制度具有的集中力量办大事的显著优势，这是我们成就事业的重要法宝，也为我们坚决打赢这场疫情防控阻击战提供了必胜的信心。

第二，青年大学生要始终坚定中国共产党的领导。中国共产党的领导既是中国特色社会主义最本质的特征，也是中国特色社会主义制度的最大优势。有强大的祖国做后盾，有全国人民的齐心协力，有公开透明的信息，有细致的防护准备、科学的预防治疗、强有力的保障措施，我们一定可以打赢这场没有硝烟的战争，迎接我们的一定是美丽的春天。

第三，青年大学生在灾难面前要彰显应有的担当作为。爱国是最大的责任担当，他要求我们每个人回应时代的挑战，担当起时代赋予的责任和使命。

第四，没有一个春天不会来临。2020年有一个波折横生的开端。大规模疫情的爆发改变了很多人的生活，中华民族又一次面临着前所未见的严峻挑战。也正是在这样的时刻，成千上万的中国人凝聚起来，站在疫情的对立面，勇敢地抗争着。他们是奋战在一线的医护人员;是为研制疫苗不眠不休的科研工作者;是深入报道疫情进展的新闻人;是坚守阵地守护百姓的武警军人;是连夜运送物资的驾驶员;是日夜赶工的建设者......无数人向着危险前行，在战疫一线洒下汗水与热血，甚至是自己的生命。他们是坚定地走进良夜的战士，是手持火炬在漫漫长夜中坚守的勇敢者，他们是用爱筑起坚固城墙的中国人。他们是平凡而渺小的普通人，也是伟大而永不言败的中国力量。中华民族从不惧怕困难，困难与挫折只会让我们更加强大，经历烈焰的烧灼，才会有浴火涅槃的重生。上下同欲者胜，风雨同舟者兴。

In summer I usually get up early in the morning to exercise. Raising my head, I see the vast space in the sky. There are fish scales clouds, cotton-like clouds, sheep like clouds and dark blue clouds like a lake. The clouds are moving silently, changing constantly in shape.

Looking to the east, the sun is gradually showing her face, as if realising shes being watched. She blushes in shyness. Climing up the tree and over the house, the suns rays become radiant. It hurts the eye to watch it. A dark cloud tries to throw its shadow over the sun and shroud her in its shade. But the suns rays are irresistably bright. They cannot be covered.

Soon the trees, the houses, the river, in fact, everything is bathed in the golden sun. The almighty sun is generous and the source of energy and the symbol ot truth and knowledge. No wonder an many people sing in praise of her.

观看了高校党组织战“疫”示范微党课“致敬最美白衣天使弘扬伟大抗议精神”特别专题，我感受到疫情面前，不仅仅是国家，学校，甚至是我们每一个人，都应该坚守自己的战场，做好自己本分的事。身为学生，避免外出，保证自己的身体健康，就是不为这场疫情防控战添麻烦。

新冠肺炎，我们从来没有遇到过。不可否认的是，我们的相安无事，平安幸福并不是凭白无故得来的，而是在灾难面前，有人为我们负重前行。面对疫情，身为大学生的我们，不是医生，不能救死扶伤，没有庞大的资金，去捐助物资，我们能做的是要保护好我们自己，去注意卫生，如果有情况发生，及时就医，不给他人添麻烦。面对疫情，我们众志成城，各行各业用自己的行动，去为抗击疫情做出自己的贡献。愿抗击疫情的这场战斗，我们早日胜利。

通过此次江西战役集体公开课的学习，对于新型冠状病毒的阻击斗争有了进一步的了解。当前，本土疫情状况在一天天的转向好的方面发展，疫情防控得到阶段性胜利。之所以能在短时间取得如此大的胜利，离不开中国共产党的正确领导，离不开党中央和各地党组织迅速反应，更离不开广大医务工作者，抗疫工作者以及守在家中的普通民众。自古多难兴邦，在中国五千年的历史长河中，中华民族不惧任何艰险，越是艰难越是向前。抗击疫情期间，“90后”这个群体成为抗击一线的主力军，与时间赛跑，与病魔较量，发扬新时代青年最耀眼的光辉和精神。透过这次大考，作为大学生的一员，我也要有所感悟，在今后的日子里要扎实学习科学文化知识，增强过硬素质，练就一身硬核本领，走入社会发挥自身最大的价值。

New Year is coming. I have many great New Year’s resolutions. I will study math harder than before because I want to get better grades. I’m going to improve my spoken English because I want communicate with foreigners better in English.

I plan to learn German because I really want to travel to Germany by myself. And I’m going to learn a new instrument, it may be guitar.

As for friends, I’m going to make more good friends. Because I think friendship is important and valuable.

These are my New Year’s resolutions. I’m working hard to make them come true. I trust myself.

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

Dear Dad,

Do you remember Christmas Eve a year ago? That night, I hung a red sock at

the bedside, in front of you, I closed my eyes and made a wish. When I open my

eyes, my first word is, "Dad, will Santa come?" You say, "It will come!" "Will

he always be with me?" I asked. You do not answer, but I see in your pupils a

little worry.

The next day, I found what I wanted in the red socks. When I held the socks

came to your front, your haggard face bloomed a happy smile, and I in your eyes

caught a trace of sadness.

In a twinkling of an eye, the world as if a lot of old, this years

December 24, Xi son to our home rehearsal program, you sent him away, I still

put the red socks -- or last years socks, hanging in my bedside. I asked you

the same question, "Dad, will Santa come?" "Yes," you replied. "Will he grow up

with me?" I asked. You still did not answer, I in your old face swept a trace of

sadness.

In fact, I already knew that there is no Such thing as Santa Claus. Last

year, the Santa Claus who gave me presents was you. Nevertheless, with a faint

hope, I asked you the same question I had asked you a year before, but I still

got your silent answer, and I understood everything.

This years Christmas Eve, "Santa Claus" or gave me a gift, But I happily

ran to you there, I suddenly heard you ask: "Son, do you like Santa Claus? I

dont know how to answer. I know its you, but can you give me that wish I had a

year ago? I inadvertently found a white hair on your head, my heart like knocked

over a bottle of taste, I have been in the quilt babble until eleven o

clock.

Dad, youre still the Santa I was a year ago, but you cant live up to my

wishes like the legend says Santa Claus can. I finally understand the sadness in

your eyes, and understand the suffering in your heart. Dad, youre an

"incompetent" Santa. I thought you were an ordinary person in the world. But

then I suddenly realized that all the fathers in the world are unqualified Santa

Claus and you are the greatest person in the world!

Dad, I love you!

In last years eleven holiday, our family went to Lanzhou and Xining to travel. That afternoon, Dad suddenly told us to travel, we promised.

Our first goal is Lanzhou, and we dont know the road at high speed. It was dark. We went all the way in the mountain road. Finally, we arrived in Lanzhou. After dinner, we began to find hotels, went to many hotels, but they were all overcrowded. We searched and searched, and finally found a guest house. The second day, we went to Wuquanshan, many people drove up to the door of my difficult to calm the mood. Bought a ticket in the first eye to is Huo statue around the past is a temple, called Confucian Temple.

Where we took a photo and went out to the mountain, we go on a mountain is wuquanshan. Because of the rain, many roads were mud, a lot of mud was stained on the shoes, and then I saw the attic. It seems the Huo, we went down the steps down the road I inadvertently looked down is a small squirrel on the tree to jump for a while and then disappeared. Down the hill, we did not stop at Xining again. In the evening, we came to Xining in Qinghai province. We found the hotel, lived and slept for a night to relieve the fatigue of the day. In the morning, we were ready to go to Qinghai, and we started out after breakfast. On the way we came to a place and had a strong wind. I came out and shook and went to sleep in the car. When I woke up to the edge of the lake in Qinghai, I stretched out, and I knew that the ticket for Qinghai Lake was 50 yuan.

I see mom and dads eyes know is not to buy a ticket, we had to walk along the road and found no fence, there is one family living they took us to the lake, took a photo, listen to them before the Qinghai Lake is great, but now more and more small, this is not the results of the protection ring. We went to a rape place, the smell of the faint fragrance, has gone down in the west of the west, will our hearts call back. Passing by, we found a bucket of honey and a sweet taste! We slept early in the evening, because we were going home tomorrow.

I dont want to go back! Ill come again if theres a chance!